Player Comments on Dead Man Walking (Zombie Survival)

This is an excellent storygame, and it is quite obvious to those with a functioning brain why this is one of the best storygames in the site, but I do not think that it is the very best. It had a hard battle with stories like Eternal, but with the way the author wrote this, it could very well win that battle.

The flow of the writing was set at a perfect pace. The writing was complex and didn't have that choppy feel that you get from some of the stories that can be found on this site, which greatly improved the flow and gave it a very smooth feel. Action scenes were smoothly developed and foreshadowed admiringly by the author, creating a good suspenseful feeling for me as a reader.

The way the plot was developed was simply masterful. This story had everything; exposition, raising action, numerous climactic scenes, even more action and suspense that couldn't be quite labeled as "falling action", and a variety of resolutions. Each scene kept me on the edge of my seat and I found myself clicking that link to the next page faster than Usain Bolt can run.

The writing was very descriptive and I could clearly picture each scene in my mind, and I felt as though I was actually a part of the story. Generic movie crap isn't included in this story, and it really comes down to you and your brain.

Each character in the story is introduced and developed in a way that makes me feel as if I've known them for a long time and I can understand everything about them. They become part of the virtual world created by the author's writing and play an important role in developing the story.

It is quite obvious that a great deal of time and effort was put into proofreading this because I didn't notice any mistakes in grammar or spelling, and even if I had, I doubt they would have taken anything from this storygame.

8/8
-- Nyctophilia on 2/22/2017 7:42:14 AM with a score of 2860
This is one of the first interactive novels I have ever experienced, but I have to assume that part of the reason people post these stories is to improve their writing. I will tailor my comment accordingly.
Praise first: I could not stop reading it. The vivid and expansive world captivates the reader's attention and (not unlike a ravening zombie) refuses to let go. BerkaZerka's exceedingly detailed and practical voice lays the world of the story before the reader like a blueprint, yet amid the practical descriptions are horrifying, frightening, and even tender moments which evoke the reader's emotions as their hopes are realized and/or shattered. The realization that one false move (just like an actual survival situation) could spell catastrophe kept me perpetually on the edge of my seat. BerkaZerka was only sometimes cruel, normally dishing out death and horror only to the deserving. This story was entertaining, and suspenseful; it divided its time equally between granting gratification which built my confidence and absolutely devastating me.
Now the criticism. Keep the above praise in mind as you read these notes:
My biggest issue with the story was the dialogue. Weak dialogue has the effect of breeding the reader's indifference toward the characters. Indifference means that the reader won't have an emotional response when the characters interact, succeed, fail, die, escape death, etc. Though the descriptions were captivating, the dialogue laid flat on the page. Dialogue is, of course, one of the most staggeringly difficult parts writing fiction. I have been told before to "Never let your characters say exactly what they are thinking." and I am afraid that BerkaZerka is badly guilty of this in the story.
Avoid using "thing" or "things" in your writing. I appreciate that the author is working to make the narrator's voice sound casual and authentic (and it comes across nicely throughout the story,) but "things" is just lazy writing.
Throughout the story the pacing felt strange to me. Some scenes or details would receive detail bordering on excessive, whereas other times the reader feels as though the story has lurched erratically forward. I realize that achieving consistency throughout 2000+ pages of adventure can be a difficult task, but it is something to be mindful of. One scene in particular (With the Arab and the Spaniard) comes to mind. I understand that you were working to include a camio, but the whole scene felt exceedingly detailed to no end. When demanding the reader's attention for such detail, take the opportunity to have some kind of literary impact or statement. This scene in particular leaves the reader scratching their head, unsatisfied.
My last point is on the subject of foreshadowing (the following is not a spoiler because it starts off in literally the opening scene). Throughout the story the foreshadowing was skillfully wielded and left me wondering who the mysterious figure could be and what it could mean for my adventure. It does what good foreshadowing should and adds to the suspense. This effect lasted until one of the characters I encountered in the story inexplicably BLURTED out an observation about it. This effectively shattered the spell of the otherwise-powerful sense of foreboding. This critique goes hand-in-hand with my previous comment about characters saying exactly what they mean. This obviously-forced attempt at foreshadowing was lazy and disappointing. I do not mean to sound harsh, but it is a pity to see such a chilling, effective literary tool squandered on a weak, one-line reminder to "Hey, remember to be scared of the ominous badness!"
There, I'm finished. I hope it is apparent that I give this advice (and criticism) out of a genuine desire to see this excellent writing become even better.
I recommend Dead Man Walking very highly. Its weaknesses were few enough as to allow me to enjoy the experience thoroughly. Genuine satisfaction, frustration, regret, sadness, and joy are sure indicators of a thorough, well constructed, and gripping tale.
Cheers, BerkaZerka.
-- dueconsideration on 8/18/2015 6:29:27 PM with a score of 25065
The story reminds me of the Energizer Bunny commercials: it keeps going, and going, and going. This is a good thing. I backed up and tried different paths a few times and was pleasantly surprised (and a bit awed) to find that the author has created quite a complex, sprawling spider-web of possible storylines, giving the story a lot of replayability.

I love the lack of an actual inventory and the way your choices affect later portions of the story. I believe whole portions of pages have script-driven text which "remember" the choices you made. Throughout, the author presents difficult scenarios for the main character to puzzle through, and the whole experience feels very open-ended, as many choices are shades of grey, rather than overtly evil/good, foolish/intelligent, pragmatic/emotional.

The story has minimal typos and I only found one "bug," demonstrating the author's commitment to proofreading and editing. At times, I would have liked a bit more action rather than explanation, particularly with the length of these portions, but overall the story had a nice pace and rarely felt dull. Also, some of the dialogue could be rewritten to feel more real and dynamic, but these are minor criticisms.

The depth of the story is obvious, as is the author's commitment to produce some solid work. I am definitely going to re-read this and try some completely different tactics. I got what I suspect is the second best ending.
-- madglee on 11/25/2012 1:45:19 PM with a score of 26415
On my second attempt (i got smushed after trying to escape an explosion) I managed to get the "best" ending. I will definitely be replaying this story to try and explore more of this world!!!!
-- gam3s2freak on 10/18/2017 6:54:34 PM with a score of 31357
It was a very engaging story and it kept me interested throughout the entire story. The only negative thing I would have to point out are the spelling errors, but there are so few that you don't notice.
-- Yesdog on 10/16/2017 11:00:44 PM with a score of 21615
Excellent story. It would fit right in almost any zombie apocalypse universe. The unique zombie types were great. I was too scared to try to challenge any, though. Maybe in another play through I will explore them further. The only thing I didn't really like was the two girls talking in one voice like a single entity, and the family in general didn't really seem like much other than basic "wife and kids" archetypes. But again, it's such a minor concern that I probably shouldn't even bother mentioning it.

Overall it was a fun read. I especially liked the way the story began, and the careful attention to detail in establishing the scenario.

This is definitely a story worth a second read through, and I suspect I will be doing another soon (hopefully to see what these other zombie types are all about, instead of running away from them every time like I did this play through).

Great work. I am glad I found a site with a story like this.
-- Kim on 10/15/2017 9:39:37 AM with a score of 36467
Loved it and wish i could have gotten farther. But still... SO LIT.
-- Caleb on 10/12/2017 8:00:54 PM with a score of 3610
It's really fun. I didn't think it would be so interesting. Now I just wish I could download it as a pdf or something. (There might already be a way and I'm just dumb)
-- SquirrelNut1 on 10/11/2017 9:00:27 AM with a score of 3310
Greatest story on this website.
I got the best ending!
-- JTtheSlicer on 10/8/2017 1:54:55 AM with a score of 19560
Anyone know where to find ghouls and cannibal gaunts?
-- Apocalypsea on 10/8/2017 1:06:21 AM with a score of 36467
The only real issue I had with this story is it's length. I can really appreciate the measures taken to add realism and inspire true logic; This throws me off a bit. Some CYOA stories really focus on throwing a curveball at you, causing you to consider things you yourself commonly wouldn't by way of logic, but this one actually punishes you for looking at it through that aspect.

For instance, Helping others is something we would feel instinctively, but the obvious risk to that makes it an inherently poor choice in most survival situations- especially those with an invariably fatal outcome.

For that reason, when I shed the idea of being a hero and instead focused on surviving, I was able to make it through.

Well done! Write more!
-- Tom on 10/7/2017 12:02:49 PM with a score of 19635
It was the best zombie game I played. I felt I had more Choice then in Tell Tale games. Thanks for making it
-- Ben on 10/6/2017 8:45:26 PM with a score of 20675
There are glitches and inconsistencies but it's a nice story.
-- V on 10/5/2017 8:21:31 PM with a score of 1860
Nicely made. This is the first story I actually completed and I think this whole thing turned out pretty good. The characters and their dialogue needs some adjustments like some of the other reviewers mentioned but other than that it was a very enjoyable experience.
-- A Guest on 10/5/2017 10:39:05 AM with a score of 23085
This was the best game of this type that I have ever played. The writing was perfect! The description was thorough and rich. I am going to play this game quite a few more times. Please make another!
-- Ryan on 10/4/2017 10:37:44 PM with a score of 19585
It was intense, with an awesome storyline. I feel bad about killing the kid on the boat though.
-- Branmuffin13 on 10/3/2017 1:35:34 PM with a score of 19225
Best short story on this website
-- colejarret on 10/2/2017 11:39:29 PM with a score of 19915
Great game, nicely paced
-- Igotforgot on 9/29/2017 5:26:12 AM with a score of 29747
its good boi.
-- loganmiller on 9/28/2017 1:42:12 PM with a score of 21215
This is the best game I've ever played. You should make more zombie survival games
-- Xavier on 9/28/2017 11:51:34 AM with a score of 14715
It was nail-biting and fun.
-- Karamix on 9/26/2017 9:05:14 PM with a score of 32787
Cool. Very deep. But Hugh I just can't quite place it. Great work put into it though!
-- adamstone333 on 9/23/2017 10:23:40 AM with a score of 3060
very good loved it
-- ekkiller17 on 9/21/2017 11:32:35 AM with a score of 15045
it was so good plz in the name of god make more
-- naan on 9/21/2017 2:40:32 AM with a score of 19075
That was great
-- mrawesomer4 on 9/19/2017 4:27:18 PM with a score of 31407
Wow. What a masterpiece BerkaZerka made. This is one of the best storygames that I have ever read in a very long time.
-- samplam on 9/17/2017 7:49:03 PM with a score of 3910
AWESOME STORY!
-- Sam on 9/13/2017 5:22:06 PM with a score of 3610
crazy
-- leonna on 9/12/2017 7:38:10 PM with a score of 1960
It's ok
-- LeoCaesar on 9/10/2017 9:01:53 PM with a score of 1860
Love the game, I found that the main character often thought exactly what I would in the same situation.

The absolute only problem I had, was that after getting to the school and deciding to help everyone live in the campsite, they totally forgot about the SUV full of supplies.

Great Game!
-- wetbug75 on 9/10/2017 12:48:05 AM with a score of 31397
I absolutely loved it! It was this story that convinced me to make an account. Truth be told, I was starting to think it wasn't possible to die, but the results proved me wrong. I really didn't know, and only found out when I reached the end. This story should be published, I'd tell everyone to buy it! I got survivalist, about 24455 points. Kept holding my breath all throughout the plot and didn't even realize each time. Simply great. I look forward to exploring the site, thank you creator!
-- Griseo on 9/9/2017 4:28:12 PM with a score of 24495
its addictive replaying trying to make the right combination of choices!
-- defgoose2 on 9/8/2017 2:14:47 PM with a score of 19285
Great story! This is my first attempt at playing a choose your own adventure game and I thoroughly enjoyed it.
-- Jordan_314 on 9/8/2017 12:54:33 AM with a score of 14120
This was an amazing story and the first ever Chose Your Own Path story i have ever done. It was amazing. Just everything was great about it.
-- Giordano Adrian on 9/7/2017 2:26:57 PM with a score of 22785
Very interesting. I found myself being drawn into the story surprisingly quickly and not being able to tear myself away. The author has done a terrific job.
-- Jeanette on 9/6/2017 11:42:35 PM with a score of 2560
this is such a great game, i got best ending with no bites, saving all of my family, saving 11 additional people and having only one encounter with a special zombie.(it was from a distance though), on my first try! i totally recommend this for anyone over the age of 12.
-- Savanna on 9/6/2017 10:52:43 PM with a score of 35187
cool
-- denis17 on 9/3/2017 10:24:17 PM with a score of 20415
Its was much more fun then homework
-- Jay on 8/30/2017 1:54:08 PM with a score of 5660
Not gonna lie this was a pain in the ass lol, yet never the less a fun and entertaining experience this was better than most of 'choose your adventure books' that you can buy in stores, and to the person who made this thank you so much for the fun and amazing experience you have given to me. This was a blast!
-- Nicholas D'Arcangelo on 8/30/2017 4:05:33 AM with a score of 37517
I GOT five zombies kill XD I like Jacob and stuff
-- Slug on 8/29/2017 10:09:33 PM with a score of 30427
This was an amazing story; far better than any cyoa I've ever seen!
-- Saint_999 on 8/29/2017 11:02:05 AM with a score of 5110
An extremely detailed, engaging story that kept me wanting to play more! Expect to see me playing this multiple times, just to check out other chapters. Amazing job!
-- AbbyMcLaren on 8/26/2017 12:23:52 AM with a score of 35507
Going to play through again. Thanks for your time creating this.
-- Kc on 8/25/2017 5:37:11 AM with a score of 22215
Awesome, I feel like the author of this should publish this and make it a book
-- carpenter74 on 8/23/2017 11:33:21 AM with a score of 22815
awesome
-- jack on 8/19/2017 3:32:15 AM with a score of 7665
I have only one real criticism (beyond the odd typo which is totally forgivable), Greg's reaction to the doctor at the police precinct. While I was sat here happily collaborating with the man (Greg was bitten but not dead, something worth investigating) the text was *telling* me how much of an irredeemable monster the doctor was, in Greg's own thoughts no less. Not saying he was right or "good", but that there's an argument to be made for the potential necessity of that work and I felt very disconnected from Greg despite being right there with him for pretty much the whole rest of the ride.
-- Gavin Branson on 8/17/2017 2:24:40 AM with a score of 22975
Good game 31400, a little easy, and didnt last long enough i expected it too be much longer.
-- Strine on 8/15/2017 6:51:03 PM with a score of 32967
thouroughly enjoyed
-- lungsofsteel on 8/11/2017 5:55:48 AM with a score of 22065
English is not my mother tongue but I think I managed to understand every passage and I even learnt a lot of new words. I think the writer did a great job. I found the story very inspiring and compelling and I really appreciated the great effort he put in making everything coherent. I just wonder if he'll ever be able to publish it as a paper book, it would be totally worth. Sorry for my English. Congratulations and greetings from Italy.
-- Rondell on 8/11/2017 5:40:52 AM with a score of 25085
10,100 points :)
-- Person on 8/7/2017 6:20:33 AM with a score of 10120
GREAT story. I've played it 4 or 5 times just to get to different endings. The story is exciting, thrilling, and really keeps your attention. I feel like I really survived the zombie apocalypse.
-- nm13757 on 8/7/2017 3:57:39 AM with a score of 31107
Fantastic, it looks like you've put a lot of work into it. Looking forward to replay it and get a different ending, i wonder how many branches this story can take... definitely earned it's #1 position.
-- MrDuckFace on 8/5/2017 1:09:05 PM with a score of 29875
I got rebuilder, and for all the zombie apocalypse stories I've heard, watched, played, and read, this has to be one of the best.
-- Andrew on 8/2/2017 2:34:30 AM with a score of 31877
Well written, good grammar, good story line, realistic items and scenarios with plausible choices to make. Well worth playing.
-- endofdays on 8/1/2017 12:45:47 PM with a score of 17615
A pinch story heavy rather than choice, but it was worth a play on a boring day.
-- Roan on 7/29/2017 12:55:13 PM with a score of 8715
Incredibly well-written, immersive, and expansive. It is evident that a substantial effort went in to putting this story together. Well done!
-- hexgurl on 7/28/2017 1:21:45 AM with a score of 19020
I loved it and thought it was lovely there were some errors but that's fine it was a lot of writing. ??
-- Nate on 7/27/2017 10:54:02 AM with a score of 23095
Absolutely incredible, 2,131 different pages and many different paths make for a series of "what ifs" in your mind. You always wonder whether the choice you're making is the right one
-- Dakota jackson on 7/26/2017 3:20:20 PM with a score of 14260
Great story. Had fun saving my family and making it through.
-- ahill57 on 7/26/2017 2:12:18 PM with a score of 26675
Really loved it
-- Alex on 7/26/2017 10:21:48 AM with a score of 9310
Fun story kept me amused for hours!
-- jjgg1232 on 7/25/2017 12:17:16 PM with a score of 29017
So much fun
-- shariq on 7/23/2017 8:43:42 AM with a score of 18085
Enjoyed trying to survive
-- wolfeye on 7/22/2017 12:21:07 PM with a score of 27195
This was incredible even if I died early, it was really really good!!
-- Ssighs on 7/20/2017 9:42:35 AM with a score of 8160
Very fun! There is certainly a trial-and-error aspect, as some choices lead to unexpected deaths, but the detail is good, the story is good, and the main character/his motivation is compelling. Lots of RPG elements, lots of choices.
-- Slayer on 7/19/2017 3:47:19 PM with a score of 25885
A little sexist but overall a nice story and great choices! My friend and I had a lot of fun playing it.
-- malind on 7/13/2017 11:19:53 PM with a score of 22725
My second favorite so far! Very good.
-- O.J. on 7/13/2017 2:26:15 AM with a score of 24845
Great Story and great game!
-- Ayeshka on 7/11/2017 2:09:03 AM with a score of 2060
It was really good but we never found out what city it was in.
-- William on 7/9/2017 11:01:25 PM with a score of 20875
Very descriptive and really damn good. An amazing adventure from start to finish.
-- MrPikmin16 on 7/9/2017 4:00:42 PM with a score of 42347
I died rather quick taking the smartest routes.
-- Robin8 on 7/9/2017 3:37:11 AM with a score of 1110
Great game but add a McDonalds then will be perfect key?
And can you make each scene a little more to the point it takes a long time to read and i don't really need to know what the zombies are dressed like kek?!?
-- Ronald McDonald on 7/6/2017 2:18:24 PM with a score of 9560
Pretty good
-- Matthew on 7/4/2017 1:17:04 PM with a score of 4460
This was, if not the best, one of the best experiences I've had with any story-based games whatsoever. I usually never really read often unless it's important to me, but this story, with its extraordinary details and almost lively characters, really drived me to go to the end.

It's a story you can't miss out on, and the details at the end just round it all together.

(Btw, I loved what the author did with the Protease Inhibitors, understandable how that one character survived long enough, very hilarious.)
-- Ryan on 7/1/2017 5:05:45 AM with a score of 26285
Way better than Walking Dead! It's my first time reading a story like this, and it went well. I want to go back and see how to encounter all the types of zombies.
-- Greg on 7/1/2017 2:09:45 AM with a score of 19925
great!
-- Oakhawthorn663 on 6/30/2017 7:14:09 PM with a score of 1460
Amazing game! Hooked from the first page. If you like tailor made games or anything with zombie apocalypses then this is for you! 5/5! Fire!
-- JohnnyDidWhat on 6/30/2017 3:19:34 PM with a score of 25135
ha try to get a lower score then that
-- lowest score on 6/30/2017 3:02:12 AM with a score of 1910
you should create a necromancer type zombie that revives corpses
-- necromancer on 6/30/2017 2:53:37 AM with a score of 24710
Great game story
-- Fajar on 6/27/2017 4:55:23 AM with a score of 2760
if you save the kid in the boat house then when you go to your house but drive past your house then go behind the houses but you dont give the boy any water it will kill him but let your wife live when you kiss her
-- bug report on 6/26/2017 1:32:01 AM with a score of 21660
i loved your story game it was the best ever and long enough to acualy be worth wile to read

-- best story ever on 6/25/2017 8:07:48 PM with a score of 27365
it was good im definetly gonna play again, hopefully i dont die in the first 50 pages again...
-- zach on 6/25/2017 5:29:34 PM with a score of 2860
it was amasing i loved the many different branches to the story there was.
-- no on 6/24/2017 7:24:19 PM with a score of 20535
This is really good, thanks for making this!

Saving the school was fun!
-- Hakuryu on 6/24/2017 4:58:06 AM with a score of 37197
This story was very well written. It had me intrigued and wanting for more. I was playing from 7 pm and couldn't stop playing until i was done (2 : 25 am).
-- un11vega on 6/22/2017 2:25:45 AM with a score of 36027
way to long
-- RonR on 6/21/2017 12:37:17 PM with a score of 2510
This game is amazing, and is down right revaluationary in the sheer amount of branching paths it provides, however, if there is one thing that would have made this even better, it would be more determinent characters that could be part of a group you could create prior the end-game. Other than that though it's even better than telltales walking dead!
-- aspiringwriter20xx on 6/21/2017 11:01:08 AM with a score of 35887
it gives you the thought you were that person and you feel so scared

I RECOMMEND IT
-- Mary Anne on 6/20/2017 11:13:53 PM with a score of 1210
I loved this game and i felt like your choices definitely mattered. just play smart and you will do well!!!
-- Soulfuture on 6/20/2017 5:28:51 PM with a score of 23075
Hey,I just got the second best ending. I can't believe how much time was put into this. It is amazing, I'm glad I found this website because of this. Anyway, good job
-- Henry on 6/19/2017 2:23:41 PM with a score of 27285
Was pretty good died once lol i got crushed by railroad ties
-- Michael on 6/19/2017 2:28:58 AM with a score of 20815
At certain points i did have to go back and retrace my steps especially when you die from the brain infection when you see your wife. The plot was amazing when i did figure out how to do it. glad too see his whole family didn't die!
-- Andrew on 6/18/2017 5:54:23 PM with a score of 13785
Great story, glad it has so many endings and your choices matter.
-- Lokster on 6/16/2017 9:54:23 PM with a score of 40247
Awesome
-- maxninepower on 6/16/2017 2:28:38 PM with a score of 24825
Amazing how much effort, detail, and thinking was put into this game! Keep up the good work Berka.
-- Troppy on 6/16/2017 1:25:23 PM with a score of 38407
Action packed and filled with tough choices, my kind of adventure game.
-- Edward Benson on 6/15/2017 6:25:04 PM with a score of 18580
Lots of time invested into this story, very good.
-- BOII on 6/15/2017 5:15:16 PM with a score of 22425
It's nice I got the best ending I'm gonna go get all pages seen but good plot and story
-- Gab122006 on 6/11/2017 1:14:37 AM with a score of 25195
Summer break just hit and I live in Florida. For the past few weeks I've dealt with boredom from all of the rain. Just happened to be watching youtube and found out that their are books like these you can make your own fate. Definitely a way to get around boredom I'm sure if I wasn't really bored I would have made a better rating than a 5. Great work and amazing writing.
-- zombigyrl on 6/7/2017 10:28:23 PM with a score of 20075
Awesome
-- Bob on 6/7/2017 4:08:53 PM with a score of 22715
I have just finished playing through one of many story lines and am completely blown away by the amount of detail and work was put into this story. I wont spoil anything for anyone who wishes to play through the story but I have been left completely speech less. I managed to get the second best ending of the game, making a simple mistake early on, and am now left feeling happy that I was able to apply my survivor knowledge to keep myself going yet am still left feeling down and upset due to the actions required to get to where I am. I'm not proud of all my actions but that is the thrill of the game. The test of your humanity the test of your knowledge and luck all wrapped up in a truly scary and realistic story. I personally am in love with this story and plan to return and play through some of the other story line in the future.

I did find however that many of the story point where very cliché and I was able to predict the main bulk of the story very early on which possible lead me to pick the better options. I was also very annoyed at certain points where an important event would happen and I had no power of the situation. This didn't happen often but when a bad event happens and you cant stop it, it almost takes away the element of choice which is vital to these stories. This didn't make to much of a negative impact on the story but I would consider this factor when going into the story. At times it could be considered realistic, to not have full control, but in the sense I'm talking about (SPOLIER) the boy, in feel like it should have been a choice to give him a drink rather than a forced action. Like I say, not much of a problem but its something worth noting.

All in all I am in love with this story and have already recommended it to all my friends who like these types of drama and action. I highly recommend this and hope that all new players are able to truly feel the emotion and power of this apocalypse like I have.
-- Jonathan Green on 6/6/2017 4:58:19 AM with a score of 21125
I think that this game is very interesting and I think that you should make a more better and fun version.
-- yah-yah on 6/5/2017 8:40:02 PM with a score of 4210
Well written and thought out. I like the fact all possibilities were covered. Enjoyed playing.
-- Gary on 6/5/2017 5:37:06 PM with a score of 22945
being a zombie fan I loved reading this. amazing story!
-- daniel on 6/5/2017 4:09:19 PM with a score of 17975
this is GREAT!!!!
-- margret on 6/3/2017 3:10:44 PM with a score of 1960
Everoyne who did not get over 20000 is so bad at this game my record is 34k
-- Jacob on 6/2/2017 2:39:24 PM with a score of 24615
The game was great only thing that I did not like was the You have to kill your wife, Abby ends up a Zombie, And billy Gets killed by that Zombie Dog.
-- Saito897 on 6/2/2017 11:35:23 AM with a score of 21285
easy peasy
-- jhayz410 on 6/2/2017 3:43:48 AM with a score of 25085
awsome sauce
-- zeke on 6/1/2017 12:51:10 PM with a score of 5810
hi
this is a fun game
-- shavonn on 5/31/2017 5:56:52 PM with a score of 2910
My score was 22855!
-- Ella Tilman on 5/29/2017 12:24:12 PM with a score of 22875
amazing
-- classychaos on 5/27/2017 11:05:32 AM with a score of 37657
i would like to sat that your game is very amazing and fun and i really like it because you can choose your own adventure and be creative.
-- mad hatter on 5/26/2017 4:48:58 PM with a score of 10620
cool
-- riley on 5/26/2017 1:38:51 PM with a score of 1910
It took me 3 tries to get the best ending, had fun.
-- BloodSand on 5/25/2017 8:57:31 PM with a score of 32797
I think what would make it better is if it didn't have any profanity.
-- Adam on 5/25/2017 10:12:55 AM with a score of 560
Amazing, the details are a 10/10, even though I know it is fake I could still feel my character's anxiety and how terrified he was, amazing game over all!!!
-- GamertheNoobzYT on 5/24/2017 5:11:08 PM with a score of 7610
I sucked and I died because of physics, but imma try again cause its worth it totes
-- LeinadWhy on 5/24/2017 12:13:29 AM with a score of 12560
i got 19805 points!
-- LYLEO121 on 5/23/2017 9:47:43 PM with a score of 19835
this is the best i love it i would rate it 110%
-- bob on 5/22/2017 4:47:45 PM with a score of 2260
When you are in the little room between the two tunnels and you have the choice to choose between the axe and the crowbar.

The axe option makes it seem like you can go up the stairs with the axe and then come back down and swap with the crowbar for use later. That ended up with me taking a very different approach to the whole thing.
-- JJ on 5/20/2017 10:19:29 AM with a score of 6865
First story I read on this site. Soon to read many more I did not see any loopholes in the plot, no grammar mistakes, or logic breaks.
-- Likebeingawesome on 5/18/2017 8:23:15 AM with a score of 41347
This Choose Your Story is purely magic. I believe that with little editing and formatting, that this story could be published and become a bestseller. Thank you for creating such fantastic stories (there are multiple possibilities) with such realism and with the existing multitude of possibilities
-- Yohanes Goodell on 5/18/2017 8:10:47 AM with a score of 22565
Other than a few misspells here and there, it's a really good story.
-- ThatBlondGuy on 5/17/2017 1:17:31 PM with a score of 25735
yoo good game! Was a lot of fun! Can't believe I got the best ending on my first try though! Wow!
-- a on 5/17/2017 11:33:28 AM with a score of 33497
I really enjoyed this text adventure! I would recommend making another one, great work! :)
-- KiNGRoOvY on 5/17/2017 5:18:47 AM with a score of 25865
It was really amazing to read and play! The story itself was very smooth. The grammar was perfect, and the way you can really paint the scene is something not all writers can do, and for that I congratulate you.

The best thing I found about this is that there are a LOT of choices, each branching off into a different story. I can't seem to find any other path besides the subway > police > home path though, shame. (I did branch it off to police > hospital > church, but that hardly matters)

One advice I highly recommend is to avoid situations where you can get bitten. AVOID. Without a bite you'll have a much better time with everyone, possibly including the police section of the game.

Overall this is a great game. It can be replayed a whole lot of times. The story, though long, is easily remembered so you don't have to drag your eyes across the screen reading old details.

