Originally posted in the “Ask A SUCKubus” thread and expanded on:
Since this site suddenly has an influx of succubi experts, one of you go write a good story about one.
Deadline is July 31st 12:00 AM.
Reward: Our non-succubus monster Mayana is potentially offering a gift card for Steam or something for the winner. You’ll also get pointless points, potential commendations, and respect of the site.
I don’t care how you do it. It can be horror, it can be fantasy, you can even make it romance if you’re into that sort of thing. Yes, sirens, vamps and other bitches that lure men to ruin are also acceptable. If you want to make a plain old human “succubus” rather than a literal one, that’s acceptable too, but chances are I’m going to find it a bit boring. If I wanted to see something about gold digging whores, I'd just watch some reality TV show.
And yeah because we’re more progressive than some might believe, it can even be the less popular male incubus instead. Though honestly I figure what some of you degenerates are going to do is just give the succubus a dick and call it a day.
And for fuck’s sake, don’t make it based on some cutesy monster girl anime bullshit. NO FANFICTION
(Okay fanfic is fine, just nothing based on anime weeb shit.)
A story about succubi? That could be fun to write in a fantasy-esque setting. Count me in.
Does the submission have to be a short story, a storygame, or how do you want it?
It’s supposed to be a storygame of course.
I will enter. I'm going to reget treasure this!
Yeah, it's free and if you submit something you get off the SHAME list.
Contest Entrants So Far
Let's make this official. I am entering and winning this motherfucker. Well, I will try and miserably fail to, and that's if I post anything. But my account is on the balance so that should give urgency to things
I'd like to join.
I want to join this contest!
Added all the new participants.
I'm in. I'm not so good with deadlines, so hopefully I'll finish it by then, but if not, I'll publish it when it's completed and look for a way to crawl out of the shame pit.
Will your girlfriend be providing extra entertainment like last time?
Ex-girlfriend. She's dating a tranny now, and thankfully no.
Fucking hell. Lol.
Also, is there a word/page count requirement, or does it just have to meet site standards?
Just make it good enough that it meets site standards.
Would fanfiction be okay if it was based on like... A really old, historical fictional character? Like Morgan Le Fay or Carmilla?
Yeah I guess that's okay. The "No Fanfiction" thing is more of "I don't want to see weeb shit."
Obviously if you're picking Morgan Le Fay from the Arthurian Legends, you're picking something that at least celebrates proper white pagan heritage.
Hi I am a virgin but I would still like to participate. Wish me luck all fellow V-cardholders.
You have a good point. so, should non virgins censor their story some in that regard, or the virgins will be obvious in their writing?
I don't think I'll have the time to write one, but holy crap am I looking forward to reading them!!
Sir/Madam, known to the people of CYStia as "Camille622", I bring a message from Lady Mizal. It reads as so:
"wow, take a cold shower u whore"
Please pass along my thanks to Lady Mizal for her kind greeting, along with my solemn promise to keep my whoring to a minimum.
Don't listen to Mizal, she's trying to sabotage things. It's a Succubus Contest, go ahead and do all the whoring you want.
CYS member Insanebutvain isn't currently around right now, so it's an even playing field.
You're a visitor from Choice of Games, right? If you're thinking of sticking around for a while you should probably introduce yourself over on Newbie Cental. Either way, welcome to the site.
Given that Mizal/Chris already gave her a pretty standard CYStian greeting, posting in the noob section would be somewhat redudant at this point.
My apologies then. Sorry for cluttering up your thread.
This guy is an amazing narrator
Hi End. I have missed you and my tribe. how are you? I like this challenge. No weeb shit. I got it. Are you mad at me? If i am still here and I guess maybe not. I overstepped. My apologies. I have been crazy busy, with a job. yes yours truly is working. I knew you would be proud. I can't wait to catch up and see what other disturbing things you have going on. I do like the way yours and many of the minds work here. I intend to participate in this succubus challenge as an expert. self appointed expert that is. I will get it done somehow plus revisions to my first story. I want to make you proud End. I have sucked up thoroughly. However if am going to suck up, i prefer it be you.
Hi all! cant wait to see what everyone has been up to.
Glad to hear it, I’ll add you to the list of contestants.
I have HUGE daddy issues. HUGE! I did not know however that there was a better half to the End Master. I sucked up. I should have said brown nose.
The whole End Master thing with the dark cape serves only to fascinate the young minds and wonder about the man behind that darkness. I have discovered that he is as follows:
These things fascinate anyone. I would as much want to suck you off as him. I am an equal opportunity sucker. I hope that clarified it. Hi cricket. I hope your well? I bow to your command. Now cricket, that is an IQ that is astronomical. The intelligence in this individual is mind blowing. She misses nothing. Even the most suttle actions she is aware of. I have a great deal of admiration and respect. No, i am not sucking up at this moment. Everything I said is true.
