Player Comments on A Very Special Choose Your Story
General Recommendation: If you can take a joke, then you should play this game. It’s a well-crafted story that does exactly what it set out to do, with a number of humorous moments.
Preview: Can you make good choices and survive high school unscathed? Hint: No.
=SPOILERS BELOW=
General notes:
I usually hate games that force the player against their will into poor choices and then try to waggle their finger at them, but I guess I can respect a game where self-righteous finger-waggling is the entire point. To those of you looking to make a game designed to forcibly teach the player a moral lesson, take warning: This game already takes the concept and does it in a better and neater way than it has any right to. You are unlikely to succeed in a similar task.
Part of this game’s success comes from the fact that it admits right up front that this is what it’s trying to do. Many of these other moralizing games try to “trick” the player into thinking the bad outcomes of their decisions were really their fault. This game is much more honest; it makes it clear to the player that you can’t win, you’re just along for the ride, so buckle up.
This story really does an excellent job of toeing the line between the absurd and the poignant. I’m constantly torn between feeling like “No, high school is nothing like that” and “Yes, that’s exactly what high school is like.” The absurdity allows the game it’s unique humor, but the humor in this story is very grounded in the real dilemmas reall high schoolers face, making you stop and think even through the surreal nature of the game.
Is this game actually successful at its purpoted goal of teaching wholesome life lessons? Well… kind of? Certainly the pitfalls the narrator can fall into do have less-extreme real-life parallels, and it is a fine example of what not to do as a high schooler. Perceptive high school readers will be able to look past the over-the-top nature of this game to appreciate the genuinely valuable advice it’s trying to offer.
The game certainly succeeds when it comes to entertainment value. There’s a sort of morbid fascination involved to finding out what exactly is going to kill you this time around. The fact that I genuinely enjoyed this game when it’s part of a genre and style I usually can’t stand is a testament to the writing craft and intelligence that went into its construction.
Overall, this is a very well-crafted game. It takes a simple concept, and packs a lot of high-quality humor and satire into a short game. The writing is delightfully scathing, and the game makes very good use of the choose-your-own-adventure format to tell a unique story.
And now you know!
Specific notes:
-Each branch ending with the moral of the story is a particularly clever touch. Each of the morals takes a legitmate moral (“Don’t do drugs”, “Don’t overestimate your ability”) and turns it on itself in an ironic and biting way, all while pointedly ignoring the fact that the player has no real alternatives. It also provides a well-utlized avenue for jokes that might otherwise be tough to fit into the narrative.
-Man, why do people drink bleach when there are perfectly good bridges availiable in most towns? It’s basic risk-reward analysis.
-The narrator’s parents don’t show up more than they need to, but when they do, they serve to emphasize then extent to which the narrator really has no support systems. And they add humor.
-Each of the various branches in this story are short and sweet, culminating in an amusing final scene. The length makes it easy for the player to quickly skip from path to path, and makes the story easily readable. This is a concept that does well from having more width than depth.
-Fun with acronyms!
-This game is successful at leaving the player with a sense of frustration, as there’s the sense that it would be so ridiculously easy to solve all the narrator’s problems with merely an ounce of common sense. Preventing the player from doing this is sort of the point, and it’s an effective narrative device.
-“You’ll probably expect a long and graphic detailed scene… well sorry, use your imagination.” Lol.
Grammar
All good!
Mastery of Language
There are some sentence structure issues, but not too many. Those that do exist actually contribue somewhat to the story’s conversational tone.
Branching
Really excellent, there’s a very wide variety of different endings the player can get.
Player Options/fair choice
Deliberately and masterfully awful.
CONCLUSION: An excellently written story that satirizes both high school and those that try to give shallow morals about it.
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Gryphon
on 2/26/2022 10:18:50 AM with a score of 0
To me, this is one of those stories that I find myself surprised that EndMaster has written it. Why do I say this? Because when I think of EndMaster, usually one of his expansive epics come to mind.
However, EndMaster decides to give his readers something a little different this time around. Life lessons! This story has a little something for anyone that might find themselves at a crossroads as to how they should proceed with life. These are tales of facing specific problems, but specific problems that more than hundreds may face in their lives.
There are easily enough endings and differing paths to take for one to get their fill if they look for that kind of thing out of their story-games. Why wouldn't one do such a thing? I feel that because EndMaster isn't hesitant to perhaps see just how much he can shape his stories while keeping high quality, we as the readers get a genuine good game, such as this one right here.
A Very Special Choose Your Story is just that. A story-game that is special, as it is well-written, fun, and creative. As always, one would be amiss to not check out what EndMaster has in store in these pages that he has weaved together.
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TharaApples
on 2/25/2021 11:55:08 PM with a score of 0
Harsh and humorous. I hit some of the harsher endings first and started to wonder if it would go way overboard, but never goes much farther than daddyphilia. Some passages are pretty lewd (avert your eyes, Mormon readers), but there's a warning at the start of the game you have to click past anyway, so you can't expect things not to get sexy after giving consent. Not to worry, this is a *wholesome* story because it's full of morals you get to read at the end of every fork!
Boring observation: the number of forks is very even across all paths, and this story is very Cave of Time, so you'll hit endings really quickly and backtrack a lot to hit the rest; it's wider than longer.
If you got this far into the review and haven't said no, just play it already. I gave it a 6 for the number of times it made me laugh.
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AnthonyScoffler
on 12/15/2020 12:49:20 AM with a score of 0
You need to kill yourself you conservative retard
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— Kysbro on 10/30/2024 1:45:16 AM with a score of 0
It was hella fun!
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— I'm not telling on 9/26/2024 11:56:46 AM with a score of 0
Don't worry I am not going to leave a triggered comment! Most of this is correct, miens the fact that girls can't be friends/"sisters"(seriously, they can be best friends/"sisters").
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— Lolo on 6/17/2024 8:10:43 PM with a score of 0
I love sex
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— Abby on 6/9/2024 10:16:39 PM with a score of 0
All these endings were hella funny 100% recommend
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Darealkyguy
on 5/6/2024 9:09:28 PM with a score of 0
EndMaster's stories are a fever dream of wildness. I feel like I'm watching an adult Tim Burton style movie that just gives no crap about anything or anyone's feelings and just writes for the sheer passion of writing. I went down the majority of the story branches and I loved how EndMaster gave morals to each story. It's kind of bittersweet, because reading this story reminds me a lot of my own childhood and suriving high school, having to make all sorts of choices and trying to "fit in" versus just being yourself and finding your own independence and self confidence. And even if you do either one, there's no guarantee that you'll turn out as a well rounded young adult or adult. This story is a firm reminder that life is a puzzle with no solution. While I don't think this story is meant for everyone, I do believe that it's very accurate when it comes to diving into some deep seeded emotions/feelings/insecurities that people struggle with, and I think everyone can relate to that, if they have the ability to do so. Great story, EndMaster!
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AppDude27
on 5/2/2024 11:21:13 AM with a score of 0
Its not even that im offended, it just isnt funny, at all.
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Socialistoutcast
on 5/1/2024 1:29:55 PM with a score of 0
THIS GAME IS TERRIBLE. DO NOT PLAY IT. YOU WILL REGRET IT.
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— TheStoryCritic on 4/25/2024 11:57:10 AM with a score of 0
1 thing : say stun seed backwards!
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kickmepostitnote
on 4/23/2024 11:48:27 AM with a score of 0
The tiniest bit excessive
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Microphone
on 4/7/2024 1:51:33 AM with a score of 0
This is cursed, in the best way possible! I've read all the pathways, both male and female (which I recommend you all do!) and I will remember many of them for the years to come. The only sad thing was difference in sex pathways (1 for male, 2 for female). And even that puny one for the guy resulted in !!!SPOILER death, sacrificial death! As a conclusion, I would remind EndMaster that all straight incest is wincest!
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Incubus
on 2/22/2024 4:46:41 PM with a score of 0
Amazing. Great job. Don't know what else to say.
