Player Comments on Dungeon Stompage!

This story is a celebration of classic RPG gameplay, combining an addictive battle system and an unforgettable story. As the determined protagonist Raven, the player is able to immediately step into the fantasy realm, and fulfill their dire thirst for pure adventure. For beginners, it is a beneficial gateway series to dungeon exploration titles, an entertaining fantasy treat for casual fans, and a welcome challenge of Stat building strategy for seasoned RPG fans.
-- Andre' Raven on 7/24/2015 6:48:34 PM with a score of 67600
Very fun and well written dungeon crawl. Reminiscent of the old Zork text-based games. Excellent use of scripting, variables, and items. I played through several times, attempting different tactics, and saw that even the text alters depending on what one tries. Using items is intuitive and even holds some surprises with experimentation. One puzzle was extremely frustrating as it doesn't make a lot of sense at all - unless my brain is becoming soft. Great descriptions and some nice character interaction. There's a lot more to this story than is immediately apparent. Once you've "won," you can still adventure about. I would like to see a follow-up. Thanks and great job.
-- madglee on 9/10/2012 3:26:51 PM with a score of 97550
I got the ENDING OF THE ADVENTURER.

When I normally read stories on this site I'm usually not that impressed. Even with the featured games I don't have the experience others do. It's kind of like, "It was ok I guess." In fact, this is my reaction to most games on this site.

But it was not like that for this game.

It had adventuring, puzzles, exploring, fighting dangerous foes, etc. This was just amazing. I cannot believe all the items you had in this game and how well everything worked. Everything had a place.

And don't even get me started on the battle scenes. Every fight was unique. Every foe formidable in their own way. I found myself completely engrossed and rooting for Raven like he was my favorite player in Football.

The ONLY thing that I wish this game had was that if it was a bit longer. Maybe just to explore a world like Skyrim would have been the icing on the cake.

Regardless though, I put this game with the best on the site, in my opinion. Now I'm not saying this just to butter you up or something. Trust me. Look at most of the comments I leave on games and you will see I rarely say this to anyone.

Well done.

7/8
-- JMgskills on 9/4/2012 7:48:29 PM with a score of 112330
The evil ending is best ending for me.
-- papershoggoth on 12/17/2017 12:30:20 AM with a score of 12490
fun
-- tisan on 12/15/2017 5:38:44 AM with a score of 61850
One word: GREAT
-- hunter on 12/10/2017 4:57:24 AM with a score of 84000
Fantastic game, had a great time playing it. I feel like there things that I missed though, might be worth me jumping back into it and finding out.
-- adamwiggie on 12/2/2017 11:51:18 AM with a score of 79860
Great game dude
-- Cam06082003 on 12/1/2017 1:37:57 PM with a score of 224370
its the longest and the best game i even
-- ashu on 11/21/2017 5:56:42 AM with a score of 67630
Amazing story. I got a ridiculously high score by visiting HOME again and again to bash dead zombies and getting more XP.
-- kwetwz on 11/20/2017 3:42:11 PM with a score of 831250
I could easily find myself doing several read throughs of this CYOA. Absolutely fantastic, I can now see why BerkaZerka is so popular in the community.
Far better than Reeses' Cups®
-- JonathantheEthereal on 11/15/2017 7:17:37 PM with a score of 73710
Okay, kinda lame ending. Wanted to ditch the girl after I killed Merodatch
-- 1329557 on 11/13/2017 3:54:24 PM with a score of 4270
The Betrayer LOL
-- Ly8y on 11/7/2017 4:16:10 PM with a score of 28640
A lot of work obviously went into the game mechanics for this story.
-- JavaPhysics on 11/3/2017 10:09:07 PM with a score of 77010
I got the WOLF IN SHEEP'S CLOTHING ending once again (lol)

A truly excellent and enthralling game from start to finish. I have only one criticism: The combat dialogue repeats itself twice in a row on the same page for multiple different attack-descriptions of the Spectre's. Aside from that, I can't really see much else that could be improved upon at present. Brilliant work.
-- Sam on 10/23/2017 1:57:18 PM with a score of 168060
First game I stumbled upon on this wonderful site, and this game is definitely a brilliant introduction to chooseyourstory! Only got this score because I accidentally found out about the money cheat, but neverthelss I'll see if I can find all the endings by myself. Thank you BerkaZerka for such a great game!
-- Ismenis on 10/17/2017 10:12:56 AM with a score of 170360
awsome story quite awsome game mecanics pleanty of weapons. perfect
-- hello on 10/17/2017 2:55:10 AM with a score of 126450
what ending are there
also there is a secret in throne room
by attacking and going back if you get hit you can deal infinite damage
-- noobypro12 on 10/15/2017 5:39:20 AM with a score of 165790
Just kill the book, it has 100 health.
-- Anymous on 10/10/2017 10:39:16 AM with a score of 135630
Insanely good
-- Average Guy on 10/4/2017 5:59:23 PM with a score of 151310
ending of the adventurer finally!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
-- AurondragonTyr on 10/3/2017 7:25:52 PM with a score of 74970
Was our first time playing this game type. We liked it a lot.
-- Ryan Braun on 10/1/2017 6:41:21 PM with a score of 70880
Like dungeons and dragons
-- Brady on 9/30/2017 9:49:50 PM with a score of 68280
Wow that was a fun little dungeon romp and I definitively felt like I was Stomping the enemies in this game. As long as you did the right choices at character creation it seems things will go your way. Just like a real fantasy character.
-- cool74 on 9/29/2017 4:16:53 AM with a score of 170980
very good if you like an RPG you will love this
-- ekkiller17 on 9/13/2017 11:10:17 AM with a score of 72690
Good story, it seemed short, but I'm beginning to understand that seemingly short stories like this, take a VERY long time to make, so my appreciation of a storygame like this has increased a great deal. AS a matter of fact I found this game much more enjoyable then many RPG dungeon crawlers I've played on PC. Thanks for the adventure, looking forward to playing again!
-- MrSnuggles on 8/31/2017 2:38:22 AM with a score of 153810
This was a good story. It was very well coded and the RPG element was incorporated well: making several interesting battles, stats that mattered, and interesting items.

If I had to nitpick, I did feel for all this coding and stats and items, that the story was a tad too short. If you're going to put so many elements, you should be at least sure to make a longer quest. And because of all the RPG elements, I felt a lot of the 'story' element was lost and while there was a plot, this story was very explore, very fight oriented, and while I don't have a problem with that I think the characters could have been more fleshed out and for there to be more 'story' instead of just pure game.

As for the writing, I found it descriptive and detailed, with little problems when it came to grammar, spelling, punctuation and capitilization. It did feel very 'You did this and you did that to me' and when your parents died all Raven said was 'oh well that was sad.'

I understand this was the style the story was intended for though I thought it took it a bit too far. Great story, though, clearly a lot of effort went into this.

7/8.
-- SixtySnakes on 8/26/2017 7:04:44 PM with a score of 4180
So need help on the combo to the chest. Any hints or solutions plz help (message me) Thanks!
-- TestingJest on 8/17/2017 11:03:47 AM with a score of 153010
"At length you are completely lost to the power and don’t even realize when you are at last consumed by the Oblitterum Nomeno – your soul forever trapped within the bloody pages to wail and lament your cursed fate with the rest of the damned.
Corruption Suits You Well
Congratulations, you have reached the ENDING OF THE DAMNED
Health: 41 (of 46); Gold: 194; SCORE: 15690"

Well, I'll give your game an 8/8 even though I got a "bad ending" just because of the value of game play and the effort you put into this game. Well worth the time playing, thanks! :)
-- TestingJest on 8/17/2017 9:52:19 AM with a score of 15700
Damn, this story still gets me excited after 4 years...
Once again, thanks BerkaZerka
(though I know you probably wont see this)
-- Karod on 8/11/2017 7:05:18 AM with a score of 147280
A fun, clever, funny, and expertly-crafted contribution to this website. I thoroughly enjoyed every second of it.
-- hexgurl on 7/27/2017 8:36:51 PM with a score of 69150
really good i want more of this!
-- Fery on 7/24/2017 7:12:01 AM with a score of 129580
Great work, the game system is elaborate, the pacing and writing is great. Just great work bruv!
-- Ssighs on 7/21/2017 8:19:10 PM with a score of 67660
A tad short for my liking, but for what it was, it was incredibly written!
-- CommanderMinion on 7/21/2017 2:29:38 PM with a score of 4380
Oh this was just brilliant! I wished you could use more healing potions and had the book appear a little later but it had been a great journey anyways :)
-- Ssighs on 7/21/2017 11:00:24 AM with a score of 36690
I got the "WOLF IN SHEEP'S CLOTHING" ending with a (highest possible?) score of 216950. A game well worth anyone's time in my opinion. Well done to the author and everyone who chipped in to help the author out.

Notes: Found a bug on a different playthrough that allowed me to generate the maximum amount of gold possible (500000 lol) further on in the story. I won't say how so no one cheats. I also found that some of the combat dialogue in a certain area (no spoilers dw) repeated itself twice just before the damage number displays against Raven. In addition to that, when you use the overpowered enhanted bow (forgot its name) outside of combat, it says "their" when it should say "they're".

Willing to help out with rectifying those errors. Email me. Again, great story and good job.
-- Sam on 6/29/2017 7:47:34 AM with a score of 216600
I got "The Betrayer" lol. Managed to get my brains stat to "god like" which is interesting lol
-- Sam on 6/28/2017 4:11:30 AM with a score of 178700
As always, I begin by saying I am not a creator and have admiration and gratitude for all those who are. This particular story was a great concept, taking me back to the days of table-top gaming, and the mechanics were perfectly executed. On the downside, it was very cliche and far too short. I think it could have been amazing, but only with a lot more work.
-- Perk1973 on 6/14/2017 7:34:18 AM with a score of 126120
This was my first visit to chooseyourstory.com and I found this adventure excellently conceived and executed and a great deal of fun. I hope to see more like this.
Aside from a few minor typos, I only have one gripe: I found (working them all out by hand) a full dozen different solutions that should satisfy the combination lock puzzle (see below). Also, not sure if it's a bug, but I had unlimited double attacks with the standard short sword. Thanks

Combo Lock Solutions:
<Spoiler>
D1-E2-A3-T5-H4 (B6-O8-N9)
D1-E2-A8-T6-H4 (B7-O3-N0)
D1-E3-A4-T0-H5 (B6-O7-N2)
D1-E3-A8-T2-H5 (B7-O0-N6)
D1-E3-A9-T8-H5 (B7-O2-N0)
D1-E5-A3-T0-H7 (B6-O2-N4)
D1-E5-A3-T4-H7 (B6-O2-N8)
D1-E5-A4-T0-H7 (B6-O3-N2)
D1-E7-A2-T4-H9 (B5-O8-N0)
D1-E7-A3-T0-H9 (B5-O8-N4)
D1-E7-A3-T2-H9 (B5-O8-N6)
D1-E7-A8-T0-H9 (B6-O2-N4)
</Spoiler>
-- Noggin on 6/5/2017 4:46:34 AM with a score of 115950
It's finished 10 minutes after i started the game.
-- ozbasmesut on 5/31/2017 5:49:09 PM with a score of 112440
really good havent seen anything like this a little short but it's good over all

ps it's good

pss
-- that guy 123 on 5/21/2017 10:36:19 PM with a score of 159340
Grate game, a little short and shood be expanded on.
-- DaNiMaLs on 5/19/2017 2:00:57 PM with a score of 211570
i used the magic map while talking to the girl as she was going to hand me fire balls or something because i planned on refusing her,and had no health potions. but when i returned to the stronghold i couldn't talk to her again :( which i guess is understandable
-- William Paterson on 5/19/2017 9:03:17 AM with a score of 4350
good game would be nice if you make another
-- tankanator9 on 5/15/2017 2:36:01 PM with a score of 67890
I loved playing through this game, it reminded me a bit of the Grognak the Barbarian choose your own story in fallout 3. Still, it was an interesting and unique fantasy story, with free will as to what you chose to make as a character build.
-- Alheadburst on 5/12/2017 6:21:56 PM with a score of 108100
Beat this game way back...but it was fun to play through it again. If you haven't played this, do it now.
-- InstantHax on 5/10/2017 4:53:36 PM with a score of 100120
good!!!
-- charlrey000 on 5/10/2017 3:10:01 AM with a score of 81020
It's pretty good, disappointed that the Ending of the Betrayer occurs in many different scenarios.
-- wishy33 on 5/9/2017 9:03:06 PM with a score of 113990
Much better than Reese's cups!
-- RogueRonin on 5/9/2017 1:41:01 PM with a score of 79090
You can farm money from the statue with the amulet
-- Buddyman2291 on 5/5/2017 1:12:54 PM with a score of 20670
Fantastic! I loved every minute of it. There were challenging enemies, and I'm not ashamed to admit that I only won the final boss battle by clicking "Go back" every time they hit me.

This story was incredible. It must have taken so much time and effort, but I say it really paid off!
-- SanctusInfernum on 4/30/2017 6:39:34 PM with a score of 108060
i liked the game, but can you please make it longer? i was expecting an awesome adventure of excitement that is also long, but i got all of those things, but it was short, definitely please lengthen the game
-- cole steffes on 4/25/2017 10:01:27 AM with a score of 3880
A fun story and I am definately tempted to do another run or two to explore the other endings
-- MrShelff on 4/24/2017 6:27:56 AM with a score of 91770
great story/game
-- constantine on 4/23/2017 12:16:42 PM with a score of 141140
This was an excellent adventure though I was feeling a bit overpowered when I stomped the necromancer's face into the ground while I was at half health. all and all a great bit of short fun.
-- Balthizar on 4/18/2017 11:15:20 PM with a score of 36650
A ton of fun and some great customization, puzzles that lean towards the soft side of common sense, but are very realistic and capture old school gamine well. My only minor critism is that it is a tad short for my tastes and limited in locations. You are also given a load of sweet gear at the end of the game which you never get to use. I would like more exploration, more chances at combat, and a playable "epilogue" after the main quest. That said, take it with a grain of salt that my biggest complaint about this story game is there wasn't more to play!
-- kyo787 on 4/10/2017 2:30:11 PM with a score of 113240
A fun time slaying shit with my very own knock-off Pikachu.
-- tellyvision on 4/10/2017 2:50:06 AM with a score of 199390
awesome i love your games
-- carlos on 4/4/2017 3:08:35 PM with a score of 76670
I hope you got more of these games.. amazing and that high score woot
-- Johnathan Cervantes on 3/29/2017 8:06:29 PM with a score of 111540
I stumbled across this game on a slow day at work during my lunch break. Before I knew it was already time to go home. Just amazing how something made so many years ago is still a amazing games. Thank you for this treat.
-- PhilMcOxenbauls on 3/29/2017 4:12:15 PM with a score of 75890
This one's my favorite.
Really brought me back to the old text adventure days!
Excellent work!!
-- biggoron on 3/25/2017 1:02:20 AM with a score of 150150
Great game, wish I had found this earlier. :)
-- DHarry on 3/23/2017 1:58:35 AM with a score of 251680
It's too short. i was hoping to go after the dark elf and at the end defeat the dead dragon or something...
-- miguelmaia78 on 3/22/2017 11:42:43 AM with a score of 194910
it was ok but thought should be harder to slay the bad guys
-- cander63 on 3/17/2017 5:06:27 PM with a score of 158300
Pretty good I think.


