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3 months ago

Though I appreciate you let me keep cunt. ^_^

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3 months ago

> Though I appreciate you let me keep cunt. ^_^

 

I nominate Avery's above post to be the initial post for Interesting Comments 6.

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3 months ago
It's easy to see you're the professor around here, because that's friggin brilliant.

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3 months ago

I need to stop making these comments. >.<

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3 months ago
And this will be for thread 7.

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3 months ago

Nah, I'm sure I'll say something considerably more retarded by then. ^_^

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2 months ago

This is the new IC thread.

Oh and here's the other threads for more IC fun.

IC5

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2 months ago
i try to save neville and die? that's not good writing, it's just mean. no offense, your probably nice and just not a great writer. my advice would be to try to keep the reader from dying. most readers dont like to die and making it happen can really ruin a story and cause you to lose a fan. its a fine balance. my personal style is to only kill the reader when they choose the deliberately obvious stupid choice, amd then i try to make their death a amusing in some way to soften the blow. i figure if you spit in the angry talking bear's face, you must really want to die, right? lol. good luck. -- joe on 11/25/2020 1:06:08 AM with a score of 0 Mostly just amused by this illiterate no account going on about 'his personal style'. Compared to this commenter, the story itself may as well have been written by Shakespeare. Sorry, was that too mean?

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2 months ago
The famous Dunning-Kruger effect: People of low ability overestimate their ability. Or, in other words, if they don't have a clue, they don't have a blue about having no clue, either.

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2 months ago
Why the hell is this simulation shit only for boys? Anyways, it's worthless...so peeps don't even try.
-- Ann Kayne on 4/17/2020 3:56:34 AM with a score of 0

A little too inappropriate for my taste. Dude, if you are going to put innuendos in, make the rating higher, please. The writing was pretty good, but every other option was depressing. Don't take it so seriously. Try to have fun!
-- SquattingPigeon on 2/26/2019 11:03:46 AM with a score of 0

I wish that u gave options for ravenclaw and hufflepuff because my house is ravenclaw and i know there are hufflepuffs
-- mary on 1/5/2019 8:04:55 PM with a score of 0

This is Jesika, i like the game but there is a lot of reading to do, major turn off. This seems boring but other than that good idea and concept.
-- jbranch1998 on 8/24/2015 1:15:35 PM


All on the same story. It's just some mediocre Harry Potter thing but that sure does seem to be all it takes to get these kids all worked up.

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one month ago

I'm Going Out

This game fucking sucked dicks. You fucking suck at making games and you should just give up. Kill yourself bitch, no one needs you around. :)

-- Lia Worton on 11/27/2020 12:23:50 PM with a score of 0

Desperate Heart

Fuck this game. It is very stupid and dumb. Go kill yourself since you have nothing better to do than make games you know people will hate. Why are you even alive. Like, no one cares about and your parents don't either.:) They just pretend that they do so you don't commit suicide. I made my little sister kill herself and I don't regret it. She was a little bitch and she deserved to die. She was also stealing the attention from me and now, I have ALL the attention. My family never gave a fuck about her anyway. You should kill yourself too!:) #god die cause no one cares about you!:)

-- Lia Worton on 11/27/2020 1:27:59 PM with a score of 0

Well now, that's the kind of enthusiastic reviews we like to see around here. Too bad Lia was too much of a faggot to actually sign into the site though.

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one month ago
Telling kids to kill themselves, ahhhh, really takes me back to the Warrior Cats days.

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one month ago
:)

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10 days ago

... I'm confused by this one. So, she made her sister kill herself because she was stealing all the attention... But the family never gave a fuck about her... So, why were they giving her all the attention? ... I am over thinking this retarded comment. ^_^

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one month ago

That horrible new one-page storygame

Damn bro. I feel you. This story speaks to me, and I think you let it tell your feelings true. That being said, I think there's room for improvement. Don't let the haters around here get you down. I know it's cliche to say, but you're really worth your weight in wood. I don't say that often to folks, but you really would've made a perfect fuel source back when anyone gave a shit about you. It's a shame that you were allowed to grow up like this, alive, and all. I wonder how nature allows shit-stains like you to be literate long enough for you to put out this pepperoni dog vomit content. 

