Player Comments on A Day in Hell

I liked it. Specially for not forcing the story on me. And you made her annoying enough without making her unrealistic.

I didn't kill her for the whole game so it wasn't very interesting. I guess I will try again.

I got the passive ending. Pretty happy with that, honestly.

How Dare You! I am Mormon. But that does not mean that I am vegetarian. You are not respecting our beliefs.

Was alright :)

Not bad, it's a good first try.

My iQ is 230 gave it a 2 in rating. Felt horrible reading this.
This story feels like the writer is going thru Hell with his or her life. Why not give an option in which he betters himself and leaves the apartment instead of killing in a burst of rage, just because she had an opinion?

I really liked this. I truly feel sorry for Mat, and I now understand the title. I tried killing her, but that didn't end up well, I got caught or something, to a mental focility or something. I would have raped that bitch just to show her a lesson. Sure, you rent some of the appartment to me, and I pay you. Doesn't that give me human rights? Fucking whore!

I love this game. It has a wonderful amount of crazy ideas, and it shows that our dreams of killing those that piss us off never ends well. 8/8, I was enjoying every moment of the game.

AWESOME! 6/8 Seriously, THIS IS AMAZING!

It was interesting, though it took me three tries to get an actual ending

Wow… At least I survived, I guess.

that was brutal

Lovely;Simple.My IQ is 140 fyi.

Not bad, good writing, funny how I get to kill lots of people

nice

I think the best violent ending is that you escape town and get away with it, burdened with isolation and guilt, free from the law but not your own hell.

Haven't read this in years. For all those of you who want a nice, happy story, just don't kill her and drink some responsible adult's alcohol. You then, evidently, get the best ending - albeit passive - quite quickly. I can tell I was testing out the story editor with this story and venting at the same time. I can also vaguely remember that had I not written this story, something terrible would have happened in that cramped little apartment in real life all those years ago. You should've met this woman.

Awesome Does Not Approve!
I'm sorry, it's just too negative of a story for me. I didn't enjoy killing people at random, but storywise it was interesting and had an interesting plot.
I won't show my rating. (It's not 1.)

In real I would enjoy the particular day.
4/8

I got away with it this time still cant find the best.

This is amazingly hard, Iv'e only found the light alcohol related ending but I will go for the best.

It was a kind of sad story. I was hoping that there would be a good ending where he would resolve his issues and live a normal life but considering the game title and everything I guess that was wishful thinking. It was a good game mechanical wise but I really was hoping for that one good ending.

Oh yeah, Yuck? What's madglee's name, then? Surely, since you know him well enough to let him put this up, you'd at least know that.

You Dumbfuck! You said you would give me credit for this, since I made it! You said you would put it up on here and give me credit for doing such a great job! Liar! Well, you better hope your balls don't turn blue. You're not doing anything with me until we discuss this, later!

Uuuh, are there any good GOOD endings? Just wondering.

that wasn't very good

Its ok. KInda dull. I WANTED TO PLAY EVERWINTER NIGHTS II!

Kinda crazy. Tried to be patient with the poor girl.

Could use work.

Me again; after more exploring of this one you won't be too surprised to know I think "mommy..." is definitely better though I guess you won't find that too insulting because it looks like you did this one first.

You're the best writer of these choose-your-own stories I've read, so far; I thought "mommy..." was better than this one, rather grittier, though I haven't explored this one much so far. Feel almost inspired to try one of my own.

It was only one day :( . I would have loved to play more.

Haha, still quite fun to read.

I LOVED this some of the answers really made me laugh. espsecially the tech support one. do you ..a..fix her comp? or b... kill her. XD!!!! a bit extreme but entertaining.^_^

Awesome. I'm a murderer! :D

Feh, oddly amusing. Not bad.

A very funny story. I liked it alot.

FIne.

Good.

bo approves

Quite Good! Well worth the time!

Pretty fun. I only found one "good" ending though. Would have been nice to kill her and get away with it. I only tried a few times though so it may be possible.

This was short, but good.

My babe Trisha a hot sexy babe and me love it.

Actually pretty interesting--I tried a variety of paths, and some were definitely better than others. But on the whole, not bad.

