Player Comments on Vengeance
This is a story I found also years ago when looking for more stories, and since I saw it was featured, I though to myself that it could be good. Now with the review. Also, spoilers below, by the way.
Plot:
I will start with the plot as it’s the main point of this story, the characters being just there to propel it. It goes as follows, the main character is on a school bus that is attacked by people with submachine guns and grenades and survives an impossible situation, which makes the antagonists lock him up in an asylum to study him.
He breaks out, a man with no relationship to anything whatsoever lets him choose among completely ridiculous weapons (only one of them actually makes sense), he saves the daughter of one of the doctors and then travels to Arizona, where the bus was going. There he uncovers more weapons in ludicrous places, like a grappling hook gun in a sandbox in a public park.
After that he single-handedly defeats everyone, assaulting the antagonist’s base and frees his friends. And then the plot is revealed. Apparently one of the girls in the school bus had a gang banger boyfriend and to piss him off she stole some secret immortality serum from him and fed it to the protagonist, a serum which was developed by an insurance company to prevent people from dying and thus earn more money. And the protagonist destroys that utterly diabolical plan.
This little resume is necessary in order to point out how ridiculous the plot is. Let’s start with the antagonist’s plan. He develops an immortality serum and, instead of using it, selling it or whatever he plans to use it to make people his company insured immortal so that it makes bigger profits. Which, according to the story, is a bad and intelligent thing. It surely wouldn’t make more profit to sell it to all the millionaires in the world.
Then we have the gang bangers. First of all, why is a schoolgirl dating the head of an armed to the teeth evil mercenary band? In a long distance relationship too since he is based in Arizona and she lives in New York. Then, why does she steal the prototype of a secret serum just to piss him off, and to hide it from him she feeds it unknowingly to the main protagonist? And he forgives her, for some reason. I mean, immortality or not, if someone fed me an experimental serum developed by Evil Corporation Nº 374 I would be kind of angry with said someone.
Now move on the smaller things. How do these gang bangers cause a school in New York to send its students on a trip to Arizona, then kidnap the entire school bus, murder half the people in it, and somehow hide it from everyone, relocating every family, whist also sending the protagonist to a mental asylum for that? Kind of ludicrous if you ask me.
Afterwards, how does that doctor discover that the protagonist is not crazy? Because it’s never explained at all. And instead of doing anything sensible, he just heads to Arizona from what appears to be Florida, leaving his teenage daughter alone, to investigate things himself.
And how does the protagonist escape the asylum? By digging the wall with his own hands? Sure, if this was Tunguska Gulag from the X-Files, but an asylum in the US? Doubtful to say the least. Although considering how they lock someone with presumed schizophrenia in a solitary confinement padded cell, I guess it’s understood this story happens partially in the 19th century. The fact they do that is also surprising, since they were there to use him as lab rat for the immortality serum, so some sort of actual test might be in order. Like, taking blood samples?
After the protagonist escapes, he finds someone who manages a weapon store that knows he was framed and that also knows he would escape from the asylum. It is never explained how he knows either of those things, by the way. Then he goes on to give the protagonist two free weapons of their choosing. So as a hand-to-hand weapon you can choose between a sword cane (which would be illegal to own, let alone to sell), a scimitar and a spear (both of which make no sense and have no practical use, and wouldn’t be sold by a gun store).
After that choice, he lets you choose between a cho-ko-nu (a medival chinese repeating crossbow which is very common in US gun stores and very sensible as a self defense weapon), a silenced pistol, and a bazooka (which is from World War II, useless, and very illegal. But surely it can’t be an M40 or something along those lines).
The only weapon of the six that makes sense is the pistol, especially taking into account that the crossbow is supposed to have the same advantages. But the game will go out of its way to ensure that in situations where a pistol would make a lot of sense you can only use the crossbow.
Once you get to Arizona, travelling by truck and with no explanation of what happened in the way even though the travel lasted three days since Phoenix is about 3500 kilometres from Florida (also, three days for that much distance? In the US?), you can go to several places of the city that also dont make sense.
You can go to a church, where you find a shovel laying around for some reason, and a priest who tells you he witnessed a kidnapping and didn’t to anything about it, like calling the police (because it is a 14th century church, of course). You can go to a park, where you find the grappling hook pistol in the sandbox, which is there for some reason and in which you spend an hour digging for some other reason. You can go to a library, where someone from the antagonist’s Evil Corporation left his wallet with everything in it (what a coincidence). Then to the insurance company building, where despite knowing they are the enemies you can’t do anything.
After that you join with Melissa in the diner, and then go to a hotel, which is attacked by gang-bangers. You can blow them up with bazooka or grenades and leave, without grabbing any of their actually useful guns. Then you infiltrate the insurance company building again and fight as Spock himself by paralyzing people with impossible ways.
Now a bit of biology. Kicking someone below the elbow can hurt and can render the arm inoperable for a while, it doesn’t turn them into solid rock. Punching someone in the base of the foot can break some bones and render them inoperable due to the pain. It doesn’t turn them into solid rock. Kicking someone in the neck (below the jaw near the carotid artery, where there are plenty of nerves) can hurt, and again leave them inoperable for a short duration, not turn them into solid rock. And for the record, nobody would say “I’m temporarily paralyzed” after being paralyzed, especially since it’s impossible to do so, but if it was possible, they still wouldn’t. And you can’t punch someone unconscious like Chuck Norris, it doesn’t work like that.
After releasing all of his friends, the protagonist is confronted by a bounty hunter, who, for some reason, has a grenade launcher instead of something legal and that made any sense (like a revolver, maybe?). After that the protagonist goes after the boss of the insurance company.
In there you can guess, literally, a door’s combination, and confront the boss. He offers the protagonist to finish the experiment, and then join forces with him. If you accept, he actually does that, which reinforces the fact that he is an idiot, and if you refuse he shoots at you. But, due to the immortality serum that never actually worked before other than with the bus, you survive and go after him.
He tries to fly away on helicopter. If he succeeds, his goons somehow murder everyone, including police, and then take you to the asylum like nothing happened. If you catch him, you can either let him die, in which case your family will be lost forever, since for some reason he is the only one who knows where they are, or save him to get the best ending, in which he admits the conspiracy (the evil, evil conspiracy), frees the doctor and his daughter and everyone all go back to school in New York, and for some reason the CIA doesn’t kidnap the protagonist to use him as lab rat.
Characters:
All characters are one dimensional and are never explained or explored, including the main character, who is a schoolboy that knows judo and can beat an entire army of mercenaries and escape from an asylum and never in the way gets worried, or traumatized or whatever. And this story is tagged as serious, sure.
