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EndMaster's Succubus Story Contest

one month ago

SUCCUBUS CONTEST

Originally posted in the “Ask A SUCKubus” thread and expanded on:

Since this site suddenly has an influx of succubi experts, one of you go write a good story about one.

Deadline is July 31st 12:00 AM.

Reward: Our non-succubus monster Mayana is potentially offering a gift card for Steam or something for the winner. You’ll also get pointless points, potential commendations, and respect of the site.

I don’t care how you do it. It can be horror, it can be fantasy, you can even make it romance if you’re into that sort of thing. Yes, sirens, vamps and other bitches that lure men to ruin are also acceptable. If you want to make a plain old human “succubus” rather than a literal one, that’s acceptable too, but chances are I’m going to find it a bit boring. If I wanted to see something about gold digging whores, I'd just watch some reality TV show.

And yeah because we’re more progressive than some might believe, it can even be the less popular male incubus instead. Though honestly I figure what some of you degenerates are going to do is just give the succubus a dick and call it a day.

And for fuck’s sake, don’t make it based on some cutesy monster girl anime bullshit. NO FANFICTION  

(Okay fanfic is fine, just nothing based on anime weeb shit.)

Good luck.

EndMaster's Succubus Story Contest

one month ago
Entering should be mandatory for the experts in the other thread.

EndMaster's Succubus Story Contest

one month ago
To give you more detail, I'll gift the winner a 10 EUR Steam card ...

but only if we get at least 3 entries (that meet site standards, of course). The winner also gets no money if it turns out that Steam won't allow me to send it to USA or wherever else they're from, or if they or their story are just so terribly unlikable that I can't bring myself to reward them. For example, if Kiel suddenly shows up and writes an 8/8 story, he still won't get shit.

Not so great sounding now, is it? Well, it's an EndMaster's contest. Those tend to be chaotic. Pray I don't add even more exceptions. :)

EndMaster's Succubus Story Contest

one month ago

A story about succubi? That could be fun to write in a fantasy-esque setting. Count me in.

Does the submission have to be a short story, a storygame, or how do you want it?

EndMaster's Succubus Story Contest

one month ago

It’s supposed to be a storygame of course.

EndMaster's Succubus Story Contest

one month ago
Karstark has said he's entering but hasn't confirmed it in here yet.

EndMaster's Succubus Story Contest

one month ago

I will enter. I'm going to reget treasure this!

EndMaster's Succubus Story Contest

one month ago
Does this count as a "Get out of Shame" contest? Cause I'm pretty ashamed of my surprise shame.

EndMaster's Succubus Story Contest

one month ago

Yeah, it's free and if you submit something you get off the SHAME list.

EndMaster's Succubus Story Contest

one month ago

Contest Entrants So Far

benholman44

Chanbot (Ford)

Ficsean_Chief

Fluxion

jodithewitch

Karstark

Liqquitty

lopz66

oraclemache

pugpup1

EndMaster's Succubus Story Contest

one month ago

Let's make this official. I am entering and winning this motherfucker. Well, I will try and miserably fail to, and that's if I post anything. But my account is on the balance so that should give urgency to things 

EndMaster's Succubus Story Contest

one month ago
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EndMaster's Succubus Story Contest

one month ago

I'd like to join.

EndMaster's Succubus Story Contest

one month ago

I want to join this contest!

EndMaster's Succubus Story Contest

one month ago

Added all the new participants.

EndMaster's Succubus Story Contest

one month ago

I'm in. I'm not so good with deadlines, so hopefully I'll finish it by then, but if not, I'll publish it when it's completed and look for a way to crawl out of the shame pit.

EndMaster's Succubus Story Contest

one month ago

Will your girlfriend be providing extra entertainment like last time?

EndMaster's Succubus Story Contest

one month ago

Ex-girlfriend. She's dating a tranny now, and thankfully no.

EndMaster's Succubus Story Contest

one month ago

Fucking hell. Lol.

EndMaster's Succubus Story Contest

one month ago

Also, is there a word/page count requirement, or does it just have to meet site standards?

EndMaster's Succubus Story Contest

one month ago

Just make it good enough that it meets site standards.

EndMaster's Succubus Story Contest

one month ago

Would fanfiction be okay if it was based on like... A really old, historical fictional character? Like Morgan Le Fay or Carmilla?

EndMaster's Succubus Story Contest

one month ago
If it's good enough the rules don't matter :P

EndMaster's Succubus Story Contest

one month ago

Yeah I guess that's okay. The "No Fanfiction" thing is more of "I don't want to see weeb shit."

