Player Comments on Fairview Highschool Game

The one is far too much for what this game deserves. This is not a Choice of game. It has only a path, only a correct choice in each phase. The rest are failures that makes you replay same choices over and over.

A terrible bad formulated choices in a terrible bad presented plotting with no development of characters or sense. Most of the time, you don't know what in hell is happening and choices seem random.

The big fights are totally random with choice options that doesn't describe at all what is occurring. At the end the only thing, you do as player is using the back button to randomly stumbled upon the convoluted only path to advance in the game.

It is obvious that the writer expent all his time trying fancy colors in the fonts and bad designed random events. Instead, of creating a real plot with meaningful dialogues and with a engaging mistery.

Let the people choose to end the game each time they die. And don't force us to play this one choice gauntlet just because you don't want bad ratings. This type of dishonest games should be forbidden.

I wish I could have given this a higher score. The author clearly had a lot of fun writing it. In the history of CYS this was a significant game.

Readers are presented with many options, most of which are hogwash, and the rest ultimately lead to the same ending.

This story was carried by humor and decent editing. In the early days random death links all over the place may have been an acceptable formula, but standards have risen dramatically. I would really like to see what the same writer would do today, probably something completely different.

With all the miscellaneous errands and pointless roundabouts in this game using the item feature of the editor could add quite a bit to the story. The final showdown, which was admittedly fun, would have been better if items and individual choices made during the story had an impact.

As it stands there is only one way to the final fight, only one way to win that, and as far as I can tell, only one ending.

Still, funny, occasionally very clever (The chemistry segment really stands out), with very nice spurts of characterization, and overall, a nice job.

It was linear, the deaths were lame, I disliked it in general, I don't understand why it's on the list of best games, and I had to go through the entire freaking thing so that I could give it the rating it deserved.

I normally wouldn't have bothered to go through a game I hated just so I could give it a bad rating, but I wanted to make sure my rating was listed on here so that if I checked the game out in the future, I would see the rating I gave it, remember that I hated it, and not waste my time.

I probably wouldn't have bothered to leave a bad comment about the game, either, if you hadn't forced me to do the entire thing just to rate it. I understand not letting people rate it at the beginning, in case trolls die on purpose just to give it a low score, but I got to third or fourth period before I decided it wasn't going to get any better, which I think is enough time to give it a fa

This game was amazing!!!!!!

Smash

WTF this took me like an hour and a half

Hilarious, great fun

pretty cool.. does take a while.

dark but so funny

very cool game bro :)

this is the best thing to every happen to me thank you so much.

This was really hard and took a lot of time, but it was really fun.

This was slightly amusing, mostly cringey, kinda racist, with lots of spelling errors. Don’t play if you want serious literature.

i love it i love everything about it I LOVE IT AND THAT IS ALL I HAVE TO SAY.actually i have one more thing to say. this game is probably EXTREMELY underrated and i wish that this game will succeed

I got soo fustrated but i love it... yea...

this sucks kinda violent....?

its okay, but it was hard to follow, and you never knew what to do.

I love this choice game so much and spent over an hour playing it. This game is worth all of the time spent and I really love your use of gore!

It was really good,it kinda reminds me of Scott Griffen,but put that aside,this was a good and cool experience Thank You for making this Game!!!!!!

There weren't really many choices. If you didnt take the desired path you had to restart instead of truly having freedom. It would have been more fun without constantly being railroaded.

I honestly think this game would be so much funner if there were pictures. If youd like i could make the pictures for you

actually made me think and I had to remember patterns. good text-based game

This game was very enjoyable. I really loved the way the options are played out.

GREAT GAME! iM GET SO BORED ALL THE TIME and playing this game really help pass the time when i wanted to do something that i shouldnt. This game might save my relationship with my mom :> Thank you!!

its so fun

This game is so much fun. I wish there was more too it. I only have one bad comment is that I get so frustrated when I make a wrong move.But in the end it is really good it's also funny when you die I mean like the reason why you die is funny.I give this a 10/10

Oh dear lord, this game was painful! I mean, I kind of want to give the game a higher score, since the author clearly put in a lot of time and quite a bit of effort, but the game was just such a chore to get through.

The thing is, I LOVE puzzle games! Anything that involves solving puzzles gets an instant plus from me. It's probably my favourite category of computer game, period. But this... This wasn't exactly a "Puzzle" game. This was more of a, "Click a bunch of random links and hope you choose the right one" game.

That pretty much sums up the entire thing. Just click a bunch of random links and hope you don't die. Usually I find it frustrating when games are too short, but in this case the relatively decent game length was actually d negative thing, since it just left me with more random links to press and more pointless deaths.

I'm sorry but... It just wasn't fun. >.<

Great story!

great game but i like a reeses cup more srry

cool enough, slightly repetitive tho. the storyline was engaging enough, but kinda went far left when it left the realm of reality, but i guess it could be taken as a good or bad thing. I'd have preferred a more down to earth story than a big battle scene. also interesting that the main character can do all of that but dies from push-ups.

