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Alright time for a new thread.

I'm curious... Did the puppy run away because it was also raped?

I'll... leave that to your imagination.

Darius is just getting all the attention with his latest story.

ISentinelPenguinI on 7/6/2023 for This stupid storygame
Citing a headache for something as fucked and quarter-assed as this feels like when the author of My Immortal said Gandalf Potter called some middle schoolers motherfuckers because his head hurt. I would have accepted cholera or the suffering of cancer treatments as an excuse, because those at least have the potential to take someone out of commission for the duration of a contest. But this is no justification! No justification whatever. Also fish don't have teeth you fucking clod. I mean they do but they're tiny little pharyngial ridges and cleaned by swallowing, they wouldn't be bloody the way big ass mammal teeth get.

What about piranhas? Or... You know... Sharks?

Eliza on 7/7/2023 for The Price of Freedom: Innocence Lost [delete]
It was good. I enjoyed the flexibility and variety of choices. I wasn't really expecting to die, but I suppose it makes a lot of sense. Honestly, there's no way I would survive a life like that. Simply because I don't like to die, but apparently I have morals and therefore must die anyways, I wish I could have been rewarded more or had some kind of benefit from spreading my skill set out a little more, but then again, it makes sense how that didn't help me becuase if you're just average at a bunch of things how can you beat another person's specific skill? Anyways, I enjoyed it. I aslo enjoyed the ability to go back and redo some things- let me see that there was really nothing I could do at that point and I would die basically no matter what. Definititely pulled me into the story and was very immersive. I suppose that I just don't like dying without any hope for the future. The ending didn't leave me feeling satisfied or resolved. Just kind of abrupt. Most stories have a happy ending- then again. I suppose that's kind of the point of having a story where you die. Despite my bitterness about dying (which I laugh at even now), good job, bravo to you, and best wishes on your further creations.




--Signed, a person who has never played a CYOA before but is somehow on a CYOA site

Briar's been getting a whole bunch of comments on her story in general recently.

Yeah, I really should have written a happier ending where the protagonist actually survives, but as all POF players know, there is absolutely no way of surviving in Innocence Lost... Hence why there are no sequels. ^_^

Hey, I'm sorry about that comment. I found the site, played the game (absolutely amazing writing by the way), and then there was a comments section at the end, and I kind of just wrote what I was thinking in the moment (naively- of course- as I had obviously never played any other online CYOA games before). After playing a few more, I think I understand them how this site works a little better. . . and yeah. Sorry about that.

Awh! No need to apologize, you didn't do anything wrong. ^_^

Never a need to apologize for a thoughtful and sincere comment.

It was just a funny comment, there's nothing to apologize for.

The origins of choice based stories like these just happened to be printed books that killed you a LOT. The plot branches all have to end somewhere or they'll multiply forever, and given the situations the characters are usually in, death endings often make sense. Well that and they're just traditional

Most of the storygames here do have winning endings. Price of Freedom is a stat based storygame though and some outcomes depend on whether your character develops the right skills for the challenges they face.

Develoos. That's my new favourite word. ^_^

Shaddup.

Oh yeah, I forgot, you're a mod. You can fix it. >.<

Purple story description: 

fuck you jay

I didn't proofread this. This is all for fun and also a test for when I actually do want to make actually storygames lol. This is for an awesome Discord camp known as RAD that's like Survivor. So yeah...

-------

Jay at last responded!

forcing your host to fucking play this was the worst mistake you can make, Purple. I'll be seeing you soon.
— JayChachi on 7/15/2023 5:23:24 PM with a score of 0

Suranna on 7/19/2023 for Wheeler & Brandt LLP [delete]
It's the summer of '18. I'm 13 years old. I wish to spend my computer time playing choose your own adventure games. I come back to the site where I read all those weird warrior cat fanfictions. I think, "Hey! I like love stories. I'll check out some of the ones in the Love & Dating section." I click on Wheeler & Brandt LLP. I ignore the maturity level. I obtain my first exposure to BDSM. I shoot myself 3 times in the head.

Suranna on 7/18/2023 for The Make-Believe Sandbox [delete]
This was so kawaii desu! (^///^)❤❤ I especially loved Yuina-chan! She was sooooo tsundere OwO. Arigato for this awesome work, Senpai! Daisuke! UwU ヾ(≧▽≦*)o

Suranna on 7/18/2023 for A Handsome Man [delete]
My partner, Swissyoutuber is so handsome. He cares about me. He thinks about me. He loves me. I think about him too. He caught my eyes. He's inside my mind. I think I love him so much. He loves me too. I hope he'll come for me. I'll wait for him. I'll always be there for him. Suranna ❤ Swiss Cheese

Suranna, we love you. ^_^

I love you guys too! 

Suranna on 7/18/2023 for Hey Mom
Unrealistic, I'm Lesbian.

