Player Comments on The Object > ChooseYourStory.com

Had some fun with this.

— Fabrikant on 10/14/2024 1:44:29 PM with a score of 25

My brain hurts, but that was very engaging. I can only imagine how confusing it was to make. AMAZING THOUGH. Well worth the play!

— Dragoness on 5/6/2024 10:30:30 PM with a score of 25

W game my friend

— John Cena on 9/20/2022 1:41:27 PM with a score of 20

very confused what this teachers

— Noah on 9/20/2022 1:40:52 PM with a score of 20

ok lol

— ur mom on 9/20/2022 1:18:37 PM with a score of 25

I don't really know what happened but it was very well-written and interesting, whatever it was. Definitely worth checking out.

— Seeker on 6/10/2022 11:36:07 PM with a score of 25

An entertaining snack-sized storygame. Nuff said.

— GigglyCactus on 4/29/2022 5:01:20 PM with a score of 25

It feels loose and unfinished. Is there supposed to be some kind of continuation somewhere or what?

— Kuro on 3/31/2019 1:01:39 PM with a score of 25

WOW. This is amazing!! I LOVE it!

— PgCoding on 1/30/2019 5:09:46 PM with a score of 25

Interesting!

I'm trying to avoid spoilers, so here goes...

I really like the looping effect! Having - or should I say "getting" - to figure out each place before moving on is satisfying. I also like how the places are connected: it increases the mysterious atmosphere. And having memories and objects transfer from place to place is another touch of intrigue.

The ending I got was perfect. I haven't played through to any other endings yet, but your story's style lends itself to several equally satisfying conclusions, instead of being locked into only one "winning" ending among several "loss" or "failure" outcomes.

Given that this is your first publication on CYS, I'm impressed! (Honestly, I'm impressed regardless.) I look forward to reading more of your stuff!

— WordSmith37 on 12/7/2018 3:25:12 PM with a score of 25

Very interesting game, and it has the potential to repeat itself, so that ought to deserve an 8. Any how, hope there will be a sequel that live up to this one. The object could be a material that could be used as a time machine once fully charged and obviously it floats around in time once fully charged. ;)

— TestingJest on 2/2/2018 1:25:58 AM with a score of 25

Interesting...

— JohnX on 11/28/2017 12:35:30 PM with a score of 25

pretty good

— MZG on 9/10/2017 2:51:10 AM with a score of 25

Weird, but fun

— ENDhakS on 4/20/2017 8:55:40 PM with a score of 25

Love it

— Angela on 9/29/2016 2:05:55 PM with a score of 20

Well written but very linear. liked the mystery. But some answers would have been nice.

— BigRonn77 on 9/1/2016 10:51:25 AM with a score of 25

Too little choices. Way too often their were say 3 choices, and the 5 pages where there was only one choice. I died by the way, although I purposely was pretty stupid :D

— Battalion on 5/25/2016 1:48:36 PM with a score of 20

It's kind of like what would happen if you squished "Sphere" and "Groundhog Day" together, but even WEIRDER.
IT'S AWESOME!!! ??????

— Anon. on 4/6/2016 8:15:21 AM with a score of 25

Great story! I liked the time loops. Nice job for a first!!

— CurseOfTime on 2/25/2016 4:04:15 PM with a score of 25

I don't think the story should be interactive. Otherwise it was really cool.Just work on the ending, it was sorta disappointing.

— Fakename on 1/31/2016 9:41:16 PM with a score of 25

I enjoyed this one. I like the mysterious ending I got, even though a lot of things in the story are, well, mysterious! But I do have a theory....

— corgi213 on 8/22/2015 7:31:51 AM with a score of 25

That was good.

— Maxz92 on 5/28/2015 1:13:15 PM with a score of 25

Twist ending

— Monkeyman85 on 4/6/2015 6:20:05 PM with a score of 25

Really Twilight Zoney

— Dominator64z on 12/4/2014 8:20:09 AM with a score of 25

It was okay....

— Silverflame on 10/18/2014 7:07:38 PM with a score of 25

Interesting concept; most criticism -- basic, pretty linear -- copped to by the author. Interactive time loops are a nice idea. They do get a bit repetitive, however.

The vague ending did not bother me, but a second or third alternate ending besides dying in the desert based upon the hints previously shown -- perhaps revealing more of the nature of the object or confirming the brain tumor as alternate means of death -- would have heightened the replay value by making even fatal choices worth pursuing.