Writing, vocabulary and technical issues:
The writing is ordinary as well as the vocabulary, but there are no typos that I remember. However, many of the premature endings or death scenes are repeated and don’t really make sense in some situations. Depending on the choices you take, you may see weird things. Not to mention the issues with weapons, in which you can use a crossbow to dispose of three gang-bangers but not a pistol. Also there are no pictures to any of the items, which is not an issue to me personally but someone else might find it distracting or harder to select them.
Conclusions:
Even if I seemed a bit nitpicky, it’s not that terrible of a story. It can be played, and it can be useful to kill some time, but don’t expect anything really serious or sensible. Approach it like a half-random story. It looks like one of those hero stories made for kids or a bad kung fu action movie. I personally didn’t like it, obviously, but it can be enjoyable depending on the mindset the reader is on.
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Martin_Silenus
on 8/5/2017 1:54:41 PM with a score of 180
I found this to be a decent game. While the story wasn't very believable or relatable, it was the right length and fun enough to keep me entertained for a few minutes. But honestly, if the game had been longer, I would have probably stopped playing because the plot isn't very logical. The writing was tolerable. At some points, I felt as though I was reading the outline of a plot. Other times, it was as if a grocery list of events was being read off to me. More detailed scenes using the five senses would have been nice, but I'm not complaining too much about this. The grammar was okay. There were a few errors that annoyed me, but it wasn't terrible. I admit that I felt a bit limited with my choices, as it seemed like I was forced to go down one path or else I'd die. As for the characters, I felt disconnected from them. I think that it would've been nice if you had let us get to know them a bit better. The dialogue was a bit unrealistic. For instance, in the scene where you fight two men, one of them shouts, "I've been temporarily paralyzed!" after you hit them. The line appeared incredibly cheesy to me because who in reality would scream that out? Another example is the part when Lillian gives the main character an extremely lengthy confession. Honestly, I found the entire confession scene a bit bizarre, and all her long sentences were rather unrealistic. It might have been better if the narrator informed you of the events rather than her.
Overall, this game was a nice way to pass the time, but it wasn't my favorite. The action was a bit fun, although I sometimes felt that there was too much focus placed on it and not enough development of the plot. The writing was at least understandable, so the game experience was pleasant.
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SummerSparrow
on 4/12/2016 12:50:42 PM with a score of 3780
Soke
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— Kai on 5/16/2023 11:11:32 AM with a score of 1190
good
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roseswolf101
on 4/6/2023 8:02:41 AM with a score of 1575
epic
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— - on 4/21/2022 12:05:54 AM with a score of 3005
Maybe I didn't get the best ending, but it didn't seem to make much sense. It also seemed a bit railroaded, but, again, maybe that was just me.
Still, good story and better then a lot out there. ??
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MessyGoat
on 12/5/2020 9:46:41 PM with a score of 240
Best ending possible!
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writeyourstory
on 10/8/2020 1:47:34 PM with a score of 2955
Terrible plot and mulltiple speling mistakes. Kinda fun but i wouldn't reccomend. 3/8
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Premium
on 7/15/2020 9:37:39 AM with a score of 3430
This was a very well written story, and is a great ending for everybody. There were a few plot holes like the asylum, but all in all great game.
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SheTookThem
on 11/14/2019 11:13:29 AM with a score of 3490
Boring as hell
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— Kuro on 4/7/2019 11:00:19 AM with a score of 3005
uh, ok... if I was immortal the entire time, why did I keep dying.
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InvictusXL
on 3/10/2019 6:17:59 AM with a score of 3295
Great story. I got the best ending possible. I wish I could have used my weapons more, but it was fun. I did a bit of a mental double take when I was given the choice to let him shoot me, but then I thought, oh, yeah, I’m immortal. It was a nice story.
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— Too lazy to log on on 11/8/2017 10:03:26 AM with a score of 3645
Congratulations! You won with the Best ending Possible!
Yay!
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TestingJest
on 11/7/2017 9:19:03 PM with a score of 3345
Great story. Thanks!
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daniel123
on 11/7/2017 10:34:37 AM with a score of 3270
I LOVE THIS STORY
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— ANTHONY on 10/22/2017 12:34:45 AM with a score of 3740
nice
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— ihubuytf on 10/18/2017 9:47:55 PM with a score of 3180
I didnt really need to use all of my items. Also, it wasnt that long, but it was pretty decent. I like the bazooka tho LOL.
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— Branmuffin13 on 10/17/2017 1:32:39 PM with a score of 3385
Cool, best ending.
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corgi213
on 10/15/2017 10:59:51 PM with a score of 3380
I could have sworn I'd reviewed this before, but apparently I'd just rated it.
It was...a pretty good story for where the site was at in 2005, I think is the best I can say about it. The spelling, grammar and all that are mostly fine and it's a decent length with a decent amount of choices.
Unfortunately any sense that this is a realistic scenario goes out the window immediately and the plot, motivation of characters etc. falls apart at even the most cursory glance.
The site's standards have evolved a bit in the last twelve years, and I have a feeling the 'hero' contest going on right now is going to make for a clean sweep of a few of these currently featured stories in the Modern Adventure category.
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Mizal
on 8/20/2017 8:28:42 PM with a score of 220
It's definitely a fun storygame to play, but a tad bit too easy. I got the best ending on my first run, and the choices are fairly obvious. I would have loved to play a little more, but the short length fits better with this type of narrative.
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Karuma
on 8/16/2017 9:01:15 AM with a score of 3320
Pretty good story and I really thought that this story was exciting, murderous and just outright fun.
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xUnknownx
on 5/19/2017 4:02:57 PM with a score of 3710
some spelling erorrs but it wuz cool!
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rickyzimm
on 5/2/2017 5:56:48 PM with a score of 3130
Lame. Not enough good choices.
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— Dude on 5/1/2017 2:59:15 PM with a score of 3040
It was an interesting story. I liked it.
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248batman16
on 4/25/2017 12:44:28 PM with a score of 3340
Awesome game, with interesting plots and great items, though no pictures. 9/10.
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— Felix on 4/3/2017 5:17:29 PM with a score of 3685
Very enjoyable game!
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EZunmaker
on 2/19/2017 9:54:26 PM with a score of 3425
Very good/creative plot! Got the best ending!
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— Felix on 2/8/2017 7:32:00 PM with a score of 3630
Vengeance easily provides a pretty good read. A few unexplained areas (e.g. weapon store personguy), but generally grammar was okay and the story entertaining enough to keep readers clicking the links.
6/8.
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AgentX
on 1/21/2017 12:26:05 AM with a score of 3775
Nice game luv it.
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CeruleanFlare
on 12/21/2016 1:53:50 PM with a score of 3905
Nice story!
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Voltage
on 12/2/2016 11:43:21 AM with a score of 3220
good game
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rusaku
on 11/15/2016 4:03:32 PM with a score of 3545
Yeeeah. BEST ENDING BETTER THAN YOU!!!!!!
Haha ?? jk??