Especially the women. >:)

Charli on 7/23/2023 for Live the Life of a Cat [delete]
The Role-play was great. Even if it wasn’t warriors.


IT'S 2023
HOW THE FUCK--
WHY THE FUCK--
GAAH I'M SO ANGRY!

Who still wants to be a supervillain

Can someone commend that comment of Petros. It's a good thoughtful one. I couldn't even manage to complete the first part.

And Petros, buddy, you haven't written a story about a supervillain yet lol.

People stopped using it and it was sort of pointless and a chore as time went on.

Thanks Darius. Now I have to actually write it to save face. I was hoping this was forgotten

RayRiv on 9/1/2023 for Ground Zero
After going through and obtaining all four Epilogues, this remains one of my favorite "choose your own adventure" type stories I have read this multiple times over a decade, and it never fails to keep me enraptured. Good job mate.


Not funny, I just thought it was very wholesome and sweet.

With Chuck and Pippin deleted the site has lost one of its true classics.

Just saving a couple of reviews here so that historians will know what they missed.


Ogre:

This. Was. Amazing. There was so much rich detail on each and every page. The story just flowed so well it felt you wrote this just for me. The main character, Chuck, was so well-described he felt completely real. And the magic? The magic was woven into the world in a way that just made sense from the second page. There might have been some inside jokes there, but they were so carefully woven into the details of the world and the story that you couldn’t really be sure. Oh, and the world? Yes, this world feels like the result of a world-building that has taken years to clearly think through, develop, and work. People talk about how writing should include realistic worlds and ensure that things are consistent throughout the world, and this story really does that better than most. There were good options, and the puzzle was simply brilliant. This was a unique way to implement a puzzle with the CYS interface that I’ve really never seen before. It took me quite some time to figure out the puzzle, I was really stuck for a long time (sorry, no spoilers, you’re going to have to figure it out yourself). It was worth the wait, as the story beyond the puzzle continued along with rich storytelling and lots of excitement. The story really built throughout, making me not wanting to stop reading until I found the end. I may have ended up staying up way past my bedtime because I simply could not stop reading until I had found my way, along with Pippin and Chuck, to the end. I want to live in that jungle home with Pippin and Chuck by the serene pond.


DBNB, insightful as always and quick to get to the heart of any story:

Your writing is masterful as always,Ford. The storygame itself is dense with content and choices, and it kept me entertained until the very end. I couldn't help but be curious in all of the possible outcomes and decisions that are so neatly and wonderfully placed in this story. I have to say that I enjoyed every minute of this story. I'm tempted to say that you have outdone yourself, but your writing is always consistent in just how good it is. Thanks for yet another wonderful read, I eagerly anticipate the next storygame that you may create. Be it some inspired sequel to this storygame, or something completely different altogether. At this point I think that it is safe to say that it is only right for me to look toward to your next piece. The level of care and attention to detail that you place into each of your stories is always a treat to read and enjoy. Thank you once again, for writing this wonderful and enthralling story.

Lolfunnymuchmemesverygaylolbitcoingay
Gay and DepressedER!!!
GayDoge (Score of 0)
5/30/2023 12:45:55 PM

 

I mean, it fits the vibe of the story I suppose

Somebody has strong feelings about the only surviving cat story from 2015.


Not_mean_just_blunt on 10/17/2023 for Live the Life of a Cat [delete]
There are no choices that actually effect anything, there is no plot, and you can't even choose your own name or gender. Also is very unrealistic, with every character always being extaotic about everything, never getting sad, and don't even ms started on the scene on the hill with the girl and her boyfriend. One: who brings their cat to fuuuu... Fuuun timesss..?

Two: the story never said anything before or even implied that the cat can talk. If that were an actual thing in the story, that would be okay, but for the cat to just randomly go, "EWWW GROSS" and then never speak again,.. why? Just why? Three: Who the heck just goes, "haha my cat thinks it's gross so now I can't have a love life hahah so funny"

And in the birthday party scene, the cat does lots of things that could have altered the story if it has gone differently but we don't even get a choice in the matter! What if I want to scratch her instead of giving her freeking two dollar necklace kits. Which is another unrealistic thing. It said that she had wanted that HER WHOLE LIFE. Imagine your entire life goal is to get a two dollar necklace kits.

Plus she was in middle school at the time. Kids younger than that can earn their own money through lawn mowing and lemonade stands and crap. And she just waits her whole life for a couple pieces of yarn and some plastic needs.

Vincha by Cel

Okay so, it's pretty rare to have stories set in the Byzantine Empire around 600 AD. Or, mediaeval fantasy stories that have actual historical fiction and aren't just "medieval" themed. So this one was a treat, the fictional worldbuilding was pretty great and layers well with the historical elements. There were some ahistorical bits here and there (Examples: The Byzantines wouldn't have been able to send 20,000 men that far north in 626! Also they would've been called the Romans) but nothing that takes you out the story.