The years I've aged from cringing cannot be replenished, and I hope for each wrinkle on my head that you lose 10 years off your godforsaken life. God wasted his time giving you an average sized dick. I won't bring your mother into this, as I'm sure she already knows this of you, but at least apologize to yourself for being this way. Consider consolidation of what pity those around you have left for you, and take advantage of the dumbasses that showed you any kindness to pull yourself up by the bootstraps and jump down, down, down into the ditch you belong. 

I hope this has inspired you to reconsider yourself and recognize the pain you have caused everyone around you. Pissant.

-- Ford on 11/30/2020 6:30:30 PM with a score of 0

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one month ago
And context:
Ford was helled in the discord(along with me), and his punishment was to write an personal insult for the girl who wrote this story. Apparently he didn't even bother reading it, and typed this thing out. Needless to say, Mizal immediately helled him again. Poor Ford.

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one month ago
The comment would've been perfectly fine if he hadn't misgendered the author, thus proving he was too lazy to read literally even a single page. And Malk had given him such an easy task.

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one month ago

Misgender someone at CoG: Get banned for 1000 years.

Misgender someone at CYS: Get thrown in HELL.

It's official, we're the most progressive IF site on the internet.

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one month ago

Ahhh, that explains the new review on the Book of Vanishing Tales! I was surprised to see one from Ford, but it's actually pretty detailed. (I really gotta go back and fix those typos.)

 

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one month ago
I told him to make Leora do it, she would've probably liked it more.

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one month ago
I really enjoyed the book of vanishing tales. The little puzzle when you have to procure the gift was very well done, and all the little stories really gave a cool vibe to the world.

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one month ago
Yeah, I like it a lot, I should probably do a review sometime...

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one month ago
I feel like this story was very sudden. Didn't have much context. How were we supposed to know that the hill would be too steep? There also were only three endings, two of which you both died, and one where you lived, with no way to tell which one you would die at. You'd think that you wouldn't die moving to the village to get a new home for the winter... after all, you were trying NOT to die in the freezing winter cold, correct? Oh well.
Also, there were not enough choices. I didn't know either of the characters that well and I didn't know which choice would have whatever reaction. How were we supposed to know that when she prayed for forgiveness she would hang herself the next morning? Very sudden, not a lot of choices, and didn't know the characters. Those were the problems for me.
-- Art3mis on 12/7/2020 10:28:08 AM with a score of 0


I just laughed because it's such a long list of complaints, and yet the one thing missing here is anything about the corpse fucking. I guess that part she was fine with.

Of course she got the main character's gender wrong too, so maybe she just wasn't paying that much attention.

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one month ago
which one is this for?

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one month ago

Inseperable. Her gay romance story.

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one month ago
Billie eilish on 12/7/2020 for Broken Wings

HOW DARE U HURT MY BIRD, THE BOY SHOT MINE AND THATS VERY MEAN. CURSE U TO ANIMAL CULTURE, IM CALLING MY LAYWER TO KIIDNAP AND MAKE IT HAPPY CAUSE U SO MEAN AND BAD BOI YOUR THE BIG BAD WOLF U BAD MEAN KIID, IM GONNA FIND U. IM GONNA EAT UR SKULL AND ALSO. COMO SE CACA. IM CONSTIPATED.

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one month ago
There were a few of these all by the same spammy retard using celebrity names, but someone cleaned them up before I got to more than a couple.

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one month ago
Yeah, I removed them as I went.

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one month ago

Soul Thief by MHD

weird and religious to ugly and boring, terrible plot and no good story its trash fucking trash shit 
-- shart_face on 12/7/2020 11:05:20 PM with a score of 0

Oh what the hell, this fucktard attacked MHD, she’s never done anything to anyone. She just brings joy to the forums through her drawings.

Only the lowliest of cowardly shitheads would do such a thing which is obvious since they just did a driveby comment rather than actually signing up and saying it more directly.

Probably has a shit fetish too given the name they did use. Sad!


The Horror Inside by Ogre

trash garbadge some moron made it very short and bad garbadge trash trash trash made me loose hair. add some story you piece of trash garbadge morno mdmasakmas 
-- bobo hobo on 12/7/2020 11:02:33 PM with a score of 0

Lol he’s sure got your number Ogre.

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one month ago
Lol, I was just coming here to post those. I went ahead and deleted them since I figured it was the same spammer from before.