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Fregnolento
on 2/21/2024 8:03:02 AM with a score of 0
This, god, ow, my face hurts, oh god, what the actual fuck, this is amazing! Damn you, I can't stop laughing!
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5merald
on 12/27/2023 1:20:58 PM with a score of 0
what the actual fuck xd
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beemoua79
on 7/26/2023 5:13:52 AM with a score of 0
Wow very cool edgy game (dw I loved it) I meant to click on 10 but goofy ahh mobile site I misclicked
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— Asher on 6/6/2023 7:36:22 PM with a score of 0
Oh god. This was awesome
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Grooooby
on 5/24/2023 8:43:34 PM with a score of 0
for some reason this was entertaining
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GenesisReboot1
on 5/4/2023 2:08:23 PM with a score of 0
im little offended but that's okay
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hussam
on 2/1/2023 12:03:08 AM with a score of 0
Wow. That was...something. I cant say I wasn't suprised, as I had looked into the author and their stories before, but DAMN. I have no other reaction or anything to contribute other than DAMN
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— Zephyros on 1/28/2023 4:09:57 PM with a score of 0
It will bring you enlightenment.
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DingDongBells
on 1/28/2023 8:44:32 AM with a score of 0
It's very interesting and has tons of different endings and morals :3
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— Bliss on 11/6/2022 9:52:10 AM with a score of 0
Ass ngl
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FFCETT77
on 10/27/2022 9:13:32 PM with a score of 0
this was InTeReStInG
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CheeseIsGood
on 10/25/2022 11:28:37 PM with a score of 0
WTF is this?? it's horrible Why do people like this?? You are forcing the reader to go down bad paths and in the moral of the story part you are making fun of people who go though this kind of stuff like 0/10 this REALLY bad
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— Rosie on 9/12/2022 12:04:21 PM with a score of 0
This comment originally was on Infinite Story, finally transferring it here to be seen more readily. Enjoy!
WTF, I thought I was a negative, pessimistic person, but you seem to be it because you like it!!! How could you write something liek this?! WTF is wrong with you?! What is wrong with the world?! This is just sick and wrong and evil. I'm not some puritane christian twat, I don't dissaprove of the individual events and endings you write about, what I despise is that you're just being destructive, you're not presenting any good sides, you seem to just be making fun of people that get problems and have unhappy lifes. That makes you the saddes kind of person. Are you a fucking psycopath? Don't words like empathy and compassion ring a bell?
Ok, I might be ufair and overreacting, I only quickly run through the female storyline and I just finished your Death Song story and wrote a comment about that. But I must say, BAD impression. I have been feeling bad all day and I decided to read your stories hoping I'd feel better but I ended up feeling worse.
And even with Death Song it's not like I didn't enjoy the story, I did, that's why I read the whole of it and rated it 9 when I was in the middle of it. But you've fucked up, you've given your readers a total anticlimax. Your'e a sadist with your audience.
Fuck you again you stupid jerk!!!
- drevenhaug Jan 10, 2008
(For part 1 of his rant go see Death Song!)
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EndMaster
on 6/3/2022 11:49:56 PM with a score of 0
This isnt actually educational and probably shoudnt be in the edutainment category. I can tell you enjoy old made for TV movies.
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— v on 5/27/2022 12:42:18 AM with a score of 0
I'm scarred...in a good way-
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OliveJay
on 1/19/2022 10:28:07 PM with a score of 0
very 2008
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junapple
on 1/8/2022 4:59:28 AM with a score of 0
This will keep me from being a slut. Thank you for the valuable lesson Endmaster.
P.S. Thanks for the tip I will have to try penicillin on my gonorrhea.
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WizzyCat
on 11/16/2021 10:45:55 PM with a score of 0
Endmaster deserves more praise for this game. On the very first page he encourages teens and their parents to spend quality time together. Even though the warning is fake it should still be read carefully to decide if this story is right for you and your parent(s)/teen(s).
The paired end choices are polar opposites, examples of how horribly wrong something can go whether the intentions for doing them are good or not. While the endings are over-exaggerated for comedic effect, it seems to reflect the average teen's ability to blow something out of proportion.
One could say it takes a sick person to write something like this. I think believing that is choosing to ignore how cruel and stupid teenagers can actually be. If nothing else, I would recommend reading the morals presented at the end of the branches. The advice given in them is genuinely good if you're willing to take it. Especially if you're a teen.
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Lux_Inferni
on 11/6/2021 10:33:40 PM with a score of 0
How have I NOT rated this story before? Great tales to help people pull their heads out of their asses, though it could be updated to include things like clout-chasing and wokeness
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Swiftstryker
on 10/28/2021 10:20:07 PM with a score of 0
it's super insightful to see into the mind of someone who thinks so negatively, yet they still continue to bring others down with them. I went through just about every story option and it's quite upsetting to see they all have endings where every action results in misfortune. Definitely feel bad for the way the author way the author may or may not be living as of now.
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computernoah
on 10/23/2021 2:03:17 PM with a score of 0
This gives you serious lessons and creates enlightenment.
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Agathaofgood
on 10/20/2021 2:39:07 PM with a score of 0
It’s kind of a sick and twisted humor and I understand why people might be offended. That said, I absolutely loved the game. It made me laugh out loud several times, especially on the paths that I could relate to somewhat.
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— L on 9/29/2021 6:22:53 AM with a score of 0
amazing writing man. although about the story it self, I playd as one of the maels as you know, I am a male and I am very well into my teens, and while reading this story, I fellt a mix of emotions from cringing at the death seens at first, then imagining how life is now. while it was a lot of funn to read and select every choice, it has definitly taught me some very important things. so thanks for writing this story, and also love your other ones!
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— PresidentLion on 9/28/2021 4:41:14 AM with a score of 0
Based
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WilhelmHeim
on 5/22/2021 4:22:48 PM with a score of 0
Err...disturbing, but oddly informative...yeah, yep, haha, ha...
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Aurora89
on 3/29/2021 10:43:37 PM with a score of 0
My friend went through this but I stopped her before it got that bad
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Tye13
on 3/2/2021 2:36:16 PM with a score of 0
It was okay I guess, it didn't entertain me the way that I thought it would.
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Castho7535
on 2/18/2021 9:49:33 AM with a score of 0
Awesome story.
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LucilleIsThirsty
on 2/10/2021 10:04:48 PM with a score of 0
lots of ending and a couple of werid ending and a very weird ending
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— JOHN WICK#7303 on 1/19/2021 8:51:03 PM with a score of 0
It was alright I guess, not the best one I've played by far. The only part I got pissed off at was the homophobia there at the beginning. Not cool bro.
2/8
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bondogggle
on 1/13/2021 11:37:20 AM with a score of 0
CANCER?!?! I have a disease and this is just sad and it was a lung cance.
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— Shanon on 1/4/2021 2:30:25 PM with a score of 0
well, it's something.
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— doubleu on 1/3/2021 10:42:06 PM with a score of 0
I would be surprised if not one person masterbated to this, but pleasantly surprised nonetheless.
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— orangatan on 11/22/2020 4:27:12 AM with a score of 0
I just wanna say I read this story when I was younger and from then on every time I wondered about self harm I thought "Oh no no no, I can't, I'll get lockjaw"
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jodithewitch
on 11/3/2020 3:30:38 AM with a score of 0
it's good that's all ill say :D
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— chloe on 9/28/2020 4:05:07 PM with a score of 0
I think I explored every possible pathway and every possible ending to this story. I really hope I didn't miss anything. It was fascinating. As a middle aged adult, with no kids, I could actually relate to a lot of the issues experienced by the teens in this story, being somewhat of a social misfit in school. I found this story entertaining in a very dark and morbid way because no matter what you do, you ended up losing your shit in the end. I don't know how to put it into words, but this was just too much fun.
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angelbears310
on 8/6/2020 10:15:09 PM with a score of 0
This was actual enjoyable, I liked it.
