Plot Twist: Hetero_Malk writes a story that's SO GOOD that Endmaster has no choice but to SHAME everyone...including those who didn't enter the contest! Ford becomes president of The United States of America and Ogre is forced to get a new job somewhere in Detroit... (Mizal probably also did something important but idk how to fit her into the plot...or the twist for that matter...) Also Suranna dies... (but not in irl cause that would be very sad...)
*Dies of laughter* XD XD XD
:(
Lol
Suranna, I'm not laughing at you. I'm laughing at the story line Alien wrote. Lol XD
Your using threaded view to look at the forums right? She didn't reply to you. Your gonna make yourself look bad if you keep making replies like this... :/
Yes. That must be it. :P XD Lol
Ford becomes President? That's a crisis story right there.
I know.... scarry stuff man.... ,:o
You will soon enough...
Throughout heaven and earth, I alone am the honored one.
Yes you are, your Ladyship. No one has any need to dishonor you in any way, shape, or form. And if they do I'll beat them up! (Unless you get to them before I do and beat the snot out of them or stuff them full of maggots.)
Stuffing people full of maggots is an oddly specific fetish.
Well, I read in the history section for the site that one guy got on your nerves so much you stuffed him full of frogs. So I thought to myself 'What's to say she wouldn't do the same thing? Just this time with maggots to change things up a bit?' :)
There was this frog guy once.
That would explain the frogs!
If I ever annoy you, please tell me. I don't want to upset you ever! :D
I'm neither annoyed nor upset.
....so....I'm....ok.....? :o
I suppose if End hasn't virtually shot you yet.
We'll see how the contest goes.
Which one. Yours or Miss Mizal's? Or both. :/
Mine obviously.
Though I will say that while I know Alien is your friend, but she's actually hurting you rather than helping you.
I'm talking about the Thunderdome :)
Ok so I never thought I'd have to clarify this but just so that its officially out there... I am a boy...
Raven keeps calling you a "she"
She did in that one thread, but then I corrected her in private and if you look at her posts AFTER that thread you can see she starts calling me a "he" instead. I figured this confusion would happen after she initially started doing that, thankfully its resolved now...
Bold of you to assume I read all her post concerning you since I tend to tune out her misguided praise of you.
AND she was still calling you "She" in PMs to me, so hence why I still thought you were a girl or a tranny pretending to be a girl, but then Raven probably wouldn't like you if that was the case being the good Christian girl she is.
I don't blame you at all for tuning that out. In fact it doesn't surprise me either. My reply was simply an explanation, not an accusation or assumption!
Actually...I still love the people who say they are trans and whatnot, I just don't agree with the idea. :)
Very wholesome of you.
Everyone is human. It's not right to treat someone less than that. So my actions aren't just because of my big heart, but also because they are logical. :)
If I'm misguided, then please, correct me, Master.
Well my natural inclination (and just about everyone else's) would say distance yourself as far as way as you can from Alien since he's pretty much thought of as a hopeless retard around here and that's saying something seeing as we got folks like Ace around.
Your association with him just tends to reflect badly on you mainly due to all the praising you do of him. It's actually already been concluded that Alien sucks as a writer and in personality and you're actually better and have more potential in general. (Even if some find you a bit annoying, but then some of us get annoyed easily anyway and it's not an impossible hurdle to get over)
However, it's still a free country and you're free to interact with anyone you want. This place isn't a group think.
For example, Cel is pretty much thought of by most folks as a creepy Serbian turbo autist that definitely hides in the bushes and preys on young teen girls (Oh he'd REALLY like you!) to hide his own latent homosexuality. However, I'm fairly okay with him and will generally speak to him as a normal person (Or as normal as he can get for a Serbian anyway)
Even using you as an example, I don't mind you as much as a lot of folks on here, but your association with Alien does cause a little disappointment on that front.
But again, this place isn't a group think so if you find Alien's association worth your time (Lol) well nobody's going to stop you. I suppose the only thing I could advise in that case is to praise him less and instead help him actually be less of a retard. (Hey it can happen)
I will admit that the art was done using Adobe Illustrator's AI system, but I modified it. I used the AI cause I was being lazy and wanted a better pfp rather quickly. :P But I still wanted to make it somewhat my own, thus the editing. :)
The SHAME Pit art I did was infact my own.
Here is it for reference ^ (I'm a bit upset that it came out grainy, but it's fine...I'm fine....hehe.... :,)
As to my own stories, I am going to work on my very own story after the Crisis Contest. :) I want to make something that is fairly decent so it will take some time, but I am very excited to work on it! :D (I honestly hope it will show everyone on here that I am in fact a good writer who is serious when it comes to writing stories and not just someone who is around for jokes.) :)
This is what I was drawing when I was nineteen. Oh wait, I was still in high school.
