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I'm Raven47 and i'm a new member on this community. I love gunfight and zombie types storygame. Walking Dead is probably my favorite TV series. I love pop, pop rock, EDM, and R&B. My favorite singer changes from time to time but mostly,, it's Taylor Swift. I'm currently making my first storygame, Alice Walter: Outbreak Survival Part I

There are 4 weapons: Custom M1911A1, HK416 CQB, M1014, and Metal Baseball Bat.

Not many storygames have customized firearms or firearms such as HK416, MK14 EBR, SCAR, M4/M16, AA-12 or guns like that. 2 of the weapons are modified/custom in the story. The 416 and M1911A1.

You get the 416 from a dead (and then infected) DEVGRU (Seal Team 6) operator. Its modified with EOTech Holographic sight, vertical grip, Surefire Flashlight, and AN/PEQ-15 Target Marker. It also comes with tactical stock and the DEVGRU guy have SI EMP magazines instead of the HK High Reliability magazines. Still, it's pretty cool

The M1911A1 is Alice's father trusty pistol. He used it since he was still in the Delta Force. Modified with different slide, ring hammer, tactical grip, rail receiver, etc.

Not many storygames have more advanced weapons and weapon modifications. I'll make Part II after Part I is done. And yes, i use the advanced editor for item uses.

This is how I will forever envision you.

Holy fuck.

Just... Fuck.

What he said. Plus, welcome to the community.

Welcome to CYS!

Oh thanks.

This is my first storygame so there may be mistakes.

In the story, every weapon have it's usefulness and weaknesses 

Example: Baseball bat is a melee weapon, but it's silent and won't attract much attention. M1911A1 can be useful as a backup when you emptied your 416/ M1014 and don't have time to reload, you can always quickdraw it. 416 is good against zombies at longer range and fighting humans, the Target Pointer may be useless as the beams can only be seen with NVGs but can be useful for signaling  the military. You get the 416 from a dead DEVGRU operator and it's better than the M4A1. M1014 is a beast at close ranges (well, you already know that) plus it's semi-auto.

Next part, i'm gonna add more weapons with more modifications.

I was working on a zombie apocalypse story a while back. I could've used the help of someone like you.

Umm..... Yeah! You can PM me for advices

Eh, I'm not working on it anymore. I don't really have any active projects right now.

Sounds like quite a project, I look forward to reading/playing it.  Just don't make the mistake that a lot of new members have by publishing too early.  Get proofreaders and beta testers (for use as scapegoats, if nothing else).

Holy fuck, man, are you writing a story game or trying to sell your personal arsenal? I didn't even know half the shit you just mentioned even existed.

^What he said, minus the cussing, and add in a welcoming statement.

Oh, yeah, @Raven47, welcome to CYS. If you need any help, feel free to PM me.

I'm gonna need some advices though. Any advice to make a good storygame?

Make sure it has good spelling, grammar, plot, characterization, originality, and details (even if they seem unimportant). 

Yeah, that's why i need somebody to test it. The storygame is not done yet. You will be playing as an 18 years old girl, Alice Walter. I do make an introduction to the character you will be playing as.

Interesting. I'd be willing to test play it for you. 

Thanks, i'll PM you if i need someone to test it

Don't rush. Prior to publishing, have someone proofread your work. You may even have people periodically read your story while you're writing it, to offer you feedback on the actual story and possible ideas for expanding on what you already have.

I'll just show the weapons, introduction, and a little part of the story. I won't show the rest.

@jamescoker1226

The cool toys i wrote actually exist in real life. It's not fictional and it's real. Not many peoples know about it though.

I wasn't doubting that they were. I actually played this one FPS with a bunch of cool, lesser known, and certainly unconventional weapons. The only one I remember is the Pancor Jackhammer, though.

Welcome and good luck.

You won't see me again for a while.

But...wow, a gun nut after how many medieval nuts came by this place?  Enjoy your stay.

Aw, well....

Welcome to the site, enjoy your stay!

Welcome. Good luck with your game.

Welcome! Close the door behind you, we don't want any unwanted guests(WC).