Obviously if you're picking Morgan Le Fay from the Arthurian Legends, you're picking something that at least celebrates proper white pagan heritage.

EndMaster's Succubus Story Contest

one month ago

Hi I am a virgin but I would still like to participate. Wish me luck all fellow V-cardholders.

EndMaster's Succubus Story Contest

one month ago
An odd thing to mention. This is a writing website, after all. Most of us members are virgins. :P

EndMaster's Succubus Story Contest

one month ago

You have a good point.  so, should non virgins censor their story some in that regard, or the virgins will be obvious in their writing? 

EndMaster's Succubus Story Contest

one month ago
Were you hoping to change that? I would HOPE nobody would be willing, but some site-members are probably willing or even eager to debase themselves.

EndMaster's Succubus Story Contest

one month ago

I don't think I'll have the time to write one, but holy crap am I looking forward to reading them!!
 

EndMaster's Succubus Story Contest

one month ago

Sir/Madam, known to the people of CYStia as "Camille622", I bring a message from Lady Mizal. It reads as so:

"wow, take a cold shower u whore"

Best regards.

EndMaster's Succubus Story Contest

one month ago

Please pass along my thanks to Lady Mizal for her kind greeting, along with my solemn promise to keep my whoring to a minimum.

EndMaster's Succubus Story Contest

one month ago

Don't listen to Mizal, she's trying to sabotage things. It's a Succubus Contest, go ahead and do all the whoring you want.

CYS member Insanebutvain isn't currently around right now, so it's an even playing field.

EndMaster's Succubus Story Contest

one month ago

You're a visitor from Choice of Games, right? If you're thinking of sticking around for a while you should probably introduce yourself over on Newbie Cental. Either way, welcome to the site.

EndMaster's Succubus Story Contest

one month ago

Given that Mizal/Chris already gave her a pretty standard CYStian greeting, posting in the noob section would be somewhat redudant at this point.

EndMaster's Succubus Story Contest

one month ago

My apologies then. Sorry for cluttering up your thread.

EndMaster's Succubus Story Contest

one month ago
What the FUCK, TB?!
This thread only has a thousand cubic feet of space for all of us, and here you are using it ALL! D:

EndMaster's Succubus Story Contest

one month ago
You're always apologizing when you don't need to. You should consider injecting yourself with the CHAD serum to build more self confidence. I know a real doctor and I approve this.

EndMaster's Succubus Story Contest

one month ago
I heard it causes penile shrinkage.

EndMaster's Succubus Story Contest

one month ago

EndMaster's Succubus Story Contest

one month ago

This guy is an amazing narrator

"AANything"

EndMaster's Succubus Story Contest

one month ago

Hi End. I have missed you and my tribe. how are you?  I like this challenge.  No weeb shit. I got it. Are you mad at me?  If i am still here and I guess maybe not. I overstepped.  My apologies. I have been crazy busy, with a job. yes yours truly is working. I knew you would be proud. I can't wait to catch up and see what other disturbing things you have going on. I do like the way yours and many of the minds work here. I intend to participate in this succubus challenge as an expert. self appointed expert that is. I will get it done somehow plus revisions to my first story.  I want to make you proud End. I have sucked up thoroughly. However if  am going to suck up, i prefer it be you. 

Hi all!  cant wait to see what everyone has been up to. 

oracle

EndMaster's Succubus Story Contest

one month ago

Glad to hear it, I’ll add you to the list of contestants.

EndMaster's Succubus Story Contest

one month ago
End: "hey I'm home, got ten leads today and this morning a woman on the forum heavily implied she wanted to suck me off. Winning!"

Katie: "a new one? that's great dear, what kind of daddy issues does *this* one have?"

EndMaster's Succubus Story Contest

one month ago
Thank you for this. XD

EndMaster's Succubus Story Contest

one month ago

Mizal,

I have HUGE daddy issues. HUGE!  I did not know however that there was a better half to the End Master. I sucked up. I should have said brown nose. 

The whole End Master thing with the dark cape serves only to fascinate the young minds and wonder about the man behind that darkness.  I have discovered that he is as follows:

  • High IQ at least above average genius level
  • antisocial. I am as well
  • There beats a caring heart, but concealed out of necessaity to survive. 
  • He wants to teach, and he does that well.
  • He has people like you who also carry these traits. All them but the cape. 
  • He takes no shit.  If you don't want to work to get somewhere you can get down the road. (same traits in some of you too)

These things fascinate anyone. I would as much want to suck you off as him.  I am an equal opportunity sucker.  I hope that clarified it. Hi cricket.  I hope your well? I bow to your command. Now cricket, that is an IQ that is astronomical. The intelligence in this individual is mind blowing. She misses nothing. Even the most suttle actions she is aware of. I have a great deal of admiration and respect. No, i am not sucking up at this moment. Everything I said is true. 

