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Year's End Contest - Choose Your Own Prompt II

11 months ago

Year's End Contest - Return of the Choose Your Own Prompt Contest

Deadline: January 3, 2020 at 11:59 P.M. eastern time.

Entry Fee: 100 Points

Minimum entries required: Five valid entries or contest is moot.

Basic Rewards: 25 Points (entry fee returned + 25 points) for successfully submitting a story that achieves a minimum of 4.00/8.00 rating.

Additional Rewards: 100 Points for 1st Place; 50 Points for 2nd Place; 25 Points for 3rd Place

Restrictions: No co-authors. No recycled stories.

Format:

CYOA Fake News Requirement: Post a thread in the Writing Workshop and update twice a week on your progress.

Note: The entry fee is high to discourage people from taking prompts they don't intend to finish. Don't be an ass. If you take a prompt, finish it. Because someone else may very well have wanted that prompt.

Instructions: A) Choose a prompt. B) To claim a prompt, reply with the number you wish to select and the description of the prompt. C) Edit lock your selection so you cannot change it. D) Someone important will (probably) confirm your prompt within 24 hours. E) FOR THE LOVE OF GOD, CHECK TO SEE IF SOMEONE TOOK THE PROMPT YOU WANT FIRST.

Prompts: *** Prompts are binding as far as the plain language suggests. Beyond that, author creativity reigns.

1) Tell us a tale of a knight, a dragon, and a princess. Cupcakitty DONE

2) An aspiring medical student travels to a foreign land to study at a renowned hospital. The plague draws near. Kar BANNED AND SHAMED

3) A story set on a tidally locked planet. FistedDave BANNED AND SHAMED

4) Sharpen your ax, it's 793 - and the first of a steady stream of Viking raids are about to hit the British isles. Dezzo SHAMED

5) A better story about snow. Digit SHAMED

6) A story of a lunatic empress... with a fondness for horses. roffdoff SHAMED

7) Create a fantasy or science fiction world from scratch. The story must include a map of the relevant locality. Mara DONE

8) This story has an original and sensible magic system, built from the ground up. The plot is up to you. Shadow DONE

9) A romantic winter horror genre splice. Chef DONE

10) The younger son of a minor noble rallies coin and followers for his venture. His goal? Flee the kingdom and construct a castle on the shores of the mineral rich unclaimed frozen wastes in the far north. Derp DONE

11) This tribal community lived a rather simple existence with the occasional war and the odd bit of cannibalism - but everything changed when the strangely dressed gods arrived in their wooden turtles from across the sea.

12) The protagonist is an anti-villain. Everything else is up to you. Corgi DONE

13) A dwarf takes a jackass and a honeycomb into a brothel. What happens next? BryceTheJew SHAMED

14) The mad scientist has just created a new ... animal? species? creature? race? Whatever it is, she has an army of them, and things aren't ever going to be the same. Patandjenfan33333 BANNED AND SHAMED

15) Breathe fresh live into the tale of Little Red Riding Hood. Fluxion DOUBLE SHAMED

16) For your services to the crown, the king has granted you valuable lands near an important crossroads in a recently conquered territory. Now, it's time to retire and fulfill your dream of operating a renowned brewery and tavern ... but it may be wise to keep your sword-arm ready. Ogre DONE

17) History abridged: The protagonist is Attila the Hun.

18) History abridged: The protagonist is Cleopatra VII.

19) The protagonist is a goat farmer. The plot, genre, and time period are up to you. Mizal DONE

20) A cuckolded baron plots revenge against the local duke for impregnating his wife. enterpride DONE

21) They say the roads aren't safe for a young woman traveling alone. But that's never stopped you before. Wildblue DONE

22) A story set in ancient Mesopotamia. Maz DOUBLE SHAMED

23) A story that revolves around a mystery or a series of puzzles and riddles. Pugpup SHAMED

24) The supervolcano beneath Yellowstone exploded three years ago, and the earth has begun to slip into a new ice age. You really wish you didn't live in Siberia. Technology may be contemporary or futuristic. Ford (Chanbot) DONE

25) You're a pilgrim traveling to a holy site. To fund your travels, you tell short stories that the audience can influence. The setting may be historical or fantastical. Camelon DONE

26) The plot revolves around a graveyard tryst. Bilbo DOUBLE SHAMED

27) You live in a world overrun by monsters. Good thing you're a trained monster slayer. Chris SHAMED

28) Create a children's fable. Ninja DONE

29) The protagonist is a talking bear. Lopz66 DONE

30) For the bold - a story that will make Mizal cry. VainCorsair SHAMED

31) Diversity option: show them how it's really done. Victim SHAMED

32) EndMaster's box of horrors. Beg for EndMaster to give you a prompt. Canary DONE

33) CYOA winter-themed ballad. Serpent (Micropen) DONE

34) Frontier Contest throwback. TheDeadKin DONE

35) Chaos Contest throwback. Coins (Spartacus) DONE

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19) The protagonist is a goat farmer. The plot, genre, and time period are up to you.


I can work with this.

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I love the floppy-eared Anglo-Nubian goats.

