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Edgelord 2 Contest Results

one month ago

Okay, I’ve read as much as I’m going to at this point and I’m already certain who won this thing. Sort of figured they’d win given how enthusiastic they were from the start of it, though there were a few times where they had some competition. 

Anyway, let’s get the winner out of the way first.

Malk won. 

His story hit all the major things I was looking for as far as the theme and I was interested enough to go through every path/choice he wrote. So he succeeded in being the most entertaining. 

As they say, if you aren’t first, you’re last, so everyone else doesn’t matter, however if we’re looking at who came the closest to giving him competition it would have been Ninja, Thara and the biggest dark horse in race Celicni.

Ninja’s was solid all around, but Malk just had that extra “edge” with the grimdark. He was still leading until I read Malk’s though.

Thara’s story was another one where I actually read every path, and while she loaded up on the incest and even had some surprise sex, the story still felt a little light in the grimdark. But as a father I’m still proud of her major writing accomplishment.

Now we come to Celicni who MIGHT have actually won since he hit every point with the theme and the whole story was entertaining. (Read through all his paths too) However he did one fatal flaw that dropped him which is he put fucking “retry links” instead of just letting a death ending end the story proper. 

Nothing is more annoying than looping back to the beginning rather than just having the end link. At the very least if you’re going to do something like that at least also have the end link there. (Like what Thara did)

Despite him doing that, I still rated him pretty high which says a lot given how much I dislike seeing the other thing done. Like I said, had he not done that and maybe added a few more things, he could have even beaten Malk.

Moving down to the next “level” would be Wibbons, Enter, and North.

As much as everyone was telling me Wibbon’s story sucked a lot, I actually didn’t mind it. Whether Wibbons is a closet pedo or not is completely still up for debate, but the wendigo licking a little girl seemed in character for it, so I didn’t think too much more of it. It was grimdark in a fairy tale way, but not enough to come close to winning though.

Enter and North’s both had similar issues. Mainly I got to the point where my eyes started glazing over while reading them. 

With Enter’s, part of it might have been more his font and background style he chose because it all started running together and I kept having to reread parts. I played through enough of the paths to get the general idea that you were being tortured in hell. While certainly grimdark, the torture alone just wasn’t entertaining me. It's sort of like A Serbian Film vs. The Devil's Rejects. Obviously ASF is more hardcore, but TDR is more entertaining due to the character interaction. I dunno, guess it needed more humor or something.

With North’s, well it just wasn’t doing it at all for me. Didn’t feel grimdark enough in theme, wasn’t engaged or entertained either. Just got bored to the point where I was clicking through to an ending. I actually did go back through some other choices to see if I missed a better path, but a lot of choices eventually reconnected to a familiar path, or at leas the ones I picked did.

Now I imagine if Mizal and/or Berka was the judge North might have very well won this one. They weren’t though so North gets a higher than average rating since he obviously put a bunch of work into it, but that’s it. 

Next level would be Peng, Chris, and Mara

Peng and Chris both had the same issue. They didn’t write enough. Now obviously word count doesn’t mean much to me most of the time (Just look at North) but the advantage of having a larger story is you’ve put more stuff into it that can potentially further entertain. 

The short amount that Peng and Chris wrote was actually pretty entertaining, but it just wasn’t enough to come close to winning.

As for Mara, well I know she put effort into this. Just wasn’t what I was looking for though. Honestly I just kept getting confused to as what exactly was supposed to be going on. 

I think the main problem is she kept using CYS member names as characters in the story and while I know everyone is supposed to be different, it just feels like some sort of weird CYS fanfiction.

Finally the last three, Mystic, Corgi and Flutter

Well Mystic’s I guess was on the darker side, but unless I missed something, hers was set in the present day and I just wasn’t feeling any sort of fantasy what with modern guns and planes being around. Wasn’t what I was looking for in general. 

This is another story where if Mizal or Berka had been the judges, she probably would have scored way higher (Berka usually likes more gamey stats too) but it was my contest, so she didn’t.

Corgi’s was just more of a straight fantasy story and it was sort of on the mundane side of things. Not much more to say on that one.

Finally Flutter, well she did about as best she could given that it was basically MLP fanfic with the serial numbers filed off. Better than being SHAMED at least.


Anyway here’s the ratings

The Unravelling of Order by fluttershypegasus - 4
The Book and Devil's Altar by ninjapitka - 8
The Liar by PerforatedPenguin - 5
Dog Day by Chris113022 - 5
Messiah for Hire by poison_mara - 5
Fall to Hopelessness by Mystic_Warrior - 5
The Scary Night by WouldntItBeNice - 6
Vincha by Celicni - 7
Brimstone by Enterpride - 6
Silent Spire by corgi213 - 5
The Tale of The Foolish Princess by TharaApples - 8
Winter, After the Harvest by hetero_malk - 8
Goldbird and Whispers of Snow by Northwind - 6

Anyway, I’ll get around to commending, featuring, and giving points sometime soon. (Unless someone beats me to it)

Edgelord 2 Contest Results

one month ago

Wow. Thank you man, I'm really glad you liked it.   

Some fantastic stories got published this time around, and I'm really looking forward to going through and reading them all. The site always benefits when a crop of high-quality games gets published for a contest. 