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one month ago
"Made me loose hair?" That was never the intended goal, but it certainly is now...

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one month ago
Dark one on 12/9/2020 for Rogues
Imma be completely honest that was one of the best stories I have read. If not the best ending I have read. Have you written any others?

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one month ago

ching chang chong, the fortune cookie is always wrong

-- misa kim on 9/1/2020 1:05:55 PM with a score of 0

On Rogues lol

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one month ago

fucking crap? it didnt mention fuckn sex or get erotic not fuckin ONCE my fucking boner hates yalls guts!

-- Brianna Tupman on 2/5/2020 3:36:36 PM with a score of 0

Also Rogues

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one month ago

seeing as I just finished reading through all the paths, I'm excited to say this story is one of the most diverse that I've had the pleasure of reading. Endmaster seems to have a way with words and worlds that always seems to suck me in. anyone that has an appreciation of fantasy worlds, will enjoy this immensely, so If ya haven't read this yet, I'd ask ya to stop reading this, and read the frikin story.

onto the spoilers!

one thing I am actually disappointed in was the fact that the DK was an option to go after killing klint. ya get there, and get sort of recruited by the ECS, but then you just get caught and killed no matter what. it felt like Endmaster wanted explore the DK and the ECS, but after building all the other paths decided that was enough and just left that path hanging. that was going to be that last place I went, but it didn't go anywhere unfortunately.

A similar thing happened with seemingly minuscule choices. an example would be when Isabella kicks Rouge out of his Holgard tomb. he leaves, but we never explore what happens next, which I'm sure him being an immortal vampire and all, he could have done some sort of exciting stuff. Just look at Isabella, she lived through tons of countries rise and fall, she saw the beginnings of the ECS! what would Rogue have seen or been apart of? and thats just one example.

Okay, done with the criticisms, so for those who managed to read through my rant, I got lots more complements, because I gave this an 8/8 on the rating thing despite those two issues. this story is extremely immersive, so immersive I'd say that it's easy to become invested in all of the characters and romances. even some characters that got basically no screen time still seemed to seem interesting. the baroness is an honorable mention for me, because even though I personally wouldn't want to go to one of her parties, it was still a spectacle to read. warts was my favorite non-romantic interest character, because of how he always seemed to be there for Rogue, no matter what crap Rogue would give him. also I liked his gift when he started working for the baroness, it made me laugh to think that Warts thought that Rogue would like it, even though he did.

on to the romances. my personal favorite just had to be Tanya, I mean, how could you not find it adorable that even though she is a friggin succubus, she's still a virgin. I know that she's only half succubus, and that she avoided sex just to not become one, but it still makes me laugh. also, I really like how she interacts with Rogue, and how their interactions slowly become more warm and open. it's slow (not story-wise, but in-world-wise), but works well. Tanya is an angel despite the fact that she's a demon, and you can't convince me otherwise.

speaking of angels, my third favorite romance (i'm sorry for skipping NO. 2, but this just flowed too perfectly on accident) would be Yvette, even though she is 1/4 angel, she's close enough that it counts. I don't have too much to say about her due to her not having too much screen time, but she's still an angel. The fact that there are also celestials in this universe make me so amazed, even though in a way it kinda makes sense. god's would have to have immortal servants, cuz the mortal ones are too fickle. Yvette is really sweet. I'm kinda sad that I had to lie to end up with her, but in the end, Trinity was totally worth it, the little children in this book are perfect (except for Mara when she was a kid) it's easy to get attached to them too.

number 2 favorite romance would have to be Zal. she's the only real competition in my eyes against Tanya, because even though she does come off as "a bit guiding," she always tries to stick by you. when I was introduced to her after Annah comes with Rogue, I instantly liked her, and I liked that she changed, and slowly stopped wanting to be a criminal. after the first taste of what I liked about her as a character, I actively searched for a way to end up with her, which makes me happy that that comes true in epilogue one, which by default due to this ended up being my favorite ending, even though Tanya isn't in it.

now that I'm done with that, y'all's can learn about my favorite endings.

