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Fresh the Fifth Daughter

4 months ago

You've displayed the appropriate traits.

You've been getting along with Thara and TCat.

You've got some decent stories.

Welcome to daughterhood.

Fresh the Fifth Daughter

4 months ago

!!

Fresh the Fifth Daughter

4 months ago

Holy shit this is a historic moment 

Fresh the Fifth Daughter

4 months ago

Congrats shorty, this is a new level of based.

Fresh the Fifth Daughter

4 months ago

Decided to split this bit off since this is such an important occasion it shouldn't be mixed in with the pronoun faggotry thread.

Fresh the Fifth Daughter

4 months ago

She's nice and all, but needs to be more ruthless.

I was surprised when Tcat expressed the want of gay people jumping off buildings to end their existence. Or am I remembering wrong? It was something that even I dare not say.

I like gay people. They're fun and always light up a room. 

Trans people however should be rounded up into camps and given daily correctional beatings to fix the wires that seem to have gotten tangled up in their heads. :)

Oh, but congrats to Fresh! Report to Cricket for further instructions. 

Fresh the Fifth Daughter

4 months ago

My eldest brother has been afflicted with gayness. 

 He does not light up the room. He makes everyone want to throw him off the roof from how loud, boisterous, and annoying he is. 

Fresh the Fifth Daughter

4 months ago

I like when they twerk randomly in inappropriate times and settings. 

Fresh the Fifth Daughter

4 months ago

One time we were at a wedding and this faggot in the after party (my brother) decided to whip his pants down and start mooning everyone, and he wonders why my dad disowned him, among other things. 

Fresh the Fifth Daughter

4 months ago

Yeah, that's too much. Not my kind of gay.

Fresh the Fifth Daughter

4 months ago

Lol

But yeah that was TCat who was throwing folks off roofs.

Fresh the Fifth Daughter

4 months ago

Well she can throw that fag off a roof nobody will miss him. 

Fresh the Fifth Daughter

4 months ago

See?

I just want people to have their mental illnesses beaten out of them. Maybe by a designated bully, or professionals.

She wants them cratering off rooftops. 

So ruthless, for one so young. It's very impressive. 

Fresh the Fifth Daughter

4 months ago
The mean streets of Turkey make an impression on a kid, and not just at Thanksgiving.

Fresh the Fifth Daughter

4 months ago

Capital punishment is needed to prevent even worse degeneracy. Can't have the gays charging interest on loans.

Oh, and congratulations, Fresh.

Fresh the Fifth Daughter

4 months ago

Ah right. You're based.

Fresh the Fifth Daughter

4 months ago

Fresh the Fifth Daughter

4 months ago
Nice one, your avatar works perfectly with that.

Fresh the Fifth Daughter

4 months ago
So many sisters! :0

Fresh the Fifth Daughter

4 months ago

Congrats on daughterhood, Fresh!

Fresh the Fifth Daughter

4 months ago

I wonder why you haven't been adopted. You're a daughter that any father would be proud of! ... Or is it because Mizal's already adopted you? ^_^

Fresh the Fifth Daughter

4 months ago

Better yet, why haven't you been adopted, or mizal? With Mystic i think its just because shes nice, End likes his daughters edgy ive noticed. 

Fresh the Fifth Daughter

4 months ago

I think I'm a bit too old to be End's daughter.

Fresh the Fifth Daughter

4 months ago

I am the picture of kindness itself. All who say otherwise are liars and must be put to death :P

Fresh the Fifth Daughter

2 months ago

Fresh the Fifth Daughter

2 months ago

If End had to kill one daughter to save the others, I wonder which one would get the chop. ^_^

Fresh the Fifth Daughter

2 months ago

Well, Green's basically dead already, right?
But I am the newest, so

Fresh the Fifth Daughter

2 months ago

That's the main reason to keep Green around, to make it an easy choice.

Fresh the Fifth Daughter

2 months ago
Wholesomedog

Fresh the Fifth Daughter

2 months ago
Ok, I am so confused right now. In the post, you say "so many sisters", implying you're also Endmaster's daughter too, but in the history(THE TRUTH), it says the only daughters are Tcat, Thara, Cricket, and Green. Are you Green44, but the praying mantis in the profile picture is white? Are you secretly TharaApples? This is such a mystery, and I am so lost right now.

Fresh the Fifth Daughter

2 months ago

This question is above your paygrade, citizen. Move along and cause no trouble.

Fresh the Fifth Daughter

2 months ago
We're gonna have to use the nervestapler.

Fresh the Fifth Daughter

29 days ago
ill try my best to get in the daughter hood! (wish me luck:})

Fresh the Fifth Daughter

29 days ago
I wanna lol fag, can I lol fag?

Fresh the Fifth Daughter

29 days ago
Yes, on the condition that you must surpass her in points first.

Fresh the Fifth Daughter

28 days ago

I wouldn't write her off yet. It's a dog wearing sunglasses... Pretty fucking cool. ^_^

Fresh the Fifth Daughter

28 days ago
oh

Fresh the Fifth Daughter

28 days ago
Xanax has only been on the site for a day and has already shown more ambition and drive than you ever had over all these years. Take a good look in the mirror the next time you're gonna lol fag.

Fresh the Fifth Daughter

28 days ago
Thank you ur so nice!

