Noticed that the other thread was starting to get pretty long, so figured I'd make a new one. Been reading through the comments of POF today, and here are a few of my favourites:
parts of it were hard to understand. I come from a Christian background so the concept of slavery and forcing children to kill is foreign to me, let alone, it being acceptable in ancient times. certain liberties were taken I assume. gladiators were men, not children and I highly doubt a master would allow a child to fight in the arena
-- JasonX on 6/19/2017 1:53:07 AM with a score of 0
... Considering he comes from a "Christian background", the guy's obviously never opened a bible if he doesn't understand the concept of slavery.
this shiz is pretty kool dood did this instead of homwork lol thx for the good me me's
-- Nick on 2/25/2017 10:11:04 PM with a score of 0
Glad to know my game is the reason you're getting held back another year. ^_^
NICE ONE, FEW GRAMATICAL MISTAKES BUT ITS OKAY PLS MAKE PART 2
-- sn3akmo on 9/28/2016 10:57:48 AM with a score of 0
I just like the irony in this one.
It was nice except for one thing...it didn't have a dolphin.
-- Hu Da Phuc on 6/1/2016 6:36:19 PM with a score of 0
Damn, I knew it was missing something. >.<
no cursing please
-- greda on 1/28/2016 12:36:42 PM with a score of 0
why do you do this kill your self
-- wtf on 2/17/2017 10:43:41 AM with a score of 0
It was an interesting story. Much better than the other one I did.
-- Zeaundra on 1/24/2016 5:49:32 PM with a score of 0
Yeah, yours was shit.
I'm usaully a silent reader, but this story changed that. I laughed, I raged, I nearly cried, God I felt like I was there! And not just becausethe story was in second person! Please don't see my comment as a fake, "pay me to make you look good" type of thing. This is a genuine response and I've honestly never been this into a story! YOU HAVE TO READ IT! I could see this as an actual hardcover book! Even a movie! Love the author keep up the good work! Love love LOVE this story! XOXOXOXO Also, to whoever is reading this, please understand I'm not being paid to write this comment! (I tend to say "I wonder how much he/she got paid to wtite that..." when I read comments for anything lol so I'm just putting that out there for anyone who's like me!
-- Tasha on 6/14/2016 11:32:52 PM with a score of 0
£5 well spent. ^_^
-- Niggatron 5000 on 11/1/2017 1:48:51 AM with a score of 0
... Yeah, this one's not interesting, I just really liked the username.
I wouldn't be surprised that all the IPs (if they rated the game) come from the same area and probably with a few from the same school. She probably told her friends about her game which is a good way to boost the game's rating if they actually bothered to use different IPs and to actually make an account. Oh well. She's Mormon? I never saw that.
lol she's a homeschooled freak tho
Maybe it's just the old Warrior Cats crowd , desperately latching on to whatever cat related content the site produces.
Not nearly as funny as Jake's alt follow up PM to me after I warned him about not being an idiot and then went and proceeded to be an idiot.
Date: 2/21/2018 8:33:35 PM
GO SUCK DICK thanks for helping me with those bullies your such a hero. how could you do that to some one who just wanted to make a game ebon and mizal have been cyber bullying me and you take their side your so pathetic. you're so fucking Mean
Well, I once did one of my satirical comments on a retard's six crappy storygame in the past few days. (It was deleted before I could save it.) He became extremely annoyed, so I decided to have some fun with him. The string is long, so it's here instead. I've pm-ed it to others before, but it has so much lol material like:
"I am 24 years old and about to get a job at Moo Moo's. I support Gay marriage and am republican. as such, my views in my story game's reflect my views in real life. if you do not like it, tough."
Maybe I should make an "Interesting PMs" thread.
Generally posting PMs is frowned upon around here, however I make the occasional exception with banned idiots that keep making alts because at that point they're fair game.
Jake was probably getting banned eventually anyway since he was apparently writing straight up porn for his story.
Awh! And I was looking forward to reading his masterpiece, "50 Shades of Gay"
Amazing how he actually got "you're" correct on the third try. It warms the heart a lil.
Oooh, now I wish I was able to read it before it was unpublished. :D
Ah, cool! Thank you for that.
This is the first page? I am....confused.
You're feeling exactly the way you should, it's what the author intended.
OMG, this is beautiful! Not since the infamous Harry Potter fanfic My Immortal have I seen such a masterpiece!
so so so sad i cry and cry and cry when i play this
-- foxy pink on 3/15/2018 8:39:41 PM with a score of 0
this so sad i cried for a very long time it is also very cute
-- foxy pink on 3/15/2018 8:27:12 PM with a score of 1
Farewell, My Childhood Self
i loved it and when emily died i cried really long
-- foxy pink on 3/15/2018 8:18:28 PM with a score of 0
Talk about your "i cri evrytiem"
Quite like this one on Tower of Riddles. ^_^
Ever wondered why I dislike Swededn? This game is an example of why.