And this story isn't a wall of text historical fiction, it's the fun kind that doesn't boggle you in too many details. That said, I have a few complaints.

Firstly, this story is too horny. Secondly, the main character's 14-year old sister exists purely for everyone to thirst over. Like, she has no other purpose in this story than to give fanservice, it's very weird. There's not a single path in this story that doesn't shoe horn in a detail about how sexy she is or has one of the characters lusting over her. Yeah, a wee bit off-putting ngl. I'm not sure if the fact that it's otherwise inconsequential to the story makes it better or worse, because on one hand it just feels even more unnecessary as a result, but on the other hand the story can be enjoyed while ignoring it.

On another note, I like the format of this story being mostly the build up to the main event. Okay, so now I'm going into spoilers (warning)

there's a little bit of me that wonders why there's like three romantics in this story, but there's a few interesting paths that get barely any detail. That one path where the MC eats the artifact is really cool but there's no forking or choices after it. Idk it would've been interesting, I wish the story did more with it. I can say the same about a lot of the choices you make, many of the story endings feel like they, rather than a forgettable love interest, the MC's 14-year-old sister, and the witches horniness, could've gotten more focus. At times I wondered if this was a well-written porn story.

— Apercent on 10/20/2023 12:11:41 PM with a score of 0

@Celicni

creed on 10/24/2023 for Adventures of a Cute Cat: A Poem [delete]
this is way better than homework

Ezekiel Endicott on 10/24/2023 for Adventures of a Cute Cat: A Poem [delete]
This poem was very funny and made me laugh a little.
cooper on 10/24/2023 for Adventures of a Cute Cat: A Poem [delete]
it was cool

Cameron Holt on 10/24/2023 for Adventures of a Cute Cat: A Poem [delete]
Good, I like that allowed you to choose what you wanted.

Max Myers on 10/24/2023 for Adventures of a Cute Cat: A Poem [delete]
It was fun

Kooper on 10/24/2023 for Adventures of a Cute Cat: A Poem [delete]
My story was cool.

lukas on 10/24/2023 for Adventures of a Cute Cat: A Poem [delete]
fun to play



This is a very well behaved class, but damn do people need to start telling kids not to just plug their full name in everywhere they go. That used to be the FIRST rule of talking to others online.
(And I immediately removed Kiel's featured comment when I saw children getting too near to it.)

ur mom on 10/24/2023 for Dead Man Walking (Zombie Survival)
i loved this little inquiry of yours hunny bun! make sure to have everyone safe and i'd love for it to be a bit less violent, but you did awesome and were very creative. the guns and weapons werent maybe a good idea because youll shoot your eye out. excellent!

From our lovely mod @mizal :

But how can a man even remotely understand and respect the complexity of a fictional character not having a peepee? I demand you stop at once.

YouAreImportant on 10/30/2023 for Necromancer
idk why but i feel like fucking up the chick on the cover

Lol

Olga on 11/27/2023 for Why I left you
Made me cry inside. Reminded me of my own experiences in my mid-life crisis. I'm a mother of 3 in a mid-life crisis. It made me realise I still have hope. Loved reading this!!!!

Bob on 11/27/2023 for Desperate Heart
Reminded me of my desires! Hope for this to happen to me one day. Sounds like a fairytale! I really enjoyed this, and I hope you keep writing these great stories



The normies found us.

ILOVEtHISGAME on 12/4/2023 for Dead Man Walking (Zombie Survival)
this is the most AMAZING EPIC GODLIKE GAME EVER!!!! i love this game. i also got the best and worst ending i dont realy know if i got the worst ending. now i really hope more people play this game this is again the most AMAZING EPIC GODLIKE GAME EEEEEEEEEEEEVEEEEEEEEER!!!!!! play it now


Always nice to see some enthusiasm around here.

Dacer on 12/23/2023 for Cat's Day
Can yuo make a seqle


This is it folks, we have reached peak dumb.

proffesor poopypants.co.usa on 12/23/2023 for Harry Potter Hogwarts SImulator
it is useless and rubish


And this guy is mad at an unpublished game from an author that was active for three days in 2017.

Hayden White on 12/27/2023 for Z-DAY Survival Quiz
In the quiz and I said I can survive on my own please give the highest fucking score you bitch

Nora on 1/10/2024 for Ground Zero
I hate words

Guess I should have just stuck with the pics on that one.

But if he hates words, giving him sixteen of them wouldn't help.

Never even played the game but I love this new rate and comment button.
— shemale on 1/20/2024 1:52:21 PM

On Eternal.

Rated it an 8 too if it's same drive by rating at the same time. 