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Kytty
on 6/6/2020 1:46:17 PM with a score of 0
This book was horrible
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— , on 5/27/2020 12:53:24 PM with a score of 0
This story was... something. I felt in the mood to read an endmaster story, and I was deciding between this an imagination. Let's just say they are two diferent ends of the spectrum. I didn't know there was a story on this site more revolting than love sick, but here it is. Despite all that I love it. It is a great story and if you haven't read it then go read it right now. Then go read the butter bear, because you will need it after this.
So to start off I don't want to think that a parent decided not to read through this and read it for the first time with their son. Imagine granny and little timmy sitting on the couch, and getting the mutant baby ending. Not a pretty picture. The first ending I got was the cult one, and it was one of the more sicking ones. After reading through every page of this story, I like the endings. They are structured pretty well, and if you go and try to be popular then you choose a thing you want to do and make a choice about that thing. Then you see how you fail. It's very simple. The endings always felt very different, and the morals are sometimes very helpful! Or not, but whatever.
So I get why it is offensive to a lot of people. It has a lot of generalizations about large groups of people. Some who deserve it like the skin heads, but others not so much. That's okay though, because this a story. You don't have to read it, and it wasn't written to be taken serouisly. Believe it or not, you can disagree with someone on the internet and not insult them. It's a thing
This story game also has that endmaster flair to it. I've mentioned this in many reviews, but something about his writing makes everything good. If grammar is how good the burger looks, and plot is the patty, then style is the sauce, and endmaster has the krabby patty secret formula.
All in all, this story was great. I loved it and while I'm not sure I would recommend many people read it, if can handle it and remember that not everyone thinks like you do then you should be fine. It is still a endmaster story after all, and a pretty short one all things considering.
6/8
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MicroPen
on 4/6/2020 3:51:01 PM with a score of 0
With ratings, I wish I could go higher.
This is absolutely amazing. It does teach a valuable lesson to teens and parents. I know how to be careful with the ones I stick around with. How do I know this? One word: YouTube.
Anyway, enough of all that banter. I'm glad you taught those predators on CYS a lesson about not picking storygames that involve sexual abuse, rape, all the sexual stuff nobody needs to see. Because, as you said before, this is not the site for that.
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AestheticLlama
on 3/17/2020 3:22:49 PM with a score of 0
Don't much see the point of telling me off for not running from people in red robes when it wasn't even a choice. Just your generic "insult your player for made up reasons" gimmickry.
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— Redanxela on 3/11/2020 12:53:57 AM with a score of 0
sucks ass
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— goat lord on 11/22/2019 9:04:49 PM with a score of 0
This book has good meanings so thank you
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— Ivy uchiha on 9/25/2019 5:47:39 PM with a score of 0
It has good meanigs
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— Rose on 9/23/2019 11:10:12 PM with a score of 0
i absolutely loved it
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— Willy on 9/18/2019 5:20:51 AM with a score of 0
BS! Really, why the effort to make such pathetic two-step excuse of a story game?
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— Massage on 6/18/2019 7:23:01 AM with a score of 0
every bit as fucked up as advertised , 10/10 would fuck up again
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Ioren
on 4/20/2019 4:38:59 PM with a score of 0
I liek
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— Anonymous on 12/17/2018 10:15:23 AM with a score of 0
I really liked the dark humor. The story was very good, for being so short.
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PaulaAnneMason
on 11/29/2018 11:58:33 PM with a score of 0
bland
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alone2
on 11/12/2018 2:38:06 PM with a score of 0
I was a etrict loner in High School and I turned out just fine! Of course, that could've been just bbecause I don't really care about/like humanity anyways, because we always say that we'll be better than what we were, but then we just 'slip' back into old habits, such as how the police shoot unarmed black men because of racism, even though back during the Civil Rights movement we said that we would be better about NOT doing that...
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BristowJeremiah
on 11/7/2018 5:42:32 PM with a score of 0
Kinda good
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Dmanlan1
on 11/2/2018 3:18:10 PM with a score of 0
Came out as gay. Dialogue was funny and offensive as expected.
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— Szy on 10/31/2018 2:40:46 PM with a score of 0
I became a cow fucker. Game of the year. But seriously, it was pretty funny and a joy to play.
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— Szy on 10/31/2018 2:34:18 PM with a score of 0
My life was perfectly portrayed here;
Teenage girl joins a science club because she has no friends and ends up joining the nerdy boy group. Except I never dated any of them.
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Unpr1d1ct4ble
on 10/20/2018 6:44:50 AM with a score of 0
burning right next to the faggots and the muslims LOL IM DYING
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MegaUltraChicken
on 10/1/2018 6:32:52 PM with a score of 0
UPDATE: I read the story again and chose the female route this time, going the "join the academic clubs" route. It was significantly funnier, and despite a weirdly exaggerated and kind of... frankly, dumb ending, I kinda laughed at it. Yeah, satirical humor can be written well if it's more like this than the "gay epiphany" route. Reason being? The girl's route with her nerd friends is a hilarious mockery of the "nice guys" trope & the fact that she low-key makes the guys her sugar daddies is comedic gold.
Maybe I don't 100% despise the way this is going. Read something about being able to have sex with a cow in one ending, and as weird and messed up that is, it's kind of funny. Even though I said I wouldn't play again in my last comment, I did. Maybe I'll do so again.
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scoople
on 6/23/2018 9:58:35 PM with a score of 0
I read the "fake" warning and thought "hmm, this is a bit odd, but I'll see how this goes." My choices in the male path for the first two clicks were absolutely hilarious, and I thought "hey, this is my kind of humor, offensive my ass." But... then I got to the whole "figuring out you're gay" stuff. I'm a gay guy. That's not how that works. I know this is regarded as humor, but it's also tagged as "serious" and "socially important," and the things put in this story don't really match up to those tags.
Stick to the depressed teen that has to be dusted off by his mom because he doesn't do anything. That's hilarious, coming from a depressed teen who doesn't do anything. But seeing how that turned into a "socially important" talk about how gay men can't be loyal and don't get a happy ending and there's "forbidden love" bullshit and all that...? Yeah, not cool. Not even for humor. Quote thatabsurd from yesterday, "I don't care if it's supposed to be 'funny' or 'a joke' its fucking rude and insensitive."
There's a huge difference between dark humor/offensive humor, and straight up disrespect. And I read the warnings, I prepared myself, I just really didn't want to be mocked tonight. I went to pride today and enjoyed myself around a bunch of gay people who weren't gonna scream "I'm gay and I hate being gay lol I'm so relatable" and then jump out a window. Whatever "eye-opening" and "moral" thing that is supposed to be an underlying topic here is very rudely represented, and you flat out shouldn't joke about suicide. Or gay people, but I can take a gay joke. I can't take a suicide joke.
Once again, I understand that this story is ten years old, and you may have had some very different views of the world, but... I just can't get on board with this. I really hope that Repression has something for me to enjoy in there.
On a non-story-nitpicking sidenote, the play length & story difficulty ratings are both pretty off, in my opinion. It took two minutes flat to play through the whole game, and I don't care to find another ending. I also didn't have ANY difficulty whatsoever playing this, so... why are they ranked the way they are? Well, whatever, this is a ten-year-late comment on a story by a tired gay guy with too much time on his hands. Really hope to find something of yours that appeals to me, mainly so I don't have to do this again.
Also, if you read this comment or the one I left on Love SICK last night, feel free to message me and discuss. I don't know the whole story, and my critiques could definitely be something unnecessary. All due respect.
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scoople
on 6/23/2018 9:42:47 PM with a score of 0
handles sensitive topics poorly and criticizes people for going through hard times. I don't care if it's supposed to be "funny" or "a joke" its fucking rude and insensitive
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thatabsurd
on 6/22/2018 10:41:30 PM with a score of 0
This game taught me to be gay!
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3iguy
on 6/1/2018 8:54:39 AM with a score of 0
Wtf
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ShyKitsune
on 4/10/2018 11:38:05 AM with a score of 0
I learned some valueable life lessons
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Jakethebro
on 2/21/2018 6:10:48 PM with a score of 0
I'm just glad I didn't go to school in the U.S.
