I take full credit for making Briar's panties wet.
Anyway, I figured this would be the perfect Briar comment to start the new Interesting Comments thread.
I should really choose what I say more carefully :p
I thought you were.
hello motherFucker.. my raw Ass got finessed by ur quiz nigga watch the fuck out i lose one more time and its back to slavery for u
This was on 1912 by kawaiiprincess.
Now that I've read the last sentence, The Offspring's songs will be stuck in my head for the rest of the day.
I'm always impressed when readers put more work into their comment than the authors put into the game. ^_^
... Maybe she means "Please marry me and have my babies after we have spent several years getting to know each other and developing a stable long term relationship?" ^_^
This game sucks!!!!!!!!!! WHY DO IT GIVE ME $200 AND thEN sAY 0 DA FUQQ NIQQA
Found this on My Vacation by AppDude27.
What game was that left on?
You better believe it. Shit is the cause of every death in that story.
This is the first Chooseyourstory novel I had ever read, and honestly, it certainly wouldn't be the last. I came to love how the characters interact with each other in a way that is almost natural, as if that's how they would act were they to actually exist. I didn't really like how the 'player?'couldn't interact with the events happening in front of them. It gives
off a feeling of helplessness, I find that I am sure some wouldn't like. That said this may be different from the COG that I usually play.
My overall experience with the game/story was positive, though I wish I had the chance to be on better terms with big ole Mistress, not because of the spicy shreks scenes that EndMaster had laboriously written, no, I had reread the path where *spoiler alert* Mistress disguised herself as Alison to have some 'night games' with the MC. While I do think that some people would think it's pretty fucked up, 'which it obviously is because that's the point, I think that it shows us an insight to how Mistress really feels, you know? Her love for lil Eternal boi couldn't be summarized better just by that scene alone. Err, enough ranting about my suppressed sexual desire and events that is almost unlikely to occur, let's head on to the actual rating shall we?
I definitely see why people praise it for it's elegant beauty. Though brutal might've been the better term, I really loved it and there were never any major flaws in the story, (lies, you get horny just by thinking about what the Mistress Romance Route would look like). Anyways, I hope that EndMaster is getting paid enough for this, because Jesus christ is his novel a work of art that I would display in the museum.
10/10 - Lore
HornyforMistress/10 - Characters
Intenseplotandsomeothershit/10 - Plot
Wouldplayagainjusttoseeotherepilogues/10 - Overall
Basically, a must read for anybody who doesn't live under a rock. (Patrick, you stay out of this one).
— Vodka on 7/4/2021 5:07:22 PM with a score of 0
I just want to say thank you to End for creating this amazing art piece of a story game. Immersive story telling, realistic characters that you don't want to die, especially by your own hands. I also wanted to mention how long it must have taken to complete this game. Love your works man, another victory for the EndMaster.
Too bad there wasn't enough smexy stuff with Semra. There can never be enough.
Is there an ending with Semra? The epilogues I get seem to hint on it.
— Vodka on 7/15/2021 11:09:37 AM with a score of 0
You really liked Semra huh?
In any case I'll have to remember to PM Vodka when my new story with Semra comes out.
It's honestly insane how good this is, added by the fact that it's completely free. A must read for readers out there who loves emotional and touching story telling.
— Vodka on 7/16/2021 3:14:24 AM with a score of 0
I dunno who this guy is, but he's on the right path around here.
He is right that neither of the authors of that game could pass a drug test
— SexyRatHole on 3/30/2020 11:07:02 PM with a score of 3
Me not seeing that someone else had posted this earlier in the thread.
Im gonna leave
Constructive criticism helps.
The reason why they're "mean" is because they're giving their honest opinion about the game. Parents usually are not the best people for constructive criticism.
And now you're going to leave because some people just said your storygame sucked? I mean, if it did suck, then they were just giving their honest opinion. But if it didn't suck, then just keep in mind that people are going to hate your storygame, no matter what.
And plus, how are you going to improve if people just say nice comments all the time like "this is great!" or "nothing needs to be changed!"? The problem is that it's challenging to improve your storygames in the future if nobody gives you constructive criticism.