It was a lot of fun choosing everything to survive the day a Fairview Highschool

hay that was pritty good: why not crush that doll under a m16 gunfire; aa that will be fun...

It took me many times to complete but i loved the story line

yeah

yeah

yeah

It was okay

Great

Realy fun gave me something to do

A rather brutal gauntlet slog.

This was really fun. I loved how it was horror but also adventure and mystery. I had to do this ten times until I could do it without dying.

Great:)

This book is incredible to were it's should be on the New York Times Best Selling Book@ of the year!?? Please make more books like this!
Sined,
Zander Lucklin

Though my time at this school is over, the memories will never leave. Well done.

its fun. i died many times.

It was pretty good, not at all what I expected

very nice

totally not in a cult here

The last scene was a bit of fun working through, the dialogue was quite entertaining actually. The imposement of the author's political beliefs are quite prevalent in the story, which is exhausting and a little immature. While it was written almost 20 years ago, still resonates with those of the current times.
5/10. Not the best, not the worst. Grammar definitely needs help. It was nice to play through, and a long story for sure, takes about an hour or more with a lot of trial and error.

Wasted my time

kinda boring. too much death

(O_O") This game is just... Wow. It's like a dream, things that don't make sense happen, but they are supposed to make sense. One thing I can say for sure is that, this game is very, very, VERY entertaining! Can we have a sequel to this please? I would actually play something similar to this! XD

This was amazing. Hilarious and surprisingly realistic-ish

haha, niche-ass awesomeness. awesome sideways humor ! thanks sugar lumps ;o

I spent an hour doing this before I made it to the end! It was hard! Thx for the challenge

it piesdd me of like a lot like a lot

This game was very difficult, but I didn't give up! I'm glad I kept playing through, and the storyline was very nice.

ITS GRRRRREEATTTTT!!1- Tony the Tiger

It’s fantabulous

Fun with a cool ending. Way better than real high school. Thanks for writing this story.

It was absolutely amazing.

It's really silly in a good way.

What? Really, this was... something. Demons in schools? No. Just...no. This was... well, you could say it was a bit old fashioned, but I'm sure if the same author wrote another story now, it would be much better. Well, I guess it's okay, but I really don't think that it should get such a high rating. Oh, and did I mention that I hate random death links? Well, this isn't the worst, but it certainly isn't the best.

made me laugh at the end, especially at the "Feel the cold hard wrath of the Tether Ball"

dude this is great first story game i played on this website. im a cult hero ha.

I loved this game! it was hard and entertaining.

Best game ever, i would even intentionally lose just to see all the options. Had me dying of laughter 10/10.

Long but hilarious

Dope cyoa would def play again.

Some parts of this game were clever. Some of them were kind of crap. I played through the game mostly to try and comment, and partly because once I start something, I have to finish it. Play this game if there's really nothing else interesting you can do. It's not terrible, but it's not good.

AMAZING!!! some of the deaths were a bit gruesome i must admit but the plot is easy to understand and awesome to follow!

Ayyy that’s pretty good

Not since Goosebumps have I LOVED dying every second. That's not sarcasm, either. This made it hilarious, fun, and simultaneously dreadful to try again at surviving FHS. Incredible job.

I really enjoyed it! I kept dying though, and the deaths made me laugh out loud. They were totally random and gruesome. Thanks!

The boss battle at the end is okay at best

great, but hard

Cheesy deaths, Just a bad game in general.

Wow.. wasn’t expecting that but this is the best story I have read so far!

A for effort.

Saved my life at work thanks!!!! <3

It was really good and fun, I liked it.

I hated dying and then having to start over from the last checkpoint. I feel like it would be better if there were more ways to get to the end and not as many "You Died!" I also hated the part with the twins Jenny and Jonny. The combination to get past them was really confusing and it was really hard to figure out.

I thought it was great! Love the story! my friend and me were racing to see how fast we could get to the end of the day first. I think I won! The only thing was I caught several spelling and typing errors. For next time, make sure to double check! ;) :)

Fustrating at first but you get the jist of it

Awsome i would pay to play this

great job with the game

the best

this was one of the best games I've played on this site.

A little too difficult but other than that really fun

Good game. :)

i enjoyed it

This game is great, this should be a series and it should have at least 5 more sequels made to this masterpiece! I had so much fun playing this,and it gets really interesting and made me lol a lot. I keep returning to this game in hopes that there is more like it and that I can play it again. Honestly, to the person who wrote this great game, if you're thinking about writing more sequels or other games, I say go for it! ;)

t'was a fun game. I like how weird it was. I would join fairview cult in real life tbh but I'm a ginger so that's kind of an implied thing in my life. anyways cool game good job

Great game great time passer

super hard and CRAZY :P
I just want to say that I wish there was more of a satisfying ending. You win when the weird demon gym teacher's head shrinks and she dies, right?

Very interesting plot, but a lot of ways to die.