as I said epilogue 1, Son of Innkeeper, is my favorite because Rogue ends up with Zal. What I did not say however was WHY else I liked it. one of those reasons was that it was so interesting to know that this story comes full circle with Innkeeper. he becomes a pretty decent person, gets married, has a loyal group of friends, doesn't have any targets on his back, and his family can be proud of him. most other endings can't say the same about many of these things. also, I find it funny that he ends up having to vote for Mr. Reynolds.

second place would then have to go to epilogue 10, Hero. this one makes Rogue out to be frikin amazing. he takes out 2 criminal organisations, leads his own, gets a succubus to fall in love with him, defends Holgard from an entire invasion, gets so in love with Tanya that he ends up killing other girls that he had sex with just because they were inferior to her in a literal and sexual way. warts somehow sticks by him, and he's one of the only main side characters that survive as long as Rogue.

also, honorable mention to epilogue 5, stability. this ending is great because ya know, Trinity.

anyone still reading this is crazy, but if ya did, congratulations! this story was amazing and rivals that of eternal on amazingness. 20 gold stars. Endmaster keep being an amazing creator on this website!

-- jcopman on 8/2/2019 8:37:00 PM with a score of 0

Some anonymous put in a lot of effort to comment on Rogues

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one month ago
Has there ever been a featured comment by a noob?

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one month ago

Don't think its possible

But the dude could have capitalized and used punctuations and whatnot. 

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one month ago
True, there also was some spelling errors and stuff.
I applaud his effort, though

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one month ago

Lots of times in the past since there weren't many featured comments. Nowadays we tend to only feature comments if they're by a registered member.

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one month ago
Yet not enough effort to use his Shift key.

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one month ago
And I thought Brianna was a female name.

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one month ago
Ryan Kirkpatrick on 12/11/2020 for The Secret of the Mysterious Door
Thanks for a clean story that I can share with my classroom


Poor guy, I can just read the weariness between the lines here. You know he searched for so long.

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one month ago

I'm still wondering how the hell all these teachers stumbling on this site and even given a cursory glance they think "This is a great place for my class to look at!"

I mean true it's a great place and there is none greater where a young mind can learn the essentials of reading and writing, but I know not everyone feels that this place is wholesome for some strange reason.

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one month ago
Perhaps it's the premise of "chooseyourstory" and the fact that people can play, create and share that really attracts people of such.

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one month ago
Pretty sure Gower could have a field day with his classes here:

Look at this story. Find all the English errors in it. Hint: there are over 50 in the first 2 pages.

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one month ago
GeniusFangirl on 12/12/2020 for Inseparable
Really good! I enjoyed the twist where he actually died. It confused me for a second, I thought I'd be like one of those stories where the main character realizes they've been in love with a long-dead person, but confusion is good! When it was sorted out it made it even better! Highly recommended.



So close to enlightenment, yet so far...

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one month ago
p on 12/16/2020 for Private Game for Natalie
It was so nice I like seeing people look back and remind each other of the good times

Gower,
I know you published that by mistake, but I'm glad you left it up because you sure warmed this noob's heart.

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one month ago

A Mutt's Purpose

SO SAD AND HAPPY AT THE SAME TIME! SAPPY! HAD!
-- Ravendash on 10/18/2017 10:47:05 AM with a score of 0

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one month ago
Paula Brandenburg on 12/17/2020 for Private Game for Natalie
I think the game is great but you can make were you can see yourself and know who you are with

Well Gower, you can make were you, or not?

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10 days ago

Does Bruno Mars is gay?

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one month ago

u don't need to know this on 12/21/2020 for Phoenician Trade Game
it is good but I like something that is more interesting to actually look at instead of just clicking on a bunch of links, I also have Questions about the finishing of this, why is the "you win" part of this gam me drowning? that doesent make any sense, like what the heck people!? is it that hard to make an ending where I DON'T die cause I've made plenty of redirected slideshows that are more entertaining than this piece of **** and i think you know what I mean by that and if u just figured out why i'm like this, weeeell good job and also, no shit Sherlock


Many stupid children have left comments on this one over the years, but this may be the most entertaining of all.

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one month ago
nomansland1 on 12/22/2020 for Dead Man Walking (Zombie Survival)
Was my first time reading a choose your own adventure novel online, was a pretty good read, the only thing was that it felt it ended aburtly with you getting the sheriff and kids to all come with you into the wilderness and sorta felt like it ended all too soon, but other than that was a fun Read.