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7 I WANT 7 NO ONE WILL STEAL 7 FROM ME

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Affirmed.

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12) The protagonist is an anti-villain. Everything else is up to you. 

I love anti villains.

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Confirmed.

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34) Frontier Contest throwback.

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Affirmed.

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Fuck it. 27) You live in a world overrun by monsters. Good thing you're a trained monster slayer.

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That’s the spirit. Confirmed.

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As an added motivation: If you can finish a story in a month despite the busier schedule and limited computer time you have now, you'll know that you'll be able to keep on writing while holding down a job and all the other adult things. Many members don't survive that transition so it is something worth proving. In other words, don't be an Ebon.

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Okay I have to complete this story now, no one wants to be an Ebon.

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9) A romantic winter horror genre splice.

I like this prompt a lot.  Let's do it.

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Ah, yes, I need to lock this.

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Affirmed.

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Does "no recycled stories" mean that you can't use one that was already published? Or that you have to start a new one now? I have a big game I am working on and it might fit one of the themes so I was wondering if I could pick that and use the game. I am not opposed to starting a new game from scratch if that is what we are supposed to be doing.

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Pretty sure the rule is starting from scratch, no games you've been working on beforehand.

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I will go with that, thank you Chris.

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What he said.

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12) The protagonist is an anti-villain. everything else is up to you.

Claiming the role regardless, but is my understanding correct that this is a Villian because he has evil goals, while his methods are generally good. Like I want to take over the city for my own dievious purposes so I am going to systematically take out all the other criminals and appear like a "hero" despite my intentions.

I am choosing this to challenge myself.

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Uh, Shadow, did you see the instructions? E) FOR THE LOVE OF GOD, CHECK TO SEE IF SOMEONE TOOK THE PROMPT YOU WANT FIRST.

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Lmao! I scrolled through and didn't even see that one... rip... I'll pick a different one

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I'll do 8) a unique magic system that is well explained

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Okay read everything again and 8) for sure was not picked. 

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Confirmed.

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He must not love God ... It’s in all caps, so it means any god too.

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I can incorporate demons in my story to play along with my new persona...

I do apologize though, I was skimming the thread on my phone while my family was watching the lions lose. I completely missed that one post. I only saw like Mizal, Chris, and Mara had entered.

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Seems youre already challenged enough, Shadow 

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I'll take number ten, please.

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Yes. 10 is the choice I choose.

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Granted.

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Goddamnit Bucky, your post is all fucked up when going in to update it. Now I have to completely manually edit the whole thing so it isn't a mess.

Fuck your contest, fuck your timing with these contests and most importantly fuck you.

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ACKSHUALLY, it's the RTE's fault. It's easier for me to just edit it. Were you trying to mark out the taken ones or what? Actually, Bucky should've just made a second post for people to reply to so that he could keep the OP clear and edit it himself, fuck him, you're right.

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I did the first bit of cleaning it up. I was about to cross out the ones taken and write the names next to them, but if you want to do that and keep track of the entry fees, go ahead.

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You have far more faith in people following a complicated instruction like that than me.

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Weird. I just typed the prompts normally and copy pasted the instructions from the last prompt contest from two years ago.

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End uses the RTE and you don't, so the post doesn't know what to do and just kind of explodes when he tries to edit it.

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When did he start using that? He was the first person to tell me it sucked back in the day.

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I've always used the RTE on the forums. It's just easier.

I turn it off for story writing and then just turn it back on after publishing it.

I've explained this like a billion times.

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Ah, I didn’t know you turned it back on for the forums.

Well, with one billion and one, I’ll remember now.

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I was forced into this. 24) The supervolcano beneath Yellowstone exploded three years ago, and the earth has begun to slip into a new ice age. You really wish you didn't live in Siberia. Technology may be contemporary or futuristic.

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And, locked. Have fun.

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Noted.

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5

 A better story about snow.

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Locked

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only a matter of time before you begin a kickstarter to fund surgery on your broken back and promise a VN, becoming a mini con-mod seth.

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I expect great things.

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What do the following mean?

A better story about snow

Frontier Contest throwback/ Chaos Contest throwback (basically just write a story with the rules of that contest?)

Diversity option: show them how it's really done

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1) You need to learn CYS history. Find our resident penguin for ye old lore.
2) Yes.
3) Protagonist can’t be a straight white dude or dudette. Unless you’re playing the brother/sister incest card.

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3) Jar of piss has to be one of the 17 gender options

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3) see the first page of Red Fools for reference.

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29) The protagonist is a talking bear.
 

I'm assuming it's fine to go into negative points temporarily?

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That's what I'm doing. I only have 77 points.

 

Look up "Sir Bearington."

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Sure, you probably owe EndMaster extra requirements though.

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So I am supposed to fake a development thread twice a week? What is the point of fake a development thread about a game nobody give a shit about?  Should be better than i pass that time writing the game?

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It’s a joke. Technically it’s a “requirement” because it keeps people focused on their story and allows for community engagement. But we’ve never enforced it. End just claims the souls at the deadline.

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She's upset at having to spend thirty seconds twice a week updating a thread. That's an entire minute that could otherwise go into writing the game.