Also, what was the point of this storygame? CYS is a writing community. Instead of writing this storygame, you could've just not come on anymore. It was that simple.
— AestheticLlama on 2/4/2021 8:06:07 AM with a score of 0
The storygame has been unpublished and the author banned since October 2019.
AL has been missing for a while, hope they come back.
Also, appreciate the context, lol
Yeah, where is everybody?
J#%T on 10/1/2021 for 90 Minute Storygame: Prepare To Die
IT suck like hell It had only 3 chouses it sucked dog water nuts
A Very Special Choose Your Story
it's super insightful to see into the mind of someone who thinks so negatively, yet they still continue to bring others down with them. I went through just about every story option and it's quite upsetting to see they all have endings where every action results in misfortune. Definitely feel bad for the way the author way the author may or may not be living as of now.
— computernoah on 10/23/2021 2:03:17 PM with a score of 0
Maybe one of the endings hit too close to home.
In any case, a blistering faggot indeed.
they all have endings where every action results in misfortune
Yup, Endmaster seems to have summed up that noob's life pretty well, which is probably why it's mad.
ACe on 11/2/2021 for Tower of Riddles
i spent a whole hour doing this just to egt a lousy namecard thing, hate it here tbh
Well now I feel bad. Wish I'd made a better prize for him to egt. >.<
I suppose that's the main problem with my storygames too. They take a long time to play but readers don't egt any prizes.
>Needing to expend so much effort for so long to beat Tower of Riddles
>caring about the message box
I am so lost in why my character died because i didn't choose to kill someone. Why would I want to start my character as murderer?
— Reb on 11/5/2021 1:59:21 PM with a score of 0
Story title: NECROMANCER
yugvy on 11/11/2021 for Azula and Zuko
Unregistered scum usually don't get it right with their drive by insults, but in this case, he got it right on the mark.
Deleted and the Author banned now, but can't lose these comments!
TharaApples on 11/18/2021 for The day I got Jumped
Are you sure you didn't receive a brain injury as well?
This is not a story-game. Nobody cares about crappy stories like this.
Basically, this was a waste of time.
Okay, do not ever ask me for advice or help again. Stick to making alts until enough time progresses that you hopefully mature and gain more IQ points.
Your mother and father must be pretty fucking dumb if you were the result of their union.
Here's a 1 rating. I'm not the nicest person here as you may have previously thought. Lol. I try to be patient, but you're clearly not worth that.
I would start preparing to make a new account. I'm no longer protecting you. In fact, I think I'll start joining in on banning you as well.
Take care now. :)
WizzyCat on 11/18/2021 for The day I got Jumped
Niggas took my choices, can't have shit in Detroit
PerforatedPenguin on 11/18/2021 for The day I got Jumped
The only good thing about this was the free point I got from rating it a one. You might want to consider choices on a choice story website, just sayin.
Sherbet on 11/18/2021 for The day I got Jumped
enterpride on 11/18/2021 for The day I got Jumped
So you got fucked up when you were backed up by your mates what the fuck does this have to do with getting jumped you weak piece of shit you even pushed before getting smacked then sued like a little bitch
poison_mara on 11/18/2021 for The day I got Jumped
THERE IS NO CHOICES AT ALL GO FUCK OFF
I thought someone getting jumped involved multiple people doing the jumping. Maybe the kid that beat their stupid ass did not also give them brain damage, but they were also able to use shadow clones.
I think it is hard to play because you aren’t aware at the beginning that you can fight monsters. It took me awhile and I was kind of bored while playing it. Overall, it was pretty good.
— Fitzphie4life on 11/17/2021 12:21:52 AM with a score of 53020 on Dungeon Stompage!
did you read the fucking description? I am so confused by this comment. How could you not know you can fight monsters, in a dungeon game, where you're given weapons, and options to fight are clearly written?
EndMaster on 12/7/2021 for epic sword fight
You want to hear about a real epic sword fight, you should ask your mom about the one she had in her mouth.
adam on 1/14/2022 for ...In Love And War
not into love games sister forced me it was terrible
Well, obviously adam's sister isn't working it like Dark's sister does.