M

 

 

EndMaster's Succubus Story Contest

one month ago

Honestly it’s better you said sucked up.

Brown nose would have been even worse...

EndMaster's Succubus Story Contest

one month ago
Hey, has anyone ever told you you're pretty weird?

EndMaster's Succubus Story Contest

29 days ago

Mizal,

Yes I am very weird. They tell me all the time. 

EndMaster's Succubus Story Contest

one month ago
My well stinks sometimes, but chlorine tablets clears that right up.

EndMaster's Succubus Story Contest

29 days ago
What shit are you tripping on and where can I get some?

EndMaster's Succubus Story Contest

29 days ago

Lordkarstark, 

You would have to die. You might not make it back.  That is where you get some from. 

EndMaster's Succubus Story Contest

29 days ago

You forgot sadistic.

EndMaster's Succubus Story Contest

one month ago
I will enter, and as the theme holds zero interest for me, I will write quickly and without effort and have my story published before anyone else.

EndMaster's Succubus Story Contest

one month ago

no? What kind of theme would you enjoy?

EndMaster's Succubus Story Contest

one month ago
Well there's my contest, for instance, which is clearly superior.

EndMaster's Succubus Story Contest

one month ago

I saw it. I do think it is going to be intresting. I just don't know anything about the genre. I guess now is as good a time as any to learn.

EndMaster's Succubus Story Contest

one month ago

Just going to say this contest is one of the best ideas I’ve had just by the posts in this thread alone.

EndMaster's Succubus Story Contest

one month ago

Updating contestant list

Contest Entrants So Far

Benholman44 - DONE

Chanbot (Ford) - DONE

Ficsean_Chief - BANNED

Fluxion - DONE

Jodithewitch - DONE

Liqquitty - SHAMED

Lopz66 - DONE

Lordkarstark - BANNED

Mizal - DONE

Ogre - DONE

Oraclemache - SHAMED

Pugpup1 - DONE

EndMaster's Succubus Story Contest

one month ago
Mine will be finished by Monday night. How's everyone else coming along?

EndMaster's Succubus Story Contest

29 days ago

I’m branching a bit out of control. Hopefully I can wrangle it back or it’ll take until the end of the year. Sort of becoming the epic I’ve wanted to write for a while

EndMaster's Succubus Story Contest

29 days ago

Still trying to outline and figure out what is going to actually happen. Although I believe the amount of time I've spent planning so far was necessary, the deadline is closing in, so I am trying to wrap it up by this weekend.

EndMaster's Succubus Story Contest

29 days ago

Mizal,

I plan to.  I am also heading up a campaign to identify and define issues in mental health care systems so that we can then take action and make change.  I want the number of suicides to decrease not increase. I am seeing too many parents bury their kids as I have had to do.  I have bit off more than I should have.  However, the door opened and I walked through. So here we are. I will do every thing I can to meet the deadline. 

m. 

EndMaster's Succubus Story Contest

29 days ago

Glad to hear you're going to suck it up like a trooper and try to swallow this task you've eagerly committed to working hard on.

I'm expecting you to submit a better quality story than most here seeing as you're an expert.

EndMaster's Succubus Story Contest

29 days ago

I'm still trying to plan out how things will go. I've got the plotline down, but I don't want the story to be like my last one, where you make a couple of choices followed by an adrupt ending. While the story might end up being shorter than I intended due to time constraints, I at least want there to be some actual meaningful story.

EndMaster's Succubus Story Contest

29 days ago
I’ll should be done on Wednesday night or Thursday morning. That or I’ll end up getting twice shamed.

EndMaster's Succubus Story Contest

29 days ago

Honestly, I'm expecting most of you to fail horribly as usual at this simple contest. Hell, one of you fucktards is probably going to get yourselves banned for writing straight up porn believing you wrote some masterpiece. Oh how amusing it will be when the ban hammer slams down and you cry out "Why?" as you struggle to understand like a helpless kitten that Ryder just acquired.

However, I'm expecting Miztress, Oralsecks and JoditheVirgin to have the "best" stories given that they are non-penis havers and should have a better grasp on the evils of femininity.