I can see why this has been so highly favored among all the storygames on this sire ^_^

Found Cameos:
> Betaband
> CovElite
> EndMaster
> simplesabley
> Solxd7
> ThisisBo
> uglilick

You Killed 29 Zombies
You Killed 1 Drooler Zombies
You Killed 1 Ghouls
You Killed 1 Hell Hounds
You Killed 1 Cannibal Gaunt Zombies
You Killed 5 People (no idea who except for the teen)
You Saved 60 People

Your Overall Score: 28905
-- ShadowStriker113 on 5/14/2017 7:30:56 PM with a score of 28925
This story kept me guessing throughout the whole thing and I was genially hard pressed with everything I did. It gives you a lot of ways to deal with the problems that are thrown at you. It was hard to tell when the game was railroading me to a certain story arch which I loved and was only able to see it once I went through and tried different routes. My heart strings were pulled in this story as well and almost made me cry at some of the things I had to do. The realism in the story is unmatched in descriptions, actions, and scenarios. I love this work of art and I don't know if this site is still active to a lot of people or not, but it sadness me to see this awesome story wither. Or maybe the sites doing well and maybe I should do more reading, I don't know. What I do know is, every, single, page is worth the read and will without a doubt spark a love for these kinds of story's.
-- thebreezename on 5/13/2017 8:51:07 PM with a score of 20325
fuck yeah, best ending on first tryyyyy
-- mattpahl on 5/12/2017 10:10:46 PM with a score of 35117
I enjoyed this for sure. It was the first I tried on this site and it has made me wanting more. The story was well thought out, and there are so many alternatives that you could play this through many times. I also liked how logic was the survivalists friend, but that there were more daredevil like actions available.
-- Hendri on 5/12/2017 8:02:17 PM with a score of 33627
truly and holy entertaining
-- DaNiMaLs on 5/12/2017 2:34:10 PM with a score of 37907
This is and still will be an amazing game. It's well thought out but I wish that you had a way to save more people.
-- 21wpaskins8 on 5/12/2017 11:24:06 AM with a score of 20175
This was the best choose your own story I've played in a while. I always find myself coming back to it to try and get all possible endings.
-- Alheadburst on 5/12/2017 10:23:58 AM with a score of 19825
Was a very good story. felt like I was actually in the mode of surviving, But I know nothing apparently. LOL
-- Aqclm on 5/11/2017 3:29:09 PM with a score of 1960
the pages before each choice aren't too long and your choices realy matter.
best story i've read so far
-- pooria on 5/6/2017 8:29:42 PM with a score of 39017
This is my favorite game on here. I died several times, but it was worth it!
-- Nina K. on 5/6/2017 4:08:46 PM with a score of 24775
Very thought provoking and a thrill. Killed hours of time. Would highly recommend!
-- l_crc on 5/6/2017 2:32:59 PM with a score of 21595
Very fun and immersive! I love how many choices you can make and the great, detailed descriptions! Best I've ever played!
-- gliwidilt on 5/4/2017 6:23:08 AM with a score of 39477
AWESOME
-- Marz14n on 5/4/2017 6:17:35 AM with a score of 19130
wow. Just wow. This was awesome
-- mnkjango on 5/3/2017 2:48:23 PM with a score of 20265
I played through once and was always on the very edge of my seat! Can't wait for an another story (if there will be another)! I recommend a nuclear survival story for another story if you do another.
-- Tra on 5/3/2017 2:46:26 PM with a score of 23175
Wow I had not expected that eachchoice had so muchimpact I loved this story it's so thought through
10/10 ;>
-- Volx on 5/2/2017 6:04:29 PM with a score of 25015
Awesome Gsme.
Tips:
1) Be sure to load games at each page u feel is a checkpoint
2) Try out the safest and practical ways first,then go for some fun with other ways
3) BE SURE to have FUN!! :)
-- LegendaryLeon on 4/30/2017 1:01:37 PM with a score of 38127
This storygame was very well thought out, entertaining, without dead ends, and game real choices. Bravo!
-- Jimmy A on 4/28/2017 7:51:23 PM with a score of 21715
This was a well done and engaging story! Even failure was fun!
-- Daniel Carr on 4/28/2017 1:08:26 PM with a score of 31897
You shouldn't include bad words and make the story shorter.
-- JASON ZHOU on 4/27/2017 8:59:10 PM with a score of 4410
I thought that this story was really good and was very interesting.
-- xUnknownx on 4/26/2017 3:21:45 PM with a score of 20325
Congratulations! You have not only survived the zombie apocalypse and saved your entire family, but made it through bite free! If you hadn’t lost most of your own humanity just to survive, this would have been the best possible ending. Of course there must still be some shred of humanity left in you; given that you were instrumental in saving all those from the school complex. Perhaps in some Grand Balance, that will begin to tip the scales towards redemption…
Here’s a rundown of how you did –
You Killed 3 Zombies
You Killed 0 Drooler Zombies
You Killed 0 Bloater Zombies
You Killed 0 Ghouls
You Killed 0 Banshees
You Killed 0 Hell Hounds
You Killed 0 Cannibal Gaunt Zombies
You Killed 3 People
You Saved 60 People (including yourself, unless you died)
You were eaten by 0 Zombies
Your Overall Score: 26755
(You played through 115 of 2,131 Pages and have proven to be a Survivalist)
-- gapaot on 4/25/2017 5:53:13 PM with a score of 26795
it was a good game
-- george on 4/25/2017 8:36:09 AM with a score of 13580
I got the best ending this time! Great game, really enjoyed the experience. You really put a lot of time in this and that's what makes it great! Thanks for making this!
-- GCMStory on 4/22/2017 10:27:35 PM with a score of 30687
Awesome Game, Truly epic story. Nice Job!
-- GCMStory on 4/22/2017 7:40:01 PM with a score of 17510
Good ?? book like details in imaginary
Totally get this story whoever made this is a better writer than Harry Potter
-- Guiggvytg on 4/22/2017 10:27:48 AM with a score of 15630
This game was dope. I recommend smoking a fuckton of weed and playing this.
-- Cruz on 4/21/2017 10:03:06 AM with a score of 21695
Good game!
-- TheKyliePerson on 4/20/2017 4:45:35 PM with a score of 21135
brilliant, simply brilliant
-- noobslayer on 4/20/2017 12:24:27 PM with a score of 9560
Now that was cool... I did kill anyone that got in the way if m e saving my family, but I stayed away from zombies, trusted nothing, and thrived. The hardest part was the code to the door... hint... try the two codes right before the bottom one... and that is the hardest part of the game that I just gave you the pass to. Use the back arrow if you die! This game was awesome!
-- GamerX on 4/20/2017 9:15:11 AM with a score of 15325
I finished it all and lived. I am proud to say I saved 58 people. The first I'm I did it I was a zombi happy meal. XD
-- Not dead guy on 4/19/2017 7:44:57 PM with a score of 19315
Thrilling!
-- Andre on 4/19/2017 5:19:45 PM with a score of 20265
Long as hell nigga but dope as fuck nigger
-- Nyctophilia on 4/19/2017 12:16:22 PM with a score of 3810
This is really cool :) your a great writer and I really injoyed playing. Of course I died before I even got out of th station but anyway I m gonna try again :P you should b proud of this. It would of taken ages
-- Dead guy on 4/19/2017 1:05:07 AM with a score of 1310
I enjoyed it, though there are a few grammatical issues and odd word replacements most likely caused by spell checker swaps. I was rather impressed with the excellent choices that the story provided and found them to fit well into the realistic feel of the story.

I believe that with a fair bit of polish this story could really be an excellent publishable piece. I would love to offer my assistance as a published author to the creator of this story to provide free copy editing services.
-- Balthizar on 4/17/2017 10:59:33 PM with a score of 13460
10/10, would suffocate in a fire while being chased by zombies again.
-- FroggerMeSilly on 4/17/2017 11:27:26 AM with a score of 33577
This is such a well-written story where your decisions ACTUALLY make an impact on the narrative! I have yet to play all the way through (just died at page 97 of over 2100!) and am excited to see the rest!
-- Jon Lee on 4/14/2017 1:49:24 PM with a score of 13960
Very nice adventure! Killed monsters with my trusty crowbar/10, would get eaten again.
-- Ersatz on 4/12/2017 12:02:51 AM with a score of 34767
This the first story i read and even though i died pretty early i was really engrossed and i will definitely be trying it again
-- heimerdinger on 4/9/2017 6:10:15 PM with a score of 1610
Can anyone tell me the different ending please? I have played through a few times, and want to know how to kill more zombies and the hellhound.
-- Bunnymuffin13 on 4/8/2017 6:46:19 PM with a score of 15865
Fantastic
-- Artificer on 4/6/2017 11:19:50 PM with a score of 33967
Just completed the game again. It's great!
-- ayyy on 4/6/2017 12:49:22 AM with a score of 33017
if you make any more awesome games tell me
-- carlos on 4/4/2017 12:50:04 PM with a score of 26385
first play, got 18005 point. not a best ending but at least it is better than most of it.
-- rijalmuzikers on 4/1/2017 7:42:11 PM with a score of 18015
I may have died in minutes, but I still think it was a pretty kickass performance for an accountant. From what little of the story, I survived through, the writing seemed crisp and unobtrusive, the setting descriptions were excellent, and you did a fantastic job of creating choices that a real person would make in a crisis, equally logical consequences, and a masterful tone of panic. Kudos!
-- Killed By 213 Zombies on 4/1/2017 3:43:18 PM with a score of 1910
Yeah, great
-- fadil on 4/1/2017 11:54:00 AM with a score of 4460
A great game about a zombie apocalypse if you don't want to buy Zombie Exodus.
-- kazares2651 on 4/1/2017 8:58:36 AM with a score of 20985
the best zombie survival adventure I have experienced in a while. I recommend it 11/10 IGN™
-- CAAAAARL on 4/1/2017 1:49:24 AM with a score of 17125
Wow absolutely amazing, just in shock about how someone can come up with a story this well written and thought out. I can't imagine the time it took to make this, but it was definitely put to good use. Keep up the magnificent work and make plenty more breath taking stories!!
-- Burnty52 on 3/30/2017 10:20:05 AM with a score of 23495
I'm scared shitless. Please help lol
-- Me on 3/29/2017 5:17:20 PM with a score of 10670
I finished with the 2nd best ending surviving with Laura, Jessica, Kate, and Jacob, surprising, seeing as I wasn't following any strict rules and was just going with what seemed to be the safest options while still progressing.
Generally, don't make much noise and think and check out the area before you choose what to do.
The descriptions are good enough to let you imagine your surroundings yet keep it simple enough that you don't get bored reading them. One of the best stories I have played in terms of variety, realism, and decisions!
-- Koebowsie on 3/28/2017 2:34:23 PM with a score of 21745
Wow- i played it before but it was boring and i got a terrible score (even though i survived)
but i tried again and it was 3-4 times as long and 5 times as enjoyable which is why i rated 8/8 my second time round. I did die with hundreds of zombies on the kill count but I had to backtrack that sadly :(.
I got lots of specials and this is my scorecardn for my second attempt:
Here’s a rundown of how you did –


You Killed 37 Zombies

You Killed 1 Drooler Zombies

You Killed 0 Bloater Zombies

You Killed 0 Ghouls

You Killed 0 Banshees

You Killed 1 Hell Hounds

You Killed 0 Cannibal Gaunt Zombies


You Killed 3 People

You Saved 9 People (including yourself, unless you died)


You were eaten by 0 Zombies


Your Overall Score: 21355


(You played through 125 of 2,131 Pages and have proven to be a Survivalist)
-- EpicFirebird on 3/27/2017 4:50:39 PM with a score of 21375
REALLY long but worth the time
-- Aegle on 3/27/2017 4:19:17 AM with a score of 35867
Really interesting story and I can see that a LOT of time and thought went into this. Very cool
-- MC on 3/26/2017 9:47:44 PM with a score of 20825

Here’s a rundown of how you did –


You Killed 4 Zombies

You Killed 0 Drooler Zombies

You Killed 0 Bloater Zombies

You Killed 0 Ghouls

You Killed 0 Banshees

You Killed 0 Hell Hounds

You Killed 0 Cannibal Gaunt Zombies


You Killed 2 People

You Saved 1 People (including yourself, unless you died)


You were eaten by 0 Zombies


Your Overall Score: 7605


(You played through 52 of 2,131 Pages and have proven to be a Dead Man Walking)
-- EpicFirebird on 3/26/2017 5:23:47 PM with a score of 7615
Great choices
-- Harley10 on 3/25/2017 9:34:28 PM with a score of 29647
I quite enjoyed the abundance of decisions. It made me consider my options as if I were Greg. I also liked that it was challenging, but rational. You were only told so much and left to your own devices. In this way you had a direction to go, but no one to hold your hand.

You could likely improve upon Greg's reactions and personal thoughts. While they were generally clear and concise he came off as to quick to adapt. Within the first few pages I was already bashing someone's skull in with a cement block.

It managed to keep my attention for the whole day, even when fatigue and boredom set in. While I didn't get the best end I'll likely give it another play. For my first CYS it's was great.
-- Astros on 3/25/2017 7:48:33 PM with a score of 23795
i loved this adventure book and have done only 150 pages. it's so nerve racking and i love doing the combinations. but one part i didn't like is when i started shooting all the zombies and i ran out of ammo when i had traded for hundreds of rounds for each gun. lol. i will continue to finish the book.
-- luke mccoy on 3/24/2017 12:09:12 AM with a score of 36417
Very interested to go through the other story arcs after saving my family and a school full of kids. Still managed to moe down over 100 zed in the process though.
-- Jakob on 3/22/2017 1:51:15 AM with a score of 32087
Died so many times
-- George Smith on 3/21/2017 11:44:01 AM with a score of 22715
I got the very best possible ending which was a lot more satisfying then i expected
-- Seth Cormack on 3/20/2017 5:13:38 PM with a score of 32927
Very good story
-- Marek on 3/20/2017 5:39:48 AM with a score of 33647
I HATE THIS GAME
-- Rhianna Edney on 3/20/2017 12:04:27 AM with a score of 960
I really enjoyed the writing, and how many possible outcomes there where. Very well done!
-- Callie on 3/19/2017 11:18:29 PM with a score of 21385
Wow, this game is amazing. There's tons of options. I went back and decided to take some of the worse options, and I find it great how if you find Jacob in the elevator shaft, then you only meet a tomcat in the boat club. Though, I did find a bug. Shouldn't the sheriff shoot you if you have an obvious bite (like on your neck?).
-- Guesty on 3/19/2017 2:19:44 PM with a score of 21265
This is just a very good game. The length of the story as well as it's quality are HUGE. After 30+ trial-and-error, it's finally done.
-- Billy_Glen on 3/17/2017 5:57:25 AM with a score of 37847
Very good I killed the boy going against every moral in me because he could have gotten me killed. I stayed stealthy and didn't see anything other than zombies and the crazy lady. Amazing story simple clean ending nothing spectacular but a good way to show its over and you have won.
-- Lucas on 3/16/2017 11:05:17 PM with a score of 19165
I am in complete awe of this game.
-- Rami Levin on 3/16/2017 6:31:49 PM with a score of 8610
This was amazing. I read it over and over choosing different paths to see the results of everything. Very well written, enough to give you some real suspense. Amazing.
-- Jtilija on 3/16/2017 4:46:18 PM with a score of 19765
It's awesome , except I wish that you could get your hands on more weapons.
-- Lj on 3/16/2017 8:36:22 AM with a score of 1810
I found it very interesting, however, every time I did the pushpin lock thing from the bathroom it didn't work, I tried every single combination but nothing seemed to work, so I backtracked and got eaten by zombies. Otherwise I would say the story was well told, I replayed about 9 times, it was good.
-- Aj on 3/15/2017 10:56:49 PM with a score of 2810
Amazing
-- XDawg on 3/15/2017 1:13:35 PM with a score of 16265
I loved it I survived it and the Apocalypse is now over and I'm living with me wife and 2 daughters

-- Joshua on 3/14/2017 8:02:12 PM with a score of 30047
Best adventure book/story
-- Poop on 3/14/2017 6:32:48 PM with a score of 1510
Great story!
I don't know about the replay value (as I don't like thinking about parallel universes where some peeps would be alive and some others dead), and I got the "best oossible ending" so I guess I am fine with this :') Thank you for this read!
-- Nguyen Minh Duc on 3/14/2017 10:10:15 AM with a score of 32647
I was not expecting to be hooked so intensely from the start, but through the Authors highly descriptive and detailed writing, it's almost impossible to stop reading, simply after the first paragraph.

The amount of visual images you're able to create in your mind through the stories detailed writing, makes it seem as if you're watching a movie in your mind; However, the choices you make throughout the story determine where you go, where you end up, whether you live or die, reunite with your family or never know what truly happens to them.

I made it out of the subway unharmed, heading into the direction of my home. I made it to my house, reuniting with my wife and headed to the girls school. There I reunited my whole family and convinced 59 lives to join me in heading to the mountains to create a community, in which we thrived until the end of the apocolypse. I only had to kill 7 zombies and one human. Two humans, if you count the poor teenager I failed to protect and had to put out of his misery. Mind you, all of this within only 73 pages out of the possible 2100 plus pages.

Good story! Great job!
-- JonathonRoyse on 3/12/2017 5:35:50 PM with a score of 25017
I spent hours trying to get the best possible ending and I have to say that every second was worth it. So well written and interesting to play through again and again. 10/10.
-- ljbeuk on 3/12/2017 3:28:15 PM with a score of 34257
This zombie survival game made me learn alot! I would rate it 11 out of 10!
-- LanzXMonzon on 3/11/2017 2:28:09 AM with a score of 31477
An immersive experience. 3 hours of my life gone in an instant.
-- KemCho on 3/11/2017 12:32:34 AM with a score of 28237
Fun little CYOA. Only messed up a few times. Not really sure what the mysterious black creature in the dreams was though. Not sure it was it explained. I managed to get the best ending possible.
-- L on 3/10/2017 10:10:43 PM with a score of 38687
wow! so much work and detail! great... thing! i really dont know if i should call it a game a story or what but it was great. really liked it :)
-- james on 3/9/2017 8:31:06 PM with a score of 36007
Always my dream to become a zombie happy meal. Well done zombies
-- Yeeter on 3/6/2017 9:34:05 PM with a score of 1710
Really intriguing and enjoyed the run. Only had to back track twice in my run and got the best ending.
-- Joe on 3/6/2017 5:26:01 PM with a score of 35417
What a game. Didn't last long but still....
-- Speedotank on 3/6/2017 3:24:24 PM with a score of 6760
I got the rank of "Zombie Happy Meal"! YAY!
-- Yay on 3/6/2017 3:38:20 AM with a score of 810
Damn, I can't find Sindri or Endmaster...
-- Anonymous on 3/6/2017 2:43:40 AM with a score of 34417
it wuz real good. I know that I have very picky book habits, but this was one of the best books I ever read.
-- ananymous on 3/5/2017 3:31:11 PM with a score of 22015
A few hours pleasant distraction. Thanks!
-- Oliver on 3/5/2017 9:30:28 AM with a score of 19425
Just wanted to say that I really enjoyed your story. I haven't read a choose your own adventure since I was a kid.
Of course I don't remember them being so chilling. It will take some time to get over the fact that I got killed and left a young boy all alone in a zombie appocolypse lol.I had a really great time though. Can't wait to see what other stories you have, or will have.
-- mick on 3/5/2017 7:40:27 AM with a score of 10560
Cool but mabye try something diffrent
-- Knownsaturn9660 on 3/3/2017 9:38:25 AM with a score of 2160
It cool
-- EmdMaster on 3/3/2017 9:21:36 AM with a score of 39667
This was the best game I ever played
-- Harassment on 3/2/2017 3:26:56 AM with a score of 810
Dead Man Walking (Zombie Survival) has a simple concept and a pretty straightforward story, but the amount of choice given and the thought put into each option makes this a very unique experience. As I played through I enjoyed the critical thinking that each situation required as well as gauging the risks versus the possible rewards of outcomes. While I have only played through once and achieved the best ending, there is definitely a lot of replayability and I'm looking forward to the many other adventures I can have with the story in the future.
-- Rocky660 on 3/1/2017 8:45:46 PM with a score of 34577
Bosses confirmed.
-- Bingbingkink on 3/1/2017 5:46:46 PM with a score of 2060
Pretty good, but not a lot of variety in the different endings. Lots of cool deaths, but the only survival endings i found were in the campground and the precinct. Obviously one could save certain people, but this was trivial.
-- Tristan on 3/1/2017 1:38:32 PM with a score of 30057
fine
-- Alex Lopez on 3/1/2017 9:38:04 AM with a score of 2310
Holy shit, t'was very intense. Also well written
-- Leon on 2/28/2017 4:53:42 PM with a score of 23265
Gnarly
-- Evan on 2/27/2017 12:29:38 PM with a score of 34697
This is the first ever story I've read in this site and I'm not disappointed! This got me all tensed and thinking over decisions over and over. Even though I survived, I think I would immediately die in real life! Nice story and this made me stay in this wonderful site :D Thank you for sharing this beautiful masterpiece (which is better than most zombie apocalypse stories/movies that I read lol)
-- Seulyoon on 2/26/2017 10:57:15 PM with a score of 18945
Lotta fun! Kills a few hours when I'm at work. Lots of thought into the process, and, I mean, 21k pages deserves a high rating. Very nice job.
-- N1ckD1pples on 2/25/2017 7:42:38 PM with a score of 33387
I enjoyed the choices even as simple as weaponry. It took me a good 5 minutes debating on the first switch (fire ax or crowbar/ultimately going with the crowbar for utility). I survived by staying at the precinct and got a score of 7355. Nice job at making this amazing game! 8/8
-- ChewyDog on 2/20/2017 1:04:56 AM with a score of 7365
This was very well done, the decisions were hard to make because the options were reasonable and depended on preemptive thought. Liked how you weren't punished for being a risk taker with some more bad-ass options working out. Overall the whole story was well paced and would give anybody a couple hours of enjoyment, hopefully with a happy ending. I personally scored something abouts 20, 005 and I have two regrets the major one being I never did get to use that second Molotov cocktail ;D
-- Girrawaa on 2/19/2017 9:49:15 AM with a score of 20415
Can't save wife, but can save daughters...

You have created a masterpiece of zombie survival. Details are great, mix in long length, so many choices, and tiny to no grammatical errors.

Missed out Reeses Cups to read this. 7/8.
-- AgentX on 2/19/2017 6:57:34 AM with a score of 16925
EVERYTHING IS AWESOME
-- ZombieGamer9188 on 2/16/2017 8:02:53 PM with a score of 30897
It was lit
-- The lit guy on 2/16/2017 11:06:04 AM with a score of 20025
Absolutely fantastic!!!
-- James on 2/15/2017 7:40:42 PM with a score of 22945
I was looking for options that I could use for zombie apocalypse and this website came up and it was everything I was looking for. The only thing I would change is to add in more key characters. All in all pretty great
-- Bigfoot on 2/15/2017 5:17:03 PM with a score of 17865
This is really awesome! Lots of different directions you could take on this so it is a lot of fun.
-- crymar24 on 2/13/2017 10:18:39 AM with a score of 36607
Well thought out, consistent, and detailed.
-- lostphenom on 2/12/2017 7:28:52 PM with a score of 36657
i think it could use a sequal that adds more customisible options for your character for a more immersive effect other than that i think this was a good story and will play again.
-- unequalboot on 2/12/2017 4:33:23 PM with a score of 17680
So far this is the best Zombie survival story i have seen on here. It was full of amazing twists and turns and I liked that none of the options throughout the game had dead ends. I hope to see another one like this from you and can't wait to see what you come up with. The grammar was also good throughout the story and had tons of different options. I also liked that you had cameos from different people on this website and I thought that was pretty creative. I also like that you told the story behind the main character and included other characters such as Jacob and the tomboy survivor.
-- hblovecraft on 2/10/2017 4:04:00 PM with a score of 28015
Amazing!! I played twice and survived both times with really good endings ... **SPOILERS AHEAD** The first one I went to the police camp where I survived, but I didn't save my family. The second one was the best where I saved my family, the kid Jacob and the whole school people too. **SPOILERS OFF** As I said, amazing game and congratulations to the author because it was so well written, brilliant. I will miss this story and probably play this again sometime. You all can be sure it is worth playing and lots of fun!!:)
-- 1998 on 2/5/2017 4:36:41 AM with a score of 28675
I am so bad at this lol.
-- Zombie Bait on 2/4/2017 12:03:05 PM with a score of 4210
Extremely entertaining story but sadly got the best ending in only 79 pages I wish there was more lenght rather than options or branches but overall story was fantastic.
-- GundamMeister on 2/2/2017 6:46:11 AM with a score of 26757
Great read.
-- Joeyjoejoe on 2/1/2017 3:30:04 AM with a score of 19535
good game!
-- thestoryman22 on 1/31/2017 8:11:24 AM with a score of 9920
that was really facinating kind of scary but really cool
-- brendon on 1/30/2017 1:32:04 PM with a score of 3960
A really well written and enjoyable story. Thanks for a great experience. I think I may have found a small continuity error at one point though. I can't exactly remember the details, so I will play through again and see if I can find the page I noticed it on.
-- SiriusMorningStar on 1/29/2017 8:59:47 PM with a score of 41397
Absolutely loved it! Got the best possible ending and saved 60 people. Gotta say it again, it's even better that Reese's Cups.
-- Charles_Shirley on 1/28/2017 1:13:39 PM with a score of 33387
perfect absolutely perfect
-- Screener on 1/26/2017 11:02:01 AM with a score of 16385
Noice!
-- MattyRCD on 1/25/2017 12:41:41 PM with a score of 35957
I am really good at this because I have played it several times but I always find a way to do things differently. THANK YOU FOR MAKING THIS!!!
-- Bob_The_Destroyer on 1/25/2017 9:54:14 AM with a score of 36447
It is amazing how much of a story you built up. And the background of the virus.
-- Calvin on 1/17/2017 12:39:49 PM with a score of 22835
i got the best possible ending! it's a must read story
-- Mrea on 1/15/2017 2:19:21 PM with a score of 35437
loved it !
-- Jeuxaddict on 1/13/2017 4:29:22 PM with a score of 17270
I got the best ending possible without being infected but of course knowing that I carry it and saved 56 people and killing a cannibal gaunt and drooler along the way. OH YEAH!!!!!
-- Zombie_Killer on 1/11/2017 6:00:11 PM with a score of 28285
Very fun and in-depth. :)
-- Placebo on 1/9/2017 7:29:11 PM with a score of 22775
survivalist... If only I had never gotten bit.
-- zavcex on 1/9/2017 6:36:59 AM with a score of 23775
It was really cool. It said I got the very best ending on the first try but it took me 6 and a half hours to do. I am definitely going to continue to play.
-- Gabe88 on 1/1/2017 8:01:01 AM with a score of 28977
This really was one of the best "Choose Your Story" games out there; it had a awesome plotline, and I even got the best ending possible! I'm amazed at the level of diction and complexity of this story; overall an amazing story. 10/10.
-- Xavier C. on 12/28/2016 1:11:05 AM with a score of 30207
The best zombie survival ingeraftive story I have seen in a long time! Th choices were logical, made sense, and had predictable outcomes most of the times. My only complaint, if any, is that the whole head wound that your character starts with is never really "treated" apart from been binded. One would think more serious consequences would result from it, but oh well.

Beautiful story, made with care. Bravo. You did an excellent job.
-- Felix on 12/26/2016 4:57:44 PM with a score of 30197
This game is really fun.... or maybe it's just me, liking all the zombie stuff all the time.... Either way I loved it!!!! defiantly my go to when I'm bored!
-- Lexi on 12/21/2016 7:57:45 PM with a score of 8660
I am a survivor of this pretty awesome experience that is quite a bit better than most CYOA zombie stories on the web! It was well written and actually made me a slight bit afraid to choose what I thought was right on account that I am certain I came close to death more than once in this story. Very well done.
-- Zack on 12/17/2016 2:56:09 AM with a score of 35867
Wow nice story I enjoyed it a lot and it went in depth about many things.
-- CeruleanFlare on 12/15/2016 5:51:29 PM with a score of 21685
Wow just wow
-- TheDevil666666 on 12/14/2016 7:27:52 PM with a score of 24435
Brilliant game with lots of tough decisions to make. Highly enjoyable for most people so I would recommend it to anyone.
-- Fastest_jack on 12/10/2016 5:01:11 PM with a score of 8215
A truly enjoyable game. I was really sad though hen i ended killing my wife. But that sadness left when i went back in time and decided to use my companion as a test dummy. to think i've only read 10% of the whole possible story... really makes me not feel bothered to play it again. BUT THAT DOESNT MEAN THIS IS NOT AN AMAZING STORY! it truly did bring upon me enlightenment.
-- Cookie-Warlock on 12/5/2016 12:33:35 PM with a score of 25995
Excellent story telling. Great job!
-- dizzyd93 on 11/28/2016 12:06:04 AM with a score of 25375
I found this game you made to both have a unique and incredible story, but also a choosing system that makes the players feel as if they really do have control over Greg's life. The story was pretty original, as far as the zombie apocalypse genre goes, and it was miraculously detailed. 5/5. I hope to see more from you!
-- Aidan on 11/27/2016 4:37:53 PM with a score of 33947
Really awesome stuff, thanks for making/sharing!
-- Tavo on 11/26/2016 1:26:27 PM with a score of 23935
Got the Rebuilder ending. Great story!
-- Voltage on 11/25/2016 7:12:18 PM with a score of 37267
7/8 Very impressive overall, but not written very well in some places. I recall there was a paragraph of completely irrelevant details about the hard hats of city worker zombies.
-- resistor on 11/23/2016 2:01:09 PM with a score of 23375
Amazing
-- Skroxberry on 11/11/2016 1:19:50 PM with a score of 34627
reaallllyyyy good... it tests your brains to the fullest
-- shaurya1616 on 11/9/2016 6:29:43 AM with a score of 28775
35007 points, best ending. I had 3 hours of fun reading it, and I'm happy that you had prepared the 'best ending' for us.
-- hepari00 on 11/8/2016 7:55:35 PM with a score of 35027
A beautifully scripted game that is perfect in every way. The immersion is mind boggling and makes you feel as if you are experiencing it for yourself. I hope the author makes more and I am 100% supporting!
-- Ezra on 11/8/2016 1:25:50 PM with a score of 20765
What can I say. I love zombies, and I love how instead of doubting everyone, this story lets you benefit from trusting and helping them.

The Best End was very satisfying, and every Dead End had good reason behind it, as opposed to "Oh shit, a zombie appeared out of nowhere and you died without having a choice to fight back!" in other storygames I've read in this category. This is the perfect storygame for me, and I definitely recommend it.

Now, time to attempt a Genocide route :)
-- Karuma on 11/8/2016 7:17:21 AM with a score of 38287
I am not a fan of the video game stile zombie mutants but I like the way they fit in this story grate work. I love it overall storyline and I'm definitely gonna go through it again. Thanks for the work you put into this I really enjoyed it.
-- James on 11/7/2016 11:39:56 PM with a score of 24575
Awesome game, I absolutely loved it. I am most definetly playing this a couple dozen more times.
-- Gizmzo on 11/4/2016 4:53:20 PM with a score of 27485
My first time playing and I have to admit that I did die multiple times. Most of the times it's because I wanted to see if there was a better option
-- GigaKnight on 11/3/2016 3:52:17 PM with a score of 26775
Amazing. I loved it right from the beginning, and I quite enjoyed the amount of detail put into it. Finding out that you're a carrier, should you get that far, was an amazing twist as well.
-- Jamie Castro on 11/3/2016 1:01:31 AM with a score of 19975
Hi , i really enjoyed playing this text-based game very well , Bytheway , My name is Simon and Here’s a rundown of how i did –


You Killed 18 Zombies

You Killed 1 Drooler Zombies

You Killed 0 Bloater Zombies

You Killed 1 Ghouls

You Killed 0 Banshees

You Killed 1 Hell Hounds

You Killed 1 Cannibal Gaunt Zombies


You Killed 0 People

You Saved 5 People (including yourself, unless you died)


You were eaten by 0 Zombies


Your Overall Score: 34867


(You played through 137 of 2,131 Pages and have proven to be a Rebuilder)

-- Ljaypog135 on 11/2/2016 1:53:51 AM with a score of 34887
You Killed 59 Zombies

You Killed 0 Drooler Zombies

You Killed 0 Bloater Zombies

You Killed 0 Ghouls

You Killed 0 Banshees

You Killed 1 Hell Hounds

You Killed 0 Cannibal Gaunt Zombies


You Killed 1 People

You Saved 5 People (including yourself, unless you died)


You were eaten by 0 Zombies


Your Overall Score: 25075


(You played through 158 of 2,131 Pages and have proven to be a Survivalist)
-- 21wpaskins on 10/28/2016 9:37:37 PM with a score of 25085
Keep up the good work!
-- John Anderson on 10/25/2016 5:04:06 AM with a score of 32457
This is one of, if not the best, text adventure/interactive story that I've ever played. Each gory detail painted into the background of so many choices all wonderfully described creates a masterpiece of an apocalypse scenario. The author is brilliant in his wording, and in all of his possible storylines. I would love to see more games like this!
-- Stephen on 10/21/2016 11:16:11 AM with a score of 1860
great game played it loads still haven't found all the different types of zombie may never do so.
-- dom on 10/17/2016 10:27:23 AM with a score of 26035
[SPOILERS] Wow... just, wow... An amazing story line mixed in with believable and down to earth answers to predicaments. It is sad to say that I died from a simple bacterial infection, and that Jacob died at my own hands (After he zombified in the garage ;-;). I had thought that I would be ok after Jacobs death, Seeing as though it lead to me finding my wife, but it was all taken away, at the hands of the simplest bacteria. I like to take solace in the fact that I did not find out what had happened to my daughters, which would most likely lead to more heartbreak. This story gets an 100/10 in my book!
-- Kevin Bagwell on 10/15/2016 5:19:07 AM with a score of 15720
I am literally speechless after that,the best emotional experience.
-- Mike on 10/14/2016 1:15:21 PM with a score of 22725
yea i redid it and got 31700+
-- Dcool990 on 10/13/2016 5:40:10 PM with a score of 31777
OMG 2,000 plus pages seriously,how long did this take. A little to many words so I mostly just skipped it all.Nice though
-- Dcool990 on 10/13/2016 4:45:30 PM with a score of 3760
Best on this website. Love the point system.
-- Skittles22 on 10/11/2016 4:07:39 PM with a score of 21895
Excellent! Really well written and enjoyable. Im gonna go again!
-- Beeon on 10/10/2016 9:01:45 PM with a score of 17125
An amazing and not easy story line. I finished it quite quickly and enjoyed every minute
-- Kirill on 10/8/2016 4:09:54 AM with a score of 26375
Such a brilliant story! And here I am in 2016 coming back to this masterpiece. As an aspiring author, I would love to do a collaborative work with you, I've left my email of you ever read this!
-- Ravendaas on 10/2/2016 11:52:21 PM with a score of 19065
Twas good. Wanna know what happens if you pick up the girl with the hockey stick as I saved everyone but her.
-- Sarah on 9/26/2016 5:24:57 AM with a score of 29027
DUDE WHIRLWIND OF ACTION! AMAZING
-- Schipkeb on 9/24/2016 5:39:27 PM with a score of 21765
AWESOME
-- Zodiac Silvers on 9/19/2016 11:04:46 PM with a score of 22625
I swear to god you can crack a womans head open for no reason this game is brutal
-- Heli0s on 9/14/2016 8:28:45 AM with a score of 7560
I just clicked the top option over and over
-- Heli0s on 9/14/2016 8:15:08 AM with a score of 1110
Very nice gamebook. Loved it.
-- Vittorio99 on 9/14/2016 2:07:27 AM with a score of 16320
Omg best game ever.. 24775 score.. only got bit by a zombie but saved my whole family!! And 60 other people..
-- DetroitShani313 on 9/13/2016 11:35:46 PM with a score of 24785
I was really enthralled with this, I started reading roughly around 11pm and I'm writing this at 5am. From a narrative stand point the story is pretty straight forward and most if not all the characters and scenarios that happen are pretty damn realistic. It really does a good job if making you fear your actions, I found myself genuinely scared of certain sections (That Cannibal Gaunt generally made me shudder) and other sections had me cringey and wincing, fight that hell hound made me cringe and wince just at how insanely well written and detailed it was. Kudos to the author. My only qualm with it would be the lack of variety in the zombies, while i did read that it said that 1 in 1000 will mutate it still would have been nice to encounter some of these other zombies I never had a chance to meet, epically with that kill tally at the end of each read, it really makes you want to find and kill at least one of each to truly feel like a zombie killing bad ass, nonetheless I enjoyed this game, good read.
-- Twistedark on 9/8/2016 5:05:47 AM with a score of 31387
It was really interesting
-- bignameissue on 9/2/2016 2:09:47 PM with a score of 23375
Well i wouldn't say its good and nor bad, but you could put pictures for visual preferences. and also make an option of self reading story line where the computer reads it to you.
-- Chyna on 8/31/2016 3:07:27 PM with a score of 2060
Very well written and a lot of fun! Some minor spelling and grammatical errors but nothing that took me out of the story. Lots of choices at key moments makes for a great ride!
-- BigRonn77 on 8/30/2016 8:31:51 AM with a score of 28775
This is the first story I've read on the site...and I'm just amazed. Knowing that it's 2000 pages, I've played one ending to find out there's still much much more!