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— Jaxthejaguar on 11/6/2016 9:27:52 AM with a score of 3005
Way too easy... .3.
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Himario
on 11/3/2016 11:58:30 PM with a score of 3265
Not the best spelling, and some B movie feeling, but good game. Good action scenes, good atmosphere.
6/8
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dorian07
on 10/27/2016 9:12:25 AM with a score of 3280
Of course I died very soon after starting the game, but I'm going to go back and play again. Thanks for the awesome storygame!
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ClearlyUnfocused
on 10/16/2016 10:46:47 PM with a score of 970
Pretty good, reminded me of those cheesy 80's action movies. Was that your goal? The only thing I'd suggest is smoothing out the writing a bit it was rough in places and with the cheesy dialog it made you cringe even more, but it wasn't bad enough to make me not want to continue reading.
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BigRonn77
on 9/21/2016 11:33:17 AM with a score of 3080
I liked every little part of it. Great story.
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Vittorio99
on 9/20/2016 5:59:27 AM with a score of 3155
Was awesome really enjoyed it!
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— JJ on 9/5/2016 12:47:39 PM with a score of 3750
Nice
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lejama88
on 8/10/2016 5:04:09 AM with a score of 3330
That was great! Best ending possible! It was quite a good story!
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ATMystic
on 7/10/2016 6:12:36 PM with a score of 3095
Great, I achieved the best ending. Fun game.
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crusader
on 6/30/2016 5:26:55 PM with a score of 3200
ok, but there's no descriptions. Not any real death descriptions or anything. That's my only complaint.
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harrypotter
on 6/8/2016 4:08:18 PM with a score of 1105
I was impressed by the amount of detail put into this game. There's no other words for this: this was awesome
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— ArKade47 on 6/5/2016 3:24:14 PM with a score of 3545
Woohoo! I'm a hero!
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bisesto
on 4/30/2016 2:31:34 PM with a score of 3640
Spelling was off sometimes
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— Name on 4/16/2016 8:43:40 PM with a score of 3555
Meh suppose it is ok not much options pretty basic do as we tell you or you die basically I have played better games no offence but Intresting story line only part I enjoyed
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The_Dungeon_Master
on 3/12/2016 1:07:53 PM with a score of 3510
good game, pretty easy and predictable
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IrishKingDaniel
on 3/6/2016 8:52:30 PM with a score of 3460
Amusing
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The_Dungeon_Master
on 2/27/2016 12:14:48 PM with a score of 3115
It is definitely cheesy, but more drop zone cheese than dtv cheese.It is very good but as I have said parts are very mediocre.Thank you
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— ActionMan on 2/18/2016 8:46:41 AM with a score of 3460
awesome!
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— awesome on 2/9/2016 9:33:59 AM with a score of 3545
It was pretty good and cheesy.
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leegood
on 1/19/2016 6:03:24 AM with a score of 2880
Lilian is one dumb girl, and it's bizarre that she stays with her boyfriend throughout the entire story. Anyway, it was enjoyable.
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aartbastiaan
on 1/17/2016 8:15:08 AM with a score of 3495
YES YES YEEESSS!!! BEST GAME EVOR>!!
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— matthew on 12/2/2015 10:07:48 PM with a score of 3755
WHy would everyone treat a mental patient as a criminal? Too many coincidences. Uppercut in the stomach? WHy do I need a gun and spear If am going to use an uppercut in the stomach?
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— dx on 11/23/2015 8:15:51 AM with a score of 215
Only near the end I got to choose my own path but other then that this was a very good story keep writing!!!!!!
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Tangyfriend3027
on 11/21/2015 8:09:25 AM with a score of 175
nice game I got a short temper and a shorter patience but the game is cool.
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Destroyer74
on 11/13/2015 10:13:54 AM with a score of 3255
Incredible story. I really enjoyed it. It is long enough to really get the idea and the plot is very good. It is not to easy but it is also not to hard. I give it 8/8
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HerobrineBlockson1
on 11/8/2015 10:02:53 AM with a score of 3770
This game is kind of fun, cheesey nonetheless, but really fun!
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Shinobi
on 11/4/2015 11:15:12 AM with a score of 3470
Quick and fun - Pulpy.
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Galootius
on 10/19/2015 6:38:36 PM with a score of 1980
Very strange and unentertaining. So many ways to die that don't make sense...
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adventurer
on 10/6/2015 10:47:45 PM with a score of 1090
Wow, this was hilarious. Props!
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— Chris on 9/27/2015 8:55:25 PM with a score of 3880
Every option has a death. You cant live both ways on any option. It is luck
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BananaGod4Life
on 9/16/2015 1:37:44 PM with a score of 3105
I didn't see any grammar flaws; It's an OK story!
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mahboi
on 9/14/2015 10:07:10 AM with a score of 1450
Vengeance is light reading, much more game than story, but it is still quite entertaining. Casual, wry, and witty, the story moves quickly and does not dawdle with details like character or plot development. This is the storygame equivalent of the John Wick movie. Not that there is anything wrong with that; sometimes you want to just relax and read/watch the action.
Vengeance is brevity, levity, and 'splosions. I enjoyed it.
Cheers, Badger
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dueconsideration
on 9/9/2015 5:55:31 PM with a score of 2890
awesome
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— jose on 9/3/2015 11:08:16 PM with a score of 2855
This was really great. I've honestly only ever played a story game like this once in my life, but this makes me want to play some more. I was doing pretty well in this game, but then I went for the easy attack. I should have really thought about the situation the character was in.
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— Laurel on 8/28/2015 3:58:52 AM with a score of 1160
I like it 6/8
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Shadow_Strider
on 8/18/2015 3:17:27 PM with a score of 3420
I thought this was a very enjoyable story
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Applezz
on 8/13/2015 3:32:48 PM with a score of 3560
awesome
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— jamie on 8/1/2015 1:46:44 PM with a score of 3450
8/8 It had everything I wanted and did not disappoint me. The inventory and usage of it is pretty well done and very advanced. Recommend this one. :]
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SoupLover
on 7/19/2015 5:32:48 AM with a score of 3765
It was interesting and really good
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1816Adry
on 7/13/2015 9:31:43 PM with a score of 910
This was honestly one of the best, if not the best game I've played on this site. The story was captivating and kept my attention. The mystery aspect was so intriguing I couldn't look away from the screen. And this one had some of the funniest puzzles. The use of the items was amazing as well. But one thing to work on is some spelling/typo mistakes. And also what took away from the choices (but just a tiny bit) was when there was a page that says "You shot/sliced him with your silencer/sword cane. I'm pretty sure it's not that much work to make another separate page. But other then those amazing! And I got the best ending!
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SonicTurboTurtle
on 6/28/2015 12:58:56 AM with a score of 2930
Not bad! We loved how you did it,and winning the Best Ending made us feel happy! I-No,We love it!