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Taking 22, 'cause I want to learn stuff about mesopotamia. I don't promise it'll be historically accurate, though. 
if not available anymore I take the 4

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You get 22.

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thanks!

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16) For your services to the crown, the king has granted you valuable lands near an important crossroads in a recently conquered territory. Now, it's time to retire and fulfill your dream of operating a renowned brewery and tavern ... but it may be wise to keep your sword-arm ready.

I think I can work with that one...

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Confirmed.

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Sign me up for 16

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Already taken

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Fuck you Ogre, I will take 2 

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You get Prompt 2.

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Dammit, why didn't you take this 5 minutes ago? I've been waiting for someone to claim this one so that I could use that as my excuse for not writing!

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It’s a prompt that suits you.

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You have declared war, prepare for your death

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fart noise

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The only death I see here is a suicide.

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What was he banned for again?

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He was thrice shamed, was bestowed a new account out of mercy, and got shammed again.

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I'll take prompt 20. The hateful cuckolded baron seems an interesting premise.

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And I guess this will edit lock it? Good luck with the writing everyone.

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Affirmed.

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Give me 33

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Noted.

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Also let the record show I was forced into this.

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Could I please get "(15) Breathe fresh life into the tale of Little Red Riding Hood?"

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Done.

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I'm glad you volunteered to join 100% of your own free will.

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You know what. Give me 32! 

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Great, the biggest degenerate participating in the contest picked 32.

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I need a prompt, though!

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Now of course what would be amusing is to pick something difficult to write or better yet, give you the prompt like a week before the deadline.

However, none of that will be happening, but I'll PM something soon.

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I'll look forward to it!

It'll be the first story game I ever write, so fingers crossed! 
 

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Part of the fun of that prompt is the possibility you just refuse to give one at all.

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I claim 25. :)

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Should be interesting...

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Affirmed.

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Mizal has mentioned that she'll be taking care of the points business of the contest. I'll just be crossing off what's been taken and putting the names by the prompt.

And of course I'll be SHAMING the losers as usual.

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The pit is practically a time honored tradition here now. Ah, the changing of the guard.

Lopz66 has #29 - talking bear.

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This is a minor point, but I think it's worth noting. For those of you who take the time to get rid of those stupid double spaces between paragraphs in your story (easiest way I know of is to have RTE off when copy pasting your stories into the editor), I'll consider that a marginal improvement over a story of comparable quality that has those goofy wide spaces.

I think most people will agree that the single spacing is much more aesthetically pleasing and easier to read.

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I can't I have no pc only a phone. And I don't think logic that the fact of having a pc that allows a better spacing is a reason to give a better score.

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If you're typing directly into the editor, you can avoid those goofy spaces by having the RTE turned off. And yes, you can turn the RTE off while on mobile.

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What is rte?

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It's the Rich Text Editor. You can turn it on/off by going to: My Stuff -> Profile -> and toggling the RTE Box under Preferences.

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Hmm, even turning it off doesn't seem to get rid of the spaces when I paste it in.

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You pasting from Word? I'd advise turning off smart quotations (or whatever the bent ones are called) as I recall having trouble with that.

However, for spaces, I find that I am losing space rather than gaining it, in regards to the paragraph breaks, so it might not be Word...

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If RTE is off and you’re still having issues, don’t stress about it. Your time is better spent on the quality of the story itself. I really don’t have any idea what the issue might be, but I assume it has to be a setting from your writing software. Maybe Mizal or Brad or Ford could help.

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The game was rigged from the start.

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Also, contest entrants may want to keep this in mind - Learning!

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21

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Your wish has been granted.

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30) For the bold - a story that will make Mizal cry.

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Hint: You probably want to go with laughter tears.

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I pity you, you poor fool .

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Easier Mizal than me or End.

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So what would happen to the contestant failed to make Mizal cry, would they get shamed or what not?

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Well, I plan on asking Mizal if the story makes her cry or not. In the highly unlikely situation that it does, the story will get a huge boost on my rating card because it will have succeeded in making the desired impact on it's (very narrow) audience.

But so long as it goes along the lines of scoring emotional points or so funny you want to cry - it will hinge on how entertaining the story is and how well it's written.

I don't think anyone has ever set out a rubric for judging criteria here - my position has always been fiction writing is too subjective for a set-in-stone rubric. Each judge - and I don't know who will be judging yet - will make their decision based on what's most important, and how they weigh different aspects of the story, to them. That's a good representation of how a general audience will judge stories.

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I agree with you on that. And is true most with each person a different theme.

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What I'm hearing is Puns are a must, and it must be inferred that someone's mom is getting it. That is if this poor slob has any hope of making Mizal cry.

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Kar, I guess you should've gone for that prompt yourself, you're getting pretty close to making me cry already today.

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He didn't pull a wibbins ... did he?

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No, different kind of retard entirely.

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@Ozoni really should just suck it up and write a storygame. Imagine willfully remaining in a state where your only option is to show up shivering on Ford's doorstep to beg to be let in.

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Even I wouldn't stoop so low 

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What the hell. Since the talking bear one is taken, I'll try 23) A story that revolves around a mystery or a series of puzzles and riddles.