Breaking it down: The Amazing, Good, Bad, Ugly

Ugly: Not much I can say here.

Bad: To me, the dialogue and the characters seem a bit weak. When you meet characters, (at least in my playthrough) I feel that they don't seem to matter as much since we don't know much of their story, or why they're motivated to survive. An example of this weak characterization is Tomboy Survivor Girl. (Don't want to spoil to much.) An example of better charactization (In my opinion) is from the Bus driver. For the dialogue, it's not that it's terrible it's just generic. Nothing really stands out to me in what the characters have said.

Good:
The story writing. Immediately you're plunged into a world where the author is able to give you - not only an image - but a smell, taste, sound, and taste of everything that's going on. This allows you to really grasp what the character is living out in this world. Being a Zombie Survival game, it is crucial that these elements are well written since you need to use these to
make your decisions.

However, regarding the "painting the picture", I feel at times that there are some details that don't need to included and it can be lengthy if you can already grasp what is going on. So while it's good to thoroughly describe your scenes, sometimes letting the reader fill in blanks with some breadcrumbs is just enough.

Amazing: Okay, content. It's 2000 pages. 2000! I haven't written anything in my lifetime that is that long. 2000 pages of content. The story that keeps on telling. It is like "travelling in a desert" because you can't seem to see the end.

The game itself. Wow. It's really everything I'd want out of a choose your own adventure game. Every item that you find is in preparation for what might come in the future. Every move you make can leave you in grave danger for another risky feat. You simply can't ignore any stray structures or people behind, you have to decide if you want to interact with things or if it's to risky. Exploring in this game is a thing. I can't believe that I'm EXPLORING a written text story because there are so many choices, many paths, etc.

I want to praise the author on giving some choices the weight they deserve. In this story, taking info of your inventory, your state of health, and the threat of what's around you makes every flip of the page a fun immersive game!

(Regarding what's above, I haven't read all 2000 pages so maybe my judgement may be off. Considering this is my first comment, I may also may be rating this to high or low, but this is overall what I felt!)

7/8

Thanks for making an epic story!
-- RewriteN on 8/26/2016 6:18:07 PM with a score of 25615
i loved this, please make more if you haven't you are amazing at it
-- Firecream on 8/23/2016 12:06:16 PM with a score of 33195
This is one hell of an adventure!
-- BetaMuffin on 8/20/2016 9:58:35 PM with a score of 37307
What a great game! I safely managed to make it to the best possible ending without being bit, and am about to go through it again to see how many zombies I can kill this time. Very fun and well written.
8/8
-- Verethragna on 8/17/2016 4:57:14 PM with a score of 33577
It was pretty good up until I took a risk and ended up dying.
-- ShatteredMind on 8/14/2016 10:21:50 PM with a score of 1260
it was so good it made me want to die
-- skesag65399797hh on 8/14/2016 9:11:19 PM with a score of 16185
Personally I love games such as this one, but it's much to easy to get hurt/bitten and you don't have a lot of chances to fix that problem in the very beginning with your head gash and all. One other things that your character is not coztomizeable in any way i mean skills and such which really postpones the experenice.
-- Romeo on 8/12/2016 11:56:32 PM with a score of 4560
Pick stealth .
-- FreedomTheOne on 8/12/2016 9:17:17 AM with a score of 17725
I was absolutely astonished on how many pages and selections there were, also the final point screen is truly amazing. I'm a writer myself and have never seen a better peice of work, not even from published New Your Times Bestsellers. 9.5/10
-- ChubbyNinja456 on 8/3/2016 2:25:28 AM with a score of 35747
Great game, over 1 and a half hours of gameplay and an excellent story
-- Fevercrumb on 7/27/2016 10:50:22 AM with a score of 30917
What an amazing experience of story-telling survival. I love the attention to realism and detail, and most of all challenging sandbox of choices you get to make provided with consequences associated. There is a question, will this adventure story well be expanded? Are their plans that this could possibly developed into being an immersive graphical text-adventure game?
-- click on 7/26/2016 8:48:15 AM with a score of 13890
Has a few places where you'd expect other options but they aren't provided. Still, the writing's good.
-- falco1029 on 7/21/2016 5:26:30 AM with a score of 15770
Get game
-- dsi on 7/19/2016 2:35:18 AM with a score of 21665
It was absolutely amazing. That is all i can say about it, it leaves me speechless
-- Matthew clarke on 7/17/2016 8:29:26 PM with a score of 34927
I finally made it through intact and sane. So I killed two people? Their deaths were accidental.... Good game, good story.
-- crusader on 7/8/2016 7:13:12 PM with a score of 31947
This story is really well written and it really makes me realize how dumb zombie movie survivors are.
-- Nelson on 7/6/2016 9:28:52 PM with a score of 36377
Good. Just Good.
-- lejama88 on 7/5/2016 9:48:05 AM with a score of 34627
An amazing game better than nearly all other text based zombie games, as well as some FPS zombie games!

I highly recommend!
-- Jazor34 on 7/4/2016 4:39:25 AM with a score of 8210
Had me glued to my phone for hours.
-- Trish on 7/1/2016 2:02:19 AM with a score of 21825
Quite simply my favorite storygame of all. Very well-written, suspenseful, with perfect pacing and believable, relatable characters. Bravo.
-- Gonzo Strangelove on 6/30/2016 6:04:32 AM with a score of 34677
I've consumed way too much zombie media in the last few years, but this was still awesome and fresh because the choices completely change the story you're going to get. Time for round 3!
-- PastaLass on 6/25/2016 9:12:44 PM with a score of 26585
8/8, score: 26505 saved my whole family and everyone at the school, 60 people including myself. Though I'll admit I backtracked from death a number of times before getting to the good ending.

Well-written story with ample choice and freedom throughout and a main character who is refreshingly pragmatic and logical. There were almost no dead-ends that felt cheap, and every choice I made felt important and had an effect on the story.

There were only some very minor inconsistencies, such as the exposition suggesting I flee from my home using the car in the garage, despite the fact I'd left it on the next street over. This was only very minor, however, since the story ultimately didn't let me perform that action anyway. The only other instance I recall is when it is described that I leave the fire-extinguisher behind as it's too heavy, despite never picking it up to begin with.
-- sark on 6/25/2016 3:21:12 PM with a score of 26525
A very good zombie survival game. 10/10
-- gamer god on 6/24/2016 2:51:46 AM with a score of 23965
Just....breathtaking....

8/8
-- Battalion on 6/15/2016 4:45:29 PM with a score of 24385
Yay! I saved him and 59 other people!!
I'm happy now :)
-- Seto on 6/15/2016 12:31:57 AM with a score of 33487
I wanted to save the boy :c
-- Seto on 6/15/2016 12:16:04 AM with a score of 24275
One word : amazing.
-- mater227 on 6/13/2016 5:12:27 PM with a score of 33697
Pretty damned amazing.

The story was very long - I would estimate I've been playing for around three hours, and there's still replay potential - so you have a lot there to keep you going. You could also play over a few days. It was very well written (odd typos, but nothing major) . . . good grammar, spelling, punctuation . . . excellent.

My only complaint is the misogyny; female characters are reduced to screaming stereotypes, objects to be raped (as apparently sexual violence against women is the only way to express the horror of isolation as a woman), or people to be rescued. Only the immediate family live, in terms of women, and no other women live that have names (even the people at the end saved were all men). So . . . that let it down a lot, which is why I took a point off.

Still - great story, great writing. Just plain great :)
-- RobinMask on 6/9/2016 2:27:31 PM with a score of 25075
I beat it finally. I only saved nine people, and killed 2 but whatever. It's amazing, and you have to make choices to save or to kill. If you keep dying, just don't do the choices you did because they are obviously wrong.
-- FlowerfellFrisk on 6/7/2016 12:34:25 PM with a score of 16875
First comment on the site and I can tell I'm going to enjoy it here. Managed to get the best possible ending but I've got one issue. Very early on in the game you have of two choices. Axe or crowbar. The author makes sure to point out pros and cons of each weapon. But no matter what you do if you take the crowbar (Darth Sidius voice) "You will die" seriously I've noticed nobody comment on this. The crowbar has less reach and damage but is universally more useful than an axe. The axe is a badass weapon but it's an axe so not many uses. (Also can easily get stuck in someone's head but that never happens) But if you choose the axe you still get the same options for getting underground and into buildings. It's impossible to survive (outside of the obvious first ending) without the axe. Idk I probably sound foolish but my first few unsuccessful runs I chose the crowbar thinking I was popping locks and hopping through sewers like a badass because I had a tool designed to do that. Then on a whim I choose the axe and like an hour later I beat the game with best ending.
-- Marshith on 6/4/2016 7:52:28 PM with a score of 37197
Good story!

Well done mate!
-- Daan1214 on 6/4/2016 7:09:07 AM with a score of 3560
I enjoyed the story.
-- Ray-man on 5/31/2016 3:50:26 PM with a score of 19415
I truly LOVE this adventure. I have gotten through it a number of times. I love figuring out new hidden gems (and challenges) within it. Great, great job!
-- AD on 5/31/2016 12:47:49 AM with a score of 32617
How can I get all two thousand pages done with the given choices I've only reached 120 all with the same end any advice?
-- Wyatt on 5/29/2016 7:01:49 AM with a score of 18465
Died six times after that I got three good endings all in all this is way more realistic than most zombie movies and books but feels similar to the first season of the walking dead
-- Wyatt guilliams on 5/27/2016 11:17:33 PM with a score of 32857
This was an interesting experience and i'll continue to play through for the rest of the game. Though being called a 'survivalist' at the end of it all felt like a trophy to be proud of.
-- Daerelek on 5/25/2016 1:27:17 PM with a score of 23525
This is the first comment I have ever left on this website, and there is no other game that I deserves an applause such as this one.

This game, this amazing work of creativity, not only calls for you to question your own morals and thoughts on the human condition, but places you in a very life-like scenario where you deal with very tangible consequences of your every action.

Dozens of characters to interact with, thousands of choices (literally, there are, like, 2k pages), and countless endings that are a result of your own hands... it is all such a very masterfully crafted piece of work.

I mean, gosh. It's almost like I'm right there, playing as the character! Best game on the site, guaranteed.
-- SJR2631 on 5/25/2016 3:12:34 AM with a score of 34887
I am a fan of most all interactive fiction stories, especially apocalyptic story lines, such as this. This is one of the best that I have found and greatly enjoyed playing and I intend to play again to try and find as many endings as possible. Thank you for taking the time and energy to make this game.
-- Kudan on 5/24/2016 1:26:14 PM with a score of 12070
Incredibly addictive! I spent over an hour playing and only ran through 65 pages before I succumbed to my wounds :(
I ran through the math, and I found that on a perfect game you could be playing for a month if you play 90 minutes or so a day! I rated it 8/8 mainly because of the almost infinite number of choices available.
-- Battalion on 5/18/2016 1:57:02 PM with a score of 15330
I got 37237 as a score, and I got the best ending! Great game, and very fun. 8/8
-- Elt_1080 on 5/15/2016 4:23:55 PM with a score of 37257
Not bad. Not bad at all. The options given are more or less realistic and ones which would most likely occur to any person regarding the situations presented with throughout the game (at least in theory, anyways). It's good to be able to choose actual options one likes to think they'd take in real life, even if some decisions might be less-than-pleasant or (at the very least) questionable. Hey - in theory, I could survive the bloody zombie apocalypse! Hell yeah.
-- Vik on 5/8/2016 10:39:41 PM with a score of 20435
Got the second best ending. Definitely worth it, good job.
-- Aerith on 5/5/2016 8:34:41 PM with a score of 21495
That was perfect! I also got the best ending on my first try, and with more than 30k points, that was good!
-- matt112 on 5/4/2016 1:50:09 PM with a score of 34907
Absolutely amazing. The only thing I can say is at every end screen, maybe giving a small tree layout of possible paths and a possible count. Like, you killed 90 out of a possible 20000 zombies (The second number being ll possible zombies you can I'll, not just every zombie you can come across)
-- Activerios on 5/4/2016 9:20:53 AM with a score of 37607
Holy crap, this game is awesome. Other than the fact that I died from the damn head wound!!!! Saved my wife and the boy, made it all the way to the suburbs and died when I walked in the bathroom. Great.BE SURE TO FIND ANTIBOCOTICS!!!!!1
-- Gray16 on 4/27/2016 2:22:59 PM with a score of 3690
Truely awsome game!!!!
-- Danny on 4/27/2016 8:55:36 AM with a score of 13630
This was the first "choose your story" that I have read since childhood. It was pretty awesome, thank you for sharing it with us!
-- Nerros on 4/23/2016 11:57:30 AM with a score of 21725
Quite a good story and plot with a good sense of horror oftentimes uncommon in zombie themed stories or movies. Great attention to detail and description as well as realism. Looking forward to playing again and experiencing other alternate endings.
-- DarkScorpion on 4/19/2016 5:11:43 AM with a score of 19415
What an AMAZING story!, i loved every second of it, i will definitely play it many, many times.
My thanks to everyone who contributed to this wonderful story.
-- Karateprincezzz on 4/19/2016 4:13:29 AM with a score of 19535
oh my coconuts lololol but really loved it one try i was able to save 60 with me not dieing nor my family and saved jocob at first i was going to kill him out mercy but could not do it so i kept him along even though he could get me killed plus i want to know what happened to his mother and is it possible to save her. Next i only saw two types of zombies i saw a hell hound killed it and a giant did not try to fight him plus when i thought about him i saw a windigo SEARCH IT UP SCARY!!!!!!!!!! but finaly thing what is depper in the city?
-- Samuel on 4/18/2016 12:11:37 AM with a score of 35487
An incredible, fast-paced, action-packed, suspenseful zombie adventure with fantastic writing, choices, story paths, characters, zombies themselves, and background, with a surprisingly realistic virus, and reasons for its existence. Absolutely perfect, minor typos aside. Now in my bookmarks. Amazing.
-- Jerred on 4/17/2016 1:47:45 PM with a score of 16575
Omg this is a really awesome story game
-- ?? on 4/16/2016 10:49:51 AM with a score of 14890
It is the best game on CYS.
The only problem is you can't save the kid and your wife at the same time without dying. I liked the kid :(
-- iallen4 on 4/13/2016 12:44:59 PM with a score of 3160
WHY DO I KEEP DYING.
Hey, at least I know I won't survive in a zombie apocalypse...
-- milkycat on 4/12/2016 10:38:13 PM with a score of 1610
I really enjoyed playing. I liked how you offered different ways to accomplish each task ranging from completely stupid to logical. Also cudos to what I'm assuming is a caddy shack reference with the zombies chasing the ground hog around the golf course. I'm definitely going to attempt to play again but save the wife this time. I'd leave a better comment but its 4:30 in the morning and I'm too fricking tired for that shit man. Lol good story though.
-- DaCaRi on 4/8/2016 5:33:47 AM with a score of 21745
i played before this game and i didnt really remember how much of it went by other than i dont know if i had survived last time, but i managed with a lot of save checkpoints to go thru as a survivor and a carrier, tough break, i wish i could "love" my wife in a way other than non-platonic ;). anyways, will try again later, altough i dont know how this could have 2000 pages and i only read about 100 somethings and its over... well pretty good rpg neways.
-- norton158 on 4/7/2016 9:53:18 PM with a score of 30025
this was a good story but there should be more endings
-- flippy900 on 4/4/2016 12:45:08 PM with a score of 16185
Im A survivalist! Best Zombie story on the site.
-- Jimmysutton on 3/31/2016 3:56:24 PM with a score of 15525
I LOVE IT
-- Lewis on 3/23/2016 6:39:38 AM with a score of 1810
It was lit fam
-- Dankman on 3/21/2016 8:20:31 PM with a score of 8460
Great game! Took me about 9 tries to finally beat it, but it was such an amazing and well written story! Easily one of the most expansive and detailed stories on this website.
-- Pelvis Impress Me on 3/21/2016 2:24:08 PM with a score of 24675
I killed only 91 zombies.
-- MasonJarGuzzi on 3/19/2016 1:52:08 AM with a score of 9310
goog game aka gg
-- jack on 3/18/2016 8:37:29 AM with a score of 1810
This was a great CYOA story, having a very detailed storyline, with many descriptions about major things, and even the little things! This had a great ending and I was very pleased with how this turned out at the end! I haven't played a storygame this long, but it was well worth it! I had a final score of 27048, which I think is nice, and this definitely deserved the 8 that I gave! I will replay this and choose other choices, as I am very curious to find out what the black silhouette is that haunts Greg whenever he dies. (I died 3 times BTW). AMAZING!
-- DaHatedHaterdatHates on 3/16/2016 9:14:02 PM with a score of 27417
This was a great CYOA story, having a very detailed storyline, with many descriptions about major things, and even the little things! This had a great ending and I was very pleased with how this turned out at the end! I haven't played a storygame this long, but it was well worth it! I had a final score of 27048, which I think is nice, and this definitely deserved the 8 that I gave! I will replay this and choose other choices, as I am very curious to find out what the black silhouette is that haunts Greg whenever he dies. (I died 3 times BTW). AMAZING!
-- DaHatedHaterdatHates on 3/15/2016 11:45:58 PM with a score of 27417
IT WILL BRING YOU ENLIGHTENMENT
-- Darkmark8910 on 3/15/2016 7:05:57 PM with a score of 32167
Extremely well written, and quite factual as well. Don't be greedy and you'll survive.
-- Korduk on 3/15/2016 2:40:26 AM with a score of 24015
Best. Story Game. Ever.

@BerkaZerka

Thanks Berka for this amazing story. You truly are a talented writer. And BTW that lock combination part was tricky and had no strategy. But then again, it's the zombie apocalypse. Strategy doesn't matter :)
-- MasonJarGuzzi on 3/8/2016 12:58:49 AM with a score of 3110
it was really good
-- horonus on 3/4/2016 6:34:17 AM with a score of 30757
Wow a lot lot of work has been put into this and you can see the amount of effort put in it is a great story. I will play this many times to see all the choices. 9/10


-- aaagaming on 3/3/2016 3:01:49 PM with a score of 10020
This was awesome I survived and played it so many times I know all the endings.
-- Zombie killer on 3/3/2016 1:24:39 PM with a score of 18315
I got the second best ending! Yaaaaaaay!
-- CatLover366 on 2/17/2016 5:31:10 PM with a score of 18685
Really fun. cant wait to do another
-- ZachZombieSlayer on 2/17/2016 1:27:25 PM with a score of 15935
This was a well good descripted story you made. i got stuck on the pin lock
-- hello on 2/16/2016 7:25:38 PM with a score of 4460
Love all things zombies, and this well-thought story gives you the feel of being right there in the thick of things without the worry of being bitten!
-- thebigweave on 2/16/2016 2:05:26 PM with a score of 22895
Loved the story, Made it out with saving the teens and my whole family plus Jacob, But was bit in the process, Only a 7.85456/ 8 because of the occasional use of "though" instead of "thought". Extremely capturing story, though could use some action during the one month recovery time.
-- DB77 on 2/13/2016 1:29:22 AM with a score of 22495
it rook me the better part of two months to finally finish this game. i love this game. plenty if heart break and lots of action keep the story going. i'm glad that i found it.
-- Kyrithes on 2/11/2016 8:31:42 PM with a score of 20815
I couldn't have done it without the "Go back" feature. Even with a few spelling, grammar and punctuation problems, the writing was excellent, with well-drawn characters and believable situations. Very engaging and absorbing, and even educational. Now to go back and see what would've happened if I'd made another choice...
-- Fearchar on 2/8/2016 12:53:32 AM with a score of 36607
so many possibilities. such a great storyline.
-- 1dlabbe1 on 2/5/2016 10:02:12 PM with a score of 27235
I had a really fun time with this Survival zombie game..
It Makes me think hard enough to the the choices.
-- Lanz Monzon on 2/5/2016 9:14:39 AM with a score of 32737
Ecxellent game that was really thought out well. A few spelling errors, but nothing serious. Play it. Do it.
-- Arionis on 2/5/2016 5:42:51 AM with a score of 37117
Nice
-- Ander on 2/4/2016 9:51:28 PM with a score of 16530
I got 23,645 as a score best possible ending 11 people including me only killed 1 person 52 zombies 1 droler and 2 hell hounds 1 cannibal gaunt zombie.... Skill
-- Demonic on 2/3/2016 7:27:45 PM with a score of 23665
This is one of the best things known to mankind, upthere with Steam, Minecraft, and Netflix.
-- TK0805 on 2/3/2016 1:21:39 PM with a score of 19125
This was an awesome game
-- Nathan miles on 2/3/2016 1:08:42 PM with a score of 22227
One word: awesome. It will bring you hours of fun, or if you wanna reply it, than days of fun :D
-- Razorblayd on 2/2/2016 6:06:17 AM with a score of 24475
:3 I think my AK47,9mm pistol,sawn-off shotgun,and all of my guns are useless. HOLY CROWBAR IT'S TAH BEST IN EVERY ZOMBIE APOCALYPSE,
-- IndoProject on 1/28/2016 8:56:28 AM with a score of 32437
This was freaking awesome! Never would I have thought that I could enjoy something like this as much as I did.
-- Jeremyah on 1/26/2016 3:15:03 AM with a score of 26525
This is so damn good!
-- Brenda on 1/26/2016 12:14:28 AM with a score of 40277
THis game was incredible warning the feels will come ;-; and is really good with people who love to read
-- Rile Ben on 1/24/2016 2:13:40 AM with a score of 31387
I loved the game though I was disappointed in the fact that I couldn't use the guns. I'm gonna replay to get different endings.
-- Wolfbaneninja on 1/22/2016 2:17:38 PM with a score of 35347
Now THIS is what I signed up for.
Best in show beyond a doubt. Thanks!
-- Galootius on 1/20/2016 2:40:31 PM with a score of 29585
That was incredible
-- Sean on 1/20/2016 1:45:46 PM with a score of 33597
Incredible! I really enjoyed the story and I plan on many more read throughs!
-- Sean on 1/20/2016 10:50:26 AM with a score of 23967
An excellent story, and great writing. Probably the best text adventure I've found on this site, if not the whole internet. Played through it four or five times and finally got the best ending. Totally worth the time. Great job!
-- bananarama on 1/19/2016 10:03:23 PM with a score of 35727
It was pretty fun
-- leegood on 1/19/2016 2:31:27 PM with a score of 21075
Great story
-- Adi on 1/19/2016 11:50:56 AM with a score of 31967
Mauled to death by a giant dog. 8/8 would get mauled to death by giant dog again.
-- Steph on 1/19/2016 4:58:40 AM with a score of 22125
I really enjoyed the twists and turns and my unfortunate demise was something I had not expected but the first thing I thought of after shuffle and growl was oh S!@# This is a awesome adventure book and I would recommend it to anyone who wonders what an outbreak would be like.
-- NKB on 1/18/2016 8:11:56 AM with a score of 10180
I had way too much fun playing through this.
-- Jak2016 on 1/17/2016 12:04:58 PM with a score of 32897
A better virus lore than most zombie stories and punishing consequences for bad choices. nice.
-- unampho on 1/16/2016 11:24:49 PM with a score of 21765
Really like the story line. Very in depth. Gives you a feeling of being the character himself.
-- BlindEagle on 1/16/2016 6:04:02 AM with a score of 38287
I been looking for something like this for a LONG time and i like how there are different zombie types love it keep up the work :)
-- AtheistCat on 1/15/2016 6:04:20 PM with a score of 23015
very addicting...
-- KoroSensei on 1/15/2016 5:30:52 PM with a score of 25925
wow. amazing.
-- wow on 1/13/2016 6:30:27 PM with a score of 26147
I have never put so many hours into any choose your own story. When the real zombie apocalypse does come around, I know what to do. That's author :)
-- Matt on 1/12/2016 9:41:21 PM with a score of 35747
Zombie fans should definitely read this awesome zombie survival. Great story and was a privilege to read.
-- mclick9 on 1/12/2016 12:35:10 AM with a score of 36587
This was an exciting and interesting story! I got the second best ending. Didn't encounter all the special zombies, but that's what a second playthrough is for.
-- Paint3rly on 1/11/2016 1:47:59 PM with a score of 21425
I loved this story! It's really great, and gives you realistic options on surviving and making good decisions, as well as the ability to change your mind in some instances. The survival methods are spot on.

My only critique is that it does pander a bit to the heterosexual white male, and does contain some annoying tropes. Non-white individuals are identified as such while white individuals are not, or "white by default," which does not add anything to the story. The wife and some of the female characters (lunch ladies, teacher, the girls) all fall into the 'Damsel in Distress' trope, and the men are more capable (for the most part) than the women (but not in all instances). Slapping the wife when she's hysterical left a poor taste in my mouth, and the way the women all look to the men to be leaders was a bit cringe-worthy. And despite my never properly getting medical attention for my injuries, (yikes, that head wound!) my character still seems more capable and fearless than the female characters.

Nevertheless, the story and adventure was still fun, and the options you could choose from were interesting. Seeing as how I made it out alive the first time around and saved my family, I'm almost compelled to go back and try it again, making purposefully different choices to see what other outcomes may contain. I never tried the first door, or went anywhere near the bridge. I didn't try to jump the military vehicles, and almost every time I was in a fight-or-flight situation, I chose flight. So I'm very interested to go back and try again. What was that awful human-ish scream I heard from the parking garage? Should I have run down that giant creature? What about braving the pack of dogs to get medicine from the clinic? Would I have made it through the turnstile if I bum rushed those zombies? HOLY SHIT I WISH I CHOSE TO RIDE THE LAWNMOWER!

Overall, I really liked this story adventure. Were I to go through one like it again, I could do without the race-labeling and gender norm stereotypes, but those are minor issues.
-- cxtx3 on 1/11/2016 4:00:59 AM with a score of 33837
it's fucking awesome!!!
-- lemy on 1/10/2016 11:28:28 PM with a score of 20075
i had a lot of fun at work so thanks for that :) also, there is a small inconsistency at the beginning when you choose to take the fire extinguisher but somehow end up with a crowbar instead :D however, if i'd find myself in a zombie apocalypse i don't think id be questioning it any further but just go with it instead. Good work!!
-- tomtomtomtom on 1/10/2016 7:59:19 AM with a score of 28947
pretty lit
-- josed on 1/10/2016 7:27:23 AM with a score of 30067
I just couldn't put this damn thing to rest. It was engrossing from the beginning until my death. The worldbuilding is incredible in this work and so is the depth of all the choices. I'm pretty sure I backtracked once or twice because I wanted to see another result.

Took about an hour to think over all the decisions and make sure I did everything right. That being said, however, I was kind of upset to get the ending I got. Kind of felt all that work went for naught. Guess that's the nature of these types of games, though.

Overall, very well written, very well executed in atmosphere, and rather daunting in most decisions. Even a zombie veteran like myself had a bit of a rough time choosing my path here. I give this masterpiece a 10/10.
-- DeltaNine on 1/10/2016 2:46:01 AM with a score of 17440
I couldn't stop reading it! There are so many possibilities and even though I got the best possible ending my first time I can't wait to go back and try other ones!
-- Menelwen on 1/9/2016 10:44:39 PM with a score of 38337
I was on the way back from a 13 hour car ride with nothing to do. This kept me occupied for the majority of it. Thanks!
-- Maddie on 1/9/2016 7:46:03 PM with a score of 32177
Cool story
-- auburnate on 1/9/2016 2:03:17 PM with a score of 18925
What a blast! Brings me back to those old Goosebumps books as a child that had multiple endings, except this one is on a much larger and more mature scale. This story was well-written and a lot of fun. Well worth your time!
-- ZeeGee on 1/9/2016 1:28:07 PM with a score of 32107
Amazing, a lot of time went into this.
-- Jon on 1/9/2016 11:57:25 AM with a score of 33347
Really well written, the choices seemed really well fleshed out and leaves a lot of freedom.
-- Jon on 1/9/2016 11:00:09 AM with a score of 8910
I survive by being really selfish and rational I think
-- unkn0wn on 1/9/2016 8:39:36 AM with a score of 7865
Really cool and very well put together. There is meaning behind each and every choice, making the adventure quite the riveting experience.
-- Zach on 1/9/2016 5:56:10 AM with a score of 9160
Hello Mr. Author! your choice game (I don't know what its called) is amazing! Of all the stories I've read so far, this is clearly the best in my book. Plus it also helped me improve my vocabulary. Swears and Curses were not included though, hahaha. Well I wish you good luck on your story making, I wish to read more of your stories preferibly the "zombie survival" type. Ok, see ya!
-- JamesFinn on 1/6/2016 10:14:24 PM with a score of 34327
Wow. Uhh... Not sure what to say. I got the best ending and even though I didn't read everything I still felt like I was the main character. Well done creator. You have made a fine game.
-- Awesomeking31 on 1/3/2016 9:02:30 AM with a score of 34137
This is just i just play it
-- that guy on 12/29/2015 3:41:34 AM with a score of 25025
This is amazing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I told myself to only do a few choices, but I want to do this again! This is plainly the best thing ever! Thank you for making this!
-- Not Given on 12/20/2015 1:42:43 AM with a score of 6110
I loved it it was so fun seeing all the different endings
-- meatboi123 on 12/20/2015 12:01:21 AM with a score of 16315
Good Good ??
-- Bailey on 12/12/2015 3:50:37 PM with a score of 10720
I loved it. Its great. There's quite a bit of cursing but I guess that's to be expected in a situation like this.
-- Hiccup on 12/7/2015 10:53:09 AM with a score of 33667
This text game was really well written. I like how even though I had finished my own path, I know I could always go back to discover some other different or diverse ending. Very impressive!
-- YuuTart on 12/7/2015 8:29:08 AM with a score of 20435
Seriously... I hope the information at the end was just rumours.
-- A on 12/6/2015 3:41:19 AM with a score of 25795
10/10 IGN
-- bobby on 12/6/2015 2:14:55 AM with a score of 30847
I made it!