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llImperatorll
on 1/11/2018 5:15:28 PM with a score of 0
Please someone reassure me this is not typical of life in America?
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llImperatorll
on 12/18/2017 2:36:36 PM with a score of 0
I read both warnings. And oh boy.
Honestly, this story is more or less just disturbing. It's like a "Make all the wrong choices and generally just be a retard" simulator. It's well written, but otherwise it is just downright bad. I didn't like it at all, and don't understand in what universe any of these events would happen. I'm not really sure who would enjoy this, because it's like a dump of sadistic ideas and concepts. Reading this for a long period of time can and will make you more depressed...
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WizzyCat
on 12/2/2017 8:43:58 PM with a score of 0
I'm not sure what to think. I'm not angry or offended just....disheartened. While the writing is good, barring a couple minor mistakes, the world view presented is a very dim one indeed. I'm not talking about the actual depictions of events, though those are troubling enough. Rather, it's a question of what prompted EndMaster to create the game in the first place. I've read a few of the other stories that are more fantasy/sci-fi epic based, and really enjoyed them. And while the humoristic STYLE of this game was undoubtedly brilliant, I can't deny that the focus of it left me rather cold. After all, something like 'Game of Thrones' can be ruthless and graphic, but there isn't an 'outside' voice to complicate matters.
And before I get a retort, yes I read the warnings (both of them) and yes I was aware that there would be disturbing content. What I wasn't expecting was the callous nature of the warnings at the end. The faux-'public service announcement' tone was quite chilling. But, if this is indeed the results you wanted, EndMaster, then I take my hat off to you.
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Mynoris
on 12/1/2017 8:15:24 PM with a score of 0
Choose gaming group and practice...
And OK story...
Not much to explain here...
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— Gilad on 11/10/2017 3:11:03 PM with a score of 0
And now I'm a Nazi?
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mrawesomer4
on 10/11/2017 3:59:33 PM with a score of 0
Darn. Can't join school band.
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— Band Member on 10/5/2017 12:55:17 AM with a score of 0
So um. Spoilers ahead.
I got fucked by my best friend who was almost like a sister to me for wanting to make friends on the tennis team, then I was apparently murdered by her.
All I wanted was to join the damn tennis team.
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MinnieKing
on 9/24/2017 11:54:57 PM with a score of 0
what. the. fuck.
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— chisowa on 8/21/2017 4:58:27 PM with a score of 0
Im impressed it did made me feel "hatred" but you got me I understand the Moral here and your provocative way of saying it out, Okey i won't go and do a school shooting(Because i can't get guns duhh?) Anyway Nice work!
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Bambiish
on 4/17/2017 3:21:38 PM with a score of 0
This is literally the worst story i have played Endmaster has seriously been letting me down lately. I mean come on there are lines that you just cant cross.
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Iquarius
on 4/12/2017 1:12:12 PM with a score of 0
HOLY SHIT o_o
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— Gamechannger78 on 1/5/2017 1:59:05 AM with a score of 0
This game actually did give some decent tips about life, I enjoyed this.
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CowBoySkinnyLinny
on 1/2/2017 2:17:12 PM with a score of 0
Lol loved the many endings
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CeruleanFlare
on 12/23/2016 10:40:19 AM with a score of 0
Haha not bad!
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— Skeptikos on 12/13/2016 10:19:38 AM with a score of 0
(Dabs) well I really don't know what to say so...ya
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Surgeofdabs123
on 12/12/2016 4:02:43 PM with a score of 0
I gave it a 7/8 until that statement about suicide. It was still really good, just I bit too twisted for me, but I'm not gonna give a bad rating just because it wasn't my cup of tea. I'd say 6/8.
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MinnieKing
on 12/4/2016 8:38:34 PM with a score of 0
A bit weird I'd say (that's probably an understatement).
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DonBlanco
on 11/27/2016 1:39:07 PM with a score of 0
Don't act like a psychopath if you aren't a psychopath, kids! That being said, like 80% of The People In This story Are psychopaths, I'm Fairly Certain. It Is Extremely entertaining And probably makes me Laugh More Than It should. I Mean, the Red Priestess? Really?!
I'm Impressed. This May Be one Of The Most Screwed up Stories You've Written.
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— anonymous on 11/26/2016 11:26:58 PM with a score of 0
My first time reading and i got the ending "Go ahead with the plan" and i had to leave a rating of 8/8 just from that. I was laughing my ass off crying. You sir, are a legend.
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ExpectReality
on 10/20/2016 4:51:24 AM with a score of 0
There is something quite profound about your darkness, my friend. Perhaps...perhaps, it is too late for you. My mother always said that you were doomed. She was right. The time has come for you to choose sides Endmaster. Do you side with the Light or Dark? Ancients or the Corrupt? Do you dare face the mighty wrath that have smitten so man mere Sol system humans such as yourself?
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— Love Prevails on 9/26/2016 4:33:32 PM with a score of 0
This is seriously so messed up. You're a psychopath!!
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— eri on 8/29/2016 11:50:41 PM with a score of 0
This story can only have been created by a sick, twisted mind. I nearly feel pity for whoever wastes time to create such a sick piece of writing. Get a life man.
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— Endmaster is a psycho on 8/23/2016 3:41:16 PM with a score of 0
Pretty funny but weird at the same time lol
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Girly_Writer246
on 7/18/2016 9:21:50 PM with a score of 0
what the Fuck did i just read??!
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lejama88
on 7/13/2016 8:48:23 AM with a score of 0
It was amazing but *SPOILERS* Is there anyway to stay alive?xD
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Nazhfa
on 7/6/2016 1:21:33 AM with a score of 0
@Five Congratulations, you tumblrina. You did exactly what he told you not to do and got all butthurt.
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Sharkworld78
on 7/3/2016 11:23:52 AM with a score of 0
VIOLENT!!
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— Kate on 6/20/2016 7:12:20 PM with a score of 0
What do you mean "don't be gay"? It's not a choice, you know. You're either born with it or not, and just because someone is gay mean that they like to wear dresses and nail polish. They could, but gay and trans are two different things. Also, you act like depression is a choice, when, again, it's NOT. Depression is a mental disorder. You are trying to send positive messages, but you should do reasearch before you say something!
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— Five on 5/29/2016 11:12:24 PM with a score of 0
Became a jock, a ladykilloer, the hulk an impotent. Dying to see the other endings
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Lancelot
on 5/14/2016 7:32:13 PM with a score of 0
Interesting internet ending for female. Dad why did you molest him!
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— Anonymous on 5/14/2016 3:24:33 PM with a score of 0
Lesbian shower sex throat cut. Only here
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— Anonymous on 5/14/2016 3:15:58 PM with a score of 0
I've always wanted to fuck a cow
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— Anonymous on 5/14/2016 1:52:15 PM with a score of 0
YES YES YES
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— Anonymous on 5/14/2016 1:44:59 PM with a score of 0
One ending down many to go
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— Anonymous on 5/14/2016 1:40:38 PM with a score of 0
This...this...this..is how,what,why...why would you do that!Not to be offensive but this story has ruined some of my things for a long time...sorry but this is too much for a thirteen year old like me to read.Dont mind this comment but how did you beat the game with out getting killed or...is that the trick on beating this game...?!
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MillenniumDawn
on 5/10/2016 9:52:51 PM with a score of 0
Very very frickin fucked up, man. But the lesbian sisterhood my ass thing got me laughing....
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CurseOfTime
on 4/27/2016 8:05:08 PM with a score of 0
Ah Whoops. I was a Deadly Lion. I guess a bunch of things in this game are really dangerous. (Joking, you're great man)
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SystemReboot_3
on 4/19/2016 11:09:04 PM with a score of 0
I was eletrocuted. Ouch.
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— Deadly Lion on 4/19/2016 3:03:10 PM with a score of 0
I am now a cow f*cker. Pretty (nah, joking again).
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— Deadly Lion on 4/19/2016 3:00:16 PM with a score of 0
LARP is twisted.
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— Deadly Lion on 4/19/2016 2:50:45 PM with a score of 0
Online gaming didn't work for me.