This noob is quite wholesome and good, but I still never get tired of the 'this million word game is too short' comments.

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one month ago
james on 12/23/2020 for Ground Zero
I clicked on an rss feed on the IFDB website, and, found this. now, I really enjoyed it, however, what happens to you and, beccy? is there a part2? overall, the story was great.


Listing games on the IFDB is cool and good, although I can't say I've ever had a good experience with anyone named James.

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23 days ago

A Super Tale

1 point, that's right. I reject your attempts to make me do the plot. 

-- BaronDarklordMcFukko on 1/2/2021 9:19:53 AM with a score of 1

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23 days ago
That seems like a dangerous enemy.

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22 days ago

8 goals, 28 rolls

HOLY CRUDE I HAD TO PALY LIKE 59 TIME TO GET THIS HIGH OF S SCORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 0.0

-- CeruleanFlare on 12/25/2016 1:06:10 AM with a score of 123

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16 days ago
William on 1/8/2021 for The Donner Party
grammer issues

You don't say.

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16 days ago
Lol, I saw that one.

From an early age it has always delighted me whenever I see someone telling someone else that there grammer is bad and their are mispelled words.

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16 days ago
Eye Sea Know Mist Takes @ Awl. ^v^

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15 days ago

The Foreigner

The author is so obviously a 13 year old writing out their fantasies of being the most abused kid ever so they can justify violent revenge. It's all a bit silly.

-- HHH on 1/9/2021 5:13:52 PM with a score of 0

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12 days ago

A Very Special Choose Your Story


It was alright I guess, not the best one I've played by far. The only part I got pissed off at was the homophobia there at the beginning. Not cool bro. 
2/8

-- bondogggle on 1/13/2021 11:37:20 AM with a score of 0

Lol fag.

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12 days ago

A very special review for a very special choose your story!

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12 days ago
A fag? Where?!

It may sound silly, but I have an irrational fear of those.

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11 days ago

Thanks but I like frogs.

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11 days ago

Whether you like frogs or girls doesn't really matter, you're still acting like a faggot, lol.

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11 days ago

2/8? 

Is this person a retard of some kind? 

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11 days ago
It appears so.

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11 days ago

I Went to the Graveyard

the store is horrible fuck off

-- eliana on 1/14/2021 12:52:49 AM with a score of 1

Well I guess she told Bilbo.

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10 days ago

Speaking of A Very Special Story, here's the Infinite Story version!

Didn't really need to add the fag bit, as that was already implied. It's best to be subtle in these matters.

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10 days ago

I don't know what the full context is, but I'm sensing that another person misunderstood a joke.

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10 days ago
Commended by BerkaZerka on 1/15/2021 12:28:37 PM

Basically.

You see AL, there are a large amount of people who get butthurt over the most minor of things, these people are generally known as faggots.

Contrary to popular belief, being a faggot isn't about your gender or sexual preference, it's about being a whining bitch. Generally around here, we try to curb that sort of behavior. We're not always successful as it still pops up from time to time (Like recently with hilarious results) but we try.

Now in the case of AVSS, this one definitely roots out a lot of faggots allowing us to see them and mock them for who they are (Like recently with hilarious results)

AVSS also roots out the fucktards as a side effect since there is a CLEAR WARNING on the story about how it MIGHT be offensive to delicate poppets yet many of them go and read it anyway, and then whine like faggots about it. I have no sympathy. Such degenerates should be mocked.

Anyway, I hope this was a valuable lesson to you AL to avoid such dangers yourself, I know you're young and still learning about the world, but so far you've managed to maintain the wholesome path. Take this wisdom and continue your wholesome non-faggy journey!

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10 days ago

 Take this wisdom and continue your wholesome non-faggy journey!

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10 days ago

I am so glad we have you. ^_^

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10 days ago
Hmm...

What does he mean by "us"?

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10 days ago

Presumably the LGBT community. Some of their members tend to think I don't like them for some strange reason.