— _Sy_ on 9/19/2014 1:21:06 PM with a score of 25

i think I'm dizzy...

— msm on 9/8/2014 3:50:26 PM with a score of 25

Well-written, but was very linear and didn't leave the reader many options as it would just loop towards the 'correct' option. The ending seemed fairly-rushed and left me with too many answers that needed to be answered, rather than a satisfying sense of closure.

This story had much potential and was very well-written, but the constant looping in the story and the quick fix ending ultimately labelled this story as a waste of time for me.

— SkyTenshi on 8/26/2014 11:07:09 PM with a score of 25

Great story! Know, I don't know if I missed something, but the items seemed pretty useless in the story. Perhaps they could be used to unlocked parts in the story.
Of course, there is a chance I just missed it in

— karod1blockbreaker on 7/18/2014 8:15:39 AM with a score of 25

Love it. I love paradoxes. This is awesome. 8/8

— PortalSpartan on 6/5/2014 3:26:06 AM with a score of 25

Wow

— fariz on 2/22/2014 5:54:36 AM with a score of 25

So mystery. much wow..

— PsychoPotato on 2/12/2014 5:32:12 PM with a score of 25

My first comment,That Game was Amazing

— Netgamer on 2/3/2014 4:28:03 AM with a score of 25

Very confusing....but I liked it!

— EndoftheNight on 9/8/2013 3:38:34 AM with a score of 25

OMG that was so awesome! I didn't really understand; but I love this whole kind of paradox thing.

— iamayeti on 8/11/2013 4:17:14 PM with a score of 25

Pretty good story, a bit linear as it said in the description but still pretty good.

— jack10345 on 7/27/2013 4:27:42 PM with a score of 25

That was epic! I didn't die at all though, but I really loved the story and the characters! That object raises a lot of questions, though...

— jamkitty on 7/18/2013 7:47:05 AM with a score of 25

7/8. Would've given you 8/8 if you explained the Object's powers.

— ArrowzworrA on 7/11/2013 5:16:48 PM with a score of 25

Well, I'd say it's okay

— HaruhiSuzumiya on 6/16/2013 6:15:40 AM with a score of 25

I don't know what happened but certainly your story interest me, especially about the last part when Jones shut off all the equipments and he fall unconscious. I have a feeling that this is all just dreams but I don't know. If someone, can kindly enough enlightened me, it would be very appreciated. Thank you very much

— Mike on 6/1/2013 1:35:17 PM with a score of 25

Reading this story I realize it doesn't give you as bad a headache when you ARE the person going through something like this, still it hurt my tiny brain.

— ISentinelPenguinI on 4/20/2013 3:32:02 PM with a score of 25

Great story. I love the flashes of "reality" in between the dream. Will he ever truly wake up?

— Rialla514 on 3/24/2013 11:43:28 AM with a score of 25

The ending is unsatisfying, other than that, great.

— Clarinet on 3/17/2013 10:50:49 PM with a score of 25

Extremely repetitive. Loved the inventory; the storyline was way too repetitive at times. Sheer stubbornness kept me at it! :)

— Me on 3/17/2013 3:46:29 PM with a score of 25

cleverly written and creatively done; I really enjoyed playing this game.

— MagmaArmor0 on 3/10/2013 3:03:05 AM with a score of 25

Very interesting premise, though I have mixed feelings about the lack of any resolution/explanation.

— Mynoris on 2/24/2013 2:34:51 PM with a score of 25

Really nice writing and gameplay. Loved the parts where I try to figure out what happened.

— Xt1000305 on 1/28/2013 6:15:38 AM with a score of 25

whoa..what! AWESOME! :D

— MannequinLandx on 1/27/2013 1:09:47 PM with a score of 25

Really well written! It felt a bit like Groundhog day how you had to keep going back and doing the same day again, which was cool ^_^

— Briar_Rose on 11/2/2012 7:58:34 AM with a score of 25

Interesting piece of work. Pretty strange. Liked it, though.

— Kiel_Farren on 9/6/2012 2:53:12 PM with a score of 25

I LOVEDDD this.^_^ The mystery, the intrigue, so amazing! This is genius, a real work of art!There was little character development, but it didn't matter, the mood in this, the amnesia, the repetition, the ever so slight changes make this story a masterpiece. What is the object? Why have I seen this all before? What is happening to me? Amazing. Sheer brilliance!

— ChaiHai on 8/18/2012 6:08:30 AM with a score of 25

I don't really get it, but it was certainly interesting.