Really though, don't let any of this distract you from the fact that Mizal got double shamed lmao 

Edgelord 2 Contest Results

one month ago

This was a very fun contest to be a part of. The stories I've read so far have also been pretty fun and enjoyable in their own interesting ways. I look forward to reading the rest of the storygames I haven’t yet gotten to.

Thanks for hosting this contest! :)

Edgelord 2 Contest Results

one month ago

Congrats to malk for winning and for everyone else who took part. I'm just glad I had the opportunity to participate with this story at all. 

Edgelord 2 Contest Results

one month ago
I've still got a lot of reading to do, but everything has been really high quality so far. I don't think there are any true duds in this contest even with some of them obviously being rushed. The only real issue as far as the contest itself goes is that some of them sort of missed the theme.

I will be reviewing them all as penance for not finishing mine, but slowly.

Not surprised Malk won though, he's a great writer and really seemed to hit his stride with this story, from all the comments he was making during the process it was like he was actually "enjoying" the writing part or something insane like that.

Edgelord 2 Contest Results

one month ago

Hah, I had no idea putting retry links was such a bad mistake, but you're definitely not the first person to say that.

They WERE all originally end game links, but then I found a thread on this very site saying that any games that have you end the game pretty fast get an automatic 1 from some people hence why I put in the retry instead.

If I go ahead and unpublish the story real fast to edit the links into game enders (as well as fixing some grammatical issues pointed out by the commenters) that would be for the best or?

Finally thank you so much for the kind words, it was shat out in the course of two days ever since I got "volunteered" into the contest and I figured I was just going to avoid the shame.

Edit: Also today I learned what it means to call somebody a "dark horse".

Edgelord 2 Contest Results

one month ago
Oh yeah, everyone hates those lol.

It used to be a tactic people would use to force good ratings, because people who didn't care for a story would give up before finding the end game link, and only people who liked it would continue on. It's had a bad rap ever since in addition to just being kind of annoying.

But if you want to make some quick edits, now would be the time before the majority of ratings come in.

Edgelord 2 Contest Results

one month ago

Haha sorry, it does sound like I meant to "stack the ratings in my favor" there. But I was scared of the dreaded "automatic 1" for early game endings and I figured just putting the "go back" button makes no sense since there's one already at the top of the page.

Edgelord 2 Contest Results

one month ago

Sure, go ahead and edit what you like on it. Your story will return to the featured slot as soon as it's published again.

Edgelord 2 Contest Results

one month ago

I went ahead and did that. Added slightly humorous death messages (and a glorious victory one).

Also fixed some grammar issues I was told about...and the whole "modern idioms" thing such as the nuclear option and "guinea pig" (though the animal had existed at the time, I doubt it was a saying back in the 7th century).

Oddly enough it doesn't seem like I lost any ratings, despite the fact it said I would.

Edgelord 2 Contest Results

one month ago

Nah, it doesn't erase ratings. As long as I've been here, it never has so I'm pretty sure that's just an old message that they never bothered to change.

Edgelord 2 Contest Results

one month ago
Congratulations to Malk and everyone who has escaped the pit of shame (and extra shame to everyone who hasn't)!

It was a great contest with a good theme and even better entries. I get the feeling the quality of everyone's work has improved enormously in the past years, and it'll only be going up from here on out.

Who knows, edgelord contest mark three may tremble the writing world.

Edgelord 2 Contest Results

one month ago
I just want to apologize for my entry, and I hope that nobody feels let down or embarrassed by it. So, I decided unpublished it for lack of quality. If however, there is  someone interested, It can be checked in sneak peak. Congratulations to Malk, and Endmaster for hosting the event.

Edgelord 2 Contest Results

one month ago

5 rating is good enough for me.

Thanks for reading it  

 

Edgelord 2 Contest Results

one month ago
Congrats to all the contestants, and especially Malk!

Edgelord 2 Contest Results

29 days ago
Huge congratulations to Malk for winning, less congratulations to everyone else for putting a story out, and a solemn fart for everyone who failed to produce something.

Edgelord 2 Contest Results

29 days ago
Congratulations to everyone who submitted a story and especially to Malk. I haven't read any of them yet (being lazy and all), but I'm looking forward to several.

And thank you End Master for hosting this contest!

Edgelord 2 Contest Results

29 days ago
@hetero_malk is truly a writer deserving of a contest trophy and a featured story. You should all read, rate, and review Winter. Let's all hope the man publishes more stories this year. Now for some reason, I'm craving some Darkest Dungeon.

Edgelord 2 Contest Results

29 days ago

Thanks Ninja.  I think your games have been a big reason as to why the site is good now, so hearing that from you is high ass praise to me. 

Edgelord 2 Contest Results

29 days ago

Congratulations to Malk for the well deserved win! Well done to everyone who was part of this - from what I have seen so far, this contest really provided a lot of high quality stories. Thank you Endmaster for running this; it was certainly great to participate in this contest.

Edgelord 2 Contest Results

28 days ago
@mystic_warrior

Where'd you get the cover art for yours? Because that kicks ass.

Edgelord 2 Contest Results

28 days ago

I actually made it with Canva. It was mainly just about finding pictures and layering them, then adding the text. I'm really glad you like it!

Edgelord 2 Contest Results

28 days ago
You really did a Great job with it.

Edgelord 2 Contest Results

28 days ago

Thanks, Mara! I'm glad you like it.