I really enjoyed it, I like the descriptions of the places. And I actually fert that I was in a zombie apocalypse rather than some half-assed attempt at interactivity! Well done, BerkaZerka! :)
-- jibberish on 12/4/2015 6:25:19 AM with a score of 32777
I enjoyed this! I really loved the story and was so glad that the little boy Jacob was not a hinderance through the whole experience which made me fond of the boy. So happy that he didn't die for me!
Bravo on this!
-- BloodyRose on 11/26/2015 11:47:13 PM with a score of 41187
This is one of the best storygames on the site IMO. If you tell me this is anything less than 500000 words in total I will not believe you.
-- igulat on 11/26/2015 8:58:20 PM with a score of 36387
Another great game!
-- TNTitan on 11/25/2015 8:04:53 AM with a score of 33697
It was awesome
-- Jacob on 11/21/2015 10:59:51 PM with a score of 17375
I loved this game
-- Oscar on 11/21/2015 7:35:06 PM with a score of 1110
I liked it.
-- Tsun_Adivinox on 11/21/2015 12:38:44 PM with a score of 27537
No idea how I was infected.. Rip Jacob, rip Abby, rip the world
-- Ghost on 11/20/2015 1:58:05 PM with a score of 27525
Absolutely Lovely Storyline.
-- Narcisstic_Ion on 11/16/2015 9:25:22 PM with a score of 23965
Extremely fun, I don't really read to much but interactive works like these are great entertainment!
-- g4m35t3r on 11/16/2015 9:27:01 AM with a score of 24185
holy sh*t this is worth the time and that its DAMN WELL MADE if i was the president or something thats is a higher ranking officer i would commend the life out of you 5/5 f*cking stars
-- NGPFTW on 11/16/2015 8:16:20 AM with a score of 22775
It was fun, but theres a LOT of reading
-- ben on 11/15/2015 4:06:07 PM with a score of 8160
You were eaten by 213 zombies. Seems legit.
-- Zombie Fodder on 11/12/2015 9:27:38 PM with a score of 2260
Originally thought it was kind of bland, but after lying in bed with a few snacks and playing it a bit more thoroughly, now realized that this game was really well-developed! Enjoyed greatly, will be using this to kill time for awhile.
-- Student on 11/12/2015 8:14:01 PM with a score of 17485
I accomplished absolutely nothing but the death of 184 zombies and 2 cars. Awesome. One of the funnest things I've ever done on the internet.
-- Jabba The Hutt on 11/12/2015 1:27:28 PM with a score of 6060
A truly amazing storygame
I managed to get the ending where your wife dies but your daughters survive and you go on to rebuild, if anyone knows how to get the best ending then I'm all ears
-- Alex Horner on 11/12/2015 8:06:13 AM with a score of 19435

Here’s a rundown of how you did –


You Killed 116 Zombies

You Killed 0 Drooler Zombies

You Killed 0 Bloater Zombies

You Killed 0 Ghouls

You Killed 0 Banshees

You Killed 0 Hell Hounds

You Killed 0 Cannibal Gaunt Zombies


You Killed 1 People

You Saved 55 People (including yourself, unless you died)


You were eaten by 0 Zombies


Your Overall Score: 27307


(You played through 93 of 2,131 Pages and have proven to be a Rebuilder)
-- TheBossWriter on 11/10/2015 4:13:20 PM with a score of 27327
Tied for favorite with Dungeon Stompage.
-- TheBossWriter on 11/10/2015 1:31:47 PM with a score of 9610
brilliantly thought out.
10/10
-- onehandbandit on 11/8/2015 3:28:56 PM with a score of 19735
It could have given a few more options as to what you could do or even an inventory option making it more role play style with skill trees as to better give reasons as to why you'd do certain things maybe even a morality meter to gauge your choices even a leader board list to check your play style against others
-- Michael on 11/8/2015 7:02:41 AM with a score of 9110
Just Do It, All Zombie Survival Game Lovers, Do This Shet, Took Me Almost 5 Hours, Killed 110+ zombies,saved 59 people, killed a saliva dude zombie and a cannibal gaunt zombie
-- Andreas on 11/7/2015 10:29:51 AM with a score of 25825
very fun. Infinite possibilities.
-- J on 11/1/2015 2:31:58 PM with a score of 30137
Good
-- Cjko2 on 11/1/2015 10:18:42 AM with a score of 4610
played it again and again!
-- CharlieBoy on 10/31/2015 12:57:35 PM with a score of 21575
Awesome! Really enjoyed this story game. Every page had me tensed in excitement and slight terror at what was yet to come.
-- T-Dawg on 10/31/2015 3:34:12 AM with a score of 22695
It's certainly a fun game and the choices available are more or less logical, unlike in some other games.
-- marklir6 on 10/27/2015 5:52:52 AM with a score of 41067
I think that this is an extraordinary storyline no matter which part of it you end on. It was very creative and interesting from the start, really a gorgeous creation in its own. One of the top Zombie Apocalypse interactive novels I have played through. The only criticism I have is the spelling because of countless errors found throughout the story. Overall, great job BerkaZerka.
-- sparky12345121p on 10/23/2015 7:25:24 PM with a score of 18485
Simply awesome
-- Pg33 on 10/20/2015 2:35:58 AM with a score of 31807
A very good story . Worth playing and reading
-- Scaffold on 10/14/2015 2:34:28 PM with a score of 22985
This was one great story!
-- Some random guy on 10/13/2015 11:32:59 AM with a score of 17535
Oh my god, i finally found an amazing story, i loved it, i could not stop reading, it's a good thing i didnt run into the more terrible zombies, i rate 10 out of 10 :)
-- Daniel on 10/11/2015 12:27:26 AM with a score of 33317
Great job. Exciting to read and still entirely plausible courses of action and reasonable decision options.
Enjoyed it very much. Please write more interactive novels like this one!
Found the idea of the super-abominations a little too phantastic though, except for the hellhounds.
-- Mats on 10/8/2015 1:56:46 PM with a score of 34047
Very engrossing and well written!
-- Aaron on 10/5/2015 11:12:55 PM with a score of 31107
I'm pretty sure thi is a really, really old game. So this is less to say it's very well written, and altogether awesome, and more just to point out people are still finding it, and playing it and having fun.

Cheers, mate.
-- topter on 10/4/2015 6:23:35 AM with a score of 38677
10/10
-- Leo on 10/3/2015 3:18:33 PM with a score of 33737
Fantastic game if you make the right choices.
-- A fan on 10/2/2015 11:31:32 PM with a score of 35957
This was, as far as zombie apocalypse games go, AMAZING! I love things like this! However, I do wish we could customize the main character, it was a little weird to be called Greg...
-- Muarza on 10/1/2015 9:25:25 PM with a score of 38147
"Congratulations! You have not only survived the zombie apocalypse, but saved your entire family! If you hadn’t contracted (and now carry) the world’s most deadly virus along the way, this would have been the best possible ending..."

DAMMIT!
-- Plaacchei on 9/28/2015 10:26:13 PM with a score of 22765
Great story! R8 8 out of 8 M8
-- sx2sparkplug on 9/25/2015 9:18:39 AM with a score of 27775
Really excellent creation. I hope to be inspired and make a quality choose story of my own.
-- Techies on 9/24/2015 3:22:51 PM with a score of 37447
Wow. Just....wow.
-- Kiljaz on 9/20/2015 10:22:47 PM with a score of 27135
BEST. EVER!
-- ArtIsSmart on 9/18/2015 6:38:58 PM with a score of 18135
it was good make another one
-- Dylan on 9/18/2015 12:09:41 PM with a score of 21765
Masterful. If only every story online could be written with such forethought and complexity. I also appreciated the nearly flawless spelling and punctuation. Very good.
-- HyrulianHero on 9/15/2015 1:26:38 PM with a score of 22065
you have a written gift use more of it totally drew me in
-- awaystow3 on 9/11/2015 5:41:56 AM with a score of 18675
I survived and saved my family bro
-- Bob Bobson on 9/10/2015 9:54:38 PM with a score of 17565
IT'S SOO GOOD i keep saveing every 10 pages cuz i just wanna keep playing
-- CharlieBoy on 9/3/2015 12:47:54 PM with a score of 11260
Fun
-- cre44 on 9/2/2015 7:44:26 PM with a score of 26975
Better than others:)
-- Vanessa on 8/24/2015 10:49:19 AM with a score of 1510
10 ouda 10
-- Camzore on 8/21/2015 10:42:35 AM with a score of 19625
awesome! and i survived! :D
-- dettosauvage on 8/19/2015 12:55:22 PM with a score of 20545
Awesome details and loads of fun.
-- survivor! on 8/18/2015 11:35:38 PM with a score of 34257
I've played through this game quite some times now, and I just happened to finish it today. Wow what a thrill ride. It was awesome to play such a detailed and branching zombie survival story. I like how the characters came together, the wife and the kids gave me some kinda hope and sense of responsibilites. I felt bad for those I could't save though, but I immensely enjoyed this game. Good luck on your new project and keep up the great quality.
-- John Cena Fan on 8/18/2015 1:09:30 PM with a score of 28075
Replayed this just to see how high of a score I could get--I think I did pretty well...
-- MagmaArmor0 on 8/18/2015 2:14:38 AM with a score of 37797
I really enjoyed it. Kept me on the edge of my seat, and good emotional investment and suspense.
-- greysonwolf on 8/14/2015 10:53:21 AM with a score of 18515
The first story that I have participated in on this website, and the reason I will be remaining, having joined. A well-thought out story and plot line, and a great read for apocalypse survival lovers. Or, anyone.
-- LittleOddStar on 8/12/2015 6:47:01 AM with a score of 3080
Thoroughly enjoyed this game, well done!
-- Erik on 8/11/2015 5:44:32 PM with a score of 17710
Great fun with lots of depth got a terrible ending first time round after repeated deaths got best ending trust no one
-- Dan on 8/9/2015 5:45:41 PM with a score of 33497
Wooooooo, I got the best ending.very good game
-- Makoto on 8/8/2015 6:02:27 PM with a score of 36237
Alrighty, I just spent a majority of my morning playing this game and it really is amazing. The writing moves fluidly along the game's 2000+ pages and I deeply enioyed it. I managed to get the best ending and it really was a heart touching one. All in all, really good, immersive game here.
-- DashingDeer on 8/5/2015 11:18:47 PM with a score of 37687
Great work I really enjoyed it
-- Kwhite on 8/2/2015 11:40:28 PM with a score of 37447
This was great and I killed hours at work lol
-- Sarae5x5 on 7/29/2015 2:28:01 PM with a score of 29545
best ending possible and it was a amasing game best game ever
-- darkmatter on 7/28/2015 12:30:06 AM with a score of 29637
Well written, great plot.
Best of all, Zombies.
Lotsa pages too.
-- tsukato on 7/27/2015 11:28:50 PM with a score of 21075
very well done and i got the best possible ending too :)
-- Kenny on 7/21/2015 8:43:21 PM with a score of 36777
This was one of the best I have ever played. Ever.
-- Christian on 7/19/2015 11:02:15 PM with a score of 34487
I stayed up all night, and through part of the next day reading this. It's very well written and I thoroughly enjoyed it. I recommend this to any zombie film or book fan.
-- Mr. Jackhuahua on 7/19/2015 10:41:07 PM with a score of 29287
Excellent. Only gone through 78 of over 2,000 pages but it still took me 2 hours at least. Noticed some grammar mistakes, some punctuation but 99.9% good. Some of the conversations were a bit cheesy (is that a good or a bad thing, I'm not sure). Really excellent language and really excellent descriptions. Lots of tension. I felt like I was gonna die every second page! Very good. Very, very good.
-- Brian on 7/14/2015 8:14:41 PM with a score of 27507
I don't know when this 'game' was made nor who made created this... but this was by far the best that I've ever played... and it was too shabby, although it may have not been the most perfect ending, it wasn't actually bad. Having been rescued and rescuing a handful of survivor and making a decent living until things work out in the end.
-- trololololo on 7/2/2015 6:28:25 PM with a score of 22545
I usually like theys choose your own adventure but this one was pretty boring so I chose a thing that I thought would kill my character
-- jc penny on 7/1/2015 2:13:34 PM with a score of 1210
One of my new favourites.
-- adesola on 6/24/2015 7:46:23 PM with a score of 37287
Hands down a fantastic game! Took me a couple of quick-save type back presses, but I managed to get the best ending without just spamming reloads! This is an incredible piece of work. Branching paths, almost no IMMEDIATE death choices. That's a big favorite of mine. I always like being able to recover from an unknowingly bad decision, rather than just facing a game over because I didn't fully understand the option. Bravo, all around!
-- Daniel on 6/24/2015 6:01:54 PM with a score of 31847
Best Ending!!!
-- Leon on 6/23/2015 11:34:16 PM with a score of 31447
Awesome
-- Javeon159 on 6/19/2015 5:06:04 PM with a score of 22665
Good story so far. I'm very impressed and I know there is a lot of work behind it. I just finished one storyline and comparing my explored 76 pages to over 2000 written pages this is quite unbelievable.. I'm sure I'll try another way soon. Anyway it was difficult to start, since some of those texts are a bit of a large text, which is not bad at all but sometimes you just feel like you want to progress and find out what is coming after or whatever. Another point might be that there is almost no personalized character, despite of the choices I make. So you are a character having a given name, a given background, etc. It's fine for me one the one hand since when you read a book you have it that way too, but that would make it more - let's call it "dramatically", if something happens to you or the guys you meet or know, because you have some closer relationship to them that way, which was difficult to establish during the story, especially it means: 'you ...'. But on the other hand I can't emphasize it enough it is a master piece you created here (so far -- as I mentioned I haven't seen everything yet) and I don't know if it will ever be possible to find out all the ways and parts given.
Go on with that fabulous and remarkable work.

Best regards :)
-- PFR on 6/16/2015 10:17:00 PM with a score of 14535
Very well written...great job!
-- Neven on 6/16/2015 6:31:24 AM with a score of 36077
This story was amazing! There are so many decisions you had to make I think I got the best ending when i saved my family and the school. How come every time you die you see the dark figure.
-- Michael on 6/15/2015 10:20:31 PM with a score of 20965
Mate, thank you for this. I noticed maybe 2 grammar errors in the 133 pages I played through. But with excellent narrative I managed to save myself and a whole school of people from death. And at 5 am that makes me feel pretty damn good. Keep up the writing man cuz you are good at it.

Also. Just as a personal zombie aficionado...please....make more XD
I am gonna play through again. There were a few places where I was like....hmmm....but I honestly think I only died once due to stupidity. The other few were honest curiosity of what would happen lol...since i kinda knew Id die. And if i didnt i reverted anyhoo.

Welp, thanks again.
-- NerosShadow on 6/15/2015 5:03:32 AM with a score of 23175
cool awesome book/story
-- nate on 6/14/2015 7:08:59 PM with a score of 16675
Very entertaining, had me hooked the whole way through. Admittedly, I did go back every time something remotely happened to me, I'm fairly satisfied with the way it turned out.
-- Lucas on 6/14/2015 7:06:03 AM with a score of 27025
Really Love the depth of this game. It clearly took time and effort to craft it. I look forward to replaying it soon.
-- Maugrim912 on 6/10/2015 11:59:27 PM with a score of 38477
Cool Game.
-- Diamond2479 on 6/10/2015 11:12:00 PM with a score of 36047
This zombie survival story game was really well made out. There are a lot of options that are available, and this was probably one of the best ones I've ever played! I really found the 'go back' button, just to see different outcomes of a certain option. I was sad when the main character's wife died; I tried to prevent it, but guess she was suppose to die :( I really liked this zombie survival story, and hope you do another one!
-- Joseph A. on 6/5/2015 6:36:12 PM with a score of 16665
This was great pls make more try somwere to get founds a game like this would be good. Like the walking Dead but more diferenc in you desicions. Difereent linesd different people make it...
Kickstarter!!!!
-- Mex on 6/4/2015 2:00:51 PM with a score of 7860
Didn't like "my" inner monologue. How "I" was so critical of the doctor's methods. If that was really me, I would have been all for what the doctor was doing. Whatever it takes to find a cure. The protagonist's fears were unfounded. If I'm humanity's only hope for a cure, I know they're not going to kill me, unless I turn, in which case, I would want them to!
-- Imrah on 6/3/2015 2:38:22 AM with a score of 7910
fun stuff made me go back redo the quests
-- NoSoulNoRegrets on 6/1/2015 2:12:49 AM with a score of 31107
awesome game had to redo some decisions preety good
-- dom on 5/31/2015 7:22:40 AM with a score of 35837
I really enjoyed this, it is really impressive and intriguing I couldn't stop reading
-- David on 5/29/2015 3:44:37 AM with a score of 30217
What a relief to have the best possible ending!
-- Sducusin on 5/26/2015 6:11:53 PM with a score of 29847
It makes you feel like you can control your character but you don't....
You need to think a lot more than that , maybe you spend a great deal of time to do this but doesn't feel like it.
how come when fighting 2 zombies when instakilling the first one , the one who was crawling is suddenly clutching to your arm and biting you ? Felt like my character was already a fucking retard coupled with a severe case of trisomy 21.
-- Random on 5/16/2015 11:20:19 PM with a score of 2160
good
-- acedevon on 5/12/2015 1:28:45 PM with a score of 7765
Awesome story, going to go back and spend my school day figuring out all the possible scenarios.
-- Austin "Halfsack" Calvera on 5/12/2015 8:55:55 AM with a score of 19185
Got the best ending on the first try!
-- Likeabos on 5/11/2015 1:51:35 PM with a score of 5710
Fun and cool, can't stop playing!
-- Justice on 5/7/2015 9:24:43 PM with a score of 4610
Thats just amazing, love it so much! Good job! Just wow, I bet it took so much time just writing such detailed descriptions. Fantastic.
-- MM on 5/5/2015 9:24:10 PM with a score of 7920
Great Story, Had fun
-- Mardio on 5/1/2015 10:03:07 PM with a score of 33597
Awsome
-- Dwhit30 on 5/1/2015 1:51:50 PM with a score of 1260
An incredible story of survival, as far as the written zombie category goes; this story can only be rivaled by perhaps world war Z but it is still superior in many ways. Thank you for such a wonderfully written story. Please write more.
-- wearhound on 4/30/2015 1:17:48 AM with a score of 39127
OMG BEST GAME EVER
-- catlover11 on 4/27/2015 2:18:48 PM with a score of 17675
I like this story. Already get 1 of the good endin and ready to playing again.
-- mwahaha on 4/27/2015 1:13:05 PM with a score of 27025
Very good, the grammar and spelling are good, and it's fun. I got the 'Dead Man Walking' ending! I never encountered any of the other zombies, other than regulars.
-- WizzyCat on 4/27/2015 7:42:25 AM with a score of 8565
Loved it :))
-- annaheree on 4/26/2015 7:31:12 PM with a score of 23935
One of the best stories I've played through on the site so far.
-- FoxDye08 on 4/26/2015 6:36:55 PM with a score of 35627
Such a great story! I saved my family, but got bit. I loved playing through this and recommend it for anyone
-- Stella on 4/26/2015 4:38:50 PM with a score of 20685
So I really liked the game, it's by far the best written and most detailed and just overall best zombie game I've played through on this site so far, nice job. However, there is one thing I'm confused about. I didn't get bitten by a zombie. The worst thing that happened to me was getting clawed by a hellhound. However regardless, the game still acted as if I had been bitten, and later I'm a carrier. I'm obviously going to replay it now to see if the problem persists, because I could be an idiot who just missed something and is therefore complaining about it. Hopefully I get the best ending this time though. Generally though, this game is pretty awesome. It'd be cool to get companion stories set in the same disaster, but in different parts of the city/country. Your writing is good and the story is engaging so I'd definitely play any other games like this. Awesome work :)
-- pudgymuffins on 4/21/2015 11:38:09 PM with a score of 21775
Awesome game! I only played a little of what is apparently a lot! Thanks for this awesome game.
-- kylebucnner on 4/18/2015 12:12:23 PM with a score of 14830
Good, just wish the crazy Swedish guy could fight you
-- meh on 4/12/2015 9:21:10 PM with a score of 25215
this was an amazing story and im sure you have made more but i am hoping you can make many, many more. thank you for creating this. it has changed m outlook on a few things and also on what to do in a zombie apocalypse.
-- Andrew on 4/10/2015 4:17:02 PM with a score of 18875
30897 is my final score. I've played through twice now, once a the year before last and the second time just now. I'm very curious to find out what the mysterious figure in black is all about but I just can't leave the guys wife to be raped by the convict. I gues that's a good sign for the writer. I see her as real enough to care about her well being and not as a stat or story point. Well done. Keep up the good work. I'd like to see him write an end of the world scenario without zombies, monsters or anything else supernatural at some point. That or a sprawling sci fi story about a smuggler, pirate or salvager. Someone for whom it makes sense to be alone. Anyway, great job and thanks for the good game.
-- eanna on 4/9/2015 7:51:24 PM with a score of 30907
I guess I didn't do too badly....

I really enjoyed this story! It was absolutely incredible.
-- Creature on 4/9/2015 4:31:51 AM with a score of 16315
Woohoo!! My third play through and I got the best possible ending! :D

(Spoilers)

Granted I only killed 3 zombies and only came across a single Hell-Hound and ran away, and killed a single human and a single drooler, but playing it safe worked out. I rescued everyone (I think) and had an awesome time. Still the greatest storygame I've played here. A must for any zombie apocalypse fans.
-- Starky on 4/7/2015 3:49:42 AM with a score of 32167
Enlightenment awaits. Now I just have to get further than 9 pages in... So detailed and gruesome! Gory and intriguing... I'll be adding this to my nightmares.
-- Starky on 4/6/2015 7:05:01 AM with a score of 1410
after 6 or 7 play I finally got best possible ending. Yaay! I kinda feels sorry though for what happen with Jacob. Would be nice if in the end we now about how other people survive from this. So far, i only found 3 way to survive, which is stay in precinct, stay in school, and go to the wilds. I wonder if there is another survive ending. ^^ For the maker of this story, good job. ^^
-- geareint on 4/5/2015 1:50:44 AM with a score of 30267
quite the experience!
-- lvl80retpaladin on 4/4/2015 2:04:48 PM with a score of 36027
I managed to get the best ending where I saved my entire family + a boy. I have already left a comment before, but I am going to leave another just to say how thoroughly I enjoyed this game!
-- Ralph Chen on 4/3/2015 4:49:15 AM with a score of 33977
This was an amazing experience. I found some spelling mistake here and there but it was relatively error free. I managed to survive without dying even once, but was devastated when I realized that I could have saved both my daughters. My end score was 7055.
-- Ralph Chen on 4/3/2015 1:01:04 AM with a score of 7065
I love this story so much you did a good job does anyone know how to make a inventory in the story you write
-- greedyassassin on 4/2/2015 5:20:17 PM with a score of 3010
The longest, mot interesting story I have ever read. But sort of sickening in a way....
-- CrystalOfBloodclan on 4/2/2015 3:25:12 PM with a score of 10780
Hey, I've come to this website through the Choice Of Games forums.
I've searched for other 'Choose your destiny' type of games, and I've found this masterpiece.
I always go back to this game(even after months/years!) whenever I feel bored, because there are just so many possibilities in this game, it really makes you wonder about what you should pick, and how does that action affects you and others.
There are so many pages, and I always reach like 200-300 page. There's just so many potential in this game, and it's impossible to explore it 100%.
It's beautifully written, and makes you replay it for like 100x times.

So, I'm really glad there are games like this out there on the Internetz as well. Thank you for the amazing experience!
-- Fam on 4/2/2015 10:11:19 AM with a score of 37987
The BEST zombie storygame I have ever played on this site!
-- Thecenturyman on 3/29/2015 9:14:50 PM with a score of 33067
I don't get it how do you play.
-- brittany2143 on 3/26/2015 3:03:17 PM with a score of 1060
i like it
-- shypunk on 3/24/2015 10:11:10 PM with a score of 28227
One of the best text-games i've ever played
-- Lawrence on 3/23/2015 3:49:25 PM with a score of 21775
Honestly my favorite zombie game/quiz ever. I always come back to play! Hella job!
-- olliver on 3/21/2015 3:18:12 AM with a score of 29767
So great! Saved 60, including the fam! I love this game and applaud you, author!
-- Brad on 3/20/2015 7:50:30 PM with a score of 32647
Just played again saved the entire school. woot woot
-- Grata on 3/20/2015 8:15:19 AM with a score of 32157
killed self and child by hiding behind rail road ties. gg no re
-- Daniel Zed on 3/20/2015 6:16:07 AM with a score of 12860
One of the best zombie choose your story's that I've ever played. Well down. Now I just need to survive...
-- Brad Gilbert on 3/19/2015 9:11:00 PM with a score of 18510
This was great. Loved the pace, the virus (slow, then fast z's, the mutations, the shelf life) I had a blast going through this. Thanks!
-- Pete Rock on 3/18/2015 8:39:43 PM with a score of 24685
Omg this thing is amazing. But I sucked. I at least survived, and saved myself and my family, but everyone else died and I was bitten.
-- Maggie on 3/10/2015 10:49:47 AM with a score of 19035
9/10
-- harun on 3/10/2015 5:50:48 AM with a score of 33437
Awesome!
-- Steelhide on 3/9/2015 4:32:56 PM with a score of 37617
Jacob died but i finished the game at 94 pages and maneged to save my entire family along with about 40 people.
-- Sparten116 on 3/9/2015 7:26:15 AM with a score of 27425
Cool,great game.
-- on 3/6/2015 5:16:59 PM with a score of 27685
great game.Please make many games like these...enjoyed every moment
-- blisstar on 3/6/2015 8:13:35 AM with a score of 20375
It was a little too detailed, but overall well written.
-- divinasofia on 3/2/2015 8:45:02 PM with a score of 8465
This is amazing !!!
-- wukuatzin on 3/2/2015 10:07:35 AM with a score of 21315
Its quite a story! I must say it is engaging, but the seen where he calls his wife i kinda hoped to get an option like from the movie taken! :)
Pls make more good stories like this! I love playing them :)
-- stazz on 3/1/2015 1:47:49 PM with a score of 35697
I killed 102 zombies 1 hell hound and saved 61 people and I'm bit free awesome game please make another one!!
-- Livinlikrspartyyyyy on 3/1/2015 7:23:26 AM with a score of 34607
Here’s a rundown of how you did –


You Killed 10 Zombies

You Killed 0 Drooler Zombies

You Killed 0 Bloater Zombies

You Killed 0 Ghouls

You Killed 1 Banshees

You Killed 0 Hell Hounds

You Killed 0 Cannibal Gaunt Zombies


You Killed 2 People

You Saved 60 People (including yourself, unless you died)


You were eaten by 0 Zombies


Your Overall Score: 34797


(You played through 111 of 2,131 Pages and have proven to be a Rebuilder)
-- gapaot on 2/28/2015 7:59:17 PM with a score of 34807
Cool game survived with the teens my wife my kids and he little boy I now call my son! Thanks for making this story about mehhhh!!!
-- Greg and family on 2/28/2015 3:58:56 PM with a score of 32807
Just finished, what a story incredibly thought provoking at times where you're caught between some hard moral decisions but all in all a great story.Thank you :)
-- Tayyab on 2/27/2015 7:50:33 PM with a score of 32967
Awesome game can't wait to replay
-- tayyab on 2/27/2015 5:37:05 PM with a score of 10780
Very good story! I saved 59 people! ?? including my wife, only thing thats making me more interested are the different types of zombies i didnt encounter.
-- DakotaLee on 2/27/2015 1:13:54 AM with a score of 25297
A great book but I have not managed to find any ghoul zombies of that type.
-- Fableheath on 2/26/2015 10:25:19 AM with a score of 25535
This game is amazing with its in depth struggle of the Protagonist. This was really enjoyable, and I hope to see more games like this in the near future
-- OwnFall on 2/20/2015 12:26:15 PM with a score of 18165
I got the best possible ending. Saved 60 people, including my entire family and Jacob. Was a great story, enjoyed it a lot :)
-- Kittycat102 on 2/19/2015 7:56:23 PM with a score of 48467
Very good.
-- Fableheath on 2/19/2015 4:34:52 PM with a score of 24535
It was very fun. I got the best possiible ending. Very long nd worth the playthrough.. Make more like this please!
-- WaRDude999 on 2/16/2015 4:52:18 PM with a score of 33527
i killed my wife D:
-- john smith on 2/12/2015 2:05:16 PM with a score of 15375
well done
-- JohnSmith1219 on 2/10/2015 6:41:26 PM with a score of 20245
I think this game had many notable components:
A) It was very descriptive and paints a good picture in the readers' heads.
B) Many characters to choose to save or kill which definitely thickens the plot.
C) Plenty of choices and allows you to really make your own story.
D) The choices are logical and make sense with the plot of the story.