+ +
\_/
-- XxDestinatiousxX on 3/12/2017 3:03:31 PM with a score of 54910
Fun title to read and explore. Most recommend for dungeon story lovers
-- ic456 on 3/8/2017 9:37:38 PM with a score of 117920
This was by far the greatest thing I have ever done on the internet. Absolutely amazing!
-- Burnty52 on 3/3/2017 1:34:59 PM with a score of 59080
good thou I would like to fight the wizard
-- jacob on 2/28/2017 5:50:36 PM with a score of 82250
good fun, only finished it once going togo straight back in
-- Jake on 2/19/2017 3:39:33 PM with a score of 6940
Great combat system!
-- Joepbwoy on 2/14/2017 1:33:04 PM with a score of 12250
Great game, I got the adventures ending but i kind of wish there was more to do after that, it seems like it just ended to early but great mechanics and a good story.
-- SaitenX on 2/13/2017 2:38:25 AM with a score of 233210
Great game
-- travis on 2/11/2017 7:33:49 PM with a score of 67530
Was there any way to get in the chest?
-- UndeadMan on 2/10/2017 9:14:29 PM with a score of 114810
Swole is the way to go, that shortsword is so op early on
-- MechMuzic on 2/7/2017 11:34:35 AM with a score of 161920
Pretty Badass
-- Zieghardt on 2/3/2017 9:50:50 PM with a score of 101460
Awesome! RPG strategy game! Got the Nobles ending.
-- Feliix on 2/3/2017 12:46:44 PM with a score of 108180
Many strange endings!
-- Admin on 2/2/2017 7:36:03 PM with a score of 4090
good game.
-- thestoryman22 on 2/1/2017 10:13:05 AM with a score of 151020
A fun game with interesting mechanics.
-- SiriusMorningStar on 1/30/2017 1:47:14 AM with a score of 143540
Really good! Definetly deserves the status of popularity it has. Good detail, fighting, and it makes you use your brain.
-- Tawnystar on 1/28/2017 7:02:32 PM with a score of 91000
I'm pretty sure I did everything possible in the game, although when I feel like it I'm gonna spam the wisk.

Great game, 8/8,
-- THEGAMER13 on 1/27/2017 1:52:28 PM with a score of 145780
Absolutely incredible.
-- Vega Rizza on 1/26/2017 3:00:47 PM with a score of 69680
Best game ive played ever.
-- The0menof2000 on 1/24/2017 12:11:10 PM with a score of 79880
It was fun
-- Randomguy3486 on 1/21/2017 2:31:10 PM with a score of 116060
V good. 10/10. Would slay Merodatch again.
-- TrashQueensInc on 1/20/2017 6:05:18 PM with a score of 67520
sooooo good.
-- GrumpyKitt3n on 1/13/2017 9:45:59 AM with a score of 72540
Great Compelling Story!
-- Anonymous on 1/12/2017 8:46:08 AM with a score of 90720
got to the noble ending... is there one where you can find the dragon bones? if not, another story would be awesome
-- mirakitten on 1/8/2017 5:33:44 PM with a score of 117960
Fun game and I enjoyed the multiple endings. Finally managed the Noble ending:)
-- HM000 on 1/7/2017 11:12:44 AM with a score of 76830
I wish it was a little longer but it was pretty fun reading.
-- BigGorrack18 on 1/3/2017 5:21:33 AM with a score of 76640
I got the ending of the damned! It was fun. I recommend!
-- James on 12/27/2016 11:23:28 AM with a score of 4460
First try got the "Noble ending". Hard to beat but well worth it on the way. (Tip : search everywhere)
-- William on 12/20/2016 9:41:33 PM with a score of 105690
pure awesomeness.
-- primoskate52354 on 12/19/2016 2:01:51 PM with a score of 176980
Very impressive. Well-written, fun battles, and high-replay value. This is a fantastic game.
-- CJLeran on 12/13/2016 4:22:24 PM with a score of 146680
I got the NOBLE'S ENDING. I have to say, this was a fantastic map. I loved how you used items and enemies so well together. I ended up having God Like Body and Brains, and Below Average Charm. My only problem. It could have been longer.


8/8
-- CatLover366 on 12/13/2016 4:15:14 PM with a score of 124610

"Health: 49 (of 49); Gold: 127353; SCORE: 186320"
I ended up playing this 43 times before i finally found every secret in this story, and none of it was wasted. Great start to the stories and adventures to anyone just joining the website (like me).
-- PikaBagel on 12/5/2016 10:34:20 AM with a score of 186330
I wish there could've been more, this was awesome. Once I got into it I couldn't stop playing
-- Jonathan on 12/5/2016 8:44:41 AM with a score of 133580
I gave it an 8/8.
It was fucking amazing.
Nice work, I didn't want it to end.
Nobles ending :)
-- MinnieKing on 12/2/2016 12:33:13 AM with a score of 79460
This is a great game but i found myself stuck after i deafeated the boss in the throne

and what ever happened to the golblin
-- CreepDucky on 11/28/2016 4:07:06 AM with a score of 82020
Awesome

-- JohnathanGameGG on 11/22/2016 10:41:52 AM with a score of 59720
good dungeon delve. only done one ending so far but it is great. it looks like other paths might be interesting as well
-- ghostkeeper on 11/21/2016 9:48:08 AM with a score of 75770
Quite good. The scripting was spectacular, and the combat scenes were flawless. Whenever I imagine making a game this complex, my head hurts.
Oh, and I chuckled at the "Oddly compelling cleaning whisk". That was... strange.
Great game! 8/8
-- Mage on 11/14/2016 7:56:29 AM with a score of 134920
Simple yet very intriguing. I kind of felt emotional with the noble ending.
-- RasterAster on 11/9/2016 4:32:09 PM with a score of 67330
Absoulutley amazing! Tho there is a small bug that lets you max out your stats with the books you can but from the wizard :P
-- PixelDodo on 11/8/2016 4:45:04 PM with a score of 136240
SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO AWSOME I PLAYED 13 TIMES AND ITS STILL AWSOME
-- keith on 11/6/2016 7:21:02 AM with a score of 57840
Thanks you for this story ! It was a great an funny time :)
-- Kael on 11/3/2016 4:47:43 PM with a score of 171950
too short
-- KevinYap25 on 10/31/2016 4:40:14 AM with a score of 180550
Easily the most enjoyable story I've read in a while.
-- Anonymous on 10/26/2016 9:27:11 AM with a score of 93900
good game
-- ces28 on 10/24/2016 8:17:01 AM with a score of 172700
Wow, much fun, but seriously, NO WAY TO MAGIC?!? (No, potions and a 3-shot wand don't count.) Side note: I thought the expansion pack idea was awesome, hope that actually happens someday. One other thing, it would be really cool if with a maxed brain (possibly + ____ protective item.) you could actually ENTER the big bad book and have additional areas to explore, or maybe make it an "endless area" where no matter where you go, random enemy, and you can leave anytime using_____. (probably the sun god amulet or a similar item.) anyway, that's just my thoughts.
-- Velocitas Eradico on 10/23/2016 4:50:27 AM with a score of 169060
Very enjoyable as a game, pretty enjoyable as a story. The big thing working against it is the constant, very easy save scumming you can do with the Go Back button. It's something you can ignore, play through just fine (if with plenty of difficulty), but the darkness of being cheap is an alluring one indeed. Not much you can do for that though, all things considered.
-- Psyby on 10/22/2016 6:06:48 PM with a score of 68510
A lot of fun and just perfect for this medium!
-- BlackTank on 10/21/2016 4:30:45 PM with a score of 158170
No comment that I can make will sum up the gloriousness that is this game.
-- apsoy on 10/20/2016 9:34:16 PM with a score of 110700
Hey that pretty good
-- ButtStuff on 10/19/2016 3:28:26 PM with a score of 76240
great fun but I hated the succubus
-- Patravi on 10/18/2016 8:33:04 AM with a score of 79070
I thought it was a little short but otherwise exactly how I want an adventure game to play out. Excellent in all aspects. Definitely worth a playthrough.
-- Grotug on 10/15/2016 11:37:30 AM with a score of 72690
I got the noble ending!!! that was awesome!!!
-- annaisawesome on 10/10/2016 9:31:21 PM with a score of 74450
Well played
-- Promike311 on 10/7/2016 2:24:05 AM with a score of 69610
this was really good, played it about 5 times before i won :)
-- hmmm... nope on 10/5/2016 7:22:43 AM with a score of 147180
That was amazing. I don't know how BerkaZerka could make something as complex as this. I highly recommend this!
-- pollypup on 10/1/2016 10:25:39 AM with a score of 7490
hey I LOVED this, it was very entertaining, challenging, and fun. Keep making more of these.
-- Hestan on 9/30/2016 9:51:26 PM with a score of 152270
MUHAUHUAHUAHUAHUA!!!!! I became a god, sort of
-- Zane on 9/27/2016 8:05:42 PM with a score of 173580
The alphametic puzzle has no solution
-- maridan48 on 9/24/2016 7:38:00 PM with a score of 32390
wooohoooo!
-- blueberryfairy on 9/23/2016 10:07:26 PM with a score of 73480
I did it on a school day with afterschool band practice starting at lunch. So roughly 3hrs of playtime if you think through your decisions. It's worth my time but it's only fun one time through
-- Gabe on 9/20/2016 8:42:54 PM with a score of 59230
Hey, author. Great story. For the ending of the damned lol.
-- Throwaway on 9/16/2016 4:18:53 PM with a score of 12390
I mean, come on, who could resist being evil? Great way to spend an evening.
-- HammerNNail on 9/14/2016 11:48:27 PM with a score of 61160
wtf that was all? you just defeat the necromancer and return the book and that was it? I thought that was just chapter 1
-- asdf on 9/11/2016 3:46:21 PM with a score of 209680
very fun game nice job
-- XerxesXD on 9/10/2016 1:21:14 AM with a score of 64070
This was an amazing game. I got the nobles ending.
-- gamebruh on 9/6/2016 11:04:21 PM with a score of 73270
I...I don't know what just happened. WELL ILL TELL YOU WHAT HAPPENED! I creamed that guy! That sorcerer had no chance! *flexs*

"Ahem!" *cough* "I..uh, um. I beat the uh, I beat the game. You know? So uh, is, is there another, uh, another game?" ???? (FML)
-- Kingler1140 on 9/6/2016 10:32:43 PM with a score of 75840
Literally killed a hoard of zombies with a dagger
-- Kriscom226 on 9/3/2016 6:38:26 PM with a score of 69890
Had a fun time. I beat myself up over the puzzles, but it's nice to see some that aren't so boringly easy.
-- Kerlander of Kerlandria on 9/3/2016 3:50:35 PM with a score of 205540
This was fun.
-- xandererebus on 9/2/2016 12:08:33 AM with a score of 46860
twas gud
-- Andrew on 9/1/2016 12:55:16 AM with a score of 72950
Wow. This is not only a story, but it's a game! A dungeon crawler that had a D&D feel to it, which makes the whole game fun! I'm just amazed at the puzzles and the game mechanics!
-- RewriteN on 8/30/2016 1:02:59 PM with a score of 132560
AMAZING. is there a second?
-- Hugo on 8/28/2016 7:11:03 AM with a score of 12800
Never could get that first puzzle right, but hey ended the game with godly abs, a savage greatsword and the ability to make anyone my slave for life!
-- Wulfaer on 8/23/2016 2:05:43 PM with a score of 128880
I really like the systems at work and the story is very well written, however, the plot is quite classic-fantasy and very centered on one mission with a lack of side plots. I only completed a couple of endings and therefore may not know the full contents. Therefore, don't take my comment too seriously. It was still enjoyable.

P.S the riddles were an element I really like in the story, thought provoking.
-- Watan on 8/16/2016 11:49:56 PM with a score of 59770
I love it. You did good and made the puzzles too DANG hard!
-- Samoth Mallow on 8/16/2016 1:22:01 AM with a score of 32960
Fun little game, the puzzles were a bit confusing though.
-- AbsoulHero on 8/12/2016 8:05:15 PM with a score of 135380
Loved the interactivity and interesting story! Never had a choose your story like this, and now I want more.
-- Finz on 8/9/2016 11:43:06 AM with a score of 110710
Other than some minor issues regarding loot I thoroughly enjoyed reading and playing Dungeon Stompage!

(The "minor issues"): When you get armor it automatically replaces your old armor and you aren't able to sell the old armor for profit because it just disappears! The same thing goes with weapons: if you have a mace then receive an enchanted one the unenchanted one disappears.

So try Dungeon Stompage if you haven't and are reading through the comments. I hope you'll like it as much as I did!

(Don't cringe at my lack of proper punctuation please, and may Foxes walk with you.)
-- Fox Cultist on 8/6/2016 7:35:59 PM with a score of 221600
I've played this 8 times already, still awesome.
-- Lightstar100 on 8/5/2016 5:46:00 AM with a score of 263720
Wow, A great game and all but you can beat it super easily since melee upgrade is too OP, and also I enjoyed the puzzles, especially the last one since I had to write the numbers down and try to figure out the answer. this should be 10 out of 8. SIMPLY MAGNIFICENT
-- Mikedacube on 8/3/2016 10:48:17 AM with a score of 46030
Great mechanics and smooth gameplay, no errors as far as I could tell. Really great adventure, sure to keep you excited and thinking. Only downside would be how fast it all ends.

***Spoilers*** Proceed with caution, you have been warned.

I stuck with the Brain route and got it to "God-Like" along with all the related skills being "Monumental," "Monumental +," and "God-Like" respectively. I did this, of course, not to be a master of the sling, but in hopes that using the necromantic book would have a different ending than insanity. No, it did not. I was still insane but with a more impressive score.

While that may not be a problem and instead more of a disappointed note, there is still a something I question. While I get the general theme of winning an encounter is equal to a level-up, the first one is something I was a bit... frustrated with. I find it hard to take that killing a horde of 40 zombies ( a total of 800 hp) with nothing but starter weapons, as a beginner, only leads to a single level up. I would think that the more difficult and fool-hardy the task, the greater the rewards. Frankly, it was easier to kill the final boss and all of his minions combined while still being less profitable. I mean, even if you take away the difficulties of surviving the zombie horde itself, there's still the fact you had to kill your own father...

*** End of Spoilers*** Proceed recklessly, you have been informed.

Oh well, those are but minor issues, nothing that should stop any potential player because this is an experience hard to find. Go for it and have fun.

