Joining the Almighty Koopa King! (Bowser)
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played 1,810 times (finished 201)
"walk in the park"
"So short yo' momma thought it was a recipe"
"choking hazard for children under 4"
Contains content that may not be suitable for persons under age 6. To compare to the movie rating system, this would be G.
You go on a quest for Bowser to join his forces...
Why would Mario be sleeping on a drawbridge? Really? A sleeping pill?
Seems like you randomly have stuff that you got, just for the game.
Very short and extremely linear, there is one ending. Except for one time, at the start, right when you pick the wrong choice, your dead. And usually there is only two choices, so that makes it a little boring.
And what's the point of the berries? It never says you got hungry.
Grammar and spelling where good, though. If you worked on it more it would have turned out okay.
on 2/12/2018 9:07:45 PM with a score of 0
So harsh but awesome plot twist: Luigi comes and kicks everyone's asses
-- Jaxthejaguar on 11/6/2016 9:55:20 AM with a score of 0
Well, okay then.
on 8/31/2016 5:36:22 PM with a score of 0
Slave....for life um....
on 6/22/2016 1:46:13 PM with a score of 0
i finallly captured mario
on 1/15/2016 12:49:21 PM with a score of 0
i went the wrong path
on 1/15/2016 12:43:10 PM with a score of 0
Wow. That was terrible. I'm not even kidding.
on 11/23/2015 10:58:39 AM with a score of 0
I played twice & got the same, exact, stupid, rushed ending. It's gay. The goomba part is moderately funny though. I recommend you play something different.
-- Dictator Khan Fikevanis on 8/20/2015 12:50:59 AM with a score of 0
Grammar needs improvement. Also, it was linear, which is hardly ever good on a CYOA site. Atleast give the illusion of choice, instead of right and wrong pages - the wrong ones leading to your immediate death.
on 6/3/2015 6:18:55 PM with a score of 0
Great! Very little grammar or spelling mistakes in this story.
on 5/3/2015 10:21:38 AM with a score of 0
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