Player Comments on Ground Zero
Ground Zero is one of the stories that I read the first time I found this site and the one that impressed me the most at the time. It might even be considered the reason I kept returning to this site every few months rather than forgetting about it after closing the tab. However, I did not read it again until now. I have to say, it's left an impression on me once more.
The story is very engaging throughout. The events leading up to the nuclear attack are not revealed in detail, but they don't need to be. Why date the story with the villainous country of the week when the results are the same? The main character's life is drastically changed forever.
Every choice will lead you to a different path (save in one spot in the community shelter path in which there are two ways to get the same path). Even choices that may initially appear to be something that will lead to an early death ending often lead to an entirely new path. Depending on the path you choose, you can become a very different person in more ways than one, but the main character himself's basic personality is always consistent.
There was one ending in particular that stuck out in my memory, and I see why again now. The ending when you leave the shelter with Eliza has no epilogue, and it likely did not end happily, but I suppose I am more of a sucker for that kind of emotionally touching ending than I thought. I also liked the poisoned ending and movie ending, as unofficial endings go. No ending left me unsatisfied and feeling ripped-off, but they all left me eagerly clicking the back button in order to read more wonderful endings.
Nothing is perfect, not even Ground Zero. A quick proofreading to remove some repeated phrases and such would have given this story more polish, but the errors are infrequent and never interfered with readability.
Ground Zero is a wonderful and entertaining post-apocalyptic adventure and a very valuable addition to CYS. For anyone looking for an epic story different from the usual fantasy, an excellent example of branching, a post-nuclear apocalyptic tale, or just an exciting and beautifully written story that will keep him engaged for quite a while, I recommend this storygame.
If you're one of those suckers who reads reviews before he reads stories, stop. Don't read anymore reviews. This is time you could spend reading Ground Zero.
on 3/19/2019 1:34:10 AM with a score of 0
I've made it no secret on this site in my earlier years that I absolutely love this story. But back then I didn't look at things critically, if I liked something then it was perfect and anyone who shit on it was a fuckwit, so last night I decided to read through the four (well, five counting an unofficial one) major paths and see if my nostalgia held up. I've gotta say, it does.
WARNING: THIS REVIEW CONTAINS A BUNCH OF SPOILERS
Let's start with the writing and the story. I'm a sucker for post-apocalyptic games, and this doesn't disappoint with its tale of the story of one man and his life after nuclear detonation. Depending on just a single choice (which branches out into another choice depending on what you choose, but still), you can take five different paths to five wildly different endings, and all the other endings on the way. Par the course, there's a few typos and grammar mistakes, but those don't really affect the overall quality of the story.
Aside from the minor errors, the writing is top notch and has a unique flare in its visceral style. EndMaster knows how to write extremely well without sounding like a snobby scholar-type, but rather like a regular old Joe that just so happened to major in creative writing. I especially liked the hints to the other paths you could've taken, IE mentions of the Combine in the public shelter, mutant, and Wasteland Bastard paths, when one path has you join what would eventually become the Combine (and being able to squash the Combine before they have the chance to become the tyrants they are), while the unofficial 'Wasteland Bastard' path ends with you finding a way into an unused private shelter when, if you read through a small branch early on in the path, you would've discovered it belonged to a family you meet (whereas you killed them before they could tell you in the main path).
I touched on it above but didn't really dig too deep into it, but this story has so many branches it puts a redwood to shame. Tons of choices, tons of branches, (be they quick 'you chose the wrong choice, time to die' or 'continue your story for quite a bit longer') and I enjoyed the fact that not all the choices that lead to an end game link on the next page are deaths and give a sense of the adventure continuing after that. One thing I will say is that I was disappointed in the lack of a 'road warrior' path, that is being an unaffiliated wandering adventurer, and the lack of a path which allowed you to join the cyborg faction whose name escapes me at the moment. Still, the paths provided were pretty damn sweet, so these are more things I would've liked to see than things that the game needs.
And now, gushing time.
Dude, wasn't it sweet when you just shoot that bastard Elliot in the public shelter path? Just be like, "fuck you motherfucker, you ain't gonna do some dystopia shit on my watch!"
Man, it was so fucking cool when you throw Owen off the roof when you meet him again in the mutant path, haha, that's what you get for going insane because I threw you out of your shelter you fucktard!
Wasn't it the bomb when you killed that bastard Alex in the soldier path? I made the mistake of forgiving you once shitlicker, I ain't forgiving you again!
And now here are my favorite paths:
3. Private Shelter path (I'm a sucker for human-robot/AI romances, and this one didn't disappoint. Plus it proves End can still do a compelling story without including a shitload of characters. The branch where you interact with the other people in the shelters also proved to be an interesting little character-driven thriller, which mostly took place across computer screens, which is also a telling achievement of his storytelling ability)
2. Soldier path (IMHO the 'best' path for the story, as you squash the Combine and the cyborg peeps without them getting the chance to get too bad, you restore a sense of order and government to the wasteland, and the epilogue featuring your descendant telling a story about your exploits in a bar was perfect)
1. Wasteland Bastard (Oh. My. God. This is the cruelest, most demented, and sickening path in the story... And I LOVE IT. You REALLY get to feel like a depraved bastard in this path, and then you have it all catch up to you and, depending on your interpretation, kill yourself out of guilt or be killed by a mutant bounty hunter. In the end it shows that you, the player, did this just to see how fucked up you could get, and that's exactly the same reason the protagonist did it)
So, in the end, is it the flawless masterwork I thought it was? No. But overall, this story, though flawed, is still a masterpiece of interactive fiction and my favorite story out of all of EndMaster's works. Forever and always, this will be an 8/8 for me.
on 2/19/2018 11:25:18 PM with a score of 0
The last time I left a comment on Ground Zero was a very long time ago. At that time I had only played through this storygame once, and whilst I hadn't died immediately, I wasn't exactly close to getting an epilogue. To paraphrase myself in this comment, I said that I would have liked more choice in the protagonist's actions. Looking back, I see that not only was I being unfair, but I didn't understand at all what makes this game great.
Since then, I have played through every page and discovered all the wonder and intrigue this deep, rich world has to offer. As is often the case with EndMaster's stories, it is the characters and plot which are most memorable. It is amazingly satisfying to see how your choices affect not only your own character, but other characters and even the world around you, in believable, really interesting ways. Not only that, but I was treated to a whole giant spider-web of such delicious stories, branching off in many directions, even when you think you've finished it all. Not one of these tales, on any page, did I find boring or dull. All the endings were a fun read and the epilogues provided good closure, with (most of them) giving us a glimpse into the life of your descendants. In this aspect - this incredible use of interactive fiction in its most basic form - Ground Zero is second only to Eternal.
I always find it strange when people complain about the linearity or lack of choices in an EndMaster game. Do they even know what linearity means? This thing branches like a motherfucker; it's anything but linear. I concede that there are less choices insomuch as there are probably less combinations due to lack of variables and scripting, but when you have such story-driven and meaningful choices that completely change the direction of the plot, the choices in Ground Zero are better, I would say. Yes, it means you don't control your character as much, but the protagonist is a (metaphorically) real person with his own opinions, feelings and motives. It allows for a much more complex and fascinating main character than if the player could decide every single little action.
Thank you, EndMaster, for writing such an epic tale that kept me entertained for hours on end. It was one of the first storygames I played on this website and it certainly left a fantastic impression. If it wasn't for Ground Zero, I might not have stuck around on CYS. Thank Dendrin I din't stumble upon Warrior Cats fanfic before reading this beauty.
on 10/19/2014 12:06:28 PM with a score of 0
on 2/24/2020 10:02:45 PM with a score of 0
Very sad but it was a great read.
-- Angel on 2/19/2020 6:24:24 PM with a score of 0
First off HOLY SHIT MAN. This is like reading a real book, props to you honestly you should become a real writer. The story was amazing my first play through was when you buy the bunker and I loved that part but was disappointing by the end and you just walk out of the bunker with a messed up and inaccurate map. I would like to know what happens whether that be another book with that story line or even an extension that was so fun i would do it again. I thought that was the only real ending then we actually get to go into the wasteland and try to rebuild civilization it is amazing! The twists and turns and the loss of your lover the one that saved you in the first place just gave me chills. Then you are deciding whether on not to kill your self and you wined up having sex with the person you saved at the barn with the cult. She tells you that is not what your lover wanted and you should keep fighting for her. Now you own AA and you are the founder and find out the women you had sex with had a child! But sadly she died and now you have to look after your new daughter. Fast forward 10 years and she is helping you through a city of mutants. Eventually you pass and you get to join your lover but you get to see through the eyes of your grand children. Dude if you made it this far thanks for reading this but i was just blown away from how good this story is. I am being serious I would buy this book. My only complaint was like 3 or 4 spelling errors but other than that it was amazing seriously dude great job. :)
on 2/4/2020 7:15:46 PM with a score of 0
Short but nice
-- Jed on 1/4/2020 7:44:17 PM with a score of 0
I liked it, but it wasn't fantastic... I guess that it just seemed too generic and not imaginative enough. Then agian, there's not much to work with in a post-nuclear holocaust game... Overall, well done.
on 11/20/2019 10:27:28 PM with a score of 0
on 11/13/2019 1:26:59 PM with a score of 0
Beautiful. Just Beautiful
-- Giancarlo on 9/30/2019 10:04:54 PM with a score of 0
The story is an enjoyable experience but some endings are disappointingly short or open-ended
on 9/18/2019 2:35:14 PM with a score of 0
I love this game, It brings the tone of the dark humor of dystopian titles and fallout or wasteland games. It can be really long but the pace keeps a very fluid flow that gives dynamism.
My criticism is mostly character personality is pretty grey and common, even if I think it was designed that way to an emphasis on the idea character was an average looser previous the events.
on 9/12/2019 1:13:49 PM with a score of 0
too responsive i dont read a manual and immediatly an electrical fire starts and I die in a situation where i would have die weather i read the maual or not pretty autistic. Thanks for your efforts retarded nerd.
-- Alpha Pussyfucker on 9/6/2019 5:38:37 PM with a score of 0
Boring honestly. There were some interesting concepts in the beginning, but it seemed too rush out and felt a bit as if it was written by a 13 year old.
on 8/17/2019 11:58:05 PM with a score of 0
This is the first story I ever read/played on this site when I was younger, I really enjoyed it then and I enjoy it now. Although my ending this time was definitely more disappointing but that was my own fault lol. Last time I remember killing Miranda and leaving the vault to find Rockstargril, which I imagine is the best ending right? This time I ended up slowly starving to death though.
on 7/18/2019 4:53:34 AM with a score of 0
Horrible , not worth the time. A wonderful story.
on 6/18/2019 5:27:14 AM with a score of 0
on 5/29/2019 3:26:04 AM with a score of 0
Freaking amazing, let me know if you have any other stories I'd love to play them.only problem I had with it was I wasn't able to choose if my character was A guy to talk to people or not.
-- Alex on 5/22/2019 9:03:16 PM with a score of 0
The first time I played this game years ago, I played it safe with the bomb shelter at the start. It was quite a ride and I was able to reach what I think had to be one of the best endings in the game. I figured I probably wouldn't be able to top it with another play-through so I put it down for a while and celebrated the win. I decided to try again, while living fast this time, and probably found the quickest death after the orgy-fest. 10/10 will play again.
-- Rebecca B on 5/11/2019 7:03:06 PM with a score of 0
I quite enjoyed it!
on 4/27/2019 12:40:53 AM with a score of 0
This is one of, if not the best science fiction storygames on the site. I love the amount of choices and paths given through the story, and the dark humor just blends so perfectly. I can't really find anything to criticize. Every epilogue ended in a satisfying way, and never left me asking questions or sitting confused. My only possible complaint would be on the Wasteland Bastard path.
I feel like that should be included as an epilogue path, judging by how long and intuitive it was. Even with the hitman killing you at the end, it would feel a lot more like an ending if it was an official epilogue (just my opinion). My favorite path would have to be the mutant path. It was just so cool how the different societies developed and battled, and how everything was described in such insane detail.All in all, I love this story so much, easily in my top 5 favorites. Great work EndMaster on this amazing piece of art.
on 4/26/2019 6:09:45 PM with a score of 0
It's sweet and short. A good story for sure.
on 4/17/2019 7:24:33 PM with a score of 0
pretty could do with a bit more difficulty though
on 4/15/2019 6:52:18 PM with a score of 0
Why is my character forced to feel bad about a couple of faggots being thrown out of the shelter? 1/8
on 4/14/2019 12:47:57 AM with a score of 0
OMG this is really good. The choices, the storline, the endings. GODDAMN GOOD
-- Asha on 2/24/2019 1:32:12 PM with a score of 0
-- brad on 2/14/2019 9:04:15 PM with a score of 0
This is bad for a young man Dont do it foul language
-- None of your buisness on 2/8/2019 2:24:33 PM with a score of 0
This "choose your own story" thing I read "ground zero" is really great!?? Good job!
-- Jared.s on 12/20/2018 11:34:27 PM with a score of 0
i liked it but it was a bit short, i get that story writing is hard to do but id like to see a sequel soon.
on 12/13/2018 4:21:42 PM with a score of 0
Why did you make this sci-fi and not fan fic? This would have been at the top of the list, and the only thing that needed to change was category name.
on 12/13/2018 8:50:42 AM with a score of 0
One of my absolute favorite story I think I've found all endings, but I still love playing through this story.
on 12/3/2018 4:40:02 PM with a score of 0
-- Jeppe Hansen on 11/26/2018 5:45:54 AM with a score of 0
Mate, bloody brilliant. So many choices, options, stories.... The characters were fleshed out well. The main character was simply badass. Props to EndMaster for creating another gem of a story. Without him, this site would be a poorer place. 10/10.
-- Jimmy Carr on 11/18/2018 3:23:11 AM with a score of 0
I thought this story was kind of stupid and boring it’s just a bunch of killing people and massacring families and there really isn’t a plot
-- Gavyn on 11/17/2018 7:50:57 PM with a score of 0
Meh, finished in literally 5 seconds... Not sure if it was intentional, didn´t seem all that hard though.
on 11/2/2018 1:58:12 PM with a score of 0
-- bro on 9/14/2018 8:24:18 AM with a score of 0
A super game
-- Mahself on 9/14/2018 8:24:03 AM with a score of 0
-- max on 9/14/2018 8:23:37 AM with a score of 0
on 9/1/2018 9:44:00 AM with a score of 0
Pretty good story! Will have to play through a couple more branches.
-- Shane on 8/30/2018 11:38:59 AM with a score of 0
so many paths, almost all of them well made.
i got epilogue 2 and while it was a hell of a ride, i'm proud of what i've done.
on 8/15/2018 7:12:07 PM with a score of 0
GG. Got the good ending AKA kill the hacker and go to the girls vault to rescue her
on 6/30/2018 9:20:54 AM with a score of 0
This actually can be made to a prequel to all the fallout games if you think about it from that point of view.
-- Tk on 6/26/2018 4:14:04 PM with a score of 0
Love this game. Have it memorized from having played it so much. Been reading it aloud so I can play it with a friend.
-- Lucia on 6/10/2018 8:53:22 PM with a score of 0
This was really good. I liked how many different paths there are. There's a few completely different stories all in this one, and that is not very common. I loved it
on 5/8/2018 9:15:22 AM with a score of 0
Superb, Was addicted from the start
on 4/22/2018 2:06:01 PM with a score of 0
I have to say, I am slightly disappointed by endmaster.
on 4/9/2018 3:39:45 PM with a score of 0
I screw myself up by dying :D
on 4/4/2018 4:15:07 AM with a score of 0
good for what it is, muy scary
-- kateandrowan on 4/1/2018 12:17:40 AM with a score of 0
super boring you get eaten no matter what you do
-- Kai on 3/19/2018 8:11:19 PM with a score of 0
I got Epiloge 2, is that good?
on 3/17/2018 6:02:13 PM with a score of 0
Loved every moment of this!
on 3/17/2018 10:53:25 AM with a score of 0
Your story is certainly well thought and drawn out, but there are a couple plot cliffs I would have like to have seen filled. Good job overall though.
-- Jolt on 3/11/2018 9:54:51 AM with a score of 0
Definitely an amazing storyline, and with realistic options as well, not a drop of my time was wasted during the entire story.
on 3/7/2018 2:50:06 AM with a score of 0
Well shit that was easy... Time to go complete all of Eternal!
on 2/4/2018 10:40:37 PM with a score of 0
Finally got my third epilogue... just one more to go now! Wish me luck!
on 2/4/2018 10:25:38 PM with a score of 0
Amazing story, did my 2nd playthrough today and lo and behold, there another story that I haven't read in this. Amazing
on 2/2/2018 2:19:26 AM with a score of 0
Trying to get all the endings is one hell of a ride.
on 1/23/2018 9:53:40 PM with a score of 0
it was ok
on 1/16/2018 9:46:44 PM with a score of 0
I loved this game and played through it several times but I just wish it continued on.
on 1/9/2018 10:33:29 AM with a score of 0
OH MY Fucking god..... i just got the best fucking ending ever.. if you ever make a 2nd ill pay mony for a book copie you choose or not i wish to see my guy bring the robot back@@@@@@ oh god you could make mony off of books like these@@@ sheesh
on 1/5/2018 12:34:19 AM with a score of 0
yay good ending im no longer geting scalped in the story since i showed every one ide shoot dem sorry asses
on 1/4/2018 10:24:45 PM with a score of 0
yo u make such hard ass games good job bro
on 1/4/2018 10:06:38 PM with a score of 0
Interesting game, your choices are the main drive of the story and they impact the direction of a small community you are apart of. It is satisfying to see the affects of your choices in the long term.
Overall short but sweet.
on 1/3/2018 11:11:34 AM with a score of 0
Only complaint is that it was too short, loved the fallout theme. It would’ve been nice if the player could continue the story as jack and so on, but all in all it was great
-- Ruslark on 12/28/2017 10:21:13 AM with a score of 0
Second playthrough reslting in an epilogue.
Thankyou for another little adventure!
on 12/25/2017 10:30:01 AM with a score of 0
This stuff is pretty linear with multitude of dead ends, but it's really good story told here (even if MC started as major asshole).
on 12/11/2017 3:04:00 PM with a score of 0
A fun and well-executed story with a lot of replay value. I realize that after 3 or 4 play-throughs I have still only just scratched the surface, but I will speak on what I experienced anyway:
Interesting characters, particularly the protagonist. I loved that the main character had a personality (loner, asshole, techie). In some games the player character is left as a blank slate for player's decisions, but I think that is a mistake.
The pacing is excellent and the actions of the plot are interesting and fully-developed.
The decisions are important and you definitely feel that you are impacting the plot.
The dialogue is a little too on-the-nose. Characters should very rarely say precisely what they are thinking
The descriptions are a bit lacking. I see that you were trying to move the plot along without getting bogged down, but it is important to rember to SHOW the readers what is happening, not just TELL them. Although the plot was interesting, I did not quite feel IMMERSED by it. Don't say "He built a cult of personality," show me. Don't say "the shelter fell into disrepair," show me.
I did not think the use of profanity was effective. I understand you were trying to increase the colloquial feel of the dialogue, but it felt hollow. Reducing the amount of profanity will increase the reader's response to it when it IS used.
Overall it was a great read and a fun experience. I look forward to coming back to it numerous times in the future
on 10/7/2017 10:17:55 AM with a score of 0
I've found two of the four endings, and it has taken me a very, very long time. I can't wait for what comes next!
on 10/6/2017 11:32:03 PM with a score of 0
Played many times and got two "True Endings" it's a masterpiece
-- Noah on 9/30/2017 2:48:30 PM with a score of 0
on 9/15/2017 11:08:44 AM with a score of 0
good, very good
on 9/14/2017 1:13:02 PM with a score of 0
I can't wait for the second half
-- Christopher on 9/7/2017 1:29:03 AM with a score of 0
It's quite interesting IF the game was even longer. Dating an AI is such a new idea, but... too bad that AI isn't a walking AI that can accompany the MC up into the world away from shelter. ;)
on 8/14/2017 3:27:48 AM with a score of 0
I was looking for a more survival aspect, but it turned out to be great anyway!
on 7/26/2017 10:45:27 PM with a score of 0
It is a great story with choices that really do impact how you are seen if you get an epilogue. That is very hard to do which is also why it is such a fun story.
-- Matt King on 7/24/2017 10:58:26 PM with a score of 0
Well-written. I'm glad you put effort in all the endings, instead of just writing "sorry you died the end." Favorite path's probably the mutant one, and the shelter path gave me too much anxiety.
on 7/20/2017 12:19:01 AM with a score of 0
fun so far, going to try again
on 7/10/2017 2:23:34 PM with a score of 0
-- Geo Froten on 7/2/2017 4:45:31 AM with a score of 0
Always a good fucking read. Make more epics Endmaster, mayber cyberpunk next time?
on 6/21/2017 4:31:55 AM with a score of 0
I beat the game XD Is there part 2?
on 6/20/2017 8:20:48 PM with a score of 0
Great story. Reading this to my wife and letting her choose made a long drive fly by. You Rock!
-- Robert H on 6/20/2017 7:54:53 PM with a score of 0
I am very impressed with this game.
-- Dan on 6/15/2017 11:35:35 AM with a score of 0
Felt like playing through an abridged version of Fallout, some dialogue read a little bit awkward but overall I enjoyed the stories.
The MC is kind of a dick and kind of came across as getting too conveniently lucky with women, but I did like that he was fairly consistent based on his experiences during the various plotlines.
on 6/11/2017 7:00:19 AM with a score of 0
This story has been nothing but grossly homophobic.
In almost every story branch, a gay character is either severally murdered, or is the main villain.
The company in the story is extremely homophobic. I could have excused that, because it made sense to the plot. But killing gay characters, just to kill them. Or making them out to be evil murderers, became too much. I really wouldn't ever read this story again, or anything else from this writer.
on 6/10/2017 12:54:19 AM with a score of 0
on 6/9/2017 11:03:04 PM with a score of 0
Replayed it, great story, I just wish it was longer
-- Clancy Kuiters on 5/31/2017 3:05:00 PM with a score of 0
Enjoyable story, my only quips were that it didn't last longer, I was at end game within 15 minutes, but contrary there were many endings so it balanced out. Loved the skill of work in this though. Keep it up
-- Clancy Kuiters on 5/31/2017 2:10:56 PM with a score of 0
It was great
on 5/11/2017 1:33:26 PM with a score of 0
I was honestly surprised that I lived in my first try. The epilogue makes me wish I leave such a legacy when I pass away.
-- Deathkitsune68? on 5/11/2017 2:12:01 AM with a score of 0
This game is really worth playing and reading. I've been looking for a good chose your own story game and this was one of the top 8, So far. Give it a try, I know you'll like it.
-- Naitve Kid on 4/23/2017 5:37:41 PM with a score of 0
I went through the genocide route, and I feel as the amount of time, effort, and choices made on this game was so high, and insane, I was honestly made. While detail was very nice, I wish in the town of Jim's Reapers, there was a choice to stay, or at least a choice to not go roam the streets like a serial killer. The first part really inspired me for a section in my story I am currently working on. I can say one thing though, this story is anything but linear. I just wish you had a bit more control of the person on the genocide route.
on 4/15/2017 10:15:24 AM with a score of 0
a little bit longer and a 8
-- lob on 4/14/2017 10:07:57 PM with a score of 0
Perhaps the greatest game I have played this far here. Multiple story branches taking you down wildly varied paths, excellent writing, solid but not quite perfect dialog, characters who for the most part act true to their nature and not as plot devices, and more. The background characters show distinct lives and developments which can differ greatly based on what they've experienced through your choices, but tend to stay true to their cores. Humor, tension, a sense of the unknown and choices that don't always have obvious or imediate outcomes. I was never asked to "DODGE" which is a nice plus, although there was some obligatory hamfisted sex which given the setting was excusable. The classic female wish fulfillment device was also present but not over done. This was a solid work and I am glad I took the time to (I think) find all the endings.
on 4/13/2017 12:25:38 AM with a score of 0
Interesting and relatively well written. The sex and relationship components seemed to be the standard teenage wish fulfillment common to sci-fi/fantasy, and par for the course a bit awkward and artificial. They weren't nearly as extreme as many works though, and post apocalyptic fiction almost requires a sexual component, so I didn't find those elements too detrimental. Overall an interesting read with good choices that left me wondering and wanting to find out what came next.
on 4/12/2017 6:22:55 PM with a score of 0
reese cup are delicious
-- Piggz on 4/8/2017 7:00:53 AM with a score of 0
I just read the ending with the AI and must say that I am very impressed, not many story would go this way and I must say that I am very happy this one did. I found the ending very nice and will continue to read the story with different choices (even though this will be probably my favorite ending). You have really created something great with this story and I hope this review shows you how gratefull people are for people like you and your work.
-- Torben on 4/7/2017 6:12:35 PM with a score of 0
Man that turned into lunacy pretty fast ,but I enjoyed it none the less so in truth it was really good.
on 3/23/2017 11:20:38 PM with a score of 0
wow that was just.... super emontionally moving.
-- zander on 3/19/2017 12:51:55 AM with a score of 0
First game I played on this site. Great story, not as many choices as some stories but every choice you make has an impact and consequences.
on 3/12/2017 10:56:04 PM with a score of 0
EPIC I finaly got an epiluoge. I managed to join the compaound and turn it into the allience. This is my favorite ending by far, I wonder, what else could happen... if I joined a different side.
on 3/12/2017 9:32:51 AM with a score of 0
I folowed my motto, but again, it failed, it failed me. Next time, I will try to help others. Wait I've already tried that. Now it is time for a change, I've gotten like one "good ending, the one where I win the hack-war, and live with Becky. This time, I'm doing something different.
on 3/11/2017 3:09:17 PM with a score of 0
I've been posting too many comments XD well this happened just the same as the rest. Dead, again. I wont tell what happened. ou have a pretty good guess by now, I'm sure. anyways, here we go again, my quest to get every ending is taking too long. I'll probably take a break.
on 3/11/2017 2:57:53 PM with a score of 0
Well, that was that, I didn't know why, I knew the right path, but perhapes I know I have to find all of them, I left, I feel asleep, I don't wake up, but yet again, I do. I wake up every time, yet nothing I do is remembered, I am a type of time-traveler, seeking every timeline posible, this is going to take longer than I thought.
on 3/11/2017 2:54:40 PM with a score of 0
Suicide, the only way, I shoot myself, nothing else goes through my head. Except this: I know what I must do, Miranda is the enemy, to break the loop, I must stop her, And as I pull the trigger, I am back in bed, back where I started. I sigh and call again, ordering the same shelter, again, this time, I'll get it right-
on 3/11/2017 2:50:38 PM with a score of 0
revenge was certainly not sweet, I fail to realise why I hated Shadow so much, but I do. I tell myself he isn't the real enemy just as many times as I tell myself "i was right". And as I die after my miserable days alone, I remember something. something that will certainly change my next path, I am stuck in this loop untill I suceed to save someone, and that someone is Rockerchick. Then I die, alone, but knowing I will come back untill I suceed.
on 3/11/2017 2:46:14 PM with a score of 0
Something inside me, it begged me not to listen to the logical side of me. Told me not to dare touch rockerchick. I didn't Next time, I won't let this get in my way...I will win, I have no idea why I fight anymore, I thought I would, but I don't. All I know is someone is up to no good. The last thought going through my mind is, someday, someday...I'll have my revenge.-Loser of the hack war
on 3/11/2017 2:41:46 PM with a score of 0
I didn't realise it was more than an AI I thought convincing it would be pointless, I was wrong. I begged it to stop my suffering it killed me. I should've thought it more than a compputer. It got it's revenge. I will trust it with my life, perhapes in another life, I will remember this.-The one who thought a computer was just a computer
on 3/11/2017 2:37:44 PM with a score of 0
I knew it was her. But I was stupid. How could I think she wouldn't catch onto me? Is my last thought as ERROR blinks on my screen. My last that is to hope Becky is safe, and that she will rise above Miranda. In another life, I'll do everything in my power to protect her... I'll chose a different path, and another, and another. Untill, finally, we can be together.-A loser of the love-hack war.
on 3/11/2017 2:33:16 PM with a score of 0
I ended up partying, like there was no tommarow, turns out there wasn't. I finaly got my girl, at least I acheived that in life. I am looking into the horizon, I am at peace with myself. I have acomplished things that may not change the world in these last few days, but have made an impact on myself. I have been a free spirit, for these last few days, and I feel like nothing can shake me. As I look at her for the last time, I wonder if we could've been together had things been different. In an alternative universe, I will chase love.-A free spirit
on 3/11/2017 2:28:52 PM with a score of 0
How stupid was I? I heard the sound, I had no reason for going out. I did, I drove, even... casualy? Idiot, I tell myself, as a bright light blinds me, the last thing I'll ever see. My life, it didn't count for much, I did nothing, nothing but go to work, pretending everything was alright, pretending everything is normal. I died, obviously. In another life, in a parralel universe posibly, I'll remind myself to listen to common sense, and not be so stupid.-The stupid person who thought the world was normal
Hope your liking these, I will get every ending immaginable :D
on 3/11/2017 2:23:38 PM with a score of 0
I was a complete sycopath, my life ended with someone shooting me after hiding in a bunker, his answer was "because you could" But, I know the truth, I did it...because I wanted to survive. I did it because the world was savage and chaotic, and killing seemed the only way. I tried to make it right by helping civalasation unfold again, but I had already created a monster, I was a monster. I'm not sure what I could've become, (other than dead) but I tried my best to survive, and in the end, I failed, in the end I realy just commited suicide. I failed in my quest to live, and created a monster of myself, I lived with a motto, "Never trust anyone" I broke it a few times, and that led me on this path, or maybe following it did. I don't know, I'll never know. I did horible things, and the last thought as I leave this world... "I am a monster, nothing I did really mattered in the long run"... but, perhaps, this is a lie, perhapes my life wasn't pointless, maybe along the line, I did something right, maybe...just, maybe. In another life, I'll follow this motto, I'll see what happens, in a paralel universe, I'll remind myself-The monster I have become
So deep! I love this, I have had many different endings. I'm going to find all of them, and replay the ones I have, leaving deep messages like this :D enjoy, I love stories, reading them and telling them.
on 3/11/2017 2:16:11 PM with a score of 0
FINALY I got aq good ending, I'm on my way to meet becky, I don't know if I'll survive or not, but I hope I will, and I was able to save her, even if I don't.
on 3/11/2017 1:34:52 PM with a score of 0
OMG so much hacking XD I died of hacking so many times...
on 3/11/2017 1:19:07 PM with a score of 0
I partyed like no tommarow, cause there was none... best ending so far, better then getting shot by an angry women after killing a ton of people, or getting eaten by radioactive wolves, or getting stabed after starting a rebelion, wonder if there is an ending where I'll actualy survive XD.
on 3/11/2017 12:53:49 PM with a score of 0
Dang it, second time playing started a rebelion, I'm not sure how I feel about it... I killed Eliot, I don't know if it was a good choice or a bad one, but I also killed his wife, and left his children orphaned, dove the thing into chaos, but if I learned something from my last playthrough, it's dont trust anyone, I trusted the family, they killed me. And so, I hope I saved everyone By killing Eliot, I'll never know...
on 3/11/2017 12:48:31 PM with a score of 0
*sigh* trying to do the right thing always gets you killed. But it is realistic. Also, I like last-minute discicions, and would like more choices.
on 3/11/2017 12:27:49 PM with a score of 0
Entertaining (give me a break i'm tired, no time for in-depth reviews)
-- MrDuckFace on 3/8/2017 9:26:32 PM with a score of 0
*clap* *clap* *clap*
on 2/24/2017 2:24:11 PM with a score of 0
i loved the story of it and it was not half bad.
on 2/21/2017 7:56:05 PM with a score of 0
epilogue 3. It was a great story loved, the detail of the characters and surroundings was interesting and the choices where placed well to make it feel more like you are part of the story.
on 2/20/2017 4:26:24 AM with a score of 0
It was a great story and you should make more stories like this!!
on 2/14/2017 10:20:54 AM with a score of 0
It was weird, I'd like to enter a character name and gender atleast.
