Damn, @Axxius, I had no idea you had the connect like that.
It's fine. More showing and less telling would be preferred, though.
More warlord stories are always welcome at CYS.
I liked it as a first page. There are some extra commas and some missing ones from place to place, so you might want to run the text through a grammar-checking program.
That's what writing a good story feels like. Having read all of the pages so far, I can say that they make me want to read the rest of the story.