-Aaron and Jennifer;Kawaii Writers
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KawaiiWriters
on 6/20/2015 1:55:10 PM with a score of 3370
Very cool game.
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TheBossWriter
on 6/3/2015 2:10:52 PM with a score of 1090
It was pretty cool. I only lost my morals. I wish the sword cane was more useful though.
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Beardon87
on 6/2/2015 5:27:28 PM with a score of 2070
Wow ! Nice storyline and characters but the play length should be little larger
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Tadakatsu542
on 5/29/2015 4:25:12 AM with a score of 3535
I really enjoyed it, it could have been a bit longer but oh well! I had lots of fun attacking and using my weapons, and finding other weapons and items. You won't regret using your time on it!
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Fuzzynose202
on 5/22/2015 2:11:23 AM with a score of 3610
Add a katana
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KommanderK9
on 5/18/2015 11:49:59 AM with a score of 175
Got the best ending on the first try!
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Likeabos
on 5/11/2015 3:33:16 PM with a score of 3225
Eghhh
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Isanshan
on 5/6/2015 5:19:52 PM with a score of 185
Cool Story! I never found out when to use the camera though..
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— Will on 4/22/2015 11:26:38 AM with a score of 3020
very good story bit of typo's but overall very well done
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jaketx
on 4/4/2015 6:30:16 PM with a score of 2935
there were a lot of spelling mistakes and general mistakes. It seemed plain lazy at times and a lot of things contradict and/or just don't make any sense! The fight scenes were awesome and the storyline was quirky and interesting though. So overall it's not the best, but definatly not the worst.
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sotty115
on 3/30/2015 6:18:42 PM with a score of 2910
POTENTIAL
IS
HERE
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TIGERBEAST001
on 3/29/2015 1:56:52 AM with a score of 2580
EVEN BETTER THEN REESES CUPS.
No, really. I tis.
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iiPotato
on 2/27/2015 3:06:15 PM with a score of 1085
pretty good
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KiritoLeeWillis
on 2/21/2015 11:11:00 PM with a score of 160
Best thing that's happened to chooseyourstory.
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— Layla on 1/10/2015 9:54:34 AM with a score of 3335
Great story. I was hoping that Melissa and the character would become girlfriend/ boyfriends with each other though.
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foil7
on 1/6/2015 8:44:30 PM with a score of 3620
Woo, best ending possible!
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FazzTheMan
on 12/9/2014 9:36:09 PM with a score of 3270
Amazing! Great storyline, and I love how there are different endings and scores. Thanks. ??
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— Supercow160 on 12/9/2014 9:18:20 AM with a score of 3750
You can tell it was done by an ameteur. But I myself probably couldn't make anything as good as that. Well done for a beginner
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— Bailey on 12/7/2014 7:38:55 PM with a score of 3065
oh well
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windchaser
on 11/24/2014 9:06:22 PM with a score of 1700
Awesome! I loved the comedic aspects, and the use of objects throughout the game! Definitely one of my favourites!
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temp
on 11/22/2014 3:45:31 PM with a score of 3005
the game is truely awesome.
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meero
on 11/16/2014 9:16:51 AM with a score of 3565
Half epic in a silly way. I love it!
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— Anonymous on 10/18/2014 12:22:25 PM with a score of 3310
it a good thjough needs improvment
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— ded on 10/7/2014 9:28:48 PM with a score of 3580
Really fun! I love the interactive weapons that make the game better. Only drawbacks is this isn't really realistic. I was really lost at some points too. But one of the best ones I've played so far.
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— Tyler on 9/4/2014 8:09:00 AM with a score of 865
it was nice , the weapons found are very useful
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spiderfire
on 8/18/2014 6:42:00 PM with a score of 3280
Pretty fun, no complaints
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— Jack on 8/13/2014 7:46:20 AM with a score of 3760
Lillian dies?
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— Valdox the Unmerciful on 8/3/2014 6:25:48 PM with a score of 3245
Um I realize that the story is intentionally light and unserious. And found that funny on multiple occasions, however I believe that it would have benefitted from a bit more structured, and believable elements. A bit of backstory would have helped as well
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Noirbard
on 7/27/2014 6:56:54 AM with a score of 3750
How do you get killed if you have the formula?
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bilbo
on 7/26/2014 12:20:42 PM with a score of 3350
Lots of fun and very entertaining. I had fun fighting evil guys and going through the story. One of the best games I have ever played.
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TheSophia
on 7/18/2014 10:48:21 PM with a score of 3005
A ton of fun to play. The fact that items have such a large impact on your potential actions gives the game a lot more possible outcomes and makes it worth replaying many times.
Also, the hints hidden in the text that imply which items can be used in the situation are subtle enough to not break immersion and clear enough that I never had to resort to randomly clicking items hoping that one would work.
All in all, an excellent game that is definitely worth playing.
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the_quiller
on 7/12/2014 6:03:30 PM with a score of 3440
Your casual hero saves the day game
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— Anonymous on 7/11/2014 12:44:17 PM with a score of 3455
This story had a couple of typos and was very short but it had an interesting story behind it.
5/8
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StudentWriter
on 7/5/2014 10:40:00 AM with a score of 3055
Great game but improve grammar and put in a bit more detail.
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— Joseph on 7/5/2014 3:40:57 AM with a score of 3045
Fun
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Boericson
on 5/24/2014 12:09:25 PM with a score of 3695
It took a while to complete it and to find all of the endings.
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Yellowfellow
on 5/5/2014 5:38:07 PM with a score of 3290
Awesome story, I just died by thinking throwing people is a good idea... :P. Gona try again
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— Draou on 4/24/2014 10:51:57 PM with a score of 275
I don't really know what to say.
I mean, it was okay, but it was a bit half-assed.
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— C.D. on 4/21/2014 3:13:03 AM with a score of 3320
Not bad
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aperson
on 4/18/2014 11:26:27 AM with a score of 3230
Cool story! It wasn't too short nor too long, I liked it!
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EarthCollision
on 3/20/2014 2:52:04 PM with a score of 1060
4 words: did... not... like... it
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— ummmm on 3/15/2014 11:39:25 AM with a score of 180
Quite fun!
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MagicPencil
on 3/12/2014 2:15:32 PM with a score of 3230
Awesome storygame
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magicnumber999
on 3/5/2014 5:08:57 PM with a score of 915
I love this stuff I got so excited that I pooped on my I pad several times while playing with great pleasure
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— Poopy maker on 3/3/2014 2:50:10 PM with a score of 220
I didn't really like the lack of choices and the fact some logical choices led to an immediate death. Other than that the writing was okay, I did notice on misspelled word and the story was fantastic. Unfortunately I can't base my rating purely off the writing and story because implementation is one of the most immportant factors, to me that portion seemed pretty poor and that's why I had to rate it a 3.