But that doesn't count, it's not digital! How about this throwback! (I still really like this one.)
And back in my day we definitely didn't have AI when replying to a thread with a snappy drawing!
MHD casually flexes.
Somehow I missed this hardcore dis by MHD towards Raven who apparently is dead now.
I will stay friends with Alien because of my high level of loyalty. Once someone is kind to me, I view them as a friend and will go to get lengths to be loyal and stay loyal to said person. Example, all the people on here who were nice to me, like you, Master, and MiltonManThink, Orange, granolagoth, Direryse (somehow I saw kindness in his 'drunk' statements. Lol), and others. (I am also respectful and am loyal to Miss Mizal because she is a mod and deserving of respect and loyalty. Also cause I want to be respectful to get on her good side, as well as the good side of everyone else. :D) So asking me to distance myself from Alien is basically, in the kindest way I can think of to say it, wishful thinking. :)
However, I plan to write my own stories once Alien and I are done with the crisis contest, since I am helping him write his story for the contest as his coauthor. And I'm a girl of my word and my loyalty. :)
Well loyalty is an admirable trait around here, we'll see if it works out or if it's misplaced.
Looks like Ben has attached himself to Alien as well, though that's probably just going make your job harder lol.
We shall see, Master. :)
And if the story does flop, then I will be working on my own stories for awhile to try and scrape up some dignity. :P
But I have faith it will turn out great! :D
I just realized that I miss spelled Milton's name. Sorry!
MiltonManThing
I thought we established that you were non binary beacuse 1/4 of the ball is purple.
I thought it was because blue is a boy color and purple is a girl color, so the two colors end up cancelling each other out. What gender are red and green accociated with?! :O
Red is trans male and green is trans female... Actually, I guess that makes you the opposite of nonbinary. You are all the genders. ^_^
I'm really tired now so I ended up making a 1244 word reply to this (saved it somewhere as usual). Might post it tomorrow, as I've realized its better to make judgements on these sort of things when your not super tired... Short answer: eeeehehehehhrehh who fricken cares!!!! uwuwuwuwuwuwu! :P :P :P :P :P :P :P :P :P :P :P :P :P :P :P :P EDIT: I saw what you originally posted before you edited it! (Though I suppose I can at least appreciate the sentiment behind your edit) I'm still going to reply to what you originally said though! :P
Why do you feel such a strong inclination/impulse to point out every grammar mistake I make? Like it's not just situations like this where I make a simple spelling mistake and you correct it, sometimes it's completely unprompted. (The comment where you explained to me what proofreading was and used my story as an example really stands out to me!) I'm not mad, just curious, as this has been going on and off for months now.
Bringing my own perspective into this, this is a site for writing. We ought, within the best of our ability, to use this space to continuously improve in our writing, both in format and presentation of content, and showcase that in our interactions with others on the site. If we believe that writing is worthwhile, we should be using this site to push ourselves to do better. No one else, and certainly not the rest of the internet, will do this for us. I make mistakes in my writing, and I welcome the critics, and the reminders to do better. There are some times where we don't have to be so committed to writing properly, but if we continue to stumble in the same mistakes, we are in a cycle of complacency. If we here aren't trying to do our best in how we write, what are we doing here?
You should paint a fucking brain and skull fresco on your ceiling by means of a shotgun you little catamite. Fuck I hate you
Just for that comment, I'm going to make sure he gets a valid entry by harassing him, proofreading his shit, whatever it takes.
You'll get the satisfaction of beating him (I'm not a miracle worker) but you won't have the satisfaction of seeing him tossed into the Abyss.
Um. Anyone who's actually submitted a story game helping him?
Although Raven is new
That, sadly enough, would probably be his best bet.
Still. All he has to do is write a story that's 10k words, has decent branching, spelled correctly, and a comprehensive plotline. It's not that hard! The amount of forum posting he does, he's CLEARLY capable of writing entire paragraphs. He just needs to focus.
AIDS sucks even worse now that they took all of the CYS content out of it otherwise it might have given a fighting chance.
Didn't you have a hand in creating it?
How did it end up in someone else's control?
If you're going to use your godhood to create self aware monsters and turn them loose into the world, at least have the foresight to retain the ability to abort them.
Since a lot of it was made up with content made from most of my stories, as far as I'm concerned I did, even if I (Or anyone else here) didn't really have any intention on creating it.