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— Deadly Lion on 4/19/2016 2:45:24 PM with a score of 0
Ayy lmao... huh, girls can be really annoying sometimes.
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— Deadly Lion on 4/19/2016 2:29:46 PM with a score of 0
Gosh. STDs are dangerous. All the things in this story are dangerous (lol).
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— Deadly Lion on 4/19/2016 2:19:47 PM with a score of 0
Oh man, this story is fun. Well, hiding in the closet is dangerous, as is all the other things.
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— Deadly Lion on 4/19/2016 2:04:00 PM with a score of 0
Da Hood is dangerous. Very dangerous.
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— Deadly Lion on 4/19/2016 1:56:40 PM with a score of 0
Oh, man... Sniffing glue is dangerous.
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— Deadly Lion on 4/19/2016 1:53:03 PM with a score of 0
Oh man, committed suicide.
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— Deadly Lion on 4/19/2016 1:48:02 PM with a score of 0
Tried to rat out the psychos. Well, i am now worm food.
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— Deadly Lion on 4/19/2016 1:40:19 PM with a score of 0
Tried to wipe out the school. I officially hate snipers (nah, joking).
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— Deadly Lion on 4/19/2016 1:34:28 PM with a score of 0
Not used steroids, became an vegetable and my parents allowed the doctors to pull the plug. Wonderful.
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— Deadly Lion on 4/19/2016 1:24:48 PM with a score of 0
Used steroids. But i don't think a guy in steroids could rip out one guy's larnyx.
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— Deadly Lion on 4/19/2016 1:19:05 PM with a score of 0
Tried to join the Ghosts, but i had a rock throwed in my head, i was left to die in the woods and i was eaten by an bear after dying. Oh, man...
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— Deadly Lion on 4/19/2016 1:04:56 PM with a score of 0
Joined the Nazi gang. Guess what? The Nazis losed again. First WWII and now this.
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— Deadly Lion on 4/19/2016 12:56:30 PM with a score of 0
A funny comedy.
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Jimmysutton
on 4/7/2016 3:01:24 PM with a score of 0
My goodness I almost dropped my phone on the last few paragraphs!Lesley WHYY!
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MillenniumDawn
on 3/22/2016 5:01:47 AM with a score of 0
Are you saying that if I join the football team that I am going to die? Hey Endmaster I like you, but I am experiencing this, I don't take drugs, and I do just fine. This story is EXTREMELY exaggerated, even making the good choices gets you killed. I thought you were trying to show a positive message, so noted, do drugs, be successful, thanks! I will use those now, because I am in High School!
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ThatRandomGuy1
on 3/17/2016 10:44:28 PM with a score of 0
Haha, I actually liked it to some extent.
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MasonJarGuzzi
on 3/17/2016 1:21:46 AM with a score of 0
Worst game I ever played every conclusion will result in some fake sage wisdom and failure not sure I fully gather the point of this game but for me it only served to waste time
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The_Dungeon_Master
on 2/28/2016 9:53:27 AM with a score of 0
Endmaster you have done it again! Great job
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Shadow_Strider
on 2/27/2016 12:15:33 AM with a score of 0
This game is not 6/10 for length. It is very very very short.
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greyavenger
on 2/20/2016 11:00:33 PM with a score of 0
It's mildly sad that so many hippie loser PC police went and rated this story a 1 after they ignored the repeated warnings and took offense to one perceived outrage or another. It's almost as if some people think you are the first writer to have a protagonist have intimate relations with a parent... I hope those folks never read Oedipus.
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Bucky
on 2/6/2016 1:25:41 AM with a score of 0
Wow. This is just like me. :D ... Apparently I have some issues...
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— AnonymousDeath on 1/16/2016 2:00:16 AM with a score of 0
Very... Odd.
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AllThatIsGold
on 1/9/2016 9:22:14 AM with a score of 0
Not sure all the adive (or senareos) are logical or good?
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Dmanxbox
on 1/5/2016 3:54:25 PM with a score of 0
lol, I always love delving into Endmaster's stories and finding shit I didn't find before. He is the absolute best.
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corgi213
on 11/8/2015 10:47:13 PM with a score of 0
Well, I know this is sort of educational, but really, it is just sick, but I guess it is endmaster so of course it would be sick.
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Shinobi
on 10/26/2015 4:09:26 PM with a score of 0
This was so messed up... So. Messed. Up. But the morals were good, so... I guess that's good?
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MidnightPhoenix
on 9/5/2015 9:22:41 PM with a score of 0
....gross
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— greenpigshuiiu5 on 8/26/2015 3:27:04 PM with a score of 0
The moral of the story is that you are Fucked.
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Firewing
on 8/16/2015 8:01:12 PM with a score of 0
Very funny. :3
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WildeKatz
on 8/11/2015 9:58:56 AM with a score of 0
Haha very funny. The first time I ate an anorexic cheerleader for whatever reason. Everyone knows the football players are more filling *sashays out
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Ella
on 8/7/2015 3:35:25 PM with a score of 0
In short I liked it. It is a well written true story about teenage life, my favorite part is your opinions at the end, they cracked me up.
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DeathIncarnate
on 7/25/2015 1:27:59 PM with a score of 0
Oooo I really want to play this game
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— Salma on 6/18/2015 8:04:34 AM with a score of 0
I don't understand why people are so butt hurt over this story. It's fucking hilarious.
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iqqih
on 5/26/2015 2:25:21 PM with a score of 0
This story's been around for years and somehow I never really noticed it. It really shows a different, more compassionate side of Endmaster as he offers young people another perspective and sound moral advice on the very real issues they face today.
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Mizal
on 5/25/2015 1:32:15 PM with a score of 0
Whoa. The LARPers are weird.
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TheBossWriter
on 5/21/2015 12:31:36 PM with a score of 0
EndMaster no, no, no man you are a fantastic writer why the hell would you do this. Are you suffering from depression because it will get better. SEEK HELP
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hayesa
on 5/4/2015 9:26:26 PM with a score of 0
What. The. F**k
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hayesa
on 5/4/2015 9:23:36 PM with a score of 0
Is it possible to not die?
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— anon on 4/26/2015 8:43:40 PM with a score of 0
To my early comit, yes all ending end up with you dead and endmaster calling you stupid, but seeing your parents in the game it's not that shocking.
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Dmanxbox
on 4/25/2015 8:31:37 PM with a score of 0
Endmaster cussed me out hard for committing suicided. Does every ending invole going to hell?
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Dmanxbox
on 4/25/2015 7:19:08 PM with a score of 0
Mission accomplished!
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EndMaster
on 4/21/2015 5:37:58 PM with a score of 0
Whhat the fucking fuck did I just read, EndMaster? What about Ground Zero, Necromancer, etc.? I respected your ability to write amazing storygames. Now, this? Did you drop off the deep end or something? I actually hate this story, based on your absolute ignorance. I love Ground Zero, I love Necromancer, and many of your other storygames.
SERIOUSLY, though. You need help. Seriously.
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RoyalGhost_007
on 4/21/2015 5:25:56 PM with a score of 0
Every path leads to ruin and death
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— Reader on 4/19/2015 4:18:30 PM with a score of 0
Was there a single good ending?
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— Reader on 4/18/2015 1:41:16 PM with a score of 0
I don't quite have the stomach for abortion jokes since I have a baby, but it was still a good story. I've played every scenario now... Time to get on with life and be thankful that high school wasn't anything like that for me back then.
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Starky
on 4/14/2015 6:15:53 AM with a score of 0
Hahaha!! Attack of the nerds :b Oh, man... I remember high school. Thankfully the real world is much different.
Great. I'm gonna play some more...
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Starky
on 4/14/2015 3:32:53 AM with a score of 0
Eh heh heh... That was funny. I'm going to read every other scenario since I ended up accidentally killing myself in this one.
Creative as always, Mr. End.
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Starky
on 4/14/2015 3:25:30 AM with a score of 0
8/8, Very insightful.