-- anonymous on 2/10/2017 11:35:27 AM with a score of 0
It sucked to have died soon, but I wonder if the choice to duck tape it would've made a difference. Most likely. I would play again but want to check out other stories. Great story and fantastic plot. 10/10 would play again.
-- Mak on 2/9/2017 12:38:31 PM with a score of 0
umm love the story, but need more mutant people and action
on 2/9/2017 10:26:27 AM with a score of 0
-- Joepbwoy on 2/7/2017 2:20:34 PM with a score of 0
Amazing game, definitely try both of the shelter options.
on 2/4/2017 3:34:28 AM with a score of 0
I dont know if I died or completed the game
-- Phoenix on 2/3/2017 3:36:57 PM with a score of 0
great though i died i'm going to try and play again
-- Tieve on 2/2/2017 9:25:55 PM with a score of 0
Awesome, a lil short but still good enuff
on 1/31/2017 2:02:45 PM with a score of 0
-- screener on 1/29/2017 8:30:43 PM with a score of 0
on 1/29/2017 3:54:24 PM with a score of 0
not enough choices
on 1/28/2017 2:04:20 PM with a score of 0
Got all four endings and i have got to say that this story is the best one i have read on the site. Inspires me to get back into the fallout world, too bad you can't play as a mutant or start in a vault in Fallout NW. I do feel like there could be more side stories, branches that come back to the main story-line instead of the many 'dead ends.' Thanks for the GREAT read!
-- David on 1/27/2017 12:26:41 PM with a score of 0
This choose your own adventure story is probably the best I've seen in years. I appreciate that you went very in depth. I especially like the fact that you didn't hold back on the adult subject matter. Great job.
-- Sans the anarchist on 1/25/2017 12:08:26 AM with a score of 0
ver, very, very good post-apocalypse story with a surprising amount of branching.
-- anonymous on 1/22/2017 6:58:46 PM with a score of 0
amazing i love this story so much it is bae
-- kjdfng on 1/21/2017 1:20:27 PM with a score of 0
Great game, really enjoyed it.
-- qwerty on 1/21/2017 12:39:37 PM with a score of 0
well i would still like my reeses cup to
-- Kenko on 1/20/2017 1:49:03 PM with a score of 0
Next one to continue adventure?
-- Cole on 1/17/2017 5:25:33 PM with a score of 0
-- fghx on 1/17/2017 4:31:19 PM with a score of 0
This story won me over in a way I never expected. In most CYOA games, I got through by placing myself in the character's shoes and making the choices I would. I found that to be a wholly unfulfilling experience with this game because the character wasn't much like me at all. I stopped thinking "Can't win them all."
Then for some unexplainable reason I decided to give it another try. That's when it hit me. This story isn't amazing because it relates to you. This is a story that you as the reader get to tweak. The author wrote a compelling story with compelling characters and gave you as the reader the option to "what if" at any given number of points. Bravo for making a story truly interactive as a reader.
-- TyrannosaurusRex on 1/16/2017 8:51:50 PM with a score of 0
-- Sam on 1/15/2017 8:15:19 PM with a score of 0
I mistook the context of one of the choices and paid the price. I thought drop the pistol meant off from you completely but it did not. Fun game.
-- Chad on 1/13/2017 10:49:07 PM with a score of 0
Great story! I think Ive found all the paths with the shelter now I am going to try the other route.
-- zavcex on 1/12/2017 11:30:55 AM with a score of 0
Holy shit that was good, that's all i can say because i don't want to spoil for anyone dumb enough to read the comments before reading.
-- Haywoo on 1/9/2017 3:11:35 PM with a score of 0
-- Markus Kock on 1/6/2017 11:37:00 PM with a score of 0
This was an awesome story...except for the little flamboyant Russians that kept dancing across the screen...
-- poteen on 1/6/2017 5:45:14 PM with a score of 0
Great and compelling story! I really enjoyed myself while "playing" this!
on 1/5/2017 7:11:40 PM with a score of 0
I won ?? at least I think so I got the end SPOILER ALERT where I got the map to beckys base.
on 1/4/2017 9:42:11 PM with a score of 0
-- L33TMLG on 1/3/2017 6:57:08 PM with a score of 0
Absolutely amazing story played it through several times each one different outcome. Big fan of Fallout series and this captured that feeling very well.
-- James on 12/31/2016 6:31:29 AM with a score of 0
Not really what I was expecting, but Good JOb
on 12/24/2016 1:47:40 AM with a score of 0
Gotta say, I love New Haven ending
on 12/24/2016 12:03:35 AM with a score of 0
Really good. If anything I felt it could've been longer
-- melanie blaine on 12/21/2016 11:30:33 AM with a score of 0
The game is really amazing, it's wll written and the story drags you in in no time at all. The amount of freedom you get is also apreciated
-- Mister Bombastic on 12/21/2016 8:35:44 AM with a score of 0
Great game. Very nice read, I just feel like your choices either got you killed or won, not much more.
-- BearI91 on 12/20/2016 3:29:59 PM with a score of 0
I died so early ima noob
-- Arman on 12/20/2016 1:41:08 PM with a score of 0
Just finished all 4 epilogues and I think I just finished the best route in my last play. But overall I enjoyed the whole game story.
-- rijal_muzikers on 12/16/2016 8:22:20 PM with a score of 0
Wow it's amazing story and I thin I got one of the better endings
on 12/16/2016 7:45:32 PM with a score of 0
Survived this time and survived in a good way....after 4-5 tries.....i should sleep now...
-- Kruthknar on 12/15/2016 11:39:50 AM with a score of 0
Nice story fucked up and died tho
-- Kruthknar on 12/15/2016 9:35:29 AM with a score of 0
This is so far the best gamebook I have played. Its vastly superior to all the ones that are on the appstore that I have tried for free or paid for. My favourite storyline is hands down the Dominion one. I encourage the author to introduce more literary (read some classics like Dorian´s Gray Portrait) and RPG complexity (stats, percentage of morality or karma system, perks and items) in this or upcoming creations and start asking for money. I´d pay.
-- Skeptikos on 12/13/2016 10:06:54 AM with a score of 0
Inspiring story (^^)
-- rijal_muzikers on 12/10/2016 11:13:19 AM with a score of 0
Another GREAT piece by this author!!
on 12/9/2016 1:05:36 AM with a score of 0
This Is AWESOME!!! Truly astonishing! Took up a lot of time... BUT IT WAS TOTALLY WORHT IT!! 10/10!!
on 12/7/2016 11:38:39 PM with a score of 0
The feels are big...
on 12/7/2016 6:29:11 PM with a score of 0
Excellent read, I really enjoyed it!
-- Scott Mitchell on 12/7/2016 2:16:50 AM with a score of 0
It was a fun experience and I highly recommend it.
-- Fastest_jack on 12/5/2016 11:59:27 AM with a score of 0
This was the first story I read on the site, and its really cultivated both my interest and curiosity in this type of storytelling.
Endmaster has done an excellent job in character development. Even on the different multitude of arms of this adventure the character is still true to his own nature. I really liked that. By allowing the character to die, he is able to avoid horrible character changing deus ex machina scenarios that drive us all crazy.
I've made an account here after this experience and am excited to do more reading and recreation on this site.
Thank you for sharing your literary talents with us.
on 12/1/2016 11:27:49 PM with a score of 0
Good writing all the way through, at least the parts I've seen. I felt like I was the character in the story, so immersion successful.
on 12/1/2016 9:51:23 AM with a score of 0
Oh yes. I had a load of fun with this. So diverse and expansive! This was totally worth my time. 10/10 if I could... 8/8!
on 11/25/2016 11:49:10 PM with a score of 0
Got all epilogues, the pictures gave a nice picture to what was happening in the story, I enjoyed this story a lot.
on 11/24/2016 1:30:50 AM with a score of 0
on 11/23/2016 4:26:48 PM with a score of 0
This story is awesome, I have played it over and over looking for every possible ending and one you find one that fully works it is super satisfying
-- Anoynomys on 11/23/2016 2:00:57 PM with a score of 0
-- travis on 11/22/2016 6:26:01 AM with a score of 0
-- travis on 11/21/2016 4:25:35 PM with a score of 0
-- travis on 11/20/2016 7:55:47 PM with a score of 0
It was a great experince
-- Mari on 11/18/2016 11:01:46 AM with a score of 0
on 11/15/2016 1:29:18 AM with a score of 0
on 11/13/2016 2:28:08 PM with a score of 0
We had our own group, eagerly reading this ...interesting 18+ material. The rape over the photocopier was very dubious consent. I like in the face of imminent apocalyptic disaster, the natural human condition is to become fucking pansexual sexlords who are accepting of all. As you can see, we lost very quickly.
-- The mess that is chill on 11/12/2016 7:57:02 AM with a score of 0
Great writing, many different paths to take, just really fun to play.
-- Emanuel Sigvardsson on 11/11/2016 3:50:42 PM with a score of 0
I was expecting to be faced with a decision between life and death but ended up getting out of the shelter without any repercussions? I don't know if I just played my cards correctly, but I didn't get any closure.
-- Brendan on 11/11/2016 3:31:10 PM with a score of 0
I found this story very interesting and fun. The author's story's is excellent and I thank them for it.
-- Randomkoala77 on 11/7/2016 11:48:13 PM with a score of 0
Omg! This was actually pretty amazing. I wasn't expecting the "fight" at the end. But apparently I survived it I think. Cause I was going to Becky's place, but this was a great story. Loved it!
-- Danny washam on 11/3/2016 10:27:53 PM with a score of 0
i liked the story except the cliche where you kiss somebody and u have a family with them
-- kevin on 10/24/2016 5:47:28 PM with a score of 0
i died really fast and i didnt really get it which was fun.
-- butz barnsby on 10/24/2016 5:23:52 PM with a score of 0
A great story game, I loved the range of storylines and the cool images. Great description and I really got immersed within the game's enviornment. The main character was developed beautifully, and really got me into the game
on 10/24/2016 2:43:46 PM with a score of 0
Ground Zero is inventive, exciting, unpredictable, well-characterized, thought-provoking, and entertaining. I would give it 9.5/10 if not for one thing: The GODAWFUL ENGLISH. Incorrect word use, run-on sentences, changing tenses, redundancy, bad punctuation, and clunky wording distract and detract from almost every page. I admit I'm a grammar Nazi, but this story looks like the author did no proofreading whatsoever. (I mean, come on, at least keep the characters' names straight. Is it Jack or Jake?) It's a shame this wasn't edited properly (or possibly at all) because it could be a rough draft of something great.
-- phyre on 10/24/2016 12:15:54 PM with a score of 0
first "choose your own story" thing i've played, i mean on a day where i have nothing to do i probably wouldn't be too impressed but it's either this or 4 hour AP work so good job
-- nour on 10/22/2016 8:59:59 PM with a score of 0
Amazing, 10/10, ??????????, Detailed, Fun, And truly interesting.
on 10/22/2016 3:58:02 PM with a score of 0
i think that you should write more on it or a part 2, to were the guy finds becky and they survive in the nuked world together
-- JERIKA on 10/12/2016 4:25:37 PM with a score of 0
Some of the profanities could have been avoided with a more descriptive style of writing.
-- John on 10/12/2016 7:29:42 AM with a score of 0
Sadly I just finished the last epilogue of this story. I loved every minute of this story, and it read very smoothly. I hope there could be an expansion to this story of something like that, because I just cant get enough of Ground Zero!
-- Ben Harrison on 10/11/2016 3:42:38 PM with a score of 0
on 10/11/2016 10:03:21 AM with a score of 0
Gosh, Where do I start? The mutant campaign is definitely the best ending. It raises real questions of morality. Are the mutants wrong for conquering the humans? They obviously have a superior society, but that's the same argument that the British used to commit numerous genocides.
The question that is never answered is: are humans biologically more predisposed to violence then their mutant counterparts?
I wish that a peaceful solution could be established, but honestly I don't know how that could happen. Weighing the collapse of your civilization in one hand and the destruction of another sentient species in another is a moralistic choice that I'm not prepared to make.
But I suppose I'm prejudice. If I were facing an army of aggressive, manipulative, and inventive mutants who were hell bent on exterminating me I would probably kill them. I would at least try diplomacy first though.
I just wish that my mutant family wasn't so unstable. With their support I could probably make peace work. What the heck does my wife have against humans anyway?
on 10/9/2016 11:55:55 PM with a score of 0
Whoa. Best thing I've ever played.
on 10/9/2016 7:36:31 PM with a score of 0
-- grinix on 10/9/2016 9:42:49 AM with a score of 0
it was shit. no noodity. what type of game is this
-- porn on 10/6/2016 7:57:20 AM with a score of 0
Great story and a good length. I like the "fallout" style setting and the good amount of morality choices throughout the story. The writing is amazing and detailed as usual from Endmaster.
on 10/6/2016 4:03:47 AM with a score of 0
i went down the path of paranoid psycopath and (im not going to spoil it) doing the thing you do with shadow, but i feel this was very simple yet effective ad great
-- anonymous on 10/5/2016 5:50:31 PM with a score of 0
What? Nuclear war always breaks out no matter what you do.
on 10/4/2016 7:17:55 PM with a score of 0
It's a nice story it just doesn't really make sense how different paths mean different events happening in the world. Like if I take the shelter, the bomb actually didn't go off. If I go to the hospital, the bomb then goes off.
-- Takeada on 10/4/2016 6:23:00 PM with a score of 0
So good! Reddit was right...
-- Gertrude Ranos on 10/4/2016 5:54:59 PM with a score of 0
So do I find Becky in the end?
-- Thomas on 10/2/2016 4:47:50 PM with a score of 0
This was my first story on this site and I found it very enjoyable, I love the variety and the writing is brilliant, the scenarios in the community shelter are very believable and it's very fulfilling to live a long happy life. This story covers a range of emotions and I felt for and with and for the characters. 8/8 all around, brilliant start for new 'players'.
on 10/2/2016 3:42:17 PM with a score of 0
make the part 2!!!
-- wanderer arc on 9/30/2016 5:15:59 PM with a score of 0
Pretty good in-depth story good job.
-- Jake on 9/29/2016 10:19:20 PM with a score of 0
Just finished the 3rd epilogue and I still thoroughly enjoyed this story. Cant wait to read the last version of it. Would buy if it was a book.
on 9/28/2016 12:15:30 PM with a score of 0
I loved it. 8/8
on 9/27/2016 9:39:56 PM with a score of 0
Just finished the game again and this ending is just as good as the last one! Time to try to find the other two!
on 9/22/2016 1:23:06 PM with a score of 0
I got he best ending on the first playthrough and I felt like all the characters were real! I got to bond with the characters and I almost cried a few times! Amazing work! Keep it up!
on 9/22/2016 7:52:18 AM with a score of 0
This story is very fulfilling and I loved the entire thing.
on 9/21/2016 11:28:39 PM with a score of 0
Such an intensely satisfying story, worth every moment.
on 9/21/2016 8:18:39 PM with a score of 0
on 9/21/2016 4:54:04 PM with a score of 0
Quaility like a book!
on 9/21/2016 10:38:56 AM with a score of 0
on 9/20/2016 6:10:28 AM with a score of 0
A better ending maybe? I just didn't really like the ending, besides that, good job! I enjoyed it!
-- Caloise on 9/19/2016 11:08:12 PM with a score of 0
I got all 4 endings.
-- Olivia Hill on 9/19/2016 2:54:30 PM with a score of 0
The first time I read this it was before I had an account on this site. So I just had to come back to it now to credit for reading it. I tried a totally different path then my first venture. I really liked the diversity of outcomes your choices lead to. Keep up the good work!
on 9/19/2016 2:37:35 PM with a score of 0
-- Misty Pollitt on 9/17/2016 9:23:38 PM with a score of 0
i got an ending i liked and that i felt suited my personailty
-- J20 on 9/17/2016 9:32:33 AM with a score of 0
Got the Eliza ending. Really damn awesome!
-- Pandora on 9/17/2016 4:30:31 AM with a score of 0
I want more
-- XHaler on 9/15/2016 5:34:46 PM with a score of 0
i forgot to login before playing, this game is real masterpiece
-- irfanzxx on 9/13/2016 2:21:40 AM with a score of 0
Awesome! I became the leader of a new civilisation and I found that so cool! Shame I died though. Would play again!
-- Aaron on 9/11/2016 10:27:16 AM with a score of 0
Amazing! i loved how this story got the fallout senses pretty much. i got all the 4 endings! including the good ending with the epilouge.. the storyline was amazing. it kept me hooked up for good!
on 9/9/2016 5:37:58 PM with a score of 0
Only been through once, and I like it. Has a few spelling errors here and there but nothing that really takes away from the story, which is captivating at times. Good work.
-- Wildempathy on 9/9/2016 8:11:55 AM with a score of 0
on 9/8/2016 2:47:57 PM with a score of 0
I like it very interesting.
-- Jack on 9/7/2016 6:21:12 PM with a score of 0
on 9/5/2016 5:27:10 PM with a score of 0
-- l on 8/31/2016 10:00:38 PM with a score of 0
twas pretty gud
-- Andrew on 8/31/2016 11:23:29 AM with a score of 0
Very Clever and Entertaining. Great dialogues!
on 8/30/2016 10:17:21 PM with a score of 0
Welp, I was stupid and has water near electronics... didn't think that it'd kill me, though. Amazing story really dragged me in.
-- Evo Serket on 8/30/2016 4:25:33 PM with a score of 0
Very, very good, if a bit sad.
-- Anonymous on 8/27/2016 9:15:06 AM with a score of 0
Very well written, would hae liked to have a successful ending (not sure if there is one)
-- Josh on 8/26/2016 12:16:47 PM with a score of 0
Love the main character
on 8/26/2016 6:42:20 AM with a score of 0
Really good. I got totally immersed in the story. Thank you so much for your creation! Bravo.
-- Wow on 8/20/2016 7:40:50 AM with a score of 0
This game gets... emotional...
on 8/17/2016 9:12:37 PM with a score of 0
Wow... I never thought something could emotionally move me, in just 3 or 4 choices. I got thee ending where I insisted on staying at the store, and ended up getting killed by Tyler.
-- Alex on 8/11/2016 6:19:08 PM with a score of 0
Wow! I mean... I never imagined it could be so good! It was like... damn awesome! And scary and realistic!
-- Cruststy on 8/11/2016 3:57:29 AM with a score of 0
I got shot.
-- Sam on 8/10/2016 12:21:17 AM with a score of 0
Thank you EndMaster
-- Pasta al Pesto on 8/9/2016 7:31:45 PM with a score of 0
*Spoilers* My favourite ending was I my special shelter's AI became a humanoid robot and we fell in love.I died with here and we were never disturbed after our first visit,one hundred years later.
My second favourite is we go outside the shelter and she is killed.But I escape with great supplies and her memory chip. There are also other great endings!
-- Gaming10ah on 8/7/2016 5:39:46 PM with a score of 0
The story was amazing and so intricate. I somehow managed to find my way to one of the good endings the first time through, but loved the story so much I read every possible option to make sure I didn't miss any of this gem.
-- Geoff on 8/3/2016 5:59:16 PM with a score of 0
sirus is a cool guy
I got an Epilooogggg!
on 8/1/2016 12:01:39 AM with a score of 0
Played it 4 times, died everytime. Expertly crafted though, 8\8
-- Diamond on 7/31/2016 10:05:55 PM with a score of 0
on 7/27/2016 7:50:51 PM with a score of 0
4+ DIFFERENT stories, HELL i could not even imagine what a month more on this story might have done to the story. Man you have to write a novel someday
-- Ironmonger on 7/27/2016 3:21:03 PM with a score of 0
Pretty chill, makes you think.
-- Nezuan on 7/27/2016 11:08:28 AM with a score of 0
I've played this game a few times now and I can't get enough of it. So far I've only managed to get one Epilogue but I'm still playing to get the other 3. Strongly recommend that everyone play this game.
-- James on 7/27/2016 6:11:12 AM with a score of 0
I know i'm late on this (I joined a year ago) but so far this is the best book i ever read (paper and internet) and even the author is really good at what He/She does.
on 7/27/2016 2:04:11 AM with a score of 0
-- poop on 7/25/2016 7:35:10 AM with a score of 0
I've recently started playing a popular and well-known role playing adventure game with a group of friends, and in between campaigns, I find myself fiending for adventure! That's how I've come to where I am now -- stumbling upon this website, and choosing Ground Zero as my first choose-your-own-story sort of dealie. I'm not really sure what to expect from these, so please only take my comments with a grain of salt.
I love cussing. I swear (pun intended), it releases endorphin's when I swear -- it must. Cussing feels great. However, I'm not a huge fan with the over usage of it. Or, at least, swearing that isn't in the right place and time. At times, I felt uncomfortable with how awkward the swearing was at times in Ground Zero. Sometimes, it was totally permissible, but at most points I felt some cringes surfacing up. This is really only my biggest complaint with this adventure.
Suffice it to say, I was thoroughly entertained. I've read through – played through, what have you – twice now and plan to do so again after finishing up these comments. I'm a huge fan of the post-apocalyptic genre, so Ground Zero is fun and thought through well.
on 7/24/2016 4:14:22 PM with a score of 0
Too many built in assumptions of what you do, not enough actual choice. The writing was good, though.
on 7/24/2016 1:17:50 AM with a score of 0
This was by far my favorite choose your story type of story if that even makes sense. I teared up when the main protagonist and Eliza(Shelter) held each other till he passed away. Well done sir or ma'am.
-- taterthoughts on 7/17/2016 9:09:10 PM with a score of 0
So good that it could be made into a real game
-- Ironmonger789 on 7/14/2016 12:14:25 PM with a score of 0
Hey, that's pretty good!
-- I'M NOT TELLING A MACHINE MY N on 7/13/2016 9:20:59 AM with a score of 0
Stuck around till the end and gleefully fucked till the end if my days. 10/10 would do again.
-- Taryk on 7/12/2016 6:31:32 PM with a score of 0
Great game I keep replaying it so I know all the endings
-- Bigel Bites on 7/12/2016 10:18:17 AM with a score of 0
I died...so fast...
-- GablasticGamer on 7/11/2016 11:31:33 AM with a score of 0
This clearly had a shit ton of work put into it. Great story, great characters, and a great plot. It made me laugh, which no other stories here have (I am fairly new, though)
With lots of intense parts, which kept me on the edge of my seat, and realistic dialogue, this is probably the best "storygame" I've read!
(Even though I've only read like four in my time here)
-- Ben on 7/10/2016 8:55:54 AM with a score of 0
Amazing. Amazing. Just amazing. I made all way to the end.
on 7/9/2016 5:00:33 PM with a score of 0
I liked it. Short and sweet, although it reminded me of fallout.
-- James on 7/9/2016 11:23:19 AM with a score of 0
Damn good story, loved the Fallout vibe
Overall loved it
Make more like this
I got my ass kicked by those mutant wolves though man, fuck me!
-- FletchG-Rates on 7/7/2016 7:13:03 AM with a score of 0
-- Kirito on 7/5/2016 1:20:15 PM with a score of 0
This is the first one that I've read, and it's pretty great. I stopped playing halfway through and then stayed up for a lot of the night wondering whether or not I should trust Alex. 8/8, I'll definitely be reading more of these.
-- DragoMax2000 on 7/2/2016 6:02:50 PM with a score of 0
epilogue... hell yea 8/8 m8
on 6/30/2016 3:43:16 PM with a score of 0
Thoroughly enjoyable. New to the site and this was the first one I read; If they are all this good, I could cancel my cable subscription and not even notice!
-- Tamammothchuk on 6/25/2016 1:54:43 AM with a score of 0
So I died trying to do the right thing.
on 6/24/2016 6:48:48 PM with a score of 0
Best choose your own adventure I've read in a long time.
-- Comment on 6/21/2016 3:43:17 AM with a score of 0
I'm disappointed that human beings are so predictable. I'd hoped that I'd continue gaining resources first by killing the couple then by winning the trust of the family so we could look out for each other. I would've liked an option to let the family stay and formed a group. To be fair I got what was coming to me. Makes me wonder if bill would've changed his mind.
-- Dan Beirne on 6/19/2016 7:15:07 PM with a score of 0
Hello. I thought that this was a very entertaining game and would recommend it to anyone that was looking for an interactive adventurer. This story was good and really put me on the edge of my seat with with each choice I made. I just hope that the choices that I did make were good! Please make another one of these! I really enjoyed this and would give it a 100/10. Thanks!
-- Tannerbanner12345 on 6/14/2016 7:36:41 PM with a score of 0
I love Joel!
-- Emily Hernandez on 6/13/2016 8:05:33 PM with a score of 0
this was just great! So much fun and a good read. I'm impressed!
-- Andi on 6/11/2016 9:32:49 PM with a score of 0
That was fucking good. I started reading it in class because I was bored, and I was surprised it was almost exactly like fallout.
I ended up going through 2 endings (the sex bot one and the new haven one) Bravo to you if theres more.. But wow I enjoyed it. After playing your Bard and Necromancer ones years ago, I was pleased of how dam GOOD this was
-- Andrew on 6/10/2016 3:47:28 AM with a score of 0
I personally felt the protagonist was lacking in choice as in he didn't have many options or actions to choose from and that it was too short (unless I'm just ignorant or something because I only played through it once but I didn't really get an epilogue I was expecting (unless it wasn't an epilogue at all) I kinda just left the shelter and... Boom the end, but then again it has a large amount of potential it just needs some more work/content put into it and interesting topic by the way good choice.)
on 6/8/2016 3:10:27 AM with a score of 0
good story, really sets a sort of mood. I like it. And the gore is really awesome.
-- cantos on 6/6/2016 5:11:30 PM with a score of 0
it took forever to reach the epilogue, but it was totally worth it
on 6/5/2016 11:33:42 PM with a score of 0
A very addictive, awesome and well written story-plot! You should be a book writer for Choose your Own adventure! Thanks a lot and I am very blessed to have come accross this one!
-- Jaden on 6/3/2016 10:17:06 AM with a score of 0
Miranda you bitch
on 6/1/2016 7:14:20 PM with a score of 0
-- lol on 5/31/2016 2:41:43 PM with a score of 0
Oh my god, this story has given me so many feelings. I've made it my goal to get every ending. In my opinion, I felt the happiest when I stayed in the shelter with the lady as a robot. It made me glad to see how this guy was able to live an almost perfect life. I was also very proud after setting up the community shelter community and the compound community. This story is absolutely amazing and I love it!
-- Daniel Greenfielde on 5/31/2016 3:47:48 AM with a score of 0
I played the the game twice and about 3 hours later I reached two epilogues. One was the Eliza Epilogue, and the other was the Empress Hera Epilogue. I absolutely LOVED this game! The possibilities ranged from being brutal dictator of Cinderville, to falling in love with a robot.
on 5/25/2016 5:16:06 PM with a score of 0
INCREDIBLY FUN GAME! However, I think it would appeal to a bigger audience if you cut down the profanities. I played this with my 11 year old brother for Page 1...and then I sent him away :)
on 5/25/2016 2:31:59 PM with a score of 0
-- paragon on 5/24/2016 9:16:21 AM with a score of 0
Sorry for my bad english
I loved the story and all the chooses
So good i am doing a presentation on it inn my class
I hope you make other storys and keep upp all the good work
-- Andreas Aalvik Kaldestad on 5/19/2016 12:32:34 PM with a score of 0
Pretty cool, I liked the main character because he is an asshole, like me :D
-- hehe xd on 5/19/2016 1:00:05 AM with a score of 0
Very well put together. It was engaging and immersive. I do think there could've been more options because the story felt quite linear. It was black and white in terms of which choices would kill you and which choices would lead to your survival. However, I am very satisfied with the 75mins that I pumped into this. Although I died, I feel I am doing the story justice by not returning to find a better ending.
-- Paddy Mac on 5/18/2016 7:54:16 PM with a score of 0
Wow. I really had fun reading and playing this. It's really great; start to finish.
-- Ninja Kitty on 5/18/2016 4:59:22 PM with a score of 0
best one i have ever played yet
on 5/17/2016 5:11:16 PM with a score of 0
Best game ever bruh
-- XxxpedofacexxX on 5/16/2016 9:41:30 AM with a score of 0
Played dozens of times to see every ending.
-- lana on 5/14/2016 11:45:27 PM with a score of 0
Entertaining and well written.
-- Halo on 5/14/2016 11:05:19 PM with a score of 0
Ohhhhhh you need to play this and party like it's 1999
-- Anonymous on 5/14/2016 1:31:54 PM with a score of 0
Great story, was looking for more of a satisfying ending though.
on 5/11/2016 1:31:46 PM with a score of 0
took me most of the day but pretty sure i got all the endings down now including the good one, overall loved the story, thanks for the good times :}
on 5/10/2016 2:22:18 PM with a score of 0
This is soooo fun and it makes you want to try all the events!
-- Markus on 5/10/2016 12:49:46 AM with a score of 0
Gr8 b8 m8 i'd r8 8 out of 8.
-- Tan Yan on 5/9/2016 1:05:40 PM with a score of 0
Really liked this. I personally think it should be turned into a real video game and extend it a bit kinda like a fire watch type of game. *SPOILERS*
CANT BELIEVE THAT SLUT MIRANDA KILLED SHADOW! I really liked that guy....
-- Zombielorf95 on 5/7/2016 2:54:50 AM with a score of 0
This was an amazing game.
on 5/6/2016 12:24:44 PM with a score of 0
Wow, just wow. This adventure-type book probably took months, even years to make, and that deserves a round of applause. If anyone is disappointed in the minor grammatical errors and spelling mishaps, don't let that keep you from making another great piece of work-- like this one already is.
-- Jack on 5/5/2016 10:33:32 PM with a score of 0
on 5/5/2016 1:44:42 PM with a score of 0
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on 4/27/2016 9:09:47 AM with a score of 0
Wow, is there any way to win?
on 4/26/2016 9:21:23 PM with a score of 0
this was gay as fuck, i'd buy it again.
Too sad that I payed this guy 10.00 USD, and he said it was for cancer research. HE scammed the kids
One time I gave this guy mu w
-- bob on 4/24/2016 6:11:56 PM with a score of 0
Awesome story. I didn't explore it all though
-- lhommealenvers on 4/22/2016 5:47:54 PM with a score of 0
I loved this game so much! I wish there was a continuation of the Private Shelter branch, maybe going off to explore the wasteland instead of just ending if you leave.
on 4/20/2016 1:59:23 PM with a score of 0
This is the best made one I have read so far 10/10 would read again.
on 4/18/2016 10:48:32 AM with a score of 0
Ugggh really so you just get to die immediately thanks
-- Grr on 4/16/2016 8:06:04 AM with a score of 0
To be completely honest, I liked epilogue 4 the best. The one where I untied all of the super mutants and became the emperor. It reminds me of the epilogues in Eternal. '...but you will always be ETERNAL.
on 4/14/2016 10:27:00 AM with a score of 0
i really like this gameplay it makes me happy and gets me going ya know ! I love my self!!!!!!