This is the best choose your story type games that I have played in months. The story, depth, and personality of the charecters pulled me closer to the story and the game.I hope you make more storys like this and I would like to play your games again.

It was really cool. A time killer for sure. It was very comedic, and you kinda had to think on your feet. Should make some graphics or make it into a game. I would totally play it again.

10/10 would not play again. (It was pretty good to be honest)

I really loved it. Some parts where really hard but I loved the humor in this story.

Not that great, tbh.

So average.

It was very fun, loved the random and funny deaths, and the final battles, they were amazing and well made,what made them better was the music I was playing in the background.still long, funny, explorative, and overall great!!

It was worth it

It's a very fun and interesting story to play with, lots of interesting death that you can encounter.

Needs more!

Nice story loved it it was very kewl.

Loved this game!! That doll will haunt me forever...

The actual game was awful and unrealistic, but the huge variety of ways you could die- if surreal- were quite entertaining,

Haha super fun! I hope you make another one

Ummm... Well it wasn't boring, it certainly was violent and you should try cheering up a bit. :D

i like reeses too much so I cant rate it higher then them soooo

i actually really enjoyed this game— it made me laugh, it frustrated me, it was enjoyable. two thumbs up.

Wow you're so insecure about getting rated that you make people complete the entire story before they can rate it wow...

it was fun as my first story/choice game

This needs to be made into a video game

that was hard, but SO worth it at the end! I loved this story and I would totally recommend it! it does take some time to finish, but if you read the hints, it may help:)

Very.....interesting to say the least, but I enjoyed it none the less

It was awesome, but I had a bit of trouble during the photography session. 10/10 rating!

Full criticism here in my part:
Grammar: 7/10. Can be understood for sure, but it has lots of fails here and there, and should be improved.
Creativity: 8/10. The story was good overall, with all that Fairview Cult stuff, but even i must agree a evil teacher is just too cliche.
Choice-making: 5/10. The choices are funny and allow for some comical remark, but it is too linear. It is either make the right choice or die.
Gameplay: 8.5/10. Not real difficult or big, but again, it is funny, allows for comical relief, and it makes some cool fights. However, i think that Fuddmeadow being defeated only with dialogue made it a very uninteresting boss "fight".
Overall, very good, deserves to be in the top-category, but some things just feel a bit rushed.

Frickin amazing 5/7 perfect score would defeat teachers with evil powers again

It was kind of weird… i dont know too science fiction-y for me

What did I get myself into?

It was well thought out and long, a little repetitive, but whatever.

Kinda boring overall, but I still liked the 4th wall breaking at the end.

A real ride!
It's totally worth it and the sense of accomplishment upon completion is there!
Do read!

Beautiful. Just beautiful x3

this was absolutely great I loved this sooo much

A fun and difficult game! It took me many tries, but it was really worth it. :)

this is pretty good its shocking how violent the school is

Reeealy long, but I love it! A little violent, at times, though.

Some of the deaths are frickin' hilarious!

Very good game!

lol

This was really fun.

This game was kinda fun if a little linear the fight scenes were fun. The end dragged on a bit but it was still pretty good

Honestly, TsukiNoBara is right. This game is boring, extremely linear, overly repetitive and only slightly better than most of the "one-page stories" on this site.

However, Melike and madglee are also very correct! This game averaged pretty low for me.

If I played only the first few pages I'd probably rate this a 3.

But, I didn't.

I stuck through the entire adventure. Heeding every word I heard. I followed the little clues, left and right and I uncovered Fairview's mysteries.

It wasn't too hard that I spent hours just to win so, I could say it too hard and sucked worse than Warrior Cats, but it forced to me think and ponder things like "Why did the author put this here?" or "Should I trust this guy or "Should i sneak away to "insert torture mechanism here" class?"

It was all-in all it wasn't that good but it wasn't that bad. Sometimes I found myself agreeing with Tsuki and often times laughing at that demon (Mrs. Someword And Some Other Word?) teacher's weakness at facing reality! XD

Anyways, I'd gIve this 5/8. It was too hard in the first time at the cafeteria (wasted 15 minutes thinking about the Bill Cosby poster and should have just gone to the vending machine) and the fight with Mrs. Hell Demon way too easy (but really funny)! :)

Fun!

great

goood

This game is disappointing. It seems rather pointless and boring. Choices do not mean anything since almost everything leads to death, and I did not find it funny.

hallarious

Not a fan of the writing style, and many of the choices were 'broken' in no matter which you picked, it was the same result and the same link as the other choices. No rhyme or reason as to which choice worked so it was all luck. Having said all that, I did play it till the end.

cool game

AWESOME1

This game is a beautiful piece of art. Everything about this game makes it super enjoyable for everyone, especially the end!

this game was great

Great job! I got confused on what to do in some parts but overall it was fun to play! Keep up the good work.

REALLY GOOD AND FUNNY GAME!!!