Achieved a diverse audience without trying. Winning!

poopy butt face on 2/26/2024 for Tower of Riddles
this game sucks, but also i hate niggers

@Avery_Moore

He hates my game. He also hates niggers. By my logic that means... Anybody who doesn't like my games must be racist. ^_^

I like your games. Does that prove I'm not racist?

Cannot be. I like her games and I'm racist as fuck.

Not all racists hate my games, but everyone who hates my games is a racist. ^_^

Incubus on 2/20/2024 for Eternal
Overall one of the best stories, though it's a shame the MC didn't get it on with Semra

Incubus on 2/20/2024 for Love SICK
I do have a kink for sisters (and daughters) and an extreme disregard for human life, so it's like he wrote it for me!😊

Incubus on 2/22/2024 for A Very Special Choose Your Story
This is cursed, in the best way possible! I've read all the pathways, both male and female (which I recommend you all do!) and I will remember many of them for the years to come. The only sad thing was difference in sex pathways (1 for male, 2 for female). And even that puny one for the guy resulted in !!!SPOILER death, sacrificial death! As a conclusion, I would remind EndMaster that all straight incest is wincest!

Incubus on 2/23/2024 for Tales From The Basement
After reading this, one quote will forever remain dear to my heart! “Tis better to have fucked your cousin and die, then to have never fucked your cousin at all.”

Incubus on 2/23/2024 for Tales From The Basement
There's a line in the anime obsessed one: "I wish you were 12!" Something about it shook me to the core, really made me question myself and my... open-mindedness to the age of a potential partner. 🥶 Hope I shake this feeling soon! My personality has a much higher stake in incest loliconness than I ever expected. (I'm exaggerating, if just a bit, so please nobody report me or smth 🙏)

Incubus on 2/23/2024 for Innkeeper
Irking that you couldn't get it on with Rita the gold digger. She's hot, mean, selfish and hot. Did I mention hot? Anyway, almost the perfect woman, as far as I'm concerned. Other than that, one of the less impressive of EndMaster's works, don't nobody go form an opinion on him just based on this!

Incubus on 2/24/2024 for Rogues
This is shaping up to be a great story, though I really hope the MC's twin sister is romanceable. So many rumors flying about, might as well make em true!😏 Don't get me wrong, Annah is great and all, being bitchy and high maintenance, but c'mon! A twin sister!

Incubus on 2/26/2024 for Eternal
The concept of nazi gnomes was certainly interesting...

Incubus on 2/26/2024 for Eternal
He did it! He created a master race! An objectively superior breed!

Well can't say I approve of ALL the comments made by Inky, specifically the suspicious one made about lolicon, but I do appreciate the enthusiasm. (I'll chalk up the loli comment due to him being an edgy teen from eastern Europe)

When this kid is 20 he's gonna look back at these and have some emotions all right.

I'm sure he's fondly remembering them all from his cell right now. ^_^

is normal in Europe

Meanwhile you're making new friends in this special ed class.

adhd haver on 2/26/2024 for Tower of Riddles
my brain died, cool thing thp

Incubus on 3/2/2024 for Tales From The Basement 2
Marvelous! When I found out what was the ACTUAL deal with Casey, I just shouted 'Win for the desperate!'. (But if it turned out she really were a trap, I'd have sued; then killed her😊

Incubus on 3/3/2024 for Tales From The Basement 2
I loved every second of LoveSick(especially the sexy times😏) and I laughed at the Saw movies, but the Whining wokie storyline was the vilest, most uncomfortable piece of literature I've ever read, and that's saying something! The other 2 were enjoyable! The whole catholic girl debacle and the Storming of the projector room ending come to mind 

@Incubus

Not sure how the hell you've missed it by this point, but you'll probably want to read Repression next. Have a feeling there's several endings you'll like in that story.

Especially one in particular. You'll have to find it on your own, but you'll definitely know it when you find it.

Stud Master Flash on 3/7/2024 for Eternal
Heard tons of good things about the game and story, specifically from the new book "50 Years of Text Gaming". Started the game with anticipation, only to be disappointed with tons of f-bombs and swearing in the first few paragraphs. No thanks. Not everyone talks like a juvenile.

Cool shit, Eternal apparently got fucking mentioned in a fucking book about fucking text gaming.

EDIT: After some searching I think I found a mention in the book on some weird website.

Eternal (EndMaster, ChooseYourStory.com). Epic choice-based dark fantasy about a soldier with a chance to change the world; one of the most popular of all time on the web-based ChooseYourStory portal.

Apparently the website got mentioned at least 11 times in this book. (Some of it involving the AI Dungeon chapter lol).

THis game was super educanatiomnlal and lots of funnies and good.
— bill on 3/18/2024 12:14:09 PM ]


I would rather play Fortnite chapter 4 than this dog crap, I got sold into into slavery twice, and drowned the third time. this is so flipping annoying
— curious george on 3/18/2024 12:07:28 PM

uwu
— hugh jass lobals on 3/18/2024 12:01:59 PM



It's that time of year again, and we have no way to block off the End Game links on the Phoenician Trade Game anymore.