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— Josh on 3/2/2014 7:27:35 PM with a score of 990
Entertaining game with good use of inventory. It might have been nice if the game didn't make it quite so obvious which items to use where.
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31TeV
on 2/4/2014 9:01:39 AM with a score of 3005
Had bomb but couldn't use so fix that less u have limited ammo inwich say have 1 bomb
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Shawn
on 1/19/2014 10:02:45 PM with a score of 1190
It was a nice story. A very nice story. Great work!
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crazyminer135
on 1/19/2014 11:42:36 AM with a score of 3205
not a good description of what's happening feels like you got tired and just tried to finish the game and get it over with *shrug*
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— sam on 1/11/2014 5:58:22 PM with a score of 500
During the reading of 'Vengeance' I noticed that you have many spelling errors throughout it's entirety. I did enjoy reading this, and I love the fact that it is ALMOST like a modern reworking of 'The Count of Monte Cristo'! Slow down and think of where the story can go, and I also suggest that you add more descriptive detail to the other characters. Tri describing the main character's surroundings more. Include what he/she sees, feels, hears, smells, or even tastes, for this will make the reader fell like they are the main character. Keep up the great work!
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— Syman on 1/7/2014 11:34:46 PM with a score of 3295
Wow!
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soccermoose123
on 12/27/2013 10:34:34 PM with a score of 3170
The writing and plot weren't the best, but the game itself was entertaining.
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Spacecats
on 12/10/2013 6:17:53 PM with a score of 1740
good game
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kinsmarts
on 12/5/2013 3:15:30 PM with a score of 3240
Amazing story i say and has comedy which i like.
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Nitsou
on 11/30/2013 8:11:11 PM with a score of 3510
Good game 8/8. I got thE best ending
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Skull09840
on 11/23/2013 7:37:44 PM with a score of 3695
It was, more or less, good and I enjoyed playing it. Rated it an 8 (Then again, if the story doesn't make me hate it I normally give it an 8 because of how it causes me enjoyment)
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Jihelu
on 11/18/2013 9:24:33 AM with a score of 3685
It... just wasn't that good. It was like a low-budget action film and didn't make much logical sense. If you were immortal, then how does being shot by henchmen end the game. Shoot, since I apparently don't feel pain either from it (or bleed all over my clothes), why couldn't I just take the 'swordcane' and fence everyone to death? Not like they could stop me, being invincible and immortal.
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dman2life
on 10/13/2013 6:25:06 PM with a score of 3890
Well... you had a good rating from me... until I got this: "Suddenly, a car drices by, and a man sticks his head out and shoots you in the head. " *headdesk* After such a long into, I get two sentences (including that one) when I die? The hell...?
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Kiel_Farren
on 9/29/2013 8:39:45 AM with a score of 240
Cute, action packed, and all together well assembled. I'm somewhat surprised it's only a 6, but only somewhat. It's certainly better than other 6 ratings I've played.
I really enjoy the level of flexibility present in the system, while still making it clear what options are available.
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SteelMachete
on 8/20/2013 2:19:42 AM with a score of 3285
Awesome. 'Nuff said :)
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BobbyParkhurst
on 8/19/2013 11:08:11 AM with a score of 3790
Hahahah, fun game, enjoyed how you were a one man destruction unit as you continued your vendetta....
Wish that it was a BIT longer, but I wish that for most games...
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— Who really cares? on 8/14/2013 9:53:39 PM with a score of 2510
Really good story
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jack10345
on 8/5/2013 7:33:08 PM with a score of 2740
It was a little short but I was hooked. It had a good story and good options.
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ZombieEatsYou
on 8/5/2013 12:51:55 AM with a score of 3340
i love how i could use all the items and i also love how the story is simple, not difficult, but enjoyable. 7/8 :)
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— laurentberceau on 7/25/2013 6:41:38 AM with a score of 3135
WOO!! Best ending first try!!
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— jmc on 7/15/2013 2:06:05 PM with a score of 3770
It was pretty good! The story was interesting, and I liked having a sword cane (because they are amazing!)
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Bethius
on 7/14/2013 4:17:50 PM with a score of 3210
Cool but the items should be able to interact more
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lolman19990322
on 7/14/2013 9:40:56 AM with a score of 3790
An ok game apart from the pathetic little brown sacks as item icons and a seemingly important choice near the start... No spoilers
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lukiagamer
on 6/1/2013 6:15:48 PM with a score of 920
Really love that the author take great effort to make extra ordinary story. Congratulations for the author. I hope he/she would make another great story like this.
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— Mike on 6/1/2013 4:24:02 PM with a score of 3070
Could've been a lot better... if it wasn't so poorly written by what seems like a twelve year old.
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— Anon on 5/23/2013 8:14:31 PM with a score of 3075
This was pretty funny. Very entertaining.
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bfkinf
on 5/17/2013 8:14:07 AM with a score of 3770
Immortal national hero,what could be better?
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DvaLisa
on 5/13/2013 8:40:53 AM with a score of 3045
Great story!! Wish it was longer, though!
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— Lidi on 4/23/2013 7:04:41 PM with a score of 3470
Yeah, that was great. I love how many items I had. I won on my first try, but that's probably because I actually took notes along the way so to not forget anything. Good work, I am definitely a fan. <3
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Kamayla
on 4/15/2013 11:37:49 PM with a score of 3920
cool game
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— a on 4/2/2013 10:44:39 PM with a score of 2995
It was kinda short, but good effort
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jbrown19
on 3/27/2013 2:05:47 AM with a score of 3185
This is interesting, but linear. The items don't really work (apart from the wallet and silencer pistol) and it is based on luck a lot.
3/5
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— OmegaGoldfish on 3/12/2013 1:18:02 PM with a score of 3300
A must read for everyone. A good story and satisfying ending. But with its flaws. Unlogical sometimes, lack of detail, pages are rushed, linear, restricted, spelling errors. But a worthy read. An epic, like a movie(im not sure..). well...7/8
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Endrew
on 2/15/2013 12:08:58 AM with a score of 3355
This is a very good game. I love the story
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— steven cantos on 2/14/2013 3:43:00 PM with a score of 180
I really liked it, I mean sure, it could surtainly be expanded on, but it's the most thinking I've had to do in a game that length in a while.
The clues were a bit too obvious, but then again there were alot of ways to die, so it balanced out.
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defender
on 2/3/2013 1:29:57 AM with a score of 2990
I got the Best Ending Possible! Yay!
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Dreknauo
on 1/29/2013 3:15:52 PM with a score of 2895
Well, that's cliché! I became an immortal business man, who, I assume, eats souls and drinks blood.
Hooray!
That's one of the better endings.
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— strange man on 1/28/2013 8:24:43 PM with a score of 3265
Its fun
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chasemeee
on 1/27/2013 12:46:52 PM with a score of 3020
Awesome game. vove the concept.
