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3 months ago

Noticed that the other thread was starting to get pretty long, so figured I'd make a new one. Been reading through the comments of POF today, and here are a few of my favourites:

parts of it were hard to understand. I come from a Christian background so the concept of slavery and forcing children to kill is foreign to me, let alone, it being acceptable in ancient times. certain liberties were taken I assume. gladiators were men, not children and I highly doubt a master would allow a child to fight in the arena

-- JasonX on 6/19/2017 1:53:07 AM with a score of 0

... Considering he comes from a "Christian background", the guy's obviously never opened a bible if he doesn't understand the concept of slavery.

this shiz is pretty kool dood did this instead of homwork lol thx for the good me me's
-- Nick on 2/25/2017 10:11:04 PM with a score of 0

Glad to know my game is the reason you're getting held back another year. ^_^

NICE ONE, FEW GRAMATICAL MISTAKES BUT ITS OKAY PLS MAKE PART 2
-- sn3akmo on 9/28/2016 10:57:48 AM with a score of 0

I just like the irony in this one.

It was nice except for one thing...it didn't have a dolphin.
-- Hu Da Phuc on 6/1/2016 6:36:19 PM with a score of 0

Damn, I knew it was missing something. >.<

no cursing please
-- greda on 1/28/2016 12:36:42 PM with a score of 0

Fuck off.

why do you do this kill your self
-- wtf on 2/17/2017 10:43:41 AM with a score of 0

Okay! ^_^

It was an interesting story. Much better than the other one I did.
-- Zeaundra on 1/24/2016 5:49:32 PM with a score of 0

Yeah, yours was shit.

I'm usaully a silent reader, but this story changed that. I laughed, I raged, I nearly cried, God I felt like I was there! And not just becausethe story was in second person! Please don't see my comment as a fake, "pay me to make you look good" type of thing. This is a genuine response and I've honestly never been this into a story! YOU HAVE TO READ IT! I could see this as an actual hardcover book! Even a movie! Love the author keep up the good work! Love love LOVE this story! XOXOXOXO Also, to whoever is reading this, please understand I'm not being paid to write this comment! (I tend to say "I wonder how much he/she got paid to wtite that..." when I read comments for anything lol so I'm just putting that out there for anyone who's like me! 

-- Tasha on 6/14/2016 11:32:52 PM with a score of 0

£5 well spent. ^_^

5/7
-- Niggatron 5000 on 11/1/2017 1:48:51 AM with a score of 0

... Yeah, this one's not interesting, I just really liked the username. cheeky

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3 months ago
For everyone that'll find this thread a few months later, here are the links to the first and second threads.

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3 months ago
Just noticed Phoenix the Magic-Cat got a bunch of drive bys one after another:

Very interesting and fun for the brain.
-- Parker on 2/12/2018 3:11:19 PM with a score of 0

I think it would be nice to add a little bit more to the story.
-- Scott on 2/12/2018 2:22:51 PM with a score of 0

Very intertaining
-- Jackson on 2/12/2018 2:21:37 PM with a score of 0

loved it
-- Hugo on 2/12/2018 2:21:14 PM with a score of 0

I FOUND ALL THE ENDINGS!!!
-- Emmanuel on 2/7/2018 10:39:36 AM with a score of 0
this was weird and amusing at the same time

-- Alana Eldridge on 2/7/2018 10:32:03 AM with a score of 0
this is good

-- angel palma on 2/6/2018 12:45:43 PM with a score of 0


There are either a lot of cat children lurking in the shadows, or this is a heartwarming display of all the other Mormons in the commune taking an interest in Bunny's work.

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3 months ago

I wouldn't be surprised that all the IPs (if they rated the game) come from the same area and probably with a few from the same school. She probably told her friends about her game which is a good way to boost the game's rating if they actually bothered to use different IPs and to actually make an account. Oh well. She's Mormon? I never saw that.

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3 months ago

lol she's a homeschooled freak tho 

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3 months ago

Good point.

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3 months ago
She has to be. She's like a tiny Mynoris.