This game is definitely one of the better ones out there. There's more to be said but I'd suggest you play it yourself. I recommend while playing this game, don't be afraid to explore all your options. Try not to skip anything or you'll miss some really scary scenes. Best of luck!
-- Leatrice on 2/2/2015 11:19:31 PM with a score of 27185
loved the game, if you want to play a game where not all the choices are clear right or wrong choices, then this is the game for you.
-- gerrrit on 2/2/2015 3:01:05 PM with a score of 17795
This was very interesting and I was left at a cliff hanger when I saw the virus was caused by a terrorist cell. I would like to maybe see a sequel! (If not already one)
-- zombies1238 on 1/30/2015 3:21:16 PM with a score of 23485
awesome game! had a blast!
-- wristclerk on 1/29/2015 8:46:32 PM with a score of 37407
Good thing to pass time on :)
-- DarkForse on 1/29/2015 6:05:33 PM with a score of 27185
lmao I tried to kill myself and it took longer than I thought it would
-- DAzz on 1/26/2015 10:48:54 AM with a score of 2210
was great had to go back sooo often I kept dying XD but finest zombie text game yet
-- Mr. 1000 Deaths on 1/26/2015 9:23:24 AM with a score of 19585
p chill man
-- samo on 1/22/2015 5:15:16 PM with a score of 7610
Dope Game, No Doubt
-- Papa on 1/21/2015 2:05:47 AM with a score of 19785
That was the best story I've ever read. I had to kill my wife, but I saved my daughters and the remaining survivors in the school and went to the campsite
-- Michael on 1/19/2015 10:49:04 PM with a score of 17335
Amazing zombie survival story,

[[Spoilers]] though I noticed a few subplots which were left unanswered by the end of my first play-through: First, the ghost showing up at the end of each death. In retrospect it seems like a general CYOA mechanic with no bearing on the plot, but it deserves a mention. Second, the old lady who railed on about Greg owing medicine to treat the passive zombie. That said - before the explanatory epilogue - I'd suspected Greg's involvement in the virus considering the convenient amnesia and immunity, but I might be Tinfoil-Hatting this too hard. [[Spoilers]]

Word brick aside, here's a confident recommendation! 8/8
-- Devol on 1/18/2015 3:11:19 AM with a score of 26615
It was an amazing story and i'm writing this after my first play through. It was very well written and i will go through it again.
-- Frank on 1/15/2015 1:32:13 PM with a score of 19835
it was great ,make a sequal someday!
-- survivor132 on 1/11/2015 7:38:04 AM with a score of 21935
it is awesome
-- survivor132 on 1/11/2015 7:07:49 AM with a score of 1810
Epic.
'Nuff said.
-- Master_Debater on 1/9/2015 3:02:49 PM with a score of 40777
Cool game. Good pace but lots of reading. You should make a game with individual choices and items. A basis for that is the iPod game survival look into it
-- patrick on 1/3/2015 5:07:54 PM with a score of 21115
I have been playing for a few days, this is the most fun i have ever had with a story.
-- Rick on 1/3/2015 6:32:10 AM with a score of 33297
i love this game
-- spine on 1/1/2015 11:43:43 PM with a score of 24025
too long to read
-- pisces15 on 12/31/2014 1:51:02 PM with a score of 1310
Great story, extremely well thought out and the choices are logical and realistic.
-- benno on 12/29/2014 7:59:47 PM with a score of 26495
This is probably the best interactive zombie survival adventure I have played so far on this site! Keep up all the amazing work you have done!
-- Anonymous on 12/25/2014 5:08:30 PM with a score of 37587
Amazing!
I got the ending where I survived with my daughters, and didn't get bit!
I recommend this game for everyone...unless you don't like reading...
-- GrottyStatute74 on 12/20/2014 3:37:01 PM with a score of 16375
Amazing game, must of taking ages, very impressive.
-- Hungrykid11 on 12/16/2014 2:45:47 PM with a score of 19935
Best possible Ending !!
Please be in awe :D
-- choumasamori on 12/12/2014 3:17:33 AM with a score of 35797
This got ke through finals , amd then some , took me three days to beat , it was amazing
-- jacob greene on 12/11/2014 1:53:34 AM with a score of 16875
B3st G@m3 EVAR!!!!!
-- You on 12/7/2014 5:12:09 PM with a score of 37377
Awesome game, well written, Better than 'Better than Reeses Cups'
-- Me on 12/7/2014 4:01:27 PM with a score of 23885
This was a lot of fun! I meant to only start the story but got caught up and had to finish! After a couple of wrong turns I got the best possible ending with a score of 32867, killing 6 zombies, 1 hell hound and saving 60 people. I'm going to have to play a lot more though because I've seen less than 10% of the pages! Lots of fun, thanks for the awesome story :)
-- DarkWandering on 12/7/2014 8:16:18 AM with a score of 34887
20805, killed 28 regular zombies, and four special zombies. 3 people saved (my kids and myself), 3 people killed (don't remember who, but probably Lieutenant Falco, the guy who hated the lieutenant, and either the bathroom woman or my infected wife. I'm a Survivalist, apparently.
-- Kim on 12/6/2014 2:26:40 AM with a score of 20835
This was pretty fun over all. I might come back and see what other kinds of endings I could get if I chose other major decisions.
-- FireGolem on 12/4/2014 10:36:16 PM with a score of 24317
I felt like I've been in a Walking Dead movie! This story is so good and lengthy!
-- chenliyong on 12/3/2014 11:07:15 PM with a score of 22065
YES! I am THE Zombie Happy Meal!
-- JDeath7 on 12/2/2014 8:40:55 PM with a score of 860
Very good
-- sonny on 12/2/2014 2:27:28 PM with a score of 1760
The Game was Awesome !
-- Sayedmad1 on 11/27/2014 9:39:18 AM with a score of 33927
1st try and 1st death...I guess I wouldn't last that long if this was real :(
-- Mar1217 on 11/26/2014 2:20:35 PM with a score of 3260
this was so good one of the best stories on the site
-- the house master on 11/25/2014 9:12:38 PM with a score of 23967
A really great story with a lot of different twist, turns and choices. Great job, keep up the good work.
-- Stein on 11/25/2014 10:05:47 AM with a score of 25865
This is... Unexplainable
-- spine on 11/25/2014 12:00:07 AM with a score of 23475
Here’s a rundown of how you did –
You Killed 55 Zombies
You Killed 1 Drooler Zombies
You Killed 0 Bloater Zombies
You Killed 0 Ghouls
You Killed 0 Banshees
You Killed 1 Hell Houndss
You Killed 1 Cannibal Gaunt Zombies
You Killed 0 People
You Saved 59 People (including yourself, unless you died)
You were eaten by 0 Zombies
Your Overall Score: 23405
(You played through 134 of 2,131 Pages and have proven to be a Survivalist)

Pretty sure it should have been more than 55, I was keeping a tough tally on my writing pad, and I had around 120 in total. I didn't go back through any pages (couldn't find the button) and I nearly killed my wife when she tried to kiss me.

The drooler in the gas station made me think I'd died, and when I got swept into the river I thought it was all over within a matter of pages. But as you can tell by the fact I killed the HellHound, I made it to the vets and self-medicated. I would love it if you had left an option at the end for you to go through long, vigorous trials with high levels of danger, disabling the go back button for those than can find it, in order for you to eventually get to someone who can cure the virus that your saliva carries. But that's just me. I got bitten in the ankle in the train station at the start hahaha
-- Blake on 11/23/2014 10:00:36 PM with a score of 23425
I'll be honest. at first i avoided reading this story despite it being featured. this is mainly because most zombie Apocalypse stories have very little plot line. that said i'm impressed by this story. it is very descriptive and your grammatical errors are few and far in between.
SPOILER ALERT!
at first i was slightly perturbed about playing an already existing character. most of the time i like to play myself but as i went on i got a distinct video game feel from it. once i began thinking of it as such i really started to enjoy it.
when i reached the police station i was morally offended by the treatment of the people. i'm unsure how martial law works so i don't know if the scenario portrayed is actually possible but it is believable. i very upset to find they had taken my stuff but figured i'd get it back.
Jacob is awesome and a very believable kid. he is brave and relentless. i was proud to be his father figure. my wife Laura is awesome. i was totally expecting to have to save her but i didn't. MY WIFE BEAT THE SOB!
i saved the kids at the school and survived the storm. i only died four times. and went back two or three other times when i wasn't satisfied with my choice. i was bitten so unfortunately Greg can never kiss his wife again.
i liked the cameos but i gave up looking after awhile.
interesting thing about the rigor mortis.
-- mokaevans on 11/23/2014 1:02:57 AM with a score of 30995
Very detailed and very fun to play. Played it 3 times already.
-- xkiller99 on 11/22/2014 7:31:27 PM with a score of 31057
This game was great I highly recommend that you play it
-- Jesse on 11/22/2014 2:41:21 PM with a score of 25125
Wicked game! Wish there was a phone App so i can play on the go
-- ahmad sayed on 11/21/2014 7:16:55 AM with a score of 2610
Amazing game. Simply amazing.
I got all the way to the end.
Saved 59 people, killed 90 zombies, killed one acidic zombie, killed one hellhound, and killed five people.
(Sadly including 'my' wife, and the kid)
But still-
beat the zombie apocalypse-
not bad.
-- Chaotix on 11/20/2014 11:16:34 AM with a score of 21115
I thought making games is easy... but you tried hard and you got 85 thousand players in two years... and this is not enough !


if i'm gonna make something and work on it for 100 hrs it should at least make one hundred thousand players at least...
-- loqman on 11/19/2014 7:21:33 AM with a score of 31797
This was a grand adventure, I plan on revisiting this every once in a while to see how I could do things differently. Please, make more. Your work is a blessing to read. Though I think you should also do a female survival story, just to make things a little more diverse.
-- Jesse on 11/18/2014 8:00:22 AM with a score of 19925
Really great story ******SPOILER*******


I died on the vet part with the 'Hell Hound' lOl made me laugh so hard, this game will give you hours of fun and also


Just a tip- ALWAYS take the safe option eg: look through the windows first / check out the area / wait for day:) Hope you have great fun all and good luck-You will need it
-- Bompey on 11/14/2014 5:37:56 PM with a score of 21025
Im in love with this story with every decision I made. Ill even start a new game and see where itll lead me this time.
-- Cpt BlueMustard on 11/12/2014 8:53:06 PM with a score of 36487
Thanks for such a well thought out and challenging game, really enjoyed the content and fortunately got the best ending! Now off to try again and will definitely pass onto friends! Keep up the fun enjoyable series and I will definitely try any more you have!

All the best,

Daniel
-- Daniel on 11/11/2014 10:51:12 AM with a score of 32997
This was seriously amazing. I can't wait to play again and make different choice. Absolutely great work.
-- Alex on 11/11/2014 5:32:19 AM with a score of 23325
Fantastic had me hooked right the way through. It had me caring for characters and wanting to save as many people as I could as I felt an almost genuine connection to them.
-- xMio on 11/10/2014 2:23:10 PM with a score of 34347
This was a great story! I really enjoyed the how it played out and how much detail and time was put into it. I will be playing this again sometime!
-- Isaac on 11/8/2014 10:02:19 AM with a score of 22415
I've played lots of text games, and i have to say this one is amazing. Every bit of the story is intriguing. I haven't played all 2000 of those pages, but i was satisfied with the ending i worked my way to. If you haven't tried this yet, do it...you wont regret it!
-- somecallmerory on 11/7/2014 7:05:40 AM with a score of 34677
The story is quite well written, and most of the choices and their consequences make sense to me. One minor area which may be improved is the usage of items, especially the different uses of different guns. I understand that in realistic post-apocalyptic situations most intelligent decisions will minimize the chance for conflicts, and the timeframe of the story does not include the latter stages, when civilization is partly rebuilt and there might be intra-faction conflict and hence the need for self-defense. I gave a 8 for this not only for the story(which deserves a 8 on its own) but also for the effort. Please keep up the good work.
-- cavalier on 11/6/2014 3:38:17 AM with a score of 33647
I liked it
-- jacob on 11/3/2014 2:11:27 PM with a score of 8115
Thanks great game
-- Jason on 11/1/2014 5:27:10 PM with a score of 31427
awesome detail and plot.
-- Guest on 11/1/2014 4:33:22 AM with a score of 31727
seriously nice^^
-- killertype10 on 10/27/2014 8:19:02 AM with a score of 38617
Great game!
-- chowcrunch on 10/26/2014 10:34:31 PM with a score of 39707
Good game, that I only have one complaint about; why wasn't it longer;)
-- rebuilder on 10/19/2014 10:26:37 AM with a score of 32477
Amazing story keep up the good work.
-- shothottie on 10/14/2014 10:44:33 PM with a score of 19475
Never normally read but couldn't stop reading this definitely be reading again with different choices
-- joeweir187 on 10/14/2014 4:20:31 PM with a score of 21345
This game is pretty interesting, it has different types of mutations, even hell hounds! This game is quite different from others, you start in a subway while most stories may start in the characters' home or a hospital.
-- :P on 10/14/2014 11:10:03 AM with a score of 2210
Great read and fun the whole way through. Not too many typos. I felt Greg only broke character once abandoning his usual caution and receiving a bite. Well worth the time.
-- Doddsje on 10/12/2014 6:24:21 PM with a score of 32107
Brilliant! Even more fun than playing games like resident evil or the last of us. I would be delighted if you have any more to send me the links to play. My appetite has been wet like a zombies first taste of brains.
-- John on 10/12/2014 7:50:16 AM with a score of 24725
This was sooo much fun. Took me a few days. Turns out i a survivalist and my score was 19,155. Every page was worth it and so was each decision. some of these pages are truly dark and depressing butthats what adds so much to the greatness of the story. Great work 10/10 :)
-- Eric on 10/8/2014 10:43:17 AM with a score of 19175
I absolutely loved it, and I'm going to play again right now. It is very well thought out and detailed and the length is great. Most of the stories I have read here end just when they are starting to get good, while this one keeps rolling along with more action around every corner. Very entertaining!
-- Sammy5mc on 10/6/2014 8:29:13 PM with a score of 38967
Absolutely fantastic. I didn't get past the subway section of the interactive fiction, but damn did I enjoy it.
Time to replay and see the different outcomes!

It's beautifully written and wasn't boring, not by a long shot.
-- y0ung3r on 10/4/2014 6:49:38 PM with a score of 1910
This is so much fun i can't sleep so i stay up till three in the morning playing this and have gotten so many shocks from it. I love it and want to play until i get every ending. I was very surprised at the fact that i couldn't find a way to the police without dying until i got in and then got shot in the face.
-- logan bera on 10/3/2014 2:12:39 PM with a score of 23175
Well put together, and very much thought out. Lots of twists and turns, and quite a few unexpected traps. I even learned a few good things here--also, please remind me never to buy a barrel lock for my mountain bike.XD
-- AJPisterzi on 10/3/2014 11:48:02 AM with a score of 32857
Your game is seriously great!
Out of the entire game I only saw a couple spelling errors.
And the story telling and detail is breath taking!
-- jessie on 9/29/2014 6:59:47 PM with a score of 20275
this really was a great game i got the best possible ending (after a couple attempts) but i still only played through a fraction of the story. it really is worth playing.
-- waldo on 9/27/2014 12:56:21 AM with a score of 26427
Well written, best text-based adventure game I've played! could actually make a good bit of money off of it if you were able to get it sold in a game form, maybe some pictures to go with it.
-- sordemarusai on 9/23/2014 9:01:18 PM with a score of 33347
Decent :/
-- deathkid8741 on 9/21/2014 5:36:12 PM with a score of 29895
Amazing. Absolutely amazing, start to finish.

I got the second-best ending, forgot my score, and killed 18 zombies and 1 monster dog thing. Saved Jacob, my wife, and the kids, and only Dave died in the school-bus deal.
Made camp, lasted to the end. Army saved us! Yay! Only downside: I'm still a carrier. Aww.

Good job, dude, you rock. 10/10.
-- TBForge on 9/20/2014 12:43:26 AM with a score of 25775
wow. awsome game
-- bandit8768 on 9/19/2014 12:14:53 AM with a score of 17585
Best story ever has a lot of detail,and is really great. I just finished it and got 32,684 as my score. I also received the best ending, if you cared. Its simple enough just follow your heart and read the writing carefully. :D
-- Kirby on 9/18/2014 12:47:13 AM with a score of 32427
this thing awesome
-- chloe on 9/16/2014 8:09:29 PM with a score of 2260
I just wanna know, was there any way to save jacob? I loved that character :P
-- RedHawk007 on 9/11/2014 10:59:33 AM with a score of 26435
Wow. I had thouroughly enjoyed every minute of this game. I am playing it again just to see different endings and try new things. Very well done, Sir!
-- CobaltBlaze on 9/9/2014 10:47:13 AM with a score of 33757
boring needs more options with shorter readings
-- derp on 9/7/2014 3:08:29 PM with a score of 1110
Amassing story. I love your take on infection, the whole part with him being a carrier and inadvertently killing the others almost brought me to tears.
-- Jacob s. Mills on 9/7/2014 2:54:19 AM with a score of 19635
i was surprised at the level of depth that this game has. plus i go the best ending!
-- jason x on 9/4/2014 3:36:58 PM with a score of 30777
The ending could use more work other than that it was great
-- j on 8/31/2014 9:44:17 PM with a score of 22475
I absolutely loved it, you actually choose sensible reasoning that anyone would do in case of an apocalypse. I'm sad I died, but I love the story of this adventure.
-- Zach on 8/29/2014 10:12:53 PM with a score of 19360
Great game! I cheated a lot by backing out of choices after I screwed up. There is definitely a lot of replay value in this game. There are literally large sections of the game I didn't even see on my two times through. First time through I got a good ending just by not being stupid, and the second time through I knew to watch out for certain things that saved me from poisoning my wife or the little boy with the contagion--managed to save my entire family, the boy, my two girls, and everyone at the school! Not sure about playing through again though because I know I got the best ending and I am sure the other endings would be rather depressing. Great game! Almost as good as Zombie Exodus!
-- Lawrence on 8/29/2014 3:03:06 PM with a score of 35517
I had a lot of fun playing this. At times had me choose knowing any decision could be the death of me or others around me. I do admit to going back and trying other options if I or others died several times but still few and far apart. In the end I managed to come out of it with the best possible ending (according to the game) and with a score of 37007, saving my hole family and 55 other people (60 including me), and only found 9 of the cameos. I'd say a good run ether way.
-- Zombielover247 on 8/24/2014 8:19:33 PM with a score of 36987
its pretty fun but you should have less reading because then i just get bored and pick randomly
-- zapper on 8/24/2014 8:30:57 AM with a score of 1710
well i diddent get vary far but from what i saw it was better than most. you have to resort to these ones without grafix because nobody puts the effort into anything story wise unless they soley devote to it. and these are easyer games to make so you can just put your ideas down. the one negitive thing i have to say is that you were a little too wordy for my taste
-- apsoy on 8/23/2014 11:30:29 PM with a score of 4410
Awesome game, a must play for any zombie fan
-- subwooper on 8/23/2014 2:02:26 PM with a score of 24985
amazeing i only git through 16 pages but i loved it you need to become an author right away i cant even explain it, it was phenomenal
-- mia on 8/23/2014 12:23:12 PM with a score of 1910
i really loved the game.. I ve never played anyother text based rpg games before this is my first.

Great work !!!
-- phoenix on 8/22/2014 9:20:04 AM with a score of 32807
this is the BEST text based zombie game i have ever played!!!!
not only was it fun it was realistic (given i only got through 43 pages). i would recommend this everybody on earth. I will keep playing this until i win. and then when i win i will watch my friends play this and laugh as they die time after time. THANKS FOR MAKING THIS GAME!!!!!!!!!!!!
-- isaac on 8/18/2014 9:33:02 PM with a score of 7310
Extremely well written & imersive with the detailed descriptions of the surroundings. I'd recommend anyone who likes zombie survival genre to play/read this.
-- jag on 8/16/2014 7:00:36 PM with a score of 25895
Absolutely love this story! It kept my attention the whole time and I replayed it many times to get different endings and try to save as many people as possible. This is my favorite zombie survival story because it includes children and the possibility to try and save them, which most stories/games don't incorporate.
-- Sean on 8/15/2014 1:09:00 AM with a score of 32687
The most amazing storygame ever !!!
-- FistOfJustice on 8/14/2014 6:58:50 AM with a score of 38707
Holy crap is this game good
-- Ruark on 8/12/2014 4:08:57 AM with a score of 36377
awesome! loved it. great story line and very good options throughout the story line!
-- KarateTime on 8/11/2014 4:35:39 PM with a score of 23725
Very good game to play through and so many options about a 2 hour story great over all
-- Billy on 8/10/2014 6:21:56 PM with a score of 27827
not my thing
-- kelsey on 8/10/2014 3:17:23 PM with a score of 2610
This is an absolutely amazing adventure from start to finish, completely enthralling me. Hell, I was sad when it ended (though I was happy for Greg and his family). My only complaint was that there was a spelling error here and there, but not so many that it effected the experience in any way. I can absolutely see this being turned into a Tell-Tale style video game (like The Walking Dead: The Game), or even an interactive YouTube series. Damn good work.
-- KRD2 on 8/9/2014 12:18:17 AM with a score of 27835
Loved it. I couldn't put it down. Took me forever to get all the way through it. ( which I loved) plus I got the best ending I was so happy. Very good story. Now I have to get everyone I know to play it. To see how well they do.
-- Leslie on 8/7/2014 4:09:55 AM with a score of 38527
I was floored by the sheer amount of options this game presented me at every turn. I never got the feeling of being railroaded towards any specific outcome - almost everything I could think of doing in a given situation was open as an option, and even a few that I wouldn't have thought of were presented as well. The fact that the protagonist Greg is both intelligent and resourceful makes this game a joy to play through, with the added bonus of being able to avert the common zombie movie mistakes through caution and clever planning. If that wasn't enough to enjoy, the cameos were a load of fun to find and the subtle humor sprinkled throughout prevented the story from ever becoming too bleak. All in all, it had incredible atmosphere and cohesiveness. I don't think I found a single grammatical or spelling error throughout the entire game. Incredible, incredible work - most definitely one of the best games on this site.
-- the_quiller on 8/4/2014 5:10:33 PM with a score of 25377
Hella fun, got addicted immediately
-- akraider47 on 8/4/2014 2:30:15 AM with a score of 40227
This game was good, but if you are looking for a game full of suspense, than this probably is not for you.
-- Gameguy on 8/1/2014 1:21:50 PM with a score of 21125
One of the best ones out there. Good on you
-- Aptiva on 7/30/2014 12:25:16 AM with a score of 22595
Even though I made horrible choices in the game I'll still try again, It's really fun.
-- Dyleano on 7/27/2014 8:44:33 PM with a score of 2860
Your Overall Score: 38507
-- h0rg0ny on 7/27/2014 2:28:37 PM with a score of 38567
Like it i play it every day
-- Alex71 on 7/26/2014 10:21:33 PM with a score of 17575
I enjoyed this story all the way. Though there were moments in the story when I had trouble choosing what the right thing to do was. I liked the story all and all. But I did find myself correcting a few mistakes, other than that the story was AMAZING
-- link8227 on 7/26/2014 1:46:39 PM with a score of 19345
Awesome! best story I've read thus far.
-- Paris on 7/25/2014 5:15:13 PM with a score of 29587
It is really awesome. One of the best text based story games out there, the emotional setting and combat not being a necessity makes it stand out from the many zombie apocalypse stories and games. Lots of intertwined storylines and a sheer scope of replayabilty is a great advantage. There are many choices in the game and it is worth multiple replays to get them all. Many thanks to the author for this amazing work!
-- MartinCD on 7/25/2014 4:48:59 PM with a score of 24875
Great game the best one on here without a doubt.
-- Shadowhawk on 7/22/2014 10:05:59 PM with a score of 1460
Excellent game, very extensive choices, and a truly awesome storyline :)
-- crsc3110 on 7/21/2014 4:11:55 PM with a score of 25735
You got this feel that whoever plays this and actually survive a zombie outbreak will have a higher chance of retaining (or even gaining) his or her humanity. Good job!
-- granzteel on 7/21/2014 1:04:47 PM with a score of 38527
"Well, at least you found your wife" Me telling Griggs of his good work
-- granzteel on 7/21/2014 12:07:37 AM with a score of 3490
this game was very interesting and i loved it. one thing that was great about the game is that the choices were not far fetched and were perfect for describing the state of fear. I might even play again to find out the other endings.
-- ty221997 on 7/20/2014 4:39:32 AM with a score of 32667
A brilliant story. Clearly the author put a lot of time and work into building it. I really enjoyed the adventure!
-- Jeremy on 7/18/2014 1:25:50 PM with a score of 36277
Really entertaining. Def worth the time to checkout/play. I applaud you on this on, Berka. Great job!
-- Fazz on 7/14/2014 12:40:46 AM with a score of 1760
Its a great story just great you should make a 2nd one.
sincerly, 24freddy
-- 24freddy on 7/12/2014 10:19:44 PM with a score of 21785
I got 33227! It was an altogether great game that in my opinion is a mix of The Walking Dead and World War Z(the book, not the movie.) I give it an 8 out of 8 due to two things-my love of post-apocalyptic things and the great storywriting! I couldn't have asked for a better game.
-- Drew on 7/11/2014 3:34:52 PM with a score of 33267
Pretty good
-- Fenner on 7/11/2014 5:59:08 AM with a score of 37847
I had a lot of fun playing this. It certainly killed time in a good, entertaining way :)
-- Noah on 7/11/2014 12:14:25 AM with a score of 3760
Just amazing
-- Peter on 7/9/2014 4:40:24 PM with a score of 37587
I really enjoyed it!
-- Chelsea on 7/6/2014 5:17:17 PM with a score of 9360
Very nice progression and pacing. Thoroughly enjoyed every page!
-- Sverre Clarke on 7/6/2014 3:18:11 PM with a score of 36447
It was pretty good, i just died really early lol
-- Alex on 7/2/2014 10:46:19 PM with a score of 2610
Wow that was a relly good en relistic game i wish tho that i could survive longer tried playing 3 times and die around the 100 page but still great game
-- Jason on 7/2/2014 2:58:30 PM with a score of 19660
I win suck it! 8/8 I win I win!!!! woohoooooo it took me a whole freaking week wooooooooo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
-- hunterthemadman on 7/1/2014 12:54:17 AM with a score of 18115
I survived but let my family die, I'd like to feel worse about it, but, it was the prudent thing to do.
-- Alashion on 6/30/2014 9:51:41 PM with a score of 8965
I would have liked to have been able to customize my character a little but besides that the game was great - it didn't feel rushed at all and the realism in certain parts was really immersive
-- Atlas47 on 6/29/2014 6:45:43 AM with a score of 20965
That was a really cool game, though I only went through a small fraction of it(130 pgs out of, what was it, 2000+ pgs?). I noticed no spelling errors (witch is quite a feat with how many pages there are). It is definitely a 8/8, and I somehow managed to get the best ending. >.<
-- TacocaT on 6/25/2014 7:02:24 PM with a score of 38547
its great and worth atry.
-- austin on 6/24/2014 5:04:43 PM with a score of 9410
Freaked out every time I saw END in red words. Fun game.
-- EvangelineV on 6/23/2014 10:30:16 PM with a score of 34367
It was hard getting past the convict but i did it!
-- Spottedfire48 on 6/23/2014 1:11:32 AM with a score of 19065
First story I've read on the website, and damn, it was a good one at that. If it were a real book, I would actually have payed for that!
-- A_Time_Lord on 6/22/2014 4:43:00 PM with a score of 19710
Best thing ever.
-- Jack Danish on 6/14/2014 8:01:50 AM with a score of 16165
the game was fun but unrealistic at some parts.
-- jynx on 6/13/2014 3:54:40 PM with a score of 9610
Darn hard! But enjoyable
-- Apophis on 6/12/2014 2:22:36 PM with a score of 15630
Very good story I see that you took your
time with this well its 2:05 am but I'm mor than happy to have spended it playing this awesome story I thank you for the good time goodbye and god bless
-- Some Dude on 6/11/2014 3:06:24 AM with a score of 34157
This interactive story is one of THE best i have ever played. To the author: I highly suggest you go on from this to either write normal books or even more like these, and definitely make it a paid version, i would pay dearly for something as good as this.
-- Benjamin Goodgame on 6/9/2014 2:44:49 PM with a score of 25935
Great Story!!!! Loved It!
-- MythSkies on 6/9/2014 9:46:34 AM with a score of 12080
I'm going to finish the rest of this later...this is really really really long. 2000 pages? Dam. You should make it so people know how many links they clicked at the end of the story.
-- nmelssx on 6/8/2014 11:40:41 AM with a score of 2660
ummm yeah.. two days of fun! I disliked my lack of options in some situations but one the best I've read!
-- notsosoutherngirl on 6/6/2014 8:46:19 PM with a score of 24925
fun times. Could use an inventory GUI to show you what exactly you have since it gets pretty confusing.
-- atatatat4 on 6/4/2014 10:25:33 PM with a score of 23115
it is a very good interactive zombie game and a must lay game
-- liam towns on 6/4/2014 5:07:58 PM with a score of 7515
neat game
-- Enigma on 6/4/2014 7:27:44 AM with a score of 20535
One of the best zombiegames since long
-- Lawrence on 5/28/2014 1:37:20 AM with a score of 18075
Plenty of branching options. Nice story. Very interactive. 7/8.
-- jamescoker1226 on 5/26/2014 9:53:05 AM with a score of 29077
Realist zombie scenario
-- H on 5/26/2014 1:44:53 AM with a score of 35537
This isnt a bad thing though but i just couldnt get myself to think that it's all over , maybe it was for the best and i did manage to kill two days of my time reading and surviving all in my mind .. I just wish i could have made more choices that would not make me dead .. And a zombie virus carrier .. It was good .. Make more good stuffs author , ill be following your works now ..
-- jesseallankim on 5/24/2014 1:51:48 PM with a score of 25395
I survived! Saved 61 people with my family surving too! Woo!
-- carl spiller on 5/20/2014 1:42:14 PM with a score of 29797
Awesome!
-- Kaiju on 5/19/2014 4:08:41 PM with a score of 23675
This was great! I cannot wait to play it again, and to explore the rest of the site.
-- Kathy on 5/16/2014 2:11:39 AM with a score of 20960
Man the choices are really set up to make you think and strategize your next move accordingly. Really fun game that takes at least a couple hours to see through to the end.
-- N7Jennings on 5/15/2014 2:22:05 AM with a score of 38567
You Killed 18 Zombies

You Killed 0 Drooler Zombies

You Killed 0 Bloater Zombies

You Killed 0 Ghouls

You Killed 0 Banshees

You Killed 0 Hell Hounds

You Killed 0 Cannibal Gaunt Zombies



You Killed 1 People

You Saved 5 People (including yourself, unless you died)



You were eaten by 0 Zombies



Your Overall Score: 35147
-- Tsjilpiep on 5/10/2014 1:39:14 PM with a score of 35187
You Killed 31 Zombies

You Killed 0 Drooler Zombies

You Killed 0 Bloater Zombies

You Killed 1 Ghouls

You Killed 0 Banshees

You Killed 1 Hell Hounds

You Killed 0 Cannibal Gaunt Zombies


You Killed 0 People

You Saved 60 People (including yourself, unless you died)


You were eaten by 0 Zombies


Your Overall Score: 38927


(You played through 127 of 2,131 Pages and have proven to be a Rebuilder)
-- jack1989 on 5/7/2014 5:07:59 PM with a score of 38947
1>I have tried to get all the mutant zombies but can't get both the Drooler and Banshees if you get one you miss the other.
2>Is there a way to kill the bloater and drooler without getting infected.
Other than this enjoyed it and tried a few times to get all the mutant zombies
-- jack1989 on 5/7/2014 4:22:06 PM with a score of 8710
just make story shorter

you wasted a lot of paper ! you could concentrate on a line of story that depends on choices and more fun though
-- dude on 5/6/2014 10:11:02 AM with a score of 30677
you did a lot of ditracting stuff on the story. but it was a good logical game though

you need to make a line of story and stick players on it somehow cleverly without loosing the reality of choices

you almost took your speed on writing and trying to have all consequences determined but you did the real enjoying part weakly. did you saw the zombie exodus.

that was a better game than it. and it tried to stick on somethin

but your game was cool though
-- greg on 5/6/2014 6:22:56 AM with a score of 33277
Very cool and cleverly written. Although I got the best possible ending, I'll go back and try other ways to succeed
-- LJ on 5/5/2014 11:26:03 AM with a score of 31197
I've played several times and I can't figure out how to find the shadow man conyrolling the zombies.
-- Yellowfellow on 5/5/2014 8:16:03 AM with a score of 26407
This is a really good story and took me a great many attempts to achieve an acceptable progression. If your a zombie fan this will test you under a very specific situation.
-- Rob Rebuilder on 5/4/2014 5:09:57 AM with a score of 38637
Very entertaining! Wish I could have played more.
-- JayEz on 4/24/2014 6:10:03 AM with a score of 32125
that was.....awesome!
-- JonaLeth on 4/22/2014 12:58:19 PM with a score of 26325
Arguably the best game on the site- multiple choices per page, each with real impact on the story. Actual branches, instead of simplistic "Choose A to die, B to live" structure. Relatable protagonist who as good motivations and morality that can be determined by the player. Overall, the best story I've read on this site and one of the best zombie survival stories I've seen period.
-- DC on 4/12/2014 11:31:46 PM with a score of 34907
Hey,
I just thought that this was a very well-written story. It had the right amount of details that I was able to really immerse myself in the text and connect to the characters (especially the guy you play as). That is usually and can be a very hard thing to come by. I was intrigued to play this after playing "The Last of Us" (a zombie-apocalypse game as well) where I was so deeply immersed in the game and attached to the characters. I also found myself anxious to find out what came next so often, I just wanted to skim through the text to find out what choices I had. However the author does a great job on not spoiling what happens exactly (but either way, the text was too interesting to skip). Koodos to this author on doing a great job with intense action, realistic and fun choices to make, detailed story-telling and overall a phenomenal experience. I personally never read books; I can't sit still long enough to read something. But this was good enough to really hold my attention and enjoy it. I encourage people to play it, but I also encourage the author to make more stories (especially zombie survivals). Even if it wasn't a zombie survival story, I'd still read it. Sorry for such a long comment, but man this was a great experience!
-- ThePreacher on 4/6/2014 2:20:36 AM with a score of 22715
Amazing! A very fun, extremely open-ended thriller! Kept me playing all-night long!
-- Kaiju on 4/3/2014 5:53:43 PM with a score of 21385
Good game. It was hard, but then so is the zombie apocalypse. I dunno if it was totally fair, but it was as fair as life.
-- BurningPen on 4/1/2014 3:12:19 PM with a score of 16380
Good game.