Good luck to my fellow adventurers,
- Mundi
-- Mundi on 7/22/2016 11:35:36 PM with a score of 130050
Great, well developed and long story.

i applaud you, Sir.
-- Himario on 7/22/2016 1:35:54 AM with a score of 76670
Wow
-- Adventure on 7/19/2016 6:38:12 PM with a score of 64390
That was the best story game I've ever played. I had a lot of fun with that and will play it again soon.
-- annaisawesome on 7/13/2016 7:00:54 AM with a score of 3910
This is cool. I like the equipment use, the map, the illustrations, and the story. The individual who created this should make more like this. It was engrossing to me.
-- crusader on 7/12/2016 1:45:26 PM with a score of 124570
Even the bad endings are good!
-- tiernan on 7/9/2016 3:49:43 PM with a score of 60240
great story line fun game good for killing bordom
-- kidito on 7/8/2016 12:03:57 AM with a score of 114770
The succubus part got me worried about how safe the content is...
-- Colin on 7/6/2016 5:41:33 PM with a score of 61680
Finished second play through to try and find all the hidden stuff, probably still haven't found it all.
-- BigRonn77 on 7/6/2016 10:48:08 AM with a score of 85500
Great story! I loved how everything was easy to use in combat. Great homage to all the wonderful text based RPGs!
-- BigRonn77 on 7/6/2016 8:21:01 AM with a score of 108200
I'm not experienced, but I've played many of the story games on this site, and this is by far the best I have played. It has a great statistic system, reminiscent of a tabletop RPG, and interesting characters. It also creates a lot of suspense the first time you play, wondering whether the Magi is really heroic, or wants the book for world domination purposes. I have now played this multiple times, and gotten different endings, however I still have not found the dragon's bones. I will always wonder whether they can even be found at all.
-- trisaiah on 6/25/2016 10:42:44 PM with a score of 72970
When I let me vote I was very desperate to click the better then homework option. It made me laugh. But I knew it deserved better. Overall I found the game a little easy. If you just constantly upgrade the melee/body option you can pretty much take out any enemy. I got the nobles ending and I think it was a very nice way to finish up the game. I was a bit annoyed by the pit traps and what happened when you looked inside the evil book, but the game is really well made and overall I think that it would easily be worth paying for if made a bit longer. Great game and my first of this sort of choose your own adventure category.
-- osman on 6/25/2016 2:35:49 PM with a score of 143160
defend + counter op
-- derp on 6/22/2016 12:33:51 AM with a score of 68670
Adventurer Ending. Well designed and written. Easily one of the best games here that I've played. a bit short.

*spoilers*

secret in ghoul room glitched, doesn't give you the money.
final puzzle seems to be unsolvable unless you use the x-ray potion to get the first few numbers, which is not at all clear, wasted lots of time on that.
was charm useful for anything at all? Did I not get any opportunites to use it simply because I neglected the skill, or is it really only useful with that rival pet thing in the beginning?
seems like it would've been impossible if I hadn't had a high spot skill, virtually everything requires it.
-- sark on 6/19/2016 7:01:47 PM with a score of 150300
This was fun. :3
-- DancingFox on 6/16/2016 4:16:11 PM with a score of 29630
I have but one complaint. The final puzzle, specifically the Cryptarithmetic one, has one degree of freedom left, and thus has 16 solutions, but the game only accepts one. Other than that, AMAZING!
-- Sara on 6/13/2016 10:55:41 AM with a score of 148960
Shit was gud, mah niggs.
-- Lollf on 6/11/2016 1:00:11 PM with a score of 211570
I stumbled onto this story by sheer luck, and it turned out to be a very engaging challenge. Verily I say unto thee, o wise author, I salute you!
-- SenorAntonio on 6/7/2016 10:46:43 AM with a score of 158360
great fights and story. Minor flaw was that the hints were too obvious sometimes.
-- Bas on 6/1/2016 4:15:03 PM with a score of 72770
Awesome RPG you made there! :) hope you make more!
-- Awesome sauce on 6/1/2016 4:43:48 AM with a score of 70090
great
-- bob on 5/25/2016 6:24:51 PM with a score of 148320
I got the noble ending and also on a scale 1 to 10 this would be 52
-- Gameknigh3000 on 5/24/2016 8:54:04 AM with a score of 72760
Ending of Damned, betrayer, adventurer, noble
-- Condog on 5/24/2016 4:40:40 AM with a score of 102540
great
-- hi on 5/23/2016 8:47:11 AM with a score of 117510
Overall, really awesome, and worth the time to read. Although, really disappointing that nothing was done with the succubus.
-- Farexus on 5/22/2016 2:06:06 AM with a score of 172780
I really enjoyed this and am looking forward to playing it again! It was a lot of fun! 8/8
-- annaisawesome on 5/16/2016 6:52:46 PM with a score of 11980
Awesome Game
-- Jack0718 on 5/13/2016 2:30:37 PM with a score of 161630
cool game! i want to play so many more times, and wow! you have inspired me. it may take a while, but HEY, love your game.
-- robinsoul on 5/10/2016 4:03:36 PM with a score of 107900
Would have liked to see a longer storyline, and more interaction with the woman.
-- Activerios on 5/5/2016 10:58:15 AM with a score of 103940
A worthy adventure and an amazing time killer
-- ZethTheCat on 5/5/2016 8:51:05 AM with a score of 75150
There's a slight bug that makes you able to fight the zombies over and over if you pull out your longbow in your home. They have 0 health and you hit once to level up indefinitely and get a crap load of gold. Just a fun little tid bit
-- Exemplar on 5/3/2016 1:16:46 PM with a score of 724650
The story was well written and creative, as well as being very fun to play! Usually I lose interest in a storygame after a while, but that was not the case for this one.The items allowed for many options and made the experience feel a lot less scripted, and the action scenes were classic. Everything worked well together.
I ended with what I assumed is a good score of 140090 :D
-- Silently on 5/1/2016 5:02:21 PM with a score of 140100
Got ending of the damned, I wanted to pretend I worked under necromancer, then betray him and destroy the book or banish it somewhere but instead the game went on autopilot the moment I accepted his offer
-- Kochukiru on 4/29/2016 11:29:34 AM with a score of 4080
This was really well written and I loved the combat style. It really felt like I was playing a game. I highly recommend this story 10/10
-- bilbokilla on 4/29/2016 12:32:07 AM with a score of 94460
Health: 76 Gold: 7279; SCORE: 103750

really liked the game, got the adventure ending xD
-- Zakuteiken on 4/26/2016 7:07:53 PM with a score of 103800
Awesome. I will be sure to play this again.
-- Rivertail on 4/24/2016 3:15:35 PM with a score of 71170
IT WAS AMAZING!!!!!!! I REPLAYED IT, LIKE, 60 TIMES!!!!!! IT WILL DEFINITELY BRING YOU ENLIGHTENMENT!!!!!!!!
-- Jackie on 4/22/2016 9:47:20 AM with a score of 59160
I liked it a lot, although (it is long) it could be longer. And it doesn't even matter what gender you choose, because it has it as the point of view of a boy anyway. Other than that, I liked it a lot.
-- Shadowgirl_101 on 4/20/2016 2:45:00 PM with a score of 121490
Really good, I enjoyed it a lot!!! I gave it the highest rating possible.
-- Shadowgirl_101 on 4/13/2016 8:24:13 PM with a score of 113700
I'm not sure I ended this game correctly. It was very good though.
-- foxtangocharlie on 4/11/2016 9:20:06 AM with a score of 7030
This was a good experience and you should try it out
-- Arjan on 4/9/2016 6:08:28 AM with a score of 207000
I loved this, just as good as the old CYOA I read as a kid
-- Johnny_Five on 4/9/2016 2:28:28 AM with a score of 4470
Noble's Ending! Dungeon Stompage is sooooooo fun. I love this. I'm going to try to get every ending
-- Wardedbowl403 on 4/7/2016 12:09:58 PM with a score of 98970
its good
-- burstfulflame on 4/3/2016 5:46:30 PM with a score of 24340
gores the best thou king
-- keenstory on 3/31/2016 1:55:26 PM with a score of 12580
It's short but good
-- iamdomo01 on 3/30/2016 11:20:16 PM with a score of 73990
Twas a good adventure though short. I wish it had more than the single adventure
-- pattor69 on 3/30/2016 2:09:14 PM with a score of 78040
cant figure out the whole stone sarcophagus thingy
-- slanders27 on 3/29/2016 2:55:12 AM with a score of 68350
HAVE MEH BEBIES
-- Dovaiikin on 3/26/2016 6:09:33 AM with a score of 158220
Very interesting. It seems the private room chest is bugged and would not open with the correct code though..
-- LiquidWolfmans on 3/22/2016 5:03:33 PM with a score of 184390
Wonderful RPG styled story!
-- RandomReader on 3/18/2016 12:59:22 PM with a score of 161260
Even better then Recess Cups
-- SystemReboot on 3/17/2016 2:01:08 PM with a score of 90770
Wow !! This story had me on edge and engaged throughout. I have already shared this link on twitter and with some of my closest of friends. Thank you for such a wonderful experience !!
-- Methodical Gamer on 3/15/2016 12:26:01 PM with a score of 113670
Awesome game
-- Lightstar100 on 3/14/2016 11:24:37 PM with a score of 181300
Stupendous story!
Not only did I become more powerful, I have a demon lover.
-- Demon lover on 3/14/2016 6:08:12 PM with a score of 53050
I got the Noble's ending. Great storygame, really fun. Took me awhile to figure out how to get the book and to realize I had to get to Kragan, but overall, it was really fun. 8/8.
-- AwesomeTwisted on 3/12/2016 9:05:57 PM with a score of 148970
Absolutely amazing. I loved it. First I died, then I died, then I died, then I lived. IT WAS SO AMAZING!
-- QueenOfSpades on 3/11/2016 7:33:43 PM with a score of 9300
I got the Illicit lover ending and finished doing the adventure option but I gave up on the chest you know when and I beat all three riddles and I got a score of 131,510. That's like my seventh play through now. Keep it up and I hope there's sequel or it is expanded on.
-- The Dreaderhack on 3/8/2016 6:16:12 AM with a score of 131520
Very good
-- Jack on 3/7/2016 6:43:46 PM with a score of 103940
very nice indeed
-- reader73 on 3/7/2016 1:12:50 PM with a score of 19180
Very good
-- IrishKingDaniel on 3/5/2016 7:55:22 PM with a score of 137760
Very interesting play style
-- IrishKingDaniel on 3/5/2016 7:14:03 PM with a score of 121470
The hidden treasure in the ghoul tomb is glitched to where even if you discover it you never get the gold or health potion
-- Jared on 3/1/2016 10:19:41 AM with a score of 76260
Ranged weapons are extremely weak
-- Jared on 3/1/2016 9:29:12 AM with a score of 82510
I had one huge huge huge huge problem with this story...and that's that it wasn't longer
why the hell wasn't this longer
-- CthulhuPOOF on 2/29/2016 10:29:43 PM with a score of 72450
A few typos but all in all, Not a bad way to kill some time.
-- drackeye on 2/28/2016 5:51:43 PM with a score of 198280
very fun and exciting game
-- slanders27 on 2/27/2016 11:37:27 AM with a score of 67650
I got ending of the dammed
-- Condog on 2/24/2016 5:25:27 AM with a score of 4020
This was very fun and entertaining! Took almost an hour but REALLY fun!!
-- Karen Salva on 2/23/2016 11:29:11 PM with a score of 68750
This was a very great story. I got the Noble's ending. This story is my favorite one to go back and play over and over again. The only problem I had was that it felt a little shorter that would have liked it to. Overall, great story.
-- Jimmysutton on 2/16/2016 10:19:27 AM with a score of 133220
i found the evil sanctum and killed thormugul, i also found multiple infinite money poinys in the game. i love this game so much, i pray that you make a part 2
-- Chekaiw on 2/12/2016 8:39:45 AM with a score of 108600
Great game! Only a few typos, like how there were many "villages" in the laboratory. I loved it and hope you make more similar to this.
-- AsianTrumpeteer on 2/11/2016 9:14:57 PM with a score of 32960
I LOVED IT! I especially liked the RPG style of the game. The battles were cool too, how'd you do that?

I got Noble's Ending. I also ended with all items, sweet!

SCORE: 127660
-- SoulWriter2 on 2/10/2016 1:55:19 PM with a score of 127670
cool story bro, needs more dragons!
-- Tytonthebeast on 2/9/2016 10:04:48 AM with a score of 68210
There was nothing about this I did not love. Buy X-Ray potions. Do it. Although, once I avoided a trap, it seemed I missed an exploration chance before the ghouls....
-- Arionis on 2/5/2016 2:33:57 AM with a score of 133770
wish it had a little more depth in certain parts no Spoilers now
-- The_Dungeon_Master on 1/27/2016 2:53:32 AM with a score of 70610
This was terrific. I've never seen a CYO with such in-depth batle and stat systems. There's a few flaws/imperfections keeping it from 8, but only just. You should play this.
-- unampho on 1/24/2016 11:44:58 AM with a score of 116630
Realy good story! I enjoyed it.
Might have been longer.
-- Giel on 1/23/2016 8:02:34 AM with a score of 12560
Extremely enjoyable!
-- ortonoc on 1/18/2016 5:42:25 PM with a score of 115050
I love this game. I wish though that it had some more content.
-- Wolfbaneninja on 1/15/2016 5:27:48 PM with a score of 116050
tons of fun! used this as a time-killer in between D&D campaigns and loved it! Can't wait to jump in on another one.
-- StephenTindal on 1/15/2016 1:22:43 AM with a score of 142690
Truly an enjoyable experience! I would say that the adventure, plot, and storytelling is better than many AAA games. Well worth your time.
-- Briles on 1/12/2016 2:18:31 PM with a score of 123360
Excellent DND, You can get infinite gold via an exploit with the search option.
-- Dkoychev on 1/11/2016 3:01:56 AM with a score of 140350
It was really good! Great RPG elements, though I wish I didn't give the book to the lady... There probably would've been more content that way lol
-- JonAndTonic on 1/10/2016 8:11:11 PM with a score of 122920
This was a great game! Super fun to play, though I didn't get around to using many items. Got the Adventurer's Ending with
SCORE: 196670
There are minor typos, but it doesn't take away from the story.
-- Mari on 1/10/2016 11:42:01 AM with a score of 197100
This story makes good use of stats so that you feel the effects of every choice you make. Forget to inspect your surroundings once and you never make that mistake again!

Simple and short, the story successfully invokes the good old D&D feel. Revealing the dungeon map piece by piece is a nice feature move that makes your adventure seem all the more dangerous.

Combat felt good, after a while I found the defensive option to be slightly overpowered and mowed through every battle I faced (especially in combination with decent armour)! Likewise I stocked up on expensive gear right at the end of the game expecting to face a new challenge, only to find myself confronted with a "game over" screen. At least the endings felt satisfactory, I would enjoy replaying the story with a different character sheet for a different experience.