Man, Loved it but is there any way to kill her and get away with it?

it's OK

Grab the pan, sneak up behind her and bludgeon her to death rofl

I died when I read Lure her into the kitchen to kill her.

This game is random! Two nubs up.

I am new to this site and this is the first one I've tried and, it seems, beat. One, a new version should come out that spans years in hell. It should be a lot more detailed. If you want to make it real good, make it a series of stories. I've only beat one ending granted, but books over at FFProject have enormis detail. I'll look at some other stories though and see what I think.

6/8 I thougt it was a good story.

I read the story because it was up against Ducky Park in that tournament thing, and I wasn't sure what the story was about. The title itself seemed rather generic, so I don't think I would have read it otherwise.

It wasn't a bad story, but the voilence seemed almost random and unnecessary. Don't get me wrong, I like violence, but there should be some sort of reason. I guess I could understand this if I was aware that the protagonist was insane or something, but the story did not reveal that aside from in the choices that I was given.

It was somewhat entertaining, though rather lacking in plot.

Played this game, love it every time. Awesomeness!

it was pretty funny but you should have made an option to kill the cops. good job though

THIS GAME WAS FUN. my other name was sloth, but i have an account now so cheerio!

gets the thumbs up from me :D

Yeah its god and funny

how do you get the best ending ?

Good writing

Good Job!

Hehehe, clever. I thought my actions would land me in hell, but it turns out-*censored due to spoilers*

Good game! It is quite underrated and like what you stated in your description. This game deserves much better than a 4, so play it and don't be like those who gives out bad ratings!

This is demented and hilarious! Best writing of the ones I have read on this site. I thought it was a little short, but I still rated it really high!

Good theme. I kind of felt bad about killing her though. I wish there would have been a "Run away and never return" option.

Very... interesting... story. Still, I don't think I'd KILL a roommate no matter how annoying the person was. But... hmm... What to say?...

pretty cool, pretty vicious

You should make it longer and more interesting!

pretty good, funny.

That was very amusing. I'm pretty sure I tested every choice. I particularly liked the result of paying Stan off.

I like it, It`s bad!

It was kinda weird

I'm Stephanie's slave! waawaawaa!

I was a good boy... :)

It's about time I played that. Man, that was weird. Creepy, I like it.

Pretty good for a first effort!

No annoying vegetarian is going to be the boss of me. (No offence to any vegetarians. I respect that you dont eat meat. Just dont go saying its smells horrible LOL.)

No one should come between me and my bacon.

What a strange and twisted game... I loved it. ^_^

Was allright. I guess. Short n' sweet, but there wasn't much of a story.

Very entertaining. Does it ever end without killing poor inconsiderate Stephanie? Bravo

He He He o my dear lord, you have really done it now "Madglee". That was great I laughed harder than any story I've read in a long time. Which reminds me when are you going to tell your famous bum gladiator story. That will be your best seller some day. Bravo cuz, Bravo,

That was great! I entire world of story reading I didn't know existed. I choose 7 because I liked the selection that involved "better than reeses cups"- cute answer. But I think I need to go back and choose an ending that involves the frying pan to get some more satisfaction.
I'll rate you again later, hmmmmm.
great job!

Like a literary juggernaut, crushing legions of suicidal hindus under it's unstoppable god-like feet. Far better than any of the crap that Hollywood currently feeds the great unwashed masses.

Dude... as usual your writing is a superb blending of words and ideas, of madness and creativity into a symphony of hilarity!! Your a damned lunatic after my own spirit... There, now there's a nice little critique. Honestly, the I bashed her skull in right away. Just so you knew that. Email me or call me to talk about this shit..

Boy am I a bad roommate.

Great game! Though a little linear, and kind of short, it was very entertaining.

Enjoyed the story immensely! Made me belly laugh! I wanted to waste her with the frying pan after I forced a gallon of animal fat down her throat, but I remained calm.....so I shall play again! More stories, PLEASE!

you got one complex mind there lol. i do like the descriptions. brings more depth and feel to it.

Hahaha, looking through the comments and this is my favorite:
"This game is weird. You kill your roommate because she keeps jabbering? What happened to, 'Please, I have a head ache from all this talking'? Good describing words, yet bad story." I can't stop laughing.

