I take full credit for making Briar's panties wet.
Anyway, I figured this would be the perfect Briar comment to start the new Interesting Comments thread.
I should really choose what I say more carefully :p
I thought you were.
hello motherFucker.. my raw Ass got finessed by ur quiz nigga watch the fuck out i lose one more time and its back to slavery for u
This was on 1912 by kawaiiprincess.
Now that I've read the last sentence, The Offspring's songs will be stuck in my head for the rest of the day.
I'm always impressed when readers put more work into their comment than the authors put into the game. ^_^
... Maybe she means "Please marry me and have my babies after we have spent several years getting to know each other and developing a stable long term relationship?" ^_^
This game sucks!!!!!!!!!! WHY DO IT GIVE ME $200 AND thEN sAY 0 DA FUQQ NIQQA
Found this on My Vacation by AppDude27.
What game was that left on?
You better believe it. Shit is the cause of every death in that story.
This is the first Chooseyourstory novel I had ever read, and honestly, it certainly wouldn't be the last. I came to love how the characters interact with each other in a way that is almost natural, as if that's how they would act were they to actually exist. I didn't really like how the 'player?'couldn't interact with the events happening in front of them. It gives
off a feeling of helplessness, I find that I am sure some wouldn't like. That said this may be different from the COG that I usually play.
My overall experience with the game/story was positive, though I wish I had the chance to be on better terms with big ole Mistress, not because of the spicy shreks scenes that EndMaster had laboriously written, no, I had reread the path where *spoiler alert* Mistress disguised herself as Alison to have some 'night games' with the MC. While I do think that some people would think it's pretty fucked up, 'which it obviously is because that's the point, I think that it shows us an insight to how Mistress really feels, you know? Her love for lil Eternal boi couldn't be summarized better just by that scene alone. Err, enough ranting about my suppressed sexual desire and events that is almost unlikely to occur, let's head on to the actual rating shall we?
I definitely see why people praise it for it's elegant beauty. Though brutal might've been the better term, I really loved it and there were never any major flaws in the story, (lies, you get horny just by thinking about what the Mistress Romance Route would look like). Anyways, I hope that EndMaster is getting paid enough for this, because Jesus christ is his novel a work of art that I would display in the museum.
10/10 - Lore
HornyforMistress/10 - Characters
Intenseplotandsomeothershit/10 - Plot
Wouldplayagainjusttoseeotherepilogues/10 - Overall
Basically, a must read for anybody who doesn't live under a rock. (Patrick, you stay out of this one).
— Vodka on 7/4/2021 5:07:22 PM with a score of 0
I just want to say thank you to End for creating this amazing art piece of a story game. Immersive story telling, realistic characters that you don't want to die, especially by your own hands. I also wanted to mention how long it must have taken to complete this game. Love your works man, another victory for the EndMaster.
Too bad there wasn't enough smexy stuff with Semra. There can never be enough.
Is there an ending with Semra? The epilogues I get seem to hint on it.
— Vodka on 7/15/2021 11:09:37 AM with a score of 0
You really liked Semra huh?
In any case I'll have to remember to PM Vodka when my new story with Semra comes out.
It's honestly insane how good this is, added by the fact that it's completely free. A must read for readers out there who loves emotional and touching story telling.
— Vodka on 7/16/2021 3:14:24 AM with a score of 0
I dunno who this guy is, but he's on the right path around here.
He is right that neither of the authors of that game could pass a drug test
— SexyRatHole on 3/30/2020 11:07:02 PM with a score of 3
Me not seeing that someone else had posted this earlier in the thread.
Im gonna leave
Constructive criticism helps.
The reason why they're "mean" is because they're giving their honest opinion about the game. Parents usually are not the best people for constructive criticism.
And now you're going to leave because some people just said your storygame sucked? I mean, if it did suck, then they were just giving their honest opinion. But if it didn't suck, then just keep in mind that people are going to hate your storygame, no matter what.
And plus, how are you going to improve if people just say nice comments all the time like "this is great!" or "nothing needs to be changed!"? The problem is that it's challenging to improve your storygames in the future if nobody gives you constructive criticism.
Also, what was the point of this storygame? CYS is a writing community. Instead of writing this storygame, you could've just not come on anymore. It was that simple.
— AestheticLlama on 2/4/2021 8:06:07 AM with a score of 0
The storygame has been unpublished and the author banned since October 2019.
AL has been missing for a while, hope they come back.
Also, appreciate the context, lol
J#%T on 10/1/2021 for 90 Minute Storygame: Prepare To Die
IT suck like hell It had only 3 chouses it sucked dog water nuts