-- jake routledge on 4/13/2016 6:48:08 AM with a score of 0
This was almost as good as the time I found 2 free snicker bars on the floor at my local swimming pool
-- Daniel Rawson on 4/13/2016 6:45:35 AM with a score of 0
I really liked it but not the naughty words because my mum would whip me
-- Dylan Hardaker on 4/13/2016 6:15:56 AM with a score of 0
This was well thought out and the gameplay was great. Now there should be a second chapter tho.
on 4/12/2016 10:36:04 AM with a score of 0
-- snaps on 4/12/2016 9:06:39 AM with a score of 0
gr8 story m8 r8 8/8
-- ppppp on 4/10/2016 11:05:31 PM with a score of 0
on 4/10/2016 6:26:00 PM with a score of 0
At first, when i bought a shelter and continued on them paths, I disregarded it as pointless as the experimental shelter is effectively a dead end. However, I tried the other main path, without buying a shelter, and I realised just how more in depth this game was than i originally thought. A true masterpiece.
on 4/9/2016 5:25:59 PM with a score of 0
on 4/8/2016 11:58:49 AM with a score of 0
good story, but no where as long as Eternal. I don't believe he will ever make another games as good or even better than Eternal
on 4/6/2016 1:03:35 AM with a score of 0
Damn. Good story. I died early in my first playthrough. Should've bought the bomb shelter. I gotta try again! Kudos to the author. Great job!
-- Drew on 4/4/2016 5:01:55 PM with a score of 0
Great game! It's as good as the first time I played it a year or two ago. Endmaster has made some pretty amazing stories and I'm glad I've had the chance to read them.
on 4/2/2016 3:35:40 AM with a score of 0
Bro if you continued the story it would have been perfect.
on 4/1/2016 9:45:47 PM with a score of 0
Pretty cool tbh fam
-- Jonthan on 4/1/2016 9:52:01 AM with a score of 0
This is an excellent story. I enjoy how some of the stories archs overlap (I.e. How you see major characters from one story arch make an appearance in another story arch)
on 3/30/2016 3:46:01 PM with a score of 0
Interesting, a bit too short on my path?
-- cho.de on 3/28/2016 7:42:08 PM with a score of 0
I throughly enjoyed this story. The depth, all the different paths to could take... I am elated that I found this story. I especially enjoyed the New Haven path and good ending, I personally think that one was the best, although the one with Eliza and your character is a heartwarming close second. It's amazing what you can find with Google and being bored hahaha. I recall reading choose your story works in the past and I decided to find some. Found this website and Ground Zeros was on the front page. And now I'm here :) Keep doing what you're doing!
-- Floyd on 3/26/2016 11:06:06 PM with a score of 0
It super duper good. Nice story
on 3/24/2016 12:46:22 AM with a score of 0
i very much liked the story line, and appreciate all the writers like you who are willing to take the time to write stories such as this for the amusement of others to use. Thanks for writing this and keep on making them!
-- hunter on 3/22/2016 12:51:56 PM with a score of 0
Very short. Just like your penis.
-- Jack Mehoff on 3/21/2016 11:11:35 AM with a score of 0
For once I made it to the surface without getting killed by anything or anyone that hates me and my family. I can't believe I made it to one of the special endings!!! If the ratings went higher, then I would give it a 1000, which would mean BEST GAME EVER!!!!!!
-- Gamechannger78 on 3/20/2016 4:09:38 PM with a score of 0
i really think this is a great story has common sense not too hard not too easy it has everything you could possibly expect in a good no, rather perfect story what i don't get is why is it horror? but overall good game definetely would play it again
-- zackdestroyer on 3/18/2016 10:36:55 PM with a score of 0
An amazing story!
It really kept me on the edge of my seat with all the suspense, the threat of your character dying looming over your head.
-- Davin Woodcock on 3/18/2016 10:38:10 AM with a score of 0
I don't even know what these random guest driveby commenters are even ranting about anymore.
One of the better nonsensical rants though. Definitely a keeper.
on 3/16/2016 10:44:57 PM with a score of 0
this story is terrible. btw, im a homosexual who volunteers their free time at homeless shelters for 6 hours a week, and an orphanage for 2. fuck you and your homophobic ass who can't write a story. btw, there is no proof that god exists, so you might as well use a fucking unicorn in your story.
-- ksjfvn on 3/16/2016 8:45:37 PM with a score of 0
I spent a hour playing, but his is my favort f*cking Story I have ever played.
-- John Do on 3/16/2016 8:01:14 PM with a score of 0
Why do you meant I died ? I'm not a pusy !
Give me some psycho and see my ennemies burn! !!
I helped them so many times already and it's like that ? They kill my family and think there will not be some consequences? They are DEAD wrong!!!
I will rule and destroy all ! !!!!!!!
-- Claire on 3/15/2016 10:34:30 AM with a score of 0
Too many suicide endings
-- MasterP on 3/14/2016 8:44:14 PM with a score of 0
I died so fast, but what I did do was good. I may try again some time.
on 3/12/2016 9:14:59 PM with a score of 0
Needs a little bit of editing, (grammar mostly) but the story in general is pretty good, I can't imagine how much time you put into this!
-- Jill on 3/11/2016 8:36:38 PM with a score of 0
Wow! Excellent writing! This is my second go through and I tried a different story arched and I'm so impressed at how different it is from the other sorry arch I did and how emotionally attached I got and how creative it is! Can't wait to read it again!
-- Nick on 3/11/2016 4:43:32 PM with a score of 0
-- Bob on 3/9/2016 9:52:00 PM with a score of 0
Very enjoyable! Obviously a lot of time and effort was made to produce this story as it is very in depth and has many possible diverse storylines to follow. This is the first 'choose your story' that I've read and am pleasantly surprised by the quality. Apart from the foul language (overused IMHO), and the completely psychopathic path one can follow (which allow for a disturbing, extremely sadistic, violent choices and storyline), this story is very entertaining and well written.
-- Alex on 3/9/2016 9:15:08 AM with a score of 0
I really loved the games, it made e question my own decision so often I myslef started to get nervous in certain situations.
I loved the idea with the the rpivate shelters but now I want to know what happens if I go into a community shelter.
Thanks so much for the fun!
-- Daniel on 3/9/2016 7:12:57 AM with a score of 0
I must have a bad memory because i kept forgetting how bright the sun can be
on 3/7/2016 4:56:55 PM with a score of 0
I love the setting of the story, and will definitely play it some more, it's just that the swearing and the many typos kinda ruin it for me from time to time.. But that's nitpicking. While I'm anything but anti-swearing, it just seems a bit too much here, but maybe that's because I'm European :P
on 3/3/2016 7:25:24 AM with a score of 0
Controlled the combine and got another epoilogue! It took AGES though >.< Longer than the 50 year lurking in my shelter epoilogue!
on 3/1/2016 5:52:00 PM with a score of 0
For starters, this story made me cry. It was a gigantic emotional roller coaster! Every word was placed perfectly, and thought through quite well! When writing, one of the hardest things to do is create dialogue that doesn't ruin the story, and the author managed to do just that.
This was my second time playing this game, and I spent maybe 2 hours on it before I got one of the 4 endings. (Ending #2, I believe) In the beginning, you may feel as if it is a waste of time, but this story is the best I have played in a while. I just LOVE the character development in this game! It definitely added the final touch!
-- FUZZY on 2/28/2016 12:07:45 AM with a score of 0
-- Rebecca on 2/25/2016 9:55:26 PM with a score of 0
This Was AMAZING!!!
-- J on 2/23/2016 6:43:16 PM with a score of 0
I had the epoilogue, I guess I made the right decisions and lurked in my shelter for 50 or so years. xD
on 2/23/2016 5:59:23 PM with a score of 0
Marvelous game, excellent plot, very fun to play, loved my story line and how I ended up living the rest of my life with Eliza,
-- NBA2Pac on 2/21/2016 4:46:01 PM with a score of 0
AFTER THREE FUCKING HOURS I FINALLY WON THIS DAMN GAME GOD I AM SO HAPPY PRAISE
-- Karii on 2/20/2016 7:27:37 PM with a score of 0
I always seem to get control of everywhere I go in this thing, I must be the 'leader' type!
on 2/20/2016 5:56:58 PM with a score of 0
I'm so mad literally hate that family now u tried 2 help u but u do this to me? I am so mad
-- Karii on 2/20/2016 4:39:32 PM with a score of 0
Best ending ever. Eliza will be missed
on 2/18/2016 9:01:17 PM with a score of 0
Just played a few more times, and it's really fun! Thanks again
-- Lucasiosio on 2/17/2016 9:33:36 AM with a score of 0
Ended very quickly for me, but the writing is pretty good and the scenarios were interesting. Thank you, author of the game.
-- Lucasiosio on 2/17/2016 8:33:15 AM with a score of 0
good story!! could be better but really interesting
-- rabbiterino on 2/14/2016 8:10:51 PM with a score of 0
aus-fucking-thir, bruh. That's the highest compliment anyone has ever gotten from me. Brilliance exemplified.
on 2/13/2016 1:34:44 PM with a score of 0
-- Jeff on 2/13/2016 12:54:10 AM with a score of 0
Yes I got epilogue 3
Best game ever, but so much more longer than I thought it would be, considering that I did the bomb shelter paths first.
on 2/12/2016 7:52:53 PM with a score of 0
vvery vulgar btw this story sucks
-- Deezus on 2/12/2016 5:14:51 PM with a score of 0
I don't think I got the special ending this time
on 2/12/2016 12:21:31 PM with a score of 0
That should have ended way better
-- Jakob on 2/8/2016 5:10:42 PM with a score of 0
-- Nikolaj on 2/8/2016 3:28:55 AM with a score of 0
Very nice read! Full on!
on 2/4/2016 10:41:59 AM with a score of 0
A good story, albeit a little short. The author is pretty good at writing, but the choices are a little too obvious, as long as you play the moralfag you'll mostly likely get a good ending
-- BoredUser on 2/4/2016 4:02:23 AM with a score of 0
Stay in the shelter and you'll get the feels. I'd rate 10/10 (already rated 8/8)
-- Ferrous Oxide on 2/1/2016 2:46:30 PM with a score of 0
I love the endings and the choices are certainly easy to understand. At points I didn't understand by what choices meant as in "stay put" didn't mean follow orders temporarily, but rather forever.
One of the best.
-- Jace on 1/26/2016 1:33:29 AM with a score of 0
My god, i got the 150 years later community shelter ending, and the story was amazing, plus i got an epilouge!
-- Ethiano on 1/25/2016 2:15:10 PM with a score of 0
Second time I've gotten an epilogue, but the first I've been logged in to leave my thoughts on it.
Ground Zero is a good read. Like most of Endmaster's stories it offers several entirely different, but equally enjoyable main paths rooted in the same setting. At the end it just feels as though you've finished a good book. The beauty of CYS is that the first end of a good work is just the beginning of the enjoyment you can get out of it. If you haven't read this, or any of the other great stories on the site I'd recommend you get started.
Thank you Endmaster for your excellent storytelling, and world building. I probably haven't said anything that hasn't been said a million times before, but it's no less true.
on 1/25/2016 8:50:42 AM with a score of 0
The first time I died in about five minutes. Reached the epilogue the second play through! A lot of fun.
-- R on 1/25/2016 3:08:15 AM with a score of 0
This was my first time and it was amazing this really is great for beginners I am a little sad by my end so might try again but all in all this was fun.
-- Hitoma on 1/19/2016 10:17:12 PM with a score of 0
really good story line and very solid plot however i do really wish that you could add a little more to this like what happens to me after i leave the vault...er sorry i mean bomb shelter does elliot ever find about your escape , what happens to your father ..i mean, er... sorry bout that . any who if you could add some more to the sotry (i do not know if you are finished with this or not ( hopefully not it would be an honor for you to reply to my message
-- tony crawford on 1/19/2016 7:16:22 PM with a score of 0
Made fun of Harry and his Erectile Dysfunction and called him a limp dick bitch. 8/8 recommended as fuck.
-- Steph on 1/19/2016 2:18:17 AM with a score of 0
10/10 would have six fingered grandson again
-- Steph on 1/19/2016 2:09:47 AM with a score of 0
It needs a part 2
-- John Garcia on 1/18/2016 10:46:21 PM with a score of 0
This is an AMAZING story, I have tried to do every ending (only have done the buying a shelter endings), but this story is way too big, and the level of detail and realism is near perfect.
-- Matt on 1/17/2016 1:40:34 PM with a score of 0
I loved it. Really satisfying.
-- Ecstatic on 1/16/2016 8:16:28 AM with a score of 0
Good unclean fun.
-- Fulhencio on 1/15/2016 11:13:19 PM with a score of 0
The story's good, but I was shortchanged a bit, I thought it would go on longer like the 'dead man walking' stoyline. The writing's serviceable, the dialogue is sharp and witty. The protagonist is a bit of a jerk though, albeit a lovable one.
on 1/14/2016 9:59:43 PM with a score of 0
i didn't know partying like 1999 could kill you.
on 1/13/2016 11:18:09 PM with a score of 0
Excellent story, pacing, side-characters, and the development of the main character is perfect and hilarious!!
Would've given it a perfect 8 if there weren't SO MANY spelling/grammatical errors.
-- biggoronz on 1/13/2016 8:51:15 AM with a score of 0
Just stay the fuck inside.
on 1/12/2016 8:13:41 AM with a score of 0
Solid game. Hard and well told. The author has good grammar and better storytelling abilities. I'm about to go back for my third run.
on 1/12/2016 1:58:41 AM with a score of 0
RoboLoveEnding. Perfect 5/7.
on 1/11/2016 10:28:59 PM with a score of 0
Finished 2nd time. Rated 6/8 before, and now 8/8. Complex badass story. A MUST!
on 1/11/2016 8:36:30 PM with a score of 0
WHY DID YOU END IT THERE? DOES HE FIND BECKY!?!
on 1/11/2016 2:41:51 PM with a score of 0
Great story and love that it references Fallout in one way or another.
on 1/11/2016 2:14:32 PM with a score of 0
Good storyline. I r8-it 5/7
on 1/10/2016 10:34:57 PM with a score of 0
Wow this story is great! First time I played it I got an epilogue, and man I was proud of that. I loved the story, and I felt like the pros and cons were very well balanced. If something bad happens, you can almost be sure that something good comes with it. I think the best way to play these games is to stick with your decisions no matter how bad it may seem. A couple times I went back because I chose a decision that didn't agree with my gut, but for the most time my instincts proved correct. Just do what you believe to be right and it'll work out ok.
-- Reelru on 1/10/2016 7:12:13 PM with a score of 0
It's good. There are quite a few different story lines you can experience, which make your choices (especially in the beginning) seem really meaningful. It's definitely worthwhile playing through this a couple times to read the other stories.
However, for a game so focused on writing, there are quite a few grammatical errors, even a few spelling ones. The syntax is often rather clunky too, and there are many cases of run-on sentences and improper punctuation. A lot of the dialogue feels a little awkward as well at times, though it's not the worst. Proofreading and fixing these errors would be what changes my rating of this from a 6/8 to an 8/8.
on 1/10/2016 2:36:27 AM with a score of 0
HAD to replay and see all of the different endings. Great storytelling, and decisions mattered. I've spent quite some time playing this and trying for all the endings, and I can confidently say I've enjoyed every second!
-- Godzillacon3 on 1/10/2016 12:36:55 AM with a score of 0
Really puts into perspective how lucky we are to have a not unfair society
-- Geoff on 1/9/2016 2:16:27 PM with a score of 0
Little decisions. The game just acts like a robot and most of the important choices are made for you.
-- Crazy on 1/9/2016 1:35:04 PM with a score of 0
Very unlikable protagonist :/
on 1/9/2016 1:16:20 PM with a score of 0
Gr8 m8. I r8 8/8. Papa Bless.
-- Carl on 1/9/2016 1:13:48 PM with a score of 0
on 1/9/2016 12:58:24 PM with a score of 0
Very well written and fun for as long as it lasted, but I was a bit put out by the open ending and lack of description of the outside world.
Overall really good, though :)
-- Phil on 1/9/2016 11:26:28 AM with a score of 0
I raped someone...yay? 0.o
-- whaaat on 1/9/2016 8:33:19 AM with a score of 0
I highly enjoyed this read, thank you so much!
-- Conor on 1/9/2016 8:29:10 AM with a score of 0
I died because I chose poorly.Gonna try again,this is fun :D
-- Someone who burns in nuclearfi on 1/9/2016 6:31:03 AM with a score of 0
Enjoyable and well written
-- Enders on 1/9/2016 4:10:35 AM with a score of 0
Kind of vague on the choices. "Stick around a bit" option isn't very usefull, ended up sticking around a "bit" for a month? What?
-- Kyle on 1/9/2016 1:54:18 AM with a score of 0
really bad for you
-- BOBBY on 1/6/2016 8:18:59 PM with a score of 0
First playthrough was quite enjoyable. The choices in Ground Zero are weighted much more than most games, and the copious branching paths have made replaying it irresistible. I love the influences from Fallout and the general plausibility of the story. As for the role we assume at the center of this game, I appreciated the personality itself but longed for more choice in whether to be antisocial or more receptive of others. Overall, Ground Zero is a complete game. It's writing, especially the introduction and various endings, blend a serious tone without sacrificing reader enjoyment. There are just the right amount of questions left unanswered, and this provokes the imagination to complete the tale. More than worthy of everyone's time and appreciation, this is a story game of rare, high quality.
on 1/3/2016 3:25:06 PM with a score of 0
As i was sitting by My fireplace in the swedish Woods -20c outside
I suddenly remembered the old books i used to read when i was a kid
So after some googling i found this! And as a true fallout fan i was hooked:)
This was your own story in a similar setting. And it was amazing. Now 3h later i think im Done and IT really feels like when i played the old fallout games. The stories that took place in My head as i went Along:) so Thank you whoever you are:)
-- Fredrik karlsson on 1/2/2016 3:56:03 PM with a score of 0
Too good 5 me danks for making 7/8
-- Alan H. Akiabara on 1/1/2016 12:54:22 AM with a score of 0
Amazing story. Very well written. Even when I die, it is still enjoyable. There is so much to discover.
on 12/23/2015 9:45:01 PM with a score of 0
it was a bit too short for my taste with not a lot of action but it still felt like the choices i made did matter
-- michael on 12/23/2015 3:14:57 PM with a score of 0
Read this story...NOW!
-- A person on 12/18/2015 6:55:45 PM with a score of 0
-- CamCamBaZam on 12/18/2015 1:16:10 PM with a score of 0
The amount of endings you can achieve in this interactive story is awesome. Took me a while to get the ending good enough to satisfy, but it was damn worth it.
-- Kevin on 12/18/2015 1:38:31 AM with a score of 0
Brought tears to my eyes at times. A wonderful, compelling story where your choices make a huge difference in the ending. Loved it, loved the characters, but had to admit I was extremely sad as my protagonist grew alone once more as his wife and the people he grew old with died off.
A wonderful piece of art. If anything, I think it could even be expanded upon to include more story and more decision making to effect the potential outcomes.
-- Wolffe on 12/17/2015 6:17:18 PM with a score of 0
Wow, what an amazing story! After digging around a bit I managed to reach epilogue 2 and it was sure worth it. I would definitely recommend reading this story.
-- Alex on 12/17/2015 3:06:32 AM with a score of 0
-- Henry Woolley on 12/15/2015 11:48:01 AM with a score of 0
I've only taken one route so far, the Experimental Shelter route, and I'm just a little surprised at where it ended. It seemed prime for another "arc" so to speak where you journey to the other shelter, and I was just a little let down that it didn't continue. However, I know there is MUCH more to experience, and will surly check back later to see what else this story has to offer.
-- Jim on 12/14/2015 10:48:20 AM with a score of 0
Great story. I enjoyed the creativity... A few grammatical and spelling errors, but well done.
-- Peter on 12/14/2015 4:33:28 AM with a score of 0
on 12/13/2015 3:12:03 PM with a score of 0
This was a good story but some parts you don't have many choices like you had to take the gun
-- John on 12/9/2015 11:13:18 PM with a score of 0
So that's what post-apocalyptic survival is about, eh? I hope it never comes to that.
-- Alex on 12/9/2015 2:16:07 AM with a score of 0
Thank you for making it obvious that I suck at decision making. I think that out of all the times I could have died, I died in about 80% of them.
-- Joseph on 12/8/2015 5:23:31 AM with a score of 0
I've never wanted to replay a storygame as many times as I have this one. Usually I'm content finding one 'good' ending, but this one changes so dramatically based on what you do at certain points (mostly the beginning) and yet easter eggs the paths that could have been taken so well that it's hard to just stop playing it through to the various Epilogue Endings.
on 12/5/2015 6:05:16 PM with a score of 0
-- Errm on 12/2/2015 2:50:07 PM with a score of 0
-- Livgg on 12/1/2015 5:53:29 PM with a score of 0
A little short. But excellent. I wish I had more say in my characters personality though.
-- Gage Brady on 12/1/2015 1:02:43 AM with a score of 0
For some reason, I always get what I imagine to be the worst/most gruesome ending whenever I play one of your games. For example, on this one, I ended up dying in a bunker, which I was trapped in, after living a life of putting skulls on stakes, raping women, killing children, joining gangs, and then killing leader of said gang. At least, I think that's how it went. I spent hours getting other endings. Can't remember which game it was I ended up shooting up the school in. Anyway, great game. I played it for hours, because I wanted to see how many endings I could find.
-- Anonymous on 11/28/2015 5:19:43 PM with a score of 0
Wow, just wow! So much fun to experience this adventure.I love the fallout themed pictures as well, really brings in the mood. I got all the special endings as well. 11/10
-- Seth22100 on 11/27/2015 3:46:28 PM with a score of 0
This is only my second book I've read of yours and your already my favorite author. Keep up the great work.
on 11/27/2015 2:21:20 PM with a score of 0
Good story, I played it through again and ended up with a family and lived to walk the wastelands. Is there a possibility for a part 2?
-- Zaraki Kenpachi on 11/27/2015 9:39:19 AM with a score of 0
This is one of the best games that I have ever played. Every choice has a consequence and can lead you down a new path. Like Bethesda said that "player freedom remains our number one goal." You have done exactly that, and for that I bow to you.
on 11/27/2015 12:18:36 AM with a score of 0
I was in the individual shelter and "won" but it seemed like a somewhat pre-epmtive ending.
-- Zaraki Kenpachi on 11/26/2015 8:29:35 PM with a score of 0
-- kitka on 11/25/2015 8:14:14 PM with a score of 0
My god Endmaster, you never, ever, fail to utterly amaze me. It was very long, the storyline was great and there were very few mistakes. 8/8
on 11/25/2015 10:06:15 AM with a score of 0
This was actually one of the best reads of my entire life, I had to go through every single option, the difference your choices make is staggering and I can't imagine the effort this must have taken.
-- HaydenZeMan on 11/23/2015 1:25:17 AM with a score of 0
Amazing game! Of all of the ones I have played, which have spread through many different types and categories, this is by far the best, and probably even more enjoyable for fans of the Fallout games!
on 11/22/2015 3:48:17 PM with a score of 0
It was amazing
-- Jacob on 11/21/2015 11:20:03 PM with a score of 0
on 11/19/2015 10:45:51 AM with a score of 0
I absolutely love this game! The storyline is so intricate, and the details are of something only a true master could create. I've heard praises for your storygames from all over chooseyourstory so I decided to try one myself. I did not regret it. I can't wait to read another one of yours!
on 11/16/2015 3:42:58 PM with a score of 0
This was a very good and entertaining story given all the paths and endings. I've played 3 different times before I got the true ending.
-- Anglios on 11/13/2015 1:12:50 PM with a score of 0
Best story game I have ever played. Period.
-- Terra lade on 11/13/2015 4:25:40 AM with a score of 0
omfg this is so good!!! are there any more endings besides you going after becky on the surface?
-- Jacob on 11/12/2015 2:17:29 PM with a score of 0
I loved the endings you could get. It was definitely quite surreal. It's a great story and gives you a similar feeling to the fallout games. I think the author did a great job on it.
on 11/12/2015 8:54:24 AM with a score of 0
This is amazing! If you toned down with the swearing a bit you can actually organise this into a book and get it published! Do consider doing that plx! You have a lot of potential.
-- Starcraft999 on 11/11/2015 1:10:08 PM with a score of 0
It seems a little unfair that you get punished for wanting to have a good time, but I guess it makes sense, survival of the fittest and all.
-- D$ on 11/9/2015 11:10:54 PM with a score of 0
I've played Ground Zero many times since I first discovered it last year. I had never realized this whole other story was here; so far i've played both Shelter stories (Community and private)and once on the surface as the crazed maniac. While the Eliza storyline in the shelter was my favorite, this one is amazing. It's lengthy, entertaining, and just-- I'm not entirely sure how to describe it, but i absolutely loved it.
on 11/9/2015 11:21:07 AM with a score of 0
This might actually be the best story I've ever read.
-- Mweya on 11/4/2015 3:08:23 PM with a score of 0
Amazing storyline,greatly put together all in all AMAZING.
on 11/2/2015 5:06:23 PM with a score of 0
-- GARRY WHITE! on 11/1/2015 1:49:44 AM with a score of 0
-- Bobby on 10/31/2015 12:14:09 PM with a score of 0
I think it would be nice to have an epilogue for each ending depending on the character you where (I was the freakin' psyko and I didn't get a goodby)
-- Me on 10/30/2015 7:21:41 PM with a score of 0
I had a great story, and it seems I was able to rebuild humanity.
-- Noah2x4 on 10/29/2015 2:50:19 AM with a score of 0
Really cool, parts of it actually made me paranoid, and others actually made me wonder what would come next.
-- Alex z on 10/28/2015 10:40:07 PM with a score of 0
a bit to much text for my liking
-- lol on 10/28/2015 1:59:15 PM with a score of 0
pretty cool, didnt like the recycling of fallout perk images but a good story
on 10/23/2015 8:23:45 PM with a score of 0
Great story. Obviously based off the Fallout series vaults. But if you like Fallout or apocalypse stuff this is a great story. Better then some vault stories in Fallout overall 10/10
-- digestedgore on 10/20/2015 5:51:39 PM with a score of 0
Pretty cool. Not bad. I enjoyed it, really got me into the story. Well done bro.
-- Jerry on 10/19/2015 5:06:35 PM with a score of 0
This is fucking awesome! Please write more of these...more, more, MORE!
-- j on 10/13/2015 7:49:52 PM with a score of 0
Great Story, happy to get a great epilogue. Well thought out and I liked the characters. I also liked the passage of time. Great Game!
on 10/13/2015 2:49:32 AM with a score of 0
Hours and hours of fun
-- Brian on 10/12/2015 5:48:57 PM with a score of 0
-- jacob on 10/12/2015 2:52:31 PM with a score of 0
Was pretty good I am pretty sure I got the worst ending possible though
-- Dermot Higgins on 10/10/2015 2:48:35 PM with a score of 0
THIS GAME WAS AWESOME !
on 10/8/2015 10:44:56 AM with a score of 0
What a fantastic story. I didn't get a full appreciation until the third time through, when I discovered that some of the paths go down entirely different story arcs and don't actually seem to cross - unless I've been dying too early to find those parts?!
I'll now be trying more paths, really enjoyed it. Great Fallout-esque humour.
-- Gaffers on 10/8/2015 6:07:08 AM with a score of 0
Very amazing game. I came here from choice of games to find out this is better than their games, plus this is for free versus most of theirs you have to pay for. 10/10
-- Jacob on 10/5/2015 9:55:11 PM with a score of 0
This is the first game I've played on here, and found myself sinking hours in to it.
I've found several epilogs, but not quite all of them yet.
on 10/5/2015 9:53:03 PM with a score of 0
Have to make sure I don't die so soon. Good plot so far.
-- Nat on 10/4/2015 10:06:16 AM with a score of 0
I made it ten years before killing myself. Dude, I've read several of your stories now, and I can say honestly that you rock.
-- Cameron on 10/2/2015 8:04:46 AM with a score of 0
This was an amazing story! I couldn't stop reading!
-- Braeden on 10/2/2015 1:49:19 AM with a score of 0
its better then homework hella right
-- logan on 9/30/2015 7:16:05 PM with a score of 0
Ending abrupt, and the main character's a dick. However, great world with many surprisingly realistic touches,
-- Good but short on 9/29/2015 10:32:03 PM with a score of 0
I am somewhat new to choose your own story books, but this is one of the most amazing experiences in reading I have ever had, I loved the book so much I took up the task of trying out every single ending (which is insanely worth it). This story made me think "what a stupid death" at sometimes, yet many ones made me want to cry out of either joy or sadness (all in a good way). To put it simply this story has amazed me and would recommend it to anyone who can read (except for maybe younger kids due to heavier topics). :'):'):'):'):')
-- Zachary on 9/26/2015 12:14:47 AM with a score of 0
Its very entertaining to play and get all the different endings. I've even sent the link to multiple friends and said to play it. Each time, they say "That was.very fun, thanks for sending it!" (Or something along those lines) Overall, if rating out of 10 i would give it an 11!
-- Mr. Amazing (obviously not my on 9/25/2015 11:25:03 PM with a score of 0
well I died after 2 years so i think I did well
-- Anastasia on 9/25/2015 8:47:41 PM with a score of 0
-- Aldren on 9/25/2015 5:30:34 PM with a score of 0
one of the best stories I read
on 9/25/2015 5:07:34 AM with a score of 0
Really good story, would reccomend
-- Zack on 9/18/2015 11:19:35 AM with a score of 0
-- I suicided... on 9/17/2015 5:28:07 PM with a score of 0
Such an addictive read, kept interest throughout the story!
-- I died... on 9/17/2015 5:15:30 PM with a score of 0
on 9/17/2015 3:47:38 PM with a score of 0
As always Endmaster writes the best stories
on 9/14/2015 2:18:41 PM with a score of 0
A great story and totally great author
-- amteater on 9/7/2015 2:01:57 PM with a score of 0
Welp I certainly enjoyed it XD
on 9/3/2015 10:48:45 AM with a score of 0
-- Isaiah on 8/27/2015 1:50:24 AM with a score of 0
-- walter o'dim on 8/20/2015 2:54:35 AM with a score of 0
Please, please, please make a sequel! I must know what happened to New Haven!!!
on 8/19/2015 1:36:47 AM with a score of 0
-- Noah on 8/18/2015 7:18:47 AM with a score of 0
I wish you had more none death choices but all and all good game
on 8/17/2015 4:59:40 AM with a score of 0
It was good I really got into the story and I managed to survive (not sure if everyone does?) as soon as I post this I'll be looking for another to play Great way to pass the on this road trip keep up the good work !
-- Derrick on 8/16/2015 12:50:12 PM with a score of 0
Wow. I was a leader, founded AA, and was a Great-Great-Great-Grandfather!
