Player Comments on Captured!

Whoa!

a neat short adventure story.

Took a couple tries but finally made it through.

it ok

yes

Oh my gosh that was AWESOME even though I failed after smashing my friend in the head with a stun baton. Make more in this series plz.

Great story, I ended up sort-of winning (but I had to stay in a cell). I would recommend it.

7/8

It was a thoughtful game that managed to tell a story in few words. I had a great time realizing the twist at the end.

Nice experience. Could use more suspense.

I really enjoyed it. Very detailed and well written. Wish I could create my own just like this one. The story is engaging and you feel like your in every scene going through the struggle.

there is more?

Noice

Nice style of writing. Kinda linear and the choices didn't have a logic row but it was not much of a big deal at the reader. Why didn't you explain it properly at the description anyway? It was vey good as it it was.

I didn't like the choice I had to make to survive, but I like the writing style

one of those rare games that strikes a balance between fun and short.

cool

This was amazing!

Could've been better,longer and more complex!

This was a pretty good story overall but a little short

I like the game but it seems to be a little vague on the looks. I think it was a little bit too short as well considering that it took me two minutes to die...

Pretty easy to tell which button to press, but a good short story

Interesting and well-written, but a little repetitive and a storyline that doesn't linger with you.

Enjoyable, short but the Author mentioned that. I liked it 6/8

Gaddammit, I messed up and got stun batoned.

I really enjoyed it. It had a real Orwellian Feel, good writing and wasn't too short. Great work.

Pretty good story! I had a feeling it was all just an illusion so I ended up killing my character off to withhold the information from the interrogators

Quick & fun to retry for every choice. Nice little scenario story!

This was an interesting story, but I wish the backstory was explained better. I was confused as to why there was a war and what the "Cells" were and why nobody had a name. Maybe if there was more character development and backstory I'd rate it higher. 5/8.

That was really, really good. Keep going like that, and you'll have some great stories.

Honestly, I could have done with a little more backstory. I was so confused the entire time. Other than that, it was an interesting idea.

A well written short-story-game but possibly could have been developed into a longer story. Very enjoyable.

Great concept and story! I liked it.

Kinda divergent like

Call me paranoid but I had a sinking feeling the whole time it was the drugs that were causing me to go to the illusion prison

Not bad.

Very good. I liked the ending, it had me guessing throughout the whole game. The first hint to the ending was in the cell with the girl, when you see twhat the door is on the other side of the cell from when you first woke. 7/8

The grammar is ok. The plot of the story is interesting but the choices were weak and everything was rather obvious.

Great story! I wasn't expecting the twist at the end. Is there a sequel in the works?

"This is amazing! I totally fell for it.

It was a really nice story, and I loved it. It is now one of my favorite games on this website, and I do recommend people to play this one if they haven't already. I liked the storyline, and the adventures that we go on. For some people, all of the illusions and suddenly waking up in the chair when you just were in another room, can get a little confusing. But the story has a good twist and was really enjoyable for me.

A little odd. As I was not expecting to start in an interrogation chair on the first page.

Not a bad game, just feels short.

This Game is Totally Twisted and gone Between Delusion And Reality, A Truly Interesting Game :D

too short and there are no choices

I like the idea that all of the "reality" actually just illusion. But I kind of hope that there's different ending. But I love the ending. Sad ending is rare.

Some good stuff going on here. I like how the antagonists were all identified by their voices. I didn't like how limited the choices really were. A secondary plot line would have made the game a little better.

man that was a great ending. it makes you really start to think toward the end.

The story was engaging. I just wish the story was longer and the end gave more of the conclusion than a interrogation drug induced hallucination.

What a twist! Sure as heck wasn't expecting that ending :D

smoke and mirrors. nice story here :)

Pretty good!^_^ Unique premise, could've been a bit longer, and a bit more history would've been nice, but all and all this rocked! Quite a twist, I loved the atmosphere.

Ahh, bad; nope its tremendous!

Wow, an illusion created by drugs

Although linear, the way that the plot is set up sustained my interest in this short, but entertaining game.

wish there was a point to this story.

The real endings are kinda iffy.

Pretty fun. The opposite of my game

WOW!!! That was sooo cool! Awesome ending.

He tricked me!

pretty good. had a well thought of ending. i liked this one

your good i really didnt see that end coming though!