Needs more jucicy sex scenes
This was on …In Love And War
worse dan poop, I am 11 grade and I have dyslexic, and even I hate it so go lick a panda bare.
— Yu-stin Ki-pu
That was on Insane Asylum
Craziest thing is how these random kids find these <4 rated stories from 10+ years ago.
I could write better than this 11th grade person when I was in grade 2.
"go lick a panda bare."
There are multiple reasons why this statement as written is hilarious.
This may be my favorite comment ever.
Dusty Fist 2 was the rip-roarin' zany follow-up to Dusty Fist that I was praying for. It's like a coffee enema . . . quick and pleasurable. Maybe a little messy.
— Jimmy Coffin on 9/1/2021 9:41:45 AM with a score of 0
Got me laughing a lot hahaha
I liked the wheener ending, but there are still secondaries.
— I lost my account on 2/6/2021 10:49:36 AM with a score of 0
On top of these mildly amusing reviews, Dusty Fist 2 also led me to finding a very curious individual:
Bad game. No plot. Way too short. So bad I can't use words to describe it. Sorry to the author, Chris113022.
— Akary on 5/13/2020 3:02:15 PM with a score of 0
This person either has no sense of humor, or is so autistic that they take every single thing seriously. Upon further inspection I've deduced that it's probably both of these. This Akary individual is what may be considered a "storygame tryhard", being so good at storygames that they feel the need to flex their skills on their profile (and somehow completing the W*lmart G*me on their first try but needing three for Dead Man Walking). Is this the first tryhard on CYS? Maybe. Is it the last? Maybe. I'll continue my search for similar storygame-crushing extraordinaires at some later point, as my throat is rather parched. I wonder why.
"Short, but good. Could use some copy editing. The use of the word 'bro' in dialogue early on took me out of the story a bit."
I am no longer writing dialogue in English. Only in the original language.
Nowadays it's the cool hip woke thing to do of making historical stuff "modern" like making all the British nobles black and having 17th century orchestras playing Nirvana and Jay Z songs on violins.
I thought to cool thing to do was to make it in the future but everyone is pretending it is the past and then an orchestra starts playing nirvana.
Well Fagon did claim on the Intersexed Database that Oakmount was one of the "good" games on CYS.
Just saw Survive as a Leader on the Passages of Madness Thread and thought I'd include this comment before the game gets unpublished:
keep pushing the metaphorical bicycle petal to the medal abd keep on dreaming kid your foing laces. i hope olivia makes it out alive nut not anne, — fakeybro on 2/3/2019 11:48:56 PM with a score of 0
Uh on 4/12/2022 for Fairview Highschool Game [delete]
This was slightly amusing, mostly cringey, kinda racist, with lots of spelling errors. Don?t play if you want serious literature.
Pretty sure this was a founder story, either Alex or March or Choco wrote this and it got called racist. This implies that CYS was founded by racists.
Just like America!
Knew we should have super purged all the "wolf warrior" games as well.
How the fuck does someone spell "wolf" as "wolve"? O.O
alkfsjf;l on 5/9/2022 for The Pure, the Vile and the Deadly
Your game was fucking trassh do better
Now I'm picturing a trash can with a snake in it. ^_^
ESL Billy's Adventure
We are fans of Tom. Tom does a very good job in the story. We want more stories with Tom and we want TV programs with Tom. Microwave.
— Tom's Legal Guardians on 4/27/2021 11:49:53 AM with a score of 0
Yeah most of DNDB's recent comments I've featured, the only time I don't is if it already has 3 really good ones or the story score is so low that it's probably going to get axed soon anyway.
I was rating a story from the random generator called Petra's Choices and came across this:
Overall, I give this story a 3/8, and my old review of it a 1/8. In fact I rate 11 year old me overall a 1/8, he was fucking stupid.— Chris113022 on 8/26/2019 12:57:43 PM with a score of 0
I would also rate my 11 year old self a 1/8, and I'd rate Chris a 7/8
... What the actual fuck?
"I'm going out."