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3 months ago

Maybe it's just the old Warrior Cats crowd , desperately latching on to whatever cat related content the site produces. cheeky

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3 months ago
COULD BE BETTER BUT ITS GOOD ENOUGH
Now You Gotta Deal With This S***
Jakethebro (Score of 0)
2/21/2018 12:51:31 PM

Jake's words on his last day with us and I'll cherish them forever.

I imagine End feels the same:

A Very Special Choose Your Story
I learned some valueable life lessons
-- Jakethebro on 2/21/2018 6:10:48 PM

Innkeeper
bruh I can't win
-- Jakethebro on 2/21/2018 5:30:18 PM with a score of 0

Oh, and another one on Innkeeper from a different(?) banned idiot:

i dint read just choose
-- Rapor on 1/23/2018 1:40:43 PM

Truly he speaks for us all.

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3 months ago

Not nearly as funny as Jake's alt follow up PM to me after I warned him about not being an idiot and then went and proceeded to be an idiot.

From: Youmadbro
To: EndMaster
Date: 2/21/2018 8:33:35 PM

GO SUCK DICK thanks for helping me with those bullies your such a hero. how could you do that to some one who just wanted to make a game ebon and mizal have been cyber bullying me and you take their side your so pathetic. you're so fucking Mean

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3 months ago

Well, I once did one of my satirical comments on a retard's six crappy storygame in the past few days. (It was deleted before I could save it.) He became extremely annoyed, so I decided to have some fun with him. The string is long, so it's here instead. I've pm-ed it to others before, but it has so much lol material like:
"I am 24 years old and about to get a job at Moo Moo's. I support Gay marriage and am republican. as such, my views in my story game's reflect my views in real life. if you do not like it, tough."

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3 months ago
...how does one's views IRL have anything to do with whether a story is good or not?

Anyway haven't read it yet but this reminds me that I once had a long, retarded conversation with a kid who told me I should ease up because how was he supposed to have time to learn grammar, what with the pressures of high school and running a YouTube channel?

I really wish we could put messages in folders or something because I have so many from faceless noobs and would like to organize them somewhat so I could actually find them at times like these.

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3 months ago

Maybe I should make an "Interesting PMs" thread. cheeky

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3 months ago

Generally posting PMs is frowned upon around here, however I make the occasional exception with banned idiots that keep making alts because at that point they're fair game.

Jake was probably getting banned eventually anyway since he was apparently writing straight up porn for his story.

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3 months ago

Awh! And I was looking forward to reading his masterpiece, "50 Shades of Gay" crying

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3 months ago

Amazing how he actually got "you're" correct on the third try. It warms the heart a lil.

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2 months ago
Wow, thanks a lot. I work on this story for almost 2 years, and come back to it to complete it, hoping people will like it. Then all my story gets is extreme criticism and even THIS:
'Or hell, do something that isn't writing'
Yeah, guess what, that was extremely mean. I try to make a decent storygame to make up for the other one and all you people do is show up and crap all over it.
Thanks. a. lot.
Oh, btw, I understand it might be a bit 'random', and the choices don't influence the story, but I tried my best to make it as well done as possible.
And if you don't know Undertale...
DONT
PLAY
IT.
I'm sorry if I seem a bit rude, but I put genuine effort and love into this story. Your reactions ruin that all.
There are worse storygames, btw. Look at those ones and then come back and tell me this one 'looks like it's written by a crazy hobo."
-- Crimspider on 3/5/2018 4:40:27 PM



@Mayana You did good work today.

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2 months ago

Oooh, now I wish I was able to read it before it was unpublished. :D

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2 months ago

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2 months ago

Ah, cool! Thank you for that. 

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2 months ago
Preserving the first page for posterity:







It's one of the more ummm, unique and memorable stories we've gotten in awhile.

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2 months ago

This is the first page?  I am....confused.

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2 months ago

You're feeling exactly the way you should, it's what the author intended.