(Okay Mizal might have difficulty with the feminine part, but she'll make up for it in the evil)

EndMaster's Succubus Story Contest

29 days ago

Wait, how do you know about that? I kept it as non-descript as possible!

EndMaster's Succubus Story Contest

29 days ago
I've been quietly looking forward to people with no sense of where the line is having their stories deleted because their only experience with sex in fiction is their erotic fanfictions. Was briefly disappointed you warned them with this, but now everyone gets to second guess themselves and wallow in fear and self doubt so I consider it a net improvement.

I really hope no one has expectations about mine since I'm basically treating this as an experiment in word spewing and I needed a story I didn't care about to make it work. But since I've been directly grouped with noobs I'm suddenly not too worried.

Except I suppose for my reputation as a whole, which has apparently dropped a few levels to the point where I'm now getting grouped in with noobs...

EndMaster's Succubus Story Contest

29 days ago
If you're looking for sex I'm probably going to lose spectacularly, as I expect mine will be the least sexual. Mostly because the steamy parts have already happened by the time the story starts.

EndMaster's Succubus Story Contest

29 days ago

If I was looking for sex, I'd just give your mom a call.

With your story, I was expecting your approach would be to just post a bunch of pictures of demon girls as the background and your writing would be an after thought.

EndMaster's Succubus Story Contest

29 days ago
Well as long as they are meant as art it should be fine, right?

EndMaster's Succubus Story Contest

29 days ago

Sure, just make sure their fun bits are strategically covered up. This is a family site after all.

EndMaster's Succubus Story Contest

28 days ago

Huh, I thought only a "central concept" of pornography was not allowed according to minimum site standards. So you're saying someone couldn't publish a story mostly about the lives of Llama Perry and Llama Julie if they had a single page of explicit llama sex?

EndMaster's Succubus Story Contest

28 days ago
What the actual fuck

EndMaster's Succubus Story Contest

28 days ago

I have no idea, though I know I've gone over this in the past and even wrote an article about it.

At this point people should be familiar enough with the site and the stories that are on here to know what's allowed and what isn't as far as the sex stuff is concerned.

EndMaster's Succubus Story Contest

28 days ago
The real answer is that such a page would be represent such a dramatic tonal shift that it would obviously have no place in that story at all aside from you, the author, deliberately undermining your own work with something stupid just to be a weird troll. The simpler answer is than no, you can't write graphic animal porn, you digusting freak.

EndMaster's Succubus Story Contest

28 days ago

I guess I'll play it safe and avoid being explicit in general. Not like I'm qualified to describe sex anyway... 

The llamas were just an analogy for two humanoids. But if bestiality is below this site's moral standards, I guess I will also have to cut the admittedly quite random part with parent-child incest (Not described in detail obviously, but it happens.) Yeah, the story is probably better off without that anyway. Looks like I learned something today, thank you for that!

EndMaster's Succubus Story Contest

28 days ago
See, I can tell you're awash with noobish confusion if for some reason you think incest would be rejected here. No pedo stuff is the only hard rule, but hard rules shouldn't be needed beyond that. We like to treat you guys like you're neurotypical enough to have common sense about certain things.

EndMaster's Succubus Story Contest

28 days ago
So, like, can I have an explicit netorare scene if it's written in a unerotic way for biographocal purposes?
And it's also incestuous, legally speaking?

EndMaster's Succubus Story Contest

28 days ago
According to autocomplete search results, that's some anime thing and so I know you already know the answer to this.

EndMaster's Succubus Story Contest

28 days ago

Actually netorare is just cucking. It doesn't have to be anime.

EndMaster's Succubus Story Contest

28 days ago
It's used in the context of hentai and eroge. Regular cuck porn is not called netorare.

EndMaster's Succubus Story Contest

28 days ago
Your knowledge of cucking and netorare both scares and impresses me.

EndMaster's Succubus Story Contest

28 days ago
I get that a lot.

EndMaster's Succubus Story Contest

28 days ago
Wibbons gets to write HIS anime stuff. :(

EndMaster's Succubus Story Contest

28 days ago

So what's going on then, the half breed son is fucking his succubus mom and cucking his human dad?

EndMaster's Succubus Story Contest

28 days ago
This is a great idea. Making a CHYOO account now.

EndMaster's Succubus Story Contest

28 days ago
Haha yes, you would do that. For "ironic*" purposes only of course. Like Sentinel and his comical F-List browsing and all his forbidden knowledge.

Congrats, you're now the anime version of the furry.