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— ollie on 1/14/2013 4:16:32 PM with a score of 480
Despite being rather short, I enjoyed it for what it was. A forgettable, groan-inducing, fast paced action romp. What I didn't like was how things sort of happened without any reason. The girl Melissa giving her life story within a few seconds of meeting you? Being given access to weaponry just 'cause? Eh, it could have been better. Having to use stealth, acquire intell, drop guards through trickery ala Manhunt to obtain weaponry and such...
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mazgrenan
on 1/13/2013 8:01:17 PM with a score of 3815
I liked it, alot of choices, so yea. 4/8
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SethIsBeast
on 12/26/2012 3:21:22 PM with a score of 2930
Amazing
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— Eugene on 11/23/2012 12:27:39 AM with a score of 3915
cool
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kalun
on 11/9/2012 6:32:15 PM with a score of 3430
rating went from a 7/8 to an 8/8 because it included a chu-ko-nu and a swordcane :D
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MagmaArmor0
on 10/28/2012 10:15:30 PM with a score of 3215
Ok, I wish if you made the wrong decision you could go back
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trubtiger
on 10/24/2012 9:39:21 AM with a score of 2585
Really fun, it seemed a little bit to random at points but it was an enjoyable experience.
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Charger
on 10/23/2012 6:53:08 PM with a score of 3390
7/10
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Ps3_Gamer
on 10/9/2012 7:59:40 PM with a score of 3035
Good but short
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kabirtomer
on 8/16/2012 5:42:03 AM with a score of 3495
New to these adventures... I thoroughly enjoyed this story - imaginative, exciting, and fast-paced. As a beginner I found it quite difficult. Keep up the good work!
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— Kit on 7/27/2012 3:15:39 PM with a score of 3135
This was awesome! Of course, I could be a bit bias because I got the Best Ending Possible!
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Amy2
on 6/23/2012 12:53:23 AM with a score of 2775
A great game it would be good if you make a part 2 and countine with the story and make a new problem
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ZenUndead
on 5/14/2012 10:46:50 AM with a score of 3820
got the best ending. 7/8
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masterelf
on 4/27/2012 10:33:33 AM with a score of 3665
I got the best ending possible
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betaband
on 4/23/2012 8:12:56 PM with a score of 3575
i got the best ending possible
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— bells23 on 4/19/2012 11:53:02 AM with a score of 3535
I finally won. I this game is awesome
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betaband
on 4/17/2012 11:12:18 PM with a score of 3080
Great game with many options available with a decent plot.
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EliteHunterG
on 4/16/2012 11:26:08 PM with a score of 3530
I took a spear but couldn't use it
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Xt1000305
on 4/16/2012 9:46:04 PM with a score of 3465
The good parts of this game was that there was a good amount of options, nice action scenes, and a nice array of items. You had a decent plot and I kind of liked the characters. The things that I felt held this story back was that there were no pictures for the items, which in retrospect is not that big of a deal but it's nice to have, and the story at times was unrealistic. I can't imagine this happening to a normal kid and him being perfectly okay with it. It just seemed cheap at times, like a bad action movie.
All in all, I don't think this was to bad of a game.
5/8
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JMgskills
on 4/8/2012 2:28:58 PM with a score of 215
btw, the camera is useless.
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Swiftstryker
on 3/25/2012 3:47:58 PM with a score of 3810
Cheesy, and incredibly EASY. Did I mention EASY?
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Swiftstryker
on 3/25/2012 3:31:45 PM with a score of 2805
It was kinda..cheesy. Like....over priced action movie cheesy.
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azrael136
on 3/3/2012 4:35:53 AM with a score of 3170
hard
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betaband
on 2/23/2012 8:16:56 PM with a score of 300
Got the Best ending ever! But Revenge isn't really a title to give this story. Great story.
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awesomeness1242
on 2/17/2012 6:33:48 PM with a score of 3005
Nice
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RajR
on 2/8/2012 10:13:41 PM with a score of 3240
Good.
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Killer999
on 10/10/2011 11:36:00 AM with a score of 1065
This was really good! I got the best ending! It is logical but not too hard and long enough to keep me interested! Liked it greatly!
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DarkentityOni
on 9/3/2011 9:55:51 PM with a score of 3245
Sucks when you make one mistake and cant go back
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— Ryan Stregger on 8/15/2011 3:06:00 PM with a score of 1105
I really enjoied it, and got the best ending! It was fun and kept me entertained the whole way.
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sunshine_2012
on 8/7/2011 1:23:31 PM with a score of 3405
To be honest I couldnt make myself finish it. Which isnt to say that the game is all bad, but its obviously a pretty dated game, most of the old games on this site have too little plot and rely to much on items and the like.
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ugilick
on 8/2/2011 9:14:38 PM with a score of 980
BEST ENDING!!! I am Immortal! take that, Nicholas Flamel
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— Alavander on 7/22/2011 7:43:43 PM with a score of 3790
I thought it was a bit easy but I still had a fun time.
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cool74
on 6/11/2011 8:08:49 PM with a score of 3350
A rather interesting and fun game. Good job.
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— Magus on 5/27/2011 9:20:55 PM with a score of 2965
this is fing amwesome
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— jmack on 5/16/2011 12:57:17 PM with a score of 3720
Not bad. I enjoyed it =]
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Crefix
on 4/29/2011 11:24:39 AM with a score of 3085
I like how you use objects, but I just don't like the writing of the story very much
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ThisisBo
on 4/28/2011 9:57:03 PM with a score of 915
Hell Yes!!
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emmaleighmia
on 3/24/2011 3:50:46 AM with a score of 200
great game!
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— e.m.p. on 3/24/2011 3:47:13 AM with a score of 220
Pretty fun stuff :D
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— Jon on 3/17/2011 12:41:03 PM with a score of 3180
This was an excellent story. It had such depth and a good gameplay mechanic.
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— Alex Young on 3/15/2011 3:13:12 PM with a score of 3240
Pretty cool. A couple of confusing parts but overall pretty interesting. Good job!
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JoeDude
on 1/9/2011 3:36:51 AM with a score of 3395
That story was the bomb-diggity. Grappling hooking, silencer shooting, schimitar wielding, Bruce Lee kicking mofo no down around in town!
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— Awesome dude on 12/16/2010 1:09:44 PM with a score of 3005
this was a little too linear in the first part, and the rest of the game choices were almost always useless. so i'm not so sure.
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fergie14233
on 11/13/2010 11:17:36 PM with a score of 1005
To the author: You really need to re-read this. There are a lot of spelling and gramatical errors. Examples are you used "ca" instead of "can." There are also some story line errors. It's like when you're trying to lead Kyle back to the hotel room, you wrote you lead Melissa back to the hotel room.
I also never found a use for that piece of paper. This game was okay, better than some of the games I played here but I've played better.
