Player Comments on Sixteen Words

Amazing!! Was not sure how this could work, super fun following the paths.

got boobie ending. totally amazing. Thank you for the game.

I had seventeen words in my last comment. That’s really quite embarrassing and I'm extremely ashamed.

Wow.

Much in few words.

Characters, setting, emotions, well written.

Good formatting and word choice.

Highly recommend.

Cute.

Ulcers…

It was very confusing and I want a walkthrough.. Thank you however. I didn’t really enjoy

I have no idea why this is a fantasy storygame, but I am not complaining because

Wow. Fun and unique! Variety of branches. Perfect for us who have no attention span. Excellent!

Never thought you could do so much with so few words. The end feels like enlightenment.

The sixteen words gimmick was cool, but surely sixty four or something would be more engaging?

Unique concept, will have to use your imagination, somewhat interesting story, but it is very short

I died horribly. It's hard to explain why in sixteen words, but that's the rule here.

Fun use of fonts and colour,
Love the word choice and the humour.
Congrats my man.

This is a very intriguing premise, and surprising well done. Every word is very impactful. Recommended.

Creative. I enjoyed how simplistic, but also brimming with depth that this game was.

Sixteen words.

What can I say that has not already been said in this story: an actual story.

So, I have to write sixteen words for a review, eh? Well, the plot is a-

An entertaining game rife with humor, which makes it work well. Who needs over sixteen words?

The short length of sixteen words means that every choice seems to have a massive impact. The words chosen make it clear what every choice will do. The idea of sixteen words doesn't allow for much description - however I was still able to understand what's going on. Interesting concept, and the endings were very varied and intriguing.

Reminds me of the beginning of Fallout: New Vegas where you answer Doc Mitchell's word association test.

I enjoyed it for what it was.

1st play: Apparently I'm Lawful Good. Now I wish I'd shoved that fucker in the volcano.

2nd play: Great, now I'm dead. Now I REALLY wish I'd shoved that fucker in. Retry!

3rd play: My sister thought I was a dude. She also wanted in my pants. Ick.

Traumatized? Sail West!

This game was so short but yet...I still love it.

very funny :)

fun and short. not too bad

Freytag's Pyramid. Connect the dots. Fast read. A story-game for the impatient reader! Recommended.

What just happened?|)(|<--Is this a butt or boobs.

I didn't understand it.

An interesting concept. The form is unique. But... this isn't my cup of tea.

Very good considering the constraints. Favorite part was the "Scantily-clad" path. I highly recommend this.

You actually made this, that's funny. It's a cute idea. Considering the constraints, I liked it.

Novel idea, weird execution.

This was a bad idea. One word per page is not enough. I rate this 3.

Good. Continue.

just replayed a few times and was very good

it was a very interesting concept certainly, but the end result wasn´t amazing, but it was still good

Great story.
Lots of variation despite being compact.
Shocking, actually. Most impressive.
Definitely a solid seven.

This is actually pretty good, leaves a lot to the imagination but that is the spirit.

Why is this? What is the sixteen? Is that a magical number? It is in computers.

But still, why would you do this? I can see how, but why? For what reason?

Is this truly a representative sample? Does your survey include all groups? I don’t think so.

So it sounds like your premise is flawed. That means the rest is useless as well?

But what if it is not? Why would you continue? Could there be additional, hidden value?

There is not, should you listen to the academics. Their review procedures are clear, you know.

However, this is not the academic world. In fact, it is clearly far, far from it.

Does that make this effort better or worse? Or should the author know better? He does.

But does anyone else care? Based on the activity here, it would appear that they do.

Anyway, obviously I have finally gotten around to reading this interesting story here on the site.

I have read many paths through the short story and have found many endings to them.

Have I found them all? How could I know? I might suspect there are sixteen endings.

Based on the challenge line listed on this page, there may not be sixteen after all.

Do I really try and find them all? Surely it would not take long to determine.

I think perhaps I will give it sixteen minutes to see what I’m able to do.

My time is up, and this is what I have. Now read the story for yourself.

Inspiring plots of lust and power entertain for an hour. Will you die or reign supreme?

Unpredictable, unforeseen, much wonder, such wow.
Beautiful, one of a kind, accomplished astonished raising of brow.

This is a really fun idea and I found myself trying many paths. Highly recommend it.

Even though I was forced to read this, this is actually more entertaining than I thought!

It's obviously a quick game, and the humor benefits from this. Every choice worked the to raise the tension that every subsequent click escalate. I got a chuckle or two from most of the endings.

...wow. how do I even describe this

Compliment game. List good things. Sarcastic joke. Constructive criticism. Much nitpicking.
Pointlessly repeat self. Lavish praise.

I have a woeful attention span. Behold, the perfect game. Much thanks Gower, you masterful minimalist.

A cool and unique concept for a game. Thanks for so many cool games, Gower. Epic.

This is the fast-food of Haikus. Swag, spicy with rowdy starting and amoney shot finish.

Compressed storytelling enhances the reader's imagination faculties to produce an innovative outlook on CYS. Sincere respect.

Formicophilia, incest, AND I get to seduce myself in this game? Nice indeed. Thank you, Gower.

16 words comment poem:

Intriguing, to say the least
Clever, until it ceased

Different than others
Treasured as if lovers

I don't get it. I really don't. But then again I'm a foreigner here in CYStialand.

I have sixteen words.
This is pretty innovative, as expected of you.
Thanks for the laugh.

So many amazing plots in this story. Very deep for just sixteen words per each path.

Neat experiment! Sparse yet epic wording made me envision vivid plots; evil sisters, boobs, and more.

Very well done. Each story is represented through keen word choice, color and font. Quick fun!

It is a fun interactive fiction. Some paths are better than other paths, I highly recommend.

I thought this was very clever and you did very well to write this so skillfully.

This is a clever little story that give you, what is usually, single word situations and single word solutions.

It still manages to tell pretty interesting, though vague, stories. The grammar is non existent because this is a series of sixteen word stories. It would matter if there was though because the author is a English Professor, so he's automatically right if he disagrees with me about the English language.

Give it a read. Don't diddle you sister.

got my sister therapy because I'm normal human being

shoulda entered this in best of 2k19

finally. a game I can read and not get very bored half way through.