-- Victoria on 8/14/2015 10:50:43 AM with a score of 0
-- Martin on 8/12/2015 8:14:39 AM with a score of 0
It's a very interesting concept and I definitely felt sympathy for the characters and wanted to make the right decision. The one problem was the text felt a little dense.
on 8/11/2015 11:45:20 PM with a score of 0
An amazing story to get involved and connected with.
-- Hastil on 8/10/2015 5:10:50 PM with a score of 0
This is a very well done choose your own adventure, I know it takes a lot of effot with all the outcomes but you could have had a bit more options but with less text, But still this was a very well down book.
-- Louis on 8/8/2015 11:11:37 PM with a score of 0
I like it, its interesting and I feel that you should keep going on with doing stories like this. You do you.
-- mia on 8/5/2015 7:44:36 PM with a score of 0
Quite nice. First story I've read on this site, but a great read.
-- Terry on 8/3/2015 10:18:02 PM with a score of 0
Its a fantastic experience, whether it ends after 5 minutes or half an hour. But the true greatness of the game is were you get to see your legacy, the effect you've had on this whole new world.
-- Adam on 7/25/2015 4:51:17 PM with a score of 0
This is an amazing and well thought story that everyone should check out! The plot is well thought out, and there is a nice mix of story and choices throughout the entire thing
on 7/23/2015 10:09:42 PM with a score of 0
Absurd choices in an absurd world. It will stick with me for quite a while.
-- Philo on 7/23/2015 5:13:04 PM with a score of 0
I was eaten by wolves. This was awesome. Had fun idk if this was the earliest death but still I didn't make any bad calls just ran outta gas and got eaten. Lol I enjoyed it and want to make my own story too OMO
-- Seanmcchapman on 7/23/2015 2:06:44 PM with a score of 0
Fuck man that was depressing but good.
on 7/20/2015 12:38:55 PM with a score of 0
Officially read all of your stories on the site, I even read the other two you mentioned though I couldn't finiah the one because my Internet kept making me restart. I found all four epilogues and, even after trying, I can't say one's better than the other, they're all good.
on 7/18/2015 7:23:04 AM with a score of 0
Lots of fun. Good story. Happy ending.
on 7/17/2015 6:39:09 PM with a score of 0
I didn't make it far but it was written in a style that made it seem so personal. Good job here.
-- SlightlyAmused on 7/17/2015 4:15:34 PM with a score of 0
this was a good story
-- iese on 7/16/2015 4:09:17 AM with a score of 0
i liked it it was really cool i got epilogue 3
-- the glowing one on 7/12/2015 7:44:20 PM with a score of 0
1/10-it was amazing-IGN
-- XXX_MLGQUICKSCOPER_XXX on 7/5/2015 5:15:35 PM with a score of 0
Really good book
-- jordan hinton on 7/4/2015 11:21:12 AM with a score of 0
Finally got one of the good endings! This was so damn satisfying... I love this game so much! Thank you for making this; in my opinion, it's one of the best games on the site, period.
Keep up the amazing work as always!
on 7/3/2015 10:10:39 PM with a score of 0
This game is fantastic, but super-duper hard. I haven't even gotten a good ending yet... *sigh* Seriously though, I love this. Keep up the good work!
on 7/3/2015 3:45:36 PM with a score of 0
I have resd through towards the first good ending. I really rnjoyed it! I felt immersed in thr universe, and the epilogue fits my personality well. Thanks for this amazing story
-- Gareth on 6/28/2015 1:41:10 AM with a score of 0
This is a really great story and I have only done two of the endings. Unlike most stories which have long text that you can skim. This one it is well written to the point that if you skim you can barely scratch the surface of the phenomenal story.
on 6/24/2015 4:44:44 AM with a score of 0
This was really fun to play/read. I hope I can find more like it. XD
-- Bolo_Bramble on 6/20/2015 11:58:13 PM with a score of 0
Had a lot of fun playing!
on 6/19/2015 11:35:02 AM with a score of 0
Great replay value,fantastic story,i like it...i like it A LOT!!!
on 6/19/2015 7:44:24 AM with a score of 0
It's a masterpiece! Read it I swear it is amazing as fallout3
P.s IM NOT ADVERTISING
-- Rafel on 6/18/2015 6:17:00 AM with a score of 0
First time here. First story. It was an AWESOME story. Gonna read this again now.
on 6/18/2015 3:55:13 AM with a score of 0
great fun:) i got ending 4 and although i admit to backing up a few times to change paths ruling dominion zero city was quite fun.
-- Nate on 6/17/2015 8:51:20 PM with a score of 0
FUCKING AWESOME. exactly what I was looking for. Thank you. Awesome job!
-- Guy anermanator on 6/17/2015 1:41:31 PM with a score of 0
Decent story, wish it were longer though. And allowed a more expansionist New Haven...
on 6/16/2015 2:23:11 AM with a score of 0
"War... War never changes."
- Fallout 3
on 6/15/2015 12:21:10 AM with a score of 0
Great game, it really shows how every little decision can have a huge effect on the outcome. It was well put together. I reached a ton of endings, some I couldn't classify as good or bad. A nice way to open up your mind on a rainy day.
on 6/13/2015 12:15:45 PM with a score of 0
I loved it, and have played it twice (I intend to play it a few more times) but I really wish you could continue after escaping the shelters
-- zelorm on 6/12/2015 10:14:42 PM with a score of 0
I got a community shelter and shit Elliot, then we had the sexy times and had little kiddie kids, 10/10
on 6/12/2015 11:55:41 AM with a score of 0
Some parts were boring. Great plot though.
-- mcdick on 6/12/2015 12:15:51 AM with a score of 0
GG, shot Elliot and got gut like a fish. I would have it no other way.
-- MaverickNuke on 6/11/2015 1:06:21 PM with a score of 0
I love this story too! My favorite ending is the one where your great great great grandson becomes president!
-- Michael on 6/9/2015 7:10:40 PM with a score of 0
Awesome story, obviously based on Fallout.
-- Younger on 6/6/2015 9:41:56 PM with a score of 0
As always you're fucking awesome. The story. I wish you would've written some more I haven't seen any of your new works.
-- Jcury on 6/3/2015 12:38:42 PM with a score of 0
Great read, really felt like the story was rational and that the options I chose reacted with the plot in a serious and realistic way. I loved the characters and felt that they were just as relateable as the protagonist. Hope to continue the awesome stories on this website (this is my first comment!).
-- Kvothe on 6/3/2015 11:19:24 AM with a score of 0
-- Simon on 6/2/2015 5:39:28 AM with a score of 0
Well-done, really made be scrutinise every decision I could possibly make and analysis all possible outcomes which is what a choose your own adventure story should do. Keep it up!
-- Fraser Crowe on 6/1/2015 11:22:02 AM with a score of 0
i am a very big fan of the fallout lore and as such i did not want the story to end! such a treat...thank you author. more of these please!
-- killmebusy on 5/29/2015 5:21:41 AM with a score of 0
on 5/27/2015 1:51:07 PM with a score of 0
This was my first one of these kinds of stories that I actually enjoyed!
-- Alana l on 5/26/2015 10:02:23 PM with a score of 0
-- Coolman on 5/25/2015 8:49:24 PM with a score of 0
THIS GAME IS AMAZING
-- Zippo on 5/22/2015 6:49:13 PM with a score of 0
on 5/22/2015 6:27:32 PM with a score of 0
First Endmaster read I'd made, and I must say I loved it! Ground Zero was just so surreal and visual for me that I couldn't help but go back and read it again! I should probably go read some more stories now...
Seriously though, Ground Zero is NOT to be overlooked. I would consider a CYS classic, even! Not that we have those but that doesn't matter. :P
on 5/22/2015 6:50:52 AM with a score of 0
I got out of the shelter.
on 5/20/2015 1:34:21 PM with a score of 0
The first time through, I got one of the short endings. Then I figured I'd go back and try again.
I've been reading this over and over all morning, trying to find the different endings and loving every second. This has been a truly unique experience, very well-written and engrossing, but realistic in many minor ways.
on 5/19/2015 5:02:25 AM with a score of 0
This was a fantastically made story, and I can't wait to try things another way. Definitely very intense, at least as far as the two paths I've tried so far.
Helps capture the frightening feeling of a world on the brink of collapse, which is very impressive
-- Bs on 5/19/2015 4:22:39 AM with a score of 0
Pretty stellar CYOA; well-fleshed story archs and a dark personality to boot, definitely made with a lot of care.
The writing and grammar won't make you shed tears, but it's still good enough to the point where it'll get genuine emotional responses from you - and it does a great job of setting the stage for whatever mood it wants to get across.
My one complaint is that the protagonist is an absolute ass in almost every rendition, and a totally anti-social one at that: definitely felt a bit distanced, as a gay male, over the lack of choice as far as some of the story archs took towards the protagonist making relationships with female characters or treating gay characters in the story. I would've appreciated some choice on not being a passive-aggressive, condescending dick to people in general conversation too: you can't really get around it.
Aside from that, a fairly-stellar experience that had me going back to see all the different endings. Great work!
-- Wolf In Arms on 5/18/2015 5:12:32 AM with a score of 0
Whoa. I am AWESOME! Though I wish they didn't have to assume everyone playing is a boy. I am the Great times 5 grandfather of the President of NEW HAVEN!
-- Victoria on 5/17/2015 12:04:02 PM with a score of 0
-- dora on 5/15/2015 5:12:24 PM with a score of 0
First time reading a story on this site and really enjoyed it, I'll deff look up more by the author, but not before checking out some of the other endings :P
-- John Brigg on 5/15/2015 10:52:53 AM with a score of 0
This game was really fun dude
on 5/13/2015 7:56:22 PM with a score of 0
finally completed the story/game, worth every second, loved the characters and relationships.
on 5/12/2015 9:45:57 AM with a score of 0
Amazing, I didn't want it to end. I played out every possible way and was pleased to ever extent. Thank you!
-- Katie on 5/11/2015 4:21:41 PM with a score of 0
Awesome man, I read someone's comment before playing about this adventures story branching off... Guys it's like a spiders web with many middle dots, I'm still not done but this is definitely a favorite.
-- shade on 5/11/2015 3:04:54 AM with a score of 0
Really cool and very sad. Awesome!
on 5/10/2015 8:59:19 AM with a score of 0
All these storylines are so different from each other and i love it. I've found 3 epilogues this far and all three were totally different. This is probably the best game i've ever played.
on 5/10/2015 7:54:53 AM with a score of 0
My first round was short lived, but fun. Maybe I should have gotten a bomb shelter instead of partying like it was 1999....
-- Dead Man on 5/9/2015 6:57:34 PM with a score of 0
I liked it but the ending i got to seemed to come a bit too early. There was clearly alot more room to keep on going but I guess it only was a small sidepath after all.
-- Kratos on 5/9/2015 6:06:59 PM with a score of 0
I died right away. And dont want to waste time trying again so you lose
-- unknown on 5/9/2015 4:44:02 PM with a score of 0
Well, this game is quite awesome! Well it does come from EndMaster, so it's to be expected. Great job!
on 5/6/2015 8:25:11 AM with a score of 0
I feel like the narrative could've been broken into more individual pieces so that there's more room for choice and to avoid overloading the reader with text. Otherwise, a reasonable game with some interesting characters in a familiar premise.
-- khang on 5/1/2015 4:45:02 PM with a score of 0
Great experience. I'd of liked to meet Becky though.
on 4/30/2015 8:07:19 AM with a score of 0
This story was a work of art, it was nail biting for the vast majority and the presidential ending was a great wrap up. Though I will admit I played it through twice do to short sighted mistakes I enjoyed the whole experience very much. Please email me with any other stories you have written, I would very much like to read them.
-- James C on 4/29/2015 1:26:04 AM with a score of 0
Thank you for your game.
-- Titan on 4/27/2015 12:20:23 PM with a score of 0
best cyos i read so far.. :)
on 4/17/2015 11:14:05 AM with a score of 0
I like how there is quite a variety of endings, btw are there any "true" endings?
-- Reader on 4/17/2015 6:13:34 AM with a score of 0
it was very weird
-- bob on 4/15/2015 10:14:52 AM with a score of 0
10/10 most realistic, decided to stick around and was bombed to dust on my first playthrough. Actually chuckled at that, well done.
-- Tim on 4/14/2015 12:27:40 AM with a score of 0
Played this game over and over again, I'm still doing so. I wish I could've continued my quest to bring back Eliza. This story had me attached to a damn robot. It's brutal, touching, sad and can even be heartwarming or outright insane. LOVED IT. Great work!
on 4/13/2015 11:46:50 PM with a score of 0
Damnit, 1 more ending
on 4/12/2015 1:01:19 PM with a score of 0
on 4/11/2015 8:55:44 PM with a score of 0
It was really good I liked it a lot!!!
-- Jack on 4/9/2015 7:19:50 PM with a score of 0
It was really good I liked it a lot!!!
-- JFK on 4/9/2015 7:19:38 PM with a score of 0
-- Bob on 4/7/2015 8:52:01 AM with a score of 0
Awesome! 150 years that time. Even more detailed characters and plot points. It's like 20 stories in one. Fantastic.
on 4/7/2015 7:10:44 AM with a score of 0
Brilliant. Detailed. Really plays on some common fears of the end of the world. Reminiscent of Fallout and other apocalyptic games/films/books.
I lived 10 years, but it came to a depressing end... About to try again and hope for something a little happier. Wonderful story and characters. I was there for a moment.
10/10, would play again.
on 4/7/2015 6:26:30 AM with a score of 0
A splendid effort, with character development and a world which is shaped by the protagonist's actions
on 4/6/2015 10:43:06 AM with a score of 0
I really enjoyed reading this. I enjoyed your sense of humor and I enjoyed going thru all the different storylines and seeing all the different scenarios and outcomes. Keep up the great work. I hope I can find more work from u on this site. Have a nice day :)
-- Freddie Whitfield on 4/5/2015 11:05:21 PM with a score of 0
read it again this time got a different ending much more satisfied.
-- nike on 4/2/2015 10:59:22 PM with a score of 0
just started reading on a whim first choose your own adventure story I've read since I was a kid and I don't regret it.
-- nike on 4/2/2015 10:45:18 PM with a score of 0
-- IGN on 4/1/2015 12:40:46 PM with a score of 0
I like it
-- Migz on 3/31/2015 10:26:00 PM with a score of 0
on 3/31/2015 7:29:59 PM with a score of 0
y u do dis?
-- henry on 3/31/2015 7:53:19 AM with a score of 0
i like the rape bit
-- guy on 3/31/2015 7:42:57 AM with a score of 0
I gotta say throughout all the paths the special vault was my favorite despite it being shorter than some of the others. A game I'll come back to.
on 3/31/2015 12:47:29 AM with a score of 0
I love the story and wanted to talk to you about possibly making this in to a sort of mod for fallout or a stand alone program.
-- Alcatraz on 3/30/2015 10:28:25 PM with a score of 0
Hated it, horrible writing, brb throwing up
-- John Johntington on 3/30/2015 12:16:33 AM with a score of 0
To be honest, I don't read much. However this story grasped my attention and kept me reading for hours on end.
-- AiR95 on 3/29/2015 5:08:42 PM with a score of 0
The plot moves at a great speed, and i had trouble putting it down. So far I've gotten epilogue 1 and 2, and I'm not stopping until I get the other two.
on 3/29/2015 3:26:41 PM with a score of 0
Awesome! I died, but who cares! This is AMAZING!!!
on 3/29/2015 6:00:36 AM with a score of 0
-- Randy bucket on 3/24/2015 7:43:42 PM with a score of 0
This was an awesome game! I spent several hours exploring the different paths, and eventually reaching the epilogue was exciting. All in all, the story was well written no matter what decisions you made, and wasn't one of those games that only felt complete if you followed the intended path. One note: I don't believe the game warranted an 8/8 rating for length; Maybe more like a 6.
on 3/22/2015 2:45:44 PM with a score of 0
beautifully deep story....or would I say game?
It can start as a choose your own path book, but then it becomes deeper, a whole lot deeper. It throws you into a moral pit and expects you to come back up, you'll find yourself living in vaults, engaging in diplomacy, establishing cities, fighting for your life and barely struggling to survive, or becoming a tyrant....the possibilities are endless
But then, you could suddenly die due to your stupidity, your choices also affect the personality of your character.
-- Saoud on 3/22/2015 11:49:39 AM with a score of 0
Very fun, although I wish it was longer
on 3/22/2015 2:40:28 AM with a score of 0
nice but too short
-- Asshole on 3/21/2015 6:50:46 PM with a score of 0
meh. Only one ending i think idk
-- anon on 3/20/2015 12:49:25 AM with a score of 0
If you got the ending I got it's worth it
-- Josh on 3/17/2015 11:15:34 PM with a score of 0
11/10, RIP in piece Eliza
-- jigglebottom on 3/10/2015 5:39:41 PM with a score of 0
EndMaster, you are honestly one of the greatest story-tellers on the planet. On par with Stephen King and Harper Lee. Although Ground Zero could use a little proof-reading (typos could sometimes interfere with the atmosphere of the tale), the main idea and story-line is one of the best ones I've read in a long time. Thank you, kind sir, for bestowing upon us this gift.
on 3/7/2015 9:36:04 PM with a score of 0
it was great
-- johnennis on 3/7/2015 7:41:16 PM with a score of 0
AA sounds a little like eclipse phase, good interactive story, One of the ends really got me and made me a bit restless for a few hours.
-- Benny on 3/7/2015 4:50:04 PM with a score of 0
-- slaps on 3/7/2015 10:00:19 AM with a score of 0
-- zxcnb on 3/7/2015 5:06:40 AM with a score of 0
It was an Awesome experience and i would have loved if it went on even longer!
on 3/4/2015 7:42:24 PM with a score of 0
Very realistic. Along with the f-bombs to go with it
on 3/4/2015 3:48:19 PM with a score of 0
Oh muh Guhd
on 3/4/2015 12:48:21 PM with a score of 0
this book is freaking AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!
-- thedman1403 on 3/3/2015 2:19:05 PM with a score of 0
Wow this game is great, my favorite proluage is the mutant one, it was realy amazing experence but now im sad becuase i have read it all :(
-- Vengfull on 3/1/2015 8:30:54 PM with a score of 0
I survived the explosion in the community bomb shelter then got out.
on 3/1/2015 10:07:31 AM with a score of 0
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on 2/28/2015 10:41:57 PM with a score of 0
It is an amazing story, but most of society isn't a homophobe, and it'd be cool if after the elevator scene you can bring Ron back and he's accepted into the community, it's an amazing story, really makes you think sometimes
-- Superblobby on 2/27/2015 2:12:39 PM with a score of 0
Great fun, when you get the happy ennding! Well written and interesting... I didn't even mind playing a guy, and I'm a girl. 8/8
-- RJ on 2/26/2015 6:10:33 AM with a score of 0
I find the story kind of depressing. I mean, when you have to make important decisions (ex: Picking Elliot or Ron) you can't pick, just able to pick if you vote or not. What the hell? Many storylines lead to death of you, and thats kinda sad. Good game, though, either way.
on 2/23/2015 11:17:50 AM with a score of 0
Perfect Game! Lol it's kinda unrealistic for the viruses but for other reasons it's awesome! Like the different endings, as you die 75% of the time. Plays around with your brain as well like if you play to get all endings... You die, you find your last friend and you die you die you die die die die party and die. Perfect crude humor included as well. Nice job on that as well as the derpy photos
on 2/19/2015 10:18:27 PM with a score of 0
Fucking awesome. So proud I lead my people to brighter days. Very fallout-esque.
-- Jake on 2/19/2015 2:37:58 AM with a score of 0
This game was awesome. So far the best one I've been able to find.
-- Mad Allen on 2/17/2015 2:41:37 AM with a score of 0
I like de part when he got bewbs
-- Sir Poopsiedoodles on 2/17/2015 1:59:55 AM with a score of 0
G8 m8 I'll r8. 8/8
-- Simeguy on 2/16/2015 10:06:13 AM with a score of 0
This is an excellent game. I got what I think is the best ending, where I re-made civilisation, and I was remembered a century after I died. It made me very happy, seeing that my choices affected the world so much (in the game) and I highly recommend this story game to anyone else.
on 2/14/2015 4:27:53 PM with a score of 0
That feeling when i finally reached the epilogue. there are so many ways to play this game, it's almost unbelievable. I really enjoyed the many choices i could make and all the so different endings. this is a definitive 8/8.
on 2/13/2015 2:36:22 PM with a score of 0
It was truly amazing! That was my first book like that, and I believe it was the best!
-- Xero on 2/12/2015 8:28:33 AM with a score of 0
Pretty well written and on the whole one of the better stories in this vein. Good work.
-- Matt on 2/11/2015 8:23:44 PM with a score of 0
The quality of the writing varies, but the storylines are prettt entertaining. Worth playing for sure.
-- bob on 2/11/2015 3:28:33 PM with a score of 0
Really good, my favorite ending is going to Becky's shelter
-- Online adventurer on 2/9/2015 8:59:57 PM with a score of 0
This is one of the best games i have seen from this website along with another of yours necromancer
-- Zephyr on 2/9/2015 3:44:06 PM with a score of 0
Nagyon jól kidolgozott történet.
-- D on 2/8/2015 4:11:17 PM with a score of 0
IT IS THE BEST
-- Jeremy on 2/8/2015 12:26:45 PM with a score of 0
Amazing Story Line, I liked all the endings
-- Alex on 2/8/2015 10:45:57 AM with a score of 0
Very good story, liked the level of interacting
-- Alex on 2/8/2015 6:38:58 AM with a score of 0
This book is full of bad words and is too inappropriate.
-- Margaret on 2/6/2015 7:34:57 PM with a score of 0
The best thing ever!! Everything is so detailed, just like a story! I really suggest you try this!!!
-- Whovian on 2/3/2015 1:14:28 PM with a score of 0
This is a great story! Although I pissed off the house and died.... People be nice to you're computer house!! ;D
-- Mallowleaf on 2/3/2015 12:43:27 PM with a score of 0
very expansive game, can't wait to find all the endings, the main characters personality was a little off putting however, sort of like an antihero, it all mixed together quite well, died with nina and jack after choosing to stay and fight
on 1/30/2015 8:24:54 AM with a score of 0
-- John on 1/29/2015 10:41:29 AM with a score of 0
uhh holy crup twas fun az hell
-- 7 pecks on 1/27/2015 5:27:02 PM with a score of 0
Fantastic story loved every minute of it
on 1/25/2015 9:42:49 PM with a score of 0
Really well thought out i like it
-- Zero19 on 1/25/2015 4:28:04 PM with a score of 0
The book was awesome. I am left with no words. Its amazing. Like wow.
-- Melvin Wolf on 1/19/2015 2:25:42 PM with a score of 0
THe story was good, but choosing to stay in your room will win, there was no real twist, I feel that there should have been a punishment for doing nothing.
on 1/16/2015 8:48:02 PM with a score of 0
I loved it! Great plot, etc. I gave this an 8.
on 1/16/2015 8:09:22 AM with a score of 0
I spent hours playing this game but it was worth it.
-- Mac on 1/16/2015 5:22:32 AM with a score of 0
150 years later, the world has changed.
But war? War never changes.
Story was pretty amazing. Well done! Definitely recommend, especially as a Fallout fan myself.
-- Abbendis on 1/13/2015 9:50:52 AM with a score of 0
This was some deep emotional stuff. An excellent read. Thanks for the hours spent with Ground Zero
-- Steve on 1/8/2015 7:22:17 PM with a score of 0
This was meaningful, massive, deep, how much can you say about a Fallout-like story. It's a story that actually makes me feel complete but also sad when the character finishes the Community Vault in the good ending after many years, it made me want to salute the frikkin'character even if Nina died and he had to...you might say that the story had so much choices and meanings that it made me feel deep and reflective... GREAT JOB!!!
on 1/8/2015 2:54:26 AM with a score of 0
I fucked kate then died, hell yea!
-- Billy Bob FuckFace on 1/5/2015 9:23:29 PM with a score of 0
I got so into this story. But the cliff hanger with your character not knowing what awaits him on his trip to find becky just made me want more. please make a part 2
-- Swag dog on 1/4/2015 2:39:18 PM with a score of 0
The story definitely seems to be interesting but as is a problem with characters in many books (or it may just be because of events during time skips) they do seem to act very slightly cheesy sometimes, but other wise the story is quite good. (The rating is because the story progresses a tad to fast and I sometimes find my eyes skipping over a few lines, and having zero clue whats going on, not really the authors fault, but something that could be improved.)
-- Alea on 1/3/2015 8:24:04 PM with a score of 0
This was amazing it was really cool the end i got when New Haven was built and was still being built when it ended with zachary. It took me a few tries for example i died and so did everyone but in the last 1 i lived a full life and New Haven lived on
-- Calza on 1/3/2015 1:50:01 AM with a score of 0
This is a really beautiful story, you get to see the evolution of your character. 10 out of 10
on 1/2/2015 2:17:27 PM with a score of 0
I have to say: this game at the start maybe seems that your character is an asshole but give the choices you make he will change (in a good or bad way) overall the game is eggselent :D
on 12/31/2014 2:18:23 AM with a score of 0
That story was beautiful, i love how u wrapped things and unlike other stories u genuinely took ur time. So thanks for that cool experience!
-- Queen on 12/29/2014 10:59:48 PM with a score of 0
Greatest story game...ever
on 12/28/2014 12:43:50 PM with a score of 0
this is a work of art.
-- cesar on 12/27/2014 8:50:19 PM with a score of 0
This comment is rated T for true, as anyone who hates this story is a neanderthal. This is the best fucking story on the site (Next to Homo Perfectus 8) and all you neanderthals that think this is "Too long" or that this is "Boring" or that it's "Bad" are fucking idiots. "needs a sequel" says one of the comments, well this is a fucking EndMaster story, it doesn't need a sequel. So all you degenerates who think this is bad are neanderthals and are incredibley stupid. Dumb retarded neanderthals.
on 12/24/2014 11:19:18 PM with a score of 0
eh it was ok, don't think people immediately jump to killing someone for supplies so that was slightly exaggerated
-- john on 12/24/2014 8:25:21 PM with a score of 0
Why'd I have to go and fuck Kate like that? O_o
on 12/22/2014 12:43:24 PM with a score of 0
-- joe on 12/19/2014 1:46:12 PM with a score of 0
eh, too much to read. Slim it down, and maybe ill like it better.
-- opipo on 12/16/2014 5:27:58 PM with a score of 0
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on 12/14/2014 5:44:35 PM with a score of 0
This was amazing <3
-- Sturky on 12/14/2014 7:05:35 AM with a score of 0
Amazing. Without the option to go back I fear for what every choice may end with, and seeing my actions come to fruition brings me great joy.
-- Brendan Harris on 12/13/2014 12:17:14 PM with a score of 0
Thank you for providing this interactive story. I have only played through once. It was interesting to me that playing it safe resulted in a bad outcome, so much like what led to the crisis to begin with. Kudos.
-- J. Baker on 12/12/2014 3:50:08 PM with a score of 0
This was really good! I would of liked to have seen a longer ending in which you travel to Becky's place (but then again the whole romance thing was kinda' creepy) and I would of also liked to have more control during the battle with the cat lady. Overall I really enjoyed it.
-- Chrisbo99 on 12/11/2014 5:46:52 PM with a score of 0
Really enjoyed both the purchasing of the shelter and the "going it on your own" I loved the AI involvement and the twist of Miranda hacking the systems instead of Shadow.
-- Matt on 12/11/2014 2:56:17 AM with a score of 0
i love this story
-- isaiah on 12/10/2014 10:40:56 AM with a score of 0
on 12/9/2014 7:57:08 PM with a score of 0
This story is awesome! I've only found epilogue #4 so far but I'll be reading on until I get to the rest of them as well. I love how much the story branches while still keeping similar characters and organizations in each arc of the story. Bravo!
-- Greg on 12/7/2014 3:59:50 AM with a score of 0
No matter what ending i get its awesome.
on 12/5/2014 2:03:16 PM with a score of 0
It was great; amazing story, though I do wish there was more of the "choose-your-own-story" part of it.
-- Daniel on 11/29/2014 1:10:56 AM with a score of 0
Awesome writing, but you already knew that
-- Chris on 11/28/2014 9:32:06 PM with a score of 0
I think it's a bit too short.
-- Zan on 11/28/2014 2:50:12 PM with a score of 0
Great. I loved it.
-- Deven on 11/25/2014 11:55:46 AM with a score of 0
My first play-through just done, and I feel like it wasn't so bad. It could have been better, longer, and more thrilling, but it was at the very least entertaining.
-- Jesse on 11/19/2014 11:49:19 PM with a score of 0
Okay, I've dumped a repulsive amount of time into this game getting every ending.
And I've loved every goddamned second of it. One of the greatest things I've ever found on the internet. You genuinely should be proud of yourself. Well done.
on 11/19/2014 1:19:32 AM with a score of 0
-- Michal on 11/16/2014 6:33:38 AM with a score of 0
thank you I loves these stories and I am actually reading thank you
-- gabriel on 11/14/2014 10:07:35 PM with a score of 0
I have to admit Finding this website I was hopeful and worried all at the same time. I love Choose your own adventures and have wanted to make my own at some point. Reading this right here proved to me that it can still be done very well and I will keep looking to make my own eventually.
-- Erik on 11/14/2014 12:42:25 PM with a score of 0
wasnt even a fuck nina option
-- SwaggyG on 11/12/2014 7:48:16 PM with a score of 0
-- Alana on 11/11/2014 8:28:54 PM with a score of 0
This was amazing great story you have to read it!!
-- zach on 11/11/2014 8:09:59 PM with a score of 0
Well.... THAT was a bit intense. I died pretty quickly, after I did in good with Kate. lol. I'm going to play again and this time I'm going to try and win!
-- PurplePhoenixFTW on 11/8/2014 1:56:27 PM with a score of 0
Wowow, that's so awesome. It's so real... I love it.
on 11/8/2014 4:20:27 AM with a score of 0
Sucks it ended on the first turn
-- Mom on 11/7/2014 9:29:39 PM with a score of 0
Cool story and writings bro.
on 11/7/2014 10:50:20 AM with a score of 0
Probably the best CYOA book/game I have had the pleasure of entertaining myself with. Followed every path there was... and oddly enough, the last path I was left with got me all the way to the end. I'm sort of glad it ended that way. Excellent work on this.
-- Kamakani on 11/6/2014 1:27:21 PM with a score of 0
it was an extrordinary game, but I did feel kind of forced into doing shit, and the fact that there was only two options for all the reading done was sort of dumb, but a good story and great game over all
-- ryan on 11/6/2014 3:47:00 AM with a score of 0
This is a must play.
-- Ludvig on 11/5/2014 9:10:50 AM with a score of 0
I really loved this. It was funny, serious, and encouraging. I thought the epilogue 2 was very very touching. If you liked this like me then I recommend "Necromancer" which is made by the same author.
-- Drew on 11/4/2014 3:28:28 PM with a score of 0
Great story well done
-- Bill Cosby on 11/3/2014 3:02:28 PM with a score of 0
Nice stories always loves these especially about super mecha soldiers and zombie and supernatural
-- Paul on 11/2/2014 8:40:59 PM with a score of 0
Really great story, I went through many times. I had the community suicide ending, the everyone dead and corrupted files ending, the Miranda virus ending, and the above ground death ending.