— VampireGirl2148 on 7/9/2012 8:56:28 PM with a score of 25

i really like this... i think? have i typed this before.. i think i have...

— kidre3 on 7/7/2012 12:55:51 AM with a score of 25

Um... I have absolutely no comment that would fit this game. I mean that in a good way; after all, who doesn't love having their minds twisted and warped trying to figure out what in the world is going on and failing miserably to find out what happened. I sure like it! 6/8

— Mithex on 5/19/2012 6:34:49 PM with a score of 25

This is confusing. I am the new mascot.

— cysid2 on 4/17/2012 10:55:49 PM with a score of 25

i don't know if there is more than one ending, is there?

— FlapFlap on 4/4/2012 6:58:40 PM with a score of 25

Nice story, had me entertained, correct grammar, and on top of that, DEJA VU!

— Swiftstryker on 3/28/2012 8:37:07 PM with a score of 25

Really enjoyed the story. Great language and grammar. Vivid dream like descriptions. I'm still wondering about the ending... I think I know what was really happening. Well done!

— greevesi on 3/4/2012 10:24:44 AM with a score of 25

weird ending

— bud3r64 on 2/18/2012 5:49:42 PM with a score of 25

Nifty :)

— BerkaZerka on 2/2/2012 1:27:57 PM with a score of 25

I wasn't sure if I made the big ending or if I fell short. I liked the mystery and how you can figure how to advance the story. I liked how there were several decisions and objects to use. If you make another story I will giveit a try.

— wildape on 1/15/2012 9:04:18 PM with a score of 25

did not advance well

— DarkentityOni on 1/3/2012 8:59:17 PM with a score of 25

wish the ending explained more...

— DQEight on 9/13/2011 9:02:58 PM with a score of 25

I thought this was a very interesting game. You used a very good job of loops to narrate the story line. The ending was pretty weird, but overall good story.

— Firefly on 9/13/2011 4:23:46 PM with a score of 25

Although I found it exciting at parts, the ending I received was a bit boring and doesnt describe the object or the dream sequences, which was a big let down after all the hype and build up. Also not many choices or many different stories can be encountered in this story. It had a lot of potential but ultimately a waste of time.

— SA3Tony on 9/7/2011 9:20:20 PM with a score of 25

What just happened?

— Augusta4 on 8/4/2011 2:48:48 AM with a score of 25

that was crazy awsome!!!! I have no clue what just happened!!!!!!

— jjq33 on 7/26/2011 9:55:08 PM with a score of 25

great game. really fun and easy to navigate. a few minor glitches . . . or is it just deja vu? haha. thanks i really liked it

— thebookthief on 6/16/2011 12:21:00 AM with a score of 25

Great job!

— Killer999 on 6/3/2011 10:58:52 AM with a score of 25

Bo approves

— ThisisBo on 5/16/2011 8:14:49 PM with a score of 25

nice

— tgsunrise on 5/7/2011 6:07:51 PM with a score of 20

Interesting. Leaves it off at a bit of a mystery. Makes me wonder if there was a way to get an explanation if you play it differently, but as far as I can tell you can't. The only ending is the 'mysterious' ending.

I must say, it left me a little unsatisfied, but didn't leave me desiring a sequal, but an explanation.

— Forge on 5/1/2011 4:22:55 PM with a score of 25

Interesting ending...

— Jon on 3/19/2011 11:30:13 PM with a score of 25

Whew... after a while I was just clicking random things. But it was interesting and pretty well-written too. ...Whew. I'm exhausted.

— Patricia on 1/23/2011 3:25:11 PM with a score of 25

I've now read all your story's and you are an amazing author! You could eventual become rich and famous!

— doodoodude on 9/21/2010 6:49:13 PM with a score of 25

A fun snack-sized story. Would like to see it fleshed out, but it still accomplishes its goal this way.

— HoraceTorys on 3/2/2010 11:10:33 PM with a score of 25

Great game, love the mystery and the atmosphere. This game is begging for a sequel!

— iprototype on 2/22/2010 8:33:39 PM with a score of 25

hm, trippy

— crition on 10/29/2009 9:29:08 PM with a score of 25

Pretty good...only got to 25 points, though. How on earth do you get more than that?

— Bushy on 8/26/2009 11:22:35 AM with a score of 25

THIS GAME IS NOT FEATURED?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?