If you like weapons, be sure to visit our weapon room, we got all sorts of weapons, don't touch the incendiary grenades, they belong to james. If you don't want weapons, be sure to go to our Fun-Room or the Party-Room.

Ahem, I hope you do have fun here!

Another gun nerd? FUCK YEAH!

Anyways, welcome to our strange little community! 

ACR FTW!!!

Welcome to the site. Are you sure you don't want to write some WC stuff? That seems to be quite the favorite around here... ;)

I'd like to see a cat with a Pancor Jackhammer.

Give meh a link, m8. I wanna see what you have so far.

You want a link?

Still, there are many things need to be done and fixed. I can't work with the game much due to school stuffs. And yes, i think i'm gonna add the Remington ACR in the next part, with red dot scope and supressor. It also use 6.8mm instead of 5.56mm. With the power of AK47 and accuracy of M16, the ACR is a kick ass gun

Btw, what is WC?

Personally, I prefer an Advanced Combat Optic Gunsight (ACOG) scope alongside an ACR, as well as the 5.56mm barrel, but that's just personal preference. Also, an SBR 5.56 would make a unique weapon to add, no? Well, it's not exactly popular, but the design is damn SEXY (doesn't beat an ACR or XM8 doe). Also, I don't believe you mentioned any sniper rifles in your post (and no, the MK-14 isn't a sniper - it's a DMR), so, erm, if I were to make a request, it'd be that you add a high-powered rifle. Nothing says "zombie killing" more than some good ol' fashioned sniping/dismemberment.

As for the WC... It's best if you don't know. We won't let them taint you!

Yeah, MK14 is a DMR/Battle Rifle type. Maybe I'll add the M24 with supressor

Delta, do you mean the MK12 Special Purpose Rifle?

Welcome! You seem awesome already. I love my fair share of guns, violence and Taylor Swift so... Yay! I'd be willing to test play your story if you need a few people to do that. Also, I am bad at naming and telling which guns are which but those guns sound awesome so I am definitely excited to see your story! Just remember not to rush. Nice to meet you!

Thanks!

But i don't think be able to continue the work for 3-5 days. Too busy with school.

Fuck, i hate school

Haha, same, I've had so much trouble continuing my book. But I hope you do finish it! It sounds good. You could even make an apocalypse forum game if you wanted. There have been forum games like that before, but a new one could still be awesome.

If you need help in making a game, i might be able to help you

Aw, thanks! I might not end up making games, due to low self esteem issues and a previous account I owned with some pretty weird games, but I do write forum games, and I would definitely love to write something like that with you! Although, it would be nice to write a storygame again... We'll see.

There will be Navy SEALs operator in the game series. Most of them are dead. They carry unconventional cool toys: SCAR Assault Rifles, ACR, HK416, HK417, M1014, AA-12, MK12 SPR, MK14 EBR, MP7, USP.45, and many more guns you would fall in love to. It is unknown why there are Navy SEALs there. You will find out the mystery about the special forces presence later as the story continues.

Ooh, sounds exciting. Can't to read it! It definitely sounds like it would be a good storygame.

Thanks, Angel!

I predicted that it will get 5/8 rating or 4/8 rating.

If i get even a higher rating than i've been predicted maybe it's because of the cool weapons, modifications, and other cool special forces things. And probably, a girl character insted of boy

Yeah, that should definitely raise the ratings! 

You already know that the character you will be playing as is a girl, right? It's good for female players. The title shows the name of her. Her dad is a former Delta Force operator so he trained the girl.

Navy SEALs do make mysterious presence in the game. You will get cool things from them. Lot of us do like Call of Duty, Battlefield, and other shooter games and would like to see guns from the FPS games or real-life advanced weaponry and more weapon modifications. I also make this game so i can show peoples some unconventional and more advanced weaponry that have been used by Special Forces, mostly the US SOF such as SEALs, Rangers, MARSOC, Force Recon, Delta Force, etc.

Who was your other account?

You do not want to know.

I don't think i could play/ host a forum game. But maybe i have time for that. If i will, then i'm gonna ask for agreements about some rules on it. I also would like to know if players agree with the rules. Such as starting weapons (start with an M4A1/AK47 or just a pistol?), backgrounds (military, supermodel, engineer, etc), places, etc