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You got it, dude.

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I'd like 1) Tell us a tale of a knight, a dragon, and a princess.

 

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Locked.

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Confirmed.

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Well, thank goodness that I have time to write this. I'm starting now, Trx for letting me come in the contest Bucky.:)

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Before you get carried away, can you tell us what prompt you've picked?

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 Number 23(involved around a series of puzzles and riddles and mystery):)

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Taken

okey...

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Fine, then 26 please.:|

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23 is already claimed.

You should take the Little Red Riding Hood one, seems age appropriate.

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Ha, Ha-_-

No

Then 14

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I said 23 was claimed. 26 is fine. Do you want that one or 14?

And do you know what a tryst is?

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14 and yes I do.

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14 it is. Locked.

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I'm halfway done with my book but I want people to see it now and tell me what I should change about it. :|

http://chooseyourstory.com/story/the-night-of-terror~2e

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Well, you already published it, so I guess that's your entry. It also appears to have pages without text or links, so the evil Mizal will eventually get around to unpublishing it for failure to meet minimum site standards.

So what to do? I suppose you can unpublish the story yourself before Mizal gets around to it. Then we can pretend this never happened, and you can spend the rest of the contest period working on the story to make it complete and submit a valid entry. Or I imagine you could just throw in the towel now. I really hope you chose the first option though.

I also strongly encourage you to take a look at some of the featured stories on the site, spend some time in the Writing Workshop, and read the writing articles in the Help & Info section. You have a great opportunity to learn a lot about writing - seize it. A good story can't really be written in a day. Writing is a process, and it takes time.

Best of luck.

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Trx!:)

Done:|

poison_mara kind of gave me a rating but it was ummm...

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You can set stories to "sneak peek" which doesn't publish them, but allows others to see them. Or create a thread for your story in the Writing Workshop and you can talk about it/ask questions/get feedback there.

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Thanks.

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Why did you say 'Done', as if you had followed his advice instead of sitting there for twenty minutes repeatedly rating your own broken game?

As far as I'm concerned you've already disqualified yourself. I guess good thing you also proved you'd never have been able to meet minimum standards anyway, if you want to look on the bright side....

It's Bucky's contest however so if he wants to keep you in it to see what you do next out of morbid curiosity or whatever, that's his call. But it's looking less and less likely you'll be able to hang onto your account that long either way.

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Let him be now, I am sure I won't be the last. Also, lHe can learn humility and not rush into stuff like rate himself with several spams accounts. To not deal with the fact that has screwed it up.  Then complain others have giving the score that piece deserves

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I think patandjen is a girl.

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It's an Alex of the Alexander variety. Don't be fooled by the avatar and username, that's just the YouTubers it's obsessed with.

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In a few years and a snip-snip, I sense it'll be Alex of the Alexandria variety.

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I laughed

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Same.

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Ditto

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That is a lot of eights for a very not eight story ...

Well, I was actually wondering if you would overrule me with your wizard powers. Just for the record, I would have been fine with that. But I've gotten soft in my old age, and I think the contests are a great way to really help people find ways to improve their craft. This is an opportunity to learn! Or something ... So I'm fine with giving a kid a second chance to prove us wrong. (Yes - us. My hopes are high, but my expectations do not fly as well.)

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Should I go with the classic 'lol, fag' here, or the trending 'ok boomer?'

So many questions.

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11 months ago
Well, I don't really see Greta from Sweden as a "hero" per se - so I'm probably trending toward boomer.

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11 months ago

She is our queen 

yaaaas slay kween

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11 months ago

nevermind

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11 months ago
Take the diversity prompt like your college trained you.

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11 months ago

Can I lock number 3?

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11 months ago
Sure.

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11 months ago

Okay I lock number 3!

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11 months ago
I really enjoy how the Writing Workshop has gone from being hooked up on life support for weeks to 22 new threads in the last two days....

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11 months ago

Including mine which someone should definitely read and give feedback on

 

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11 months ago

I claim 35. Chaos Contest throwback. 

Dragon dildos made me do it. 

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11 months ago
Locked.

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11 months ago

Hey, Im new on here. Im buds with @Davefaster, he showed me this sight. Im not the best writer but I was wanting to do #13 on the contest, the one about the Dwarf taking a jackass and a honeycomb into a brothel..

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11 months ago

FistedDave is your friend? Lol

Anyway, locked in.

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11 months ago

Yeah, he is lmao. But yeah, im new here, so its gonna take me a second to get used to everything.

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11 months ago

Maybe it's not the best idea to enter a contest as soon as you join the site?

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11 months ago
Too late.

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11 months ago

Yeah I know. This'll probably be funny, what with all of the noobs joining this contest.

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11 months ago

He's got this. He will be guided and prompted by me. He will probably have, at least a 10k story written

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11 months ago

Alright sure. Whatever you say. I'll look forward to it.

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11 months ago
He might've written other things before, and he seems relatively normal.

Of course if he's just going to do what Dave says, well

uh

should be interesting.

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11 months ago
This looks like fun. I'll put my current WIP on hold and claim #28: Create a children's fable.