Good work, and thank you for this adventure! :-)
-- PaulOnFire on 1/9/2016 7:21:25 AM with a score of 218220
Pretty good game, I just kinda wish there was an ending where you took the book and used it for YOU, yknow?
-- gangburrito on 1/6/2016 12:31:29 PM with a score of 161890
Rather good... I liked the style. It's been a while since I've played a good old dungeon game, and this fit my expectations.
-- AllThatIsGold on 1/4/2016 7:41:13 PM with a score of 116530
Thanks, that was great!
-- Matthias on 12/28/2015 7:10:19 PM with a score of 7080
Great game. Thank you.
-- HuskerFaithful on 12/28/2015 7:46:04 AM with a score of 107180
This was pretty awesome, I'm quite impressed. Simple, and relatively quick...I played it during my lunch break at work. Please keep it up!
-- Andor on 12/23/2015 1:05:59 PM with a score of 92370
Just awesome, I have no words
-- InstantHax on 12/20/2015 12:13:31 PM with a score of 194800
Loved It Very Interesting Only Three Thing's I Would Question 1) First All The Multiple Paths I Tried Most Of the Cool Gear In The Armory Remained Out Of My price Reach Then Once I Achieved Such Fortune You Game Ends For A DM Like Me That Was Disappointing Just When The Adventure Got Good Game-Over 2) Second As For A Continue On Point One I Would Suggest A Deeper Story Line That Continues Past The First Victory A Longer More Deeper Game 3)Third Loved The Game But Found Some Of The Choices Mandatory Like If You Embrace The Book It Is Forced That you Let The Demon Girl Rain Hell You Should Have The Option To Destroy Her ((My Apologies If My Third Point Is A Spoiler For Anyone)) Highly Recommend The Game Good To Kill Some Time And Enjoyed It Alot But Please Consider My Comments And Make A Part 2 Please And Thank You I Think It Was A Little Short And Ended Too Fast
-- The_Dungeon_Master on 12/19/2015 3:44:35 AM with a score of 85200
I got the ending of the betrayer, I really enjoyed the game and found it to be very interesting and complex.
-- Hazel_Zhang on 12/18/2015 6:18:25 PM with a score of 18790
Ahh just like the games you want to see/read when you get here. Great writing and I got the betrayer ending. I may play through again but I usually like to keep things the way they landed. Maybe one day she will set me free! right? i know she will 8/8
-- JinDary on 12/17/2015 3:33:08 PM with a score of 97660
I randomly decided to have a look online at choose your own adventure in the hopes of reading something to pass the time. This was a great read and was definitely fun to go through for my first time in a long time. Thoroughly enjoyed it.
-- Ben on 12/15/2015 8:21:35 PM with a score of 67670
Awesome! I got to the wolf in sheep clothing ending and am satisfied with the game. Basically the more steps the better the ending. I'm assuming wolf and illicit ending are 2 with the most steps but I'm not sure as I haven't unlocked some of the other ones...
-- JJ99 on 12/13/2015 9:00:09 PM with a score of 200930
Lots of fun for a choose your own adventure.
-- Hwensta on 12/10/2015 11:03:55 AM with a score of 12410
I'm a big D&D fan, and this game was a delightful substitute for a college kid who finds it difficult to schedule a party regularly
-- Oliver on 12/8/2015 3:08:03 PM with a score of 151080
I played the story befor a while back, and I don't normaly replay games. But the way you build a characture in this game is so flexibal that I replayed it with differnt builds. Well charisma looks bad at first glance you learn you buy items with a 20% discount and sell items for full price with god like charisma. A body target build is also very powerful as soon as you get the longbow. My point is this game is made to be replayed. The puzzles can't be solved by every build so try making a new characture with differant skill and try new thing, trust me it's worth it. The game's story is also very nice. I found no grammical errors (unlike this comment, sorry I'm not a wizard,) and I always knew what was going on after reading the text. If I made a mistake it was easy to see where the mistake was (often having to low of a spot skill) and the items where clearly labbled with great discription. But what put this game compleatly over the top for me was the random number generator. Stats in the game just increes the odds in your favor. With a lot of luck you could make it through the game with realy low stats. But this isn't recomended, realy use your level ups. This is why the game can be played multibal times and still be fresh. An easy fight can easily be given to luck. So great game 8/8 all the way.
-- Dmanxbox on 12/4/2015 1:10:49 PM with a score of 117270
Best Ever. Please make a sequel where you get to tell what ending you chose last time to continue that story!
-- Fly on 11/25/2015 2:54:58 PM with a score of 183370
I achieved the Ending of the Illicit Lover. I am glad that I was finally able to have an ending in which the Succubus didn't trap me in the book. Yay!
-- jamescoker1226 on 11/23/2015 10:06:21 AM with a score of 95070
Nice, I like the story :D
-- Dancebigman on 11/23/2015 5:03:38 AM with a score of 108490
Thank you very much for this interesting story, I thoroughly enjoyed it. now, off to get the other endings
-- Anonymous on 11/20/2015 2:15:31 PM with a score of 12630
Still love i've played almost 12 times and still that much fun
-- Isanshan on 11/19/2015 7:20:07 PM with a score of 176600
OMG this was by far the absolute funnest choose your own adventure ever. The RPG factor is genius, all the endings are perfect because they correctly represent your choices. You have truly made a great adventure and I'll be waiting for your next one.
-- The pollinator on 11/19/2015 2:14:12 PM with a score of 152090
WHAT IS THE CODE TO THE THING LIKE WAHT IS IT?????
BONE + HEAD + DEAD = DEATH
??
-- OnePieceTreasure on 11/18/2015 3:23:51 PM with a score of 129560
This was my second time playing the game through, and I had even more fun than the first. I went with the bow this time as my primary weapon, and discovered tons of treasures that I didn't find the first time, and managed to double-cross the succubus. It was a most excellent adventure! I got the "Adventurer" ending. Great job and I hope that you have some kind of expansion in the future!
-- Zaraki Kenpachi on 11/17/2015 4:15:58 AM with a score of 126380
This was awesome. I had no idea that the game platform was capable of doing so much! I enjoyed the story and the options that were available. I would play it again.
-- Zaraki Kenpachi on 11/16/2015 9:56:40 PM with a score of 172030
Lovely game
Made for those with a strong heart and strategic mind
-- madman on 11/16/2015 1:47:56 PM with a score of 4190
After feeling like I've found everything (and using the Cleaning Whisk over 100 times), I can say I enjoyed my last trip through the game.

I will say, however, to whoever authored this - there is a glitch between the crypt and the north room that if you keep exiting out to the crypt but search AGAIN, you can max out your GP (to 500K) in three turns.

Just thought you'd like to know that at least the gold counter for the search option needs a one-off limiter variable. :)
-- CastleLover on 11/16/2015 12:30:37 PM with a score of 68050
With a nicely thought-out and engaging narrative throughout, this dungeon-crawler was well written overall.

There are a few spelling/grammar errors that should have been tended to by now, and a few places in the story where the reactions to things seemed to have been without any character motivation... but those are the only things that keep it from a perfect score.

Good job! :)
-- CastleLover on 11/15/2015 2:58:48 PM with a score of 169270
This makes use of the features of the advanced editor so well I can't even imagine how much scripting and stuff you had to do, haha.
-- igulat on 11/15/2015 9:35:18 AM with a score of 107470
This was my first choose your own adventure type story and I have to say it's amazing. My ending wasn't the best but isn't that how all stories can end. I'm sure if I played through it again, I could end it in a better way and I probably will. It has tons of replayabiity and I highly recommend this great story. :)
-- Saul on 11/12/2015 4:46:51 PM with a score of 207610
Excellent plz more like it
-- Donovan Black on 11/12/2015 3:30:35 PM with a score of 158920
It was very fun.
Keep it up, I enjoyed it.
Was it inspired by Skyrim?
-- Anonymous on 11/11/2015 11:49:19 AM with a score of 109420
awesome game I had to find a way to get a good ending but I love it so keep making more their really fun
-- halomantis on 11/6/2015 1:58:35 PM with a score of 128890
it took too long and I suck
-- oscar on 11/3/2015 8:18:36 AM with a score of 62550
I Just loved your story, I want to know if you have more stories like this one
-- Emilio on 11/2/2015 7:47:49 PM with a score of 171900
I loved the game every step of the way! I was really looking forward to something like this. However, when I chose to become the apprentice of the necromancer, it just read me the story instead of letting me play it out! I would have loved to actually do all that in game myself rather than just let me play half the game then storytell me the other half. But the part that was playable was amazing.
-- jmontgomery13 on 11/2/2015 7:56:26 AM with a score of 9250
I wish there was a part 2
-- Lucky_Ladybug on 10/29/2015 8:50:40 PM with a score of 75110
OMG! This was one of the good stories out there! I kept dying... but it was SO worth it!
-- Vppqrt_A on 10/27/2015 11:38:39 PM with a score of 85600
Lots of choices made it fun all the way through.
-- sshollund on 10/25/2015 8:41:42 PM with a score of 134420
That was really fun, thank you
-- Joe on 10/25/2015 12:57:59 PM with a score of 107520
AWESOME
-- Flamefireboy12 on 10/24/2015 11:27:53 AM with a score of 52480
A very excellent RPG, wish it had a sequel though.
-- Firejet94 on 10/23/2015 12:42:56 PM with a score of 188890
This game is amazing, really it is
-- Gmkope on 10/22/2015 2:22:52 PM with a score of 136900
This is the Best Game I've Ever Played on this site. Make a sequel
-- mahboi on 10/22/2015 2:15:55 PM with a score of 131870
Loved every second of it!
-- PsychoEmperor on 10/19/2015 6:36:32 PM with a score of 69110
GG
-- Kassariel on 10/19/2015 12:52:38 PM with a score of 102990
Awesome story! Played through multiple times only to find more content! Good Work BerkaZerka!
-- Anonymous on 10/18/2015 12:33:04 AM with a score of 710600
found a glitch with the crypt, if you search it after beating the specter and claiming the loot once, u can get the money again
-- SillierWizard on 10/17/2015 2:48:59 PM with a score of 145580
My very first experience with this type of gaming :)....I thoroughly enjoyed it! Thanx
-- rcwright39 on 10/16/2015 4:24:43 PM with a score of 4180
I found a glitch with the ghoul tomb cache, it gives me the potion but no gold
-- SillierWizard on 10/14/2015 2:07:12 PM with a score of 221670
I really love this book!!! You should make it longer! I hope your having a great day!!
-- Ryan on 10/14/2015 12:32:33 PM with a score of 4080
This. Was. Amazing.

Dungeon Stompage is the best storygame I have played on this site. I love this game, so, so much.

The game is finely set up, and this is more of a storyGAME than a STORYgame. But at that, it is very fun, one that warrants the entirety of the userbase to play. I had a lot of fun in the stretch of two days- and I loved every minute.

Not to be nitpickish, but I did find a few grammatical errors but who cares? I'm having fun like that I can easily gloss over this.

I got the NOBLE ENDING.
-- RoyalGhost_007 on 10/13/2015 11:09:12 AM with a score of 141220
Really nice game, though it would be nice if we could save the villagers...
-- kani123 on 10/10/2015 1:42:21 PM with a score of 155480
Loved it make more like it
-- Isanshon on 10/6/2015 3:48:18 PM with a score of 142860
It was great play
-- Yokiri on 9/26/2015 11:45:51 PM with a score of 162310
That was a really fun story and I had a great time reading and being a part of it! I was really confused in the beginning when I had to fight fatman because he was so powerful and I wasn't used to the fight mechanics, but once I took him out the rest was easier. Another issue I had was the lack of health. I wish you could like rest or something and regain your health because only having 5 health potions were kind of troublesome. And also there was too many items in the shop for too high of a price, what I mean is there isn't enough ways to make gold to afford all the items so I could only get some of the cheapest things like potions and a bow throughout the whole game. Other than a few minor things I really enjoyed it, and thanks for creating such an awesome story for us!!
-- Richard Roman on 9/26/2015 2:50:53 PM with a score of 46060
That was my first Choose Your Story and I thoroughly enjoyed it. Well done!
-- Daddy Big Draws on 9/20/2015 2:22:10 PM with a score of 4740
Perfect use of the format for a Game, with a good story. The minimal exposition is handled deftly, the characters are fairly well developed, and the gaming mechanics are superb. Challenging and entertaining, my only complaint was that it ended so soon. Top marks.
Cheers, BerkaZerka
-- dueconsideration on 9/18/2015 8:04:47 PM with a score of 121740
the ending was unexpected. Wish you didn't have to submit to him..
-- lil on 9/15/2015 2:04:46 AM with a score of 25580
I still love this game.

My first few run through was a a guest but I like coming back to is to see if I can fins all of the different endings and secrets.
-- FeanorOnForge on 9/9/2015 6:30:37 PM with a score of 167730
Very good game! I was really impressed by how this is a legit, well made rpg. The only thing I must say is that my first playthrough I tried to concentrate on ranged fighting, which was pointless. Melee is much better from the start, especially with the ring you get. Also, its an rng based game, so its really hard to resist saving during combat so that you always get a very lucky hit every time. Also there is a big glitch where you can get infinite money pretty quickly with the alcove. But nonetheless I was genuinely impressed.
-- Borthralla on 9/8/2015 12:04:01 AM with a score of 86600
This was da bomb
-- xTitan on 9/3/2015 6:34:23 PM with a score of 70980
9/10. needs to be longer. chest puzzle too hard. great other than that.
-- emerald on 8/31/2015 3:03:17 PM with a score of 86760
It was so immersive and challenging i didn't notice two hours passed by me like nothing. A definite recommendation.
-- blackblur21 on 8/29/2015 4:40:39 AM with a score of 106820
Loads of fun, great story, simple but epic adventure. More please!
-- Lt_Silverthorn on 8/27/2015 2:05:27 AM with a score of 118150
This game was fantastic. Been familiar with table top and video game RPGs i felt right at home. The story was simple but interesting and combined with the immersive combat and description made a truly intense experience.

Final Verdict: A game you just have to try at least once.
-- Paradox_GH on 8/17/2015 5:58:15 AM with a score of 96040
i really enjoyed the game but i wish it was longer
-- nate90911 on 8/13/2015 11:19:40 AM with a score of 94570
This story was my first on this site! It is really good! at points I felt my heart beating for good rolls and my mouth chewing on my nails when I had to make a tough decision! well written and really open! Probs to the author
-- Drench on 8/11/2015 9:32:27 PM with a score of 20310
Pretty easy i must say, but nonetheless, well written.
-- Vector on 8/1/2015 5:20:15 PM with a score of 162550
Jawesome
-- rdawson85 on 7/29/2015 10:41:21 PM with a score of 207380
I got a pretty nice ending. Spoiler alert, it's depressing right away. It's long, immersive, and very creative. 10/10.
-- Jordan on 7/26/2015 2:38:46 AM with a score of 72590
Awesome but pretty short.
-- archaic on 7/19/2015 5:26:38 PM with a score of 181680
Lots of fun. I wish it was longer, I got a bunch of bad-ass weapons only to be told the game is over.
-- greysonwolf on 7/17/2015 5:08:29 PM with a score of 239360
Look at my points. I took advantage of your glitch.
-- mvrk3906 on 7/16/2015 11:16:19 AM with a score of 1447320
ITS AWESOME
-- Ukairi on 7/11/2015 4:41:15 AM with a score of 158640
This game was awesome! Author should consider making a longer version of this. Needs a bit of proofreading in some areas, but is by far the best choose your own adventure I have ever done. Better than pen and paper dnd :)
-- Just a guy on 6/29/2015 4:09:01 PM with a score of 77190
I got the noble ending beat the specter and found the treasure and all but could I have possibly brought my loved ones back or found the dwarves Axe?
-- darius on 6/27/2015 9:38:06 PM with a score of 207300
Boring, don't really like the story but it's ok
-- 3333 on 6/22/2015 3:41:12 PM with a score of 58810
It's like playing skyrim! or a real rpg game.
-- Rafel on 6/20/2015 8:18:59 AM with a score of 59380
Ending of the Damned? damn, restart
-- Sogiita_Gunha on 6/11/2015 3:44:58 AM with a score of 4500
Awesomeness at its finest
-- Lightstar100 on 6/8/2015 11:21:22 AM with a score of 184590
Super fun! What a great little story with a lot of choices.
-- Fenoprofen on 6/6/2015 9:55:29 AM with a score of 18500
This was so fun and really entertaining. I found myself loving the puzzles and challenges that was thrown at me when dealing with this fun RPG. The thought process you put into this is to be commended. I highly recommend this for anyone who wants to get away from every day stresses, although if you do not have a mind for puzzles or the patience to try out the different routes, enemies, ect., then.... Well, I would still recommend it, simply because this game will make you feel awesome in eventually figuring out the riddles and puzzles!
-- FunTimeGal on 6/5/2015 9:22:36 PM with a score of 74590
Fun and quite engaging, like a video game only with your imagination and your words to bring the scenes to like. Awesome game.
-- Red-Hood on 6/2/2015 8:00:17 PM with a score of 68300
Wow, lots of work with variables and items and scripting. Great job! Definitely more game than story. Few errors though, e.g. at the alcove with the imp statue and the search option you can repeatedly use there repeatedly for gold,l but maybe that's intentional. And a few places you do not get the gold that you found, happened to me at the ghoul tomb. But overall a lot of effort went into this. Great vocabulary and language used on some pages.