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— Adesola on 4/10/2015 12:06:44 PM with a score of 0
fun
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— wbvsdgy on 3/29/2015 6:49:10 AM with a score of 0
ARE YOU KIDDING ME?!?!?! I GOT THE S*** KICKED OUT OF ME?! WHAT?! I AM NOT SOME GLOOMY FREAK TO BE PRGNENT AND KILLED! IM THE PERFECTLY FINE REBELIOUS GIRL THAT LOVES DRAWING AND READING! WHAT THE H*** WAS THIS?! Oh, and I'm also the girl with a TEMPER.
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DuskTheHalfDemon
on 3/20/2015 2:00:19 PM with a score of 0
-_- its dumb
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jayfeather808
on 3/16/2015 12:14:20 AM with a score of 0
Engaging writing style and good humour. This story is as claimed in the description.
Another great story from EndMaster.
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— Jordi P on 2/16/2015 12:08:22 PM with a score of 0
funny as hell
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PsychoSocko
on 2/12/2015 2:16:34 PM with a score of 0
Just accept the warning in the introduction and realize that this is just a satirical chooseyourstory about the tips of life. Don't take it too seriously and you'll actually love it. 8/8
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Doomcomer
on 2/7/2015 3:03:14 PM with a score of 0
THIS WAS FUCKING STUPID U ALWAYS DIE
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— YOU ASS on 1/30/2015 7:09:05 PM with a score of 0
10/10-IGN preety hilarious stuff man
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Clank
on 1/26/2015 10:05:46 PM with a score of 0
Pretty good
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AvengersGirl
on 1/24/2015 1:04:47 AM with a score of 0
It was kind of boring tbh
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— Cadence on 1/14/2015 5:53:24 PM with a score of 0
I did not really understand it but I like it though, with my instincts.
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WarriorCats
on 1/3/2015 5:24:47 AM with a score of 0
I can't fucking win
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— Shitty game reviewer on 12/12/2014 8:44:48 PM with a score of 0
Only giving th 8 because of the message at the end.
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Dominator64z
on 12/4/2014 1:58:15 PM with a score of 0
It's okay, Taco. It gets better...
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Malkalack
on 11/2/2014 1:11:56 AM with a score of 0
After carefully perusing this work, I have but one thing to say: moo.
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jamescoker1226
on 11/1/2014 8:22:53 PM with a score of 0
I.... highly regret not looking at the maturity ratings. Would someone please slap me for being so ignorant? *sigh*
Does anyone have any mind bleach?
Also, uh, no matter how... disturbing... that was, I can see why you're one of the best writers on the site.
7/8
Now, uh, please excuse me while I hunt through the house for mind bleach.
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TacocaT
on 11/1/2014 7:57:39 PM with a score of 0
Mooooooo!
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Steve_Greg
on 11/1/2014 11:52:53 AM with a score of 0
Oh dear... "cow fucker" ending for me.
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Malkalack
on 11/1/2014 11:31:47 AM with a score of 0
nice story man!I get all the ending..You should make more story like Necromancer or Eternal..You are very talented for writing..one of the best writer I ever known
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killertype10
on 10/27/2014 10:55:35 AM with a score of 0
Steroids ending. Dear Lord...
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Malkalack
on 10/16/2014 6:05:45 PM with a score of 0
It's not complicated what-so-ever, but absolutely hilarious (and very bizarre). It'll give you enlightenment...or at least a good laugh. But prepare to read.
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TheSnowyBanana
on 10/13/2014 9:26:38 AM with a score of 0
No comment.
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DaAnthony
on 10/13/2014 5:50:44 AM with a score of 0
The cow ending was epic. Laughed so hard i started to cry
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Kiabbo
on 10/3/2014 1:20:33 PM with a score of 0
hahah...nice
6/8
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— josh on 9/16/2014 3:25:44 PM with a score of 0
Wow. I am officially a fan. I read Ground Zero and started looking through your other stories. Great stuff!!
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CobaltBlaze
on 9/12/2014 3:23:27 PM with a score of 0
Tons of different paths and endings to enjoy, and it was very funny. Good for reading if you're not in the mood for reading a big long epic and you just want a light entertaining storygame.
There's not much I can say about improvements that could be made because I feel that for what this game is, there's not much you could do to make it better.
6/8
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31TeV
on 9/11/2014 4:56:42 AM with a score of 0
"Geared for Extremists"
Seems legit
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— Fazz on 8/23/2014 1:25:21 AM with a score of 0
Not to interesting, but not boring either.
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— miniroo on 8/18/2014 10:34:23 PM with a score of 0
I liked it, even if I freaking died every time by either fucking up so hard, or getting killed by insane folks. In the end, I like.
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LostConnection
on 8/17/2014 12:42:25 PM with a score of 0
Some gramacle errors but It is funny in most areas. It is rather offesive but in a funny way!
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Madbrad200
on 5/26/2014 6:37:12 AM with a score of 0
And that's why you shouldn't go to school. 8/8
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Steve_Greg
on 5/11/2014 3:12:34 PM with a score of 0
It was okay. I rated it a 5. I only played it once, and I have a feeling that I won't play it again. I agreed with the moral to the female part, so good job with that! I'm sorry about all your hate comments. I do my best not to leave any. (Please don't take my comment personally : )
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Meadow
on 5/3/2014 12:18:47 PM with a score of 0
to Mtactical, yes you do die on almost every link. When you don't die on one link you die on a link after it. There is no path to actually win. It's a good story.
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lucas
on 12/11/2013 6:27:25 PM with a score of 0
Jeezus christ EndMaster! I LOVED IT! Do you die in EVERY link though? :I I really liked the humor in the story.
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Mtactical
on 12/10/2013 3:20:03 PM with a score of 0
So how did this get a 6/8 for length? there's only 60 pages... or maybe 80 pages gets you the 8/8 for length?
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— Wait Hold up a sec on 11/12/2013 7:08:33 PM with a score of 0
Horrified... Yet intrigued.
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— Flat face on 11/4/2013 11:31:25 PM with a score of 0
Dude, your writing style, like, so totally reminds me of this guy I kno ... his name is Jasper, and he not only has a vocabulary fit to make the Devil himself blush, but he also has the Badass factor and the power to back it up. Just like your writing! This is not the first story of yours I've played, but it most certainly is the funniest! I even learned a few new obscene expressions from you while playing this, 8 out of 8, buddy! Keep it up!
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— Kevarnon on 10/25/2013 1:35:35 AM with a score of 0
I flipped all the ending. And i feel really bad..
This was a pretty bad joke. And i did not find this funny. I still give it a 6 for the effort.
I thought all your story were great.
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darrylmontales
on 9/7/2013 10:58:15 AM with a score of 0
This game seriously made my day. It is so Jhonen Vasquez-esq. Love the morbid humor. Went through every ending, male and female, and every one just made me laugh! My favorite one has to be the Daddy/daughter ending with the mutant baby, and coming up second was the larking MILF. And though this one didn't have a definitive bad ending (and quite honestly appealed to some wonderful fantasies), I really liked the teacher ending. All of the different stories, I could relate to, as I went through all of those phases at some point or another in high school (yay for adolescence!). Thank goodness I had a brain in my head and didn't go too deep in any of that stupid shit. Playing/reading this takes me back and makes me glad that I'm not a complete retard.
I would suggest you sell this shit to Ohio, but while the intelligent people I know who grew up there would get one hell of a kick out of this, you'd get more people committing suicide and blaming you or coming after you to kill you after being completely and utterly offended. Ohio's got some seriously fucked up people, most of which are just like the different characters who died in this game. Literally. I wonder why the suicide rate in Ohio isn't higher than Washington's? Hmm. Who knows.
Anyway, I'm very satisfied. 8/8, just cause it's the highest rating. As Jhonen Vasquez says, "I mean, I still haven't killed anyone. I think I keep from going over that edge by writing about [Johnny], who has taken a flying leap over it." Violent thoughts are normal, and they make for great reading material. :)
And to those of you who think this is so horrible and offensive, here's another quote for you! "I trust that your minds are developed enough to take no offense at these things. If not, well, I'm better than you, aren't I?" :P
Thanks again!