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11 months ago
Locked.

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11 months ago

Well Bucky's contest is off to a great start, already one banned contestant. So much for entry 14.

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11 months ago

STOP>_<! you deleted all of my story games. I'm just 10!:(

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10 months ago
I'm sorry that happened to you, but try backing them up on your desk top. Just copy and paste in Word or something.

EDIT

Also, word of advice: since you're ten, you may not have experienced the gritty, awe inspiring, hilarious, troll festering toxicity that is the world of internet forums, despite your Gen Z pedigree. Especially forums like this one, which are kind of a throwback to the golden age of internet trolling (sometime around when you were born). As such, whatever you do, don't annoy people who have, for example, the power to delete your stuff. And definitely don't go telling people you're ten, because that already offends some people (not to mention, your age is probably a violation of the terms of service, since usually people have to be 13 to participate in internet forums).

Just be cool, go along with the flow, do not under any circumstances allow yourself to be sucked into the vortex of a flame war or argument. Just keep writing, and when you comment on the forums, don't stir any shit or allow anyone to bait you. Take criticism with a smile rather than offense, and stay low (and again, back your stuff up).

/free advice

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10 months ago
He's already been banned at least three times, and hasn't shown himself capable of taking advice like 'just stop posting' so you're really wasting your breath here.

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10 months ago
Ah. I don't envy you moderators. Hopefully the kid gets it this time.

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10 months ago

I'm always amused by pleas of "I'm just a kid or I'm only x age!" when I'm banning younger noob fucktards.

It's like they actually believe that's going to stop me.

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10 months ago
Especially when 100% of the time that's the reason you're banning them in the first place.

The only ten year old that never caused any problems around here is @StoryTurtle, and that's because she barely ever posts. I mean, presumably because her parents are forcing her to do calculus and practice the violin during the eight hours a day she's not making jeans for Walmart, but still, I wish more of them would do this.

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11 months ago
@Mizal @Bucky

When I get my points back for entering my story I want to give 90 to @Ozoni.

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11 months ago

I have a question because I think that we don't recover the fee If we don't reach 4/8 as score.  I would love have my fee back just for present a game. Because I won't get a 4.

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11 months ago
You might not just lose your points; End might give you special tasks.

Old requirement was minimum site standards, which was just a 3.00/8. We have also established a 4.00/8 can be approached or surpassed in a matter of hours with the right scheme. So it’s time to start expecting better.

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11 months ago

Well, I suppose is fair, for a native maybe is easy to have a  four. But well, I should have read the fact I would not recover my points just for presenting.

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11 months ago
This is very wholesome and normally I'd agree to this, BUT, you went into debt for the entry fee and taking 90 points would put you right back in the negatives. You can only take out loans for entering contests, any side agreements you have to have the points to pay for yourself. Best get to rating games.

e: Sometimes you are allowed to make bets with other contestants. I'm not sure if we're letting that happen here, but I suppose if End and Bucky are fine with it, those of you (and there are many) who went into the hole because of a lack of 100 measly points could be allowed to bet up to 25 against each other. You'll be getting a bonus of at least that much just for entering something eligible.

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10 months ago
I don't think its necessary here. It fit the theme of the Chaos Contest, but I think it's too much unnecessary work to keep track of the bets and figure out who loses and gets what.

But hey, you're doing the point stuff this time, so if you like self-inflicted torture ...

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11 months ago
I can't believe no one likes Vikings.

@Pirate - Hey, you, get in here. Pirates are close enough to Vikings. Come write about them and earn your place in Folkvangr.

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11 months ago

Wow, when you think about it, it's true. Anyway thanks but I'm currently working on my WIP and probably won't write another one in a such a short notice.

And what's Folkvangr? Is it a Viking thing?

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11 months ago
It's one of the "good" Norse afterlives. The honored dead of Freya.

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11 months ago

Oh okay, that's a cool fact. At least I've heard of Freja before. Thanks, Bucky.

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11 months ago
Vikings are lame now. They're almost completely ruined by historians intent on making them woke, when they're not being co-opted by literal Nazis.

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11 months ago
Vikings are never lame. They are an important fixture in every settlement of size in the upper Midwest.

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11 months ago

They helped move shipbuilding and navigating the sea further along. Also they were awesome warriors and their stories/myths are quite cool. They helped connect different cultures by trading too and I guess raiding.

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11 months ago

That's why you're doing the Viking prompt right?

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11 months ago

I'm not, I like the Viking age around 865 ad. The great heathen army was where it was at, along with Ragnars sons.

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10 months ago
I like how you think

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10 months ago

*bows*

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10 months ago

4.) 793 Viking raids on British soil?

Sign me up please.

Requesting for post the deletion of my post for numerous reasons if possible.

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10 months ago
I don’t understand that last bit, but you’re locked in for prompt 4. Good luck.

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10 months ago
Can't wait to have a stroke reading whatever you might put out

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10 months ago

So much entry 3.

Hell, if this keeps up, maybe I won't have to read any of these stories!

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10 months ago

Dave got banned too? 

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10 months ago
How are these people getting themselves banned so quickly?