Stopped playing after unlocking that final chest, but maybe there is something else/more that can still be done? Anyways, one of the better CYOAs. Thanks
-- 13Swellendam on 6/1/2015 11:16:16 AM with a score of 102220
I just wish there was more to it
-- Dr_ThaAwesome1 on 5/31/2015 3:56:32 AM with a score of 121030
I got the ending of the Betrayer...
-- TheBossWriter on 5/28/2015 11:48:08 AM with a score of 112350
This was so much fun. I read the story on phone and had a blast. It kepted me busy!
-- blake on 5/28/2015 11:00:31 AM with a score of 83230
Extremely well done, the only flaw is that it is too short and leaves me wanting more! Bravo!
-- ABomb on 5/28/2015 12:53:54 AM with a score of 83170
Good!!!
-- Mylapqn on 5/27/2015 7:39:20 PM with a score of 80220
Sweet!
-- TheBossWriter on 5/27/2015 3:44:58 PM with a score of 15520
10/10 better than skyrim
-- wnderinghobo49 on 5/25/2015 7:33:54 PM with a score of 44410
Amazing game... I was bored and happened upon stumbled this site. Then I tried this story, wow, it was an amazing ride. The first ending I got was The Betrayer, just because I want to have the Fire Wand so I can cheese the Necromancer (just spam Pikachu and Fire Wand). Finally I was able to get my second and satisfying ending for me. The Adventurer. It was very amazing game once again. But, it is just me or Necromancer can be cheesed by using Fire potion and Pikachu (or Fire Wand). And the Zombies is basically spam the the fast shortsword . It will be amazing if it was longer but lol it was still good. Good Job.
-- LimitSeeker on 5/24/2015 11:01:15 AM with a score of 193620
Amazing work. Rated 8/8! It's a bit tough at first, but I love a challenge. I can tell you put a lot of work into this. Great job!
-- Ally on 5/17/2015 10:37:39 PM with a score of 59500
Great game! My 2 favorite endings (Only cause they are the hardest due to the requirements for them) are
1. Wolf in sheep's clothing
2. Illicit Lover
BTW the more you play this game the easier it gets. For example all I need is parley to finish the game. Get the zorch rat, fight the fat man, get the book, knock on lab door, and use zorch on the necro.
-- BlueSabere on 5/17/2015 3:02:18 PM with a score of 254810
I started it at 11 pm, and I finished it at 4 am. I literally played straight for five hours.
Might have slight spoilers, but who the hell cares?

This game is fan-freaking-tastic. The battles, they were one of my favorites- they're perfectly Rpg-like. Turn-based, and based on stats, and... yeah. The riddles, thank God for the internet because if I didn't search I never would've figured out... That's probably only because of my stupidity, of course.
There was also the part where it makes you seriously think about the outcome and get frustrated with yourself because of not knowing to who you should give the book; the woman or the mage? I seriously got stuck there, thinking for two to three minutes which side I should take.

In the end, I chose the mage because, well, I remembered the mage's advice, that she's full of trouble. I still hesitated, but I chose the mage simply because of that.
I'm so happy I didn't think of them being actually enemies with the mage trying to lie so you don't trust her.

There's also the part where you're inside the stronghold already. I checked every hall, and you can't blame me for clicking back everytime I die xD even though it would seem slightly boring to check and explore so many things, I actually found it fun to explore. That's very rare for me, almost impossible, as I mostly find having to see everything boring.

All in all, it's an awesome game. I really felt like I was playing a true, animated, video game for free without any lag nor any needed plug-ins.

Again, it's an awesome game and i'm so freaking glad this is one of the first games I played. Though, I actually hesitated to play this because of the seemingly boring start... i'm an idiot for hesitating.

7/8
-- Viper on 5/16/2015 4:58:43 PM with a score of 71670
More of a game than an interactive fiction. Keep it up! Tons of replay ability!
-- BlueSabere on 5/16/2015 3:30:24 PM with a score of 188020
very rewarding game, time well spent, good enough plot so that the story holds up, really liked the combat system and the dialog was good too.
-- DreadKnight42 on 5/12/2015 4:56:32 AM with a score of 95520
Good time killer on a long drive. I had fun!
-- Powerslave on 5/11/2015 2:30:40 PM with a score of 88900
Super good
-- Isanshan on 5/11/2015 12:05:35 PM with a score of 51830
AMAZING.
-- Ichane on 5/10/2015 7:09:12 PM with a score of 75680
Right, I am disheartened after seeing that someone has a score above 10 million. Great game, although I can't figure out how to do better.
-- Aconc on 5/10/2015 8:41:55 AM with a score of 75400
Really fun
-- Isanshan on 5/6/2015 4:48:50 PM with a score of 110160
this was great but i found that it was a little too shot :( if you wan to win the game in seconds simply put everything into melee and climb
-- Force on 5/6/2015 10:38:31 AM with a score of 67220
An Awesome game! I could not beat merodatch by fighting him though, I guess if you can't beat 'em - you join them and then beat them so you have the element of surprise. lol.
-- Zaguiza14 on 5/1/2015 6:52:48 PM with a score of 31190
Really well done. Will definitely be playing again for a different outcome! I am seriously in awe of the amount of effort that was put into this!
-- ZasaCryoricGroon on 4/30/2015 8:25:45 PM with a score of 76080
fantastic. i got the ending of the betrayer. too bad i couldn't just drop the book before travelling back to the tower... I had a, ah spell I wanted to try out on a specific character ;)
-- Plendamonda on 4/29/2015 6:14:04 PM with a score of 183790
I find this a little baffling, to be honest. While it is admittedly a reasonable diversion for a few minutes, and I'm all for dungeon-romping, a lot of it doesn't add up. Without spoiling anything, you can go from being a 14 year old child to ridiculous heights of power in what for me was two combats, with little in between. If you've put your stat points into body, you can just "double attack" everything into oblivion. You have enough stat points at the start to make your character excellent at more than one of the few things needed. Now, the item system works well and there's a huge amount of potential, but t all felt a bit anticlimactic for me, despite the melodrama of the "ending of the damned". Also, what's with the woman?
-- Joe on 4/24/2015 4:10:59 PM with a score of 20190
Awesome just what a adventure should be
-- Flagrunner64 on 4/23/2015 8:20:40 PM with a score of 23130
Great battle simulator! But the story still had good plot and details 8/8
-- Dmanxbox on 4/17/2015 8:43:12 PM with a score of 79970
THIS is what people should aim for when creating advanced CYOA storygames! The battles were brilliantly constructed, the story was enjoyable and the characters were relatable. Not to mention the challenging puzzles and fun riddles along the way.

"10/10, would play again."

Just brilliant.
-- Starky on 4/16/2015 7:58:23 PM with a score of 117250
Great game. I wish there were options for honing your skills outside of what little battle there is. Maybe travel to another town? Not very long in my opinion, but a great game nonetheless.
-- Jacob on 4/13/2015 11:44:38 AM with a score of 154090
Very, very, very, very good. The endings I got were disappointing to me.
-- WizzyCat on 4/11/2015 10:11:15 AM with a score of 142270
This is certainly one of the best games I have ever played on CYS. I say this because this had a comprehensive storyline, and a whole bunch of other stuff which I do not want to spoil for the visitors of the site that some how discover this game. It takes a long time, and I recommend saving because it will take a few hours, but really nice. I got the first and second ending, I don't remember how many endings there are besides the death endings, but I got to see two of the endings. Nice game!
-- Shinobi on 4/8/2015 9:48:54 PM with a score of 59050
It was really good! Also i found away to cheat and get heaps of gold!
-- Wigglewigglewiggle on 4/6/2015 4:49:00 AM with a score of 52030
Awesome game, I was amazed by the clever scripting
-- Omgmagi on 4/3/2015 4:53:31 PM with a score of 384270
Very well made! Although I went through as many endings as I could find, I just think there could have been a few more "evil" endings. Otherwise, great story! And the mechanics are amazing.
-- lailoken1330 on 3/31/2015 1:04:17 AM with a score of 153100
Make add-ons con. the story
-- COOL on 3/29/2015 2:37:53 PM with a score of 70100
Good story with nice twists, solid mechanics and a little challenge, all in one package. I wouldn't mind it being a little longer and with a little more dungeon crawling + fighting, but it's still very satisfying. Well done.
-- Maciej Krok on 3/26/2015 12:49:10 PM with a score of 178090
I love it.You are a genius.
-- JustAGirl on 3/17/2015 5:54:27 AM with a score of 73030
Awesome game, thank for taking time to make it good
-- stid on 3/15/2015 6:09:22 PM with a score of 68590
My only complaint is how quickly you manage to get high melee, and the little options you get to use most of your skills. Not a true RPG, but otherwise an awesome experience worth every second, wish it was longer.
-- Anon on 3/11/2015 9:26:35 PM with a score of 83170
Pretty good, the two endings I found made very good sense.
-- shakeyes on 2/28/2015 4:26:05 PM with a score of 150110
Very nice !!!!!!!!! Wow!!!!
-- Wedgemaster on 2/28/2015 12:11:06 PM with a score of 12050
Ah the endings have the same wording and that upset me a little but in all it was good.
-- Jose Deze on 2/25/2015 11:26:31 AM with a score of 67030
Perfect! Great implimentation of battles, and great work on the game! Hope you make more games like this.
-- Zeawesomeguy on 2/19/2015 8:52:47 AM with a score of 4400
It was a excellent game and one of the best games I've ever played on this website.There was only one problem and that one problem was that I beat the game in only one hour.
-- LedinFX on 2/17/2015 7:07:02 PM with a score of 63530
I got Ending of The Destroyer. Fun story, a little easy and the names were sort of cheesy, but still fun. It felt a bit like being Ash in Army of Darkness...or maybe that nerdy kid who finds the Loc-Nar in Heavy Metal...
-- Krondor on 2/9/2015 4:52:15 PM with a score of 109620
Its pretty cool, I went through it several times to get all the endings, I enjoyed the ending of the adventurer the most but if it were me I might have gone back to the village at the end after adventuring for a while
-- RedZeroInferno on 2/3/2015 3:06:50 PM with a score of 139440
Had a lot of fun playing, everytime i had the chance to betray someone i took it, made this playthrough a little short but intresting.
-- gerrrit on 2/1/2015 3:05:21 PM with a score of 7370
How do you guys have such high scores? Did you spam the cleaning whisk?
-- Kim on 2/1/2015 12:43:13 PM with a score of 129050
Excellent, fun and exciting. Would play again.
-- waja on 2/1/2015 7:53:04 AM with a score of 185150
The ending of the adventurer....
8/8
-- Silverflame on 1/31/2015 5:24:16 PM with a score of 158060
Omg..... Bech make morrre please 9001/10
-- Qlend on 1/28/2015 12:17:41 AM with a score of 147580
Good stuff! I've played through twice, nice battle system and the story line is pretty good. If the dialogue and wording were tweaked a bit more to fit the period, this adventure could be great! But it's still very fun to go through, regardless. In fact, I'm going to try one more time...
-- thealamo67 on 1/20/2015 9:09:10 AM with a score of 100620
Sweet Game! Best CYOA I've played in a while! Made this account just so I could thank you :3
-- UnDeath on 1/18/2015 10:06:12 PM with a score of 97330
On a whim I found this website and this was the first game I tried... Awesome! Taking on that zombie horde while only taking 15 points worth of damage was awesome, and the ending... Well, I guess I should have seen that coming. Good job.
-- That was nice! on 1/18/2015 8:00:01 PM with a score of 81880
AAAAAAAAAAAAAMMMMMMMMMMMMAAAAAAAAAZZZZZZZZIIIIIIINNNNNNNNNGGGGGGGGG
-- Brandon on 1/16/2015 10:35:02 PM with a score of 82550
It's great I wish there were more.
-- Anton on 1/15/2015 2:50:36 PM with a score of 75170
Hey i just happened upon this game you apparantly made forever ago and this game was truly AMAZING the way that you had scripted this was genius i dont think ive come across a game that utilized that level of script using a fuckin story website! I actually got stuck on your chest and ended up readin all your comments and I noticed you dont like to give out any secrets.. but yeah dude your really good i hope something happens for you..plus whats really funny is that theres a liiitle icon after that compulsively tells EVERY single person to comment so youre probably swamped.. Have fun with the next one best wishes
-- Jeff on 1/12/2015 3:34:02 PM with a score of 146660
Great game, plays like a traditional dungeon crawler and the combat system is superb.
-- GAME> MAN on 1/7/2015 7:27:54 PM with a score of 76850
This is a great adventure. I had to try it a couple of times. Well-written with exciting endings if you can get to them by choosing your stats well.
-- Appriser Melody on 1/7/2015 4:08:06 AM with a score of 125190
I love the combat and the leveling system in this game,very customizable, very fun.
-- Pumpkin_Rot on 1/5/2015 1:06:35 AM with a score of 12430
Nice game!
-- haledakota on 1/4/2015 5:19:44 PM with a score of 140260
Cool
-- Chris on 1/3/2015 9:55:42 PM with a score of 109030
This is wondeful.
-- WarriorCats on 1/3/2015 12:43:10 AM with a score of 132340
A fair bit higher than decent. Well written. 6\8
-- Wolfmist on 1/1/2015 8:59:45 PM with a score of 4000
It will bring you enlightenment and all that cool shit, plus, You can be beating someone up and then just be like "lol, nah"
teleport out, get more stuff, and continue fighting with no missed opportunities. XD waaay better than a Reeses Cup
-- ImJustASeaweedbrain on 12/30/2014 7:13:34 PM with a score of 107920
I liked it, though I didn't want to reach the bad ending (I forgot what it was called). Can someone help me on how to win a good ending?
-- Timothybennett on 12/30/2014 2:35:22 PM with a score of 151320
Gold: 258753; SCORE: 930440

I really liked it! The game had just the right measure of kicking ass, puzzles, more kicking ass, text and decisions. oh the decisions. I got like... Four different endings, the first one being the doomed one or something like that and the last one being the noble's ending.
Also, I loved the broom. It was just so hilarious being like "oh, there is a horde of zombies crawling towards me: better have clean floors!"
I liked the battle system, even though it felt a little repetitive at times.
Also the chest puzzle. It killed my brains. In a good way.