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— ChaoticChildKrys on 8/25/2013 8:09:36 AM with a score of 0
Well why not? ;)
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Sloe
on 8/21/2013 5:45:24 PM with a score of 0
I read every ending for some reason. Every. Flipping. ONE.
At first I thought the fat girl ending was the funniest.
Then I got to the guy who sniffs glue...hehe. That one was hilarious.
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HugsGoodbye
on 8/16/2013 3:17:56 AM with a score of 0
Oh my.
When he said to be prepared to get shocked, I didn't think it would that disturbing. Everything I ended up doing resulted in me dying a painful death or living a sick, twisted life.
Disturbing on so many levels, still found it incredibly funny, mainly due to the absurdity of it all.
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— Who really cares? on 8/14/2013 7:02:53 AM with a score of 0
Hocum
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— kaha on 7/31/2013 1:07:41 PM with a score of 0
Absolutely brilliant, I say. This is exactly the kind of humor I enjoy. Also am I the only one who was thinking this read like a 1000 ways to die episode half the time?
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mistman96
on 7/21/2013 5:05:32 AM with a score of 0
I couldn't stop laughing, this was priceless! Oh, if only I had one of these life lessons when I was a little girl.
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Skysworne
on 7/6/2013 7:09:35 PM with a score of 0
You are the master of sarcasm. I am enlightened.
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averagewriter
on 6/29/2013 6:28:41 AM with a score of 0
Okay...
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vladimir262
on 6/26/2013 5:32:04 PM with a score of 0
I like the idea and there are some genuinely funny bits. That said, you make a big deal about homosexuality being sinful, which is frustrating. What is this, the 1950's? Overall, not a bad way to warn teens about stupid things.
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AspiringAuthorCook
on 5/21/2013 2:22:09 PM with a score of 0
Oh god this was hilarious. I cracked up at the daughter-father sewer monster, lol.
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— Ark on 5/14/2013 7:58:20 AM with a score of 0
Some of these vignettes are pretty funny. There's a lot of shock-value to them, but hey, we're catering to a demographic of tweeners and very young adults for the most part, so it should work out well. And the writing is honest with a nice heap of shut-the-fuck-up-and-like-it, so I can't complain.
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madglee
on 5/9/2013 8:30:32 PM with a score of 0
Very funny. Really cool. I might want to use those morals of yours.
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harrypotter
on 5/8/2013 3:56:43 PM with a score of 0
Pretty good, very funny, and great morals.
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Kidshadow8468
on 4/10/2013 12:33:16 AM with a score of 0
HOOHAA FUNNY COOL BOSS
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flanatom000
on 3/21/2013 9:49:57 AM with a score of 0
Hard but funny
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flanatom000
on 3/21/2013 9:46:34 AM with a score of 0
FUN I LOVE IT
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flanatom000
on 3/21/2013 9:44:43 AM with a score of 0
FUN I LOVE THIS GAME>
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flanatom000
on 3/21/2013 9:40:59 AM with a score of 0
What disappoints me about this story is that all the endings lead to a loss. This gives the impression that for loosers, there are no hope for them. Lol I wasn't convinced, but I might as well be one of those loosers. I'm still fightin though.
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Tgetruegamer
on 2/3/2013 7:03:34 AM with a score of 0
Very amusing and fun to play. Lot's of choices.
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Pencilestial
on 1/30/2013 12:52:27 AM with a score of 0
I wonder which path is most similar to Endmaster's life.
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Loon
on 1/5/2013 6:45:15 PM with a score of 0
Thought it would be fun... I was wrong.
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— Demonas on 12/18/2012 11:59:15 AM with a score of 0
WOW lots to take in...
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— coke on 11/22/2012 1:55:06 PM with a score of 0
I LIKE IT AND YOU WILL BOW DOWN TO ME HAHAHAHA!
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tigerxii
on 10/13/2012 6:15:16 PM with a score of 0
soo many choices...
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alienalpha
on 9/18/2012 5:12:51 PM with a score of 0
The ONLY BAD story ENDMASTER MADE THERE IS NO "WIN" WTF!!!
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— Omegagoldfish on 9/17/2012 6:53:22 PM with a score of 0
guys u dont see this often and this game is awesome play it over and over
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— game rocks on 7/26/2012 2:44:52 PM with a score of 0
God this was ridicolus. I really liked the sports ending x)
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— Jimbo on 7/19/2012 1:51:02 AM with a score of 0
And knowing is half the battle!
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mario7060
on 7/13/2012 4:07:22 PM with a score of 0
I know you said I wasn't going to win but still, you're an asshole. My favorite one was the gaming group. Funny stuff.
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PaleWhiteShadow
on 7/3/2012 5:53:57 PM with a score of 0
I did exactly what I always wanted to in high school and that's the result? Damn. Being a gay porn star in Mexico has never exactly appealed to me so I guess I'm glad I didn't do it. Still wanted all those fuckers to die though.
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PaleWhiteShadow
on 7/3/2012 5:07:51 PM with a score of 0
Well i'm screwed. x
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— Kat on 7/2/2012 7:23:53 PM with a score of 0
now that i've read moe of the story, i take the first comment back. the entire thing is horrible. unfortunetly, it's all true
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Nicpinkygirl
on 6/20/2012 12:41:10 AM with a score of 0
a litte scary, but the morals are great!
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Nicpinkygirl
on 6/19/2012 9:56:11 PM with a score of 0
True. True. True.
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EricDrewCents
on 6/13/2012 5:56:47 AM with a score of 0
Damn I hate having to go and do a story over again here because I read it on IS. I am ashamed as a human being to give this good rating, but I have done it.
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CovElite
on 6/9/2012 4:24:22 PM with a score of 0
Bien hecho EndMaster.
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— Jose on 6/5/2012 3:25:52 PM with a score of 0
Very very...uh! It's a shame for me to tell...you know better than me.
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RobustSporadic
on 5/5/2012 6:54:37 AM with a score of 0
'To sum up, never ever fuck your family members, unless you use protection. Then I guess its okay.'
If only you were a screenwriter for Ned's Declassified School Survival Guide..
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standardtoaster
on 3/30/2012 10:53:49 PM with a score of 0
LARPING with a sexy MILF.... wierd
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ZenUndead
on 3/16/2012 8:24:53 AM with a score of 0
ummm
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masterelf
on 2/6/2012 10:29:19 AM with a score of 0
I feel very offended by the sentence:
"Your torment of having an asshole the size of Texas comes to an end when you get a little mouthy with one of the Aryans who’s in no mood for your bullshit and shanks your bitch ass."
It offends me because I'm Aryan and proud of it. I don't like it when you mix up the Aryans with such racist groups.
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— Fatzogal on 2/4/2012 8:14:57 AM with a score of 0
I honestly burst out laughing for several minutes at a time, multiple times. I think for hilarity alone, this gets a 7/8.
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Doodled
on 1/30/2012 6:53:52 PM with a score of 0
i laughed...
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Kaiser
on 1/17/2012 8:22:10 PM with a score of 0
fucked up and funny, good job!
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AtomicWaste
on 12/2/2011 12:58:07 AM with a score of 0
"Remember, incest is everyone’s problem when murderous mutant babies are born." First things first, I just have to say that that may be my favorite line in anything ever. I loved this story. It was a fantastic parody of those retarded "After School Specials". @ to Amber, the content of this story pales in comparison to some of the twisted, depraved shit you can find in the bible. Anyway, I gave it a 7/8. Very very funny. Keep it up.
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DarthVader_13
on 11/23/2011 12:32:23 AM with a score of 0
I have read the bible, where do you think I got the idea for the story from? Lol.
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EndMaster
on 11/19/2011 8:26:52 PM with a score of 0
Too many bad words, and too much filthy language!! Morals can be taught better than this! ( Try reading the Bible)
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— Amber on 11/19/2011 12:49:23 AM with a score of 0
Yeah most of us are aware of these things the problem is that people don´t seem to care and go ahead and just do it anyway...