I too enjoyed the endless extra option to kill stephanie :) Very funny! Of course, being not so violent a person, I ended up buying lots of beer and being bored to death by her ramblings for all of eternity :)

Well written. I didn't get far but it was certainly worth reading.

Great game. Every link has more links. Awesome for a first!

This is awesome! Good job making this.

Where is the goddam devil? ITS HELL. Oh wait, the devil is stephanie.

It was okay.
There was some humor to be found in the fact that nearly every other option involves bludgeoning Steph with a blunt object of some kind.

Uhm... oookay...

That was a bit weird.

Well. There was some good humour, thats for sure. I didn't really find Stephanie very convincing but Matt was. One of the links made no sense (Kill her with a frying pan when I'm outside reading the newspaper) and I felt that I didn't have enough choices to do waht I wanted. To a certain extent I engoy hip hop. On the Assasin scale this rated a 6/8 and moved on passed the preliminaries to the Round Robbin.

oh yeah all right... did you know that if you put to many end game links at the beganing of a story then you will always end up geting 1s. no mater what the game!!!

that was ecellent,cool,idot what to say.PERFECT!

was good but the ending was shit!! if any1 wants to add me on msn my addi is crezzy_ov_occo@hotmail.com

now i get it it do not sock now i thiks it good not

it sock it bad

cool game!!!!!

this game rocks!

Completely clever with every option to navigate through as if you woke up to the hip hop music yourself. I'm going to eat some eggs fried in animal fat.

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its random but good i like it its imaginative funny and exciting god job!

~GameKing~

that was ok game

pretty good except when I realised that I had no choice but to kill her which is pretty dramatic.

Good game, when you first made it, it was probably not a bad start. You have become better over the months though, right? No, serioulsly, just kidding. It was fun, I forgot who I was in the game.

HOLY CRAP! I THOUGHT THIS WAS... FING FUN!

This was O.K. It was kinda scary but i thought that the game was too short and the part when you smack Stephanie in the forehead really hard actually kinda made me laugh!

See? Good comment!

This was scary and it almost made me cry!

I THOUGHT IT WAS F***ING FUNNIG WHEN I HAD TO KILL HER

A good game. The creator is very intelligant.

it was kind of stupid, but not really.

Awesome first game! Make more like this!

That's exactly what i would call hell. very god job

i did make it through the day... but i restarted multiple times and killed those 2 people as well..... theres no way in HELL that you can win :( EXCELLENT first game though.... :)

What a pretty good game. I guess.... GJ. 6/10

It's nice to finally find an ending on this game that doesn't in in damnation or murder!

This game is weird. You kill your roommate because she keeps jabbering? What happened to, "Please, I have a head ache from all this talking"? Good describing words, yet bad story.

NICE GAME I LIKED IT EVEN THOUGH I LOST WITH THE POLICE FOR KILLING STEPHANIE

I like fixing things and hate drugs. They killed my grandpa.

Interesting game. I ended up in hell, but i don't mind, since my actions were noble.

This game is sooo awesome. I see something new every time I play it. Wish there were 50 more like it.

... speechless. First game, and very well written. Sarcastic/cynical writing that's nothing if not attractive. I laughed and laughed. you need to make another game. You need to use some pictures if possible. you need to have your game featured... so be it!

That was really fantastic! Better than most of the ones I've played!-And I've played many! Make more thanks.....

Pretty good game. Make a larger one and maybe I'll give it a perfect ten.<br><br>8/10

WHAT THE HELL....the thing said it was of long lenght...and i completed the game in 2 seconds, right after a movie and some bacon....needs to be longer dude

Havent had the time to explore it all but its flipping hilarious, I chose to bludgeon her to death and thought I might get away with it, but failed horribly. Its quick simple and fun to read.

hey this was great...i goofed up my comment the last time. this time she did not get bludgeoned- how sad. what an annoying witch. why was i living with her? hey madglee- you rock!!!

A wild romp from beginning to end! <br>I only wish I could kill her again!

Ohhh...nice!!I laughed at a lot of the parts and loved killing the 2 neighbours and stephenie ,if only i could destroy the neighbourhood....LOL

I played again today only this time I chose to commit murder. I bludgeoned her to death!!

I loved it. Laughed out loud through most of it and could not help but wonder how much was based on real life situations. Keep up the good work.