Honestly it’s better you said sucked up.
Brown nose would have been even worse...
Yes I am very weird. They tell me all the time.
You would have to die. You might not make it back. That is where you get some from.
You forgot sadistic.
no? What kind of theme would you enjoy?
I saw it. I do think it is going to be intresting. I just don't know anything about the genre. I guess now is as good a time as any to learn.
Just going to say this contest is one of the best ideas I’ve had just by the posts in this thread alone.
Updating contestant list
Benholman44 - DONE
Chanbot (Ford) - DONE
Ficsean_Chief - BANNED
Fluxion - DONE
Jodithewitch - DONE
Liqquitty - SHAMED
Lopz66 - DONE
Lordkarstark - BANNED
Mizal - DONE
Ogre - DONE
Oraclemache - SHAMED
Pugpup1 - DONE
I’m branching a bit out of control. Hopefully I can wrangle it back or it’ll take until the end of the year. Sort of becoming the epic I’ve wanted to write for a while
Still trying to outline and figure out what is going to actually happen. Although I believe the amount of time I've spent planning so far was necessary, the deadline is closing in, so I am trying to wrap it up by this weekend.
I plan to. I am also heading up a campaign to identify and define issues in mental health care systems so that we can then take action and make change. I want the number of suicides to decrease not increase. I am seeing too many parents bury their kids as I have had to do. I have bit off more than I should have. However, the door opened and I walked through. So here we are. I will do every thing I can to meet the deadline.
Glad to hear you're going to suck it up like a trooper and try to swallow this task you've eagerly committed to working hard on.
I'm expecting you to submit a better quality story than most here seeing as you're an expert.
I'm still trying to plan out how things will go. I've got the plotline down, but I don't want the story to be like my last one, where you make a couple of choices followed by an adrupt ending. While the story might end up being shorter than I intended due to time constraints, I at least want there to be some actual meaningful story.
Honestly, I'm expecting most of you to fail horribly as usual at this simple contest. Hell, one of you fucktards is probably going to get yourselves banned for writing straight up porn believing you wrote some masterpiece. Oh how amusing it will be when the ban hammer slams down and you cry out "Why?" as you struggle to understand like a helpless kitten that Ryder just acquired.
However, I'm expecting Miztress, Oralsecks and JoditheVirgin to have the "best" stories given that they are non-penis havers and should have a better grasp on the evils of femininity.
(Okay Mizal might have difficulty with the feminine part, but she'll make up for it in the evil)
Wait, how do you know about that? I kept it as non-descript as possible!
If I was looking for sex, I'd just give your mom a call.
With your story, I was expecting your approach would be to just post a bunch of pictures of demon girls as the background and your writing would be an after thought.
Sure, just make sure their fun bits are strategically covered up. This is a family site after all.
Huh, I thought only a "central concept" of pornography was not allowed according to minimum site standards. So you're saying someone couldn't publish a story mostly about the lives of Llama Perry and Llama Julie if they had a single page of explicit llama sex?
I have no idea, though I know I've gone over this in the past and even wrote an article about it.
At this point people should be familiar enough with the site and the stories that are on here to know what's allowed and what isn't as far as the sex stuff is concerned.
I guess I'll play it safe and avoid being explicit in general. Not like I'm qualified to describe sex anyway...
The llamas were just an analogy for two humanoids. But if bestiality is below this site's moral standards, I guess I will also have to cut the admittedly quite random part with parent-child incest (Not described in detail obviously, but it happens.) Yeah, the story is probably better off without that anyway. Looks like I learned something today, thank you for that!
Actually netorare is just cucking. It doesn't have to be anime.
So what's going on then, the half breed son is fucking his succubus mom and cucking his human dad?
But wait, I've got brother-sister incest where the succubus murdered his sis then possessed her corpse to manipulate him in his grief. There's been stories written by EndMaster certain authors that have incest so long as it's not explicit. By the way, why ISN'T incest considered against site standards if it's considered a taboo?
Oh wait never mind saw the post explaining incest is OK.
I've got brother-sister incest where the succubus murdered his sis then possessed her corpse to manipulate him in his grief.
Great, you added necrophilia to the incest mix too, glad to see you've been paying attention and followed the path of our top progressive stories on the site.
What I miss?
Well you could always back read the thread. It shouldn't take that long to read before your next demon possession.
I did, but didn't comprehend it I suppose. My apologies.