EndMaster's Succubus Story Contest

27 days ago

But wait, I've got brother-sister incest where the succubus murdered his sis then possessed her corpse to manipulate him in his grief. There's been stories written by EndMaster certain authors that have incest so long as it's not explicit. By the way, why ISN'T incest considered against site standards if it's considered a taboo?

EndMaster's Succubus Story Contest

27 days ago

Oh wait never mind saw the post explaining incest is OK.

EndMaster's Succubus Story Contest

27 days ago

I've got brother-sister incest where the succubus murdered his sis then possessed her corpse to manipulate him in his grief.

Great, you added necrophilia to the incest mix too, glad to see you've been paying attention and followed the path of our top progressive stories on the site.

EndMaster's Succubus Story Contest

27 days ago

What I miss?

EndMaster's Succubus Story Contest

27 days ago

Well you could always back read the thread. It shouldn't take that long to read before your next demon possession.

EndMaster's Succubus Story Contest

26 days ago

I did, but didn't comprehend it I suppose. My apologies. 

EndMaster's Succubus Story Contest

27 days ago
Honestly with this crowd I'll be more surprised if we get entries that don't have incest.

EndMaster's Succubus Story Contest

27 days ago

I wasn't planning on even feauturing any of the MC's relatives in my story. I feel if I want to meet to meet site expectations, I have to add incest somewhere.

EndMaster's Succubus Story Contest

26 days ago

People,

Keep in mind that this is a SUCCUBUS story contest, not an INCEST story contest. Focus on the main theme. So if you want to include incest, great, but it's not necessary.

This place isn't CoG where they only accept a story as long as you conform to their site's faggotry.

EndMaster's Succubus Story Contest

25 days ago
Well I missed my self imposed Monday deadline. Never eat large quantities of bread on a planned writing day, lesson learned.

I'll have *something* to turn in by the real deadline regardless of whether I get a chance to add in this other path I wanted, anyway.

EndMaster's Succubus Story Contest

25 days ago

The sinister Breadcubus got you.

EndMaster's Succubus Story Contest

24 days ago
I know it's evil and wrong but it's impossible to resist. :(

EndMaster's Succubus Story Contest

24 days ago
Bread is the silent asshole raper.

EndMaster's Succubus Story Contest

23 days ago
That's actually how breadsticks were invented.

EndMaster's Succubus Story Contest

23 days ago
You two sound like like you have a lot of first hand knowledge, guess I better take your word on this.

26th is the new date I'm attempting publishing by. It needs to be at least a few days before the the last minute entries all hit so that people might actually read it.

EndMaster's Succubus Story Contest

21 days ago

Well it's a little late, but Ogre has announced that he's entering the contest in the Discord. There is no other way to interpret his intentions.

Wondering what he'll ultimately come up with what with the progressive references to fat succubi as opposed to the usual type.

EndMaster's Succubus Story Contest

21 days ago

Believe it or not, I have a succubus-inspired story in the works as well. However, I'm not planning to join the contest because it's highly unlikely I'll have it done by Wednesday night ("Grass Planet" took longer to finish than expected, and I was on vacation for the last week). So rather than try and rush the story to completion, my plan is to publish it in August, well after the contest is over.

I'm looking forward to reading the other stories, and I'm kind of surprised none have been published yet...

EndMaster's Succubus Story Contest

21 days ago
Tradition is to rush half finished contest stories out the day of the deadline, while hating yourself and crying.

EndMaster's Succubus Story Contest

21 days ago

I guess that makes me a non-traditionalist, haha. Who knows, maybe I'll have a productive weekend working in my notebook while sitting next to my campfire at a pond way back in the wilderness... where I'm just about to head off to. Or maybe the beer will taste too good and I won't feel like writing.

The bottom line is I will have a story to share in the near future. Just don't wait up for me if no one sees it on July 31st.

EndMaster's Succubus Story Contest

20 days ago

Oh, and caffeine-induced writing all-nighters, that's inevitable!

Stocking up on energy drinks right now, actually.

EndMaster's Succubus Story Contest

18 days ago
Okay, here you go.

I went with the classical mideval period succubus. I'm not proud of what I've done here.

EndMaster's Succubus Story Contest

18 days ago

One day I will become a seasoned enough writer to present a Snickers-length story with "here you go"

EndMaster's Succubus Story Contest

18 days ago
Interestingly enough, this story shows 46,000 words and a length of 6/8; yet I have another story that shows 38,000 and shows up with 7/8 length.

EndMaster's Succubus Story Contest

18 days ago

When I end up finishing mine, I will leave it as a reply to this comment.