I was bored and thought, hey, why not? Turned out to be totally worth my time! I played scenes over and over again just to amuse myself with the stories from different angles and it was all written in such an interesting way! Plus, it was a decent length and plotline for an online game. Also, it wasn't like those annoying games that make you start from the beginning if you make a mistake.
Awesome! Play it!

-Fairview Cult Model Student

Nice ! :)

The Game was fun, but very hard, I continually tried going through the the game multiple times at least 30, I kept dying from the Demon bitch, she was to Needy of killing the Narrater and even when I didnt want to be in the cult the cult was alway trying to FORCE me into it. Over all the Game is for someone who can remember the games sequences and has lots of Patience as myself. Thank you for this Game, It was fun!

Great game

Though there were many spelling errors, the game overall was very enjoyable (and might I add, A LITTLE HARD) XD. I found myself failing time and time again, yet continuously replaying, in hopes of FINALLY finishing. I swear the final boss wasn't as hard as the first 3 levels, but all the same I reveled in it for almost 2 hours. Being compelled to retry several times until satisfied along with a competitive drive that's summoned from the 25% chance of not dying, is what brings me to realize the great potential this game has, and how somehow was able to sit through it all with ADD is truely astonishing. Great job.

i thought this game was great!!!

Personally, I don't see how this is rated 6/8. It is very repetitive and nearly impossible, plus the deaths don't make the slightest bit of sense. It is not-well-thought-out, aka it's very linear, since there's pretty much only on path through.

Nice, Great, challenging.

best realistic fiction text adventure ive ever played i remember my senior year of highschool going EXACTLY like this

IT'S AWESOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOME!!!

Even though the game is linear it is funny just seeing all the absurd deaths, and events that happen.

This game was really fun to play and it was just so over-the-top and dramatic. I loved it and did not expect it to be this good. ??

Please, don't waste your time on this story, it is the worst by far. The deaths made zero see sense and it was soooo repetitive. I feel as though watching grass grow is more productive then this.

AWESOME!!!

Weirdest game ever

It was pretty long, but i say that as a good thing, it kept me occupied for a while until I finally won.

It was good. But the first parts of it, ex: First period, Second, etc, will keep on guessing and guessing, so you won't die. Still, not bad, though.

This story was hilarious! I was stuck on Johnny/Jenny for the longest time lol

Amazing Game!!!!!

this was the best thing eva

Woh ! The story is good but the scene dor combining chemical reaction was really tough !

Seriously?! This game was so confusing! And how is it possible to die so many times in high school?

AWESOMENESS! You might not get it on your first try, (or 2nd,3rd,4th,5th, etc.) but it's worth the wait. Don't give up!

Very fun, interesting. It was a bit challenging for me at first, but I wasn't reading carefully enough. If you read carefully, you will be able to figure out which options to choose. It's fun, humorous, I had a good laugh, and painfully true to almost every school I've gone to. You'll enjoy it.

Ha! This was great! I died at least seven times, but I kept on starting over. I do wish it was more... normal, at least a little, but I love it anyway!

I love the logic of this game. I was laughing my head off when i died because of how stupid the deaths were. Furthermore, gr8 game m8, i don't wanna h8 so I'll r8 8/8.

Fun, wasn't bad

Amazing but the deaths are unrealistic but funny

it was addicting but after i finished i realized it wasnt very good. i only played until the end because i wanted to see what happened.

This isn't so bad but there was times when I got stuck like looking for the cafeteria.

Funny as nobs

it was very fun and very challenging
we would like to see a sequel of this game
it made us question our choices half the time

It's super long

It was meh, could do with branching paths

OMG, this is one of the BEST story games i've ever played(not that i played that much..) This story game has so many choices, twists and turns, and frustratingly awesome XD. I love it.. and well i made it to the end :D Keep up the good work!

the person who wrote this must be messed up, and the character you play as must be really stupid, the amount of time's I've died from doing normal things, it's just stupid...

Feels like it was made by an angry freshman student. It's horribly disgusting and the only saving grace it has is how imaginative and gruesome all of the death scenes are. It's really more fun to kill your character in the most awful ways you can than it is to try and beat the game.

Some of the deaths are rather cheap, however once you learn the general plot of the game (I.E Follow the cult) the adventure becomes a lot more enjoyable.

This was great!, good humour, good story, and great final battle

Great story

this is a great game :)

its fun it only took me 30 minutes! you have to think carefully

Nice story, long, but I finally finished it after 2 days! Really creative story!

that is some crazy stuff dude

Nice, just have to get into it. The deaths, as TsukiNoBara said WERE lame though, and it's pretty hard. Took up a lot of my time which could be a good thing or a bad thing. Okay. Bye.

this is nice but hard but it is worth it

The game itself was pretty fun, and the deaths were amusing. The first part was the best, while it dragged on, its like you didnt't really want to put any effort into it and wanted it to end. All and all pretty good.

SO FREAKING AMAZING

It was hard yet fun

This story was well-developed and had a nice plot.

the humor.. this is excellent and fun :D perfect school game though.