I wasn't planning on even feauturing any of the MC's relatives in my story. I feel if I want to meet to meet site expectations, I have to add incest somewhere.
Keep in mind that this is a SUCCUBUS story contest, not an INCEST story contest. Focus on the main theme. So if you want to include incest, great, but it's not necessary.
This place isn't CoG where they only accept a story as long as you conform to their site's faggotry.
The sinister Breadcubus got you.
Well it's a little late, but Ogre has announced that he's entering the contest in the Discord. There is no other way to interpret his intentions.
Wondering what he'll ultimately come up with what with the progressive references to fat succubi as opposed to the usual type.
Believe it or not, I have a succubus-inspired story in the works as well. However, I'm not planning to join the contest because it's highly unlikely I'll have it done by Wednesday night ("Grass Planet" took longer to finish than expected, and I was on vacation for the last week). So rather than try and rush the story to completion, my plan is to publish it in August, well after the contest is over.
I'm looking forward to reading the other stories, and I'm kind of surprised none have been published yet...
I guess that makes me a non-traditionalist, haha. Who knows, maybe I'll have a productive weekend working in my notebook while sitting next to my campfire at a pond way back in the wilderness... where I'm just about to head off to. Or maybe the beer will taste too good and I won't feel like writing.
The bottom line is I will have a story to share in the near future. Just don't wait up for me if no one sees it on July 31st.
Oh, and caffeine-induced writing all-nighters, that's inevitable!
Stocking up on energy drinks right now, actually.
One day I will become a seasoned enough writer to present a Snickers-length story with "here you go"
When I end up finishing mine, I will leave it as a reply to this comment.
Anyways, I sadly announce that my final product will not be nearly as good as I hoped it would be; I have to cut a lot of corners if I want to make the deadline. Not to mention, tonight will no doubt have to be an all-nighter spent writing.
Wishing myself luck, I still feel confident that I'll win if I finish my story.
HERE IT IS
Currently unpublished so I can fix any bugs in the game.
Oh right, this contest ends tonight. Nearly forgot all about it.
Anyway, seems like most of you are predictably flailing about, either scrambling to finish at the last minute or giving up completely like the failures you are. Funny that Ogre managed to finish before everyone and he announced his intentions much later than everyone else.
At this point, I'm not even hoping to win, just planning to submit a story that keeps me out of the shame pit then improve on it later.
Your first post asked if this counted as a Get out of SHAME contest. There’s really no other way to interpret that sentence other than as your desire to enter the contest to take yourself out of the SHAME pit.
Anyway Mizal’s already given up, so throwing her in the SHAME pit means the contest has already been well worth it. Unless she decides to drag her ass across the finish line at the last minute which will be equally as amusing.
So aside from Ogre11, who's actually published their story?
Nobody. He's currently winning.
Done. So do I post it here, or just publish it?
Fuck, I can't publish it! Also, I couldn't finish my story in time, so I made a quiz with questions about succubus entities and lore. Since a quiz technically counts as a 'Everything Else' storygame, and you DID say you didn't care how we wrote it, I'm assuming it's a valid entry?
Why can’t you publish the other story?
And your pathetic quiz entry currently still is unpublished.
The quiz one is the one I can't publish, apparently you can't publish a story until 2 days after you started it.
As for the other story, it's a combination of procrastination, working at my job, and trying to get visitation for my kid because my baby's mom doesn't want to upset her beloved he/she by being around me too much.
So to keep my ass out of the fire, can I just put the link to the quiz thing up here and accept my loss?
Yeah pretty sure we allowed it before with some other fucktard. It’s just an auto loss, though given you made a fucking quiz you were going to lose anyway.
Given your girlfriend ran off with a tranny, I’m not sure if heaping anymore SHAME on you would make any difference anyway.
Here’s my entry: http://chooseyourstory.com/story/a-fiery-winter
Hah, I knew you wouldn't be able to let yourself get SHAMED like a common peon.
Good thing too, I was planning on throwing you in the gen pop pit, as apposed to the nice isolated cell.
Thank you for your very kind words, Mizal. As of last night I read and reviewed everyone's, including the unpublished quiz (I didn't realize it was unpublished). There are some really good ones in there, and nearly all of them felt like they could become great stories with just a bit more time. I was impressed with nearly all of them, especially seeing as how all of you were under time constraints.
Still waiting for Oralsecks' story.
I mean partially the whole point of this contest was for Oralsecks.
And with 40 minutes to go, too. http://chooseyourstory.com/story/the-daemonologists
Pretty sure I fucked something up. I needed one more day. Oh well. Anyway, items are used, but mostly they are there to mark inventory, so don't go trying to use them unless there are no links.