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10 months ago
They are retarded and going against Endmaster, or being annoying in general

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10 months ago
Son of a gun, I was trying to coach him up into a better class of CYStian! What did he do this time? He was supposed to have Endeavor level protection.

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10 months ago

"He was supposed to have Endeavor level protection."

Well that was one of his problems right there.

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10 months ago
I saw the WW thread. Yeah, he was just begging for you to swing the hammer. That was also really rude of him.

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10 months ago
I imagine these questions will come up at some point, so I'll head it off now.

Yes, you can have proofreaders and beta testers. They are encouraged.

No, you cannot co-author your proofreaders or beta testers.

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10 months ago
And no, there is actually no way for any non-admins to know whether you've co authored your proofreaders as long as the story isn't in sneak peek and they're removed before you actually publish the thing.

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10 months ago
Good thing we have you.

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10 months ago
Yeah, the problem is to find them. they don't grow on trees sadly.

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10 months ago
Just post a recruitment forum in the Lounge. We usually have at least a few people that are willing to proofread for anyone, just to be helpful.

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10 months ago
6) A story of a lunatic empress... with a fondness for horses.

*hits the neigh neigh*

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10 months ago
Is there also an excellent horselike lady?

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10 months ago
For your inspiration, you are now coauthor

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10 months ago
We'll just go ahead and call that a DQ. End will be pleased. One less story to read.

Not sure what you did, but good job Cricket.

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10 months ago
I was just about to link the screenshot!
You're welcome. Happy to be of service.

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10 months ago
Pretty sure he's an alt anyway.

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10 months ago
He's not an alt. Make him write the story.

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10 months ago
Oh, he entered the contest, by all means take his points. And he still owes a story to avoid SHAME. He just isn't eligible to win now.

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10 months ago
Ecks dee

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10 months ago
So really it changes nothing.

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10 months ago
Anything but my 27 points!

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10 months ago
Yo I was kidding

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10 months ago

Doesn't look like it.

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10 months ago
Cricket if he is annoying to you or something you could punish him proofreading my game. I can't find a proofreader, not in cog and not here. So i totally accept slave labor

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10 months ago
I'll save Cricket the reply and proofread your game

notice the above capitalization of your name as my humble apology

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10 months ago
I believe you'd be better off flying solo than with roff. But I put a thread up in the Lounge, Mara. I'm sure a few competent people will be willing to help.

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10 months ago
Guess what, you were right. Lol.

Looking forward to the chicken's storygame.

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10 months ago
Anyone who wants or will need a beta tester/proofreader - we have some volunteers here.

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10 months ago

26) The plot revolves around a graveyard tryst.

damn why am I doing this damn I don't have time damn I need something to motivate me or I don't write...

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10 months ago

Locked

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10 months ago

I'll motivate you.  Go, Bilbo, go, write, damn you!

How's that?

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10 months ago

My God! You're right! I've never been more inspired!

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10 months ago
You used to be Mizal's pick for up and coming CYS star before you disappeared.

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10 months ago

Look, sometimes you decide to avoid humanity for a few months so you hike 500 miles with no internet. It's not my fault Mizal doesn't understand this:p 

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10 months ago

This is me encouraging you.  Whip crack, chair, bared teeth. 

Or motivating you.  Either way.

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10 months ago

Nooo... I can feel myself being banished back to writing my storygame... Curse you and your encouragement!

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10 months ago

Also I can write, but I'm pretty bad at writing branching stories. I can improvise a story in seconds but when I have to pin it down to three or four choices I struggle. 

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10 months ago

Fuck got my timezones wrong:/ Well, it is finished so I'll post it anyway...

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10 months ago

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10 months ago

I would join and take prompt 31 (diversity option) if I’m allowed to continue a story I started a long time ago and haven’t worked on since. I believe it has about 1,500 words right now.

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10 months ago
Negative.

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10 months ago

Oh well.

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10 months ago
I RECOMMEND YOU READING THE INSTRUCTIONS AS IT IS ACTUALLY FORBIDDEN CONTINUE OLD STORIES. So you are disqualified before being accepted that is a new record

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10 months ago

I read the rules. I was hoping that Bucky would be so desperate to get rid of the last few prompts that he would make an exception. Please don’t make assumptions.

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10 months ago

I mean... you could have made a new game and copied the 1,000 words over. It had to be, what, 3-4 pages max? Not that I condone breaking the rules, but seems like a silly thing to make a big deal about. If you are starting now, you are 12,000 words behind where my game is at even with those 1,000 words. Some people are procrastinating; however, you are in a similar position compared to proactive people. I know Camelon is at like 25,000+ words, for example.

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10 months ago

I didn’t want to circumvent the rules, and I didn’t plan on placing highly. I just wanted to motivate myself to finish a story.

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10 months ago

I have faith in you

 

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10 months ago

32k so far, but I'm not where I want to be. Lost too much of my writing time over the last week. I'm hoping I have a couple endings done by mid-morning tomorrow, otherwise this could end up as just another embarassing fiasco.