I bet george's teacher would like to drown him too. (In Minecraft.)

That's not as bad as earlier today where I had to delete outright spam comments which had weird copypaste of wiki articles.

Anyway, deleting that huge jass faggot anime shit comment. The other two are fine (Especially the guy bitching about being sold into slavery twice and drowning lol)

Darius_Conwright on 5/21/2024 for Ysabeau backstory (f&h OC)
I refuse to have this be the representation of fear and hunger fanfic on this site.

@Darius_Conwright @Celicni

Well you two were the big Fear and Hunger fans as I remember, one of you could probably write better fanfic of it.

That's the game all the trannies are into right?

I can see why you cast this particular summoning spell.

Will11 on 5/26/2024 for Ysabeau backstory (f&h OC)
I found this one really baffling, is this based off of something? Perhaps if someone knows the source material this would make sense, for me I was just feeling "What? What? WHAT?" There were some acquirements in brackets which seemed to have no impact on the story, there weren't any characters apart from myself, stuff happened but it'd be over-generous to call it a plot, and there was a sort of setting but I know not where... on the positive side the story was largely free of typos, there was some branching and it ended quickly. Perhaps I'm not the best one to give feedback on this story; if the story was about something, I missed it :)

@Will11 Yeah, it's based on a somewhat infamous game made by RPGMaker called Fear and Hunger. I haven't read this story and haven't even played the game, but I'm somewhat familiar with the lore of the game.

A TL;DR version: it's a grimdark survival horror style RPG where everything is not just trying to kill you, but usually also trying to RAPE you in some way. A lot of body horror ensues, despair, eldritch abominations and just general nastiness all around. Also had a sequel, but that one toned down the sexual violence. (A relief for some and a disappointment for others)

Darius and Cel could probably fill you in more on the game since they're big fans of it, though I know Darius has already said this fanfic sucks.

Now that the only entertaining thing related to this game has been preserved, guess I can unpublish it.

Thanks End, it sort of makes sense now. Everything out there trying to kill and rape you... sounds a bit like the rough parts of Birmingham after dark :D I can see why it'd spawn a lot of fan fics though where incoherency is treated like an art form.

Been a while since I played those (almost a year) so I forgot a lot of the little details but yeah the fanfic sucked.

I probably should.

TypewriterCat on 6/10/2024 for The Plot - Strange, Dark & Mysterious Collection
It’s really quite impressive that you went onto a site intended for choose-your-own-adventure type storygames and then proceeded to publish a completely linear story. You appear to not understand what an enter key is. The size of paragraphs is bordering on unreadable and none of the dialogue is followed by a paragraph break. I’m also honestly not sure why you chose to write the story of Rachel Burkheimer’s murder with some of the names changed by a few letters. In any case, you get a 1.

Lol

M on 7/8/2024 for Survive The OutBreak
Doesn't work, you cannot choose the character. Game suck and the creator should eat shit

fresl fredd on 7/7/2024 for Boobs!!!
The bad grammar really drove me up a wall here! please tell me why there is a story title that is called "boobs". NO. just no.

beef on 7/7/2024 for Dead Man Walking (Zombie Survival)
touch ass and grass baybeee

lol on 7/8/2024 for A Fowl Problem
™~¢]¥]§~'8;')4(?':?-$€€¢§©¢%~#

Phoenixthe1st on 7/13/2024 for His Smile
well not what I expected but that was interesting

Phoenixthe1st on 7/13/2024 for A Dragon's Legend
I love it!!!!!

Phoenixthe1st on 7/13/2024 for A Pirate's Life for Me
that was fun!!! thank you for making it

Biru on 7/13/2024 for Life or death survival
I want to play real life game that pay me

jesus on 7/13/2024 for Choose your Life
enlightened

Phoenixthe1st on 7/13/2024 for Snow Love
I love it

Phoenixthe1st on 7/13/2024 for Meant To Be?
that was good

Phoenixthe1st on 7/13/2024 for Survive the Zombies
I loved it

Phoenixthe1st on 7/13/2024 for Rising Flames

that's really good I liked it.



The comment section is so inspiring these days.

I guess the kids don't like cats anymore?
Heidi is a fat, whiny little retard though and I bet her parents regret everything about her even more than her teachers do. I hope she sees this on the front page and cries about it for being the only one in this group of fat, whiny retards dumb enough to additionally use her real name.