I'll add to the ending and final act when this contest is over, and I'll probably adjust the item and combat system, but this one is more complete than my last publication, which got a pretty high rating before I unpublished (By the Light of Day). Just wish I had a few more hours.
Thanks. Just wish I could have added everything I wanted to.
*le sigh* I was in the process of creating an extensive item use mechanic and bestiary. Had to remove them because they were incomplete and malfunctioning (they'll return when this contest is over, naturally, and be in my next Witch Hunter story). You'll have the items, but mostly they are inventory markers. I also wanted to increase the ending length, but alas... I was distracted by a succubus for most of the month. Oh well, I'll update it after I finish Mizal's story.
Looks like we all have a lot of reading to do...
Maybe you lot do, I intend to just skim and click through everything as usual and just randomly pick a winner.
Ah, so it looks like mizal's strategy of turning in a half-finished story at the last minute might pay off. Good to know.
Not a hundred percent sure that this actually works, but at least I made it I guess....
Oh, thank you.
AND THE REST OF YOU ARE SHAMED!
(And banned in some cases)
Pretty good turn out. Only 4 out of the 12 who entered failed to submit something. And two of them I got to ban, so even that made it worthwhile.
Actually, that begs the question: why were they banned? Also, since me and oracle were the "succubus experts" on the other thread and he got shamed, does that mean I'm the only succubus expert now?
They already had TWICE SHAMED on their permanent record meaning they joined two other contests and failed to turn something in. You do that a third time and you get banned.
No time for serial fuck ups since CYS contests are SERIOUS BUSINESS.
As for succubi experts, nobody is a succubi expert, but I guess since Oralsecks flaked out due to splittin the kitten too much to finish her own story, you can get an achievement.
Cool! Also, in the future, I think I'll actually write the story BEFORE I join the contest.
So far, I've had a chance to read 4 of the 7 stories that were published (not counting the ones that were submitted, but not published).
So far, I think "Hank's Journey" is the best, with "A Fiery Winter" and "The Succubi War" interesting runner-ups.
I am looking forward to reading the remaining three in the near future. "The Daemonologists" and "Witch Hunter" look especially intriguing.
Okay, going to start actually randomly clicking reading through these things.
I'll announce a winner when I'm done. (Whenever that is)
Okay, going to really start on these stories now.
Okay so I finally read all this stuff from Ford starting off with various bodily fluids dinner, Jodi’s ending of sex without genitals, Mizal writing lesbian mom sex, Fluxion including semen an inventory item and child rape, lopz having a dickgirl succubus, and Ogre’s fat girl fucking along with explosive STD meltdowns, I was glad to see you all delving into your inner twisted fantasies for this one.
Also most of you included some form of incest on some level so points for that as well.
However, there can only be one as everyone knows.
It was sort of close between him and lopz. Both of them had a lot of branching and various endings.
Ogre got a bit more of the edge due to the extra work involved, plus he managed to gross himself out writing it as well as be a late entry and STILL submit before everyone else, meaning he went more out of his way for this contest.
He said he’s not proud of even writing the story, which makes him winning this contest more amusing since its probably his best story to date.
Lopz did pretty good for his first time submitting something considering he probably would have won had Ogre not suddenly showed up.
Which bring me to Pug’s story since I know everyone thought it was going to be between his and Ogre’s. The BIG problem with Pug’s was the lack of choices. He’d have like 10 pages with a single link. That’s way too many. The main story was still cool overall, and he’ll probably still replace Fairview in the school category when the story gets enough ratings.
Fluxion’s was okay. I figured it would have pics and inventory, though it was another one that felt a bit linear.
Mizal’s probably would have scored higher, but it was obvious that it was cut short in several places.
Jodi’s wasn’t terrible, just didn’t grab me though.
Ford and Ben, you’re just lucky you didn’t get SHAMED. (Or Banned)
Anyway that’s it. Guess I’ll be handing out some pointless points and featuring some stories in the near future. Not sure if Mayana’s handing out her Steam card or whatever it was as a prize.
If she doesn’t, well that’s what you get for trusting sightless monsters. (And their faceless fathers)
Now I'm going to do the honorable thing and finish my story. I'll republish in about two days, this time with fixed ending and inventory mechanic.
A big congrats to Ogre and everyone else who entered the contest. Ogre had amazing descriptions and made images pop in my head that I can still picture days after reading it. A very well deserved win for him.
Not terrible!! That's pretty reassuring.
At first I misread that Fluxion included child rape as an inventory item and I thought that was pretty funny. (no not child rape, the thought that someone could make it into a portable object)
Congratulations Ogre, even though apparently he wasn't proud of his story (???)