— checker444 on 4/9/2009 4:43:21 PM with a score of 25

Happy ending,Aw

— Fniff on 3/27/2009 3:42:52 PM with a score of 25

Strange...I like it.

— koolgai on 11/10/2008 11:45:14 AM with a score of 25

I loved it! One problem, I want to know if he had a tumor or what happened!!111///1/1//1!! PLZ HAVES A SEQUALZZZ!!/1//1//1/1!!!/1/1/!1/11/1 sorry had to let that out...

— realprety on 9/5/2008 7:36:55 PM with a score of 25

Awesome! I really enjoy stories like this where strange things happen and you have to figure out what's really going on. I recommend you try an interactive fiction game by the name of dillusions it has a similar theme but a lot more difficult.

— doseki on 12/23/2007 1:31:23 AM with a score of 25

the story was wonderful

— Sabrina Mari Fagerheim on 10/24/2007 1:37:50 PM with a score of 25

Sweet, great job.
pages a bit long though

— th*mage*of*kings on 7/10/2007 12:58:00 PM with a score of 20

It is a really great game. You have good writing skills, and this game is very fun. If you do anything, do this: MAKE MORE GAMES! :)

— nierguy on 7/7/2007 11:08:45 PM with a score of 25

OMG... That was awesome... I wonder what happens next though... sequel!

— SilverMan on 6/22/2007 2:34:46 PM with a score of 25

This game was good. no wonder it got featured!

— deadly_sinner66 on 6/21/2007 4:06:16 PM with a score of 25

This was a really great game.

— KittenBlue on 4/25/2007 4:29:42 PM with a score of 20

Good first game! it was a creepy ending

— doraiscrap777 on 4/6/2007 10:23:11 AM with a score of 25

Wow!! Excellent work here. Very entertaining and well written. Keep up the good work. I'm still spinning <g>.

— ktankerous on 3/22/2007 3:52:25 PM with a score of 25

HOW CAN THIS GAME NOT BE FEATURED!? THIS IS A MASTERPIECE!

— Rommel on 3/18/2007 1:23:44 AM with a score of 25

Great Game - nearly featurable. I wish it had some pictures, and that the ending brought me a little more closure but HEY! Still awesome. I'm awarding you 50 bonus points!

— march5th00 on 2/10/2007 12:35:06 AM with a score of 25

Amazing storytelling. I felt as if I was reading a book from a famous author.

— Cake on 1/10/2007 6:31:19 PM with a score of 25

PHENOMENAL!

— Sir_Lancegalawain on 12/31/2006 5:32:35 PM with a score of 25

That was one weird and at times scary game. The whole loop and the voices, like all of a sudden one of the voices just say's ,"Scapel". Yeesh, that was weird and a talk of a tumor and the ending had me confused beyond belief...in a good way though. I like the story and especially the ending for it's happy yet, weird ending that just brings up a lot of questions. I'm expecting more stories from you soon.

— Leon101 on 11/21/2006 4:24:48 PM with a score of 25

Great story, tsmpaul. Extremely creative and clever in the way it reads through. The small amount of choices didn't really matter as the story was so good, and the limited choices actually made perfect sense in the confines of this particular story. Excellent job! This is one of my favorites.

— madglee on 10/31/2006 1:29:10 PM with a score of 25

It was a decent game. Some good writing, reminded me of Dan Brown's books, but a bit too repeditive. Nicely done.

— October on 10/26/2006 4:36:12 AM with a score of 25

That game was great! I loved it! There was ONE mistake in it, I'll PM you, but with big effort games like this there are always mistakes, and you only had one. This game was AWESOME! Keep up the good work.

— Miccy2000 on 10/25/2006 6:01:31 AM with a score of 25

three letters:

WOW!

— Rodney on 10/23/2006 7:24:48 PM with a score of 25

You're quite the writer! Though I had to repeat some pages, I still manage to get an ending!

You know, this is an AWESOME GAME! IT IS DEFINITELY ON MY LIST OF FAVORITE GAMES!!!

— GodsSlayer on 10/23/2006 6:32:58 PM with a score of 25

Woah. You are quite the story teller. That was possibly the best game I have played on this site. Give yourself a pat on the back.

— SuperHappySmileyFace on 10/23/2006 5:59:41 PM with a score of 25

I liked it a lot! Yes, it was linear, but I felt like the story was very well written-- it was more like reading a mystery than playing a game.

— Sethaniel on 10/23/2006 4:08:39 PM with a score of 25