Although some moments disappoint (woman at first building, church, school complex, acid undead, demon dog to name a few).
-- DanMasterson90 on 3/27/2014 12:15:43 PM with a score of 36787
awesome details great story
-- demongod11 on 3/19/2014 9:29:58 AM with a score of 28115
Wonderful game. Played it on and off for 3 months
Now. Are u gunna make diffrent game styles?
Like vampire, or mayb a guy stranded on a desert
Island? :) would b fun.
-- keirebu on 3/15/2014 3:30:54 AM with a score of 34327
This is probably one of the best storrygames on the site. Impeccably done, this is a work of art. I got the best ending possible. Yay. I saved 60
people all up, killed 29 Zs, and I got through With no bites. 8/8.
-- Will Sim on 3/12/2014 8:33:20 PM with a score of 33557
I cannot see my score, but I think it's alright.
-- EarthCollision on 3/7/2014 1:50:35 PM with a score of 19775
Word of advice to anyone who plays this game, kill zombies as a last resort.
-- S_Blur on 3/5/2014 1:46:05 PM with a score of 22885
The story is superb and expansive. It is a joy to play. However, given that so many paths lead to death, I'm surprised that there is no way to start back from check points as opposed to playing all over again. While I understand the strive for realism, i find it extremely frustrating that I have to replay everything if I want to try a single path diversion and explore another part of the game, all the while unknowing whether that path would lead to instant death and send me all the way back. If you can't implement a checkpoint feature with this site, please consider alternative writing tools, or even contacting a company that specializes in this kind of game, such as "choiceofgames" . They make superb zombie games and I'm sure they would do you justice
-- Ethan u on 3/4/2014 10:57:50 AM with a score of 8860
I said Slightly better than homework because I REALLY like doing homework
-- RabbitKit on 3/3/2014 7:58:18 PM with a score of 1660
Great story, I guess I made all the right choices though, so I did find it to be shorter than I was hoping for. It's a really great story regardless. Give it a try.
-- Lucky on 3/3/2014 12:20:14 PM with a score of 36957
Excellent adventure and nice and long
-- Edward Cole on 2/25/2014 4:27:15 PM with a score of 20440
Very fun and different. I was able to think and make decisions based on logic that worked for me. Also the realities of man on man violence chilled me to the bone I hope I never have to see my society with out law and order.
-- Steven on 2/23/2014 8:28:28 PM with a score of 33807
Even though I died only on the 80th page apparently, I had fun reading this and making my own decisions. This is very very good and I recommend it to any zombie survivalist fanatic. Good job and keep writing. :)
-- UncleBird51 on 2/22/2014 12:57:17 PM with a score of 9860
I extremely enjoyed your work Im still new to the whole text based concept but I will tell you this...FREAKIN AWESOME im a zombie freak and this had me sitting down and thinking that you actually covered this topic from a realistic standpoint. glad to see someone takes this VERY REAL DANGER seriously!
-- thegunslingerRoland on 2/22/2014 12:32:12 AM with a score of 25985
real fun... mind game
-- azbugga on 2/21/2014 10:43:12 PM with a score of 29987
This is probably one of the best story games on this site... It's extremely detailed and has dozens of endings with a whole lotta pages for each.
BUT I HAVE TO KNOW! Is it possible to save Jacob? I'm sick of accidentally killing children...
-- JustSomeSurvivor on 2/20/2014 1:46:53 PM with a score of 19015
very good reading! Hope to get another go from the author!
-- dbruce on 2/19/2014 9:57:30 PM with a score of 27597
The game was cool, bloody fustrating though. I couldn't leave it alone, i kept on dying but it was never from a bite, it was because i never called my wife! (stupid bitch). Finally got to the end with only killing the woman in the bathroom (whom bought me time to get out undetected), killed the convict and save 10 lives. In the end i got through it without a scratch on me... Well apart from the giant cut on the back of my head. Next time i am going to do it more like a mad man, kill everything i see fit (without dying of course).

Well done, and congrats on making this game, i enjoyed it completely and i am looking forward to seeing a part two if there ever will be one in the future ( doubt it) but still, keep up the hard work!

-RK
-- RK on 2/19/2014 9:49:09 AM with a score of 18335
awesome.the story really got me thinking.
-- BlxckWidow on 2/13/2014 9:12:01 PM with a score of 22825
This is. A great story I loved it alot!!!
-- Zanderfaul on 2/12/2014 12:46:53 PM with a score of 33977
Great story, very well written. Can't wait to start over and make some different choices. Hope the outcome is the same though, I wouldn't want to die in the Zombie Outbreak.
-- Chapster89 on 2/11/2014 12:46:00 PM with a score of 21875
This is EASILY the best cys-game I have ever played - and I am completely addicted to visual and interactive novels. It's even better than Zombie Exodus and Choice of Zombies on choiceofgames.com and those are my all-time favorites, but Dead Man Walking easily topped my list. There are so many different endings, and I admit I died a few times and had to backtrack some pages every now and then because I'd gotten too far to start all over again - I'd also like to say how much I absolutely love having this option to go back and explore the other alternatives, instead of having to re-start everything when I die. Kudos! Will definitely play this again and again and again, I just finished it and got the very best ending which is BEYOND awesome! Keep up the amazing work, and thank you so much for creating the best interactive zombie survival story out there to date!
-- Junesong on 2/11/2014 2:43:31 AM with a score of 38917
It is one of the most creative zombie ideas, I think it was fun and really interesting
-- Treetree95 on 2/6/2014 6:17:00 PM with a score of 29427
Second time- 30 zombies, and killed 2 people!
-- ShriekingTiger44 on 2/3/2014 12:54:09 PM with a score of 10960
Amazing storygame, One of the best on the site!
This is my first go, I killed 4 zombies! And 0 of everything else, I'm going to try again!
Well done berka!
8/8
-- ShriekingTiger44 on 2/3/2014 12:47:15 PM with a score of 1260
Brilliant game..10+/10
Thank you for writing this FOR FREE!
We should all thank you on our knees
-- Robin on 1/30/2014 2:04:36 AM with a score of 27597
That was amazing. Scary and exiting in all the right parts. Please keep writing stories, you have the abilities. Thank you.
-- jaspersforever on 1/28/2014 10:29:02 PM with a score of 17935
pretty damn good.thank you for the entertainment
-- mark on 1/27/2014 12:29:29 AM with a score of 31267
Yay, I just replayed this and got the Best Ending. So glad to actually get it.
-- cyrodilicbrandy on 1/26/2014 4:30:30 PM with a score of 27457
Amazing... Just incredible.
-- John on 1/25/2014 6:12:15 PM with a score of 26627
Absolutely brilliant.
-- cyrodilicbrandy on 1/25/2014 3:59:35 PM with a score of 20870
Best text based survival game I've seen so far. Hope this inspires everyone else as much as it inspires me.
-- Gaheris on 1/22/2014 6:42:52 PM with a score of 41297
great work on this one. it was fun and has many possible outcomes for every choice you make. thanks again :D
-- kostisloco on 1/22/2014 3:54:28 PM with a score of 35067
This is a great game! It's well written and exciting. I highly recomend it. Be sure and save, because with some choices there are game glitches.
-- Margaretsk on 1/22/2014 12:28:19 PM with a score of 34557
I really loved the game, I felt like I had a huge world to explore and I was so happy about that. By far the best interactive game that I've played. Just a question, is it possible to save the wife? Even if it isn't it still is pretty awesome.
-- lauren on 1/21/2014 6:16:12 PM with a score of 20625
I loved this story so much. You much have put in so much work, to make it so perfect. It was by far the best interactive game I ever played. I mean like really, it was amazing.
-- laur on 1/21/2014 10:13:36 AM with a score of 20265
I really enjoyed the story and look forward to playing through it again. This first time through I played the safest route. It was quite nice to see that you can play it cautiously and still be successful, but it was admittedly not terribly exciting. The storytelling is well done and I'm going back for more!
-- first_timer on 1/20/2014 8:46:46 PM with a score of 25087
Initially gripping and continually engaging! The descriptive details and numerous cast of characters kept it interesting. The only reason I gave it a "7" was due to a few grammatical and spelling errors here and there, but they weren't off-putting. I obviously thoroughly enjoyed the first play-through and and am ready to jump back in for more endings!

Here are my stats: You Killed 1 People; You Saved 5 People (including yourself, unless you died); You were eaten by 0 Zombies; Your Overall Score: 33837
-- mek7 on 1/13/2014 1:25:37 PM with a score of 33857
Great game! Finally reached the best ending after retrying a couple times. I wish I had copied my end results to post, but basically I played a lot more passively than the others that have posted here; I only killed 8 zombies, only saved four (myself and my family), and only went through 94 pages. Never killed a special zombie either, too damn scary!

Anyway, thank you very much for writing this incredibly entertaining story! Hope to see more from you in the future!
-- Spellslinger on 1/12/2014 8:04:21 AM with a score of 29577
not bad their was a few mistakes in it but very good i apparently could have got a better ending (not sure how)but in the end good game
-- dfyf on 1/8/2014 7:50:29 AM with a score of 22585
not bad love these type of games going to keep playing it and get a better ending (have only played it once so far)
-- death slayer on 1/8/2014 4:01:58 AM with a score of 1210
awsome game survived!( total didnt cheat)

-- matt on 1/7/2014 11:51:47 PM with a score of 21165
Enjoyed every minute of it and loved the different endings. Actually wouldn't mind seeing this turned into a movie lol
-- KingKronic on 1/7/2014 11:04:30 PM with a score of 37287
How You Did

Here’s a rundown of how you did –


You Killed 155 Zombies

You Killed 0 Drooler Zombies

You Killed 0 Bloater Zombies

You Killed 0 Ghouls

You Killed 1 Banshees

You Killed 0 Hell Hounds

You Killed 0 Cannibal Gaunt Zombies


You Killed 1 People

You Saved 61 People (including yourself, unless you died)


You were eaten by 0 Zombies


Your Overall Score: 46137


(You played through 147 of 2,131 Pages and have proven to be a Rebuilder)
-- Alex.... on 1/7/2014 3:05:25 PM with a score of 46157
Here’s a rundown of how you did –


You Killed 67 Zombies

You Killed 0 Drooler Zombies

You Killed 0 Bloater Zombies

You Killed 1 Ghouls

You Killed 0 Banshees

You Killed 1 Hell Hounds

You Killed 0 Cannibal Gaunt Zombies


You Killed 1 People

You Saved 60 People (including yourself, unless you died)


You were eaten by 0 Zombies


Your Overall Score: 48837


(You played through 148 of 2,131 Pages and have proven to be a Rebuilder)
-- Alex C on 1/3/2014 5:19:34 PM with a score of 48857
This story was beyond amazing. I would look forward to future stories written by you.
-- Alex on 1/3/2014 11:04:39 AM with a score of 40857
Here’s a rundown of how you did –


You Killed 132 Zombies

You Killed 1 Drooler Zombies

You Killed 0 Bloater Zombies

You Killed 0 Ghouls

You Killed 0 Banshees

You Killed 1 Hell Hounds

You Killed 1 Cannibal Gaunt Zombies


You Killed 5 People

You Saved 59 People (including yourself, unless you died)


You were eaten by 0 Zombies


Your Overall Score: 19525


(You played through 151 of 2,131 Pages and have proven to be a Survivalist)

That story was so amazing, massive thanks to author for creating it :)
-- will123will on 1/3/2014 4:49:12 AM with a score of 19535
It has about 2,000 pages and the max I have gotten to is about 90-150 I wish it didn't end so soon *spoiler at end* but still its a really good game, I really like it, it gets complicated, but thanks to the trusty backspace it isn't impossible.

*damn military always seems to come as soon as it gets good, I mean who said i wanted to be rescued?!?*
-- DMDonahue on 12/30/2013 4:22:20 AM with a score of 20195
Here’s a rundown of how you did –


You Killed 3 Zombies

You Killed 0 Drooler Zombies

You Killed 0 Bloater Zombies

You Killed 0 Ghouls

You Killed 0 Banshees

You Killed 0 Hell Hounds

You Killed 0 Cannibal Gaunt Zombies


You Killed 1 People

You Saved 60 People (including yourself, unless you died)


You were eaten by 0 Zombies


Your Overall Score: 36477


(You played through 114 of 2,131 Pages and have proven to be a Rebuilder)
-- DrBlackIrish777 on 12/29/2013 2:27:47 AM with a score of 36497
Very high rating. Well written and well though out. Nice to play a smart character. I will be replaying this!
-- notled on 12/26/2013 4:13:24 PM with a score of 38597
Must read for every zombie apocalypse lover out there,wish there were more!
-- Steve on 12/25/2013 6:39:32 PM with a score of 36957
The game was amazingly detailed. I liked how you incorporated different zombie mutations since it made the read refreshing from other zombie stories. Most of all it was quite realistic. I look forward to more of your. Please keep it up.
-- Tim on 12/23/2013 4:22:26 AM with a score of 41187
Amazing... All I can think of is the many other possibilities and alternate endings. Loved the detail, choices, and how long it lasts! There should be more like this in other genres in my opinion. Just wow....
-- Zain on 12/22/2013 1:20:46 AM with a score of 17525
great game man
-- Scott on 12/19/2013 9:08:08 AM with a score of 29637
very fun
-- dodo on 12/17/2013 12:31:41 PM with a score of 710
I love how you actually have to think your courses of action through. Surprisingly I managed to get a good ending on the first run-through; though I was bitten and thus could not achieve the best ending.
-- GiaZera on 12/16/2013 3:51:20 PM with a score of 25485
That's a quality game. Scored 35,007 (or there abouts) excellent storyline, so much work put into that game. Really, well done!
-- Yeager on 12/9/2013 12:26:45 AM with a score of 35627
Awesome play throughout. Plenty of options, and very well thought out.

Apparently, I got the best possible ending? Haha. Cool.
-- Meed on 12/7/2013 10:21:10 PM with a score of 30967
pretty good choose your own adventure. although pretty lengthy read. if you break each "chapter" even more like https://www.choiceofgames.com/zombies/ it would be more interesting as i did lose my attention every few chapters and i began to make choices based on last 3 paragraphs.
-- shadegray on 12/6/2013 2:47:10 AM with a score of 31387
Yay I have the Most scary Infection in the Universe as the Carriers!
-- RabbitSeason on 12/4/2013 2:08:20 AM with a score of 22815
I don't know how to say exactly how much I enjoyed this story, but when given the option to play my xbox, watch tv or movies, surf the web or play on facebook, I found myself glued to the edge of my seat for 3 hours straight, and would gladly do it again, please keep on writing!

Sincerely, Zombie Fan
-- Zombie Fan on 12/3/2013 9:47:07 PM with a score of 30677
very good history i love text games
-- kinsmarts on 12/2/2013 1:47:37 PM with a score of 23045
Tons of plotlines
Worth an adventurous read
-- John Coctosten on 12/1/2013 11:44:25 AM with a score of 32387
Reading through this story was a tremendously fun experience. The author deserves a lot of credit for creating something so engrossing and well written.
Thanks a lot for the good time, I look forward to your future works.
-- Adrien on 11/30/2013 10:38:33 AM with a score of 33277
Me and family survived! I got the best possible ending! yaaay
-- jota on 11/27/2013 11:55:36 AM with a score of 29487
I killed 100 zombies!, but had a double tragedy. After wife dead, greg also dead :(
-- jota on 11/27/2013 10:50:33 AM with a score of 14170
It was alright, the damn kiss killed my wife thou....that sucked
-- Kate on 11/22/2013 1:23:07 AM with a score of 19035
YAY, I GOT THE WORST POSSIBLE ENDING!!! WOOOOOHOOOOOOOO
-- Mtactical on 11/21/2013 11:55:57 AM with a score of 560
that was fun killed 7 zombies
-- killer on 11/21/2013 7:59:22 AM with a score of 11240
Very interesting and branching story.
-- jigpig7 on 11/16/2013 2:04:55 PM with a score of 35587
besr game ever
-- pop on 11/16/2013 2:41:21 AM with a score of 30727
Was real good
-- StonerBurger on 11/15/2013 6:52:16 PM with a score of 21325
I really enjoyed the game, the only thing I disliked was the fact that the secretary who locked herself in the bathroom was unsaveable.
-- Tay on 11/11/2013 4:06:40 AM with a score of 32567
It isn't just better then reeses Cups, It's alot better then reeses cups =D
-- dischead on 11/9/2013 10:18:02 PM with a score of 1760
Absolutely amazing. It took me a couple tries, but the first time I actually completed the game I got the best ending. (I didn't realize there was a Back button until like the fourth playthrough. <<) But yeah. Amazing game. ^^ And there is a way to save the boy, as he survived on my playthrough and became like a son to me. :D
-- spiritwolf99 on 11/7/2013 7:28:10 PM with a score of 38737
Yo, great story ya got! Finally get an ending that save the kid and wife :)
But there are 2100 pages but why i can only complete with 129 pages? Great work man.Add more story parts
-- «Dead Eye68» on 11/7/2013 5:21:21 AM with a score of 24315
Old news now, but this is an excellent story. Choices were logical, the writing was very good and error-free, and the atmosphere was perfect. The only part that seemed arbitrary was the attack on the Hellhound; none of the three options seemed to be good options. Still, I made it through to the best ending, which felt very rewarding.

The amount of work that must've gone into this is massive. I saw only 121 pages of it, and it took me over an hour to read through. Masterfully done.
-- Sszinid on 11/6/2013 4:00:16 PM with a score of 34067
Extremely in depth with humorous but gritty dialogue.. nearly got the best ending.. loved every minute 8*
-- Kyle on 11/6/2013 3:38:10 PM with a score of 27985
A map or sketchy drawings of the surroundings would be quite nice. Otherwise, I really liked this!
-- Dead on 11/4/2013 11:02:58 AM with a score of 17970
Here’s a rundown of how you did –


You Killed 120 Zombies

You Killed 1 Drooler Zombies

You Killed 0 Bloater Zombies

You Killed 0 Ghouls

You Killed 0 Banshees

You Killed 1 Hell Hounds

You Killed 1 Cannibal Gaunt Zombies


You Killed 2 People

You Saved 0 People (including yourself, unless you died)


You were eaten by 708 Zombies


Your Overall Score: 15300


(You played through 88 of 2,131 Pages and have proven to be Hard to Kill)

I frikin killed my wife with a kiss because of the drooler....
-- MardavGaming on 11/3/2013 1:26:36 PM with a score of 15310
Is there anyway to save the poor boy? :(

Besides that I loved it! Though the option of playing as my own gender would be great.
-- Viol on 11/1/2013 12:08:53 AM with a score of 23735
Very good effort - I will play through again and kudos to the amount of time you must have put into this. Maybe needs a little editing to make it a bit tighter and perhaps smaller pages of text to promote tension. Overall though very good and I would recommend to others.
-- Johnny Boy on 10/26/2013 6:59:04 PM with a score of 18625
Oh my god what a great story, I must have gone back and replayed it six times in one sitting alone. If this was a hardcover book I would not hesitate to drop 20 bucks on it.
-- Marshall on 10/24/2013 10:35:22 AM with a score of 35797
ur story is fucked up xD i loved it though great work man :)
-- Daniel on 10/22/2013 5:02:06 PM with a score of 1010
Very good story! It must have taken you months to come up with all the dialouge and text. This is one of the best CYS games out there!
-- Conrad on 10/21/2013 5:37:34 PM with a score of 27687
Awesome story
-- 1127brian on 10/21/2013 11:24:29 AM with a score of 4010
Here’s a rundown of how you did –




You Killed 9 Zombies

You Killed 0 Drooler Zombies

You Killed 0 Bloater Zombies

You Killed 0 Ghouls

You Killed 0 Banshees

You Killed 1 Hell Hounds

You Killed 0 Cannibal Gaunt Zombies




You Killed 0 People

You Saved 60 People (including yourself, unless you died)




You were eaten by 0 Zombies




Your Overall Score: 37807




(You played through 113 of 2,131 Pages and have proven to be a Rebuilder)



I think I did pretty well I took the school children and we made a camp out in the wilderness :D
-- stormjet64 on 10/18/2013 1:59:11 PM with a score of 2910
Great game, kind of wish I had a choice of who I am, like
1. Greg, religious, has 2 daughters etc...
2. Jason, atheist, lives with gf
3. etc...
-- Harmphrey on 10/15/2013 6:44:38 PM with a score of 20175
This is an amazing game which I finished and plan to play again!
-- Supernaturalist on 10/15/2013 6:38:53 PM with a score of 16685
This is the best game ever! :D
-- ssj3gohan007 on 10/14/2013 11:14:10 AM with a score of 24587
You outdid yourself with this one! You really know what you're doing.
-- dman2life on 10/13/2013 9:20:11 AM with a score of 22975
You Killed 232 Zombies

You Killed 1 Drooler Zombies

You Killed 0 Bloater Zombies

You Killed 0 Ghouls

You Killed 0 Banshees

You Killed 1 Hell Hounds

You Killed 1 Cannibal Gaunt Zombies


You Killed 2 People

You Saved 60 People (including yourself, unless you died)


You were eaten by 0 Zombies


Your Overall Score: 31155


(You played through 227 of 2,131 Pages and have proven to be a Survivalist)
-- ssj3gohan007 on 10/12/2013 11:47:46 PM with a score of 31165
Great piece of work. I'm going to replay this one allot.
-- LoneWolf on 10/12/2013 4:49:44 PM with a score of 6310
Great game! I love it! I recommend it to anyone!
-- ssj3gohan007 on 10/12/2013 4:47:09 PM with a score of 30415
This is my second favorite game on the entire site. Great story with a great deal of logical choices to choose from. The only thing I can think of adding is perhaps an inventory that the player can see (there were a few instances in which I was unsure which malay weapon I had). Aside from that, you did an outstanding job.
-- TheOpalFox on 10/11/2013 11:38:51 AM with a score of 32087
Haven't explored the whole of it but what I've seen was fun. My main annoyance was the sad ending of getting your head beat in by a convict. But then humans are nastier then Zombies. Makes me want to see if there's away to get him and save the wife.
-- Phunbaba on 10/11/2013 2:18:21 AM with a score of 11570
Best zombie-themed game since Resident Evil lol
-- Trent on 10/10/2013 9:18:21 PM with a score of 24565
I loved playing and im a big zombie fan should make another
-- kyle hoose on 10/10/2013 5:47:46 AM with a score of 36117
Yay 95 pages 25455 score and survived with my whole family and the teens
-- Tunk11 on 10/9/2013 2:47:37 PM with a score of 25465
Excellent game, good plot and storyline, great at depicting real life scenes and situations. Full of suspense and excitement.
-- Dsurvivor on 10/7/2013 5:07:01 AM with a score of 30167
I like it! Would be good to play through it again too since there are people with more points than me.
-- Grev on 10/6/2013 10:46:41 PM with a score of 28835
Very well written, enjoyable overall. I would love to contribute to this and any other future writings in any way possible. Please get back to me! I am also an aspiring writer, which is why I have offered my help.
-- Corey Greene on 10/6/2013 8:08:17 PM with a score of 27865
Great Story, monumental work!
You should offer it to a book company and print it.
-- Aminius on 10/4/2013 12:01:07 PM with a score of 24725
lots of choices, and very fun. Well written and not so difficult that it is necessary to restart over and over. I will be recommending this to a few of my zombie fan friends
-- Amplified on 10/1/2013 9:25:49 PM with a score of 22585
Hello!

It's a nice game you have here! It's my second playthrough, and I found them both very enjoyable. There are several things I like about your game, such as the interaction that there is between characters, and the way you show their feelings and pain.

I have a question for you, tough. I have noticed the main character carries several items, but I don't remember you ever mentioning a backpack or any other kind of bag, at least in the beginning of the game, when he finds things like the fire axe.

There's something else I want to mention:
You seem to have an habit of saying "your" instead of "you're", for example, among other mistakes. Although they didn't change how much I enjoyed the game, they seemed to pop up whenever I read them.

Thank you for providing us with this excellent game!
-- wkwkwkwk1 on 9/28/2013 10:45:17 AM with a score of 33707
what is the highest possible score?
-- fuzz on 9/23/2013 12:06:00 PM with a score of 42517
Very fun.
-- reydeownage on 9/20/2013 2:27:20 PM with a score of 33647
The one thing that could have made it better is images every now and then.
-- Jennifer on 9/16/2013 6:56:02 AM with a score of 31257
I'm just gonna go ahead and give this a thorough nitpicking.
SPOILERS SPOILERS SPOILERS! !SRELIOPS SRELIOPS SRELIOPS
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Hell-dogs? Considering your virus' compatibility with rabies in any animal--can't be just dogs, think about that--I'd be hard pressed to find anything still alive in the wilderness or in the city within a few days, given the size, power and durable structure of these rabid zombie-animal variants.

I have to complain that the boy seems too reactive when we first see him. I would have expected him to continue cowering in silence, considering the fact that he didn't see the shooters, and would be understandably suspicious of you, not to mention the "don't talk to strangers" rule--that is of course, until you make it clear that you're here to help(I didn't kill him). Also... "Mr. Greg"? Can I just say "just call me Greg"?

How many times has Greg yelled at zombies by the time I've heard the stranger do the same? None.

This stranger was supposedly going to kill Greg's wife, but when he called her(I called her) days earlier, she was still alive. Why didn't he kill her after sexually assaulting her? What reason did he have to hold onto her? To get to Greg? I'm disappointed that there isn't even a shred of exposition for this.

...A kiss. Are you serious. Transmission through a bite, which means direct contact with the bloodstream, can take as long as 3 hours to turn the victim, but a kiss, via saliva which may not even have been swallowed yet--let alone spread the infection to the blood, where every transmission ultimately must go(and definitely would not have achieved in this case)--can turn a victim in seconds? We're talking about a brain-cooking mind controller, not a cold sore. Not to mention the saliva-burns I got from killing that bathroom-zombie by the bridge, wouldn't the fluid seared into living tissue, thus leaving behind traces of the infection that could enter the blood? Even if not, I still have to call BS on this one.

Black jeans. Leather jacket. steel-toed boots. Biker gloves. Wave-cap. This is what an accountant wears during off-hours? Aside from the wave-cap, you'd think he used to cosplay as the Road Warrior. All he needs now are shoulderpads.

Old badass black man. Accompanied by younger black man. Speculated to be more inside the looted and otherwise abandoned gun store. These are the only black men in the story that I've encountered. I think. Usually a different color/ethnicity is pointed out when visual presentation is lacking.

I found shotgun shells early on, then a shotgun, then a double-barrel, and made it as far as said gun store without being presented an opportunity to shoot it before stocking up with ALL the ammo I could possibly want in trade for vintage guns, whilst keeping two revolvers, a shotgun, and a rifle. Was there any point to me discovering that ammo at the first gun store?

"The zombies are chasing a groundhog--for some reason." Yeah, to EAT IT.

So we've got Fox Park, River Road...what's the name of the school?

A course mower. I was expecting the zombies to topple over on top of it(with or without mangled feet), crawl up to the seat and dig into Greg the Idiot. But no, he didn't die. Physics was such a blast, huh?

Why would a bus driver have access to a crowbar at work? And if the zombies were trying to get in, why would the windows be broken outward with glass on the outside instead of on the inside?

"God no! is it too late?" "Could it be? Did the kids on the bus manage to--" SHUT. UP! This in-my-brain-thinking-my-thoughts-for-me style of second person narration drives me up the wall. Personal gripe.

This school has athletic fields, a football field, a gymnasium, damned if it don't have EVERYTHING a high school ought to have, but the kids are 7 and 10 years old?? That's gotta be one expensive budget to spend on your run-of-the-mill elementary playground.

Scumbag survivor-dad: "Do what I say, or you're gonna die!"

Scumbag police officer: "Don't leave the school without your parents, or I'll kill you!"

Did the school survivors not just thank me three minutes ago for telling them about the food they could loot from the country club and a safe way to get there? And as I'm about to leave with my children, are they really gonna flipflop now and say they'll never be able to do it alone?

Greg doesn't wait for the girls to get in the car and close the door before firing off gunshots that would most likely pop their ears and his at the same time. I don't even know if he's fired a gun before.

Ending: Seriously? You're going to pin the deaths of Jacob and my wife on me? That's stupid. I didn't kill them.

Different ending

Death: Seriously? Did the sheriff just pop one off in my face without consideration for how I'd like to deal with my own imminent death? Worst case, I'd have expected him to leave me behind, but that's just completely cold, and downright questionable from a narrative standpoint.

Different ending

Is one of the options seriously to bring along some boys for food transfer when we've clearly established--by my daughter's ages and the boys' behavior--that they can't be older than 10?

Zombie virus details: What is this, Resident Evil?

Sentence: Umbrella Corp. (experimentation wing D: Rabies)
Erh, *cough* I mean, Rating: 4(slightly more fun than homework)
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-- Hbh128 on 9/14/2013 3:21:29 AM with a score of 20415
Normally, I don't play horror games. I didn't even THINK about playing any, but I played this by mistake. Evntually, I died near the start, due to not knowing how to procede correctly. I gave up, and continued my life. Moths pass, and I go loking for this game, and when I find It, I get sucked into hours of gameplay. Glad The game had no pictures, I played the whole thing, killing 97 Zombies, a Hell Hound, And saveing 59 people, Only killing 3. I must say, This is the best Game I have played in a long time, and to think I might never have played it seems painful. Here I am, Afraid Of What might happen in reality, all the while Loving this game. I approve deeply.
-- YoshiTamer on 9/14/2013 12:45:15 AM with a score of 16965
Very well written and immersive!
-- carts19D on 9/13/2013 11:33:04 PM with a score of 34407
Great, great interactive story. Detailed, and funny at some points, I played for a solid 4 hours (and eventually won). Very fun game.
-- Maxskill on 9/13/2013 7:12:09 AM with a score of 21445
Excellent and engrossing!
-- Trotskisaurus on 9/10/2013 4:51:35 PM with a score of 37587
Even though i finished it three times there are still things to find.