PoopyHeehee on 7/16/2024 for Live the Life of a Cat
BAD

??hehe on 7/16/2024 for Live the Life of a Cat
THIS WAS SOOOO BORING BRO

Heidi on 7/16/2024 for Live the Life of a Cat
Omg this was soooooooo boring its just READING its NOT better than homework. I didt like it one bit.

mrcrimsonclean breaks the heart of an adorable little girl who has earnestly loved everything she's ever read here, and makes her delete her story:

mrcrimsonclean on 8/3/2024 for DEL~158~fairies
It's probably the worst story game I've read here. I can tell it was written by a 4-year-old (as the author suggests). characters: there's only 2 characters; both have no character at all; 0/8 in terms of characters. worldbuilding/vividness There is no worldbuilding, awful writing, or extreme lack of descriptiveness; it's just "I realised he was a man" or "he overpowered me; I died." Where is the struggle? Where is her internal struggle? Where is the oomph? We don't see any sequence of events. 0/8 Grammar: So little is wrote; it's hard to judge, but from what I can tell, it was wrote by a pre-schooler (as the author suggests). 0/8 OVERALL: 0/8 It was so bad, it could have been a comedy, except it wasn't funny.

Truly Milton is the most despicable of villains here.

EDIT: Apparently I got Crimson and Milton mixed up. Honestly this would have been funnier if Milton had been the one to say this so I'm declaring it canon anyway that Milton made a little girl writing about fairies tearfully take down her story because he said how badly it sucked.

Milton

Milton is always cruel to children, and I heard he likes to pee in ziplocs and stash it in random places around his workplace, too.

Now now, no one knows the true identity of the Mad Pisser...

I suppose I could do a heel turn in this arc of CYS history. Could make things interesting for the folks.

Damn, I'm surprised you can see deleted comments. She took it rather well actually! She's just planning to rewrite it. We'll see what the rewrite looks like. Bless. 

This story sure does rack up the driveby guests.

cockgobbler02 on 8/4/2024 for Surviving The Black Plague
fuck my pussy hole

dikdikikidikikid on 8/4/2024 for Surviving The Black Plague
This game forced me to chop off my own chode and shove it up my ass and i thank the game for that cuz the chode spouted into peanuts now i have an unlimited peanut glitch 11/10.

big daddy d on 8/4/2024 for Surviving The Black Plague
hi girls

areufas on 8/4/2024 for Surviving The Black Plague
Excuse me Ma'am, May I tickle your balls for $0.32 buy 1 get 1 free. Thanks a ton!

cockmuncha45 on 8/4/2024 for Surviving The Black Plague
I cut off the black boil off my wifes skin and shoved it up her tight pussy until it sprouted into a tree. My wife is a tree now. nigger

ppmaster on 8/4/2024 for Surviving The Black Plague
this makes me horny

B==========D-- [(;)] on 8/4/2024 for Surviving The Black Plague
This game makes me so horny i just wanna shove my fat chode cheese dick down my little sisters throat (shes a newborn)

MY FIRST JAR OF PICKES! SHUT U on 8/4/2024 for Surviving The Black Plague
MY FIRST JAR OF PICKES! SHUT UP! Nigger MY FIRST JAR OF PICKES! SHUT UP! Nigger MY FIRST JAR OF PICKES! SHUT UP! Nigger MY FIRST JAR OF PICKES! SHUT UP! Nigger MY FIRST JAR OF PICKES! SHUT UP! Nigger

dildo47 i <3 dildos on 8/4/2024 for Surviving The Black Plague
man what is this i hate this game because i cant fuck my wife and eat a person that had the plague

dealdough47 on 8/4/2024 for Surviving The Black Plague
bruh i fell from a tree and my guts spilled everywhere nigger

him on 8/4/2024 for Surviving The Black Plague
10/10 so sigma all the gyatts in ohio are rizzing me up after i sacrificed my wife to gigachad im such a sigma i <3 dildos

Strangely, none of them even rated it, they just wanted to share.

The future seems bright

Glad to see only the best are surviving the black plague.

Dequavius pork on 8/6/2024 for Surviving The Black Plague
What’s up nigger

DatNigga on 8/6/2024 for Surviving The Black Plague
Yo was good ma niggers just wanna say you all lookin fine ah hell me finna molest all of you niggas. Ma fat veiny dick wanna go in the pink then later in the stink!

Frankie Lapenna running way 0. on 8/6/2024 for Surviving The Black Plague
My newborn baby girl just shat on my face so I shot that hoe in the face. I hope the right people are reading this (I’m clinically insane please send help before I kill myself) slay xx

MuffMotorboater on 8/6/2024 for Surviving The Black Plague
fat dildos in my ass. I still see your shadows in my room. Hahaha funny reference. FUCK THE NIGGERS

So apparently P Diddy decided to join up on CYS as DatNigga

Elijah Liam on 9/23/2024 for Z-DAY Survival Quiz [delete]
Good but I what to tell me how long will I live Good quiz Just too much Reading! my name is Elijah Liam email me gg is my email my number is i[redacted] call me



Sure thing buddy

Well, looking up the number pulled up a robocaller list, so I just deleted the whole comment.