Fresh the Fifth Daughter

28 days ago
lol fag

Fresh the Fifth Daughter

28 days ago
glhf

Fresh the Fifth Daughter

28 days ago
I think that's a great goal to have! If you want to try for daughterhood, it's best to participate productively in the forums, offer critiques on short stories, and write reviews! You'll want to establish some kind of forum presence here by being an asset to the community. Since you're a bit new here, I'd recommend checking out some articles on story writing as well as writing CYOAs.

Fresh, Daji, Thara, and Tcat all have great stories, strong forum presence, and great writing skills so they're good examples to look up to.

Best of luck!

Fresh the Fifth Daughter

28 days ago
More than just presence and productivity, there's a certain vibe you gotta have. It's hard to describe. But even if you never get daughterhood, don't worry; that's not necessarily the only indicator of high status. For instance, Mystic isn't a daughter, and she's productive as hell and highly respected.

Fresh the Fifth Daughter

28 days ago
ok tysm! it's ok if i dont get in the daughterhood but i still try my best!

Fresh the Fifth Daughter

28 days ago
Oh yeah I forgot about that. You definitely need a bit of edge when needed, and have Endmaster's approval. It doesn't really happen that often, and it's not the only way to gain respect on here, you can also try to earn member trophies or write a commended story. Those are high-status goals too, and they're really good to shoot for.

Also, these goals generally take 1-2 years at least, unless you're insanely productive. There's always a learning curve, and things take time.

Fresh the Fifth Daughter

28 days ago
ill try my best! even if it take's 2 or 3 years imma try to make a name for myself on here!

Fresh the Fifth Daughter

28 days ago
Yeah, I wasn't aiming for daughterhood but was around for like two years before it.

Fresh the Fifth Daughter

28 days ago
Thanks! i need that im gonna read some stories, and articals, And then make storys i try my best! :)

Fresh the Fifth Daughter

28 days ago
If you want you can join the next available contest. We have story contests where members write CYOA stories and compete against each other for prizes. We have one running right now, but I wouldn't recommend signing up unless you're absolutely confident you can turn out a good story. It's better to wait and learn the ropes, but if you feel 100 percent ready, you can join. There might be one in the summer that would be perfect for you to join, since you'll have some time to practice!

Fresh the Fifth Daughter

28 days ago
Oh! that sounds fun!

Fresh the Fifth Daughter

28 days ago
If you want to join, choose a prompt and then reply to the thread announcing your intent to enter. But keep in mind you'll only have a month, and make sure you'll have time to write regularly. That would be a good idea.

Fresh the Fifth Daughter

28 days ago
ok ill start right now tysm guys! you guys have been an amazing help! thank you!

Fresh the Fifth Daughter

28 days ago

Fresh the Fifth Daughter

28 days ago
Thanks! i finshed a couple pages of the story not finshed yet but im giveing my self a break!

Fresh the Fifth Daughter

28 days ago
You're using AI.

Fresh the Fifth Daughter

28 days ago

Oh no! Don't tell me the puppy wearing sunglasses isn't real! O.O

Fresh the Fifth Daughter

27 days ago
huh?

Fresh the Fifth Daughter

27 days ago
no im not

Fresh the Fifth Daughter

27 days ago

Yeah, looking through some of the pages of her storygame, I don't think that she is using AI. The grammar, lack of punctuation, and weird sentence structure - "As Emily treaked thru the forest she heard a faint whisper "hey!" a mysterious voice said "huh" Emily said "over here!" it said again "Wha..." the she saw a man maybe around her age "over here!" she went near him "what?" she said "who are you" he said "im emily" huh "where's Alana" " i dunno" you hear a faint yell behind you "HELP!" it was a women about 30, blond." - that would not be generated by AI. I'm surprised that it is written by someone who has read dialogue before.

It could be that AI was used to frame the opening descripton of the story as it is significantly better written than most of the content pages and uses a different protagonist name to the rest of the game. Similarly there are ample examples of miscapitalization and overuse of ellipses that AI typically does not do. For a story focused on dinosaurs, there is a surpising variety of misspellings of dinosaur (dinosuer and dinosaures on the same page).

Xanax, is english a second (or third) langauge for you?

Fresh the Fifth Daughter

27 days ago
Mizal means for the very first introduction post, not the story.

Fresh the Fifth Daughter

27 days ago
eniglish is my second langauge but I use grammerly to help with my grammer but i love write and makeing up my own story

Fresh the Fifth Daughter

27 days ago
Why does Ashley's name change to Emily, btw?

Oh, and what is your first language? Just curious.

Fresh the Fifth Daughter

27 days ago
oh i think it was a mistake i get confused and my first language is spainish

Fresh the Fifth Daughter

27 days ago
So are you Mexican, or do you hail from Spain itself? (or one of those other spanish-speaking places, I suppose there are probably more)

Fresh the Fifth Daughter

27 days ago
Im mexican i grew up in the south part of spain

Fresh the Fifth Daughter

27 days ago
Is normal in Spain. :D

Fresh the Fifth Daughter

27 days ago
How does that work? Wouldn't you be Spanish then?

Fresh the Fifth Daughter

27 days ago
yes but my mom is hispanic but my dad is mexican and i have a little more of my dads side in me

Fresh the Fifth Daughter

27 days ago
She is two thirds Spanish. Gilgamesh rules.

Fresh the Fifth Daughter

27 days ago

No uses AI para escribir, nunca vas a aprender asi!

Fresh the Fifth Daughter

27 days ago
¿Son las cucarachas de España más deliciosa que los burros mexicanos?

Fresh the Fifth Daughter

27 days ago
si, las cucarachas son deliciosas

Fresh the Fifth Daughter

27 days ago