Anyways, I sadly announce that my final product will not be nearly as good as I hoped it would be; I have to cut a lot of corners if I want to make the deadline. Not to mention, tonight will no doubt have to be an all-nighter spent writing.

Wishing myself luck, I still feel confident that I'll win if I finish my story.

EndMaster's Succubus Story Contest

17 days ago

HERE IT IS

https://chooseyourstory.com/story/succubus-in-hiding

Currently unpublished so I can fix any bugs in the game.

EndMaster's Succubus Story Contest

17 days ago
You can't fix bugs after the deadline, dipshit.

I'm impressed you got anything in at all though. Literally two minutes till and with your account on the line, you like to live dangerously.

EndMaster's Succubus Story Contest

17 days ago
....spoke too soon. Lol. Talk about falling flat on your face at the finish line.

You're not off the hook in the Chopped thread either, your ghost will have to message me your posts on Discord.

EndMaster's Succubus Story Contest

17 days ago
And this is the story of the birth of ficsean_cuck

EndMaster's Succubus Story Contest

18 days ago
Ficsean_Chef, you seem to have left open a bold tag. In any event, I just now finally figured out where I'm going with the plot. Had the general concept, but no clear path to the end until now. One day left... game on.

EndMaster's Succubus Story Contest

18 days ago
how many hours are left? the deadline is confusing me.

EndMaster's Succubus Story Contest

18 days ago
It's 11:59 tonight, in Endmaster's timezone.

EndMaster's Succubus Story Contest

18 days ago
He's Eastern US, right?

EndMaster's Succubus Story Contest

17 days ago
Yes.

EndMaster's Succubus Story Contest

18 days ago

Oh right, this contest ends tonight. Nearly forgot all about it.

Anyway, seems like most of you are predictably flailing about, either scrambling to finish at the last minute or giving up completely like the failures you are. Funny that Ogre managed to finish before everyone and he announced his intentions much later than everyone else.

EndMaster's Succubus Story Contest

18 days ago

At this point, I'm not even hoping to win, just planning to submit a story that keeps me out of the shame pit then improve on it later. 

EndMaster's Succubus Story Contest

18 days ago
To be fair, some of us never actually announced our intentions in the first place. Still, I plan on having a storygame by the deadline, and it won't be complete shit if everything goes according to plan.

EndMaster's Succubus Story Contest

18 days ago

Your first post asked if this counted as a Get out of SHAME contest. There’s really no other way to interpret that sentence other than as your desire to enter the contest to take yourself out of the SHAME pit.

Anyway Mizal’s already given up, so throwing her in the SHAME pit means the contest has already been well worth it. Unless she decides to drag her ass across the finish line at the last minute which will be equally as amusing.

EndMaster's Succubus Story Contest

18 days ago

So aside from Ogre11, who's actually published their story?

 

EndMaster's Succubus Story Contest

18 days ago

Nobody. He's currently winning.

EndMaster's Succubus Story Contest

17 days ago

Done. So do I post it here, or just publish it?

EndMaster's Succubus Story Contest

17 days ago

Fuck, I can't publish it! Also, I couldn't finish my story in time, so I made a quiz with questions about succubus entities and lore. Since a quiz technically counts as a 'Everything Else' storygame, and you DID say you didn't care how we wrote it, I'm assuming it's a valid entry?

EndMaster's Succubus Story Contest

17 days ago

Why can’t you publish the other story?

And your pathetic quiz entry currently still is unpublished.

EndMaster's Succubus Story Contest

17 days ago

The quiz one is the one I can't publish, apparently you can't publish a story until 2 days after you started it.

As for the other story, it's a combination of procrastination, working at my job, and trying to get visitation for my kid because my baby's mom doesn't want to upset her beloved he/she by being around me too much.

EndMaster's Succubus Story Contest

17 days ago

So to keep my ass out of the fire, can I just put the link to the quiz thing up here and accept my loss?

EndMaster's Succubus Story Contest

17 days ago

EndMaster's Succubus Story Contest

17 days ago

Yeah pretty sure we allowed it before with some other fucktard. It’s just an auto loss, though given you made a fucking quiz you were going to lose anyway.

Given your girlfriend ran off with a tranny, I’m not sure if heaping anymore SHAME on you would make any difference anyway.

EndMaster's Succubus Story Contest

17 days ago

Cool, thanks!

EndMaster's Succubus Story Contest

17 days ago
So is anyone else going to make it? Two hours left.

EndMaster's Succubus Story Contest

17 days ago
I will :D

EndMaster's Succubus Story Contest

17 days ago

EndMaster's Succubus Story Contest

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EndMaster's Succubus Story Contest

17 days ago

Hah, I knew you wouldn't be able to let yourself get SHAMED like a common peon.