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10 days ago

TRASH

The book was witty, but I feel like there were too many curse words.
-- AestheticLlama on 10/28/2019 8:11:25 PM with a score of 0

But the curse words made it better! Shush 2019 AL. >:(

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8 days ago
No Thanks on 1/14/2021 for Detective 1: Blacksea Island There was no purpose in many of the questions other than to waste time. Why ask about the other volunteers? That question never mattered. Finding the gun didn't matter. There was no way to confront Iris or ask more questions when we found more evidence. The mystery was obvious because you relied on some of the most common tropes of women with changed last names as a primary tool of literary obfuscation and also women being the victim and the murderer. Also. Why only 2 women and both were in the plot? Not only would another 50 yeae old or 45 year old woman have given you a reasonable second suspect but it also would be good to have other female charactees who aren't part of the main plot. Women can be normal background support characters too, and in fact it is weird if your only female characters are the only characters that matter. Volunteers are normally mostly women and you decided to somehow avoid that unless they fit your plot specifically even when men were used generically. It is ok to have a woman who isn't there for any big reason, just like men, just like in real life. And also you literally wrote a gross weird flirty scene with a 15 year old girl - a CHILD - and a 20 year old adult man? Ok. No. Please. Just make him younger. Why would you make it weird? Her friend just died and now she is all hot and bothered by some older guy? Nah. Sorry. That might be how a 15 year old boy would act, but come on. Other than that why did you also have to again comment about the female protagonist's future romantic life in the end anyway anyway? You would not have done that with a boy character. Also please next time have literally any other branches of the narrative, have any of the red herrings seem actually like they lead anywhere, and also allow me to finish without running down the clock. Also why could i only pick up 1 item and it was useless? Lots of text sure, but no substantive dialogue. All of the red herrings were obviously pointless, ages made it all immediately obvious. It was quite linear. Some of this was fine overall but it could have been so much more. And i know you are reading this and feeling hurt or insulted or defensive but as an interactive author to another author, take the criticism as genuine feedback because i definitely am not alone here. It makes you better as an author to reflect from other perspectives and improve. I didn't try especially hard to read this textwall, but a large portion of it seems to be ranting about gender, and then there's the lolworthy line 'as an interactive author to another author'. Like, no, you no account bitch, you don't get to make that claim with nothing to back it up. Likewise the insistence that "they are not alone" and that others definitely have the same opinion. Who? Where? Of course it's unusual seeing anyone who hasn't even bothered to make an account post a comment this size at all. Out of all the authors on the site, somehow it was Will that went and really riled them up. kek

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8 days ago

"And also you literally wrote a gross weird flirty scene with a 15 year old girl - a CHILD - and a 20 year old adult man? Ok. No. Please. Just make him younger. Why would you make it weird? Her friend just died and now she is all hot and bothered by some older guy? Nah. Sorry. That might be how a 15 year old boy would act, but come on. Other than that why did you also have to again comment about the female protagonist's future romantic life in the end anyway anyway? You would not have done that with a boy character."

Lot of assumptions here. Why would a 15 year boy act like that and not a 15 year girl? There's no real indication that Will wouldn't have commented about a male protagonist's future romantic life at the end either.

Still I'm always sort of amused when I see complaints like this on Will or Berka's stories mainly due to their stories never going out their way to be offensive and people still bitching about something being offensive.

Also "driveby guest" comments are from sub-humans that were too cowardly to make an account in the first place.

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8 days ago
I can't even remember a flirting scene, out of place or otherwise. I'm guessing whatever it was was half imagined or just the girl thinking the guy was cute or something. There were two obvious issues with that story, one was the run on sentences and passive style, and the other was that someone got hurt in the arm by a shotgun at point blank range instead of having a hole the size of a baseball blown through their torso. Anyone mad enough to go on an unhinged rant about who doesn't even bring those up just has a weird bug up their ass about gender and sexuality. A woke prude, what an odd combination.

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6 days ago

Gay and Depressed

hahaha i now see a burguler in the mirrior
-- kaden on 10/11/2019 8:00:56 PM with a score of 0

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6 days ago

Someone smoked a little too much of the devil's lettuce that day.

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6 days ago

Unless... They were the burguler all along! ^_^

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2 days ago

The Raven

This story turned me gay. I'm so glad I found it. Good work and I am 50 years old

-- I am 50 years old on 3/12/2020 1:10:09 PM with a score of 0

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2 days ago

The story turned you gay? Lol. We also don't care how old you are, "I am 50 years old"!

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2 days ago

I guess it's to establish just how efficient the game is at turning people gay, since the older generation can be pretty homophobic. ^_^