A lost.Star on 9/29/2024 for Necromancer
Hello author Sama , luv u and your work ...kiss kiss xxx

Lol

UwU. Endmaster senpai noticed me!!! ^_^

martin on 10/8/2024 for Eternal
Good story,was good,and was pretty good,in my opinion it was good,I hope other people think its good.

Could have just said it was double plus good.

Look, there's a lot of things that can be said about this story, but I don't think THAT is one of them.

jakkieee on 10/25/2024 for Diplomat
The United Kingdom was formally established in 1707 with the union of the Kingdom of England and the Kingdom of Scotland, resulting in the creation of the Kingdom of Great Britain. This pivotal moment in history occurred against a backdrop of various factors, including political intrigue, economic necessity, and social change. The earlier Acts of Union aimed to strengthen the two kingdoms in the face of external threats and promote economic cooperation. This union marked the beginning of a complex journey, influencing the development of a shared British culture, the evolution of parliamentary democracy, and the expansion of trade and colonization that would define the UK’s role on the world stage for centuries to come.

This driveby has mistakenly placed his history assignment on Gryphon's scifi story.

God save the King! ^_^

Wouldn't mind if the randos acted more like this than some of those other archetypes we've come across.

La reine des maladies on 10/26/2024 for Choose Your Disease

Fun! I am an lover of infectious disease, so this was right up my alley - I do wish that we had the opportunity to go back and get reinfected, but overall an enjoyable experience.


Well okay then.

A disciple of Nurgle obviously.

My nephew went through a phase where he was obsessed with infectious diseases... We got him this for his birthday! ^_^

Thats cute, its good to get him educated on it young. Sounds like a smart kid, hope he likes it! I hate germs so much and other icky bacteria and things floating in the air that i literally have an air purifier for my room lol. I can say for 99.97% certainty that im not breathing in spores, pollen, or dirty dust particles or viruses, at least when im in my room. Im super prone to allergies, such as to pollen so it helps a lot. 

All you need to do is never leave the house and you'll be fine. ^_^

There's another crimson that joined recently too, but found out it was a completely different guy and not the same one who couldn't make up his mind on his handle.

Oh man, I thought they were the same crimson

mrcrimsonclean has inhabited the body of Crimson.

Crimson_Orm is some random Indian.

There's a game online called Pandemic 2 where you create your own disease and the goal is to infect everyone on Earth. If he's still into that stuff, he should try it.

Editing cause I posted the same thing twice :(

HAHAHAHA ITS SO FUNNY I LOVED WHEN YOU CHOSE A BJ SHE COMPLETELY LEFT HIM!!! I PLAYED THIS GAME SO MANY TIMES AND BASICALLY DID ALL THE DIFFERENT BRANCHES!! I LOVE IT AND I WANT A PART TWO SO BADDDDD!!!!
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— Lilly on 10/29/2024 6:58:55 AM with a score of 0


2/8 length game from 2012, rated 3.73. Can you imagine how excited they'll be to find there's been other games added to the site since then?

Hmm... Curious as to the mechanics of this. Masturbating to a game is simple, but masturbating WITH a game... How does one go about that? Now, I suppose you could print off your favorite scenes in the story and just wrap the paper around your knob, but I would imagine that would not be the optimal material for sexual gratification as it would be pretty dry and has the potential to leave some nasty paper cuts.

Unamused on 10/28/2024 for A Hunted and Haunted Halloween

THIS WAS THE MOST HORRIBLE STORY I HAVE EVER FOUND EVER IT DIDN"T WORK AND WAS TERRIBLE YOU SHOULD BE ASHAMED OF YOURSELF YOU #$%*#(#


@Mystic_Warrior That's it, hang up your keyboard, you're done for!

Now I'm tempted to change the title to 'A Hunted and Haunted and Horrible Halloween'. 

Perhaps "A Haunted Horrible Hunted Halloween"?

I bet he just couldn't solve the mystery.

Kysbro on 10/30/2024 for A Very Special Choose Your Story
You need to kill yourself you conservative retard

Ah been awhile since I got one of these. Always like how these faggots just jump to conclusions about political affiliations especially after ignoring reader warnings and getting triggered.

Drivebys gonna driveby though.

RKrallonor on 11/3/2024 for Love SICK
Structurally speaking, the writing is well done. It flows quite well. But I really hated this story because it's just way too graphic for me. I know you need to have a strong stomach for end master stories, but it fits better in other categories, in the love and romance category it just feels kind of wrong. It's just too much. I can't really get invested in the story when the first page is so hard to read. To be fair though, Endmaster did clearly say that in the intro, if you are offended by ultra violence do not read. I guess I thought I could handle it, since I've read some of his other stories. But this time it wasn't really my thing.

Glad to see RK still calling attention to himself.