Good thing too, I was planning on throwing you in the gen pop pit, as apposed to the nice isolated cell.

EndMaster's Succubus Story Contest

17 days ago
What drove me on was the fact that there was the slightest chance Ford might have been publishing something for this one. I wouldn't have been able to live with myself if I was SHAMED in a contest where he wasn't.

EndMaster's Succubus Story Contest

17 days ago
Happy to inspire you

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17 days ago
Turnip already reviewed mine. He's just so much better than all rest of you, sometimes I question why I tolerate your existences at all.

EndMaster's Succubus Story Contest

15 days ago

Thank you for your very kind words, Mizal. As of last night I read and reviewed everyone's, including the unpublished quiz (I didn't realize it was unpublished). There are some really good ones in there, and nearly all of them felt like they could become great stories with just a bit more time. I was impressed with nearly all of them, especially seeing as how all of you were under time constraints. 

EndMaster's Succubus Story Contest

17 days ago

Still waiting for Oralsecks' story.

I mean partially the whole point of this contest was for Oralsecks.

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17 days ago

EndMaster's Succubus Story Contest

17 days ago

And with 40 minutes to go, too. http://chooseyourstory.com/story/the-daemonologists

EndMaster's Succubus Story Contest

17 days ago
This is going to be down to either Ogre or Pug looks like. Everyone else did the usual thing.

Btw Secret of Grass Planet is still an epic sci fi story that no one read because we were all writing garbage stories for this that we then proceeded to bury it with.

EndMaster's Succubus Story Contest

17 days ago
Last minute.

http://chooseyourstory.com/story/witch-hunter~3a-an-uninvited-guest

EndMaster's Succubus Story Contest

17 days ago
As usual, my entry isn't entirely what I wanted it to be. I have to stop procrastinating. Anyway, let my try a hyperlink. I suck at those.

Witch Hunter: An Uninvited Guest

Pretty sure I fucked something up. I needed one more day. Oh well. Anyway, items are used, but mostly they are there to mark inventory, so don't go trying to use them unless there are no links.

EndMaster's Succubus Story Contest

17 days ago

I'll add to the ending and final act when this contest is over, and I'll probably adjust the item and combat system, but this one is more complete than my last publication, which got a pretty high rating before I unpublished (By the Light of Day). Just wish I had a few more hours.

Next time...

EndMaster's Succubus Story Contest

16 days ago
The novel formatting is bitchin'.

EndMaster's Succubus Story Contest

16 days ago

Thanks. Just wish I could have added everything I wanted to.

*le sigh* I was in the process of creating an extensive item use mechanic and bestiary. Had to remove them because they were incomplete and malfunctioning (they'll return when this contest is over, naturally, and be in my next Witch Hunter story). You'll have the items, but mostly they are inventory markers. I also wanted to increase the ending length, but alas... I was distracted by a succubus for most of the month. Oh well, I'll update it after I finish Mizal's story.

EndMaster's Succubus Story Contest

17 days ago

Looks like we all have a lot of reading to do...

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17 days ago

Maybe you lot do, I intend to just skim and click through everything as usual and just randomly pick a winner.

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17 days ago

Ah, so it looks like mizal's strategy of turning in a half-finished story at the last minute might pay off. Good to know.

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17 days ago

http://chooseyourstory.com/story/dream-forest

Not a hundred percent sure that this actually works, but at least I made it I guess....

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EndMaster's Succubus Story Contest

17 days ago

Oh, thank you.

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17 days ago

TIME!

AND THE REST OF YOU ARE SHAMED!

(And banned in some cases)

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17 days ago
I accidentally pasted my story in a reply to Mizal. Sorry. Was at 11:57. But here is a repost.

Witch Hunter: An Uninvited Guest

EndMaster's Succubus Story Contest

17 days ago

Pretty good turn out. Only 4 out of the 12 who entered failed to submit something. And two of them I got to ban, so even that made it worthwhile.

EndMaster's Succubus Story Contest

17 days ago

Actually, that begs the question: why were they banned? Also, since me and oracle were the "succubus experts" on the other thread and he got shamed, does that mean I'm the only succubus expert now?

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17 days ago

They already had TWICE SHAMED on their permanent record meaning they joined two other contests and failed to turn something in. You do that a third time and you get banned.

No time for serial fuck ups since CYS contests are SERIOUS BUSINESS.