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10 months ago
You are amazing, I am only at 20,000 because I am trying to write slowly but more grammatically correct so I am using twice the time in writing a page compared with other contests (basically I did the same word account now in 20 days that in the last in10) Hopefully, It will be far easier to read and enough to get a 4.

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10 months ago

You're in.

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10 months ago

Can I get confirmation from Bucky?

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10 months ago
Endmaster outranks Bucky.

You're in the contest, it's too late to back out.

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10 months ago

I mean he can use the old story, but he'd be automatically DQed for it. He'd just be avoiding SHAME with it.

The intelligent thing for him to have done, would have been to not even mention the old story and joined the contest. Not like we would have known.

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10 months ago

I would think that the create date would give it away. Do I at least get the 25 points for submitting a story?

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10 months ago
No, you have to reach a 4/8 score for that. You should have read the rules

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10 months ago

I already knew that. End made it sound like I would only be avoiding SHAME if I submit a story since I’ve been disqualified. I want to clarify whether I would also receive the 25 points for submitting a qualifying story even if it’s disqualified from winning.

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10 months ago

Mizal's doing the points this year. That's up to her, I doubt it though.

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10 months ago
You’re only disqualified if you use that story.

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10 months ago

Ah okay. I guess I’ll start a completely new story then.

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10 months ago

I just said that fucktard. Pay attention you illiterate faggot.

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10 months ago

I am an EndMaster fan 

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10 months ago
You're damn right. I'm watching you, smh

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10 months ago

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10 months ago
Not gonna lie, totally fucked because I've gone through a bunch of different ideas and only have about 500 words on my fifth attempt right now, but I'll try and squeeze something out to avoid the SHAME pit. Damn you Bucky, every time I enter one of your contests I end up slacking hard. Totally your fault that I procrastinate so hard. Totally. E: Nevermind I give up.

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10 months ago
I thought this would go without saying, but I was wrong. Please post a link to your submitted entry here when you are done. (Good job Pitka.)

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10 months ago
I will end this tomorrow as I only have two endings left. My question is if I make it public before the contest deadline can I unpublished in the case of a proofreader send me more corrections before the deadline?

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10 months ago

Just don't publish and post until the deadline. You don't get anything for publishing early, so take your time.

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10 months ago
Once it’s published, that’s the entry. So I would put sneak peak mode on for proofreading beforehand.

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10 months ago
28,000 words and done. However, I will wait for any possible proofreading change to publish it.

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10 months ago

I could probably proofread this more, but I will not have much time tonight and tomorrow. Here is my entry!

Merlin: Origins

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10 months ago

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10 months ago
http://chooseyourstory.com/Story/Honor_Among_Thieves.aspx


I forgot about this and wound up having to write the last few endings on my phone. But we're at my grandparents so I won't have any more chance to work on it.

I wanted it to be longer, I had to remove a choice in the beginning that would have been it's own path. But I think it's still okay, let me know what you think!

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10 months ago

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10 months ago
My game is published but I don't know how to put the link here . Can you put it here for me please.

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10 months ago

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10 months ago

I did very little writing over the Christmas break, so the story will be drastically shortened from what I had originally planned. It'll still have the main puzzle (and probably not much else), but I hope that puzzle alone is good enough to make it an entertaining read.

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10 months ago

Here's my entry:

The Essucian Dragon

This might turn into a series. No promises there.

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10 months ago
edited out stupid question.

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10 months ago
But how do we mock it then?

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10 months ago

It's Ford, you can always mock him.

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10 months ago

"Methink’st [thou question] is a general offence and every man should beat thee.” - Shakespeare

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10 months ago
No pit of shame for me: The Drunk Explorer Inn

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10 months ago

Disney+ and Thrust 

Done!  I'll keep my participation record (and shame) clean, thank you very much.

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10 months ago

My entry:

The Book of Vanishing Tales

All endings in place, this time. :)

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10 months ago

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10 months ago

Centenarian

I did my best for my first story ever. Hopefully it's not total ass! 

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10 months ago

http://chooseyourstory.com/story/vampy

Better than the actual story I had written

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10 months ago

I give up. Should have known better than to enter a contest so close to the deadline.

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10 months ago

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10 months ago

http://chooseyourstory.com/story/ballad-of-the-dragon-slayer

 

Fml

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10 months ago

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10 months ago
http://chooseyourstory.com/story/the-brave-polar-bears

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10 months ago

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10 months ago

THAT'S TIME AND EVERYONE ELSE IS SHAMED!

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10 months ago

Sooo I'm a dumbass who got my timezones mixed up. I'm assuming I'm still out? It is finished I just thought I had an hour longer to edit:/

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10 months ago
There's been times late entries were disqualified but still let you avoid SHAME, but you'll have to wait on Bucky's call. That was almost a half hour over though so idk.

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10 months ago

Alright. That sucks, but the timezone was posted there so I get it either way. 

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10 months ago

I did the same thing last contest. Thought I had two hours left. I was warned just in time to publish it, but I didn't have all my endings done. I still need to go back and finish it, hah, I just got a bit burnt out putting so much work into it only to fail right at the finish line.

Hopefully, my current contest entry makes up for that rookie mistake.
 