-- John on 11/2/2014 3:49:52 PM with a score of 0
This was one of the best interactive stories I have ever played! The story was fantastic, the choices were great! Overall I had a blast playing this wonderful story.
I hope that you consider making more of these and I wish you all the best in the future!
-- Macauley Crichton on 11/1/2014 3:15:46 PM with a score of 0
it was good
-- BOB on 10/26/2014 2:19:50 AM with a score of 0
Cool story bro.
Seriously though, it was a good story, though the incessant cussing is sort of a turnoff.
on 10/25/2014 1:46:18 AM with a score of 0
I began this story with the idea of it being a traditional post-apocalyptic story. Not at all, such a wonderful adventure and I truly felt involved and felt myself taking a little while longer to choose my next action. I loved every minute of it!
on 10/25/2014 12:04:39 AM with a score of 0
Like it a lot good twist turns kinda gave me that fallout feel
-- kyle haggie on 10/24/2014 5:50:28 AM with a score of 0
I dunno what else to say..I read all your story including at other website.Keep up the bloody good work.Always looking forward for your new story.Why dont you keep updating your old story?Add more ending and choice?Just a suggestion but I seriously pray and hope u do it^^
on 10/22/2014 4:45:17 AM with a score of 0
ya ya ya... I'm Lorde. This one was ok.
-- Lorde on 10/17/2014 11:33:09 AM with a score of 0
Love the game had fun with it but through out there were typos like jack became jake at the end and small stuff but other than that love love loved it.
-- Anthony on 10/14/2014 5:12:14 AM with a score of 0
Too many bad words. But excellent story otherwise!
-- Me on 10/11/2014 8:58:22 PM with a score of 0
Very nicely written and atmospheric. Great development in character through interactions with other well-created characters as well. The paths are very different so it's got a great replay value and the endings are fleshed out so they're not sudden, but rather satisfying. A definite must-play which left me wondering about what I'd do in the case of a nuclear war or apocalypse.
on 10/8/2014 9:53:01 PM with a score of 0
Overall, good story. Lots of run-on sentences though!
-- Vic on 10/7/2014 1:11:09 AM with a score of 0
wow the stories was just amazing, i realy enjoied the diferend endings that you could chose, great story,i`m glad i had the opportunity to read it, and keep up the good work ^^
-- joão on 10/6/2014 4:15:13 PM with a score of 0
Ill be honest, i like it. but there is a bit to much reading for my liking
-- Kyle on 10/5/2014 2:51:11 PM with a score of 0
Very well done with a lot of different story arcs depending on your choices. Dialogue is a little stilted at times and the F bomb is overused but these are very minor complaints.
-- Alex on 10/2/2014 11:03:06 AM with a score of 0
i was hopeing to explore the world in this but Miranda hacked me.
-- eddy on 9/28/2014 12:19:25 AM with a score of 0
The writing style is certainly... Interesting.
-- Anonymous on 9/27/2014 3:36:55 PM with a score of 0
I'm not sure why you think I'm pissed off at you Corvo.
Unless you're talking about listing hints, which doesn't mean anything to me since it isn't the first time somebody has done it in the comments section, in fact I've done it myself a few times for this very story.
on 9/27/2014 2:35:16 PM with a score of 0
I just got the other 3 epilogues. 'Epilogue 1' really surprised me. Completely based off of romance. Nice.
Btw, I'm gonna give a hint.
'Epilogue 4' is attained by going to the city.
'Epilogue 3' is attained by going to work.
'Epilogue 2' is attained by going to the community shelter.
And 'Epilogue 1' is attained by going to the special shelter.
I'm sorry, Endmaster, if I pissed you off, but I had a pretty damn hard time getting 'Epilogue 1', so I just wanted to throw some hints out there.
on 9/27/2014 12:57:56 PM with a score of 0
After I read Necromancer (Which, in my opinion, is the best story-game here), I was rather... Skeptical about this story, seeing as how Necromancer had you delve in-to the realistic characters and feel proud when you successfully changed the surroundings around you... Save, this was like in opposite order. The epic scale was also there, and it had me waste 4 hours just to get to the 'Epilogue 3'. I still haven't played the others epilogues, but my god.
As far as I could see, there were hardly ANY grammatical, or spelling errors. There was only, on average, one error per 2 pages, which I'd say is about 1 in every thousand words. Pretty damn impressive.
You also have things that simply pop out, and surprise you in various ways. Such as... Nah, I'm not gonna spoil it, but there were a couple things in there that got me, in the 'Epilogue 3' path alone.
Over-all, 8/8, would buy this on the iTunes store. You should try it, bro. And, now that I've tasted the great flavor this story had to offer, I'm gonna check some others... Hope they're just as epic.
on 9/26/2014 5:42:34 PM with a score of 0
Very good story and the pictures really help set the tone.
-- Noah on 9/24/2014 6:03:07 PM with a score of 0
Man thats fucked up
-- Karim on 9/24/2014 11:05:20 AM with a score of 0
Cool bro add zombiez next time
-- Bacon on 9/21/2014 1:07:38 PM with a score of 0
cool plot and a nice epilogue! just like most of your works! :)
-- shayan on 9/20/2014 12:54:17 PM with a score of 0
I really enjoyed this!! I loved the fallout theme and it also sort of had a walking dead / road warrior feel as well. Very good. Would love to see the story continued further!!!!!!!
-- Michael on 9/17/2014 11:36:05 PM with a score of 0
Totally love the story... my character finally resting in the end always bring a tear in my eyes
-- jacob on 9/17/2014 9:06:16 AM with a score of 0
I think the writing was fantastic, and the variety of choices and the extremely varying paths the story can take took a lot of work, I can tell. My only gripe is the main character. It seems like (at least in the routes I played through) he's a massive asshole, even where he has no cause to be. And I have no problem with swearing in stories; I've used it in plenty of my own, but I feel like there was a swear every other sentence in this story, which for me, is pushing it a bit, almost to the point of disturbance. But that's my only gripe. The positives far outweigh the negatives in this story, so fantastic job.
on 9/16/2014 7:38:17 PM with a score of 0
one word, terrific
-- josh on 9/16/2014 3:57:34 PM with a score of 0
This is great. Very reminiscent of Fallout. I don't think it needs to be 7/8, however. I didn't see any explicit sex, or overly gory violence.
on 9/14/2014 8:31:35 PM with a score of 0
Love a good survival tale
-- Jason Boone on 9/14/2014 4:53:25 PM with a score of 0
So many possible things!
-- sleepless reeader on 9/13/2014 6:39:38 AM with a score of 0
this is frikkin amazing , round 2 begins now!
-- christian harris on 9/10/2014 12:38:08 AM with a score of 0
Great game! Very interesting and I am going back through to find another ending.
on 9/9/2014 6:51:23 PM with a score of 0
I don't like reading but this I could keep on reading.
-- Jacob on 9/9/2014 1:04:28 AM with a score of 0
Well... I just got eaten by barbarians after GLaDOS kicked me out of a bomb shelter so... that was pretty cool.
on 9/8/2014 9:37:26 PM with a score of 0
Interesting story. The main character's set and self-serving personality was both appropriate and different. As usual, now that I've found one epilogue, I'll have to return to the apocalypse to find the others-the mark of a talented author and solid writing. Well done! Thanks!
on 9/8/2014 4:39:31 PM with a score of 0
got about 3 choices in before the main character raped a girl. oh, but don't worry, she ended up "liking it." i don't care that it's fictional, there's really no situation where that line of thinking is acceptable. no thanks. excuse me while i vomit all over the writer's delusions. can't fathom why this is one of the sites top stories
on 9/7/2014 12:44:56 AM with a score of 0
Could have been expanded... I especially want to know what happens after I leave the shelter. Also, did the main character have to be so rude?
on 9/6/2014 12:38:28 PM with a score of 0
My first game on here and it was amazing! I felt as though I was in some sort of weird Fallout text based universe. I really recommend it!
on 9/5/2014 10:37:34 AM with a score of 0
I just played it again and got another epilogue. This is one of my favorite stories.
on 9/3/2014 7:14:50 PM with a score of 0
I liked it, I got one of the special endings.
on 9/2/2014 8:46:49 PM with a score of 0
the main character is mean. good game
on 9/1/2014 3:04:33 PM with a score of 0
very cool game, I liked it a lot. kinda short as i got a shortish ending but the first few time I played it I tried to be all Uber Hacker on it and died, but this time i finally left the shelter
on 8/31/2014 7:46:40 PM with a score of 0
Wow...absolutely brilliant. Just wow. Five post-apocalyptic survivors, conversing purely by internet? What a brilliant recipe. Love the ending where (spoiler!) you leave your shelter to try and find RockerChick20.
on 8/30/2014 6:34:50 PM with a score of 0
definitely harder than I expected but it was good, except for the fact that the character is a complete asshole
-- alex on 8/27/2014 4:20:47 PM with a score of 0
So fucking good :)
worth a read
on 8/26/2014 7:29:55 PM with a score of 0
A great adventure, and with so many well written paths that intertwine its hard not to become engrossed. If you have played once you will want to do it again, because it only gets better each time. My thanks to EndMaster for taking the time to create this rich playground and the staff at chooseyourstory.com for makeing this posable.
-- HairyHeartsmith on 8/23/2014 1:12:07 PM with a score of 0
I escaped the shelter! Finally haha
on 8/22/2014 10:44:45 AM with a score of 0
Would ordinarily be eight out of eight, but it was SO linear.
on 8/21/2014 7:14:05 PM with a score of 0
I have gotten all the epilogs so I can lay this game to rest
on 8/21/2014 7:13:01 AM with a score of 0
*This comment may contain spoilers* (it does) Wow, once again another great written story but I felt the whole lone wolf theme ruined some potential choices but other than that no complaints. I believe my favorite ending was becoming the mutant emperor with the great legacy and all.
-- Jay on 8/18/2014 8:30:56 AM with a score of 0
Enjoyed it! Thank you.
-- :) on 8/18/2014 7:00:35 AM with a score of 0
I liked it
-- The Dude on 8/17/2014 2:44:30 PM with a score of 0
This was the first game I read on this site, and the one that made me want to write my own story. This story is freaking nice as fuck.
on 8/17/2014 12:46:47 PM with a score of 0
on 8/15/2014 10:38:32 PM with a score of 0
It was a fantastic game 11/10
on 8/14/2014 8:30:14 AM with a score of 0
Its ok I guess, not the best...
-- NU guy on 8/12/2014 12:27:18 AM with a score of 0
Wow, I really enjoyed this. This was my first time using this site and I spent hours on this story. Keep up the good work.
-- Mali on 8/9/2014 6:53:47 PM with a score of 0
good options but sometimes not enough information about the surrounding things, (for example how many man/soldiers/mutants) or the fact that you live in the city!
but that might just be me since i grew up in a small town.
-- CD on 8/8/2014 5:19:53 PM with a score of 0
Tried to pull off an Eddard Stark, got my girlfriend and me killed. Died Laughing 10/10 would rebel again.
on 8/8/2014 5:48:43 AM with a score of 0
Incredible game and wonderfully told narrative that keeps you going up until the very end, very sweet in parts and very sentimental in others I thoroughly enjoyed my experience playing this game I would love to see more games like this.
-- Brandon Sands on 8/4/2014 9:23:13 PM with a score of 0
I liked the multiple endings for the choices you made at the beginning. It could have used a lot more choices though-there was a lot of text and not as much actions you could do (being in the shelter opened slightly more choices.)
-- Kat on 8/4/2014 7:49:10 PM with a score of 0
All hail the glorious Atom Alliance!
-- Atom on 8/4/2014 11:44:05 AM with a score of 0
on 7/31/2014 4:59:53 AM with a score of 0
Perfect. Every scenario is full of suspense and emotion. Very well excited and brilliant!
on 7/30/2014 6:41:14 PM with a score of 0
I loved it! The ambient was great and the characters really grow on you. I think I'll replay this over and over to see all the endings. :D
on 7/24/2014 10:20:27 PM with a score of 0
it was oretty damn good, that is all.
-- Gozno on 7/24/2014 10:02:33 AM with a score of 0
This is an excellent work of art honestly. I just wish the ending was a bit different. Maybe after killing Elliot the guy could've controlled the chaos and announced himself as leader. Either way, the story was entertaining all the same. Thank you.
-- Paris on 7/23/2014 10:03:28 PM with a score of 0
i like it alot
on 7/23/2014 1:20:44 AM with a score of 0
This story's pretty amazing and i loved all the different ways it could go. I went through it a few different times and it absolutely amazed me how each decision braanched off into a whole unique and well-written new story. I haven't tried every desicion yet but I plan too soon :)
-- Sam on 7/18/2014 12:07:42 AM with a score of 0
-- furry friend on 7/17/2014 10:14:00 PM with a score of 0
I think I got the best ending, actually... And really pleased with the way it wrapped up! I do wish it were a lot longer, but seeing the shelter and people advance and mature after the time skips was really involving. Excellent work! :D
on 7/13/2014 5:28:07 PM with a score of 0
Ok man i also had 2 endings n all i can say bout endmasters stories they r pessimistic as all hell but wtf id fun plating it
-- ni on 7/12/2014 11:41:28 PM with a score of 0
all right, this is like fallout mixed with zombie survival guide (the orgy party at least), but good job there !
on 7/9/2014 8:30:31 PM with a score of 0
I have gotten 2 of the 4 epilogue ending and I'm still trying any help for me to get the other ones
-- priryan123 on 7/7/2014 10:49:14 PM with a score of 0
I don't like how you automatically start off male? I would like an option to choose your gender.
-- Nano on 7/4/2014 7:34:37 PM with a score of 0
I loved it. This is probably the best story game I have played yet. It's realistic, open minded, and quite descriptive. I look forward to checking out your other ones
on 7/1/2014 3:23:04 PM with a score of 0
Man, that was AWESOME! Seriously, the best game I've played so far! Well...A little behind Call of Duty and Grand Theft Auto, but still, an amazing game! =)
-- Mike on 6/27/2014 1:28:56 AM with a score of 0
Good... Like the great Fallout series :D
-- Peter on 6/24/2014 9:20:18 AM with a score of 0
6/8 played it again and went for the public shelter didn't kill anyone and then had the jane kid let me out
-- hunter on 6/24/2014 1:24:00 AM with a score of 0
8/8 I beat it also headed for becky and I like the fallout references and the idea is from fallout huh?
-- hunter on 6/24/2014 1:09:47 AM with a score of 0
This was amazing I loved how deep the story went and how it managed to reference other branches of choices. Like the Elliot thing and how it's referenced while you are atomic alliance officer.
-- Adomaster on 6/20/2014 4:31:29 PM with a score of 0
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-- Misty on 6/15/2014 2:43:49 AM with a score of 0
I've been sitting down for 2 hours just trying to get a better ending than the other endings I've been getting and I'm pretty much satisfied with the ending I got. I do wish Paul, Mark, and Xavier didn't have to die though...
on 6/11/2014 8:25:00 PM with a score of 0
If at all possible, could you continue the Becky plot after the reader makes it out of the shelter. A journey to find her would be neat. :)
on 6/10/2014 5:49:08 AM with a score of 0
Wow just wow that ending was well played. Eliza ending
on 6/8/2014 3:00:23 PM with a score of 0
Not bad. :-)
on 6/4/2014 1:09:28 PM with a score of 0
I'm really not sure if I got a/the good ending, is escaping with your life and family good?
on 6/1/2014 4:31:06 PM with a score of 0
After an hour and 24 minutes, many restarts and "damn, wrong choice!" moments. I finally reached the best ending. (I think)
All I'm going to say is that this was a fucking fantastic adventure.
-- Rodrigo on 5/31/2014 4:27:27 AM with a score of 0
Loved this book, I recommend it to anyone who can read.
-- Nuke Warrens on 5/27/2014 2:39:33 AM with a score of 0
Interesting characters. I tried guessing what would happen next. Good story.
on 5/26/2014 11:15:34 PM with a score of 0
Wow. This is amazing. I started 5 hours ago. I just got all of the endings. I loved it. A few minor spelling mistakes, but it didn't diminish the experience at all.
on 5/26/2014 8:20:08 PM with a score of 0
One of my favorite stories on the site. Great job.
on 5/24/2014 9:58:44 PM with a score of 0
Great game! Most of it was very very gripping and kept me interested in the story. I did notice some miss spells but not too much. Harry may have personally annoyed me but that may have been what you were going for with his character. By the way, I really enjoyed the special shelter story line. It was simply fantastic. I loved how the characters were living in seperate areas and talked through some sort of chat room. It was very interesting and cool! Just like this game.
on 5/22/2014 1:17:44 AM with a score of 0
Very nice story, it very much felt as though I was truly there and
Even had me feeling guilty at times. (Ok not that big of a spoiler) I wish it had been a bit longer, but perhaps I just got a shorter ending.
-- Rickles on 5/19/2014 9:13:50 PM with a score of 0
This was a wonderfully written story!!! It took me a while to find an epilogue, but I liked the other endings as well.
on 5/18/2014 11:10:57 AM with a score of 0
on 5/17/2014 5:37:32 PM with a score of 0
This story left me so wet
-- Doug SMith on 5/15/2014 3:14:05 PM with a score of 0
-- Boericson on 5/14/2014 7:54:59 PM with a score of 0
Best story I've read (played?) so far. Still working on getting epilogue one.
on 5/13/2014 2:20:26 PM with a score of 0
That was great
-- omegaman23 on 5/10/2014 1:10:08 PM with a score of 0
Amazing story. Got all four endings. Especially loved the mutant ending.
-- wriju on 5/10/2014 6:16:39 AM with a score of 0
Another great game from Endmaster. Very detailed. Plenty of "true" endings...just kinda wish you could've had that threesome. JK. 8/8
on 5/9/2014 11:49:43 PM with a score of 0
Absolutely loved the ending! The environment and atmosphere described through some of the many choices (a lot which don't lead to a dead end, which I in general hate) really gives off the whole apocalyptic/new world theme. I recommend this to ALL who love long-lasting stories/games. And to you endmaster, you did yet another great story! (Keep the work up!)
on 5/8/2014 11:23:30 PM with a score of 0
Really good game! There are many endings, much more detailed than other stories. The author really spent time on this story. No wonder its on the front page! I would give this 10/10!
on 5/7/2014 3:46:22 AM with a score of 0
Really good I felt really proud at the end when Sirus was speaking in the bar! Amazing
-- Wilko on 5/2/2014 5:31:44 PM with a score of 0
ye have an amazing game here! the "chat room" speech should've been spaced out between each person's individual comments to make it easier to read & easier on the person's eyes, & it would certainly help to get the choice of which options to take into the special shelter & to have an armory in it with the choice of what to take from it if going outside (& this can also lead to advancing the storyline beyond the shelter), & it would've been better to have more in depth interactions (& quantity of them) between the other "chat room" people. other than this, AMAZING storyline & after I finished it felt like a great accomplishment & having the feeling of just finishing a long epic story that spans lifetimes in a small story (very few can make a story that becomes epic & this certainly has become such).
-- James L. Taylor on 4/30/2014 10:29:31 PM with a score of 0
It was to long to read so I didn't and I just clicked on random things but then I felt bad and gave you an ok reading and it did want to leave my email. Also it was a cool web site but I saw better and I also saw worst so it was ok that's why I gave you an ok rate a four
-- Fleeb on 4/30/2014 1:51:58 PM with a score of 0
Amazing! By far one of the very best story games on the site.
-- MeisterGull on 4/30/2014 10:18:18 AM with a score of 0
Great Game/Story! The daughter and father bit was pretty surprising and cool at the same. :) 10/10
on 4/29/2014 9:17:59 AM with a score of 0
It was everything I expected and more, a true masterpiece where none of your choices can be said to be "bad". Dual morality, interesting character development, great touches of realism, and a glimpse at human nature. The only "bad" thing about it would be typos, but it still did not stop me from enjoying myself for about a couple of hours now. I'd be happy to help fix those spelling mistakes to make this story the best it can be
-- WenchBoy on 4/26/2014 11:18:51 AM with a score of 0
I'm italian but it didn't block me from discovering a great story!
-- Ste on 4/24/2014 10:10:10 AM with a score of 0
Very good story!
on 4/23/2014 1:52:08 AM with a score of 0
This is quite a game. I loved the realistic turn of events when I died.
on 4/22/2014 5:20:26 PM with a score of 0
on 4/22/2014 4:49:02 PM with a score of 0
So many paths to take, so many different story lines. I loved it.
on 4/21/2014 10:31:20 AM with a score of 0
It didn't tell me if I died or lived just that I had a place to go to!!
-- AgentZ2 on 4/20/2014 8:37:55 PM with a score of 0
You-re good. Keep going.
on 4/16/2014 9:54:29 AM with a score of 0
Don't attempt another of these stories. Nope. Don't.
-- Emmet on 4/16/2014 6:36:05 AM with a score of 0
This was interesting and I enjoyed it a lot. Keep up the good work. ;)
-- wgree84 on 4/14/2014 10:22:05 PM with a score of 0
I love the images from fallout!
-- Aldubaran on 4/12/2014 6:40:23 PM with a score of 0
Yet again A Masterpiece by the EndMaster. We salute your story telling abilities!
on 4/10/2014 6:37:13 AM with a score of 0
ChooseYourStory/Ground Zero was an amazing interactive story/game. I thought it it was a pretty creative way to get the player to feel empathy towards their character and immersed in the story.
-- Jeanetter on 4/7/2014 5:36:34 PM with a score of 0
Just awesome. Im new to this genre and this was prwtty intense.
-- Carlos on 4/5/2014 1:50:20 PM with a score of 0
Flawless, if some plots weren't written as far as they could have gone. Lovely game. Lovely story.
-- The Colonel on 4/4/2014 12:41:20 PM with a score of 0
Almost every scene has him dying...
-- lol on 4/3/2014 8:27:18 PM with a score of 0
This story is VERY well written, has a nice plot and interesting outcomes to various choices. Although i died many times (about 6) i really loved my epilogue (2). The story ends very nicely and even when you die without an epilogue it's still cool. I would recommend Ground Zero to anyone!
on 3/28/2014 10:56:36 PM with a score of 0
Really loved it, played it multiple times to get different endings and they were all really interesting and intricate. I always enjoy a good post apocalyptic story. A plus was that there were some similarities to fallout, love that game. Make more stories!
on 3/27/2014 9:57:53 AM with a score of 0
on 3/26/2014 11:10:17 PM with a score of 0
The ending where you get eaten by dogs needs to be taken out and you need to make it to the city, and other stuff, die in a shoutout when you found a gun and you kill 10+ people before tyou die, the rest of the details is up to you
-- Nicholas on 3/25/2014 11:50:00 AM with a score of 0
Great game! Sad when Marina dies and all.
-- Pleier on 3/23/2014 8:03:45 AM with a score of 0
Great stuff; I'm impressed how many branching storylines there were. Lots of the "dead ends" have a lot of plot behind them, and overall it's very well-written. If only the whole thing were a bit longer!
on 3/21/2014 3:04:33 PM with a score of 0
Not bad, but too short.
-- global on 3/21/2014 7:58:58 AM with a score of 0
love the game especially ending,
on 3/19/2014 10:56:54 AM with a score of 0
I liked it alot... I wish I knew if he managed to make it to Becky's place!! I love a good love interest! Becky was very compelling and made a perfect love interest/romance subplot.
on 3/17/2014 3:13:41 PM with a score of 0
I wished the story had an option to work with the gov and salvage the situation.
-- jackoustop on 3/17/2014 1:59:03 AM with a score of 0
Wow!!!! This game is brilliant!! I don't understand how the author was able to create so many differnt storylines and twists, but every choice has a consequence and each time the story plays out differently. I've Been playing for about an hour now, restarting the game each time I reach the end, and each time I make a different decision, the events that follow continue to surprise me and keep me interested. It has happy, sad, scary and sweet/feel-good endings and twists, and I am in awe of this game and the author who has such a creative and vivid imagination. I thought that "The Walking Dead" game was amazing, but it has nothing on this game. I've only played out about 20 scenarios and there are still a couple more that I haven't tried. Will be doing that for the rest of the night :) Thank you for this game!!!!
-- LostInParadise on 3/15/2014 10:10:34 PM with a score of 0
I read every single outcome. Epic story line.
-- Mike on 3/14/2014 7:30:07 PM with a score of 0
Epic story bro!
-- Tyler on 3/13/2014 10:49:39 PM with a score of 0
It's a great game. I recommend it!
on 3/9/2014 7:10:10 PM with a score of 0
on 3/9/2014 12:36:12 PM with a score of 0
THIS IS SUUUUUUU Awesome And Fun I like it!! But IT was Hard too
on 3/7/2014 11:30:43 PM with a score of 0
I love this game! I love how it's so long and the writing is so good. I'm starting to think you are actually an author.
on 3/7/2014 10:33:20 AM with a score of 0
This is. The best of any of End!asters creation.
on 3/5/2014 12:58:01 PM with a score of 0
Man, i had a lovley time reading this book, my ending was where i died with my robot. how many endings are there?
on 3/5/2014 1:36:17 AM with a score of 0
Not a very good plot and REALLY innaproperiate. Besides that it's really good. I would rate it a 5.
on 3/4/2014 4:50:44 PM with a score of 0
-slow clap- Excellent game. You never disappoint, Endmaster.
on 2/25/2014 10:01:19 AM with a score of 0
I enjoyed it a lot, very much like a modern day sci-fi World war two setting, it was majestic in it's own little way, and definetly had that spark to make it amazing.
on 2/21/2014 5:44:56 AM with a score of 0
Wow... I finally completed what I'm sure is the "winning" ending and I've gotta say... It was amazing! In all honesty though, the other branches in the beginning all kinda sucked. They all seemed extremely short in comparison and no matter what, you were screwed either way. But I guess that's how nuclear apocalypse works right? But never mind that! Overall, it's one of my favorites! Great storygame! Play it or live in eternal ignorance!
on 2/20/2014 3:39:08 PM with a score of 0
Good first run
-- Sam on 2/20/2014 3:18:18 AM with a score of 0
Play it, its amazing, no other words necessary.
-- bob on 2/14/2014 6:00:16 AM with a score of 0
Great story! I got the bad endings, but after i tried a few hundred times, i finally got a good ending!
Keep up the good work!
-- The survivor on 2/11/2014 2:35:09 PM with a score of 0
Absolutely brilliant. I wish I could give it a higher rating.
on 1/29/2014 2:34:34 AM with a score of 0
Over all, after playing the game several times over time, I'd have to give this a 6. It's a lot of fun, and well worth the time spent on it, but there are too many endings that could have been better. So many things are left undone, and in the end, you really only have a few choices to make during each scene. Sure, it branches out a lot over-all, but when you only have so many options. It could have been much, much bigger than it was.
on 1/24/2014 4:06:16 PM with a score of 0
mad fun, yo
-- yes on 1/23/2014 9:27:11 AM with a score of 0
Horrible game all you do is stick to urself no matter wat u choose... oh and take others bullshit
on 1/19/2014 7:24:36 PM with a score of 0
just finished this my second time, first time i got ep 2, this time ep 3, i really enjoyed this game and wish for you to continue there storys in the future! haha thanks for a good read
on 1/19/2014 8:03:27 AM with a score of 0
My ending was epic, mechanics, well written a very thrilling story I loved it
on 1/17/2014 8:12:52 AM with a score of 0
I loved it through and through. Very detailed. I couldn't help but play all the different paths.
on 1/12/2014 6:44:50 AM with a score of 0
I have played it so many times. I love all the endings.
-- Cecelia on 1/6/2014 3:20:19 AM with a score of 0
Okay, I failed. In my last comment, I thought this was somebody other than EndMaster. I failed so freaking hard. XP
on 1/5/2014 3:53:45 PM with a score of 0
Hehe. It took me three months, but I finally got an epilogue. XD
Keep this up, Author, and you may even come to surpass EndMaster for my favorite text-based game creator!
on 1/5/2014 3:51:24 PM with a score of 0
This is awesome! I died the first time, tried again, & it made my night :)
-- Lwis on 1/5/2014 4:07:37 AM with a score of 0
A good fun game with a good story line. Wish you could lie a little more thought.
on 1/3/2014 11:03:04 AM with a score of 0
on 1/2/2014 10:22:50 PM with a score of 0
Feel sad for xavier
on 12/31/2013 3:47:55 AM with a score of 0
Woah I just got all 4 epilouges! I give you a 5 just for the length and apparent hard work put into this. But in all seriousness this was an amazing story. Though some of the deaths seemed to occur through random "accidents" or coincidences, it really only needed to follow the simple logic; pussy out now, you're going to pay for it in the future. And LOGIC!
on 12/20/2013 11:47:12 PM with a score of 0
Holy shit, this main character is a psycho
-- Dano the mano on 12/19/2013 4:24:06 AM with a score of 0
This game was very well made, numerous outcomes that make you want to replay for more.
on 12/16/2013 12:42:46 AM with a score of 0
I now feel that I could survive a nuclear apocalypse. And also get laid by a hot girl named Nina :P
on 12/15/2013 3:08:26 PM with a score of 0
W00T finished on my first try with a good ending
on 12/2/2013 9:54:41 PM with a score of 0
I died. With eliza. Not with Becky and shitting Miranda. Wow.
-- RabbitSeason on 12/2/2013 6:10:19 AM with a score of 0
Asome!best game in a long time:) Ends without any warning, i get a map, go to the surface and go on my way to find the stupid place, then ends randomly, good game dont get me wrong.
-- cool game on 11/26/2013 10:09:12 PM with a score of 0
Interesting, the author must have a pretty weird sense of humor.
on 11/25/2013 9:01:43 PM with a score of 0
Loved this story, one of the best I've read here
on 11/24/2013 11:02:39 AM with a score of 0
beautifull I just remained in history for changin the world to the mutants side...
on 11/23/2013 5:33:37 AM with a score of 0
Excellent story man.
-- CordozarF on 11/23/2013 3:37:38 AM with a score of 0
-- sara on 11/22/2013 1:04:27 PM with a score of 0
Pretty good fun to play
-- Zac on 11/16/2013 8:42:26 PM with a score of 0
Yup, this story took me to another place alright.
on 11/16/2013 12:42:28 PM with a score of 0
Nice work: great atmosphere and writing. Good replay value (going to replay it now).
-- notled on 11/14/2013 1:40:34 PM with a score of 0
Loved it, very Fallout-y, hence the Fallout icons on almost every page lol. Definitely recommending this to a few people.
-- ThatBassistK on 11/11/2013 10:47:51 PM with a score of 0
spend hours on this one truly a masterpiece!
-- Däniel on 11/11/2013 2:03:40 PM with a score of 0
Love your work immensely, loved playing as the evil bastard in the story and always put an evil grin to my face, hahaha. Loved it and hope to see something good as this!
-- Darthy on 11/11/2013 6:44:52 AM with a score of 0
f-ing amazing. The special endings were generally very touching and held more interest than any of the old CYOA books i ever read as a kid. Should be a published author.
on 11/8/2013 3:18:21 AM with a score of 0
-- cvb v on 10/31/2013 10:24:03 AM with a score of 0
Man im a jerk in this story
-- Pugboy on 10/30/2013 11:53:35 PM with a score of 0
It was a very good game with choices that felt meaningful. It was very interesting to see how the situation changed and developed over the course of years.