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2 months ago

OMG, this is beautiful! Not since the infamous Harry Potter fanfic My Immortal have I seen such a masterpiece! heart

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2 months ago

Snow

so so so sad i cry and cry and cry when i play this
-- foxy pink on 3/15/2018 8:39:41 PM with a score of 0


Haunted

this so sad i cried for a very long time it is also very cute
-- foxy pink on 3/15/2018 8:27:12 PM with a score of 1


Farewell, My Childhood Self

i loved it and when emily died i cried really long
-- foxy pink on 3/15/2018 8:18:28 PM with a score of 0

Talk about your "i cri evrytiem"

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2 months ago
I want them to make an account. And also I want them to read Inseparable.

e: look at the order of comments there. Fucker skipped right over mine. HAVE THEY NO TEARS TO SHED FOR THE DEAD AND THOSE WHO STILL LOVE THEM ANYWAY?

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2 months ago
Also notice how they apparently spent 9 minutes playing haunted and twelve minutes playing snow. I think Snow is the only one where we should cry... because there's a damn kickstarter link on it!

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2 months ago

Quite like this one on Tower of Riddles. ^_^

Ever wondered why I dislike Swededn? This game is an example of why. 

You had the flag of Sweden with no sign of Finland... 

I entered the Sweden door, since you know, it's right next to Finland...And they frekkin' killed meh! 

Nevar trust Swedan. Evar. 

-- Rosetail on 5/31/2015 10:58:12 AM

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2 months ago
Rosetail was the WC apologist, right? Or am I thinking of a different one?

All those paws and tails blend together after awhile...

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2 months ago

Comment on my storygame TechNOIR:

Still not as good as The Hunt For Cake.

-- Slasher on 2/13/2018 2:48:52 PM with a score of 2

That bastard.

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one month ago

Comment on In School Suspension that is very contradictory.

Yeah as if I even care but it was pretty amazing

-- Moana on 2/17/2018 10:43:45 AM

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one month ago

The roasting of Steve, a comment on Prophecy

 

Based on the very juvenile dialogue and poor sentence structure, I'm guessing this was written by someone in their mid-teens. If that's the case, there are some interesting ideas and somewhat humorous scenes. If you can fight through the roughly 3000 examples of toilet humor, there's some entertainment value to be had here. 

If it was written by an adult, I'd have to say I'm underwhelmed.

-- nogard42 on 2/18/2018 4:07:22 AM with a score of 0

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one month ago
Seems about right.

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28 days ago

A nice one from Mayana.

School Massacre

Look, randomness is bad. It is fine in small amounts, but if that's the entire point of the story, then that story will be bad, too. This wasn't funny or interesting to read, a complete waste of time. Unpublish this and go read a book or a featured story on this site. You might notice they're very different from this pile of shit. If you don't want to be serious about writing, then please do us all a favor and just keep your stories unpublished from now on.

-- Mayana on 4/26/2018 1:41:25 PM with a score of 0

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27 days ago

Eternal

FUCK! I died again I sucked at this choose you story, just like I fuck and sucked in real life.

-- yezster on 4/27/2018 8:15:44 AM with a score of 0

Always good when the readers can be honest with themselves.

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27 days ago
I like him already.

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13 days ago

Digging in the graveyard again because why the hell not.

Wild Night (Infinite Story)

Actually, the only gay people I've ever known all turned out to be creeps. I'm convinced every gay man has been molested as a child.

One guy ended up screwing me out of $100 (not literally) the other one ended up hitting on me. Actually they both did, and they both admired my ass - which did flatter me, I must admit. It got to the point where one of them was trying to convince me that I'm 'lying to myself, and that I really loved him and I'm really gay'

That's when I told him to go to Hell. I thought I was an open-minded man of the 21st century, but gay people creep me out.

Anyway, this is turning into a tangent. This story is pretty horrible. Pixielaughs is it's only redeeming value.

- ChubbyTeletubby

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13 days ago
Rant @ the gays ft. One line review

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13 days ago

So gay people are all bad and they'll steal your money... You learn new and interesting things every day. ^_^

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13 days ago

I always love these:

I had a scare at the end- like the pics, it makes things fun.
-- LuvLee on 4/23/2018 12:13:41 PM

Left on a game called Night in the Woods… By Luvlee. ^_^

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13 days ago

Here's a fun one.