Anyways, loved the Alice in Wonderland´s author(rumored of having been a pedophile for those who don´t know) reference wherever it was intended or not.
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— Rant on 11/7/2011 9:14:41 PM with a score of 0
What the F*** is wrong with you??? That's some messed up crap!
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kandbabies
on 11/4/2011 11:38:07 PM with a score of 0
too short and too moral
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DarkentityOni
on 10/23/2011 11:30:48 PM with a score of 0
cool.
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Killer999
on 10/10/2011 9:17:51 AM with a score of 0
Someones mom molested me!
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doodoodude
on 7/20/2011 2:28:25 PM with a score of 0
This is basically giving people that have an idea about fitting in the wrong way a smack upside their head. Congratulations EndMaster, your story has just been emailed to all of the people that i know in my high school. You have outdone yourself.
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Jplague
on 7/11/2011 3:27:52 AM with a score of 0
So...many...horrible...endings.....now I'm depressed being a girl. According to this thing I'm ether going to wind up fat, skinny as hell without friends, or emo. DX DX DX
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giamonic
on 7/7/2011 1:32:06 PM with a score of 0
Just don't take it too seriously and it's an amusing and funny story.
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ToeEaterJim
on 6/21/2011 3:54:36 PM with a score of 0
sad....sad...sad
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HeliosTheImmortal
on 5/28/2011 4:22:15 PM with a score of 0
Hilarious, I read every ending. They were all amazing.
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— Heather on 5/15/2011 9:28:50 PM with a score of 0
I think most people who commit suicide doesn't really care if anyone's gonna miss them or not.
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— Lili on 5/13/2011 1:27:16 PM with a score of 0
It was alright, I didn't find it too funny and it was extremely short. Lots of misogynistic endings for the female side.
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Greencloud
on 5/7/2011 4:05:21 PM with a score of 0
I did the female part and the whoever wrote this must be a woman hater. The ideas are pretty good, the endings are stupid, I'm guessing this is suppose to be a sick/funny sort of thing.
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— Lena on 5/7/2011 3:19:08 PM with a score of 0
I'm a childless adult and was a total female whore. I just wish I was able to live and raise the Jersey Devil.
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MethodKid
on 5/7/2011 1:04:03 AM with a score of 0
I played all the options under male and laughed at them all, maybe that means I have low morals or something but who cares?
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ThisisBo
on 4/29/2011 11:40:23 PM with a score of 0
@Steve: lol.
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JJJ-thebanisher
on 4/27/2011 8:16:59 PM with a score of 0
My work here is done!
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EndMaster
on 4/27/2011 7:18:08 PM with a score of 0
This is the biggest waste of time for anyone to play. The difficulty is 8 because the idiotic author made it so you couldn't win. Maturity level should be a 9 because the author needs some counselling, this is just a constant spam of swears, racial hatred, stereotyping and pointless crap. Play length should be a one, as there is always only 3 options if you are male (haven't checked female, because so disgusted at this I just stopped). The Player rating should be a 0 simply because of the waste of time it is. In fact, writing this took up more time than playing through the game.
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— Steve on 4/27/2011 3:54:12 PM with a score of 0
Why is it that only girls are seen fat? Fat ass guys are gross too. Anyway, at least I got to kill a cheerleader. Those stuck-up bitches deserve to die.
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— Sam on 4/14/2011 6:27:19 PM with a score of 0
This game is CRAZY!!! Not for the faint-hearted... but then again... if you are faint-hearted then the game might have some morals for you...
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ramerman
on 4/4/2011 1:24:48 AM with a score of 0
i think tis was sooo disgusting i mean honestly fucking my dad??? I dont even want 2 think about that or fucking another girl! sick! im sorry but u could make this better if u didnt use unnesscary shit.
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— Salidia on 2/17/2011 7:04:46 PM with a score of 0
I really like this game!
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kombatkitty
on 1/17/2011 2:22:17 PM with a score of 0
haha awsomly fucked up game 8/8
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HiddenRing3
on 1/2/2011 3:47:26 AM with a score of 0
Not just the girly ones, ALL the paths end badly!
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EndMaster
on 11/16/2010 9:58:36 AM with a score of 0
Hey the girly paths ALL end badly! (One ore two of them are really sick, by the way)
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quaker
on 11/15/2010 6:37:39 PM with a score of 0
What the Crap!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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— pickler on 11/8/2010 9:04:50 AM with a score of 0
OH MAH ****** GAWD!!!!!!!!!
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— 5 year old kid on 10/6/2010 5:32:02 PM with a score of 0
Great writing, even though though most of the endings result in bad stuff. I wasn't offended by any of it, but it awakened a new found fear of actually ending up like what happened in each ending.
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— BuddyBurkman on 9/19/2010 1:04:49 AM with a score of 0
holy shit dude..you have MAJOR anger issues...and no fucking idea how anything works beyond what fox news told you.
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kilbert66
on 6/20/2010 5:14:11 PM with a score of 0
Your writing was good and the stories were interesting. I don't really get your humor at times, but other people did so it is probably just me. Nice work!
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SoarHighBeFree
on 4/11/2010 3:09:03 AM with a score of 0
its...its depressing and funny....if u read them all...u will feel somtin missing in ur life....its....its depressing and sorta funny at the same time....the male version is funny....but the female version.....its depressing.....like if u could have done somtin but u cant.....
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— kokaine on 3/4/2010 5:34:26 PM with a score of 0
okaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay.
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donnydude
on 8/29/2009 12:31:54 AM with a score of 0
sad
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LTMF
on 8/9/2009 8:10:04 PM with a score of 0
The fake warning at the beginning doesn't apply to me. I'm not an adult or prepubescent. Nyaah!
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murtagh756
on 7/14/2009 4:03:40 PM with a score of 0
Good, but unrealistic. The good part reminded me of Kyle Cease.
Funny as hell... like a vagina.
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Vitamins_n_Stds
on 1/27/2009 7:11:31 PM with a score of 0
Interesting...
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Miccy2000
on 1/9/2009 9:10:51 AM with a score of 0
This is a FUNNY, FUNNY game! I can't understand why it's not featured.
...Actually, maybe I can.
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Badger
on 12/2/2008 10:59:00 PM with a score of 0
Where’s your Hitler now? Nyaah!
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murtagh756
on 11/25/2008 1:45:39 AM with a score of 0
It keeps you occupied.
-koolgai
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koolgai
on 9/11/2008 7:34:56 PM with a score of 0
Although it is a bit shocking and stereotypical, I do believe it is important to remember that these horrible things do happen to real people because of the dumb choices they make. I hope many people will learn from your story.
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Aletheia
on 8/3/2008 3:54:25 PM with a score of 0
“(Whew) Goddamn. We need to put a sign on this school that says no fat chicks.”
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murtagh756
on 7/31/2008 10:29:26 PM with a score of 0
6/8. God, you're fucking sadistic and explicit. I love it. The stereotypes were funny, I thought. You need to write a long ass 7 or 8 length story infused with your sick metaphors and such. Make it slightly sensical and have a solid plot with solid characters and the whores on this site just might show you the definition of the term "Glory Hole"
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deadly_sinner66
on 7/28/2008 8:45:23 PM with a score of 0
Ah...I feel dead just reading this. But dead in a you wanted it to make me feel dead way. A bit excessive with the endings though, except a few, those are very real. Overall, a good in sight into some people's lives.
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— on 7/26/2008 11:04:55 AM with a score of 0
Short, but shocked as I am to say it, that might be good. It was too stereotyped for my tastes, and I don't want to have to face my horribly unpopular future on the internet! lol, Despite this, another good story...or educational story...well, it's not really a STORY. Whatever. Good job.
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Anubis
on 7/25/2008 10:03:24 PM with a score of 0
Just way too short. It feels more like a length 4 game than a length 6 game. Still well written, but overly stereotypical too.
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JJJ-thebanisher
on 7/24/2008 10:55:20 PM with a score of 0
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