This was short but very well done thank you for creating it :)

Success! I finally earned the good ending! I've played sooo many times; I thought there was no way to win! I love how you wrote it. It makes for a wonderfully entertaining read. Thumbs up. :D

Wow, it's a very well-written story! I love the suprise ending I earned :D

I really enjoyed reading this, but if I hadn't gotten the "you die" ending first, I wouldn't have known what to pick when I went back and got the best ending. I would have liked a bit more character development, but, overall, I did enjoy the storygame.

Twas brilliant. Is there a second one, like a sequel? 'Cause that'd be even better! :)

What a wonderful story.

Bo Approves

Ok...I liked your other story better but this one still has its moments. I don't particularly like the way it ended, it seems like there's not really a great way out of the scenario, but it was still interesting. You seem to have a talent for writing these kinds of stories. Keep up the good work!

great game

i didn't relize how linear this story was, still pretty good though.

I must say, i rather like it. most of the good stories are very long, but this one is a good length. its a releif from what i have seen all to often, to much story, not nearly enough game. It's definitly worth another run through.

Its ok but could have been longer . Theirs also to many choices which lead to the same outcome , which is rather misleading . I also didn't think you gave the user enough information to make the choice, and so was more like guess work

This was a really great game, and I liked it. Good job :)

cool and fun

This gae is really good! However it's very hard for you to die or fail in this game. However it has more than one ending. It's really good and I recommend giving it a try!

good... really good (ok)

Very cool. A little linear in parts but nice story. I wish I wouldn't have read the comments before playing because it sort-of killed the surprise.

I liked it. Simple and fun.

Very good story, realy enjoyed it! :)

it was cool. i like the illusion twist. the last part just didn't sound right, but i unfortunetely trusted the girl. oh well

its ok

Man... the hillucinations are very tricky...

I won first try.

Cool game.

sweet!!! i won!

Paul, you've done it again. Amazing story.

That was a great story. I actually liked how you didn't give a lot of background information- it made it even more mysterious.

nice.

Cool story! Great job, keep it up;-}

awesome game :D

Very interesting, highly enjoyable game. More background would be good, but for what it is, it's excellent. Short enough for its limited plot to remain interesting. Nice!

It was ok...

It was good! I definitely want to play it again. :)

It is so good I actually read it a second time

This game was AWESOME!!!!!!

it was good!! One of my favorites.

very good make a sequal

Ha! I won that time! ^____^ Yep, definately a fun story. Nice job!

Well, I lost. XD
But I liked it alot! Not too much text and plenty of excitement. I think I'll go play again.

"A short story to grant a few minutes diversion"... this game delivers that and much more! This game was written simply and well, just the thing for a busy weeknight.

great story, pure joy.

great story but reminds me to much of world war I and world war II other wise terrific

I love how well written it is, but suggesting that the woman is a government spy takes the challenge out.

its fun but you could probably only play once

One of the best I've read

Heh, that was fun.

Pretty Good

Quick and enjoyable. The fact there is no background story doesn't matter at all, quite a feat.
Great work.

good job. i raised my rating because it's a good short story.

Very cool story. I like how you avoided using any names anywhere in the story, referring to each individual by the sound of their voice. This is definately one of the better stories I've read on this site.

it's pretty good TSM. It was a bit short, it lacked a lot of the detail i'm used to having from you, and it was incredibly linear. I was surprised at times by my lack of options. I also ruined the ending each time I died. Still, it's a short / good read for people looking for that.

Great game man! Great short story. Good luck!

One of those 'Am I awake or not' dilemmas. Tsmpaul does it again, This is easily a 6/8

A good storyline.

good tsmpaul. if you've ever played syphon filter for the PS1 and 2, your escapes were ver y similair to those and they kicked ass. i gave you 6/8. greateffort.

Nice story, and therefore it was fairly linear, but whatever.

It is above average writing, like usual from you. It is nowhere near as good as your other storygames, but I feel pretty stupid criticizing this as it is still better than the majority of storygames on this website. I'm sorry if this sounds mean, but I think it is your worst you have published, but still, above average, and you should be congratulated for that.

Good writing, good concept, although I didn't like the open-ending. I s'pose you had to cut it down a bit for the whole 100 pages thing, but still, well done.

This is an awesome story! I love the ending, and I love the intensity!! I rate a 7, however I would have given an 8 if it were less linear. However, if i had not pressed the back button so many times, i would not have noticed that.

Definitely a good short story, with the interesting twists I've come to expect from you Paul. Thanks.

Tsmpaul, how dare you?!?!?!!? We have such similar plots for our contest games... This is horrible -- everyone (except madglee and fleshy cuz they knew i was writing it) is going to think I copied you!

Well good luck my friend, this is under 100 pages right?