You had the flag of Sweden with no sign of Finland...
I entered the Sweden door, since you know, it's right next to Finland...And they frekkin' killed meh!
Nevar trust Swedan. Evar.
-- Rosetail on 5/31/2015 10:58:12 AM
Comment on my storygame TechNOIR:
Still not as good as The Hunt For Cake.
-- Slasher on 2/13/2018 2:48:52 PM with a score of 2
Comment on In School Suspension that is very contradictory.
Yeah as if I even care but it was pretty amazing
-- Moana on 2/17/2018 10:43:45 AM
The roasting of Steve, a comment on Prophecy
Based on the very juvenile dialogue and poor sentence structure, I'm guessing this was written by someone in their mid-teens. If that's the case, there are some interesting ideas and somewhat humorous scenes. If you can fight through the roughly 3000 examples of toilet humor, there's some entertainment value to be had here.
If it was written by an adult, I'd have to say I'm underwhelmed.
-- nogard42 on 2/18/2018 4:07:22 AM with a score of 0
A nice one from Mayana.
Look, randomness is bad. It is fine in small amounts, but if that's the entire point of the story, then that story will be bad, too. This wasn't funny or interesting to read, a complete waste of time. Unpublish this and go read a book or a featured story on this site. You might notice they're very different from this pile of shit. If you don't want to be serious about writing, then please do us all a favor and just keep your stories unpublished from now on.
-- Mayana on 4/26/2018 1:41:25 PM with a score of 0
FUCK! I died again I sucked at this choose you story, just like I fuck and sucked in real life.
-- yezster on 4/27/2018 8:15:44 AM with a score of 0
Always good when the readers can be honest with themselves.
Digging in the graveyard again because why the hell not.
Wild Night (Infinite Story)
Actually, the only gay people I've ever known all turned out to be creeps. I'm convinced every gay man has been molested as a child.
One guy ended up screwing me out of $100 (not literally) the other one ended up hitting on me. Actually they both did, and they both admired my ass - which did flatter me, I must admit. It got to the point where one of them was trying to convince me that I'm 'lying to myself, and that I really loved him and I'm really gay'
That's when I told him to go to Hell. I thought I was an open-minded man of the 21st century, but gay people creep me out.
Anyway, this is turning into a tangent. This story is pretty horrible. Pixielaughs is it's only redeeming value.
So gay people are all bad and they'll steal your money... You learn new and interesting things every day. ^_^
I always love these:
I had a scare at the end- like the pics, it makes things fun.
-- LuvLee on 4/23/2018 12:13:41 PM
Left on a game called Night in the Woods… By Luvlee. ^_^
Here's a fun one.
The battle of two sites https://infinite-story.com/story/info.php?id=916
Infinite Story 4 Life! - Feb 1, 2007
CYSers are a bunch of fucktards.
Come and get me bitches. LOL - Dec 22, 2014
Time has passed and now I am a cruel tyrannical overlord of said CYS fucktards.
And to think, I hesitated. - May 11, 2018
I dunno. Pretty sure he still thinks we're a bunch of fucktards. ^_^
It was terrible. Horrible sad and deathly. DO NOT READ IT THIS BOOK. It is about a girl who dies. A guy loves her and dies too, but is having so much fun he doesnt realize it. It sou d okay, but please, if you care for your happiness, don't read this. It is super creepy. I have nothing good to say about it.
-- CC on 5/15/2018 9:24:22 PM with a score of 0
But if he's having so much fun he doesn't realize he's dead, surely that's a happy ending?
PrincessStarlight on 5/19/2018 for The Ocean's Daughter
PrincessStarlight on 5/19/2018 for Find a Date Before it's too Late
PrincessStarlight on 5/19/2018 for An Honourable Gentleman?
*Sighs* So Romantic
PrincessStarlight on 5/19/2018 for The Proposal
PrincessStarlight on 5/18/2018 for Love Triangle
PrincessStarlight on 5/18/2018 for College Romance
PrincessStarlight on 5/18/2018 for His Smile
PrincessStarlight on 5/18/2018 for The Fox and The Fawn
SO ROMANTIC, SO ADVENTUROUS, SO COOL, AND SO AWESOME. I LOVED IT, IT WAS SO GREAT IT IS MY FAVORITE ONE OF YOUR STORYGAMES GRACIE98. IT WAS FAN-FLIPPIN'TASTIC.
I feel like she's going to burst out into song about her prince coming someday.
New drawing for a character in one of my choicescript games. I'm keeping it. ^_^
No, wasn't me, I only just noticed the ongoing romantic comments.
EDIT: There, she unlocked a new achievement.
PrincessStarlight on 5/19/2018 for Love SICK
SO FUCKING ROMANTIC!!! <3
Huh... Eric seems like a strange name for a female.
Also, I took a look at the game expecting it to be about a guy called Matt... It was not.
Ah! I see.. That makes way more sense. ^_^