— w on 6/10/2022 8:51:25 AM with a score of 0
its was quite cool
— annabelle on 6/10/2022 7:23:43 AM with a score of 0
— Ava on 6/10/2022 7:22:27 AM with a score of 0
— jimmy on 6/10/2022 6:24:36 AM with a score of 0
— hdhddhhdh on 6/10/2022 5:10:43 AM with a score of 0
— ethan on 6/10/2022 4:06:15 AM with a score of 0
im preggos alexander
— Lexie Rybak on 6/9/2022 8:50:33 AM with a score of 0
It is not the best because kitten are so common pet and animal they for it is not the best and not the best.
— mason on 6/9/2022 4:16:33 AM with a score of 0
— broski on 6/9/2022 4:15:52 AM with a score of 0
— LOGAN on 6/9/2022 4:15:43 AM with a score of 0
— quandingle on 6/9/2022 4:15:39 AM with a score of 0
— alex on 6/9/2022 4:09:33 AM with a score of 0
— ujgfv on 6/9/2022 4:09:12 AM with a score of 0
— tatar on 6/9/2022 4:08:53 AM with a score of 0
i got a girl
— tom on 6/9/2022 4:08:45 AM with a score of 0
— john on 6/9/2022 4:08:07 AM with a score of 0
— fred on 6/9/2022 4:06:15 AM with a score of 0
cracking my mate
— big d on 6/8/2022 8:50:02 AM with a score of 0
no u cheecky boi
— me on 6/8/2022 8:50:00 AM with a score of 0
I think that its a fun way to lean what to do and make good decagons
— eli on 6/7/2022 8:58:51 AM with a score of 0
i found it quite fun and interesting with how the story goes and the different options
— zoe fellows on 6/7/2022 8:53:01 AM with a score of 0
Great loved the idfferent opportinities!
— Noazza G on 6/7/2022 8:52:08 AM with a score of 0
this game was very fun
— faith cowie on 6/7/2022 8:50:25 AM with a score of 0
— zac on 6/7/2022 7:24:11 AM with a score of 0
This seems like a new Phoenician Traders game magnet, though this one probably won't even last very long due to the low rating that's going to be on its way out soon anyway.
I'm learning so many new words today! Cheecky, decagons, idfferent, opportinities and drgdhdhd. ^_^
drgdhdhd Is my favorite. I can't wait to figure out how to use it in a sentence.
Attack on Titan: Dating Simulator by kromney7
I really enjoyed this game. I specifically enjoyed the adherence to the plot in AoT/SnK and the creative structure you used to tie all those plot lines into this work really shows. Your writing is masterful as always, [INSERT AUTHOR NAME]. The storygame itself is dense with content and choices, and it kept me entertained until the very end. I couldn't help but be curious in all of the possible outcomes and decisions that are so neatly and wonderfully placed in this story.
This game was the most absolutely phenomenal spongebob squarepants fanfiction CYS has ever witnessed. I came at least 3 times onto my Uncle's face. I truly believe the roaches from all over the world come from that country alone, specifically Karachi. One day, I come home from a long abusive school day of being called a "chutiya" by those bullies. And I noticed no ones home think they went to my cousins wedding (two of them married each other. It's normal there) so I was like "aiiiight" imma sleep naked upstairs. I threw my school uniform off turned the fan on and pointed that shit at my underdeveloped dick.
I have to say that I enjoyed every minute of this story. I'm tempted to say that you have outdone yourself, but your writing is always consistent in just how good it is. Thanks for yet another wonderful read, I eagerly anticipate the next storygame that you may create. Be it some inspired sequel to this storygame, or something completely different altogether.
Oh boy, that was a nice feeling. Imagine your balls being trapped all day in 100F heat all day. It was so hot it cooked some of my sperm I had. So skipping, that cool breeze to my balls knocked me out. I'm having some bomb ass dreams. Like me coming to America and playing with white girl titties and owning a PlayStation. Later I had this crazy ass dream. This is when I had my first wet dream. I remember that shit like it was yesterday. It felt so real. I was getting my dick touched by this goddess and she had some soft hands. Like this bitch applied shea butter thoroughly.