I died so many times, that the process became tedious. However, this is the story that inspired me to sign up to this lovely site! I loved how this story turned out in the end and it both made me laugh and cringe whenever I found a new path to follow.

Boring

I loved all the creative ways that caused you to die even though it took me a while to eventually get the hang of it.

It was really cool but really weird at the same time.

this game was so stupid. i honestly havent played a game this bad in years. DO NOT WASTE YOUR TIME!! it is absolutely revolting.

This is a pretty fun game with some interesting game mechanics, and pretty funny at parts. But it's a bit random and I can't help but feel that there are references / in-jokes that I don't really get.

cool

There was some humour but most of it is clicking the links to get past the boring parts, and there's a lot of clicking the back button...Not very fun to play.

AWESOOOOOME! I loved it! I especially enjoyed how creative you were with all the deaths! :DDD

Pretty funny, but you will have to backpage a lot he you want to finish it

I liked it. I found it quite amusing, for a school-based game. 7/8

My god that was painful, I even missed the last page completely because I wanted to see how far I was from the end and well...it was the end. The grammar wasn't great and this game is just tedious to beat. The story is random and linear.

It was actually a lot of fun! Well, I'd say it was more hilarious than anything else. Definitely worth playing. (I loved after choosing the "Extra-scenic route" and then going to the bathroom that it calls you a "poor, unfortunate moron lol)

I've played this games a couple times before and when I kept dying, I was surprised.. But I've finally won (just this once) and I feel great. The game was awesome by the way; very creative!

This was a pretty boss game. The story was nothing like I expected just starting the game. It was interesting, original, a little bit bonkers, and thoroughly enjoyable.

bad

good rate it a 5

Good game to past the time, its certainly intresting

Dude... LEAN ON THE WALL!

Almost no choices. ):

Humorous and fun

It's pretty good. I love the creativeness. I noticed that some links are mislabeled and switched though.

The game was okay, definitely not the worst, but not the best either

I thoroughly enjoyed this game! Great story line.

awesome

Very fun game, especially the last part, which I won't spoil.

OMG!!! So good. It was a little hard tho. BUT IT WAS SO FUN!!! DYING.

I liked it. Though, I would check my spelling more carefully.

yass

Its good game its interactive type

It was... okay, but some bits were pretty boring (like the cafeteria) and it would have been nice to see some choices that actually affected the story...

Good job! I did quite enjoy this game. I liked some of the humor too. Which is really good. Writting good humor in a book can be very difficult. So good job. I did notice at least one or two spelling mistakes, but not too much. Also I liked how you did the ending of the game. Maybe I'd explain why, but some people may get mad if I spoil it. :p.

i hate it when you dieeeeeeeee

Love it, funny deaths

too long, not engaging

That fight with the siblings annoyed me, but over all, well done. I'm glad I played it.

Amazing!At first I thought it was a bit generic, but it turned out to be extremely invigorating. <3

it was an interesting story. but i liked it

Really good game, great sense of humour.
I especially liked the fighting scenes.

Ugh ... Just played it to see what happens, but very linear with silly deaths all over

o-o Whoaaaaaaa. That was fun, but like... So confusing. xD But I loved it!

This game was pretty fun and the answers were hilarious! :-)

An interesting story. Not what I was expecting, but interesting

cool game and time consuming

I'm one for a bit more reading but the fact that each passage was short helped the game go faster and it was rather entertaining to see all the ways that you could die in a school (when it's rulled by something evil that is) it was entertaining though there only ever seemed to be one way to get through to the end or one ending that wasn't a death. I would have liked to see an ending where you could turn dark side.

That was an amusing way to spend an hour. Thanks.

awesome

This was really interesting and quite fun.

Nice stories, by the way I really like the moment we beat FuddMeadow in the debate, this game truly makes me wonders is there any of these mean teacher in my school =)

This game is terrible and I'll never get that time back.

shouldve been rated an 8 but NOTHING is better then resese cups

A fun tale I enjoyed. Not to easy and not to challenging.
***** Five stars from me :3

This was an amazing, immersive game!I would play it again

I found really really REALLY annoying that you didn't let me end the game if I died or lost. I hate games that force you to get the right ending to be able to rate and leave a comment

Totally addicting

not bad for wut it is

This game was great. The overall insanity of it was awesome, especially when the true 'story' emerged. LoL.
My only problem with the game is when you have to get to the cafeteria, it was a little confusing and I had to just click a bunch of times...

I found the death scenes to be out of line and just crappy, this story was just not working out for me.

booooooring. too many deaths!

So funny. Some battle scenes dragged on a bit, but I laughed out loud, hard, multiple times. Excellent job, thank you XD

very entertaining

Pretty Linear, you die you start over and change it, Pete and re-pete.

Loved it totally halrious (Pelled wrong) lol

If given the choice, don't ever do this game. Everything is cheesy, and, no offense, the deaths are stupid but very detailed. If you're one of those people who are really squeamish, I suggest not to play this game.