However, I did sometimes feel that the actions of the main character were forced, such as when he votes for Ron or when he shoots himself in one ending. It would have been nice to have some sort of choice in these situations.
on 10/30/2013 11:31:33 AM with a score of 0
I mean i can only imagine how long it takes yo make these but it wasnt as long as i hoped for it to be.
-- LegitPickles on 10/28/2013 5:43:03 PM with a score of 0
It was great! Write more similar to this! :)
on 10/25/2013 6:55:30 PM with a score of 0
It was fun. I enjoyed it.
-- Nick on 10/25/2013 5:50:43 PM with a score of 0
So I created this account today because I found this story :)
on 10/24/2013 4:55:49 PM with a score of 0
Which one didn't you get? I'll give a general guide since I'm not sure which one you're trying to find.
One is in the Experimental Shelter (Turn off the net and talk to someone much closer)
One is in the Community Shelter (Develop more of a community spirit)
One is in the Compound (Stick with Marina and eventually become more of a leader)
One is in the City (Head to the city and embrace mutant destiny)
on 10/22/2013 8:10:12 PM with a score of 0
Great game overall. But some of the choices end up leading you to die without any warning whatsoever. It's feels like you just need to be lucky to end up picking the right one.
Also sometime the cusing seems a bit too much.
Anyway so far I've finished 3 of the 4 endings but I can't seem to find the last one. Could someone give me some sort of hint or clue to get all the epilogues pls Ty. :D
on 10/22/2013 12:32:47 PM with a score of 0
Very cool and addictive storygame
on 10/22/2013 10:20:16 AM with a score of 0
on 10/21/2013 8:14:02 PM with a score of 0
The protagonist has no charisma or sympathetic traits whatsoever. He's just a foul-mouthed obnoxious asshole, and I didn't care if he lived or died.
-- Some Guy 1294 on 10/20/2013 9:17:16 PM with a score of 0
This is such an amazing story!!!
on 10/16/2013 11:01:25 PM with a score of 0
Great story! I love it! :D
on 10/16/2013 1:43:11 PM with a score of 0
Probably the best CYOA story I have ever read
on 10/14/2013 6:39:29 PM with a score of 0
Great story, as soon as I saw they named the town "New Haven" I went "really? wow" I love how it had a combination of Fallout and Borderlands. I wish in the experimental shelter you would go to the surface and find a pet or something.
-- Harmphrey on 10/12/2013 8:50:37 PM with a score of 0
Really good storyline.
on 10/11/2013 9:29:00 PM with a score of 0
it is a interesting gamebook, but the ending didn't say what happened after the character and his wife and kid after they went to the surface. Did they make it or what?
-- Lucas on 10/10/2013 6:20:40 PM with a score of 0
Is there any way to give this a 9?
on 10/10/2013 10:22:19 AM with a score of 0
Very well done. Way too much unnecessary cussing though, but other than that, nice job.
on 10/8/2013 6:06:48 PM with a score of 0
Fantastic game, one of the best on the site for sure.
on 10/2/2013 11:33:19 AM with a score of 0
Woo hoo, I get to play as a homophobic asshole that makes all these terrible decisions I'm between the actual decisions you get to make!
-- Some guy on 10/2/2013 2:34:35 AM with a score of 0
Love the story's in this game and love see more story games like this
on 9/28/2013 11:36:58 AM with a score of 0
Was an interesting result, but the guy was a total jerk
-- rowena on 9/26/2013 7:45:34 PM with a score of 0
actually brought me to tears....well done..very well done
on 9/24/2013 11:20:24 AM with a score of 0
It's a crime this isn't 8/8.
on 9/22/2013 8:25:45 AM with a score of 0
Very entertaining story! Bravo! Now then, if ONLY I would've bought one of those bomb shelters...lol ;-)
-- Maurice Cohen on 9/17/2013 7:14:43 PM with a score of 0
Very interesting! However, I'd like to decide whether I start shooting people or not...otherwise, I loved it!
-- MZ on 9/15/2013 11:37:35 PM with a score of 0
Really Really good
-- Sean on 9/9/2013 3:35:37 PM with a score of 0
great.. really really great. 10/8
on 9/9/2013 1:24:10 PM with a score of 0
Amazing story! Was able to play again and again without getting bored.
on 9/3/2013 9:32:22 PM with a score of 0
Great story, thoroughly enjoyed it and was almost engulfed in the story. It's so good, I may consider playing it again. :D
on 9/2/2013 11:24:03 PM with a score of 0
Really well thought out storyline. I've gone through every possible path. I really like how the stories fit into each other. The reuse of characters, like Damon the thug. All the epilogues really give you a sense of closure on that particular story arc. By far the best story I've read so far.
-- Al on 9/2/2013 11:10:38 PM with a score of 0
that was a fuckin awesome story but it could have not gone by that quickly. Also it should have eventually gone out to a city or something where you have to make some hard decisions but i guess thats for the advanced stories.
-- Gswagger97 on 8/31/2013 11:10:21 PM with a score of 0
This is currently my favorite game, lets see how well Eternal II comes out though =)
on 8/31/2013 9:15:16 AM with a score of 0
Absolutely fantastic! Well-written and thrilling!
on 8/30/2013 5:52:23 PM with a score of 0
-- jake on 8/28/2013 12:47:24 PM with a score of 0
I like the long perspective, and I like how many different personalities the same person can develope into is shown. Great potential for heroism, villainy, and leadership all wrapped up in one package.
Personally I enjoy the heroism most, but each perspective is very well done, and there's multiple routes for all tastes.
on 8/27/2013 9:26:27 AM with a score of 0
-- Dylan on 8/23/2013 8:35:10 PM with a score of 0
There are 4 epilogues.
on 8/16/2013 6:46:22 AM with a score of 0
Good as usual. How many epilogues are there, anyways?
on 8/15/2013 7:01:36 PM with a score of 0
Great game, once again, Endmaster has risen to the occasion, and preformed superbly.
Noticeably not as many options with this one compared to Eternal...
(although he could have made this one first, not sure) I managed to find 3 of the four endings, and have to say I am slightly sad that I wasnt able to get an ending for both the Special Bunker or for the Insane murderer/GangLeader... Which is a shame, but I guess the endings main theme is to see what impact you left on the world through your offspring... *sigh*
My first play through ended up with me heading out to meet my fellow survivor in a specialized bunker.... Like how open ended everything was, although when playing I felt that it was more than just a little inspired by the Fallout series... not that that's bad or anything, just an observation. (although the pictures were nice!)
Had to rate it slightly lower than Eternal for the Endings...
-- Who really cares? on 8/14/2013 5:40:04 AM with a score of 0
Very good story. It takes a couple questionable turns, but all-in-all it was a fun ride! The character dialogue, especially in the beginning, is very real. It made me feel as if I was actually reading a conversation between two very real people. Without spoiling anything, after the exposition, the characters become pretty confined. And I mean that literally. I found myself wishing for more of an adventure, but I highly recommend this story.
on 8/13/2013 4:02:13 PM with a score of 0
Well written, as far as I could see there was no spelling mistakes or anything and more important it was extremely fun, thank you for writing it and giving me the chance to play it.
on 8/13/2013 1:09:30 AM with a score of 0
I went through every option after i got the best ending with the epilogue. This is a great read for newcomers!
-- Ecass on 8/12/2013 9:55:25 PM with a score of 0
Amazing. Just, amazing.
-- Anon on 8/11/2013 12:28:10 PM with a score of 0
Funny, well written and original! C'est très bon! Spent sooo much time searching for the four epilogues, the hours were worth it :) 8/8
-- Kwism1127 on 8/8/2013 7:41:49 AM with a score of 0
dear god that was fantastic absolutly my top 5 it must have been an extrordinarily dificult feat i solute whoever made this
on 8/4/2013 2:17:43 PM with a score of 0
Still great I love all the endings
on 8/1/2013 3:44:07 AM with a score of 0
Beautiful story with a few Fallout and Borderlands references here and there. I sure hope there's a sequel in the near future.
-- Myles da Man on 7/30/2013 4:34:24 PM with a score of 0
I like the way you incorporate a legacy into the story and a sense that the story continues even when you have finished.
on 7/29/2013 4:46:40 AM with a score of 0
The writing was interesting, and the story overall was good; the problem is that too much of the story wasn't my choice. Too much of the story just 'happened' without my having a say-so in how or why I would do something. An example: I ended up helping the family with the broken leg and left when threatened. I, personally, would have lied and come back to kill them or even would have liked to head to the city or something other than "Leave" or "Stay".
-- Anthony on 7/27/2013 1:44:05 PM with a score of 0
-- evan on 7/27/2013 1:04:25 AM with a score of 0
This is amazing! While not, in my opinion, as wonderful as LoveSICK, it was an intriguing and delightful story none the less. If only my shelter would have had all the porn.. *sigh* well some people have all the luck. Your character development is exceptional, I really felt like I knew my fellow survivors within a few paragraphs.
on 7/23/2013 7:57:13 PM with a score of 0
Nice! You need to add an actual Raider epilogue, where the protagonist builds a raider kingdom.
-- Cyberpunker on 7/23/2013 4:55:14 AM with a score of 0
Definitely an interesting story. I would recommend it to anyone who enjoys stories that have multiple possibilities and endings. Honestly if your browsing through this site or have become a member, I believe you are one of these people. This is a must read or play as the case may be.
on 7/23/2013 2:29:37 AM with a score of 0
this adventure gets more interesting the more choices i make.
-- Paul on 7/19/2013 11:17:51 PM with a score of 0
I have so far unlocked two of the epilogues, and although it is sometimes hard to find the path that actually does what you intended to do it is a fun journey, and if you can make more like this that would be great.
-- Paul on 7/19/2013 5:51:46 PM with a score of 0
This is amazing! I got an "good" ending and I did it!
-- Juan on 7/11/2013 5:52:57 PM with a score of 0
Best 6 hours ever!!
-- Spencer on 7/9/2013 8:10:35 AM with a score of 0
Worth every minute, and every page. The story was amazing I had to go through the whole thing twice just to enjoy it properly. Kudos to the author. Excellent game and read.
-- David on 7/7/2013 3:00:06 AM with a score of 0
I really liked this! It was the best "Chose your story" I ever played! I write a bit myself, hope to one day write something as good as this.
-- Jack on 7/7/2013 2:05:28 AM with a score of 0
Thanks, glad to know this story catered to the homosexual community in some way as sometimes my stuff gets accused of doing the opposite.
on 7/3/2013 11:59:25 PM with a score of 0
its kind of gay
on 7/3/2013 9:17:31 PM with a score of 0
It took me a while, but I played through all of the 'Special Shelter' endings, and a few of the 'community shelter' endings, and I have to say, this is one of the best games I've played so far.
Keep up the good work!
on 7/2/2013 1:02:47 PM with a score of 0
Well, I died. It seems like it would have been a fun game otherwise. XD
-- Human on 6/28/2013 9:18:52 PM with a score of 0
The guy's name is quite ironic on the epilogue 3. Anyways, I'm not sure if I got the best ending but it seems like a good one.
-- Sirius on 6/27/2013 1:15:21 PM with a score of 0
this was so good! so many choices. i was glad i finally got the epiloge
on 6/27/2013 7:04:50 AM with a score of 0
I've read a lot of stories on this site and this one is without a doubt the best one.
I can't tell you how many times I've replayed it and I find something new each time.
on 6/18/2013 7:51:01 AM with a score of 0
Interesting but still feels short, maybe i always die too quick
on 6/18/2013 3:37:24 AM with a score of 0
Lots of choices and a fun read. If this could be built up with stuff like inventory, stats, etc it's a great concept!
on 6/16/2013 12:12:43 PM with a score of 0
This was very interesting. I like my crude attitude and frequent grogginess. But partying like it was 1999 was worth it. I recommend this!
-- Lex on 6/16/2013 12:26:08 AM with a score of 0
kinda short but packed with good choices. it needs a sequel.
-- xxx on 6/15/2013 2:57:45 PM with a score of 0
Fantastic. I don't know why so many people are saying they wish the game was longer. I played through to all 4 epilogues and lo ed all the twists and turns and how the stories connected. Great work.
-- wizdum on 6/12/2013 8:07:31 PM with a score of 0
It's nice, little on the short side, but nice!
on 6/10/2013 10:37:09 AM with a score of 0
good story but you have no say in your character creation or personality so your naturally a dick to every body, beside that though its good
-- kabal1199 on 6/7/2013 11:51:14 PM with a score of 0
Pretty fun, probably the better of the games on here
on 6/6/2013 3:35:16 PM with a score of 0
Awesome game! I have played it several times and the only thing that annoys me is that all endings that i fave played end in you getting killed or in a dead end
on 6/6/2013 3:21:26 PM with a score of 0
can you make a part two? the story was great!
-- alex on 5/28/2013 3:51:51 PM with a score of 0
Loved the story, though I think it needs to be extended; would love to meet Becky in person.
-- Michael on 5/27/2013 8:21:41 PM with a score of 0
NOOOO!!!! my family died thats grim
on 5/27/2013 6:25:50 PM with a score of 0
I'd like to know if there are more games similar to this ! Kinda wish I was there. I really lost myself in the story and is the best iv played on here so far . I liked the lack of an inventory and logical choices but there is a quite a few default choices. Great game
on 5/26/2013 7:00:51 PM with a score of 0
Speechless. Utterly mind blowing.
It's absolutely astonishing how this story sheds light on human emotions and never ending resiliency. I'm not usually one to connect with a work of fiction but I really felt as though I just lived my entire life in these mere moments it took for me to read this.
Keep up the spectacular work!
-- Anubeast on 5/25/2013 4:40:14 AM with a score of 0
I got epilogue 3... Spent an entire day playing this, an amazing story no matter what ending you get.. Great job on this! Lots of emotion and sad scenes, RIP Marina :(
-- Zeroinco on 5/23/2013 12:34:49 PM with a score of 0
I didn't get too far, but I would like to try again and not make the same mistakes.
-- Luke on 5/22/2013 10:30:51 PM with a score of 0
Great game! I'm going to have to replay this to see the different scenarios. I died too early! LOL.
-- BeiGo on 5/19/2013 4:01:17 PM with a score of 0
You have created a haunting adventure through a shattered post apocalyptic America. It has been a phenomenal experience!
-- Max B on 5/17/2013 12:35:55 AM with a score of 0
Extremely in depth and thought out story. went through it 4 or 5 times and i still diddnt get all of the story's.
on 5/16/2013 4:43:13 PM with a score of 0
Whoohoo!!! I finally made it lol! Great story. It was really fun and at times frustrating (in a good way). It was awesome, definitely better than Reese's peanut butter cups haha (well on second thought...)
-- Daniel on 5/16/2013 12:40:53 AM with a score of 0
-- JDS on 5/10/2013 7:43:09 PM with a score of 0
Damn, this was a good game!
on 5/2/2013 10:17:33 PM with a score of 0
Amazing cant help ,but to explore every outcome.
on 5/2/2013 6:29:11 PM with a score of 0
I really enjoyed playing.
-- Kilroy McFadden on 5/2/2013 5:34:20 PM with a score of 0
It's epic and awesome,i finished the game with the "proud of heritage" epilogue.
It's just that this could be longer,because it would be more awesome!
on 5/1/2013 10:22:24 AM with a score of 0
I went and played it a bunch of times after my first and I have to say some endings are longer, some shorter still a fantastic book/game
-- TACOSQUIRREL66 on 4/30/2013 2:10:43 AM with a score of 0
Not bad actually pretty fun although could be longer
-- TACOSQUIRREL66 on 4/30/2013 1:17:11 AM with a score of 0
I really enjoyed this.
-- Michelle on 4/28/2013 9:25:20 PM with a score of 0
Too much reading
-- B. Summers on 4/26/2013 6:05:51 PM with a score of 0
I got all endings i cried in the shelter one
-- Andy on 4/26/2013 12:35:37 AM with a score of 0
Awesome. Well written, interesting story.
on 4/23/2013 8:30:53 PM with a score of 0
on 4/23/2013 5:42:29 PM with a score of 0
Got epilogue 3. First time I played, I wasn't that impressed but after being able to actually get somewhere (damn my humanity and conscience) it is really enjoyable and lengthy. Actually what I liked most was that gradually the focus shifted from survival if you so choose, to what you so choose. Definitely love the dynamic feel to the story since a lot are "railroaded"
-- Tyler on 4/22/2013 1:20:25 AM with a score of 0
Best story ever! I only wish it was longer! I'm definitely playing his other stories!
on 4/16/2013 9:50:22 PM with a score of 0
Great game! Very, very , VERY fun! Kudos to you man! This is the first game I've played on this site and I msut say I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
-- MasterYster on 4/14/2013 1:11:16 AM with a score of 0
Very deep at points and well thought through
-- Felix on 4/12/2013 3:35:25 PM with a score of 0
the title is crappy,the game is crappy and needs mor pages
-- goodgamer on 4/10/2013 3:43:43 AM with a score of 0
on 4/6/2013 6:54:28 AM with a score of 0
Very enlightening... Dough
-- Duu on 3/31/2013 2:46:59 PM with a score of 0
Great Story! I gave it a 8 and it was very fun and has a deep storyline:D. I actually found three of the four epilogues! staying in the private shelter does have an epilogue btw, But its hard to find ;)
-- Spacemost on 3/30/2013 9:23:09 AM with a score of 0
Very enjoyable. Well put together and thought out. I think more could have gone into the beginning but what is there worked.
on 3/25/2013 11:44:41 PM with a score of 0
Wish I could do the journey to becky :(
-- Sam on 3/24/2013 9:50:16 PM with a score of 0
-- Deam on 3/17/2013 12:23:17 AM with a score of 0
-- Zenith on 3/15/2013 6:10:49 PM with a score of 0
Definetely, one of the best interactive stories I've ever had the pleasure to read. I found myself taking all the paths to see the different outcomes.
The comunity shelter path was specially good.
on 3/13/2013 5:32:07 PM with a score of 0
Yeah the story was okay, but could you put slightly less swearing in it? my er, lil bro was reading over my shoulder and dinner was not that good last night with y parents.
-- karishad on 3/13/2013 6:07:20 AM with a score of 0
-- Joshua on 3/11/2013 2:05:11 PM with a score of 0
This fuckin blows midget dick
-- John Stalls on 3/11/2013 11:38:29 AM with a score of 0
I liked it and it was funny as hell. Had me in tears. Plus a few times i had to say, "Look out! We have bad-ass over here." LOL but over all I loved it.
-- Tristan on 3/11/2013 1:55:15 AM with a score of 0
Holy fuck that was awesome. I'm not usually one for this "massacre" style of story, but that was fucking amazing. Only in CYA stories can I get away with being a cynical bastard that gets a hard-on from licking a dying chick's face.
-- Ryan on 3/10/2013 10:28:41 PM with a score of 0
sick nasty ill my computer is about to die. i love this game, this is all i do.
-- alexa on 3/7/2013 9:57:37 PM with a score of 0
dude this was sick nasty. pick your own ill adventure.
-- alexa on 3/7/2013 9:53:56 PM with a score of 0
This was an incredible story, I am going to play it again after I try a new one!
-- Vince on 3/7/2013 1:12:20 PM with a score of 0
Great story best author ever
-- Someguy on 3/6/2013 11:04:04 PM with a score of 0
i could picture this all going down someday...so real!
on 3/1/2013 10:47:05 AM with a score of 0
awesome, kept me reading... and pressing the back button lol.
-- LoneWolf on 2/28/2013 4:13:13 PM with a score of 0
I FINALLY FINISHED!
I love it. I'm a reader, as well as a writer. This was certainly well done. In fact, I suggest this person attempt to make some sort of profit from his/her skills! Totally enjoyed it, thank you!
It also took up a lot of my time, haha xD
I finished with Epilouge 4, with The Chosen, Hera, triumph and uniting of the mutants, etc.
-- Jobrjo on 2/27/2013 1:53:14 PM with a score of 0
I can sum this story in four words... This. Story. Is. Perfect. It has the right balance of story play and game time, and no choice left me bored, like some others. Also has a great ending!
on 2/26/2013 10:22:13 PM with a score of 0
this was great! i was surfing the internet for no reason and came across this. Then as I kept reading I was getting attached. It was good ride. I loved it! Also got the best ending on the first try. But yeah, this was good.
-- Gomi500 on 2/26/2013 5:28:22 AM with a score of 0
Originally I gave this a six. Post-apocalyptic stories aren't really my thing, so to speak, and the paths I originally took didn't really do much for me. As some people pointed out, your character can be quite the jerk. However, I don't see that as a flaw in the writing so much as it just isn't my personal tastes. The writing, as for all your games, is exemplary (barring the few technical mistakes here and there). While I don't LIKE a lot of swearing, it really does make sense for the time and situation, and I really get the impression you're not walking on eggshells for anyone. I can respect that, even if I personally don't swear and hate being sword at in reality.
Anyhow, I finally got the 'Eliza' ending, and it was beautiful. And I think that's what I love about your works. You present these gritty worlds with horrible people and events in them, and hard choices, but through it all, you still have this magnificent portrayal of beauty and an odd sense of justice also. So, Bravo, Bravo!
on 2/26/2013 4:45:56 AM with a score of 0
i love the way endmaster tells stories it's like the options he gives are some that i'd actually choose it doesn't feel like i'm playing a game i can physically see it like it's actually happening right in front of me its descriptive and realistic and idk i just love it
on 2/24/2013 12:25:13 PM with a score of 0
Nice story man, did some few go backs to finally get the right one (I think) well, whats the right one? I got satisfied on the option of attacking Miranda and going to Becky's shelter, is that the right one?
-- Angelo on 2/24/2013 3:49:57 AM with a score of 0
Great choose your story! Its like the old choose your own adventure books but for adults! Nice work!
-- frank on 2/22/2013 2:50:23 AM with a score of 0
I got through both epilogues and I liked bother but I like the vault ending more cause it was deeper. Great story in all wish there was a sequel like from a different point of view.
-- alec on 2/19/2013 10:16:05 PM with a score of 0
It was really good just wish u had more choice but it was a very good story to introduce one to the choose your own adventure world. Such as my self.
-- Stretch on 2/14/2013 4:24:30 AM with a score of 0
Honestly, I'm not as keen on this one as I have been on other stories by the same author. Still, I was intrigued enough to keep going until I found an epilogue. Wish there was less swearing though.
on 2/13/2013 3:13:23 PM with a score of 0
I thought this was a great little game! I tried several endings and died each and every time, but still enjoyed the adventure!
-- Ang on 2/12/2013 4:07:18 AM with a score of 0
got another epilogue... epilogue 1... i didn't notice this path before..hmm. now, for the 3rd epilogue..
on 2/11/2013 3:29:08 AM with a score of 0
Okay...so is there really a way to "win" through buying a Special shelter? I tried practically everything but I end up dying... So how to get to Becky, eh? Send me a message, please? :) Thanks!
on 2/10/2013 3:45:59 AM with a score of 0
Got one of the epilogues. Wow. Still wondering how he was able to save up money to join the community/buy the Special Shelter.
on 2/9/2013 6:31:54 AM with a score of 0
Interesting game, although a bit short. Like the post apocalyptic theme and the humorous character! In short a good game! I'm off to my second playthrough!
-- Jonathan on 2/8/2013 9:56:57 AM with a score of 0
Very good! I think this is a GREAT game and maybe you could make a 2nd game? It would be nice to see what happens later in the game. I only got one ending, but it is excellent. I like the pictures too. They relate well to the current scene. This game will bring you enlightenment!
on 2/6/2013 9:52:49 PM with a score of 0
I think it's a great game, and I played through several different endings, and I have to say, it's very well done. But in the beginning, I had issues connecting with a character who was such a jerk. Aside from that, I think this is a beautiful game. P.S. Love the Fallout pics.
-- undeadbatman on 2/6/2013 3:22:14 AM with a score of 0
i've not seen an awesome game like this in ages. seriously.
-- patty on 2/3/2013 12:22:52 PM with a score of 0
greatest book ever found all four endings!
on 2/2/2013 1:31:18 PM with a score of 0
i hate this game so much
on 2/1/2013 5:00:59 PM with a score of 0
on 1/31/2013 12:27:12 AM with a score of 0
Definatley got me hooked with all the multiple paths. I found an epilouge which was quite sweet in a strange disturbed way. Still an amasing game and shows the effort of a true writer
on 1/30/2013 5:16:43 PM with a score of 0
Okay the second time round
on 1/30/2013 4:50:12 PM with a score of 0
How the hell do you win ?
on 1/30/2013 4:47:15 PM with a score of 0
Quite good, this. I wouldv've liked a bit more choice than what was offered, but I get that it was a story-centric game. Still, the variety was certainly there so it remained interesting and entertaining, though I didn't really understand the characters motivation for being such an asshole at the beginning. Perhaps with a little back story, but I didn't and couldn't have written something with this much charm and variety. Congrats to the writer.
on 1/30/2013 10:42:33 AM with a score of 0
I thought i'll never see this game again, I've played this game year ago, and i was in love with it. but i forgot the name of the sit, but now I've found it again. So i'm gonna get each and every ending now.
This story is simply awesome, I even go as far to say that this is the best story game i´ve ever read.
What an astounding experiance.
on 1/27/2013 11:20:59 AM with a score of 0
Fun story. I was a little disappointed that there's no wasteland survival part of the story.
-- Falloutfan on 1/27/2013 4:31:52 AM with a score of 0
Finished it four times. I can easily say that it is one of the best cyoa stories.
Strongly recommended for cyoa beginners and cyoa veterans..
on 1/26/2013 3:02:21 PM with a score of 0
This was a good read, and an interesting way to spend some time. I found a few typos, but nothing is perfect. I rated it an eight. Good stuff, but I kind of wish the story continued after the dude left the shelter.
-- Matt Spencer on 1/24/2013 8:19:06 PM with a score of 0
on 1/22/2013 1:20:40 PM with a score of 0
This is my fourth game on this website and omg is it good. I went through all of the endings... And I do mean all. I started this on Friday and it is now 3:30 am on Tuesday. Now granted I didn't do this straight through but still. This series is very well written and strangely enough does have many true different paths for the different people. My first true ending after about three deaths was amazing. This is a novel within novels and takes a great deal of time to enjoy all of its points, but is definitely worth it.
-- Misaka12 on 1/22/2013 3:28:38 AM with a score of 0
Needs more variety and options, it would be more stimulating to be more active in the decision making process.
-- Justin on 1/21/2013 8:08:03 PM with a score of 0
I loved everything about this story I choose it expecting a few seconds of something to consume my time but little did I know that I just unlocked the best freaking choose your story ever I really hope others get this same satisfaction from this story as I did and I hope the author will make more stories like this.
-- Mahdel on 1/21/2013 4:28:49 PM with a score of 0
I am still amazed but I figured I could also say you look pretty bad ass :)
on 1/21/2013 11:55:56 AM with a score of 0
I am amazed that is about all I can say.
on 1/20/2013 7:37:04 PM with a score of 0
One of the best texted based games I've played and the game I've played in a while.
-- Sam on 1/16/2013 4:57:20 PM with a score of 0
Great read! Very in depth game. I really liked how well all of the other factions continued to cross over each path, no matter which path you choose. The endings were pretty varied and creative too. Very well written.
on 1/15/2013 12:30:20 PM with a score of 0
incredible story! Loved every bit, I can't believe how dynamic you were able to make it!
-- Tom on 1/13/2013 9:18:18 PM with a score of 0
Excellent story/game. It borrows from fallout and a few other things but it works well.
-- Andre on 1/11/2013 11:44:44 AM with a score of 0
One of the best choose your own story i read. I staye din the shelter, and in the end i got the computer and shot myself. What a way to go
-- Joshua on 1/10/2013 3:06:23 PM with a score of 0
dogs killed me only real problem i had was that its a bit sadistic
-- edin on 1/8/2013 9:06:53 PM with a score of 0
Wow. Just wow. The ending I just got, brought me on the verge of tears. In a good way. Darn you Sirus!!! Hahahaha!
on 1/8/2013 5:28:50 AM with a score of 0
I loved this IMMENSELY! My first ending, well, (I dont want to spoil it for newbies) Involved me being by myself. And I loved it. I am now exploring all the other endings I can find.
Once again, I loved this IMMENSELY!!
on 1/8/2013 4:43:57 AM with a score of 0
Now there was a story that kept me up all night! I just had to keep going until I found all of the endings. Well done, I'd like to see more from you!
on 1/7/2013 8:28:19 AM with a score of 0
I wish now that you could have one final scene, where becky and you meet and do the f*** thingy to each other.
on 1/1/2013 11:18:37 PM with a score of 0
Interesting story and good writing. Endmaster, you're a real pro. If you please can redirect me to one of your stories I wouldn't like, do so? I think we'd get along well. I am pretty good at writing in swedish, maybe we should work on something.
on 1/1/2013 10:55:24 PM with a score of 0
Too few choices, although the setting and Fallout-ish references are quite interesting.
At most there were two choices to pick from, which is, quite lacking for a Choose-your-own-adventure game.
-- Kiele on 12/31/2012 2:28:51 AM with a score of 0
Incredible game, with believable post-nuclear events and a thrilling storyline. Endmaster, you are the greatest.
-- Alavander on 12/29/2012 11:52:37 PM with a score of 0
-- Vienna on 12/24/2012 9:32:05 PM with a score of 0
awesome all around, i liked the setting, characters and plot! very creative.
on 12/22/2012 12:07:43 PM with a score of 0
Well written. Simple and awesome.
-- John on 12/21/2012 1:26:24 PM with a score of 0
This was awesome, pretty cool to see the slow rise of a civilization.
on 12/16/2012 2:43:39 AM with a score of 0
wow. Just wow I have never found a story as gripping as this one i feel soo happy and i hope there is a sequal for both solitary and family choices! :)
-- Stardust on 12/13/2012 11:13:54 AM with a score of 0
is realy good
-- satsuno on 12/11/2012 2:36:31 PM with a score of 0
I played this game about a billion times before I got an ending that I finally felt good with. All of the endings were good ones, but the one where I was killed by the "mutant bounty hunter" gave me a strange sense of peace.
on 12/5/2012 8:59:42 PM with a score of 0
on 12/2/2012 11:01:27 PM with a score of 0
-- 123 on 12/2/2012 9:41:17 PM with a score of 0
i got the "party hard" ending that was exactly how i would've died... i feel as if i dont even need to continue but i guess ill act paranoid and buy the bomb shelter lol....
-- coke on 11/29/2012 11:22:27 PM with a score of 0
It was a great game I actually played over and over to see everything and if ur reading this u should go through everyway
-- alec on 11/27/2012 9:14:53 PM with a score of 0
Got all 4 endings. I like how all your stories branch out to totally different stories upon earlier choices and grow from there. 8/8
on 11/26/2012 2:17:57 PM with a score of 0
Really good and long!
on 11/25/2012 4:02:32 PM with a score of 0
Too many bad words. All the f words are not needed
-- Michelle on 11/25/2012 11:43:12 AM with a score of 0
3j said right. The best story ever...
on 11/21/2012 10:13:03 PM with a score of 0
new Haven FTW
on 11/21/2012 6:22:27 PM with a score of 0
It is a good story. I have read some of EndMaster's stories before, it is as good as I expected it to be.
on 11/20/2012 5:04:20 PM with a score of 0
I didn't like it.
on 11/17/2012 5:20:08 PM with a score of 0
As I found the Special Shelter Ending I finally realized the true intelligence of Endmaster and every story he wrote. A 9.9 out of 10 and no matter what ending one takes the characters develop nicely and even Shelter/Eliza is an amazing character too.