And in case you're wondering what's up with that score of mine... Let's just say that I played through quite some times.
-- Carotzku on 12/29/2014 5:52:15 PM with a score of 930450
The writing was great, I would love to know more about the game play behind the scene, like what else did I miss with the different characters.
-- Landon on 12/29/2014 12:49:21 AM with a score of 85030
Best story ever I think I got the highest score
-- Impulse on 12/27/2014 5:18:39 PM with a score of 822640
awesome but a bit short
-- bobmoran on 12/27/2014 8:37:28 AM with a score of 211100
Health: 43 (of 43); Gold: 381718; SCORE: 161280 (7/8)
-- LostCake on 12/27/2014 12:31:28 AM with a score of 161290
It was amazing! I only got to the ending of the damned and was very impressed! Nice work!
-- Captianobvious11 on 12/25/2014 11:11:47 PM with a score of 7210
Loved it
-- verumprocerusvir on 12/24/2014 5:52:12 PM with a score of 86830
I think i got a little carried away with all my buying in the shop, only to have the game end within the next 5 moves :( still a good game 7/8
-- chuxsta on 12/24/2014 1:50:27 AM with a score of 120250
I thought it was pretty good actually although it was short I did enjoy the many options it gave you. and the rating system it would have been a 7 but nothings better than recess cups sorry :). the only other thing was I thought the battles were to easy because I beat all of them and didn't even use the rat or fire staff. and the wither spell is to op but it was enjoyable.
-- anthony on 12/22/2014 9:54:15 PM with a score of 72920
I don't like the ending I got:(
-- Hungrykid11 on 12/22/2014 6:19:02 PM with a score of 13280
think I found all the endings.
Good game overall
-- saniuri on 12/20/2014 8:10:36 AM with a score of 83230
This was literally so much fun. I am being 100% serious this is better than telltale or even call of dutyxD. I loved the way you combined different mythical creatures that don't normally mix; but yours did. I would buy this for 60$ if it was longer and had character customization, more choices, and scenes. You should really consider becoming a developer, you are very talented, and this was just....! so awesome! thanks your the best.
-- christian on 12/18/2014 2:04:01 PM with a score of 4130
I really liked the game but now I really want to continue playing in the expansion with my character. Did the expansion ever happen?
-- Wavyhill on 12/17/2014 5:22:03 AM with a score of 314550
Okay, Noble's Ending this time. Woot! Back again to the save point to see what else I can do.
-- Wavyhill on 12/17/2014 4:27:44 AM with a score of 284740
After trying and failing several times to unlock the puzzle chest I gave up and started over, reaching the ending of the damned. Well, that sucked. Luckily I saved before that last fateful decision; maybe I can go back and try for the chest again...
-- Wavyhill on 12/17/2014 3:38:42 AM with a score of 47270
Stupendous. I really liked the story. Please do more of these stories. #Betrayer
-- RainbowJ on 12/16/2014 3:56:15 PM with a score of 117470
this game was awesome! got noble ending.
-- thtyger on 12/15/2014 8:39:42 AM with a score of 177010
It was kinda short for me, and Zorch Rat is OP. That's everything I can complain about, finished up in one sentence, yet the comment doesn't end. Because the story, Dungeon Stompage! is something that I can safely call awesome. It's awesome. It's incredibly awesome and I advise anyone to play it. It mixes good things with other good things and achieves greatness. And the main boss has a head of a frog. That is just original and incredible. Everyone who wonders if they should play it: Do it. Right now.
-- Quilveor on 12/14/2014 10:25:18 AM with a score of 52880
Last time playing through it, I think. Topped my old score. This game brought me a great deal of entertainment, and I'd recommend it to RPG fans. (Endings I've unlocked: Wolf in Sheep's Clothing, Illicit Lover, Betrayer, Adventurer, Nobleman, Damned, Fool's Ending, Destroyer, Wanderer, and Mostly Noble.
-- Visivicous on 12/13/2014 1:39:51 PM with a score of 272250
Hurrah! I have, with a bit of help, finally experienced all of the endings: Wolf in Sheep's Clothing, Illicit Lover, Betrayer, Adventurer, Nobleman, Damned, Fool's Ending, Destroyer, and the elusive two: Wanderer and Mostly Noble.
-- Visivicous on 12/9/2014 12:39:44 AM with a score of 200260
Extremely enjoyable.
-- JDeath7 on 12/6/2014 6:16:18 PM with a score of 99330
:D Noble's Ending. I'm rich! It was a great adventure, only wish that there was more to play. Feels like a Dungeons and Dragons adventure that needs to keep going until my Player Character ends up dead or a God.
-- RoanOfficePony on 12/4/2014 3:46:19 AM with a score of 88080
It was a lovely adventure. I only wish it could go on forever.
-- OfficePony on 12/4/2014 2:49:59 AM with a score of 107460
Played through again, but I could not find the elusive two endings :-(
Although I was able to increase my score a bit.
-- Visivicous on 11/29/2014 3:53:00 PM with a score of 217970
Of the hook Dawg, also i cant read so that was ascrewup
-- 50 Cent on 11/28/2014 10:56:35 PM with a score of 58940
Entertaining for sure. I played through multiple times, but could not find two of the endings. So far I've unlocked Wolf in Sheep's Clothing, Illicit Lover, Betrayer, Adventurer, Nobleman, Damned, Fool's Ending, and Destroyer.
-- Visivicous on 11/27/2014 12:29:55 PM with a score of 160830
It was awesome
-- Lightstar100 on 11/26/2014 11:35:12 AM with a score of 143560
Loved it, although I wish it was a bit longer. I want to keep adventuring as young Raven. ;)
-- alissd on 11/24/2014 1:28:57 AM with a score of 109830
OMG SWAG Got 111000 something! Great game!
-- KB on 11/18/2014 12:41:08 AM with a score of 115590
Excellent!
-- Taylor on 11/11/2014 4:55:47 AM with a score of 122850
it was great, you should totally make a sequel about the main characters son (I got the noble end) about him going of in search of adventure like his father
-- hayes on 11/10/2014 7:41:42 PM with a score of 59940
Great story, thanks for taking me on and adventure.
-- rybone5 on 11/9/2014 2:21:03 AM with a score of 102470
I loved it haha and I even got the ending I always wanted in those stories where the hero has something of great power f**k it MINE. haha great story but the eletric pet is kind of strong thats all :D
-- bud3r64 on 10/31/2014 4:06:39 AM with a score of 67500
Pretty good. The chest puzzle beat me. :P
-- OmegaQ on 10/30/2014 9:19:05 PM with a score of 196470
This story game is probably one of the best on this site. It had all the elements of a good RPG game - combat, puzzles, exploration, etc. All the battles were unique in their own way and finding those little treasures was immensely satisfying to me. The items were extremely well managed and using different items during combat led to many different ways of defeating a strong opponent. I really can't find anything bad about this story game, it was simply amazing.
-- SkyTenshi on 10/29/2014 11:56:49 PM with a score of 207210
Was quite fun. One thing that confuses me is that I chose the "i'll give it to you but on one condition..." and it didn't seem to let me pick that condition, or remember that I chose it (for later on when I encountered her again). Did I miss something?
-- Corbett on 10/21/2014 12:12:36 AM with a score of 88910
Great Game for my second adventure on this sight.
-- Zayne on 10/20/2014 2:27:31 PM with a score of 59460
Was really fun - until I managed to get trapped in a damned book :D keep up the good work! (I still doubt a 14 year old girl/boy is able to use a glaymore tough)
-- wolfgangjuncker on 10/18/2014 5:23:53 PM with a score of 173000
Ah, the power of the back button…I died about three times. It was a very well written story! I hit the back button to see what was in the story. I LOVED it!
-- DeathWhisperer on 10/16/2014 5:39:20 PM with a score of 128860
Great game
-- Beardon87 on 10/16/2014 5:29:21 PM with a score of 124970
Just plain amazing, one of the best storygames on this site
-- metazack on 10/10/2014 10:19:10 AM with a score of 161880
I finally beat this game. xD

This. Was. Awesome. 8/8
-- Kiel_Farren on 10/10/2014 9:50:40 AM with a score of 83840
Very good story.
I rated it 7/8.
There was lots of fights and riddles which I loved.
I tried for all the endings though only got three (ending of the damned, ending of the adventuere and noble's ending.
-- Silverflame on 10/6/2014 3:23:57 PM with a score of 76560
Very good, well done. One little thing. In the laboratory Villages are chained to the wall instead of villagers.
-- Shauna on 9/26/2014 8:56:40 AM with a score of 75630
Well, it would be better than Reeces anyway because I don't like them at all, but I'd say it was really well done
-- Aliyahu on 9/24/2014 4:51:33 PM with a score of 132530
Great
-- Erza on 9/22/2014 5:06:36 PM with a score of 113740
...just wow... you sir are VERY good at what you do... p l e a s e continue makeing more masterpieces
-- josh on 9/15/2014 4:38:47 PM with a score of 150940
Loved it!
-- DumbledoreAD on 9/15/2014 12:50:22 AM with a score of 92300
Great game, loved it. This is my 3rd playthrough, 1st time leaving a comment. Excellent item system, with only a few bugs (the previously reported infinite gold from the statue in the alcove).
-- Dan on 9/13/2014 6:37:32 PM with a score of 107820
HOW DO YOU BEAT POISON NEEDLE PUZZLE?
-- Pio on 9/13/2014 10:48:43 AM with a score of 112940
your's the best
-- Erza on 9/11/2014 2:24:00 PM with a score of 74110
Its k, I didn't get it. It was fun tho
-- Magikarp on 9/11/2014 1:17:44 AM with a score of 85560
uifeyuweigdfwGFEYGOY
-- superboss on 9/10/2014 5:25:22 PM with a score of 82740
It was the game of D&D I've always wanted but my friends were too impatient to have! Thoroughly enjoyed it and I really recommend it to others.
-- Kenny on 9/5/2014 12:31:11 PM with a score of 122540
Awesome
-- Scott3390 on 9/3/2014 6:47:43 PM with a score of 75690
Illicit Lover. Zero shame.
-- JimiJons on 9/2/2014 9:53:06 AM with a score of 127920
amazing game i personly loved it i got the nobles ending
-- element on 8/27/2014 6:54:36 PM with a score of 111890
this is good but rather too short
-- amarheracles on 8/24/2014 4:22:31 AM with a score of 123650
Awesome game! It's a pity it's too short.
-- AlephUser on 8/17/2014 8:58:39 PM with a score of 107230
Well written and entertaining. My only complaint is that it's a bit short. Other than that, it was great. Thank you for writing this.
-- 745mario1841 on 8/17/2014 4:06:10 PM with a score of 42740
cool i guess so kinda boring and hard to get money
-- penton on 8/17/2014 3:52:26 PM with a score of 4310
Good adventure ;} only down side is...I wanted it to be longer!*Sobs* But i Guess you can't have everything =P thanks for the fun!
-- Raven on 8/14/2014 4:52:51 PM with a score of 60200
I played it again and I did so much better than last time. I got about 50 times more points. This, again, is one of the best CYOA games I've ever played. Too bad the game wasn't longer because I would have enjoyed playing it more, but a story has to end, and that story must have taken months or years to fully get finished! I might just have to play it again...
-- blizzard12 on 8/10/2014 8:44:46 PM with a score of 254540
Excellent level of detail, great story telling and playability, truly the best of its kind I have come across online, for all those who enjoy 'Choose Your Own Adventure' style games and reading, I recommend 'Dungeon Stompage!' very highly. My regards to its creator!
-- Dovakiin on 8/9/2014 12:08:37 PM with a score of 80970
Must I say, I did not know what I was getting myself into! This story was one of epic proportions, a complete adventure through and through. Plunged into a nasty situation, you must seek out the guidance of an old wizard to purge the evil from your hometown and rebuild what was lost. This story arch is polished well, entirely interactive, including an inventory system that is user-friendly, a merchant system that makes you feel well supported, a fast-travel system that wastes no time, and a battle inter-face that includes strategic choices based upon your skill sets and items. A very compelling adventure that will leave anyone satisfied: I'll give it a 9.9/10 (Perhaps more detailed and visually appropriate artwork could be included for items and enemies)
-- Nick on 8/8/2014 7:40:01 PM with a score of 75930
GAAAAHHHHH! I CAN ONLY FIGURE OUT HOW TO GET THE ENDING OF THE DAMNED!
-- YourNameHere on 8/7/2014 6:13:37 PM with a score of 173840
This is definitely one of the best CYOA games I've played. This story must have taken a while to finish, but it was obviously worth it since your story was the first one I saw when I went on this sight. Overall great story and fun battles.
-- blizzard12 on 8/6/2014 3:29:07 PM with a score of 5020
Lots of fun! Thanks.

My only gripe is that I wish there had been more opportunities to utilize my high Charm and Parley!

I figured that these wouldn't be so useful in a traditional dungeon crawl story, but their inclusion made them interesting to me so I maxed them out (hehe!).

Well-written, engaging, funny, this was worth my time ^_^
-- crystalblur on 8/2/2014 3:09:20 PM with a score of 88110
Wish there was more to explore...search didnt help much. It felt like there could have been more...otherwise great game!
-- Kat on 8/2/2014 2:03:25 PM with a score of 68160
I enjoyed it very much
-- Kreig_MEsser on 7/31/2014 12:38:46 AM with a score of 76200
Wow, I don't say this often, but this game is amazing! The writing is excellent and the scripting is fantastic and a great example of what can be accomplished with the editor.

Your game also has a high replayability factor, as I discovered new things on each playthrough (the easter eggs thingies are btw also funny :P )

I also like the balance of fighting, exploring, talking, etc. in that everything has its own place so your game keeps refreshing, instead of becoming for example an endless repetition of foe-slaying, which unfortunately tends to happen with games of this scale. I also like it, by the way, how each battle is written differently and each opponent is well fleshed out instead of being your generic, everyday villain.

The only thing that was really annoying/frustrating to me was the chest puzzle. I honestly wasn't able to solve it without hints, but I guess that it kinda is the purpose of a 'boss' puzzle to be hard and near-insolvable, so kudos for that!

I don't very often rate games an 8, but I've made a well deserved exception for this game. Keep up the good work!



-- Romulus on 7/28/2014 6:06:52 PM with a score of 312560
that puzzle in the chest is so unsolvable i just gave up :I
-- derplord3 on 7/27/2014 5:03:32 PM with a score of 57620
This was fantastic in so many ways and was such a delight to play. I enjoyed all the little riddles (though I obviously needed help on the chest one...) and variety of items and weapons. After fiddling with the story a bit I ended up getting the Noble's Ending, which was great. Awesome job on this and I hope to see a second at some point in time.
-- Ember24 on 7/22/2014 6:38:43 PM with a score of 276130
This story makes me regret giving good ratings to other stories that were nothing compared to even half this story.
-- Anonymous on 7/19/2014 8:51:00 AM with a score of 136360
really good but i wish it was longer. hope you make add ons!!
-- DrakoDragonslayer on 7/17/2014 1:07:04 PM with a score of 107270
nice game, worth to play. the ridle make my head hurt lol
-- ryuuseikay on 7/15/2014 4:24:30 PM with a score of 72210
This Story shows all people what is possible using resources on chooseyourstory.com. Loads upon loads of scripting must have been put into this. After playing it several times, with different stats, the gameplay changed phenomally. If there was anything that could possibly improve this game it would be to have more enemies and fighting within the game and a short description of what you are buying before it is bought, but this game puts the 'game' in a storygame - Good Work Berka Zerka!
-- Anonymous on 7/13/2014 7:30:40 AM with a score of 163430
ya
-- warnight100 on 7/11/2014 6:38:51 AM with a score of 151710
Although it was shorter than expected, every moment of it was a ton of fun. This game really pushes the limits of how much can be done with a CYS style game. The puzzles were engaging, the encounters were well designed, and all in all, this was an amazing game that I'm going to replay until I get every single ending.
-- the_quiller on 7/11/2014 2:56:14 AM with a score of 121510
I got THE ENDING OF THE DESTROYER, what does that say about me exactly? XP
-- Calebster999 on 7/10/2014 9:12:57 PM with a score of 35170
Got the Illicit Lover ending.