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Renodox
on 10/23/2010 8:18:16 PM with a score of 3290
Great story...although i never found out where those heavy guns were....
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HiddenRing3
on 8/25/2010 12:20:51 AM with a score of 3470
The story is a poor conspiracy cliche. But its not too bad.
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Old_Zangeif
on 6/14/2010 3:59:26 AM with a score of 3045
Loved the game:). Could have used some more pictures of items and stuff though.
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— Ethan on 4/23/2010 3:32:58 PM with a score of 3280
er, fun.
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hummingbird3
on 4/9/2010 3:03:52 AM with a score of 3355
I think you are a great auother
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— michael guerrieri on 3/18/2010 2:11:24 PM with a score of 215
Excellent adventure! Suspense, discovery, action - all are elements of this story. Although I didn't make it to the end, I was relatively close.
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— Zend Denmer on 12/5/2009 5:33:48 PM with a score of 1430
ending was abit silly but other than that it was really good
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— scot on 10/15/2009 7:57:52 PM with a score of 2925
very good, had fun!
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Gamebooks
on 10/15/2009 1:04:22 PM with a score of 3410
This was really cool. Next time I'm taking the rocket launcher.
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Juranas
on 9/24/2009 11:31:04 AM with a score of 3210
AMAZING
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timj
on 9/6/2009 6:55:38 AM with a score of 220
Cool, though I didn't get to use my bazooka...
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9_Ice_Sabres
on 8/1/2009 11:42:57 AM with a score of 3255
Wow, a well-thought out story, though I died early. I'm kind of headstrong.
Still, I enjoyed playing it.
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akjhurg
on 7/27/2009 2:16:58 AM with a score of 885
Really good!
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Pulsey94
on 3/8/2009 11:20:03 PM with a score of 3470
great game man!
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iprototype
on 3/5/2009 8:02:32 PM with a score of 3020
semi good ending
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kidgavin
on 2/27/2009 7:57:38 AM with a score of 1280
Man i swear to god i keep dying by the first three guys that were torturing the woman
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— gavin on 2/27/2009 7:26:02 AM with a score of 265
yai!!!!!!! i get the best ending..
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mastodont
on 12/17/2008 1:27:38 PM with a score of 3045
Fairly basic but enjoyable.
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— Gregg on 11/13/2008 5:43:06 AM with a score of 3505
not bad, not bad at all. definetly better than a reeses cup
and thats sayin somethin :D
~tmacandcheese
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tmacandcheese
on 8/28/2008 11:50:46 PM with a score of 3340
This rules.
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— Fenwickb (James Fenwick) on 8/8/2008 9:52:35 PM with a score of 3560
dude awsome man perfect everything a person could want in a game
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— revfds on 6/8/2008 5:28:09 PM with a score of 3495
Yay, got the best ending and I gotta say: this game freaking rocks! :D
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kharid
on 6/3/2008 12:04:18 PM with a score of 3240
Excellent game. The weapon choices added a lot of scenarios to the game, although it seems like a certain combination covers every scene perfectly. It would be nice to see different weapon choices leading through different events rather than making events easier, but the story and humorous undertone are so good, it's hard to really care. Congratulations on this must-play game.
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Melike
on 4/2/2008 1:29:22 AM with a score of 3120
It was very good and I liked how it described the situations.I definitely recommend this choose your own adventure story.
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— Jade on 12/27/2007 2:11:16 PM with a score of 3795
8/8 it was funner the 2nd time around
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jakster
on 12/24/2007 4:22:04 PM with a score of 3330
that was very fun
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jakster
on 12/23/2007 9:57:23 PM with a score of 3620
6/8 fun game
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rezy
on 12/10/2007 6:27:16 PM with a score of 215
Pretty good, the only thing that nnoyed me was when you wefre a little too lazy to make seperate descriptions for different actions.
Spoilers ahead
For example when it says you attack the president with your gun/swordcane and he is injured with your gun/swordcane and runs away. You could have made a seperate description for each weapon use. Other then that, great game!
7 out of 8
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— doseki on 12/9/2007 10:36:11 AM with a score of 2955
7/8 really cool game and fun
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Agent_47
on 11/18/2007 12:52:32 PM with a score of 180
definitely a great game!
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— Oriol on 10/28/2007 4:11:29 AM with a score of 3310
twas as good as i can spell!! and thats saying something!
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emma101rox
on 10/27/2007 9:41:56 PM with a score of 185
Nice i got best ending in my first try!!!! :)
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swat210
on 9/3/2007 10:10:13 PM with a score of 3595
Wow, that game had some really interesting, cool options. If thier isn't a sequel, then i definetly think you should make one. Good Job!
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hiblakeandhiscousin
on 8/3/2007 5:15:18 PM with a score of 1060
this game rocks. i had fun and the items usage was well thoguht out.
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deadly_sinner66
on 7/2/2007 3:56:17 PM with a score of 1335
NEED I SAY MORE!
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— A Reese's Peanut Butter Cup on 6/24/2007 9:19:00 AM with a score of 175
What an amazzzing game!
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Darknuth
on 5/19/2007 6:30:03 PM with a score of 175
FUN FUN FUN FUNNEST THING ON THE SIGHT
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doraiscrap777
on 4/6/2007 3:22:32 PM with a score of 3470
Very enjoyable, though if you had the formula all along then how could you have died earlier in the game :P
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gameshark1313
on 2/3/2007 5:24:46 PM with a score of 3500
This truly will bring you enlightenment. Perfect grammar, perfect storyline. This is going on my good list.
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October
on 10/13/2006 6:38:02 AM with a score of 3095
This was really fun! Great use of lots of items (the only thing that would be even cooler would be if there were different pictures)
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Sethaniel
on 10/10/2006 10:37:34 AM with a score of 1265
A very interesting premise.
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GMDaniel
on 8/22/2006 8:40:02 PM with a score of 235
I got the 2nd best ending - but it was an awesome story!!! Play this now!
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— tsmpaul on 8/16/2006 7:56:36 PM with a score of 2820
The best game relaesed
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— zack on 8/10/2006 12:28:27 PM with a score of 1595
Heheh, I played again! Can't figure out how I'm not getting a higher score. Very fun.
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madglee
on 8/9/2006 2:55:12 AM with a score of 3215
Great story! I liked the plot and all the characters. One minor problem I found was after using the [secret] in the right door the page says "A New Link." The link leads to the right place but you might want to rename it. I won with the best ending! Lots of fun. Excellent job!
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madglee
on 8/9/2006 2:48:20 AM with a score of 3430
On second thought, this game rocks!
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— GodsSlayer on 7/10/2006 7:00:23 AM with a score of 3765
Pretty good!
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— Waynewood on 7/6/2006 4:50:52 PM with a score of 3940
AWSOME! im playing that again!
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— aden on 6/23/2006 8:44:45 PM with a score of 245
Pretty darn good.
