life of a wizard

Wow. The myth. The legend. A plot so non-existent and unoriginal that it led me to the greater truths about the universe. I have gazed into the void... and felt its hungry, gnawing eyes gazing back at me.

1/infinity.

The only positive that can be said of this story is that there are words on every page and it does mostly stay on theme.

No page is more than a sentence or two long, yet it is not free of spelling and grammar issues. The only item, your acceptance letter, does not match the name given to your character, and it just vanishes as one point from your inventory with no explanation.

Hey harrypotter12345678,
if you're really as young as you say you are, then you should probably give it a few more years before posting stories to the site. Or at the very least, read the articles and understand the minimum guidelines. This site is just as much for readers as writers, so in order for a story to stay up, it needs to meet some minimum standards. Which yours doesn't. We're not trying to be mean, this is only meant to be helpful. Next time, just practice writing a bit more before publishing your story.

Shouldn't you be watching Cocomelon or something?

i am only 8

Wow. This still really sucks.

1/8
I don't think I need to explain

Note to the author: this was unpublished as an admin action for not meeting minimum site standards, please leave it that way.

I'm sure you'll do better next time. It would be difficult not to.

This is pointless and obviously just an initial outline to test the engine and general building. Feel free to unpublish this and give it more than a sentence a page. You've got a really deep hole of negative reviews to dig out from, but it's not impossible if you really put in some effort.

Remember that writing stories is not a race. It's been over a month and I'm still writing Betarune.

This story is clearly rushed and would benefit from more detail & better choices. For example, randomize the selection for the hat sorting (See the 'How to use Random Variables' Article in the Help & Info tab), or use habits that determine whether or not you ace the final exams or not.

Overall, come back and publish when you get more effort done into this and maybe it'll be a great story.