Well i need a guide to find the best answer.
-- darrylmontales on 9/7/2013 10:24:01 AM with a score of 19125
I always find this game to be incredibly detailed and entertaining every time I play. This time I actually managed to get the best ending!
-- LeoScales7 on 9/6/2013 4:00:11 PM with a score of 38127
That was fuckin awesome
-- Tony on 9/6/2013 12:10:40 AM with a score of 35607
well that was too deep. It seems that you can be easily engulf by the decision.
-- darrylmontales on 9/5/2013 3:35:41 AM with a score of 8165
God dang that was the best game EVER. I fucking love survival adventure. There were so many options, and so many endings! You truly do get to experience ultimate zombie survival.
-- NiggNigg on 9/2/2013 3:27:38 PM with a score of 28495
Great storygame with a very interesting and intense story.
-- Hamoflague on 9/2/2013 5:16:53 AM with a score of 7660
Fantastic. I liked the realistic approach. Throughout the game, you constantly find yourself in situations with several convincing options to actually think through, as opposed to being given one obvious solution and one completely ridiculous one and wondering whether its a trick or not. I really appreciate the time that has been taken to write a good story. I am definitely going to come back for more.
-- Jather on 8/31/2013 10:08:10 AM with a score of 26375
I really liked this story.Reminds me of the Walking Dead from
the TellTale games.That's a good thing.
-- Jackwolfskin12 on 8/30/2013 3:19:14 PM with a score of 10520
Dear Author,

Thank you, I very much enjoyed the story, the characters and the well developed, wide variety of options I was presented with. After participating in this I feel I have just read a novel, watched a movie, and played a game all at the same time. It focused on just the right amount of plot setting, character back story, and environmental detail. In my opinion, it was very well done and well worth the time. Thank you for making such an entertaining experience for a fellow zombie survivalist enthusiast. Keep up the good work!
-- Frank Castle on 8/27/2013 11:51:11 AM with a score of 39407
Quite a good tale. I have played a lot of zombie choice survivals and this has to be the best one I have played so far. Hope to see more.
-- D4saken1 on 8/20/2013 4:23:09 PM with a score of 32217
good
-- kaykyril on 8/19/2013 5:15:31 PM with a score of 37127
Despite the huge amount of text, this was one of the most entertaining choose-your-path zombie story I've played so far! The detail and descriptions of the situations set you up in the scene, and I've only noticed a few typos through the whole thing.
The problem is, if you want to get all the endings, you'll have to spend a while reading this!
-- Anon on 8/19/2013 10:29:07 AM with a score of 24265
Amazing story line I've played several times trying for different paths and endings I Had a blast each time I hope you make another about someone else and place
-- Dalton on 8/18/2013 7:11:54 PM with a score of 31757
I <3 the story it was a epic adventure! Also the boy, Jacob was a cool kid! xD
-- RedShadow956 on 8/15/2013 5:21:59 AM with a score of 24475
Ha, fun game, enjoyed it a lot. Got the best ending on the first run...

I like the extra little theory was that the invasion was caused by the Necromancer from Endmaster..... (could this be a Death Song of some sort?)

Good game, enjoyed it a lot.
-- Who really cares? on 8/12/2013 9:41:54 PM with a score of 34627
I died before saving the girls. :(
still, 7/8:D
-- sexysally on 8/9/2013 3:47:31 AM with a score of 3440
AMAZING!!!!!
i loved this every step of the way.
the multiple choices were great aswell as the story itself.

If you like zombies, survival, drama, being a badass and kicking ass and such, this is totally the book for you!
Bye!!
-- lindsey on 8/8/2013 7:18:56 AM with a score of 21515
IT was good but you should reduce the story line.
-- Haroon AHmed on 8/6/2013 6:17:01 AM with a score of 17295
This game has such a sprawling and amazing story line that I'm rather impressed not only by the dedication of the author but also of the few logical or grammatical errors. Very impressed.
-- lancechip on 8/3/2013 2:57:39 PM with a score of 18675
After dying quite a few times (because of the same thing) i finally made it through and survived. It really is a great story!
-- philtrash on 8/1/2013 11:00:12 AM with a score of 20825
Amazing survival I had a lot of fun and I now know I can survive in the zombie epidemic!
-- . on 7/29/2013 4:04:16 AM with a score of 20295
I got the best possible ending (Oh yeah) and i 3 cameos. Loved this hours of fun
-- masteruknown on 7/29/2013 12:20:56 AM with a score of 960
Great game, thanks.
-- spawndex on 7/27/2013 3:43:00 PM with a score of 37727
You Killed 91 Zombies

You Killed 0 Drooler Zombies

You Killed 0 Bloater Zombies

You Killed 0 Ghouls

You Killed 0 Banshees

You Killed 0 Hell Hounds

You Killed 0 Cannibal Gaunt Zombies


You Killed 1 People

You Saved 4 People (including yourself, unless you died)


You were eaten by 0 Zombies


Your Overall Score: 24157


(You played through 70 of 2,131 Pages and have proven to be a Rebuilder)

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GOT THE BEST ENDING IN MY FIRST TRY!
That is good to hear since there will be no 2nd one. I liked it but did not love it... not that it was bad, it really good. I am just not into these kind of "stories".
-- Drakoblare on 7/26/2013 8:26:42 AM with a score of 24167
You Killed 6 Zombies

You Killed 0 Drooler Zombies

You Killed 0 Bloater Zombies

You Killed 0 Ghouls

You Killed 0 Banshees

You Killed 1 Hell Hounds

You Killed 0 Cannibal Gaunt Zombies

You Killed 2 People

You Saved 60 People (including yourself, unless you died)

You were eaten by 0 Zombies

Your Overall Score: 28705

(You played through 142 of 2,131 Pages and have proven to be a Survivalist)

Really awesome game, I intend to play again to see if I can get the best ending. I am happy with my result this game though.
-- Havoc on 7/23/2013 8:27:34 AM with a score of 28765
Hope my 8 puts it back to immortality
-- Negative on 7/21/2013 2:28:43 AM with a score of 4760
Amazing game just what i was looking for i survived and cleared up the dead bodies around my street!
-- Alex Nye on 7/20/2013 11:59:33 AM with a score of 17065
Here’s a rundown of how you did –




You Killed 2 Zombies

You Killed 0 Drooler Zombies

You Killed 0 Bloater Zombies

You Killed 0 Ghouls

You Killed 0 Banshees

You Killed 0 Hell Hounds

You Killed 0 Cannibal Gaunt Zombies




You Killed 0 People

You Saved 0 People (including yourself, unless you died)




You were eaten by 213 Zombies




Your Overall Score: 2600




(You played through 24 of 2,131 Pages and have proven to be Zombie Bait)
-- Steve_Greg on 7/18/2013 3:04:13 PM with a score of 2610
Awesome game, I really enjoyed it and all the important choices you have to make! This is a fantastic CYOA game, and I'll DEFINITELY play it over again!
-- Andrew on 7/17/2013 4:42:29 PM with a score of 16175
I thought the whole thing was great, easily on my top five for text-based games.
The only problem was that It takes up a bit too much of my time, and it doesn't feel right to pick up where I had left off the previous day.
-- Jacob on 7/16/2013 1:41:59 PM with a score of 33387
Amazing
-- Joe on 7/15/2013 6:19:12 PM with a score of 33707
Very well written and a pleasure to play :)
-- bootyshake on 7/15/2013 4:38:21 AM with a score of 40767
I saved my family killed my wifes harasser and wasnt bit! I won. This is extremely long so don't play if u don't have hours of free time! Other than that this is the best chooseyourstory I have played!
-- Zayne on 7/15/2013 3:18:39 AM with a score of 20125
You die in a fire even though you have a large fire extinguisher in your hand? UGH!
-- bootyshake on 7/15/2013 2:34:13 AM with a score of 2710
Really great story. Rich detail, believable characters, and good common sense choices that any real person would make. It was very easy to get into the story and feel the suspense. Bravo! I'll likely try it again just for more great content. Thanks for working so hard on this story!
-- Chris on 7/15/2013 1:06:58 AM with a score of 34837
I couldn't stop reading all night finally went to bed at around 5 and got up and finished it. It was incredibly written and was awesomely long.
-- Ellen on 7/13/2013 2:40:03 PM with a score of 48717
This one was a complete page-turner, I had it finished in one sit and will surely re-read it again to explore the different endings.
-- CYSRWolf on 7/11/2013 9:33:43 PM with a score of 37827
Amazing, alot of detail and so long (in a good way)
-- Rmpgry on 7/8/2013 10:42:18 AM with a score of 35487
I really enjoyed the immersive story line. I was happy to have gotten the best ending on my first try!
-- Nexusaur on 7/8/2013 12:41:44 AM with a score of 31657
Pretty well written and really interesting. VERY nice story.
-- jack10345 on 7/7/2013 9:17:15 PM with a score of 28025
That was great! Great plot and a lot of possible choices. Dialogues weren't really, uhm, realistic, but it was ok. The ending (best one possible, yay) left me a little "what?" in the army part, you know, expecting something TWD style, with the soilders murdering everyone. But, again, it was reaaly great, despite everithing.
-- Amarve on 7/5/2013 10:07:55 AM with a score of 43237
Excellent game, well worth a playthrough
-- tannerspalding on 7/4/2013 3:54:26 PM with a score of 21965
I can tell you put in a lot of work, good job.
-- trager70 on 7/3/2013 7:41:56 PM with a score of 8915
i got the best possible ending
-- supersyeed on 7/3/2013 4:56:47 PM with a score of 25297
Amazing job o:
-- MrVoid on 7/3/2013 7:10:53 AM with a score of 39917
I got the best ending, and I have to say it feels great to do so.
Wierdly enough, I didn't make it to 90 pages, but I guess it takes other decissions to achieve that story lenght.
-- FrikysKiller on 6/30/2013 7:02:57 PM with a score of 36357
Great story. I personally don't like anything that has to do with zombies and such, but this is truly amazing.
-- Businessman on 6/30/2013 6:53:47 PM with a score of 14110
7 because of gramathical erors and a few spellig stuff, but a side from that, I'd have given it a clean 8. awesome game, cool consept and I even played it through in one seshion
-- connor142 on 6/30/2013 1:06:46 PM with a score of 15415
It was really good. Took a long time to read but was worth it. I would really recommend it. :)
-- mischief111 on 6/30/2013 12:49:07 PM with a score of 24545
This has to be one of the deepest and well-crafted "choose your own stories" out there. I really felt like my morality was being challenged as I played through this. In the end, I was happy with what I accomplished, and happy that I played this amazing interactive story...
-- AwesomeDude7 on 6/30/2013 12:16:57 PM with a score of 26497
A lot of fun!

I wish there was more control over the main character, but I understand why that wasn't the case, so it's not a huge deal. That being said, it was still fun to play through, and I look forward to going back and seeing what all the various options are.
-- Scitenik on 6/29/2013 1:40:09 AM with a score of 24975
First story I played. Awesome experience.
-- kammahl on 6/27/2013 4:26:19 AM with a score of 30207
Could just as easily be a "How To..." manual as a Storygame, the detail in decision making is remarkable. The entire narrative is littered with great dilemmas and gut punch results. Nothing comes easy. When the resolution finally comes you don't just feel satisfied, you're filled with a sense of accomplishment.
-- nickcotton on 6/26/2013 12:02:41 AM with a score of 17115
Love this game! Didn't make it outa the subway station this time but even losing I get joy out of this story lol
-- sapper0 on 6/25/2013 5:00:50 PM with a score of 1910
Great action. Appears to have significant replay-ability.
-- md on 6/21/2013 2:31:14 PM with a score of 21635
Jollygood game it was, had a blast putting my axe in those zombie hordes. Killed one bloater and one hellhound, saved 8 chaps other then me, including my two girls. sadly I was not fast enough for my wife, but I was their with her in the end so there's that.
-- neogreggory on 6/19/2013 3:35:14 PM with a score of 21325
Nice story with creative contents. I got the best possible ensing but when i found out I only completed 123 pages, I decided to be a dick and re play the story.
-- kamigreed on 6/19/2013 9:09:58 AM with a score of 37237
certainly the most vivid,most descriptive and realistic choose your own adventure game that i've played.
-- aleria105 on 6/19/2013 4:40:47 AM with a score of 9860
The best Choose your own story zombie survival i have seen ever :D
-- Soviet on 6/18/2013 1:21:30 AM with a score of 23385
somewhat longwinded and confusing. more background is needed on the virus and the effects. how did the city become overrun? answer questions that the viewer might have.
-- xxx on 6/13/2013 6:24:29 PM with a score of 22825
awsome man got best ending on first try whoot
-- Andrew on 6/12/2013 6:22:47 PM with a score of 33837
This was the first game I played on this site and it was the best. In future games, a little less detail would be better. It takes a long time but is still really good. Please make more zombie games! Thanks.
-- ZombieEatsYou on 6/11/2013 8:28:28 PM with a score of 4810
avoid confrontation with them. human amenities are the blackest super-fluid.
-- jiimmy on 6/11/2013 4:15:21 PM with a score of 1460
the best one ever
-- Andrew1 on 6/9/2013 12:53:01 PM with a score of 32527
"you also smell the salty stink of slaughter and the sickening stench of decomposition"
Your alliteration makes that mental image 20x worse.
-- TinfoilTophat on 6/8/2013 10:37:46 PM with a score of 17825
I was expecting the adventure to continue and was surprised the best possible ending is just saving everyone. Overall, it had a good draw to it, though I wish there was a bit more to it
-- KRLGIR on 6/7/2013 5:09:59 AM with a score of 35397
Super fun! Died a few times of course... but nobody needs to know x)
-- landoncole56999 on 6/6/2013 1:59:46 PM with a score of 19215
This experience has been enjoyable for me from beginning to end. From the first page to the end, all of the choices have been drawn from mostly proper logistics while being developed to have a great amount of suspense in the story. You really want your character to not only survive, but save yourself and others as much as possible throughout the story if you play this game. While some decisions were either not explained enough, or without much characterization (mainly description), the story was engaging, the characters felt proactive and reactive, the zombie threat felt both menacing and looming, and overall, I enjoyed the game very much. I highly recommend it if you want to see what a good advanced game is.

P.S. I got the second-best ending on my first play-through. The second play-through that I engaged in got myself the perfect ending. I applaud the game for taking away around or over five hours of my life. Great work! Keep making more, and don't let anyone stop your dreams! May you keep working hard, and may the odds be ever in your favour!
-- Carter12 on 6/5/2013 10:04:04 PM with a score of 38567
Sweet, I still think I go the best ending.
-- LordPhallic on 6/5/2013 2:44:43 PM with a score of 19725
One of the best games on this site.
-- SilverFlame1995 on 6/3/2013 2:28:25 PM with a score of 19165
I loved it, and I'm going to go read it again.
-- Mariella Bosquez on 6/3/2013 1:54:51 PM with a score of 2310
I found this story to be thoroughly entertaining and will definitely be playing through again to see some of the other outcomes. Absolutely fun and well done. Got the best possible outcome on my first play-through! Great job, author.
-- Gravestone on 6/2/2013 1:47:06 PM with a score of 41717
Omg finished first playthrough sweet game rated 8!
-- Cozbyv3 on 5/31/2013 8:42:39 PM with a score of 18775
I think it was pretty good, but after seeing the number of possible pages I wanted to go back... I did the story 3 times, and on my last try got mostly what I wanted. I still am curious about the figure that appears when you die, but as it says, I guess it's for another story. Overall, it was fun to read! It does get old after a few runs though.
-- Robert on 5/31/2013 5:42:07 PM with a score of 27515
yayyy finally made it to the end and got the best ending ;D i played this a few times before but would die from infection or being eaten . anyways this was a good one
-- cckreay on 5/30/2013 8:40:51 AM with a score of 29707
I absolutely loved this; I really enjoyed the ride and the connection I made with my character. If you play smart, focus on our main objection you might survive...or not and die horribly. :) My score was 29427.
-- JCool on 5/28/2013 7:43:50 PM with a score of 29437
Freaking awesome, really enjoyed it, the author is a great writer!
-- Mike on 5/27/2013 4:23:43 PM with a score of 24625
I thoroughly enjoyed playing this story-based game myself, and found it a delight to have to search for supplies in the zombie infested world. I look forward to any further additions to this game, or to any new games you make. Thank you for hours of enjoyment.
-- Jack Wolfe on 5/21/2013 11:36:11 AM with a score of 16590
This game is absolutely incredible and complex. I love how logically it all works out. I also found almost all the cameos haha--a nice addition.
-- KnightingaleSiren on 5/19/2013 10:21:39 PM with a score of 18025
I got the good ending, i still want to know what the shadowy thing in the beginning was though.
-- SmokinStones on 5/19/2013 7:39:59 PM with a score of 35797
A spine-tingling choose your own adventure. If only I hadn't passed the infection to two and died from not having anti-biotics... Very worth the play!
-- Hannah B. on 5/19/2013 2:02:15 PM with a score of 19760
I enjoyed this story, it would be a good game actually, but it's a shame that it ends so quickly. Once they are in the survivalcamp, it's over. No more problems of food, water, zombies, other survivors and that's a bit of a shame, I believe. But it's a very good story and I liked to play it :-)
-- vandenbowzz on 5/19/2013 1:08:47 PM with a score of 21315
Amazing CYS, would recommend time and time again.
-- RenegadeJesus on 5/18/2013 9:06:38 PM with a score of 29987
it was a bit long, but that was deffently part of the appeal. if you can sit down and really explore the world of this story it is a great game worth replaying. thumbs up for excellent detail!
-- blazecentral on 5/18/2013 5:51:21 AM with a score of 33667
Real quick, I noticed that on the page titles "Am I Undead" that at the end you suddenly have a crowbar and later you don't have it anymore. I don't remember the exact path I took, but I died at the south subway station and I traveled to the rear of the train, killed the crawling zombie and the two zombies shortly after, continued traveling and laid down to rest. When I got up from resting I suddenly had a (magic!) crowbar. Considering the crowbar apparently disappears after that page it should be a simple procedure.
-- Jesse on 5/17/2013 11:55:56 PM with a score of 1860
Very well-thought out game! :) Almost got the best ending possible, if only I wasn't a Walking Dead. I love the scientific approach to the virus. I can always expect the best from this storygame author!
-- Scribe on 5/15/2013 12:03:36 PM with a score of 24115
really good. I am going to have another go!
-- Shaun on 5/15/2013 11:02:43 AM with a score of 8860
0ne 0f the best z0mbie games ever h0pe y0u make m0re 0f these.
(0-key 0bvi0usly n0t w0rking)
-- MawilliX on 5/15/2013 5:25:23 AM with a score of 28867
Awesome game! But I can never seem to get more into the story, I always finish it between 100 and 120 pages. I'd like to continue but never seem to be able too.
-- PvtElkins on 5/14/2013 1:04:25 AM with a score of 23165
One of the best story's ever
-- CoolBeagle on 5/13/2013 3:58:03 PM with a score of 24597
Yeah, after dying 10 times without even saving one person, I succeeded! Great game, I like the way how your decisions change the way you can play.
-- Player3Th0mas on 5/13/2013 4:08:33 AM with a score of 20675
Wow, this story is very well written and interesting! From the very beginning the description of locations, situations, and the different choices available to choose from made it very easy to get sucked in and feel like you are taking every step with the protagonist.

The diversity between the endings you can get must be incredibly large. After spending much of my evening surviving the zombie hordes to save my family, I finally came to a reasonably good outcome, and when I looked at my stats for the story I have only seen 106 pages out of more than 2000! (A plus in my book, I love a story that lasts a long time and keeps me interested the whole time).

So many different ways to end your story, ranging from becoming zombie chow to saving yourself and tons of other people. This game defiantly has loads of re-playability. I myself lost a few people along the way I really would have liked to save, but I think the possibility of losing people makes the story even more immersive and something to become invested in, and I will certainly be playing it more in the future to see how other choices effect Greg and his fight for survival.
-- Vivalaraza on 5/13/2013 4:02:28 AM with a score of 21715
Amazing time killer.
-- Fender159 on 5/12/2013 8:10:46 PM with a score of 30127
IT wasn't too games or movies bad considering and lack of good zombie media has me sorta not caring for the flaws
-- Wowthisawesome4 on 5/11/2013 10:36:02 PM with a score of 21025
Pretty fun experience. I'll definitely be giving it another go. My ending made me reflect on my decisions, and brought me to wonder if maybe I had played it too safe.
-- Edmi on 5/11/2013 8:05:26 PM with a score of 7815
Good Job!
-- Wolfang100 on 5/10/2013 8:12:48 AM with a score of 31597
Splendid, I was positively enamored by the suspenseful plot of family-oriented survival. Not to mention the righteous amounts of violence and gore put together in this Individualized story of horrific bliss. I give my most sincere thanks to it's author; you've given me a most pleasant source of enjoyment for the past two hours. Great work.
-- A_Simple_Persona on 5/10/2013 3:49:23 AM with a score of 25065
Awesome and thrilling.
-- Jack323 on 5/9/2013 7:45:01 PM with a score of 18785
This was an amazing adventure. I like to think that Hollywood will be knocking on his door one day asking this to become a movie. I'm not too sure though, whether my score is good or not. Also, I am curios as to what the best ending is.
-- Rossatronix on 5/9/2013 4:12:51 PM with a score of 21015
This was quite a fun and interesting story, especially since the protagonist is torn between making choices for his own survival and morality. I would highly recommend this story to anyone!

My score, by the way, was 25,205 - qualifying me for the title of survivalist.
-- Smaffa on 5/9/2013 3:20:10 AM with a score of 25265
loved it so so much, finally saved everyone on my third playthrough :D very well written and thought out.
-- lunahaven on 5/8/2013 11:48:32 AM with a score of 36397
Long and good, first time I played, I died fighting a hellhound, typical of my kind of choices.

I tried again, just completed with my whole family intact!

A couple of "experimental" tries, it seems there are a lot of options and it isn't too linear and fixed like a lot of other stories out there.
-- PcGenie on 5/7/2013 6:11:25 PM with a score of 26565
Wow, this is huge and great!
-- TaraPhoenix on 5/6/2013 3:46:17 PM with a score of 710
wow, that was incredibly amazing. Definitely the best zombie apocalypse I have read.
-- Newt820 on 5/5/2013 9:16:10 PM with a score of 32527
dude, this is awesome. with a strong mix of logical zombie survival and epical story line, this is a must play. thanks for the game.
-- zazyman32 on 5/5/2013 1:37:56 PM with a score of 20935
Another excellent adventure, the combinations of outcomes is truly astonishing it seems, there were so many choices. I'm definitely planning on replaying the game and seeing if I can improve my score at all by killing the drooler zombies and the like. Thank you for your hard work and dedication to making unforgettable adventures. A job well done!
-- Jordan on 5/3/2013 6:50:01 AM with a score of 35867
Amazing truly magnificent it is a amazing experience if one chooses to take the hours it would take to play still griping none the less
It's addictive
-- TACOSQUIRREL66 on 4/30/2013 3:31:09 AM with a score of 10730
I enjoyed this very much, thank you!
-- casden on 4/28/2013 10:10:34 PM with a score of 34507
Amazing, got a score of 1955 and saved 55 people with only killing 2!
-- B4Summer on 4/26/2013 10:16:50 PM with a score of 19565
GOOD!!!!
-- NADA on 4/21/2013 3:37:01 PM with a score of 2900
really really enjoyed this, got a little bit panicky in cornered situations, found myself worrying about the characters (especially jacob) and kept thinking "what would i really do?" when it sucks you in that well... you know it's good!!
-- cybermum117 on 4/21/2013 2:58:47 PM with a score of 35327
Excellent story, well thought out and written! Lot's of (difficult) choises, resulting in loads of branches.

Going to do another playthrough.
-- elloco999 on 4/21/2013 7:32:40 AM with a score of 36797
Zombies are my absolute fave, and the story is well written and super engaging, also liked that making ethical decisions can lead to a good ending. Loved it!
-- LB on 4/21/2013 1:48:02 AM with a score of 34047
it suked
-- boyboy on 4/19/2013 3:26:28 PM with a score of 860
awsome but put more combat with special zombies
-- asad on 4/17/2013 1:33:56 AM with a score of 20375
Great game. Definitely worth another playthrough.

I must say though, it takes some time to get used to, so try to get through the first 10-20 pages.

After that, you'll be hooked.
-- MasterYster on 4/17/2013 12:29:32 AM with a score of 25515
Absolutely amazing, the detail and the thought put into it... Being a fan of Zombie Exodus, this is really hitting the spot, about to go for a secnd run
-- JDudeson on 4/16/2013 7:55:40 PM with a score of 11190
this is the first choose your story i've played and it was captivating! It was really well written and it allowed me to fully become immerse with the narrative even if it wasn't myself. I would definitely recommend it to anybody who has spare time to take a chance on this
-- Ern on 4/16/2013 2:16:45 PM with a score of 28377
One of the most interesting and fun choose your own adventures ever!
-- Draou on 4/16/2013 10:20:30 AM with a score of 28587
this is....... amazing!!!
-- ianrocks03 on 4/16/2013 7:08:08 AM with a score of 13210
Bloody Brilliant.
-- Spartan on 4/16/2013 4:05:59 AM with a score of 17525
Great game. I loved it, I just wished there was a way to save the tomboy, Abby was her name i think.
-- Chaoticsquirrel on 4/14/2013 4:53:34 PM with a score of 28145
Gripping. Even though I managed to survive the apocalypse and save my daughters and 57 other people, I feel as if I've only scratched the surface of the intricacies of alternative plot lines this story-game has to offer. I look forward to playing through it again.
-- quinncorbin on 4/14/2013 2:04:16 AM with a score of 24185
It was really facinating and very detailed))
-- DvaLisa on 4/12/2013 9:28:54 PM with a score of 25175
Really nice work!
I have never seen such a reasonable and complete plot for any cyoa.
Keep up the good work :D would like to take another dive if you have new one coming.
Some part of describing is a bit unimaginable though, like when facing situations at boat house or along the train track. But it is probably because my lack of expirence in these kinds of surroundings
???????????! ???~ ??:P
-- from Taiwan on 4/12/2013 9:19:54 AM with a score of 22195
Awesome, I like this, Its worth the read and has great replayability, Scored 34587 Points....Booya
-- DarthNelly on 4/11/2013 4:21:43 PM with a score of 34627
Got 8955 , will try again. good story I liked it
-- DarthNelly on 4/10/2013 1:37:06 PM with a score of 8965
Kick ass zombie game. Real zombie survival at its core.
-- Kidshadow8468 on 4/8/2013 10:12:46 PM with a score of 10490
This game is very good, great you ould even say i knew that i wasn't going to do great and i didn't. This is what i call a legit zombie survival game, you have choices that you have to make in order to survive, you have a little bit of action in it (if you make it that far). In all this game is great.
-- Amos on 4/8/2013 5:07:38 PM with a score of 1360
briliant story!!! thank you !!!
-- pankas76 on 4/8/2013 4:33:12 PM with a score of 22165
Fun game, somewhat morbid. Would have been nice if there was an ending where your wife wasn't raped.
-- lolgay5 on 4/8/2013 4:18:45 PM with a score of 30207
Thank you so much for making this available to everybody. This is a very good story. It is pretty dense, as every choice has an impact on the storyline. This book gives an incredible sense of freedom. It is also very well written (though you should note English is not my mother tongue).
-- Rahula59 on 4/6/2013 10:32:09 PM with a score of 40487
LOVED IT! It was extreamly well written and so dead on to what i would imagine a real zombie outbreak to be! I'm honestly thinking of doing it again to see the other endings.
-- Dawn_Adkins on 4/5/2013 3:27:55 PM with a score of 33147
very awesome! I did a lot better than I thought I would had this been a real zombie apocalypse! Kudos to the writer for a very entertaining story, and cool characters!
-- mykel1985 on 4/4/2013 3:55:52 PM with a score of 11360
Great
-- Aialynn on 4/4/2013 10:28:00 AM with a score of 24215
My wife, Lori, and my son Carl loved it. Down in Atlanta, it's pretty bad in the jail we're refuged in ( like the police station ), and that crazy guy with the shotgun reminded me of this crazy guy I know, The Governor. You gave us a good time. The most laughs come from Daryl Dixon, he loved it. Thanks again and awesome story! - Rick Grimes, Atlanta Police Department
-- Rick Grimes on 4/2/2013 9:48:02 PM with a score of 32017
It's just too "consistent" to enjoy as there are no shocking reveals, and the "moral dilemma" part comes too quick.
5/10
-- OmegaGoldfish on 4/2/2013 1:09:59 PM with a score of 1810
Amazing story that got me hooked fro the beginning. Clearly a very advanced story with a lot of possible outcomes. Best story I have tried on this webside.
-- EmiljanQ3 on 3/31/2013 3:30:07 PM with a score of 20965
Before I saw Walking Dead, I probably would have tried to rescue more people.
-- steve on 3/30/2013 10:08:33 PM with a score of 9610
Awsome, best game i've played on this website
-- Bailey on 3/30/2013 8:08:34 PM with a score of 1660
Freakin awesome
-- godzilla5939 on 3/30/2013 5:34:09 AM with a score of 40177
Absolutely loved it :D Good job (Y)
-- Kam on 3/30/2013 2:16:18 AM with a score of 31637
Sucked. It makes no seance that the zombies would be the same as the ones in the movies.
-- Jk on 3/29/2013 4:10:16 PM with a score of 2360
Very interesting story line and great moral choices. It was more than I expected.
-- Zoltan741 on 3/27/2013 9:56:11 PM with a score of 13920
phenominal. First time i've ever done something like this... I was watching the walking dead but i'm reluctant to continue with how much fun this was! Great job to the author I hope to pen something half as engaging one day. Thank you!
-- tdawg on 3/26/2013 5:23:46 PM with a score of 34327
Epic
-- mig135 on 3/26/2013 4:16:39 PM with a score of 25945
Amazing story, great fun but not so much that it hinders the emotional side of the game. You really feel the weight of your decisions which is what these games are about.
-- jimmy_lee92 on 3/25/2013 3:05:10 PM with a score of 18160
Incredible. I beat it with the best possible score. No bites or anything. I think I'm going to play it again to see where else it could go.
-- Kritter999 on 3/25/2013 2:14:21 PM with a score of 33667
I really appreciated that you could go back and change your decisions without having to start completely over. It made the gameplay much more enjoyable and made it fun to explore the different possibilities and consequences.
-- Les on 3/23/2013 6:29:45 PM with a score of 38617
Awsome story though I didn't get to kill any hellhounds,banshees or bloaters.I could you explain what the above "species" of zombies do?

-- jimis on 3/22/2013 4:14:09 PM with a score of 18135
Simply amazing. I actually had to think about my decisions carefully. I would recommend not using the "Go Back" button as it retracts from the story experience and makes it feel as your life is really on the line. Kudos to the maker.
-- 13laorn1 on 3/22/2013 10:00:45 AM with a score of 41677
I loved this!!! I felt like I was actually in it. I love to try to get different endings!!! Nice job!! :)
-- DragonGirl69 on 3/20/2013 2:01:35 AM with a score of 21725
i engoyed this immencly getting rebuilder on my first try yeah me. but that asside it was well written and i liked it keep up the good work.
-- Daniul on 3/18/2013 1:25:44 AM with a score of 38657
Major UPDATE - fixed the Bug List (Thanks to everyone who helped find them) ^-^

And apologies to the 394 Folks who had Saved Games deleted!
-- BerkaZerka on 3/16/2013 4:11:12 PM with a score of 560
amazing!
-- hoowon95 on 3/15/2013 9:33:13 PM with a score of 24665
Great game I had a very fun time playing it.
-- Abaddon_Wolf on 3/13/2013 1:45:43 AM with a score of 35747
Man, this is epic, difficult, and thought provoking!
-- Andrew on 3/11/2013 1:08:36 AM with a score of 33227
I've played through this story 5+ times! I love it, especially the detail given in every scene, even the work put into the game over, you're dead scenarios. The only (minor) complaint I have is that I spend so much effort finding firearms but never end up using them.
-- fg109 on 3/10/2013 9:21:04 PM with a score of 40387
Loved this cyoa!