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10 months ago
This is what I would have said, but End already ruthlessly tossed Bilbo into the pit. It’s getting full though, so maybe she can stack the bodies in a pile and climb out.

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9 months ago

@Endmaster

If I add a branch in my no-longer-contest storygame that features the character climbing over bodies to get out of pit of shame while a dark  figure looks on in contempt  would  that be a sufficient offering for me to escape the shame?

Might as well give the game some purpose.

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10 months ago

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10 months ago

Yeah, yeah, I'm a fool and an unoriginal one:p I should have at the very least fucked up in an interesting way. 

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10 months ago

Next time I'll print it out then say "Oh you wanted it digitally?" like my roommate did throughout college.

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10 months ago
Did that actually work?

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9 months ago

Yeah, pretty sure that excuse worked on at least five different occasions. 

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10 months ago
Hilarious and a bit pitiful and also weirdly fitting the Years' End contest had all these burnt out people straining to squeeze out the last dribblings of their 2019 energy right in the last twenty minutes.

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10 months ago
Jesus I read the deadline as the sixth for some reason. I’ll finish my story anyway, but I suppose I’ll get comfortable in the Pit of Double Shame.

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9 months ago
Just for the record, I am very disappointed in Dave. Even after being banned, he promised to finish his story. In all his glory, End even agreed that Dave could come back on a permanent basis (until he started being annoying again), provided that he come back with a very specific account name.

However, Dave has failed to uphold his end of the bargain, and he wasted a good prompt.

Also, since the @TheCanary has unpublished his story, he is ineligible to win.

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9 months ago
Canary never published his, apparently he ran afoul of the 48 hour wait like a base noob.

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9 months ago
Well, sad for him, but same result.

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9 months ago

I actually never said that, I said Dave could come back, I didn't say for how long.

Honestly, I just wanted to see if he'd actually change his name to FistedDave so I could mock him for being so pathetic and then ban him again.

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9 months ago
I didn't read the fine print clearly. But it's okay, I just wanted the story. Of course, Dave didn't even manage that in the end.

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9 months ago
Three stories left, and I'll be done. For possibly the first time ever, I may be the first judge to finish, well, judging.

And I'll say, from what I've read so far, there have been two stories that have blown me away. One story that didn't quite reach that level, but was a far cry ahead of the rest of the pack. And a number of shorter stories that had flaws but were nevertheless generally entertaining and amusing. Then we have those who pooped on the keyboard to avoid SHAME.

I'm looking especially hard at you, Corgi. You should take some lessons from Mizal on how to be a bum but still come off as more than a breast obsessed mongrel. She truly is a master of the deadline dance. Oh, and I haven't forgotten about you either, Coins. Golf clap for Ford for surprising everyone with actual effort.

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9 months ago
Here's my results, all of it is in order:

1. Camelon - 7
2. enterpride - 6
3. Shadowdrake - 5
4. DerPrussen - 5
5. Mara - 5

Cupcakitty - 4
ninjapitka - 4
TheChef - 4
lopz66 - 4
Wildblue - 4
Ogre - 4
TheDeadKin - 3
m[I]zal - 3
Coins - 2

Year's End Contest - Choose Your Own Prompt II

9 months ago

Haven't read anything yet, and probably won't get around to it for awhile.

Year's End Contest - Choose Your Own Prompt II

9 months ago

Here.

lopz66 - 6

Coins - 2

[M]izal - 4

enterpride - 7

DerPrussen - 6

Camelon - 6

TheChef - 4

Ogre - 5

Mara - 6

Cupcakitty - 3

Shadowdrake - 6

Wildblue - 7

TheDeadKin - 2

ninjapitka - 6

Contest picks:

1. Enterpride

2. Wildblue

3. Derp

4. Shadow

5. Mara

Year's End Contest - Choose Your Own Prompt II

9 months ago
Oh, you even share your individual story ratings now.

Year's End Contest - Choose Your Own Prompt II

9 months ago

I think I did on another contest, I'd have to check though.

Year's End Contest - Choose Your Own Prompt II

9 months ago

Yeah, I think you did that in the CoG/CYS contest.

Year's End Contest - Choose Your Own Prompt II

9 months ago
Top five stories for me, in order.
1. Enterpride
2. Camelon
3. Shadowdrake
4. Ninjapitka
5. DerPrussen

Year's End Contest - Choose Your Own Prompt II

9 months ago
Five was close between Derp and Wildblue, as I had issues with both stories but still liked them better than the others. In the end, Derp won out because I was more interested in the world he had.
Cupcakitty's story had some issues with format, and Mara's story had some with grammar. Those made things hard enough to read that it prevented both of them from making top five.
The main character of Lopz's polar bear story got on my nerves too much, and there were some places where I think the author forgot that he was physically a bear.
Chef's story did not make me laugh, and the action didn't interest me. Sorry. Maybe you just caught me in a bad mood, but I was bored.
TheDeadKin...that was a fucking pain in the ass to read those text walls, and I got a lot of formulaic or repeated pages in exchange.

Year's End Contest - Choose Your Own Prompt II

9 months ago
I’ll post a results thread later tonight.