Awesome Approves!
Wow....
A long game. Very complex with minor grammatical errors. One thing I didn't like was the unpredictable and far-fetched deaths, and the looped links at some points. Lengthy and strong points and pages, and the plot kept the story going. Great job.
7/8

The game is very hard and the deaths outlandish... but its a GREAT story keep making them!!

THE BEST GAME EVER. I PLAYED IT 37 TIMES EXACTLY!!!. hARD TO NOT BE ADDICTED. i WISH THEY WOULD MAKE A SEQUEL OF THIS GAME. SPOILER ALERT: IRON BEATS PAPER.

That was so good! I've never played a short multiple-choice game so creative, relatable, and funny. Good work! Amazing!

Kinda boring! I hated reading all that!

Dude, it made me laugh, eventhough it twas long, long, and long, did I mention long? It had a funny ending...SO READ ON CULTS!

I thought it was awesome! The deaths were a little far-fetched but otherwise i found it very entertaining!

WOW that was awesome i love the part with feadmEADOW and annie being crused wit her last words :)

Very challenging, good job

WHAT KIND OF HIGH SCHOOL IS THIS??? I got more than one good chuckle out of this though, and feel like it's a decent way to spend an hour (of course, the dying part was a little...infuriating) So...nice, sir, nice job.

Chaotic, very very chaotic, but it's fun, who cares.

good getting to the cafe and bak is hard

Great game.

Was not as much fun at the end where there was only one option for a while. Other than that it was mildly entertaining. I especially enjoyed chemistry class with the chemistry nerds!

Very funny. Very random. Very... Excellent.

This is the first storygame I've actually completed... It was fun, but I kept having to redo everything! It would've been a lot worse if I had had to start all over from the beginning again.. thank goodness for the "start over at 7th period" etc.!!
Well, I guess this was worth it, nice job.

I really really loved this! The pepp rally was the best part, or course. My favorite battle was the battle with Annie, the evil CPR bot. All in all, best game ever!

Meh

Pretty good!

loved it :-D

A senseless, waste of time..
You take one step forward.. You died.
You play basketball.. You died.
You sleep.. You died.

It was great!

Terrible.
Be prepared for an incredibly ridiculous and nonsensical plot.

NOT even better than ur p**p

Not a big fan of some of the language and definitely not into the deaths but it was slightly amusing and probably took a bit of time to make and alot of time for me to finish...meh.

Pretty fun for an old text-based game. The high school element is still very relatable and accurate. I enjoyed the stereotyping of typical high school characters and over the top plot. Good well thought up game that the maker should be proud of.<3

Literally the funniest thing ever!! Just join the cult and all will be fine.

It was fun but there is room for inprovement, i had to retry it a couple of times and kept getting stuck on levels four and five :)

This game was soooooo stupid. There's no reality in it. If you mess up, then you start over, which loses you gamers. There's no graphics, which makes this incredibly boring and only played by people who have nothing better to do except for homework, and even that is better then this. This game could probably be cool if it was 3-D and you could make your own high school character. The plot sucks too. Evil demons, reLLY, THAT'S ALL YOU GOT. Plus this has nothing to do with high school at all, so why call it chooseyourstory if you can only make one choice with only one ending. It's all the same, you don't choose your own story at all, you just stare at a screen and click options until eventually you make the right path. I would probably love it if it was exactly like a high school. Choosing your classes and activities, your friends, crushes, love stories, graduating, maybe actually having a life like in sims, but better. There is so much you can do and this is not the way to go dude. Take some of these suggestions to MAJOR consideration and send a reply please. You might be surprised with the gamers that join and might actually be popular if you this thing.

WOW. BEST. GAME. EVER!!! I'll admit, at the beginning, I wasn't a big fan with all the death scenes and all, but it was worth it in the end. Great battle scenes, a bit linear during the end, but the rest had a lot of choices, so I'm good. Most certainly the best story game I have ever played thus far.

i kicked ass

First of all, the death scenes are my favorite part of this game. They're just ridiculous enough to make me laugh and not ridiculous enough to detract from the story. Although the options kind of disappeared in the last few pages, the quality of the dialogue made up for it very well. And after all, there was a large body of options and exploration in earlier sections, so why not let the end be story driven? Solid story, and definitely good for a few laughs.

loads of fun

Lol, death by words!!

The only complaint I have about this game is that the ending is cookie cutter other than that the game is great

MOST EXCELENT!

Better then doing Mary magdalen!

Gory sometimes, you know? I think you should change the gory parts. And there's some spelling and grammar errors.

ok

Hilarious game! It was a fun distraction and I beat it! I guess it's sad that I take pride in this...

Wow, that was pretty fun! Pretty crazy toward the end.

This is ha-larious!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i love it so much i have never laughed at a story so hard i love it,it had violence comedy and just crazyness. Like it was just to cool for school lol I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Good, game nice ending.

That was a long day. Very clever, especially the battle.

Subtly witty and hilarious.