For a nice story analogy it was more like a case of Nick and his brother unearthing forbidden knowledge (CYS) and thought it would be useful in the creation of the project. (Scraping CYS for AI Dungeon content)
And in typical Lovecraftian fashion, thanks to the content within, horrors were unleashed and they couldn't contain it before it caused mass chaos.(The shitstorm fallout they had with their user base, their licensing agreement, etc)
Meanwhile the eldritch horrors laughed at the entire situation. (That's us)
I'm not THAT bad at writing! Check out my Thunderdome 13 short story called Ceremony in the Thunderdome Duel B thread in the Creative Corner. :P
Alien uses ChatGPT on creative writing projects with no grades or money at stake because he lacks the spark of human creativity. I'm pretty sure his life is already a yawning fucking toilet bowl abyss of desperate humiliation
@benholman44 nice work on that one, retard
Also, proofreading and correcting grammar is something she's pretty well commended for on here.
Trust me, it'll help you in the long run.
Hehe... Yeah! What kind of retard doesn't know the difference between it's and its? ... *Hides behind noobs*
*Dialogue, not dialouge *Punctuation, not puncutation Restarted and acoustic are probably just part of that meme/ slang rather than a genuine misspelling (at least, I hope so)
Amen to proper grammer! :D
Not so to calling Ace a tubby.....
*It's not your fault
*Its piercing howls echoed throughout the night
Correct usage?
*It's piercing howls.
Like, it is piercing howls in the air!? Holy fuck!
This is me adding to the fumes in this thread, by the way.
giving people bad grammar is fun at times.
Pls disregard.
I couldn't help it.
Although, if you've read a story of mine, you will know grammar and typos are my cup of tea and bread. I just vomit words out in a zoinked out fashion because I'm gay apparently.
IF?! I've given both your stories perfect 8 ratings.
Dude. Bridgette and Henry Nevermore... those two give me nightmares.
Really?
I don't read my own stories, tbh.
But I agree with you!
I left an updated review on each of the characters on 'The Tale of the Foolish Princess ' if you'd like to read that.
Okay, I read your review.
You left a long one, boi. Very detailed too. I think you're great now.
Thank you.
I owe you a review on your contest entry now.
Up to you. Truth be told, my review on your story was written better than both my stories combined. I have this issue where I procrastinate for months than cram in the last two weeks before a deadline, and it shows.
I'm sure it won't be too offensive to read if it's sitting above a 3 rating like it currently is. I'll even head into reading it with a pre-established positive bias for the story as well.
Sure. All I can say is that my next contest entry, I'm going into it with better time management.
I'll be able to be on the site more often for the rest of my summer break. I was really busy, but now I have a few weeks to relax and review some stories. As for the newbs, just remember: shut up. Nobody cares about what you have to say. :)
...I...know.......(Fun fact, Alien is actually a guy and just didn't correct me at all. So now I'm very embarrassed about it ,:D )
I delayed correcting you for a single day because I thought it was funny...now I realize it was stupid! :( Sorry about that! Will communicate better going forward I promise! :O (If anything I should be blaming YOU for taking so long to say that you thought I was a girl in the first place! :O)
Honestly, it was hilarious! And now I have a perfect excuse to hit you in the back of the head again! :)
*Slap*
But I also feel bad about hitting you, so now you get pats too. *pat pat* :P
I feel so happy inside...... :D
Um.....
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Boy, the more recent noobs to stick around have certainly been... something.
At least the forums are more active again!
I blame their moms.
They would tell them when they were little "Be good and don't shove beans up your nose."
Now in a million years they probably wouldn't have been thinking about shoving beans up their nose, but of course once they got the idea in their head well...
This is the result.
I would be amused.
I've never shoved beans up my nose, but I have eaten BBQ flavored larva! :D (Got three buck for it!)
No... :o
What's the flavor? Is there a flavor or is it still just chocolate?
Oooooo! :o
*nom*
*Vomits all over Ford* :p
what....? ;:o
Ok....Anyone have a Fillip's head? Cause Ford has several loose screws that I'd like to fix....
Sorry, Ford seems to be working normally.
Nah ah. I'll just hug you to death instead. >:D *Bear hug*
*Jumps back to avoid being thrown up on*
Ah! D:
The difference is that it's MY vomit. Who KNOWS what YOU have in your system! You could be on something! I don't want that all over me! I've never had anything intoxicating nor have I smoked anything in my entire life! D:
This thread is slowly but steadily lowering me down the autism spectrum
I never started acting like a cat. :/
Oh wait you said 'when will you'...
Uh, now. :)
Roasted duck
I don't curse...so my insults consist of random words... ,:D