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— weedy on 5/11/2006 4:56:32 PM with a score of 205
Good game, and excellent storyline. But most of the choices killed me.
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— GodsSlayer on 4/4/2006 1:07:25 AM with a score of 1825
Very well written and intriguing storyline.
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— Larcen Tyler on 2/1/2006 7:31:10 PM with a score of 1105
I WON!!
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— Rommel on 1/13/2006 4:44:39 PM with a score of 3625
that is the best game ever
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— anesu on 12/28/2005 4:35:30 PM with a score of 1570
this game is pretty good. i liked it a lot better then the Wal-mart adventures game
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— nate on 12/23/2005 2:54:59 PM with a score of 225
This is a really cool game
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— Nick on 12/15/2005 5:28:38 AM with a score of 1290
Awesome game, brilliant
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— chocobot on 12/8/2005 2:37:54 PM with a score of 2710
it the best
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— penut on 11/27/2005 12:29:47 PM with a score of 200
THIS WAS THE KOOLEST GAME EVER!!!!
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— firechick on 11/18/2005 9:32:35 PM with a score of 3835
Meh. Not bad I guess. But sorta cliche and the writing a bit too...meh. Everyone being paralyzed and announcing it Metal Gear style is just...meh.
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— L.R. Jude Reed on 11/14/2005 11:22:46 PM with a score of 3450
I got the best possible ending! Yay! Go me! Play my Dragon Quiz! I like pie!!!!
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— jamestkirk on 11/4/2005 8:07:57 PM with a score of 3435
wicked awesome
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— poo on 10/28/2005 1:24:04 PM with a score of 285
AWESOME i got he best ending
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— T3akaT4 on 10/26/2005 11:53:13 AM with a score of 3305
Awesome!!!
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— james on 10/18/2005 1:14:25 AM with a score of 3005
This game is the best game ever!
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— Adam666 on 10/10/2005 1:58:08 AM with a score of 545
WOW! THAT WAS SIMPLY AMAZING! I reccomend to EVERYONE!
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— Terminator. on 9/28/2005 9:28:30 PM with a score of 275
VERY NICE GAME!
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— 12345678987654321 on 9/26/2005 6:24:58 PM with a score of 2955
it was a good game.
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— wayne on 9/24/2005 1:03:37 AM with a score of 215
well i dont really know wat to say but it was a pretty good game
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— wayne on 9/6/2005 6:25:02 PM with a score of 175
great game badger. very enjoyable and the writing was amazing.
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— solostrike on 8/31/2005 9:24:20 PM with a score of 3005
ehh how can someone betray u if hes ur enemy?
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— ^_^ on 8/23/2005 11:57:58 AM with a score of 3435
a really well thought out game
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— Milo on 8/21/2005 4:35:19 AM with a score of 180
This is a great game.I luv it. Ive played through it many times but I still cant find the bomb. Overall its xselint
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— Persun on 8/8/2005 5:13:00 PM with a score of 3010
I can see why this was voted as one of the best games. It had good creative writing and good use of tools to progress in the game.
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— BigB on 8/5/2005 12:13:43 AM with a score of 3340
its alright
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— howard on 8/2/2005 4:34:05 PM with a score of 180
great game i played it again
check out my website at www.frooglekade.zoomshare.com
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— Kade on 7/30/2005 8:33:24 PM with a score of 3280
good game i like the items they were great
please check out my website at www.frooglekade.zoomshare.com
thanx
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— Kade on 7/29/2005 1:58:26 PM with a score of 3370
great!!
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— sdf on 7/22/2005 1:08:58 AM with a score of 180
Very nice, very long, lots of choices :) Still pretty one-way, though, but very nice nevertheless.
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— Karacan on 7/13/2005 11:40:30 AM with a score of 3030
I've played this game 5 times now just to experience every possible ending that doesnt involve my death, and I still come back for more all the time! I would be so happy if you made a sequel, I might even give you $$$! Please make a sequel!
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— Justin B. on 7/12/2005 11:03:07 PM with a score of 175
Awesome game, man! The plot, the adventure, the villains, the battles, the action, everything! It was all good, man! Excellent job, Badger! Keep it up!
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— Deven711 on 6/16/2005 10:50:15 AM with a score of 3775
This Game Rocks!!! This is the best game I have ever played on myadventuregame.com!
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— Justin7935 on 6/14/2005 3:31:35 PM with a score of 580
Excellent game. This is my favorite game I have Ever Played. Do you know what this means! This means I am going to give a high rating. Yes a high rating from me. And I'm not even mad, its a miracle. 10/10, wait thats not right. 10.5/10. Better!
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— JJJ on 6/11/2005 10:00:43 PM with a score of 3590
YEAH!!!!!! I WON WITH THE BEST ENDING POSSIBLE!!!!!!!! Awesome game, definitly should make a sequel!!!!!
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— jamestkirk on 6/6/2005 8:55:37 PM with a score of 2815
Really good game.
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— J Dog on 6/2/2005 2:35:51 PM with a score of 3555
i like the interactivity cool
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— emverfelizher on 5/22/2005 7:34:40 AM with a score of 3020
WOOHOO!!!!!! THIS GAME IS THE BEST AND IS REALLY AWESOME!!! I LOVE THE COOL INTERACTIVTY!! YOU MUST PLAY IT OR DIE!!!!
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— Lenin on 5/12/2005 2:44:17 PM with a score of 2845
phenomenal. I'm speechless. this game is a masterpiece. congrats on being category featured.
march
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— march5th00 on 5/11/2005 9:59:59 PM with a score of 3020
Yahoo! I won again! FULL CREDIT (i hope)!
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— Al on 4/29/2005 5:23:28 PM with a score of 3530
I won with best ending possablie yay !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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— on 4/14/2005 5:30:48 PM with a score of 3345
I found alot of items.
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— Havacoman on 4/9/2005 2:57:24 PM with a score of 3435
THIS GAME IS AWESOME! I GOT THE BEST ENDING POSSIBLE(YAY!)! To the creator, keep up the good work!
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— Arnie on 4/9/2005 12:09:45 AM with a score of 3110
I won the second best went back a link and got the very best. None of the choices had a logical choice to them. Unless there's more than three. I know not to go to the diner untill last.
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— Havacoman on 4/7/2005 8:06:04 PM with a score of 3190
not as much detail as your first game, however, the length and story definately make up for that. great game. continue to make strong games like this and we all will continue to play em.
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— nate on 4/6/2005 7:43:26 PM with a score of 3185
i won the best ending! (after clicking back a few times)
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— Al on 4/6/2005 6:20:26 PM with a score of 3310
This game is awesome. I died. : (
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— Al on 4/5/2005 10:33:10 PM with a score of 1335
Hope everyone enjoys this game! Please leave me comments!
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— Badger on 4/5/2005 9:18:54 PM with a score of 3600
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