Spectacular story, with far more depth than the surface would suggest. 8/8 for sure.
-- Dewdled on 7/4/2014 7:01:18 PM with a score of 163840
omg it was amazing tho i wish it was longer plz make sequal
-- Jason on 6/24/2014 10:33:07 PM with a score of 197180
While it was a fun adventure, it's fairly short to me and a bit buggy- At the dragon throne there's a problem where continually searching the area grants continual payouts. Fair story nonetheless.
-- Clockwork on 6/23/2014 11:53:25 AM with a score of 82830
loved it...got adventurers ending
-- n on 6/19/2014 2:18:11 PM with a score of 89350
Entertaining, not that long.
-- blinDead on 6/18/2014 6:30:55 AM with a score of 45490
Got the Nobles ending. The game was brilliant. Personally I would like to see a game like this, but with companions as well. You know a party of adventurers and romance I guess. Just you know stuff to spice it up even more. Honestly, though really great read and the time just flew by. I can't wait for more of you work!
-- J on 6/15/2014 1:15:10 AM with a score of 83900
Hey, that was pretty fun. A bit shorter than I thought it was going to be though. But overall, good job.
-- WoodenWriter on 6/14/2014 3:22:18 AM with a score of 70230
This is a great story I got the adventurer ending after a couple of tries
-- Josh on 6/13/2014 10:53:02 AM with a score of 59600
so many traps!!!
-- lukez on 6/12/2014 10:16:04 PM with a score of 76160
This game kept me busy for an hour and a half and was extremely in-depth if someone made this into an mmorpg it would be like god created it.
-- Nick on 6/12/2014 9:20:59 PM with a score of 94910
Very detailed story line. I like it :)
-- EvangelineV on 6/8/2014 10:24:59 PM with a score of 112140
I liked the plot and it's one of the best structured stories on this site.
-- Harmony on 6/7/2014 11:40:43 PM with a score of 67580
This game was so much fun! I loved seeing all of the different weapons and being able to use them in battle. Great work!
-- Viv on 6/1/2014 12:16:34 PM with a score of 67460
I really have no way to describe how amazing this is, and I hope there will be more from you in the future because this was the best thing I've read/played. And I haven't even seen what happened when you either sided with the lady or joined the evil wizard's forces (He's so evil, I didn't even bother to memorize his name :P) Maybe another day...
-- Graysongdl on 5/18/2014 9:33:17 PM with a score of 82580
One of the best story games on the internet, well done!I got the ending of the betrayer.
-- Snoopy57 on 5/14/2014 10:36:43 PM with a score of 64770
Very well done. I suspect there is quite a bit I didn't see on my playthrough (adventurer ending), for example I didn't mess around with the "dark side" stuff at all.

In a couple places there are bugs that allow you to get unlimited gold by searching over and over. (Statue and last room below.)

There are a lot of solutions to that chest puzzle, but they don't all work. Ten solutions for the case A=3 alone. I found that one of those worked so I didn't continue to A=8.

Especially liked the way you handled the map, very intuitive.

Would have liked to have gone back to the pits and tried to explore them, but didn't seem to be a way to try that once I discovered and bypassed them.

That's just nitpicking though, greatly enjoyed it, my compliments.
-- Unawares on 5/3/2014 3:20:17 AM with a score of 174890
Awesome job! I really liked it! 8/8!
-- cgal3454 on 4/30/2014 7:35:12 PM with a score of 246470
That was totally awesome!!! I loved it! I liked the challenges, 8/8!!!
-- Nightsky on 4/25/2014 7:31:27 PM with a score of 178800
Got the nobles ending. Feels awesome
-- Ravenmaner on 4/20/2014 6:49:40 PM with a score of 67500
I am in awe at this game!! Excellent job! Left me wanting for more.
-- voyageur1979 on 4/19/2014 1:31:39 AM with a score of 86630
This was one of the best storygames on this site! With emphasis on the GAME rather than story, it definitely left me excited to come back for more! The author certainly delivered with many interesting puzzles and secret rooms filled with unique enemies and treasures. It was fun seeing how different attributes affected outcomes of battles or helped find secrets in rooms I had previously explored. The story element was the icing on this delicious cake. Overall, worth a look and a few playthroughs! Thanks for making such an engrossing and fantastic game!
-- mek7 on 4/15/2014 3:13:58 PM with a score of 146430
Really fun. Got in way of studying but really fun.
-- Steven on 4/5/2014 9:54:06 PM with a score of 70630
Great game, it's definitely a storyGAME, but has a good story with great writing. It's well put together and flows well. Everything in it is fair and possible. (I did have to go through every number to get that chest though, but it was worth it). You want to read this one.
-- BurningPen on 4/1/2014 2:08:05 PM with a score of 98270
Was amazing.
-- ryanyu10 on 3/30/2014 7:00:50 PM with a score of 141910
Is there going to be a part two??? :D
-- Sterling on 2/26/2014 2:33:19 PM with a score of 108910
very fun story. Had a great time going through it, and now ill do so again!
-- vinru on 2/12/2014 2:48:02 PM with a score of 130890
Love it! This brings back fond memories of sitting in my friends basement and rolling dice on a game board.

Would you consider making a sequel?
-- High Elf adventurer on 2/11/2014 12:33:43 PM with a score of 126790
Really good read, combat system and scripting is excellent. Nice Work.
-- Rmpgry on 1/28/2014 4:37:36 AM with a score of 207230
Really, really good
-- Agornish on 1/26/2014 12:59:27 PM with a score of 129210
Is it possible to find the dragon's bones? Awesome game either way.
-- Bob on 1/20/2014 10:40:23 AM with a score of 132600
Really fun, and a good way to spend an afternoon. My only problem was with the blasted puzzles. They're a bit of a pain unless you pump your Brain stat (which gives you extra hints or easier puzzles). The endings were fine, but it would have been nice if it was a bit longer, showing the adventures of Raven as he tries to rebuild his village or go adventuring.
-- zman8192 on 1/19/2014 10:31:49 AM with a score of 150570
well i got the betrayer... what can i say, cant say no to a woman :D
-- Sexysoap on 12/5/2013 1:55:24 PM with a score of 71460
I want to report a little bug, how can a girl being headsman? It should be Headwoman or atleast HeadMistress
-- RabbitSeason on 12/4/2013 5:23:43 AM with a score of 78580
Got the ending of the betrayer.
-- lucas on 11/23/2013 3:22:23 PM with a score of 165680
Amazing.
-- Xiro on 11/18/2013 9:38:43 PM with a score of 61650
Kinda sucks how you cant do anything after you "win", but great game nonetheless! 8/8!
-- Tim on 11/5/2013 7:46:37 PM with a score of 125460
Great work!
Got the nobles ending :)
-- Rapid on 10/25/2013 11:06:21 AM with a score of 187910
Ending Of The Illicit Lover
LOL
My first ending and it was funny
about 170000 points i think i did good with no cheating
-- stormjet64 on 10/23/2013 5:13:26 PM with a score of 170420
just did my second playthough, I think I managed to do everything except explore the west hall in the stronghold. I was at 1 health by the time I finished the game cause I couldn't buy anymore heeling potions from the armery, so di'dn't explore the west hall because I might've died with that low amount of health.
-- lucas on 10/20/2013 6:11:25 PM with a score of 103230
This is a really good game. Good writing. I like that it took me a few tries to get a good ending. a forum poste I read really helped me though. My rating is 8 out of 8.
-- lucas on 10/18/2013 9:15:35 PM with a score of 112890
It was even better this time around! I HAVE to get every ending now.
-- dman2life on 10/13/2013 4:05:42 AM with a score of 169340
Health: 62 (of 68); Gold: 4170; SCORE: 142230

I wonder if I have the high score... That evil locked box puzzle was wicked. I had to manually try over and over to open it.
-- dman2life on 10/13/2013 3:06:58 AM with a score of 142240
I loved it! 8/8! Very complex and enjoyable. Got the noble's ending.
-- jack10345 on 10/8/2013 10:29:18 PM with a score of 158290
I don't think there is anything I can say that hasn't already been said but i really enjoyed your story and hope to see more like it. Great job BZ!!!
-- Azefra on 10/4/2013 1:57:41 PM with a score of 116070
I couldn't think ANY story game could get ANY better than this so I gave better than this so I gave it 8/8.
How did you do the stat sheet?
How did you do the map in the dungeon?
How did you do that item shop?
I just got the ending of the damned, but I'm determined to get the real ending.
GREAT GAME!
-- cMitchell3 on 10/2/2013 4:36:46 PM with a score of 12680
A pleasure to play from the start to the end! An inspiring story too, as well as a small but comfortable map to explore. Barely finished by the skin of my teeth, though - with only one HP and a horde to destroy, I had already run out of potions even prior to the fight. If it wasn't for my out-worldly Barter skill, I'd've died for sure.
-- Cal on 9/30/2013 2:16:43 PM with a score of 68390
Epic. Best game on this site so far.
-- SteveDoc on 9/21/2013 5:59:57 PM with a score of 213400
you will play this game right now or i the mighty mechtroarch the mad will sever thine head!
-- Bison on 9/11/2013 9:19:42 PM with a score of 155060
Best story ever noble ending the first ending is the one I accept the book to the woman ... boy such a bad ending ... also I am trying to find a way to use my new dark power
-- andrew123 on 8/21/2013 4:31:01 PM with a score of 156980
bwhahaha! :D i'm so glad that for once i was able to take an evil path in these games without it saying "youre dead and you should feel bad, try again and be good!" xDD awesome cyoa, love being able to level up and etc.
-- kittyanbunny on 8/20/2013 1:25:16 PM with a score of 12880
So far I have acheived ending of the adventurer, ending of the noble, and ending of the betrayer. I enjoyed it; it was like the old storygame books!
-- iamayeti on 8/15/2013 5:08:20 PM with a score of 124170
wonderful game. I like the fact that you can choose to be good or evil, but I don't like the fact that you can't somehow stay away from the succubus and be evil by yourself in some way
-- Caeronvar on 8/3/2013 3:08:26 PM with a score of 79690
<------ _Jumper_ again, I made a highscore earlier, right??? :D
-- _Jumper_ on 7/29/2013 6:36:25 PM with a score of 259390
Very nice Game!
-- _Jumper_ on 7/29/2013 5:39:12 PM with a score of 672070
Excellent, Well Thought Out and Brilliant. Loved it The Whole way.
-- Jeremy on 7/29/2013 5:13:19 AM with a score of 150260
So far I have only achieved one of the less satisfying endings, but I have to say that this game, relative to other games on this site, rates very highly. It was well written, the inventory was well done and the movements well diagrammed. That being said, the game is frustratingly hard ;-). Rating: A
-- attilaiceknife on 7/28/2013 5:42:50 PM with a score of 29740
It was amazing, with all the fun and replay value of a real rpg game in half the time. But my inability to perform a flaming shield toss was EXTREMELY dissappointing.
-- ISentinelPenguinI on 7/25/2013 8:03:51 PM with a score of 69810
Nice game, it would be nice if there is a new sequel where you continue your saga
-- necermindohh on 7/23/2013 1:34:40 PM with a score of 151070
I got the noble's ending, really like this game, the fights were superb. I like how you needed to level up wisely in order to use your skills to the max.. Lovely game...
-- rabinjackman on 7/20/2013 8:56:47 AM with a score of 167570
My Favorite game on the site.
-- Drydenhouse on 7/14/2013 4:54:56 PM with a score of 121470
Great game! A few bugs but nothing that makes it unplayable. Fun, Fun!
-- BOB on 6/30/2013 8:49:06 PM with a score of 175400
Yeah! Noble's ending!
I really have no idea why this is not an 8. This is by far the most complex and advanced storygame I have seen yet. Thinking about how long it must have taken to make gives me a headache. It was fun to play and really challenging. I liked that you didn't just battle and you also had to think about what you were doing and be strategic.
Buying items felt a lot like I was being ripped off. Ten percent sales tax when the entire village is dead? Seriously?
-- Christian_Writer on 6/22/2013 5:35:54 PM with a score of 65110
A jollygood dungeon crawl, that horde of undead never stood a chance! to adventure!
-- neogreggory on 6/17/2013 5:17:16 AM with a score of 81710
* sorry if that last comment came off a bit dickish... But yeah, there are 6 working combos to the treasure chest, but only 2 of them currently plugged-in. Anyone that has trouble is free to PM me for one of the combos and a hint if they want to try solving it with the other one ^-^
-- BerkaZerka on 6/1/2013 11:51:30 PM with a score of 60920
@ Sean ---> Hmm, your math doesn't quite add up to the level of your indignation haha! No 4 digit combos will work at all, because D cannot equal H (two different numbers) – of the two of your 6 digit combos, one is junk and the other has already been pointed out by other users (10462). In fact, a real math savant (Del9fina), has proven that there are six combinations to the puzzle. I had originally accounted for 2 and plan to add the remaining 4 (including 10462) when I do an update on the game sometime in the next month or two.
-- BerkaZerka on 6/1/2013 11:20:13 PM with a score of 101060
the treasure chest needs improvement. there are several codes that are acceptable, but only one works. this made it overly hard.(9 codes total each taked about ten minutes to solve leaves an hour and a half. thats bs.) 7502 1291 4291 13984. 7380 1041 2041 10462. just to list off some that works. because of this, im giving this a lower score than i couldve given.
-- Sean on 6/1/2013 10:18:42 PM with a score of 117670
Pretty good, I liked the inventory and leveling up.
-- Mike on 5/28/2013 2:30:26 PM with a score of 107670
found the secret! super fun game
-- blazecentral on 5/18/2013 11:48:34 PM with a score of 105830
a very good game. i am about to replay it now ^.^
-- blazecentral on 5/18/2013 8:32:44 PM with a score of 93350
great story wish it was longer though
-- don't piss off the wizard on 5/13/2013 2:25:38 AM with a score of 76500
No one mentioned the serpant fang... but if any is interested, just keep the Spot stat high and look around in important spots.
-- cchoi16 on 5/4/2013 1:40:40 AM with a score of 139580
Very nicely done, a well-written and descriptive adventure. I'm curious as to the other endings, are there better endings than the noble and adventurer's ones? Thanks for an excellent game, looking forward to more like this one!

