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pls help me ill add you as a co arthour if you want i need help with items and grammar

Here you go. This tells you easily how to use items. ^_^

https://chooseyourstory.com/help/articles/article.aspx?ArticleId=2

ESL?

um what

Is English your second language? 

I think it stands for "English Second Language?"

What Thara said.

So as it turns out the story isn't even written past the creation of the first page. It will require a lot more help than just grammatical and item coding assistance.

go work on your book there more importiant but i know

You should probably delete all the other people you added as co-authors too. I remember a few years back, everyone and their mothers were adding EndMaster as a co-author on their games to try and boost their ratings... I don't think he appreciated it. >.<

well now i feel bad for him sorry endmaster dident know

What I say is that the school system has seemingly failed here. Scorched earth over here.

oh well i agree i like old days the old school but i never seen them

Nowhere near enough caning nowadays.

Indeed there isn't. How do they keep anyone in line anymore?

ESL: Enough said, lol

But joke aside, read this thread for advice and if you don't heed the warnings, you may find yourself needing to visit this thread instead.

If you add me as a co-author again, you're banned.

sorry ok now pls dont ban me

you do also know im new and im twelve

This grants you a lot less protection than you think.

Oh no. It's one thing if English is your second language, but if your excuse for not writing cohesive sentences is age, then you will find no mercy here. 

I joined when I was eleven and I managed to do fine. Also, if you want to stay alive any longer, you should stay off the forums and don't publish your storygame unless you learn how grammar and spelling work. People here tend not to be very friendly to little kids who can't even write a sentence without messing up the grammar or spelling, so maybe lay low for a bit.

Read, rate, maybe even comment on storygames for a while. Work on your own game quietly in the background. Read articles on items and look up basic grammar rules. You can ask for spelling and grammar help on your story after you have written a decent amount, and don't just add people to your storygame without asking.

If you don't think you can do some of these things, then maybe this isn't the site for you. There are only about 4ish kids who have actually succeed in not being banned from the site, so maybe it's best if you just try and find a different place to write. Good luck. You'll need it. 

Edit: Well, this was wasted. Guess I should know better by now. 

Okay, since the school system has clearly failed, let's see what a writing site can do!

Smoothtalker, when you start a sentence next, would you mind putting a capital letter at the beginning? ^_^

I actually feel like I'm having a stroke reading this. Is it actually comprehensible to others? Because English ain't my first language either.

Also not the first 12 year old to get banned, and definitely not the last.

i dont care anymore the admin can ban me if he wants ill keep this forum open if its that bad then he should quit if he doesent who cares i dont

So he gets banned for being dumb and saying he doesn't care if he gets banned, then he immediately makes another account with a 20 at the end and asks for his account to get unbanned? Some 12 year olds just don't make any sense.

We've had plenty of 12 year olds and even younger on this site. (See stargirl above.)

The problem here is that you're simply retarded. And not even the well meaning or funny kind that in our mercy we can sometimes find a place for.

It would seem "smoothtalker" isn't very smooth.  I would expect someone with a username like that to have a much better grasp of language in general.

it started becuse i was playing fallout 4 and made a character with high carisma

I must be bored because I am finding it slightly amusing to watch the mods play "whack-a-mole" with the alts.

You would think that after so many attempts he would realize his mistake and stop posting. He keeps revealing who he is.

Well, yeah, I agree.  You would think something would click one of these times.

But it's still funny to laugh at stupid people. (or to translate for the next stupid alt "funneee to laff at stooopid peple")

lol

In a PM response I offered to read through the first page in a PM, but that I didn't want my name on it because there's just no way I can commit to helping long term. But right after I sent that PM, it occurred to me that lots of people get feedback on the forums.

So, why not create a thread about your story in the Writing Workshop sub-forum and ask for some help there? I think that's probably the best way to learn and improve your writing, as well as get more exposure for ideas.

Oh, they're banned already. And since they wanted to be an alt spamming chromosome defect, they'll likely stay banned for a bit.

The OP of the thread was also sent verbatim to many people, including End.

Okay that's an extraordinary amount of effort for someone who apparently doesn't want to put much effort in his story. I smell scam. Or perhaps, "another fucktard."

Damn, we were going for a record in how long the forum could go with no one posting in it and you ruined it.