The battle of two sites https://infinite-story.com/story/info.php?id=916

Infinite Story 4 Life! - Feb 1, 2007

 

CYSers are a bunch of fucktards.

Come and get me bitches. LOL - Dec 22, 2014

 

Time has passed and now I am a cruel tyrannical overlord of said CYS fucktards.

And to think, I hesitated. - May 11, 2018

 

- EndMaster

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7 days ago
That explains a few things.

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7 days ago
Ahahahaha, I just noticed this post. How things change.

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6 days ago

I dunno. Pretty sure he still thinks we're a bunch of fucktards. ^_^

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9 days ago

Snow

It was terrible. Horrible sad and deathly. DO NOT READ IT THIS BOOK. It is about a girl who dies. A guy loves her and dies too, but is having so much fun he doesnt realize it. It sou d okay, but please, if you care for your happiness, don't read this. It is super creepy. I have nothing good to say about it.

-- CC on 5/15/2018 9:24:22 PM with a score of 0

Lol.

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9 days ago
I hope they read Inseparable next.

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8 days ago

But if he's having so much fun he doesn't realize he's dead, surely that's a happy ending? cheeky

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5 days ago

PrincessStarlight on 5/19/2018 for The Ocean's Daughter

SO ROMANTIC

PrincessStarlight on 5/19/2018 for Find a Date Before it's too Late

SO ROMANTIC

PrincessStarlight on 5/19/2018 for An Honourable Gentleman?

*Sighs* So Romantic

PrincessStarlight on 5/19/2018 for The Proposal

*Sighs* So Romantic

PrincessStarlight on 5/18/2018 for Love Triangle

so romantic

PrincessStarlight on 5/18/2018 for College Romance

so romantic

PrincessStarlight on 5/18/2018 for His Smile

so romantic

PrincessStarlight on 5/18/2018 for The Fox and The Fawn

SO ROMANTIC, SO ADVENTUROUS, SO COOL, AND SO AWESOME. I LOVED IT, IT WAS SO GREAT IT IS MY FAVORITE ONE OF YOUR STORYGAMES GRACIE98. IT WAS FAN-FLIPPIN'TASTIC.

 

I feel like she's going to burst out into song about her prince coming someday.

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5 days ago
PrincessStarlight on 5/3/2018 for Among the Trees

not so romntic


(Actually looks like she was doing the 'so romantic' thing for awhile before those too, was it you who docked her for comment spamming?)

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5 days ago
A Hero is Born..
SO STUPID, NO OFFENCE
-- PrincessStarlight on 5/1/2018 11:47:07 AM

lol

e: aaaah Briar changed her avatar and it's weirding me out

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5 days ago

New drawing for a character in one of my choicescript games. I'm keeping it. ^_^

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5 days ago
This is unnatural.

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4 days ago

You're unnatural!

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5 days ago

No, wasn't me, I only just noticed the ongoing romantic comments.

EDIT: There, she unlocked a new achievement.

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5 days ago

PrincessStarlight on 5/19/2018 for Love SICK

SO FUCKING ROMANTIC!!! <3

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5 days ago
I thought this was for real, damn. Would've made my day. (although I would've been sad at proof she was fake. Always with the weirdo noobs, I want to believe...)

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3 days ago
On A Matt's Purpose

: There Ismail a Ethan in my class he also rapes everyone I am FeMale.

-- Eric Lang on 3/10/2017 11:54:56 AM

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3 days ago

Huh... Eric seems like a strange name for a female. indecision

Also, I took a look at the game expecting it to be about a guy called Matt... It was not. cheeky

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3 days ago
Pfft, I'm old, I literally have no idea what I'm typing most of the time unless I zoom in.

Anyway I think I figured this out, Eric was just using the periodic table in his science class to state that he is Iron Man.

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3 days ago

Ah! I see.. That makes way more sense. ^_^