At this point I think that it is safe to say that it is only right for me to look toward to your next piece. The level of care and attention to detail that you place into each of your stories is always a treat to read and enjoy.
It felt like my dick was inside a nice warm potato with extra butter. I was young at the time but I remember I felt this tingling feeling like nutting, it felt like McDonald's sprite was coming out my penis hole. So that shit woke me up. I look at my dick and I saw a roach rubbing his wings on my dick bruh. Lowkey I let that mf do his thing and then I heard a door bell I moved so fast that mf flew away. I had a flying roach give me top bruh. I can not make this up. I've been sleeping without pants since then in hopes of getting top by a roach again. Lowkey hope it was a female roach tho.
Thank you once again, for writing this wonderful and enthralling story.
— Ford on 7/4/2022 3:33:13 AM with a score of 0
Played to another ending. What an amazing game. You've really outdone yourself yet again. I, however, couldn't help but notice.... are you a "girl"?? A "female?" A "member of the finer sex?"
Not that it matters too much, but it's just so rare to see a girl around here! I don't mind, no--quite to the contrary! It's so refreshing to see a girl online, to the point where I'm always telling all my friends "I really wish girls were better represented on the internet."
And here you are!
I don't mean to push or anything, but if you wanted to DM me about anything at all, I'd love to pick your brain and learn all there is to know about you. I'm sure you're an incredibly interesting girl--though I see you as just a person, really--and I think we could have lots to teach each other.
I've always wanted the chance to talk to a gorgeous lady--and I'm pretty sure you've got to be gorgeous based on the position of your text in the screenshot--so feel free to shoot me a message, any time at all! You don't have to be shy about it, because you're beautiful anyways (that's juyst a preview of all the compliments I have in store for our chat).
Looking forwards to speaking with you soon, princess!
EDIT: I couldn't help but notice you haven't sent your message yet. There's no need to be nervous! I promise I don't bite, haha
EDIT 2: In case you couldn't find it, you can click the little chat button from my profile and we can get talking ASAP. Not that I don't think you could find it, but just in case hahah
EDIT 3: look I don't understand why you're not even talking to me, is it something I said?
EDIT 4: I knew you were always a bitch, but I thought I was wrong. I thought you weren't like all the other girls out there but maybe I was too quick to judge
EDIT 5: don't ever contact me again whore
EDIT 6: hey are you there?
— Ford on 7/4/2022 3:38:40 AM with a score of 69420
The replay value is kinda dropping off for me. I used to really enjoy this game, so I still give it an 8 even after all this time - but honestly, I want to bang the chalice from Cuphead so goddamn bad. I can't stand it anymore. Every time I play the Delicious Last Course I get a massive erection. I've seen literally every rule 34 post there is of her online. My dreams are nothing but constant fucking sex with Ms. Chalice. I'm sick of waking up every morning with six nuts in my boxers and knowing that those are nuts that should've been busted inside of Ms. Chalice's tight cup pussy. I want her to have my mutant human/cup babies.
Fuck, my fucking mom caught me with the neighbors' greek cup. I'd dressed it in my sister's skirt and went to fucking town. She hasn't said a word to me in 10 hours and I'm worried she's gonna take away my PC. I might not ever get to see Ms. Chalice again.
So thank you for making it, but I can't play anymore. I'm simply empty.
— Ford on 7/4/2022 3:43:26 AM with a score of 80085
A true masterpiece! And wasted on an unpublished game too. Tragic.
It's republished mainly because I didn't really find anything that graphic in it. (I might have missed it though and I'm not wasting any more time on skimming through fanfic)
As it stands, it can live and die based on ratings like any other story.
EDIT: Well now it's dead and so is the author.
Must have taken quite a bit of trial and error to get those exact scores.
Stupid question: how do you tell they're all the same guy?
Damn, I missed it! What was he spamming?
Also, half of them are just his original name with a different number on the end. :p
The Demon of Hurtgen
>Be you, incapable of following directions
>Can't figure out how to implement Choosing
— ugilick on 7/4/2022 6:35:35 PM with a score of 0