I highly recommend this to anyone with the time.
-- TheImmortalOmegagoldfish on 11/17/2012 9:54:41 AM with a score of 0
This is another great story by Endmaster (even though he dabbles in fantasy adventure most of the time) the characters develop and every situation has depth
to it as well as almost NO errors or bugs. A 9.9 out of 10 and I recommend this for anyone who wants to be entertained I know I was.
-- TheImmortalOmegagoldfish on 11/17/2012 9:20:41 AM with a score of 0
-- Ben on 11/14/2012 10:00:47 PM with a score of 0
The epilouge made it all worth while
-- thunda5 on 11/14/2012 6:37:01 AM with a score of 0
one of the branches from this story brings me back to "The Book of Lost Things."
-- johnny tomsons on 11/11/2012 2:15:37 AM with a score of 0
This is one of the first games I've played on this site, but definitely the best so far. I like the fact your choices require sensible, logical decision making. It is important that even poor decisions often lead to further choice rather than instant death.
It also makes a change to be able to have your own place and ride out a lot of the trouble, rather than forcing you to constantly wander aimlessly. Nice story game! 8/8
on 11/4/2012 10:17:50 AM with a score of 0
Amazing. I cannot imagine what else I would have done with these three hours. I applaud your innate grasp of complex decisions and their repercussions. All in all a one of a kind, well planned, classic create-your-own-adventure tale!
on 10/28/2012 7:57:41 PM with a score of 0
wow, this is great! is it based on fallout? the cartoon character is the same.
on 10/28/2012 7:22:31 PM with a score of 0
Hahah. Gave me a nostalgia trip when you used pictures from the game wasteland. I really enjoyed this
-- Flamen0d on 10/26/2012 6:07:25 PM with a score of 0
I enjoyed it a lot, but I kinda wished there was more action than just sitting in a bomb shelter reading about how your character gets his freak on before some random lesbian hacks your system and you have to leave.
Other than that 6/10
I think I'll have to play it again to find the other endings.
-- Jack on 10/24/2012 6:26:09 AM with a score of 0
-- Moe on 10/23/2012 1:55:02 AM with a score of 0
this...at least what ive seen, has been rather dull. also for the eternal game i forgot to mention you shouldeve made a map.
-- jake tooze on 10/22/2012 6:51:37 PM with a score of 0
Amazing! Best choose your own adventure type game out there. Just the amount of different interlinked story is astonishing And every one has an epilogue of its own.
on 10/21/2012 9:27:41 AM with a score of 0
First time I've ever done one of these and now I'm addicted! Wife not to happy about it lol
-- Bryon on 10/20/2012 12:52:31 AM with a score of 0
this was brilliant, couldn't put it down. So many different twists. I played until i read all four epilogues. I loved the inter connectivity of the story. If you went with the, it told you about what happened in the second. Then if you went with the second, it told you about what happened in the first. Each one had the human element present. I fell in love, i was betrayed, i knew humanity. The best story on here and i don't want to see one top it.
-- Kris on 10/12/2012 11:30:29 AM with a score of 0
Best so far, it's peppered with swear words, but no more than regular conversation. This story has everything. You go from being attacked to being seduced. I have gone through twice, and am about to go a third time.
-- James on 10/11/2012 11:38:53 PM with a score of 0
i really like the atmosphere, the story telling and the sense of foreboding. you did a great job.
-- samuel pedigo on 10/11/2012 9:22:35 PM with a score of 0
Very fun... I stayed alive!
-- Red on 10/11/2012 8:59:26 PM with a score of 0
Beautiful, raw, believable. This story made me want to survive, not as a means of beating the game, but because I felt it was real. It gives a sense of immersion the degree of which I had yet to encounter on this website. I was able to get Epilogue 2 on my first run, and you can bet that I'll be back to find a few others. Your focus on storytelling is something I very much admire, you don't let gadgets and goofy systems distract from the sheer magnitude and cohesiveness of the story you've crafted. My only complaint was the frequent Jack/Jake switching which I assume is an oversight. I'll assert this again and again: astounding from the very first page.
on 9/20/2012 5:26:40 PM with a score of 0
on 9/18/2012 2:58:55 AM with a score of 0
awesome! the only fault i see is that you are given a player character to follow, instead of being encouraged to choose as yourself. anyways, i doubt i will find a work of this level soon!
-- flodos on 9/16/2012 11:10:28 AM with a score of 0
it was good but could be more party options.
-- jlowe on 9/14/2012 5:30:53 PM with a score of 0
good game, very well written but a little bit too linear.
on 9/10/2012 6:35:34 PM with a score of 0
I like this. The detail is just right, not overly done but paired with the simple choices it gives you satisfaction. Like i said, the choices are simple, but that doesn't make it boring, you just have found an extremely efficient storytelling manner. You have given me some ideas about my format. good job!
on 9/4/2012 12:50:56 AM with a score of 0
Epilogue 2. Loved it.
on 9/2/2012 10:46:50 PM with a score of 0
it was cool not as long as i thought though
on 9/2/2012 6:54:02 PM with a score of 0
Loads of depth and twists and turns. Ive inly played this twice and ive been on it for an hour at least! Im playing it again right away. Goob job, and thanks alot for this. Its been fun.
-- Jack on 9/2/2012 10:47:36 AM with a score of 0
I picked this up thinking it would be a simple post-apocalyptic survival story. After checking almost every single page could find, I can now compare my previous idea to saying that the world is about four feet in diameter. This story is infinitely expanding and every option is brimming with excitement that defines the human psyche as in-depth as you can get. The beginning is light and humorous, the middle provides tension and edge-of-your-seat thrilling suspense, and the ending (or at least the only epilogue I managed to find) actually made me cry. This story is so flawlessly written that it has made me question almost everything I have come to know about the literary world. My only major complaint is that the community shelter's story was fairly weak in my opinion; the special shelter storyline provided everything that makes me rate this a flawless 8 out of 8. I would rate this higher if I could. The unforgettable characters and their exploits will stay with me forever, and I cannot thank EndMaster enough for introducing me to them. Bravo.
-- Jake on 9/1/2012 12:18:58 PM with a score of 0
Its pretty good. Imma play it again.
-- kerry on 9/1/2012 12:18:14 AM with a score of 0
great and exciting. I little short, but good
on 8/17/2012 7:28:00 AM with a score of 0
One of the best game around here(well everyone knows that)8/8
on 8/17/2012 7:18:11 AM with a score of 0
Is the Experimental shelter a dead end!?
-- Irongoldfish on 8/10/2012 12:59:57 PM with a score of 0
Great story line,amazing ending(s?) and difficult enough to make you feel like you truly succeeded if you saw the "Epilogue" option.
I truly recommend this test.
-- Irongoldfish on 8/9/2012 6:53:00 PM with a score of 0
This is one of, if not THE best CYOA games that i ever played.I like how it was based off Fallout, but with the author's unique elements, like The Combine, and Cybernetic Evoluton, or whatever it's called.
-- Deadnred5 on 8/7/2012 9:48:57 PM with a score of 0
You are the god of stories i have never played one of your games i didnt like i mean you should seriously write a book about a lot of this stuff!
-- Jesse Cook on 8/7/2012 12:08:57 PM with a score of 0
Really good game, enlightened me a lot. Have fun playing it.
-- Harry on 8/5/2012 5:01:41 AM with a score of 0
Well written, very fun, good grammar and a fantastic plot. I absolutely loved it!
-- BubuTheStoryfication on 8/1/2012 1:14:22 PM with a score of 0
I loved the story, it reminded me very much of the first fallout game except for the ending. Over all it was a great experience.
-- Rafael on 7/31/2012 9:35:38 PM with a score of 0
It was a good read. I died pretty quickly, unfortunately.
-- Evan on 7/30/2012 11:15:45 AM with a score of 0
Amazing CYS which has everything you could want
on 7/29/2012 10:37:06 PM with a score of 0
got to endings so far, specially like the mutant one, great game :D
on 7/26/2012 12:44:32 PM with a score of 0
that was amazing!
-- austin on 7/25/2012 4:49:24 PM with a score of 0
BEST GAME EVA ME GIVE 5 STAR YA YA FIVE STAR BEST GAME EVUR
on 7/24/2012 10:45:24 AM with a score of 0
-- Robert on 7/23/2012 12:54:06 AM with a score of 0
Great story! I got epilogue 2! Besides a few minor grammatical errors, the writing was great and the story was captivating. Hopefully history won't repeat itself too soon!
Now I am interested in the other endings!
on 7/21/2012 2:05:47 AM with a score of 0
great story. kudos!
-- marly on 7/19/2012 10:14:31 PM with a score of 0
amazing, the only stain was that the shelter died. RIP. My heart hath been torn asunder :.(
on 7/17/2012 12:56:55 AM with a score of 0
cool, now that I managed to make it to the epilogue ;)
-- Milen on 7/13/2012 5:31:08 AM with a score of 0
This was a great story, I like how most of the other endings usually connect to eachother.
on 7/13/2012 1:32:56 AM with a score of 0
Really good story. Keep it up.
-- Nicestory222 on 7/12/2012 10:00:51 AM with a score of 0
Had the wife kid made a good trading relationship started a militia and fathered my cities political and technician lineage
on 7/11/2012 7:58:05 AM with a score of 0
good a bit short and endmaster im afan of u.
-- hotdog on 7/5/2012 3:07:03 AM with a score of 0
i ended up having a statue of my self and being a great x 4 grandpa
on 7/3/2012 9:49:46 PM with a score of 0
awesome story,character development,and choices that really affected the story
on 7/3/2012 9:48:57 AM with a score of 0
That was surprisingly good if loaded with an obscene amount of cursing.
on 7/3/2012 3:03:57 AM with a score of 0
on 7/2/2012 6:30:47 PM with a score of 0
...I love all these endings. I really do.
on 7/2/2012 5:24:28 PM with a score of 0
I took the hacker path, that was pretty cool. I was kind of expecting to continue, though. I love Fallout 3 lol
on 7/2/2012 4:54:25 PM with a score of 0
on 7/1/2012 5:18:19 PM with a score of 0
Awesome, this has given me hours of entertainment. :)
-- Brandon on 6/27/2012 6:26:30 PM with a score of 0
good story game
on 6/21/2012 7:21:19 AM with a score of 0
Now that was pretty cool, though i hoped it would be more like fallout, with all those mutants and travelling through the wasteland and stuff. Are you gonna do a sequel or something?
-- Jimmy on 6/19/2012 11:58:39 PM with a score of 0
It was entertaining.
-- Hi on 6/19/2012 11:07:28 PM with a score of 0
it was amazing. i couldn't stop reading. 10/10.
-- josh on 6/19/2012 8:25:01 AM with a score of 0
Not enough choices, too many bad endings
-- Dan on 6/17/2012 2:02:09 PM with a score of 0
Got the shelter ending for the first time ever. Brilliant.
on 6/16/2012 8:42:58 AM with a score of 0
.....that was bloody brillant
-- akiyo ami on 6/13/2012 7:44:53 PM with a score of 0
on 6/9/2012 2:17:06 AM with a score of 0
Crime doesn't pay. Crazy wanton murder does though :)
on 6/2/2012 12:05:36 AM with a score of 0
That's right, although it would have been known as the House of Blood therafter
on 6/1/2012 11:50:52 PM with a score of 0
Explosives, the solution to ME
on 6/1/2012 11:48:11 PM with a score of 0
Don't trust anybody kid.....Nobody
on 6/1/2012 11:43:11 PM with a score of 0
The traitors! I did what was best for the colony! I took control only because I had seen what had happened if I let the shelter go any other way! I killed leon because if I hadn't he would have killed us all. It was because of me we found the village! Even in my death I served the colony, ending their dependence on the shelter. Now they fear me, but in the future, historians will praise me! I am not a dictator, but a savoir! ALL HAIL ME!!!!! My only regret is that I'll never know if pratchett survived.
on 6/1/2012 11:35:03 PM with a score of 0
Awww I'm finding a place for my family in a nuclear wasteland. What I really need now is the eden device, Or that weird wishing well and a sacrifice ;D
on 6/1/2012 11:24:11 PM with a score of 0
on 6/1/2012 11:03:19 PM with a score of 0
I got the trek to Becky ending from playing it safe :). A great game, I will be replaying to check out the others.
on 6/1/2012 10:49:22 PM with a score of 0
Found all four epilogues, baby. Awesome stories! Especially epilogue 1.
-- Amdg3x7 on 6/1/2012 5:53:18 AM with a score of 0
Not so good
on 5/30/2012 6:31:59 AM with a score of 0
-- Michael on 5/29/2012 6:59:54 PM with a score of 0
-- Michael on 5/29/2012 1:14:36 PM with a score of 0
Buying the special shelter, continuing to go to work, or staying home from work will all put you on the paths to different epilogues.
on 5/29/2012 2:59:51 AM with a score of 0
Great game with lots of different choices and paths to take. Only nag is that I've tried every path and only got epilogue 2.
-- Vault 13 on 5/28/2012 10:44:14 AM with a score of 0
-- K on 5/23/2012 9:29:42 AM with a score of 0
-- PrincessFrickinBride on 5/15/2012 8:06:57 PM with a score of 0
on 5/13/2012 1:35:38 PM with a score of 0
@Xt1000305: Do you mean leader of the combined or leader of the Atomic Alliance? (spoiler start=If you don't speak up during the meeting with the combine leader then you can become dictator of the combined.=Spoiler End)
@nietzschesaurus: lol That was my first endng when i played this game. :D
on 5/10/2012 12:04:06 PM with a score of 0
Now THIS is a good game. Got the depressing ending where you become dictator.
-- nietzschesaurus on 5/9/2012 6:21:54 AM with a score of 0
Got all 4 endings, mutant king, leader of combined, leader of shelter and love with shelter robot
on 5/8/2012 5:13:50 AM with a score of 0
Wowwww so this was seriously awesome. The story was excellent!! MOREEEE MOREEEEEEE!!!!111
-- Kay on 5/7/2012 8:52:28 PM with a score of 0
Great game, so good I rated it 8
on 5/5/2012 4:29:04 AM with a score of 0
Wow what a great game. I loved the story and all the references to fallout, mad Max,etc. Good job
-- matt on 4/29/2012 12:06:35 PM with a score of 0
I got the good ending. This is awesome! I love the comedy and the ending. I got it where your son takes over the city. You fall in love with Nina. Good game!
-- Reverse2499 on 4/27/2012 9:33:17 PM with a score of 0
decent, could have more varied choices. storyline is fairly well done but if you can, keep the time lapse short.
-- mo on 4/20/2012 11:46:11 AM with a score of 0
It's one of the best.
on 4/19/2012 7:10:25 PM with a score of 0
EndMaster is awesome. I've only gotten one of the epilogues so far, but I'm looking forward to seeing the rest soon...I feel like everything about End's Storygames are just perfect. Well, I'll get back to playing now.
-- KanameD on 4/19/2012 4:19:19 AM with a score of 0
This game is too long, confusing and messed up.
on 4/18/2012 1:45:43 PM with a score of 0
I just can't find the fourth epilogue. I've found the 'Mutant Leader' ending, the 'Atomic Alliance' ending and the 'Community Shelter' ending, and I could have sworn there weren't any others. This is going to bug me until I find it, damn you!
on 4/5/2012 8:58:23 PM with a score of 0
Found another one; one that was more related to the combine and the cyborgs. I'm going to try to track down the rest - there's at least one more.
on 4/5/2012 7:58:04 PM with a score of 0
I finally found a second epilogue, but when I looked at the title of the page it was 'epilogue 4'. 4!
Anyway, it has an interesting plot and is difficult enough to be entertaining, with writing good enough to keep my brain from exploding from the sheer volume of text (I'm going to have to postpone the hunt for the other eplogues because finding 2 in a row has incapacitated me). All in all, very fun - and worth the enormous amount of time I sunk into it. A particularly entertaining game is trying to spot, before choosing, the points which subsequently open up an entire vista of story.
The only criticism I had (and it may not even be valid, having not gotten every epilogue yet) is that I would have liked to have been more involved with the Combine or the Cyborgs, and to have participated more in the conflict.
on 4/2/2012 1:25:33 PM with a score of 0
I never really comment on anything. But after reading this story I have felt compelled to. The funniest thing is on my first try I ended up taking part in the work orgy and dying early doors! I can literally picture every scenario as you write it so well. My favourite ending was the one with Alex!!! I really hate that guy!!! The mutant king was inspiring!! The loneliness of the special shelter. And the feelgood new haven. You are an extremely talented and visionary guy. And I look forward to reading your other material. Truly awesome.
-- Db1984 on 3/15/2012 10:58:40 AM with a score of 0
This was beautiful.
on 3/12/2012 8:13:28 PM with a score of 0
Wow. My millionth time beating it :)
on 3/11/2012 3:22:49 PM with a score of 0
on 3/10/2012 8:28:14 PM with a score of 0
Good... Very Good...
-- KingClaymann on 3/9/2012 7:39:52 PM with a score of 0
lol just finished the mutant epilogue, loved it, ty.
on 3/9/2012 1:33:31 PM with a score of 0
just did the third epilogue. cool that i finally figuered out what the combine was.
on 3/9/2012 11:35:12 AM with a score of 0
just finished the second epilogue ive already done the robot epilogue, very happy with this story.
on 3/8/2012 12:10:03 AM with a score of 0
great story could not be better
-- Dominic on 3/3/2012 6:59:26 AM with a score of 0
I am a huge fan of the dystopian post apocalypse and the Fallout series, and I must say your portrayal of the genre is impeccable to say the least. In simpler terms, dude this story is fucking rad!
on 3/1/2012 1:05:05 AM with a score of 0
on 2/29/2012 3:12:22 PM with a score of 0
I thought it was really good with obvious inspiration taken from fallout lol But the one thing I would say... I'm not sure I agree with where the story ended, given my choices... I mean... It would be typical of a fallout-esc feature to enable you to do things your way and also use things to your advantage in order to achieve seemingly impossible tasks... i.e infiltrate Alex's compound/headquarters on your own... More importantly, even given the turn of events I befell... It would have been nice to like... I dunno... Use my new cybernetics and cyborg components, again, to my advantage in order to become more powerful/reap new benefits and ultimately complete the mission (ideally in my own way)... Just something to think about.. As I said, other than that I loved the stylistic components of it all namely the postapocalyptic story etc etc Additionally ( I don't know for sure if you can do
-- Simon F on 2/25/2012 7:56:48 PM with a score of 0
on 2/25/2012 7:20:16 PM with a score of 0
This was really good I married Nina and had a child and helped form New Haven.
-- Alexis on 2/24/2012 10:32:42 PM with a score of 0
Good storyline I mostly like necromancer and to me this was very different from that
on 2/24/2012 11:22:03 AM with a score of 0
Beautiful. I loved the endings. One of the best I've ever played.
on 2/18/2012 10:19:20 PM with a score of 0
on 2/18/2012 5:29:02 PM with a score of 0
Second time through!! Did the mutant scenario this time, I give this Choose your story... AN 8!!!!
-- Claymann on 2/18/2012 9:27:33 AM with a score of 0
Wow. Amazing. One of my favorites on the site, without a doubt. Keep it up, man.
on 2/17/2012 10:26:45 PM with a score of 0
I was unaware that Stephen King was a member of this website. This is possibly the greatest thing I've ever read on my computer(s).
on 2/17/2012 7:23:34 PM with a score of 0
Hey endmaster, have you ever thought about writing a "Post-Regeneratio" story? It would be during or after somebody started terraforming the world. Possible alien interaction?
-- Jermo the potato on 2/17/2012 12:59:24 PM with a score of 0
Well written I got through on my first try but I still needed to try every other scenario!!
-- Claymann on 2/16/2012 4:59:07 PM with a score of 0
It was much better than Necromancer, in my opinion. It much more extensive, the characters were fully fleshed out(which they were in Necromancer, but sometimes I just didn't feel like the dialogue or actions were justified), and there was a vast array of actions and sequences which I didn't expect.
Epilogue 1 also made me cry! I rarely cry when I read stories.
The universe you've created is sparse and I enjoy how that and the events that take place, overlap in the different journeys you go through.
I also love how you emerge a completely different personality/character depending on which path you take.
Perfect, except for a maybe a superficial thing or two, but otherwise you have me impressed!
on 2/12/2012 8:13:47 PM with a score of 0
I really really enjoyed. I made it all the way through on my first try! Pretty proud of myself
-- Malik Bowen on 2/11/2012 2:10:24 AM with a score of 0
Manly tears everywhere
-- Me on 2/4/2012 6:19:47 PM with a score of 0
i loved it, the story was intense and well thought out, i've already shown this to a couple of my friends and the enjoyed it too
-- Daniel on 1/29/2012 11:13:00 PM with a score of 0
Another awesome story! Was sad to see that there was no 'good' ending for the solitary stays within the Shelters, but I really liked this one. A fantastic 5 stars to the best - as far as I know - author of CYOA (Create your own adventure) stories. Cheers!
on 1/24/2012 4:34:15 AM with a score of 0
I didn't make it but it was still good. Liked the photos.
on 1/19/2012 11:18:20 AM with a score of 0
Beautiful. This was amazing.
-- Kale on 1/16/2012 6:10:33 PM with a score of 0
Awesome story. Stayed up the whole night coz of it.
on 1/13/2012 10:14:36 AM with a score of 0
on 1/12/2012 11:21:25 PM with a score of 0
Amazing work as always. One of the easiest 8/8 I've ever given.
on 1/1/2012 3:57:44 AM with a score of 0
-- Dude on 12/8/2011 9:14:47 PM with a score of 0
Ive read all the story branches and I have to say I like the mutant one the most, but they were all good. You never fail to amaze me with your awesomeness great job EndMaster
on 12/2/2011 1:02:37 AM with a score of 0
That was incredibly entertaining!
on 11/12/2011 7:15:03 AM with a score of 0
To get the other epilogues, don't buy a shelter and go to work...or just stay home.
on 11/4/2011 2:27:13 AM with a score of 0
Help, I'm stuck... I found New Haven (great epilogue) and The Shelter (my absolute favorite of the two, contrary to popular sentiment in here, it seems), but - how to get to the other two? Author, feel free to email me, I'd like a hint at what direction to choose. Amazing that I've overlooked both, the way I've been obsessing about systematically scanning each branch to get to the unread ones. Oh, btw: Please learn punctuation, the missing commas make this great story (I refuse to call it game) a bit flawed.
-- Paul on 11/4/2011 12:47:45 AM with a score of 0
Oh! There were three more "full" endings - forgot about those when finding just one epilogue. Got back to reading, found the "Epilogue 1" ending - and was touched! I love how the reader's investment of both time and afterthought reaches such a conclusion. Will definitely find the remaining two, and probably write more here. Absolutely love how these scenarios play out!
-- Paul on 11/3/2011 10:50:40 PM with a score of 0
Got completely hooked here. Love how a dead end storyline isn't treated as such, but provides enjoyable reading in itself. Would love to see how things went with "the other woman" as well - how about fleshing that part out to the same extent as the epilouge storyline? Two equally rewarding wins, in a way. Epic story - in the word's true sense.
-- Pål on 11/3/2011 8:18:33 PM with a score of 0
on 11/2/2011 10:58:25 AM with a score of 0
Dude it was good....i got all endings
-- Jack on 10/27/2011 7:12:34 PM with a score of 0
Was fantastic and fun, loved it!
-- Sam on 10/26/2011 6:06:36 AM with a score of 0
Some of the actions YOU should have control over are chosen for you. That could be improved on.
-- AP on 10/16/2011 11:14:55 PM with a score of 0
Great story, although not for the children.
-- VIN on 10/15/2011 3:59:49 PM with a score of 0
one of endmaster wonder full story and i guess i got the best endind and that is being the creator of new heaven
on 10/14/2011 4:36:40 AM with a score of 0
FIVE HOURS, 2 Epilogues and countless "game over"s and im still thinking about coming back to finish up any loose ends. Normally i dont like story based games but EndMaster is Truely AWEsome. PLEASE MAKE A DECSION BASED GAME, i promise you'll get a better review.... maybe even a cult...
-- Michael on 10/8/2011 5:35:26 PM with a score of 0
I found Epilogue 1. Why isn't this featured on the home page anymore? 9/8
on 10/7/2011 3:13:57 PM with a score of 0
This reminds me of fallout which is good
-- Domniic on 9/30/2011 12:27:27 PM with a score of 0
Great post-apocalyptic game. I enjoyed how you made it. The game focused more on story quality. Overall, it was a wonderful game.
on 9/28/2011 8:04:02 PM with a score of 0
Brilliant. Love the fallout connotations as well.
on 9/25/2011 2:55:27 AM with a score of 0
Got to the epilogue! Great story overall if you follow the right path. Wish I could have made more choices throughout the story though.
on 9/24/2011 7:43:20 PM with a score of 0
I thought this story was very exciting and interesting.
-- Lisa on 9/22/2011 6:04:15 PM with a score of 0
lol i found an ending i never knew about!
Join the compound stay silent go to the city and explore by yourself. Quite entertaining.
on 9/14/2011 12:53:23 PM with a score of 0
Seriously Amazing, tried everything and every ending is logical and brilliant. Great story combined with great characters make this the best "choose your own adventure story" I have ever played.
on 9/7/2011 2:49:02 PM with a score of 0
This was a great game that uses sound logic and has no B.S. endings. Truly a great game.
-- Tony on 9/7/2011 3:33:56 AM with a score of 0
Great game needs a even
on 8/29/2011 4:57:00 AM with a score of 0
I absolutely loved this story. You are my favourite author on the site. I wish I could be as good as you.
on 8/29/2011 2:48:39 AM with a score of 0
Excellent. Just a masterpiece.
-- SniperKiller on 8/19/2011 9:44:29 AM with a score of 0
I'm sooooo addicted to this right now I can't stop reading it :P
-- Savaanahhh on 8/18/2011 9:08:09 AM with a score of 0
This is definitely one of the better games on this site.
on 8/14/2011 8:43:50 PM with a score of 0
i have to say this is a really interesting and awesome story. about the only good one on the site actually. i really recommend it. ive played it for 7 times so far, whenever i get bored and there's nothing to do i come here and play it again. i finnaly managed to get 3 epilogues. still looking for the last one i think. i will for sure play this again when i get bored its has a awesome experience. i myself hate reading but this isn't like reading its like playing a video game like fallout or another post-apocalyptic game. anyways to conclude this i will rate it a 8. the author must have spend a nice amount of time and patience writing this. BTW if you were to sell this in some kind of form i will buy it.
-- Omar on 8/12/2011 5:49:35 PM with a score of 0
Very well Written, loved the ending I got!
on 8/11/2011 11:21:15 AM with a score of 0
My favorite story on this site. Should be required reading for any writer who wants to post here.
on 8/10/2011 10:30:32 PM with a score of 0
This game has several different endings. After several replays I finally got one of the good endings! This game has a high replay value and will easily entertain anyone wanting to play this!
on 8/1/2011 8:37:18 PM with a score of 0
I look up to this author, haha.
This is freaking amazing whether it was the dialogue, plot, and no matter what option was chose, the results logically made sense.
on 7/31/2011 5:29:31 AM with a score of 0
can't beat it.
-- james on 7/29/2011 4:56:57 AM with a score of 0
Wow . . . pretty awesome. I actually kinda got attached to Shelter there for a while. Alittle spit and polish it coulda made a bigger, better one too. You should think of extending the "Go to Becky" storyline.
-- Matt on 7/29/2011 4:17:44 AM with a score of 0
they really need to make this into a real video game!
-- bigheadwarrior on 7/25/2011 7:37:13 AM with a score of 0
This story was probably the reason that I joined this site in the first place. Whenever I read it I get really nostalgic and it makes me wonder what the hell i'm going to do when the bombs finally do drop. For those of you browsing through and see this story I have a few words to say. Read. This. Story.
on 7/25/2011 6:20:46 AM with a score of 0
jesus that rivaled halo cod and any of those awesome xbox games nice use of fallout pics to
on 7/24/2011 7:40:40 PM with a score of 0
jesus not the ending i was expecting
on 7/24/2011 6:28:39 PM with a score of 0
Really a great game, i finally got all four epilogues, and i liked how all of the story lines tied together in some way. The game was really well written and enjoyable. Nice work.
-- FalloutMatser on 7/23/2011 7:46:57 PM with a score of 0
An amazing one. The endings are amazing aswel. Especially the one where you build a new town out of the Bunker.
The game reminded me so much of Fallout, that I ended up enjoying it much, much more because of it...
on 7/22/2011 8:21:49 AM with a score of 0
-- :) on 7/21/2011 9:37:07 AM with a score of 0
More romance options? I put in more than enough, this isn't an Anime/Bioware dating sim.
on 7/20/2011 10:30:45 AM with a score of 0
Really a good game, although like some pople in the comments ahve said it is more like a story, its a good one. It was very well written and interesting to play. highly reccomend
-- falloutmaster on 7/18/2011 7:11:52 PM with a score of 0
Great Story. Maybe more romantic options.
on 7/16/2011 11:41:50 AM with a score of 0
it was good still havnt finshed all the parts of it
on 7/15/2011 6:27:41 AM with a score of 0
Well I've played this game a couple of times now and I have to say its one of my favorites with so many ending and each one holding you in the story.
on 7/15/2011 5:30:24 AM with a score of 0
Because this is more of a story than a game.
on 7/14/2011 1:52:03 PM with a score of 0
I recant my old whiney comment about this game. I still dont like how you can make a descision, that gets you killed, but not because of that descision, but another descision you had no controll over. Dispite that, this is an overwhelming story, in depth and length. 8 out of 8.
on 7/14/2011 1:28:11 PM with a score of 0
Wow dude. That's all i can say without giving away massive details about the entire story that i got but i do have one thing to say: The Vault-Boy pictures from the Fallout series. Every time i saw one i had to laugh :)
on 7/9/2011 4:40:04 AM with a score of 0
I have to say, this game does not disappoint... again.
The first time I played this, I got the "New Haven" route finished and thought I got one of the best endings after messing around with a few other routes. I come back to play again a few months later for kicks and discover the "Atomic Alliance" route! I always did wonder about the Combine and those cyborgs; I love how every route connects in small ways to the other ones! I still kinda like the New Haven ending best, but maybe just cause it was my first. Hmm... maybe it's time to play Necromancer again. Love that one too. Continue making storygames like these two, EndMaster!
-- Raziel on 7/5/2011 10:29:45 PM with a score of 0
Nah, I didn't draw anything, those are all images I found. I did some minor photoshopping on some of them though.
on 6/12/2011 8:48:34 PM with a score of 0
This is unbelievably detailed. I'd almost say it falls under the psych genre as it follows various lives with a sort of grim self-observance (though, inevitably, your character is a "leader" type).
EndMaster, did you draw the cartoons?
-- Rowan on 6/12/2011 6:31:08 PM with a score of 0
This story is too good, you should make another similar game.
on 6/9/2011 10:01:08 PM with a score of 0
It was a Sunday afternoon... The Jaegar had been poured and the Cherry Cola was there to wash it down... I found this lil' site to stop and visit... The story was like a GRANDE meal, I couldn't have enough! Tanks!:)
-- Nick-o on 6/5/2011 7:09:44 PM with a score of 0
Great game, got the "Sirus" epilogue on the compound path. Typos throughout, but mostly minor ones and I wouldn't pass an experience this memorable up for something so trivial.Highly recommended.