Best regards,
Jordan
-- Jordan on 5/2/2013 3:35:56 AM with a score of 107680
very well done
-- zeke86198 on 4/30/2013 1:01:53 AM with a score of 160140
Very nice game.Is there any way to dominate 350 years old wizard?
-- DvaLisa on 4/21/2013 6:45:05 PM with a score of 133080
I loved the mechanics yet I wish it were longer
-- Elioto on 4/19/2013 10:37:28 PM with a score of 4020
Really fun game, I like how the text changes when you do an action in a certain area and if you revisit the area the text changes accordingly. Really nice!
-- Psionical on 4/18/2013 4:55:56 PM with a score of 82640
I like it...do more please
-- DarthNelly on 4/17/2013 4:57:47 PM with a score of 110600
cewl
-- haledakota on 4/13/2013 1:50:39 PM with a score of 14390
Wolf in Sheep's Clothes :)
-- EmperoroftheNorth on 4/2/2013 12:25:26 AM with a score of 130650
Had fun with your game and would love to see some kind of continuation. I found the puzzles to make me stop and think, and after a little thought solve it correctly. The chest was what made me stumble. Shouldn't the combination end in 75 ?
I systematically solved it and got the loot, but unsure how you came up with what opened it in game.
-- Rrrup on 3/29/2013 7:38:53 PM with a score of 120020
Truly a lovingly well thought out storygame! I enjoyed it very much. I must somewhat sheepishly admit, the puzzle of the chest in the private quarters demanded too much skill and patience for me to solve :P

There *is* a bug, which I am proud not to have exploited (although, hehe, technically I am a Betrayer). You can return to the stone mouth of the imp demon thingy in the alcove as many times as you like and repeatedly collect the same gold provided you leave the room then re-enter it. So technically you could in that way build up a limitless supply of money.

I would definitely look forward to a sequel. Gave it 8/8 just because I have not enjoyed another storygame on here more. The pacing was superb. There were a little few characters and they seemed rather one-dimensional but I loved the different nooks and crannies to search and attack :3
-- Scribe on 3/29/2013 5:15:14 PM with a score of 128020
Very interesting, would like to see a sequel
-- Salamander on 3/27/2013 4:00:08 PM with a score of 16500
Very addicting just want it a little longer but good game overall
-- noahthebum on 3/25/2013 6:42:03 PM with a score of 84200
Good game kinda interesting combat. Upgrade the melee and body to godlike = GOD MODE ACTIVATE lol. Good game overall
-- oldsm66 on 3/22/2013 1:56:24 PM with a score of 67450
I love your writing. You're consistently fun to read. The imagination is great and the inventory system is awesome! That said...I have to try again for more endings! Definitely worth more than one play through. =)
-- RipElliott on 3/15/2013 6:37:35 PM with a score of 51950
really enjoyed the story, using a stat sheet and weapons was a very nice touch
-- rasmnj06 on 3/15/2013 3:26:30 PM with a score of 70330
Rawr! stomp. stomp. stomp.
-- MagmaArmor0 on 3/11/2013 2:36:33 PM with a score of 147830
Very fun and challenging. I wish there was more especially because you can buy kragons armory and only use it on one battle. At least that was just my ending
-- Guy on 3/7/2013 8:20:05 PM with a score of 121510
Found a bug. :D

-- Sparrow7 on 3/5/2013 11:56:41 AM with a score of 90960
Immensely entertaining! The story gets better and better! After I got the ending of the adventurer/damned/betrayer/noble, I've managed to get illicit lover and wolf, yay! Nice work with THE secret room! Totally caught me by surprise after a few tries. This game has great replay value!
-- zeewonka on 3/4/2013 1:09:07 PM with a score of 135850
It was pretty entertaining.
-- leinad42 on 2/25/2013 11:00:40 PM with a score of 123570
This was a lot of fun! probably one of the most innovative storygames on the site! I commend BerkaZerka for his work he truly is a great novelist! I would suggest everyone giving this a try!
-- trevsjams on 2/23/2013 4:06:44 PM with a score of 99420
If I had more patience and/or a better memory, I would play this more often to try different things. :)
-- Mynoris on 2/23/2013 12:50:16 AM with a score of 185230
This was so much fun. I have not read a choose your own adventure type book in 25+ years and have not roll played in 20+. This game/story is just what the doctor ordered and insurance paid for it! Good job!
-- Chris on 2/21/2013 9:04:29 PM with a score of 147730
It would appear that my score is in excess of ten million. Fancy that!
-- Loon on 2/20/2013 3:19:55 PM with a score of 10060020
"Zombie Horde: 800" and I was like, "Shit just got real."
-- toni on 2/15/2013 9:13:16 PM with a score of 81970
I like this, though I found the 'you' character was a bit 2 dimensional. Still, I like the way the endings are labeled as well as how the stats are set up. But, I have to know...what's up with the whisk?
-- Mynoris on 2/14/2013 2:53:47 AM with a score of 82330
Awesome Approves!
Just. Great. I got Noble ending and Adventurous (?) ending.
Loved the wordplay and battle system. Really interesting and fun, and I hope another one is made.
7/8
(No 8 simply for blocks of text and so much reading. Not that I mind)
-- awesomeness1242 on 2/10/2013 7:07:23 PM with a score of 59820
That was really good. I got the ending of adventurer, noble, betrayer and another one to do with the book. I highly recommend it although it feels like there could bhe more to the came. I thought it was a bit short but very well done and i got my body to god mode
-- jordanrhys98 on 2/6/2013 6:20:03 PM with a score of 117710
It was good with the options and the boss fights were interesting but I scored two endings in 20 mins. It felt to short and like im running around in circles.
-- jordanrhys98 on 2/5/2013 1:24:55 PM with a score of 27580
I got the ending of the Adventurer. awesome story, and i'd highly reccommend it.
-- Worgrim on 2/2/2013 3:32:50 PM with a score of 469160
Very very good game, kept you on your toes and thinking about whats coming next. Loved it, keep up the good work
-- LexiTheMidnightWolf on 1/28/2013 12:32:13 AM with a score of 61320
Health: 95 (of 95); Gold: 1164; SCORE: 67900
those where my sates great game
-- brettthefox on 1/28/2013 12:17:09 AM with a score of 67910
This was definitely a well-written game though, if I must repeat what some others have said, it would have been nicer had it been a bit longer. For having taken a long hiatus from this website and come back recently, this storygame was definitely a nice one to find and rather reminds me why I joined in the first place. On a more technical note, while I appreciate the Wizard Kragan's marcantalism, I kind of wish there was a bit more characterization for him. I wanted to appreciate the Wizard's stance on things more and really would have wanted to know more about him. He may have only been in the game for the Armory (because he didn't really do anything else for the main character), but I kind of wish he had played a bit more important of a role. I guess you never meant it that way, though, so it's alright. If you made another storygame be it a sequel or some sort of parallel or something from this one, I'd definitely pop by and try it out.
-- jkulibert2 on 1/21/2013 4:07:44 PM with a score of 68060
Very well done, i hope you do more like this(if not a little longer)
-- haddockhorde on 1/17/2013 11:41:11 PM with a score of 12220
i liked it, but i want to see more ( i got nobles ending)
-- mr_baggins on 1/15/2013 9:30:42 PM with a score of 73160
Guess who just got the high score?
-- Loon on 1/3/2013 11:10:34 PM with a score of 223110
Quite a nifty game here.

The scripting was almost rock solid. There was just one minor glitch - (spoiler alert) I didn't receive any gold when I found the stash in the ghoul room.

The best feature of the game, in my opinion, was the organization. The shop and stat pages were set up to be quite neat; the small item image sizes were easy on the eye; and the map was a brilliant touch that cemented the game's status as highly accessible and minimally frustrating.

I rated it a well-deserved 7. It could easily have merited an 8 from me if it had a bit more detail in the combat sequences, more weirdness, or if it was done on a larger scale.

Finally, shouldn't the book be called Oblitera Nomina?
-- Loon on 1/3/2013 7:36:13 PM with a score of 176890
Good game, but it feels like the adventure was just beginning as it ended. Is there a way to fight Kragan and the succubus?
-- kjat on 1/3/2013 1:15:28 AM with a score of 149750
A bit on the easy side, to be sure, but it was ALSO really fun! I enjoyed it!
-- Zeta on 1/1/2013 3:48:04 AM with a score of 67440
Terrific use of items - the battle system was amazing. I got the ending of the Betrayer - don't ask about my taste in girls. The puzzle chest was really...puzzling (having more Brain stats doesn't really help...) - any help on that?

This game is absolutely awesome (one of the best, in my opinion, on this site) - please make some more games like this! =)
-- Conzexion on 1/1/2013 2:28:44 AM with a score of 127230
Wow, what I can I say...its absolutely awesome&amazing. I'm really glad I played this RPG-like storygame - it has an amazing storyline, a genius battle system and the use of items was exactly what you would find in a RPG game, only better. I highly recommend this game to anyone. Thanks :D (I would've liked to see more, so yes I agree with the other commentors that you should make it longer, but otherwise this is definitely one of the best games on this site.)
-- godtale on 12/28/2012 4:13:16 AM with a score of 59100
It would be awesome if this story were expanded upon. I really liked what I played and I think it has a lot of potential, but it ends too soon. This should be on the same scale as Dead Man Walking, if not longer. I'd really like to see this book updated with more locations, quests for your character to do, expanding on the endings instead of just telling you what happened in the years to come, etc. Haha especially the adventurer ending if you charge the wizard a finder's fee, all that equipment you buy afterwords just goes to waste. I think this has potential to become one of the best stories on the site. A definite 8 of 8 from me.
-- bladestorm360 on 12/22/2012 6:29:46 PM with a score of 94450
I got ending of the Noble. It's a great game, either way you play it.
-- Silverangel on 12/15/2012 12:40:22 PM with a score of 116730
Awesome throwback to the old text based rpgs and d&d modules. Lots of fun and well written. Highly recommended!
-- Dan on 12/11/2012 10:14:06 PM with a score of 68200
GOT STUCK ON THE CHEST, REALLY GREAT GAME
-- reo207 on 12/2/2012 5:29:55 PM with a score of 89710
this was great i agre with some of the other commenters that it could be longer or perhaps a sequel to further our adventuring withthis character or an offspring or something.
-- bfkinf on 12/1/2012 12:53:42 AM with a score of 131060
Definitely one of my favorite games on the site. It's just so fun. I liked everything about it, the story, the fight scenes, the use of items, I thought the map was awesome! Would love it if the game was even longer, 'cos I just had so much fun playing it. Can't wait till the next game comes out. ^_^
-- Briar_Rose on 11/27/2012 7:19:16 AM with a score of 118750
I got the ending of the damned, but I was a little annoyed about how it turned out.

*Spoiler alert*

I'm gay, so I really had zero interest in the woman as a sex slave, and although given the option, I was intending to overthrow the necromancer from the inside and rule the world, I would NOT want her to have anything to do with it. If anything, I'd tell the necromancer of her plot in order to build his faith in me so that I could later use that faith to my advantage, and bring his downfall. Even if I was straight, I knew for a fact that she couldn't be trusted from the beginning, so I'd likely attempt use my new-found magic to make her into a mindless sex slave, and at the very least, attempt to make it impossible for her to do anything about it.
-- Anon on 11/26/2012 2:49:26 PM with a score of 20320
shoulda been longer woulda been great
-- Crimson_Tailor on 11/21/2012 11:01:24 PM with a score of 87770
I found a small glitch. If you find the remains of Thorimgul, searching the area again will give you the money again. It's not particularly gamebreaking though.
-- Divider on 11/17/2012 8:04:39 PM with a score of 160500
Got the Ending of the betrayer.

Just can't resist the charms of a succubus. I'll have to try again so I don't wind up as her slave next time.
-- EndMaster on 11/15/2012 8:11:56 PM with a score of 77290
Pretty cool
-- kalun on 11/10/2012 12:03:45 PM with a score of 12880
the game is tons of fun if you use common sense
-- dj on 11/9/2012 9:12:58 PM with a score of 134790
Well… ending of the betrayer… Anyway, that was the best game I've read here for a long time! It's right up there with Necromancer!
-- Amy2 on 10/22/2012 1:12:59 AM with a score of 162750
yay i am a adventorer
-- tigerxii on 10/19/2012 8:05:57 AM with a score of 130880
Amazing storygame! I enjoyed collecting items, killing enemies and finding secrets. I would have liked more battles, more areas and generally a bigger story, but nothing can be perfect. 7/8!
-- Astounded Player. on 10/18/2012 7:01:27 PM with a score of 89840
Awesome game!!!
-- AnyMouse on 10/3/2012 2:02:13 PM with a score of 109920
Second time playing through and I have to say I was a bit disappointed that my ranged weapon was so much weaker than their melee counter-parts. Granted, I still enjoyed the story, and got a lot further into it due to having a high search stat,but I still felt that my characters progression could have been better. I went from being mildly weak, to very weak, to almost unstoppable compared to my enemies.

On the other hand I became rich and the mayor of a wealthy city, so it ended quite well. Gave it a 7/8 since last time I played (on no account), i gave it a 8/8, which should even out to an 7.5 which it deserves.
-- Killa_Robot on 10/3/2012 1:05:51 PM with a score of 121350
i wish it was longer
-- rbf22 on 9/22/2012 12:01:07 PM with a score of 47850
Yeah.. I think this story could use a continuation.
-- genesistroy on 9/20/2012 7:01:51 AM with a score of 81680
enjoyed this game took a few replys to get it all
-- cferguson984 on 9/18/2012 3:58:39 PM with a score of 212180
I like it! I have always been into dungeon crawling whether it being D&D or Death Trap Dungeon I have always loved this kind of stuff. You did it justice, if I had one complaint it would be the length. I wished it was a little longer, but that is only a very minor problem because what was there was fantastic. Good job!
-- AtomicWaste on 9/16/2012 12:55:23 AM with a score of 121170
Great game, loved the various items, would be better if it was longer
-- Xt1000305 on 9/15/2012 2:58:24 AM with a score of 78710
This was very entertaining. It's very replayable (I've played through it multiple times) and the scripting is mostly seamless.

While the storyline isn't groundbreaking and there are a few errors here and there, it was extremely entertaining and so far the most thoroughly scripted storygame on the site. Well done!
-- October on 9/10/2012 9:42:16 PM with a score of 83300
I loved the game. It was a lot of fun, even though I didn't really do everything.
-- Aman on 9/9/2012 3:53:51 PM with a score of 36530
Wow, thid is amazing! 7/8 Awesome work!
-- haledakota on 9/9/2012 9:29:51 AM with a score of 120890
I have discovered EVERYTHING. Try to match (or even possibly) beat my path! Thanks to BerkaZerka and a whole lot of brains stats!

-- Swiftstryker on 9/6/2012 12:24:38 AM with a score of 172980
best game ever
-- alex on 9/5/2012 8:08:41 PM with a score of 85870
I love the mechanics. although the cliche of starting with you being the only survivor in your villages destruction is kinda overplayed.
-- alienalpha on 9/5/2012 6:56:48 PM with a score of 22750
Hi Lothander -- I answered your questions via email, so as not to give away too may Spoilers =)
-- BerkaZerka on 9/5/2012 12:47:39 PM with a score of 3630
Great game, the dungeon altough short is quiet enjoyable and there is a good story. In 2 gameplays I've found the Insanity, Destroyer, Fool, Damned, Adventurer and Noble Endings.

A few things I can't still make sure:

1- Can you save your family or they always die?

2- In my first gameplay sometimes I could use the book fine (ended going back) and others not without consequences, in the second never. Do your stats/locatin influence this or is it random?

3 - No matter my brains stat the puzzle inside the dungeon is always the same. Does solving it grant the chance to find a different ending?

Overall a wonderful game 7.5/8
-- Lothander on 9/5/2012 10:26:02 AM with a score of 81710
I loved it! It had good use of items, a wonderful battle system, an interesting story, plenty of options, and keeps me coming back to see what else I can find with each play through! It has the whole package in my opinion and I give it a 7/8! :D
-- simplesabley on 9/4/2012 6:51:31 PM with a score of 45450
Enjoy =)
-- BerkaZerka on 9/3/2012 4:56:30 PM with a score of 127610
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