Awesome, loved the boss fight. You should make a sequel. Ssomething like The coming of the Parent Teacher Association and make them like the four horsemen.

this was actually pretty fun. i loved the ending, and you taunting the teacher made me lol. ha good times, goodtimes.

Yeah.. that was ridiculous, at least the end was somewhat amusing.

Pretty hilarious. Every time I died, I was like "Oh darn... should've expected that... *plays again only to die.* DAMMIT!!" Thanks for making this xD

LOL, i actually really liked it. It was surprizingly very fun, and grabbed my attention. Most school games are boring, but the cult aspect made everything fun. I liked the end, fit very well. Best story I've seen in awhile, nicely done!

i like. but repetitive. end was epic.

This was a great story

I AM HERO

It was alright. The end was a little stretched out too far.

AMAZING!!!!

I loved it! not what i was expecting and i got on occasion a little irritated but the sundy of humerouse events smoothed that over realy quickly.

hahaha i loved it :)

it's really good, it got a little confusing at some points...but apart from that, very funny, and it kept me occupied for ages!!

I thought it was a fun little waste of time. Lol I got sucked in! Once I started playing, I couldn't stop. =(

It was a very intresting game indeed. I thought the begining was a little tough and the Cafeteria almost took a whole hour. lol, Anyway i am going to go check the other games you have so bye! Make a Part 2 for this, Based on College life lol.

Pretty good, I like this as much as the first one.

Haha, it was fun relieving the same crap I did (or rather didn't do) in High School, without having to actually be there. Good story.

FINALLY!! It was the most linear story I've ever seen, but I liked it to an extent.

Reallly long, but realllly fun. XD I got stuck in the cafeteria for a while, then I was crushed by a wall... (By the way, I am now scared of leaning on school walls. o.O)

"•Impress the cute girl/guy next to you and do them as fast as you can"
lolwut?

Man this game was still just as fun the 2nd time!!!

Man... This Game Was Pretty Gruesome! it Was Awesome Though... Very Well Made!

lol another reason to NOT go to school XD i died alot i got killed by: acid. drowning. a door X5. crushed. head snap X4 and a bunch of others.

Wow... I didn't know school could be this lethal... :P

THAT WAS HARD

I loved the boss battles! Why can't they all have them? Funny, too.

Very long, I liked it. Especially the final face-off. Nice humor added in there, although most of the time I found myself systematically clicking links.

this game is good and worth playing. I was playing it and my friend next to me in the computer lab was so intrigued by it that he opened the website up and played it with me. classic game that i just never got a chance to play and i am happy i played it now.

nice, funny.

wow really funny, i loved this game, i give great credit to the writer

This game is very chalenging. As long as you're careful, you'll do well in it.

That game is awesome! it was hard to me at first and the end only had one choice everytime, but thats ok...

OWNED, WAY LONG AT THE END THOUGH

good but sorta just kept going ON AND ON AND ON!!!!

Awesome... I'm suddenly fearing my upcoming freshman-hood.

Pretty hilarious. Great story. My only real complaint is that throughout the last twenty pages or so of the story, there was only one link to a page.

Finally, I made it through. It's good.

It took some time, but I won! I tried again and again so I could finally tell you how much I liked it!

frikin awesome game! very few choose your own adventure books have had me excited at the climax. i didn't like how many times you had to attack the siblings, tough.

Great game! I like that you can restart from the last completed period instead of having to go all the way back to the beginning. Clearly you put a lot of effort into this. (One thing, how come you have to have beaten the game to leave comments?)

Awesome!! The life of a freedom-fighter determined to bring down the dark power of the education-system...damn, I wish this was available as a download!!!!

Yes! I did it again! I finished it! Go me!

BTW, VERY GOOD GAME!

A few spelling errors and rather linear, however...

THIS WAS A FREAKING AWESOME GAME!!!!!

Plus, I liked how you used a lot of variables, except you might as well have used items too, but it was still a FREAKING AWESOME GAME!!!!!

best game on the site

If this was a calendar, I'd never stop eating it. That was so cool, you should so chill out and have an apple.

An excellent story. Worth an 8 out of 8 (because rating things out of 10 is for sissies).

Excellent! Tons of choices, great story, hilarious plot, very clever fight scenes. At first I thought it was kind of generic, and then I really got into it - images of high school were definitely conjured in my mind! ROFL! Annie is my favorite. I wouldn't change a thing.

the ending fizzles with no choices, but awesome story. makes me think twice before i publish a school story lol

interesting...

Man that game was good!But the last fight kinda stunk. :(
7/8. It would have been 8/8 if it wasnt for that last fight.

This. Was. HILARIOUS!!!!!!!!!!

Definately...unique. Not terrible, though.

i heart it

This is the most enlightening game I have seen on http://myadventuregame.com/. I will definitely play the next one. Peace to you, my (insert race here) brother!

EXCELLENT!

Played and Rated.

This was a very interesting game

Disturbing to think high school is viewed like this. It's hard for me to believe cliques were this bad, but student council doing nothing and teachers abusing power is spot on.