-- Dejanus on 5/31/2011 4:12:34 PM with a score of 0
Very nice! It took me a while to figure out the first page, but when I did, it was hilarious. There was definitely some major effort put into this piece of work.
on 5/31/2011 11:43:53 AM with a score of 0
More interesting than most books I've read. So many possibilities to follow that it's mind boggling. Someone definitely put some hard work and effort into making this the most interesting read in existence. Double thumbs up to the author.
Fantastic job. ;)
-- Jeff on 5/26/2011 8:21:21 PM with a score of 0
I like this, but it doesn't really give you enough choice. There could have been more choices as to who you voted for and such.
-- 1nd1g0 on 5/26/2011 5:23:38 AM with a score of 0
Reminded me alot of Fallout
on 5/24/2011 7:07:59 PM with a score of 0
i liked the story. i wish i could of gotten the girl at the end of the story though
-- roro on 5/23/2011 9:36:54 PM with a score of 0
yay i wins
on 5/22/2011 10:25:04 PM with a score of 0
Impressive! Shelter, New Haven, Atomic Alliance and Zero Dominion. Each story with its very own themes and atmosphere. The same characters used in some of the stories are also amazing as they just reflect how the path you take affects other stories that might have taken place. Besides all these, when all 4 storylines converge they reveal the main character's personalities completely. (His loner side, leadership, hidden nature,etc)
I want to give a 9/8! :)
on 5/17/2011 10:33:59 AM with a score of 0
-- Jacob on 5/15/2011 9:26:08 PM with a score of 0
Good, but All the endings were a little depressing!
-- Orpehus on 5/15/2011 5:43:16 PM with a score of 0
Yay! I finally got to an epilogue!
-- Will on 5/14/2011 6:32:21 PM with a score of 0
Wow-your writing skills amaze me. As a grade 9 high schooler I was always looking for something more interesting than video games and doing homework. When I found this homepage, it was like finding a cave full of treasure; but what was the most expensive piece was this story. Your ability to create a funny and interesting piece of work really helped me to understand the importance of making every decision. I think that this story made it to my top 10 stories I have ever read (that is very high, for I am a book worm). Thank you for spending so much time and effort in this-it is truly a masterpiece!!!
-- Jay Wang on 5/12/2011 6:46:56 PM with a score of 0
What's not to love about this game? Plenty of options to explore. Good times to be had.
on 5/11/2011 9:26:28 PM with a score of 0
very good work on this
-- reader on 5/11/2011 8:01:35 AM with a score of 0
Finally made it to the epilogue! I liked your various references to different kinds of mythology by the way
on 5/9/2011 10:07:11 PM with a score of 0
Did someone really post that this needs more endings? try playing it twice, then three times, then four times, then realizing that there are way too many endings to read at once and leave for a day or so before trying again. That's what I did at least.
on 5/8/2011 8:49:26 PM with a score of 0
Very good story/game. It has a lot of endings that are all interesting. It is clear that the person who made this put a lot of time into it. Definitely one of the best choose-your-own story gams ive ever played.
-- Roland on 5/8/2011 6:28:20 PM with a score of 0
-- Omar on 5/8/2011 4:15:03 AM with a score of 0
Needs more endings
-- RandomLord on 5/1/2011 10:21:48 PM with a score of 0
This was an amazing story; none of the others even come close to it.
-- pugpup1 on 5/1/2011 3:44:01 PM with a score of 0
By the way thanks for the help. I am Cole and your game is the reason I joined this site. It really is just that good. I also enjoyed Necromancer. I would love to see sequels to both of these "games". Really I just like the interesting story lines you have.
on 4/29/2011 1:30:02 AM with a score of 0
Finally got the fourth ending. That was good but I like the New Haven ending best. Acutaly I like the endings the way I got them NH, MK, AA, and RL.
on 4/29/2011 1:04:23 AM with a score of 0
Dude I have read a good couple of your stories by now and you are by far my favorite writer
on 4/27/2011 7:49:24 PM with a score of 0
awsome make more like it its so great
on 4/27/2011 7:20:28 PM with a score of 0
That was an amazing game, best ive ever played
on 4/26/2011 10:00:45 PM with a score of 0
Loved the story, keep up the good work
-- Hmmm on 4/26/2011 5:21:28 AM with a score of 0
What a remarkable story. I had to sit there for a whole two minutes, trying to figure out which of the two options given was going to lead me to a disirable ending. And I did this twice. I don't think a different game has made me think quite as much. Usually, I'm the fantasy type of reader, but this was a refreshing change.
on 4/24/2011 12:47:58 PM with a score of 0
Got all 4 epilogues, great endings, great stories.
on 4/23/2011 8:08:03 PM with a score of 0
To Cole: Try the Experimental Shelter.
on 4/23/2011 10:56:40 AM with a score of 0
it was a good concept :)
-- brandon on 4/23/2011 8:23:42 AM with a score of 0
I really like the game. Just wondering what is the start of the path that leads to the fourth ending? I have already done mutant king, Atomic Alliance and New Haven endings. How do you get the last. Other than the difficulties with finding the last epilogue. It was one of the most fun games here.
-- Cole on 4/22/2011 11:48:22 PM with a score of 0
on 4/19/2011 10:33:09 PM with a score of 0
That was a great story. ooking fward to reading some of yor otherstories
on 4/19/2011 9:25:47 AM with a score of 0
on 4/16/2011 8:02:25 PM with a score of 0
Yay I just got a different epilouge. Personly I prefered the community shelter ending better than the special shelter one.
on 4/11/2011 7:22:14 PM with a score of 0
One of your best games!
-- Ben Holman on 4/11/2011 12:25:30 PM with a score of 0
This was awesome it took me like 17 tries to get the true ending
-- Random on 4/11/2011 2:31:00 AM with a score of 0
A really great story and ending, I got epilogue on my first try, haha.
on 4/10/2011 3:50:36 AM with a score of 0
I love this story probly the best thing I have seen in a very long time. I expecially like the pictures from the fallout universe it captured the story perfectly. I applaude the author for creating a story this captivating.
Thank you for making my day.
-- Garrett on 4/9/2011 2:46:38 AM with a score of 0
Intresting Story, I think it was a really good story on what the world would be like after the end. It took me about 17 times of failure to find the True Ending.
-- Fireplay on 4/8/2011 5:58:47 PM with a score of 0
Very addictive reading/playing, certainly held my interest! I liked the developement of the main character as you make your choices, and the interactions with other characters were always interesting and fun to read. However dialogue could get slightly confusing; there were some points where no indication was made as to who was talking. Also, I felt that we could have had slightly more control over the storyline (one point that sticks out is the vote over who initially became the leader between Ron and Elliot, you could have given the option to actually choose rather than have a default). That aside, I enjoyed the storyline, was totally compelled to keep going to find out how everything worked out for the characters, and will definitely play through again to try all available options. Really good work!
on 3/23/2011 9:23:49 PM with a score of 0
Nice 1 :D
-- Jon on 3/17/2011 8:13:43 PM with a score of 0
Certainly best story i read here. All paths are excellent
-- epiloger on 3/15/2011 4:36:33 PM with a score of 0
Great story! Really interesting, I definitely enjoyed it. The only problems were the grammar mistakes that sometimes made certain little parts difficult to read, and the little control you had over what you did, but still, great read :)
on 3/15/2011 1:03:01 AM with a score of 0
That was awesome, I enjoyed the story...reminds me of Fallout, LONG before people like the Vault Dweller went out and made his living. Everything here is cool.
-- Alex Young on 3/10/2011 11:30:38 AM with a score of 0
the first page was funny, then I kind of lost it. however, really well thought out and immersive. replayability is phenomenal. 8/8
on 2/27/2011 9:27:00 AM with a score of 0
Brillantly written story. A lot of parallels from the Fallout universe but it has its own character as well. A must read for post apocalyptic fiction lovers.
-- Engin on 2/19/2011 11:38:58 AM with a score of 0
The ending when u go to becky's shelter is crap , it should continue more
on 2/19/2011 10:45:19 AM with a score of 0
It's okay , need more choices
on 2/19/2011 9:36:36 AM with a score of 0
seriously best apocalypse story and one of best stories at site.
-- Sires on 2/14/2011 11:53:22 AM with a score of 0
Great game. It reminded me a little of Fallout, but in the end I found it to be very different in many ways. I thoroughly enjoyed it, and am proud to say, that, I beat the game in 4 hours. I tried many ways, but found success in building my 'Chosen' Empire!
on 1/29/2011 4:08:43 AM with a score of 0
I thought the story was nice and very entertaining though It was a bit short. I thought that perhaps the entire story would continue once above ground.
-- STeven F on 1/28/2011 5:03:37 PM with a score of 0
First off, this story was - amazing. - I'm just going to get that right out there first.
Second off, that said, it had a few of it's blunders. I love how each decision isn't nesecarily a life or death thing, and how some decisions are, while invebitably futile, lead you on a sort of fun rat race before you get wasted.
But, there are some decisions that are either wholly decieving, or are just pointlessly annoying. As in, some choices are very logical, but with a little more knowledge, are incredibly stupid, or some just give you a paragraph saying "You died, failure." for making a perfectly rational decision.
Mayhaps you have some more entertaining goose chases to add?
Just my two cents. Thanks for making such an awesome story, mate. You gave me a night and a half well spent.
-- Waldy on 1/27/2011 5:18:27 PM with a score of 0
best game ever made!!!!!
and i got the map ending!
on 1/26/2011 10:28:22 PM with a score of 0
I got an ending that made me feel like a neutral hero and then I got another ending that made me feel like a real hero, even one that made some mistakes, with an epilouge where my descendant still brags about me. Seriously man, your stories are pure gold.
on 1/11/2011 8:41:12 PM with a score of 0
very good, there are a few endings where i wish it continued, i would say what it is if it wouldnt give away so much.
-- supersafe on 1/9/2011 3:08:05 PM with a score of 0
Holy crap man, that war epic!
Thumbs up for the storytelling, bro. Got a nice sense of fulfillment playing through.
Keep it up
-- kLons on 12/15/2010 7:40:05 PM with a score of 0
Woohoo! Awesome story, maybe make another one.
-- J.T. Pugh on 12/5/2010 10:41:16 PM with a score of 0
Wow, this is like Fallout, albeit a bit closer to home in terms of personal interaction. The Fallout franchise would be much more interesting and successful if they choose to incorporate this element.
Thanks to the author for this wonderful experience.
-- Rick on 12/5/2010 9:44:02 PM with a score of 0
Well worth a few click throughs, can turn even the most bad tempered a$$hole into a decent man!
-- JD on 11/16/2010 10:45:41 AM with a score of 0
To quaker: There is a proper epilogue to the Experimental Special Shelter, but it probably isn't the path that most people think. (Big Hint: It doesn't even involve of lot of the chatroom stuff)
on 11/16/2010 9:28:18 AM with a score of 0
I loved the flow of the story, and the influence the Fallout series clearly had on it. I've only played through it once, but I was very pleased with how my story went and how it ended.
on 11/15/2010 11:23:14 PM with a score of 0
Outstanding. The first way I took was the community shelter story, and I think it's the best of them. Though I'm not entirely happy with the way I got together with Nina... She seemed to be quite insane too and I originally only took her to save the two men she was going to kill.
The chatroom story was a bit disturbing... is there a way to get a proper "Epilogue" ending on this route at all?
The militia story is cool and well written, and the mutant stuff is crazy but that comes from making the crazy decision of going to a major city unprotected days after a nuclear war. The "shelter" stories are much deeper though, psychologically.
on 11/15/2010 5:27:50 PM with a score of 0
This was well written, imaginative and engaging. I found only a few minor errors in the whole story. I couldn't help myself and went through multiple story arcs. My only sadness was that the main character was so male. I need to look for a story this good with a female lead. GOOD JOB SIR!
-- Natascha on 11/15/2010 4:17:35 PM with a score of 0
omg again, i just beat it again pn a completly dif storyline
on 11/12/2010 5:15:52 PM with a score of 0
its dif. every time i play it!
on 11/12/2010 3:18:14 PM with a score of 0
Very enjoyable, if only it continued.
-- Erik on 11/11/2010 8:40:36 PM with a score of 0
This is one great story
on 10/12/2010 8:07:02 PM with a score of 0
best game evar.
on 10/11/2010 4:37:25 PM with a score of 0
One of the most awesome stories I have ever read. I have read this story so many times I eventually ran out of endings. Better even than playing Fallout 3. Would love to read more stories like this...
-- Ryger22 on 10/9/2010 12:00:15 AM with a score of 0
That was fun, and really well written. There was also a few points where you really had to consider which would be your best option, at that juncture. I really enjoyed it.
-- OmniGenius13 on 10/4/2010 11:23:29 AM with a score of 0
this is the dumest thin in the world. i would rathr play with parpie dolls thanthis. this od horrible awesome is wat beyyer.
on 9/28/2010 6:45:38 PM with a score of 0
One of the best stories on this site it is well written and has many differing story lines,if i could i'd give it a 20 out of 10.
on 9/21/2010 1:31:27 AM with a score of 0
Absolutely amazing. The only even slightest complaint is the time it requires but it will bring you enlightenment.
on 9/11/2010 8:44:56 PM with a score of 0
Ok, I finally got one of the special finals, and I must say I love it. It's a very good story. (Although the main character starts out being an asshole).
-- William Tender on 9/8/2010 6:53:49 PM with a score of 0
I got killed too soon. The story seems quite interesting, but the main character is such an asshole I didn't manage to get into the role.
-- William Tender on 9/8/2010 5:33:06 PM with a score of 0
-- Kevq on 9/8/2010 6:48:01 AM with a score of 0
I got an epilogue, so I guess this means I won. Featured on my profile in my top 5 games. excellent replayability, excellent plot, and so many decisions that I can't seem to choose. 8, no questions.
on 9/5/2010 1:30:49 PM with a score of 0
Great concepts and it was very interesting.
on 8/28/2010 9:00:05 PM with a score of 0
This story is amazing. If it weren't for those wannabe douchebags who are jealous that they can't write half as good (bad? in a good sense) this game would be top. Definitely one of my favorites. 8/8, far higher if i could.
on 8/21/2010 8:08:26 PM with a score of 0
long and arduous, i felt like it should be more of a game thing, but i do appreciate the effort you have put in.
i was killed, yay for me!
-- cæzar on 8/18/2010 10:19:45 PM with a score of 0
Whole-ee fuck. I just got the Compound epilogue with Sirus and the AA. Fucking badass man, well done.
on 8/16/2010 10:01:18 PM with a score of 0
Very well made. I didn't get the best rating, I died by shooting myself, but after a while it got better, not worse. Great job!
on 8/16/2010 5:17:06 PM with a score of 0
O my god! I forgot about the community option! Wow! You really out did yourself! I love how when you choose between single experiment shelter and community, all reasoning works. Choose a community and you deal with human nature! I cried a little at the end of both. :)
-- aaron Wolff on 8/15/2010 6:41:28 PM with a score of 0
I think I'm gonna cry. *sniffle sniffle*
Wow, what a demented imagination you have! Aramgedon, fringes of civilization in a chatroom, relationship with a computer, it's all so creative. Well done.
-- Aaron Wolff on 8/15/2010 5:32:43 PM with a score of 0
Words fail me. Truly in my top 3.
on 8/9/2010 5:39:09 PM with a score of 0
It was a brilliant story which so much depth, it kind of reminded me of Fallout 3 with the whole high tech shelter. But is was great to the end and it would definatily make a great book or novel. :D
-- Conor on 7/13/2010 6:01:46 PM with a score of 0
IT WAS AWSOME when will u make a sequel? the story left me wanting more
on 7/13/2010 4:31:39 PM with a score of 0
Wow, what a depressingly accurate story. I knew I would get killed if I chose to fight back, but I honestly couldn't see myself leaving without a fight.
Well written and logical, I'll be sure to give this one another play through!
-- Eli on 5/31/2010 6:24:48 PM with a score of 0
Wow, that's really good!
-- Scott Milne on 5/24/2010 3:49:56 AM with a score of 0
Good story. I used to write these when I was in high school.
-- Steve on 5/17/2010 12:03:29 PM with a score of 0
Two plays, two almost unrecognisable, but thoroughly believable stories. I was amazed :)
on 3/29/2010 8:36:36 PM with a score of 0
Spectacular. Thank you so much.
on 3/17/2010 3:25:23 PM with a score of 0
-- The Pink Flamingo on 3/11/2010 8:33:34 PM with a score of 0
Holy crud, I went through the whole game and read nearly every page XD This was totally absorbing; a lot of thought and effort went into it. I liked how the circumstances (i.e. city mutants, the Combine) were constant no matter which path you chose. The only drawback was the occasional typo or omitted word, but there was so much story in this game that it would be difficult to smooth it out perfectly.
on 2/7/2010 7:40:35 PM with a score of 0
This is still my favorite story by far on this website. It's thoroughly entertaining and original. It's also great that there are so many completely different possible storylines.
on 1/20/2010 9:25:46 PM with a score of 0
Excellent game. So many endings possible.
I particularly enjoy the one with Becky after you destroy Miranda.
Keep coming up with these awesome ideas.
on 12/22/2009 6:30:42 PM with a score of 0
it was interesting.
-- jeremy on 12/14/2009 11:32:17 AM with a score of 0
Hahaha this is great stuff, just had my first try, man oh man i cang wait to start over and try again! Love the style of writing and storyline, fun!
Fyi, its all compatible with an iPhone,
-- Jorn on 11/16/2009 4:48:51 PM with a score of 0
This is awesome! Maybe you could make a sequel.
-- qwew80 on 10/16/2009 6:52:45 PM with a score of 0
No matter which way you go about it, the endings are NEVER the same, and the story stays as interesting as ever. Very nice work!
-- Mark on 9/27/2009 11:06:17 AM with a score of 0
Fascinating... the psychology of survivors of a nuclear attack hiding out in cramped quarters is masterfully and believably executed.
on 9/22/2009 1:28:58 PM with a score of 0
i. cant. stop. playing. it.
on 9/21/2009 11:07:55 PM with a score of 0
Well there's many endings, but only 4 "epilogues". You said ending 3 so I'm guessing you got the one where you founded the Atomic Alliance.
If you want a hint, there's 4 different paths you can take just before the nuclear attack. Whatever choices you made before then is going to lock you into a certain path. Two of them are inside a Shelter, and two of them are outside a Shelter. (And you got one of those already)
Technically there is a long "5th path" which occurs outside a Shelter too, but you don't get an epilogue for it.
on 7/21/2009 4:19:43 AM with a score of 0
great story but how do you get the other endings i get ending 3?
-- 123colby123 on 7/20/2009 4:13:31 PM with a score of 0
completed it it was good i love the ending :)
-- 123colby123 on 7/18/2009 1:17:31 AM with a score of 0
the storyline was gripping, good enough to be turned into a movie.
-- Sam on 7/2/2009 11:25:19 AM with a score of 0
Excellent story. love it
-- oriol on 6/28/2009 10:43:15 AM with a score of 0
The next time you see someone decry branching plot fiction, send them a link to "Ground Zero". Its quality and depth not only show the authors mastery of the form, but also reveal the mediums as yet unrealized potential.
The Aarseth/Montfort/Murray devotees don't know what they're missing.
on 6/5/2009 10:37:43 PM with a score of 0
I cannot believe I forgot to comment on this. All four endings are superb, even the dead end paths, which would normally be neglected, have been carefully written. The writing is so good it doesnt even need for the choices to have logical conclusions - finding out what could happen more than makes up for it. 8/8 man. Equal to Mommy.
on 5/26/2009 8:36:34 PM with a score of 0
it was so good i came to tears at the end may i say THIS IS THE BEST STORY GAME IN HISTORY... this story is amazing.
-- mack on 5/21/2009 11:12:12 PM with a score of 0
My character became a king!!!!
-- Fniff on 4/4/2009 5:29:15 AM with a score of 0
My character became a mutant, Join zeropils guard and wandered into the wasteland. All the way,It was a beautiful game.
-- Fniff on 4/3/2009 3:43:41 PM with a score of 0
Dang that was awesome. I'm gonna start stocking my basement with supplies right now.
on 2/20/2009 7:24:27 PM with a score of 0
Very good game, reminds me of Fallout3. Its very obvious you plenty of time into this. Again good job
on 1/27/2009 4:07:36 PM with a score of 0
Wonderful story. Very well put together. Epilogue is a nice ending too! Great job author!!
-- Maz on 1/26/2009 12:22:20 PM with a score of 0
I got one epilogue!! XD This is pretty cool. I didn't think I'd be this into the story. Good job. Though I'm not into the characters, but what the heck? That's just my opinion, but the characters themselves are okay.
on 1/5/2009 11:19:26 PM with a score of 0
Whoa so many branches! I take it back
-- Michal on 12/13/2008 5:25:09 AM with a score of 0
That was short
-- Michal on 12/13/2008 4:18:49 AM with a score of 0
Lol. You guys REALLY want to get to rockerchick don't you?
on 11/24/2008 8:45:02 AM with a score of 0
A nice fun game though to mean it seemed a little short. (Ended searching for Becky's shelter)
-- Seto101 on 11/22/2008 9:22:40 PM with a score of 0
Ah yes the rockerchick ending. More than one person has expressed their desire to see if you "made it" or not with that one.
Like I said in one of my other previous comments on here, there's a reason for why it ends like the way it does, however, maybe I might just make a short little "semi-sequel" detailing that journey, so that some people can get some closure on it.
on 8/18/2008 5:39:06 PM with a score of 0
I'd have love to have known what happened in the ending with you going to rockerchick, but it's taken almost 2 days, however i've finally just about got every ending possible.
on 8/18/2008 1:57:30 PM with a score of 0
good game. 8/8
on 8/9/2008 5:16:53 PM with a score of 0
good game? lol i am just joking. i really do wish i bought thay bomb shelter tho. even though i died 8/8
on 8/8/2008 10:04:48 PM with a score of 0
Good game! 7/8
on 7/26/2008 11:21:00 PM with a score of 0
on 7/25/2008 1:18:19 PM with a score of 0
Very entertaining! An realistic. I'm a big Apocalyse Fan.
An a bit of a Survivalist myself.
-- Marc on 7/14/2008 6:46:59 PM with a score of 0
One word: FANTASTIC!
on 6/10/2008 3:30:10 PM with a score of 0
Sorry, entered early on accident.
Anyways, the detail and elegency in the writing is optimal. I've only played through two of the story lines, and will certainly try to end of all of them. Grand game. Epic game, even. You, sir, are what this site is all about.
on 6/6/2008 2:29:56 AM with a score of 0
At first, when I first saw this game listed, I didn't think it would be as good as it was cracked up to be. But hten I played it. It's simply and utterly amazing. The detail and elegency in the
on 6/6/2008 2:26:54 AM with a score of 0
That was a truly excellent game, my friend, 2 thumbs up
on 5/12/2008 6:56:04 PM with a score of 0
Great game! One of my favorites around this site. I always seem to get a new story each time too; replay value is great!
on 5/8/2008 2:40:44 PM with a score of 0
That was a pretty good game. I only did the community shelter one, so maybe I'll go back and survive the nuclear strike alone. It did feel more like a story than a game, like you said in your description, but a pretty damn good story.
Long live Fallout, by the way.
on 4/1/2008 9:13:26 PM with a score of 0
I haven't yet played the game in all available ways (and didn't even reach a happy end) but i can surely say I like this game. Yes it's wordy and I don't know english so well (i'm russian) so i sometimes had to switch my attention to find the meanings of some words in dictionary but even so I enjoyed the game's atmosphere. I was surprised the game doesn't have general storyline (or it does?) and consists of different independent stories with their own characters (Becky and Miranda; Ron and mad sociopath) and so on... And I very like these stories of living in the shelter :)
It was a little hard to understand the main character 'cause he seems to be a real misanthrope and uses too much "f**king" in his speech but I got used to him after some time. So thanks to the author for this game!
-- Aeroalex on 3/22/2008 4:21:55 AM with a score of 0
That was a lot of fun. I had trouble occasionally, because I'd forget my character's personality occasionally and choose an option that was obviously bad. I actually went and got every ending available, because I have no life. I liked the community shelter ending best, but the Marina ending was also good, and probably better for the future of humanity. Anyway, as I said, it was really fun. Thanks for taking the time to make it.
on 3/3/2008 10:56:52 PM with a score of 0
Wow! I am so proud I made it through to the end!!! (It took me two tries but i got it the second time!) This was such a great story with a wonderful ending! Im glad I took the time to take this adventure!
-- stevicoye on 2/22/2008 2:12:07 PM with a score of 0
Wow! That was an excellent story i only wish i had made better choices and gone further. Your writing is spectacular good job.
on 2/18/2008 8:07:57 PM with a score of 0
Holy crap, man! This story is remarkable! It has well-developed characters, an incredible storyline, great dialogue, and fantastic epilogues that wrap up the story and tie up loose ends (if there are any. I've only gotten Epilogue 3, but it is awesome). In short, you are an amazing writer, and this is one of the best CYOA games I've ever played. :)
-- Nimitz_15 on 2/18/2008 5:04:20 PM with a score of 0
I played it again. I like the fact that depending on your first few choices, you can live in different places later in the game.
on 1/24/2008 9:31:10 AM with a score of 0
Dang, this story is awesome. Please, keep writeing more!
on 1/23/2008 8:21:44 PM with a score of 0
Good but long
on 1/21/2008 9:19:36 AM with a score of 0
on 1/15/2008 6:20:27 AM with a score of 0
This last time was the best! I feel like I've read a whole novel in one sitting.
on 1/7/2008 12:18:30 AM with a score of 0
I haven't got the Scooby Doo ending yet.
on 1/6/2008 10:41:20 PM with a score of 0
That was better than the last ending, but I still wanted more!
on 1/6/2008 10:35:46 PM with a score of 0
Died a horrible death. Is there a way to win? Just kidding. I'll play again.
on 1/6/2008 9:57:25 PM with a score of 0
I liked the story; it's very well written. Lots of effort was put into it. I liked the "Fallout" feel of it. IF YOU CAN'T WAIT UNTIL FALLOUT 3 COMES OUT, THIS IS A MUST READ.
on 1/6/2008 9:35:28 PM with a score of 0
even though i didnt make it very far that was a great game.... i died in the wilderness.... but i give this game a 10/10
on 12/29/2007 4:25:10 AM with a score of 0
this was really well done, and i think i finnaly got every ending, the must recent being the mutant one, great job
-- some dude on 12/17/2007 2:06:15 AM with a score of 0
Loved the detail and the story
I've played it many times trying to get every ending(even ones where i end up dead)
8/8, five stars and all that
keep up the good work
on 12/4/2007 8:28:18 PM with a score of 0
this is one of the greatest sci-fi story ive ever read, and ive gone through most of the endings...i just like how every thing connects with each other to form the whole story...its really epic and i can see that u have put in tremendous effort for this...keep up the good job mate...
-- tgan3 on 11/25/2007 11:51:20 AM with a score of 0
Awesome! I got 2 of the good endings and I really like how things can turn out completely differently for each choice you make. I really hope you write more stories in future.
-- doseki on 11/3/2007 10:52:49 PM with a score of 0
This was fantastic! I love how you could get completely different stories depending on the choices you made. You have obviously spent a great deal of time on this - let me tell you that it was time well spent... 8/8
-- MutantMike on 10/27/2007 7:29:52 PM with a score of 0
This was a great game.
Good job mate.
on 10/22/2007 8:08:20 PM with a score of 0
I'm really liking this game. I've already played it four times and it's nice to see that there's about six endings I've seen so far. I wonder if I've completed the right one though?
on 10/22/2007 5:15:09 PM with a score of 0
Indeed. Happily there's none of that in this story.
Alright enough about deviants, and more comments about the actual story! (If anyone so desires to leave one)
on 10/20/2007 11:57:06 AM with a score of 0
That makes me sick.
on 10/19/2007 9:11:17 PM with a score of 0
Sexual deviants that get off on anime animal porn and dress up in fursuits to have sex with each other.
Their destruction will be one of the good things to come from a real nuclear war.
on 10/19/2007 3:50:20 PM with a score of 0
Wtf are Furries?
on 10/19/2007 12:58:48 PM with a score of 0
Luckily for DEP I know his "Furries" comment isn't accompanied by a 1.
on 10/15/2007 10:43:35 PM with a score of 0
on 10/15/2007 8:34:30 PM with a score of 0
Oh...my...god. Here I am thinking going into the shelters was the main story, only to go back and do TONS of other things. The writing of not going into the shelter is amazing, well thought out, and imaginative. I saved the world, and am now back doing something else. Excellent replayability and definitely one of the best stories on the site. I upped the rating to 8/8. Wonderful job, End.
on 10/14/2007 6:32:53 PM with a score of 0
I loved the Fallout and Alpha Centauri pics, as well as the way you use language (i.e., the chat dialogues, the differences in AI versus human). The story was imaginative in that it basically dealt with total human isolation despite the ability to communicate with words - I may be looking too hard, but it seems a good analogy to the way humans interact in today's society with total wireless information beaming around. However, for me at least, the romance thing doesn't work well here and a lot of the hacking techniques seem sort of disingenuous.
on 10/14/2007 1:46:08 PM with a score of 0
This time I helped Society...
on 10/11/2007 7:46:06 PM with a score of 0
This is one of the finest pieces of work I have ever read. I absolutely loved it. It is written in a completely different sort of format to Snow, so I'm afraid I can't really compare them, but this is one of the best storygames I have read. No, one of the best pieces of writing. Ever.
on 10/10/2007 4:58:25 AM with a score of 0
Hooray! I won the war! Cool game, and is MissKitty a l*sbo, or what?
on 10/8/2007 4:58:49 PM with a score of 0
Amazing story. The only thing it was lacking was a link where you could somehow kill or harass or do something to that Bomb Shelter Lady on the phone! GRRR!! lol, Great job, man.
on 10/8/2007 2:47:48 PM with a score of 0
One of the best games I have ever played. I need to play it again to see all the possible endings. My only complaint is the ending I get is a bit of a cliffhanger. I won't spoil anything, but you don't know what happens to him as he walks to meet the girl.
Overall though. Epic. 8/8
on 10/7/2007 5:12:21 PM with a score of 0
Played again, I gotta rethink this. This is truly an amazing game, although I think Im still loyal to mommy as my favorite -- this is a close second.
on 10/7/2007 3:58:55 PM with a score of 0
Love it everytime I read it, EndMaster. Thanks for bringing a STORY to this GAME SITE. High quality story, excellent read. The choices you make have lasting consequences. Still my favorite story (with Alpha Wolf coming in a close second).
on 10/7/2007 10:58:57 AM with a score of 0
Great job! :D
I liked it, 6/8
on 10/7/2007 9:14:51 AM with a score of 0
Very, Very good! Behind Mommy, and a few others but still extremely good. I really love the length on each and every page. My only complaint is that as your playing you seem to feel this sense of hopelessness because so much happens on every page. You choose an option and then the character does this but it leads to something else and he does that... and another.. and another so that by the time you get to the next choice you feel as if you didn't really determine your path.
on 10/7/2007 4:08:44 AM with a score of 0
Wow. Great story, end. 8/8
on 10/7/2007 1:08:46 AM with a score of 0