Man, yesterday i watched a movie called Martyrs (2008). If RKrallonor watched that hed be having nightmares for weeks, its not even a scary movie, it was basically just fucked up torture porn (its very alike to love sick in that manner). Extreme graphic content warning.

Yeah you're probably right. It's kind of become a joke with my friends because one of them tried to show me Human Centipede, and I just noped the fuck out of there.

Yeah that was probably not the best thing to do. Honestly, I don't really have a platform to judge, I haven't even written my first story yet. In fact, I was reading LoveSick while procrastinating my storygame. It is a great game, honestly I really like your entire body of work, they are ChooseYourStory classics: AlphaWolf, Eternal, Necromancer. I didn't mean to call attention to myself or anything like that, I guess I just got surprised since it seemed really violent and graphic at first and I thought that the love/romance category stories would be more Jane Austen-y. But I'm pretty much a noob who has only been reading so far so I didn't mean to disrespect.

Ive thought about it a lot but End is actually good at writing romance. Mystic is great at writing wholesome, true love romance stories which feel palpable and real, and End is the exact same but hes great at showing love though toxic attachment styles and unhealthy dynamics. His best examples of this (in my humble opinion) is definitely the sibling relationship in rogues (in some paths) and Sembra and the Eternal in the emperors last hope path, at least those two really stood out to me.

He is, right! I mean I really loved the will-they won't-they tension between Annah and the hero in Rogues in the path when you and Annah both go to Klyton. It almost gave me Ross-Rachel vibes and there was an endgame eventually where you and Annah lived happily ever after, but at times you didn't know if you would both make it out alive. There were so many points where I had to backtrack because I wanted to explore and see if there was a happier ending. And then when they both go back to the village, or I think he becomes a crime lord with the Ebony Claw Syndicate that was cool. I just loved the detail and the way that Annah was a recurring fully fleshed out character even as so many pages kept on going and going. It was really good. There was an unhealthy dynamic between Annah and the hero in Rogues in the beginning. Annah was shown as a user and just not really helpful in the beginning and then she comes back and saves the hero's ass a ton of times. They needed time apart to both grow and then come back to each other, Endmaster showed that so well.

**SPOILERS**

One of my favorite "bad" endings in Eternal is when sembra tricks us into giving her our energy (when shes a vegetable), that page was so well written, because the Eternal could now see her thoughts, and she did love him, but in her own perverse and selfish way. One of the most memorable relationship dynamics ive read to be honest. 

Eternal x Decena is still my favourite fucked up relationship. ^_^

I definitely need to go back and give End some legit reviews. I'm very jealous of Gryphon having the largest and most comprehensive End master reviews, gonna have to change that. I'm still only a CYS baby though, still trying to find my style in terms of reviewing, it changes a lot. 

Lol, I wasn't even annoyed by it. I just thought it was funny.

Though your last two responses I enjoyed even more so you survive THIS TIME.

You still get thrown in the SHAME pit if you don't turn anything in for Sherb's contest though.

Yeah, I sure do hate when games do...that...

... Those are certainly words.

pookiewookiebeartheskibidithir on 11/19/2024 for The Maze Runner
i married my dad while I was playing this game we have 3 kids now.

I feel like this should be a comment on one of my stories.

I am quite disappointed by your games inability to let the characters marry their fathers.

Well if I ever get around to my story idea "Father" the whole goal will be for the female protagonist to marry her dad.

Yey! Always nice to read a story with wholesome family values! ^_^

I could see that one on TRASH

DVC3 on 11/26/2024 for Terrorist
What the actual fuck is this? My choices are neo Nazi or incest? I choose leave a bad review. I fucking hate shit involving incest or Nazis. Delete this and get mental help

Lol. Someone didn't bother reading the story description or did read it and got offended on purpose.

The comment isn't even accurate, your choices are Neo nazi, incest, or becoming homeless, like come on man. at least play the game

Judging from the context of the comment, and the fact that the first choice in the game is the only one he mentioned, I'm willing to bet he probably hit the "rate and comment" button after the first page.

Weird, do you not get the option of Nazi and incest? From what I've read, Hitler was pretty big on incest. ^_^

Actually, yes. Provided you don't kill your sister or yourself. 
 

Also, his entire family was. His father, Alois Hitler, and his mother, Clara, were actually cousins.

Right?! I specifically have an entire list of content within the game that is going to offend. 
 

Like I said in the other thread (didn't know this was here until Fresh spoke up), I am proud of my story. I knew there was going to be a mixed reaction to the story game when I published it. I don't care. I was going through a lot at the time (homeless, relationship breaking down, not being able to get my psych meds, etc.) and putting all of my intrusive thoughts into that story really did help me cope. 
 

The advice I got from that story, specifically from Darius and Mystic, did help me write a better entry for Sherb's contest too. Regardless of what anyone thinks, I'm proud of Terrorist and I'm never, ever, taking it down.