Wow that was cool

i just had to play it again... PLEASE MAKE A THIRD ONE, pweez? :(

i didnt earn this... i lost probably 200 times... LITERALLY... now, to actual comments: THIS IS THE BEST GAME ON ANY TEXT-BASED GAME SITE EVER TO EXIST, TO EVER EXIST, AND THAT EXISTS NOW!!!!!!! WOOT WOOT!!!!! now on to your sequel... :)

Very Good, this is gonna hurt me BAD but gasp
Length: Good
Laughs: Good
10/10: AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO IT CANNOT BE NO!!!!! I hat giving hishscores, I sware I shall find ways to critisize the earth.

Wow. I liked it alot, but it was VERY hard for me to get the key to the elevator! And to get past Lunch. It was good, but it got REALLY boring at some parts, and too much reading on the final battle. Not really that many choices, except for stuff like "Beat them up!" and "Whoop their @$$!" and stuff like that.

That wasn't too bad. It turned too linear at the end. Whats up with Fairview and all the demons running around anyways? lol

That is one of the few greatest games ever. Even though I died a few times and got lost. I accually won with a good ending. I have seen a few of these, in fact it's the second if I don't include mine.(Good or Bad) I give you a 94.37294629463092747390673056730568387037342749%

COOL GAME

******use the BACK KEY********* really helps

It was a little long, but good, and pretty damm funny.

hahaha, that was pretty good! It was long enough to keep you occupied, had enough violence in it, and it was very entertaining!

good stuff, I enjoyed it

WOW!!!!!!!!! The first time I played it I couldn't get out of the principals office at the beging. But now after minutes and minutes of ice cold battels with evil teachers and dementod schol spirit nerd I finaly prevailed. Now on to FAIRVIEW HIGHSCHOOL #2!!!!!!!!!!!!! Buwahahahahahahaha!!

This was an awesome game

Woot! Done it! Great game!

WOO-HOO! And I only had to hit &#34;Back&#34; about... one... two... a billion jillion times!

that game was awesome!<br>

Nice game. Funny.

I win! That was fun. Very fun.

This was cool!

this was pretty pimp for a game about school i would play it again

Great game, but the end with Mrs. Fuddmeadow(sp?) had no multiple choices, making it too easy.

That was a cool story! I actually, on my first try, didn't make any mistakes!!! I really can't believe it, because on all the other ones, i alwayse die.

I LOVED THE GAME!!! there were so many options and it was really hard in some parts and so long, it was awesome!!! <br><br>BEST GAME I'VE READ ON THE WEBSITE

cool.

Man it is 2 fckn Am And i started at 11:oo <br><br>this game had lots of work put into it and was awsome<br><br>although u can die for stupid reasons<br><br>and u can't beat the game without using the back button on ur browseronce or twice..but hey<br><br><br><br><br>I WON!<br><br><br><br><br><br>cool game awsome adventure<br><br><br><br><br><br><br>Play Ba2<br><br>

This game was funny,hard to figure out and very DAMN COOL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Use the hints and go back to what you messed up on and try all of the options. By the way...you spelt Yellow 5 wrong! lol :)

Cool game, pretty funny.

Neat game, very funny

tooooooooooooo easy

Took long but was wicked!!!!!!!!!!!

The game was quite controlling, that is, each path had only one correct choice, and only a less-than-half percentage of these had any sort of advice, making this game more of a &#34;pick-something-at-random hope-for-the-best hit-the-browser's-back-button-if-you-die&#34; than a real Choose Your Own Adventure. If I wanted to gamble I'd go to Las Vegas. That, and the grammar and spelling sucks.

This game is great! It's hilirious, and has only a few minor spelling/grammar errors, which don't really matter. It's pretty hard, and I died a lot, but it was fun. PLAY THIS GAME!!

Nice game. But the &#34;final battle&#34; didn't have any choices, so it wasn't really a battle.

and i thought the lisa game was choice, i almost peed myself with this one... well, not really, but you know...

Robyn Rocks!

Yeah, i beat the game. and i talked to kim wheeler about fairview cult on the news and made us look good, yet the interview did not get aired. perhaps kim and mrs. fuddmeadow had an evil alliance.....

I kicked that [explitive refering to female dog]'s arse.

good game new version maybe is needed. including sideways roadkill.

Good game. Where can I find out more about the fairview cult though? sounds interesting....

it was pretty good until the end which lacked wit. the conversation thing wasn't too funny. there are also lots of grammatical and spelling errors.

You forgot the Junior and Baby CPR dolls. I played and conquered this game again cuz I was bored. Some of the jokes cracked me up.

Pretty harsh on gym class, Alex. I liked the evil Annie T-1000 doll. Annie, Annie are you okay!?! Help, someone call 911!!! Boohahahahahaha!!!

three words: alex misspelled &#34;genius.&#34;<br><br>great game, by the way. i was laughing the whole way through it.

One word. Genious.