As for succubi experts, nobody is a succubi expert, but I guess since Oralsecks flaked out due to splittin the kitten too much to finish her own story, you can get an achievement.

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17 days ago

Cool! Also, in the future, I think I'll actually write the story BEFORE I join the contest.

EndMaster's Succubus Story Contest

16 days ago
Quite impressed there were that many last minute entries. Congrats to all who made it in under the deadline with actual stories!

EndMaster's Succubus Story Contest

16 days ago

So far, I've had a chance to read 4 of the 7 stories that were published (not counting the ones that were submitted, but not published).

So far, I think "Hank's Journey" is the best, with "A Fiery Winter" and "The Succubi War" interesting runner-ups.

I am looking forward to reading the remaining three in the near future. "The Daemonologists" and "Witch Hunter" look especially intriguing.

EndMaster's Succubus Story Contest

14 days ago

Okay, going to start actually randomly clicking reading through these things.

I'll announce a winner when I'm done. (Whenever that is)

EndMaster's Succubus Story Contest

14 days ago

Okay, going to really start on these stories now.

EndMaster's Succubus Story Contest

14 days ago

Okay so I finally read all this stuff from Ford starting off with various bodily fluids dinner, Jodi’s ending of sex without genitals, Mizal writing lesbian mom sex, Fluxion including semen an inventory item and child rape, lopz having a dickgirl succubus, and Ogre’s fat girl fucking along with explosive STD meltdowns, I was glad to see you all delving into your inner twisted fantasies for this one.

Also most of you included some form of incest on some level so points for that as well.

However, there can only be one as everyone knows.

Ogre won.

It was sort of close between him and lopz. Both of them had a lot of branching and various endings.

Ogre got a bit more of the edge due to the extra work involved, plus he managed to gross himself out writing it as well as be a late entry and STILL submit before everyone else, meaning he went more out of his way for this contest.

He said he’s not proud of even writing the story, which makes him winning this contest more amusing since its probably his best story to date.

Lopz did pretty good for his first time submitting something considering he probably would have won had Ogre not suddenly showed up.

Which bring me to Pug’s story since I know everyone thought it was going to be between his and Ogre’s. The BIG problem with Pug’s was the lack of choices. He’d have like 10 pages with a single link. That’s way too many. The main story was still cool overall, and he’ll probably still replace Fairview in the school category when the story gets enough ratings.

Fluxion’s was okay. I figured it would have pics and inventory, though it was another one that felt a bit linear.

Mizal’s probably would have scored higher, but it was obvious that it was cut short in several places.

Jodi’s wasn’t terrible, just didn’t grab me though.

Ford and Ben, you’re just lucky you didn’t get SHAMED. (Or Banned)

Anyway that’s it. Guess I’ll be handing out some pointless points and featuring some stories in the near future. Not sure if Mayana’s handing out her Steam card or whatever it was as a prize.

If she doesn’t, well that’s what you get for trusting sightless monsters. (And their faceless fathers)

EndMaster's Succubus Story Contest

14 days ago
Congratulations, Ogre. I'll be sure to read yours then.
You're all degenerates, by the way, but good job for finishing--except for Ben.

EndMaster's Succubus Story Contest

13 days ago
I honestly can't advise that anyone actually read that thing. Certainly not on a full stomach.

EndMaster's Succubus Story Contest

14 days ago
Congrats Ogre.

Now I'm going to do the honorable thing and finish my story. I'll republish in about two days, this time with fixed ending and inventory mechanic.

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14 days ago

A big congrats to Ogre and everyone else who entered the contest. Ogre had amazing descriptions and made images pop in my head that I can still picture days after reading it. A very well deserved win for him.

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14 days ago
Moreso than in Ogre winning which he has a pretty reasonable chance at in most contests, I'm way more impressed that you did so well TBH considering I have no idea who you even are.

EndMaster's Succubus Story Contest

13 days ago
I am very sorry to have put those images in your head.

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14 days ago
I don't believe Ogre uses Steam, and if he does I think it can be deduced that his game list must be pretty disgusting if he's made such a point of avoiding the group.

But I think it's probably the former, given that he actually writes and finishes things and wins contests and stuff.

EndMaster's Succubus Story Contest

14 days ago

Not terrible!! That's pretty reassuring.

At first I misread that Fluxion included child rape as an inventory item and I thought that was pretty funny. (no not child rape, the thought that someone could make it into a portable object)

Congratulations Ogre, even though apparently he wasn't proud of his story (???)

EndMaster's Succubus Story Contest

13 days ago
Hooray for me!

Congrats, again, to everyone who managed to enter a complete story...