Player Comments on Will the Real J. Jonah Jameson Please Step Forward?

5/8 - Not bad, not bad

good game,fun and easy to play

Very amusing. I knew it couldn't be the third.

Pretty funny lol

The low rating on this story would suggest that it is a miserable little fan-fiction with poor writing. That isn't the case. These missing rating points all the way up to 8 are the measure of opportunity lost. This missive lacks substance but is a well spent 5 minutes.

... And then Spider Man bumped into a clone of himself, and they spent the next few years pointing at each other for the enjoyment of meme lovers everywhere.

this was a ltokletallyt epic experibenc

This was a decent enough story. It wasn't very challenging finding out who the real Jameson was. Honestly, there isn't much to complain about here other than I wish there was a bit more questions asked of the Jameson's. Either way it wasn't awful.

This was fun! I love how you used the old Spider-man comics instead of the newer stuff. It made the game that much better.

This was pretty fun AND I got it right, first time!

This was pretty fun! The ending was pretty funny too.

Fought my boredom

Good writing... but I feel that this was more of a puzzle game than a story. You certainly have the skills to create a good storygame in the future.

AHHHH ALIENS!

You automatically lose

Dumb.

eh.... nice job for a first game.

Woo! Bring on the aliens!

Very cute! I want to hear about the aliens!!

That was pretty cool...

Wow. Usually superhero games are a little off, and not very accurate, but this is a very good representation of Spiderman and some of the X-Men. I would like to see more mysteries like this!

While the plot isn't very strong, this game made for an enjoyable few minutes. Grammar was good, but it's a bit confusing for anyone who doesn't know spiderman.

Another example of alright grammar wasted on a poorly developed, excruciatingly short piece.

fun but not much to it

lol crossover

Pretty neat.

Quite a nice short story/puzzle.

I liked it! Was easy to solve though, I just went for the guy who was the biggest jerk :p

Awesome Approves!
Hiralious. Try to get serious, make it a bit longer, and I see great things happening here. 5/8

xD It amused me.

the differences were slight, but if you go for subtle differances then at least bog it down with LOTS of details to make it harder.

I didn't even see those subtle differences I just noticed there personalities and compared it to the movies and there I had it.

One word: HAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! Not much of a game or story, but a heck of a lot better than some games I see!

It was good and funny too! (But I want to hear about the aliens...)

i guest right it was number

Quick and cute

Quick but amusing.

I loved the jokes at the end.

Dude. . . you have some great idea here. . .just fix it up and be serious and you could have a really cool game. Not that this isn't cool, it's so fun i figured it out the first try...

Lol. That is all.

Neat reasoning game!

I think it is a cute, well written story. Nice work!

"It's a crossover". Priceless!

Very funny, dude! Good idea ending on a cliffhanger. It makes readers curious.

Short, but well done in its enjoyability and synthesis of logical deduction and character development. I give it a 6 and if this was expanded to an epic scale I probably would have given it an Eight.

Short, really easy, not that entertaining, a 5/8 at best.

Meh, okay.

Short, not extremely entertaining, but alright.

Still not bad. Though short and easy. The questions shouldn't have been so obvious really.

Okay, way too short, and way too easy. I really didn't like it...

it was ok but a little too easy

I would have given it an eight, but you made it seem like spidey and the x-men live in seperate universes...so..7/8

Very short and too easy (I missed the Chamelon's supposed slips, so I had to think a good while, but one of the Joanh's anasweared in a far more Jonah like fashion. Another of the Jonah's was nothing like him).
Not bad for killing 5 minutes.
4/8

The humor is what got it a 5/8. However it was WAY to easy, and I don't think the advance editor was really needed for it.

Wow! That was funny!!

I realized I made a mistake the first time I rated this; I meant to give it a 7/8, but my mouse must have slipped, because the page listing all the ratings for the story didn't list any sevens. Well, thanks again for writing such an entertaining (if easy) storygame!

There was only ONE THING stopping me from rating this story 8/8: it's too short! Excellent work, as on your other storygames! Just out of curiosity, don't Spider-man and the X-men exist in the same universe?

What happens next? I like the interrogation part.

that was funny- pretty short but neat, too.

This was very nicely done. Sure, it was short, but it was clever and fun! Well written and a creative take on a popular character. Good job.

Actually sort of funny.

waaay too short...I guessed but I still won.
It was cute I suppose.

nice game, but if u make it longer, u will get a higher rating.

That was okay I guess. By the way, Spidey and Xmen live in the same universe, it's called MARVEL.

i love the concept. however, i didnt have to talk to everyone to figure it out. it was too simplistic. next time, add more of an adventure to it. following the imposters investigating houses...stuff like that.