Did a great job!
-- John on 3/10/2013 6:02:14 PM with a score of 27397
Very entertaining and addicting. Haven't stop playing since I started yesterday. Great job
-- Steve on 3/10/2013 9:02:21 AM with a score of 17660
AMAZING
-- This is Patrick on 3/9/2013 11:49:37 PM with a score of 33667
Cool, gonna spend some time on this.
-- Mikaru on 3/9/2013 8:31:41 PM with a score of 1410
Enthralling and well worth every minute I put into it. The detailed descriptions of scenarios and characters had me gripped. You've done a brilliant job.

Also, kudos to you for putting in such an immense effort to write such a gripping story.
-- game_player20 on 3/9/2013 5:50:58 AM with a score of 34417
Though sometimes the reading gets tedious with descriptions of the layout, the emotional scenes and character interaction feel very realistic and get you hooked. I genuinely cared about them and about survival. I felt invested in the choices I made (which were intelligent and by no means easy!) I can't help but wonder if there were ways to save a few of the poor people along the way, but have an actual feeling of accomplishment in having saved 60 people which included my family and remained unbitten myself!
-- RipElliott on 3/7/2013 3:22:09 PM with a score of 39037
Great. I loved it. And this is just a pet peeve, but I rated in 7 because of the few grammatical errors I saw. Sorry, but other than that, it was amazing.
-- Ajurr on 3/6/2013 10:16:10 PM with a score of 23115
I was amazed by how good it was,I got the best ending the first time around and replayed it about 10 times after that
-- FeelingPro on 3/5/2013 10:14:30 PM with a score of 33177
Amazing work. Good length, and what every zombie game should play like. I thoroughly enjoyed it.
-- Lovecraft_Lexicon on 3/5/2013 10:08:53 AM with a score of 37447
Brilliantly done. The sheer amount of work involved to create this much material, not to mention laying out so many choices in a way that flows naturally.

Kudos my friend.

My results:

You Killed 88 Zombies
You Killed 1 Hell Hounds
You Killed 1 People
You Saved 61 People (including yourself, unless you died)

Your Overall Score: 36407

(You played through 133 of 2,131 Pages and have proven to be a Rebuilder)
-- Ravanosh on 3/5/2013 2:35:25 AM with a score of 36427
I'm a Survivalist!
Also i would of got the Best Ending if i didn't carry the zombie virus.
-- Dreknauo on 3/3/2013 12:33:29 PM with a score of 24465
Nice story
-- Hermano on 3/3/2013 6:04:32 AM with a score of 9910
one of the best zombie survival games iv played in a while
-- czptainz on 3/2/2013 8:25:48 PM with a score of 20475
Amazing story, congratulations to the author, it's certainly one of the better "choose-your-story" kind of books I've played, and also one of the best in the zombie genre. I've finished it (best finish, yay! \o/) and I'll go try other games,but someday I might come back to try again and see other sides of the story (there has been at least one major point that I would like to do things differently), after all, I still have more then 2000 pages to go :D
-- Laforet on 2/28/2013 6:58:33 PM with a score of 34327
"Congratulations! You have not only survived the zombie apocalypse and saved your entire family, but made it through bite free! This is the best possible ending!"

I cried when i read that.
:D
All in all, killed 7 z's, killed 1 person and rescued 11.
My morals are over 8000!
Sorta disappointing that i only played 106 pages outta 2100, but the ending was satisfying enough.
For some reason i replayed the game a bunch of times, but never got farther than 110 pages.
You sir, are a genius.
-- Sparrow7 on 2/28/2013 4:08:51 PM with a score of 34577
Amazing! My Guy and I just found this site tonight. He's asleep but I couldn't resist this one. Four hours well spent. Great writing and creative options! Thanks again to the community and this author in particular!
-- LoAP on 2/27/2013 4:34:21 AM with a score of 22875
Simply amazing.
-- Terri Nils on 2/26/2013 12:24:31 AM with a score of 1810
Drop dead amazing!
-- jttaylor on 2/24/2013 4:48:39 AM with a score of 22265
Must play.
-- galobtter on 2/24/2013 2:29:06 AM with a score of 21275
Ive played this 3 times now and its gotten better each time!! this is what I do to pass the time at work haha! I love it!
-- trevsjams on 2/21/2013 8:32:30 PM with a score of 30365
this is really cool, and with all the options, one slip-up can mean certain death, which should happen more often in zombie games/stories. you have done this well, so its a high rating from me. i'll be sure to share it with my friends. thanks for spending the time and effort to create this story and not just make it a half-arsed (sorry for language there) game.
-- nath on 2/20/2013 3:59:23 AM with a score of 6360
Brilliant work, extensive and exhaustive options available, truly gives you a sense of accomplishment when you reach the end.
-- uishax on 2/18/2013 3:23:34 AM with a score of 32787

Fantastic storyline, gripping tale in general. If not for a couple of typos and perhaps more believable family characters, it would have been perfect. 7/8
-- moomooplatter on 2/18/2013 2:33:56 AM with a score of 25965
Yes! I finally survived and without getting bit hardest thing I ever had to do but now I no I can survive the zombie apocalypse. A sequel on another persons point of view.
-- alec on 2/17/2013 10:26:06 AM with a score of 32107
8/8
-- TheMan12 on 2/16/2013 7:27:46 PM with a score of 19085
Very, very awesome :-D
I made it out alive as Survivalist though i became a Carrier.. took me about 6 hours to play it through.
-- Chaka on 2/16/2013 6:43:22 AM with a score of 22935
My god, I played as heroicly as possible and I killed 0 of most things and saved lives..but I only got through 100 something pages of a possible 2k. All I can say is..wow, a great story and so many possibilities. Great value to re read and experiment just to see the other options. Thank you for making this!
5/5
-- Calum on 2/14/2013 7:18:27 PM with a score of 22645
Liked it, although I'd probably have to wait a while to play through again, given the length.
-- Rathnor on 2/13/2013 8:30:36 PM with a score of 28185
Thanks for a great adventure :)
-- Jannelle on 2/11/2013 9:16:16 AM with a score of 40787
better than walking dead game ino
-- Allen on 2/9/2013 9:09:22 PM with a score of 23895
Hum, I've played this before. Now I went through more pages, saved more people, killed more zombies and still got a lower score. WTF? Although, I didn't get the best ending. I ended up with the virus, but managed to save the children. How I managed to kill five people is a mystery. Did I kill any at the police station?
-- Tgetruegamer on 2/9/2013 6:51:13 AM with a score of 25495
Thanks very much for writing this story. It must have taken you a great deal of time to complete. I hope you consider trying to publish someday as ,in my opinion, you have a great talent.
-- noah on 2/8/2013 6:03:32 PM with a score of 34297
This is amazing. I've no idea how you found the time to complete it, but you deserve to be commended, this is truly an amazing project worthy of the greatest appreciation.
-- Kaven on 2/8/2013 5:24:32 PM with a score of 24375
Fantastic writing, just an overall great game.
-- AspiringAuthorCook on 2/8/2013 12:40:49 PM with a score of 21165
Finally, I got the BEST ENDING [or something like that]. Once you're in the school and arguing/convincing the sheriff already, everything seems easy and smooth. I guess now I know what to do in a real apocalypse. just kidding.
-- toni on 2/8/2013 2:43:30 AM with a score of 32507
Fantastic story! Made a few bad choices but only a few of these actually ended the game, was fun messing things up then being allowed to continue (sorry, kid)
-- HardByte on 2/7/2013 5:57:05 AM with a score of 33487
Yay! "Best Possible Ending"! c': Took a lotta "Go Back's", though...>_<
-- TheMythicalOne on 2/6/2013 2:13:03 AM with a score of 35017
Excellent story, believable decisions and consequences, had a few moral dilemmas about whether or not to save other people or my own skin though my humanity usually won out. Overall, I very much recommend this.
-- MythicBowman on 2/5/2013 7:12:22 PM with a score of 25575
bets story game ever on my first try i survived saving 64 people killing 3 people killing 172 zombies and 3 hell hounds 2 banches 1 saliva zombie and 2 Cannibal Gaunt Zombies
this was a relay good game when mines done please check it out
-- joe7584 on 2/4/2013 11:13:34 PM with a score of 18225
I died of bacterial infection after watching my wife die.
This is the first choose-your-story i did and found it amazing. Props to the author(s) for his work and imagination.
-- brakman on 2/4/2013 9:20:17 AM with a score of 19320
Did it all in one sitting, about four hours... definitely an excellent means of procrastination! :)
-- j.k. on 2/3/2013 9:14:51 PM with a score of 32597
Awesome
-- Jessica on 2/3/2013 9:10:17 PM with a score of 8110
Fuck
-- Berkazerka on 2/3/2013 11:51:57 AM with a score of 1260
Very fun and engaging.
-- dreadtron on 2/2/2013 12:12:37 PM with a score of 28367
Really good. You do allways wonder what would have happened if I did it THAT way.
-- and_lag on 2/2/2013 8:29:30 AM with a score of 11580
Wow, for the time and effort put into this i give it an A+. Just again wow it is very detailed and has a exceptional story.
-- ringo98 on 2/1/2013 3:57:43 PM with a score of 21475
The story is consistantly REAL. Awesome read!
-- ptravier on 1/31/2013 6:23:50 PM with a score of 17365
Damn, that was epic! This is my first read at chooseyourstory.com, and I'm beyond glad it was! It's very well-written, engaging and detailed. The fact that it has over two thousand pages of content and possible story routes is simply astounding. The only bad thing I can even say about this is that there's no offline version, or it would have made for several hours of entertainment off the web. Nevertheless, it was entertaining to go through, and I'm now starting another story arc. Thanks for writing this!
-- icetrigger on 1/30/2013 9:04:25 AM with a score of 25985
I really enjoyed this game. I played for an hour or so after work every night for a week ti get as much out of it as I could. I have to say, there's a tonne of variety and some genuinely tense moments.

Out of all of the endings I've seen, though, none ofthem explain the hooded figure from the dream at the beginning or the out of body stuff in any of your death sequences. Anyone know anything about that?

Oh, watch out for those hell hounds. They do NOT mess around. All in all, though, I'm thoroughly impressed by this. Recommended.
-- eanna on 1/29/2013 8:37:34 PM with a score of 34877
Having finally found the patience to actually finish this game after exploring it off-and-on for a while, I can say that it is too short. So... that's an 8/8.
-- Loon on 1/29/2013 6:42:56 PM with a score of 26115
Absolutely amazing. Very realistic. I'm going to replay and see just how many zombies i can kill!
-- Worgrim on 1/29/2013 1:39:23 PM with a score of 33207
Love the game
-- KJ on 1/28/2013 2:14:28 PM with a score of 13470
Great
-- kelly on 1/28/2013 1:57:53 AM with a score of 20735
One of the best CYOA games. It offers lots of different choices, with no less than 3 choices in almost every page. Although stats showing after the game were not true, that doesn't change how amazing this game is.

my score: 29967
-- aguen on 1/27/2013 1:36:44 PM with a score of 29987
However long and sometimes linear this is, it is still an amazing read for those who have time. Speaking of time I got the best ending and escaping the city was well written but a little easy.
A 4.9/5 amazing but with 1 or 2 flaws.
-- OmegaGoldfish on 1/26/2013 7:42:29 PM with a score of 32547
This is bloody brilliant. I haven't played that many games in this genre, but really - this is a very good game. Like previous comments have stated it is very extensive with a great deal of different outcomes and story routes. I'm fairly sure I got the second best ending, and I will definitely play this again.

Down below follows my stats for the playthrough.


Here’s a rundown of how you did –


You Killed 8 Zombies

You Killed 0 Drooler Zombies

You Killed 0 Bloater Zombies

You Killed 0 Ghouls

You Killed 1 Banshees

You Killed 0 Hell Hounds

You Killed 0 Cannibal Gaunt Zombies


You Killed 2 People

You Saved 10 People (including yourself, unless you died)


You were eaten by 0 Zombies


Your Overall Score: 19305


(You played through 118 of 2,131 Pages and have proven to be a Survivalist)
-- ciderfylla on 1/25/2013 4:00:21 PM with a score of 19315
this was the first story on this site I have read and completed and it was great even if I died 3 times
-- Derpeus on 1/25/2013 12:25:28 PM with a score of 19635
Wow! Just wow! Excellently written!
-- Zack on 1/24/2013 5:56:04 PM with a score of 25625
This was amazingly thought out. It was a very good zombie game, and was very true to the genre.
-- iNyxxus on 1/23/2013 9:35:33 AM with a score of 36237
Here’s a rundown of how you did –


You Killed 39 Zombies

You Killed 0 Drooler Zombies

You Killed 0 Bloater Zombies

You Killed 0 Ghouls

You Killed 0 Banshees

You Killed 1 Hell Hounds

You Killed 0 Cannibal Gaunt Zombies


You Killed 3 People

You Saved 5 People (including yourself, unless you died)


You were eaten by 0 Zombies


Your Overall Score: 35677


(You played through 118 of 2,131 Pages and have proven to be a Rebuilder)


I enjoyed it a ton. I wanted to go find the unique zombies, but one fight with a drooler zombie kicked my ass, so I back paged. LoL
-- Brewstone on 1/23/2013 12:55:36 AM with a score of 35697
This is the first story I've read through at this site, and it's definitely an impressive undertaking. I can't pretend to know Dead Man Walking backwards and forwards, but having played through and achieved a score over 20,000, I can say a few things:

Firstly, it's very big, but not buggy. Some conversations made me tilt my head (for instance I had my head wound seen to, and was then told my head looked awful), but continuity must clearly be horrendously difficult to achieve in a project on this scope. Dead Man Walking is put together well.

Secondly, the text is often longer than it needs to be. At first, particularly when tension was high, I read it word for word, on the edge of my seat. Gradually I just started skimming.

On a related note, as with many zombie films, it loses something of its essence once the initial terror fades. You are encouraged to be meticulous, take a long time, always travel by daylight, and carry supplies for every eventuality. In this manner the sinister thrill of the early darkness fades into a series of logistical tasks.

But probably most jarring, the main character (that is, the "you" of the story) lacks consistency. You're an accountant with an obsession for numbers... who is also an outdoorsman? And a gun enthusiast? Even worse, some early experiences led my character to an apparent crisis of faith, which was totally forgotten in the end when I kept saying "thank God" and "God bless" and "X dead person you really miss has gone to heaven and is in a better place now."

For all that, though, the story is still engrossing. What I'd really love to see would be a few simple changes:

* Less opportunity to waste time. Searching everywhere should be punished.

* Less opportunity to sleep safely at night. Zombies should encroach on safe houses and chase the reader out before dawn. (Can you hold out until sunrise? Good luck!)

* An option to stop and pray at some point. It may or may not do anything helpful for the reader. But even if it does nothing else, a character who selects this option can then establish an unshaken faith and justify the dialogues at the end. On the other hand, refusing to take the time to pray could toggle a switch in the code and allow the reader to establish that the horror of the outbreak has made the main character into a more cynical person.

That's it. Nice job BerkaZerka! I'll probably play this again sometime. Thanks for taking the time to design it.
-- Mark Graybill on 1/21/2013 4:47:27 AM with a score of 22415
can someone help by co athoring my first story i don't know what i'm doing and would like the help
-- priryan123 on 1/20/2013 6:02:08 AM with a score of 3460
I got the best possible ending in one run (because i've obtained some knowledge through random browsing and taking some quizzes)

I will definitely replay this since it has various approach to the story. really, really brings "enlightenment"
-- fireworks04 on 1/15/2013 9:00:26 PM with a score of 29437
37834
-- Akirameru on 1/14/2013 11:28:38 PM with a score of 37867
This story... Is great. I FELT the fear, I cared for the characters... The only thing I did NOT like was the dialogue, which was a bit badly written; the part in which Laura freaks out doesn't seem very... Real, I suppose.
Anyway, time to replay and see if I can't find out who the grim reaper is.
-- antonm1107 on 1/14/2013 4:22:20 AM with a score of 24015
EPIC.thats the word i will choose if i have to describe this game its very well placed the fighting mechanism is great describing each blow and kick how anyone could make something so unique like this story is beyond me but what i do know is that they have a great imagination and a large capacity in the subject of excitement.
-- Cuban on 1/13/2013 2:54:50 PM with a score of 26925
good story, though perhaps the description pages are at times a bit too long. I would prefer to have seen shorter swaths of text and faster decision making points to keep the pace up. The story was well written however and interesting. Will try a second playtrough in the near future as a died in a pharmacy store
-- Reinhart on 1/12/2013 8:13:14 AM with a score of 10680
Very cool :D
-- Natascha on 1/11/2013 5:34:59 PM with a score of 22925
I'm a little ticked I was one little problem away from the best ending and I have no idea how it could have been avoided, but all in all this was an amazing story and very well done. You really have a sense of choice here.
-- Sam Loser2 on 1/11/2013 2:41:42 AM with a score of 24475
Second play-through and i got the ending titled "best possible ending"
-- toku on 1/11/2013 12:54:27 AM with a score of 33207
Wow. Just wow. I died quite early, but hey; I must have some sort of record. I was eaten by 213 zombies, all at once! But still, brilliant game. I can see this as a real game; I think it would be quite popular, too.
-- strange man on 1/10/2013 6:01:05 PM with a score of 1960
Here’s a rundown of how you did –

You Killed 2 Zombies
You Killed 0 Drooler Zombies
You Killed 0 Bloater Zombies
You Killed 0 Ghouls
You Killed 0 Banshees
You Killed 0 Hell Hounds
You Killed 0 Cannibal Gaunt Zombies

You Killed 2 People
You Saved 1 People (including yourself, unless you died)

You were eaten by 0 Zombies

points: 7105
Pages: 60

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Using my zombie knowledge, I basically just avoided any possible encounter while always making sure i had some idea of my surroundings. I stayed at the police station letting my family die, because In all reality, I would have imagined the school to be one of the worst hit places
-- toku on 1/10/2013 2:41:53 AM with a score of 7115
Wtf. I died by a random prisoner... I even went back to get weapons from my neighbor and it changed nothing. Great story but wtf. Can I even get told where I went wrong?

It was so fun and interesting, until some random prisoner killed me. Out of all the people in the city. My horrible wife, attracts a prisoner. I shouldn't of even searched for her is she was like this.

Hours of great story and then baseball bat to the head...
-- Napoleon Tak on 1/9/2013 9:38:53 PM with a score of 15040
Iloved this game it has been the best game Ive ever played considering ive played 204 games and own at least 56 thank you for this awesome zombie experience.
-- warmonger55 on 1/9/2013 6:00:32 PM with a score of 19425
well.. how not to die? i got to the point where i found the wife but still died due to lack of antibiotics....
-- toni on 1/8/2013 11:10:44 PM with a score of 15760
This game was very entertaining and brought a somewhat realistic feeling to a seemingly unrealistic event. Who ever wrote this should be given an award. I made it with only killing 4 zombies, saving my kids, Jacob, and 6 of the high school students!!! GREAT GAME!
-- nark on 1/7/2013 9:39:14 PM with a score of 20115
Hands down, the most absorbing interactive novel I've ever gone through in this genre. I made an account here just so I could save my progress. I enjoyed it thoroughly and even managed the best possible ending on my first run. Can't wait to go through it again! Well done, well done indeed!
-- Theraven on 1/7/2013 6:13:16 AM with a score of 39717
Just 1 word...terrible, just kidding this game is awesome! I've never seen a game on Choose Your Own Adventure that gives you this much freedom and it has over 2000+ pages, if you're doubting playing this game your an idiot because this game gives you everything someone into Choice Adventure would ever like and is the best that is and ever will be...forever!
-- Aeros on 1/6/2013 9:51:14 PM with a score of 22815
Happy zombie meal!
-- Endrew on 1/6/2013 12:49:31 AM with a score of 1360
This story is epic and just outright amazing 10/10!!!
-- Dan on 1/5/2013 4:57:48 PM with a score of 36937
I wish there was a higher rating than 8, not only will it bring you enlightenment, it's an action-packed, fun-filled, amazing story, and I certainly will be going through it again. I would give the author a manly hug, bro fist and a high five, sir, if you read this, you are awesome. Keep up the good, nay, outstanding work.
-- Will on 1/3/2013 6:01:28 PM with a score of 17715
you are amazing at writing you should write a book if you ever do please inform me as you could make an astounding book if you really wanted,to such a detailed story really hope you consider becoming a writer and thank you for your time and effort that you put into writing this story
-- Alexander on 1/2/2013 11:26:53 AM with a score of 20675
One word: awesome.
-- zigma9114 on 12/31/2012 9:46:13 AM with a score of 40717
Loved this story! got the best possible ending ( with only having to backtrack once );) . The writing is amazing and really puts you into the setting.
-- Emma on 12/30/2012 7:43:35 PM with a score of 32037
I love this game so much I got the best possible ending
-- Mezy5 on 12/29/2012 9:13:03 PM with a score of 36797
a great big rolocking zombi gore death fest with lots of excitement, combat and mega zombi doom!

Characterization was a little thin and based often on sterriotypes, but for a fun, none anxt wridden,s zombi head smashing fest it worked extremely well, especially the way the main character was for some reason just plane brick, ie, as hard as they come despite being an accountant.

While I would've liked a little more to his background than lovely but helpless wife type (who even had hysteria ), and two pretty and cute daughters, this didn't spoil the game too much once I stopped expecting something thought provoking and just went on with the slaughtering.

Writing was solid and business like, and the descriptions of zombies and other monsters were especially nice, however the allusions to your characters feelings could've done with smoothing into the initial plot a little in some places.

From a game perspective, the mechanics worked well, however it would've been nice to see a little more of combat, or indeed character stats in some situations, sinse often whether your character could say sneak up on an enemy just seemed to be determined by the fact that he was a a tough guy, where as a little bit of stat checking would've give some more tention to those scenes, particularly with the possibility that you could fail.

I also appreciated the way the game lived up to it's promise, and presented you with a hero with actual brains. So, this one gets a 7 from me (even though I don't know what rees's cups are).

Very nice game over all, distinctly does what it says on the tin and was a lot of fun doing it, I'll be interested to see what else the author has written.
-- darkempathy on 12/29/2012 5:26:12 PM with a score of 44287
that was awesome.
-- divinekingsteve on 12/28/2012 3:29:24 PM with a score of 18585
This game was pretty good. Played through once, and am interested to play again and find out a few more things. Achieved the best ending on the first playthrough.
-- zombie smash on 12/28/2012 3:24:18 AM with a score of 35487
This game was ABSOLUTELY fascinating, that I don't even know where to start commenting.

The primary thing that I that I believe to be most notable about this game is just how expansive the story is and how in-depth the author goes out of his way to make the reader so immersed in the universe the author has created.

This was my first playthrough, and I got through about... 115 pages, I think, if I remember correctly. Apparently the game length boasts over two thousand pages in length, so that really shows how little of the game I discovered, and just how my replay value the game offers. I will definitely replay the story a hell of a lot more to discover all the various sub-plot points and things.

Although, it was relatively easy. I'm not sure if I'm the only one to find the survival choices and the choices ending in death were semi-obvious. I did have to go back once or twice, however.

You have achieved such a story worthy of a vast amount of praise (and you probably have, though I can't be sure, haven't read the other comments yet).

Kudos to you, author.
-- Cynical on 12/23/2012 6:53:44 PM with a score of 20475
Amazing game, best story I've seen in a while. I can see myself playing through this game several times, because of how many options and different possibilities there are. I just finished my first play through, and i'm about to start my second.
-- mlmlkml on 12/23/2012 4:34:49 PM with a score of 17085
super
-- jayanth on 12/22/2012 8:04:14 AM with a score of 2960
It was a great story
-- kalun on 12/21/2012 8:26:15 PM with a score of 23025
I can honestly say I loved this, it was long enough to develop into a full story and the plot kept moving along at a good pace. I'm only sad that I decided to be recless and just go for somthing I knew was a bad idea at one point so was infected but apart from that I got a very good ending. I'll replay this a couple of times to see the different options
-- FeanorOnForge on 12/21/2012 12:42:14 PM with a score of 25325
A realistic zombie survival game,with complexity and many choices,what do you want any more?
-- detective1412 on 12/20/2012 11:42:15 PM with a score of 31777
best zombie game ever.just like the movies.but it is hard
-- goodlarry12 on 12/18/2012 10:19:24 PM with a score of 3360
So. . .(Spoiler alert) The drooler spit counts as a bite?
-- thundafive on 12/17/2012 5:57:06 AM with a score of 34607
Damn I died of the bacteria infection! And just when I found my wife! Anyways that was the greatest Choose-your-destiny story I ever played. You deserve an Emmy for this story!
-- Ristar101 on 12/16/2012 10:13:25 AM with a score of 15120
Awesome, very hard. Nice story, I hope you make another story. All due respect,
AvalancheMaker
-- AvalancheMaker on 12/14/2012 8:15:08 PM with a score of 3810
one of the best zombie games on choose your story maybe even the best but it still didnt seem long or hard enough
-- argetlam on 12/14/2012 5:48:53 PM with a score of 22415
This was an amazing story a definite favorite i enjoyed playing through and after a 1st run through i'm going for a 2nd more bloodthirsty one.Thanks for the story Berka :)
-- XenonViEternal on 12/14/2012 3:10:50 PM with a score of 24315
very good work. ill be rereading this story to see the differen storylines
-- zeke86198 on 12/14/2012 12:12:11 AM with a score of 21015
Nice job on this, ma'am or sir. Hat's off, thumbs up, and a giant foam finger to you. Bonne chance and good luck in your story writing. Hope to see more like this.
-- Sabre on 12/13/2012 8:06:48 PM with a score of 39457
Truly amazing, I was mesmerized for hours. One of, if not the, best games on this website. 10/10
-- kantuno on 12/6/2012 9:13:48 PM with a score of 29517
awesome
-- schizodolph on 12/6/2012 12:28:38 AM with a score of 16720
It's amazing how much work has been put into this. I tip my imaginary hat to the author. A job well done and a breathtaking story!
-- Jack_Stevenson on 12/5/2012 3:28:01 PM with a score of 36567
I like this game, but it would be more fun if you there were some more interesting story lines. Like the secretary that locks herself in the bathroom. Maybe you should be able to save her some how, and take her with you. Then you gotta decide weather or not u cheat on your wife at some point later.
-- Yihman1 on 12/2/2012 1:15:35 PM with a score of 28375
fun fun
-- Yihman1 on 11/30/2012 11:38:30 AM with a score of 32375
This game is really setting the bar for other writers. I want to see more games like this one. And by "like this one" I don't mean just a zombie game, I mean a well written long game with replay value that has lots of options and variables. I was wondering if this is a finalized version or not? It would be awesome to see this game with illustrations added at some point. I played through the game twice not bored yet.
-- Yihman1 on 11/29/2012 10:20:07 PM with a score of 20515
Wow, probably the best game on this site. Well done. I'm looking forward to reading other things the author writes.
-- Yihman1 on 11/29/2012 7:35:39 PM with a score of 26835
very very good...and lots of possibilities...
-- Sammael on 11/29/2012 3:26:34 PM with a score of 42607
Best ending. Fantastical.
-- written_agreement on 11/27/2012 8:40:40 PM with a score of 36817
i did skim through a few pages but this was fracking awesome
-- yogurturtle91 on 11/27/2012 5:54:23 PM with a score of 37077
I have no words for how epic and how enjoyable this is.

I especially liked that you included special zombies, it made the whole apocalypse thing feel a tad different, but still semi-loyal to the Zombie Lore.
-- Framer on 11/27/2012 11:53:28 AM with a score of 32757
Hey man this was an excellent story and very well written.
-- Bigsmokeymcpot on 11/27/2012 1:44:53 AM with a score of 40507
This story kept me on the edge and forced me to think every decision thoroughly throughout the entire story. Amazing work.
-- x24sonic on 11/26/2012 5:50:35 PM with a score of 30837
This game was awesome! The writing was incredible and there were just so many choices. I think what I liked most though was how you could have different goals while playing the game, like trying to get the highest score or trying to kill the most zombies, personally my goal was saving the most people, and I saved 60 in the end so I think i got them all. Also the game does a great job of getting across the emotions of the characters, which made me really care about the fate of the guy and his family. Am definitely going to come back and play this game again with a completely different approach, to try and get a different ending. ^_^
-- Briar_Rose on 11/26/2012 8:02:14 AM with a score of 51727
Phew. What an adventure. Do really want to explore around the places more. Will try again.
-- Impere on 11/25/2012 2:15:38 AM with a score of 25435
I got the best possible ending. Now let's get the MOST BADASS ENDING EVER.
-- Swiftstryker on 11/24/2012 8:30:13 PM with a score of 28377
Easily the greatest, most thrilling, most entertaining game on this entire website! Aside from "Eternal", of course...
-- YorkshireLad on 11/24/2012 3:02:54 PM with a score of 45197
that was pretty fun i was pretty close to death alot and i would play it again the story line was great also
-- britaney on 11/23/2012 8:22:12 PM with a score of 20285
WE NEED MOARRRR!!!1
-- Swiftstryker on 11/23/2012 1:33:32 AM with a score of 24425
Simply awesome. ;)
-- mjdolorico on 11/22/2012 10:55:28 PM with a score of 28857
Ok just got the best ending. Great job at making a great story Berkazerka
-- solxd7 on 11/21/2012 11:24:00 AM with a score of 35027
great game took a while to get the best ending but worth it.
-- Crimson_Tailor on 11/21/2012 3:53:12 AM with a score of 40807
I have to say this is one of the best stories I have seen on this website 8/8.
The creator doesn't just forget what you did as you go though the story. Every decisions can change it hugely.
-- solxd7 on 11/20/2012 11:36:57 AM with a score of 18340
got the best ending i think, saved the family and didn't get bit. i did have to smash in the skull of a seven year old, but other than that i think i did ok. one bit of advice, constantly search for supplies and keep the crowbar
-- Daniel on 11/20/2012 2:27:26 AM with a score of 22045
Definitely one of the better stories on here. I managed to encounter a great few of the "subtle" cameos and also managed to get the best possible ending, with the exception of hitting the backspace a time or two. The game pulls you in and allows you a fleshed out span of choices that the average person would be guilty of doings, bringing a sense of personalization that is needed in a CYOA game. Great work, and hopefully I'll see more amazing things to come.
-- RemyLeBeau on 11/20/2012 12:17:11 AM with a score of 34957
found a way to kill twelve people if you go to police and then
kill the cult members could have made it 13 if i would have killed thatgirl in the bathroom
-- JamesValkyrie on 11/19/2012 10:00:55 PM with a score of 12160
awesome had so much fun playing and reading this, the author is a genuis
-- deamonlasher on 11/19/2012 3:27:52 PM with a score of 35587
This was an awesome game. I wish i could have seen all of the mutations but still it as AWESOME i think i may have reached some level of enlightenment while playing..... or i wqs on a coca cola high but either way i have never played a game this good before.
-- Eclipse on 11/18/2012 1:50:38 PM with a score of 20385
Wow, just wow. 8/8
-- judester30 on 11/18/2012 12:54:22 PM with a score of 19265
Very fun read. Glad to have spent the time to go through the whole story! I survived! Thanks for sharing!
-- Will on 11/18/2012 3:56:32 AM with a score of 18025
Woot! Killed 256 zombies!
-- AnyMouse on 11/17/2012 2:40:28 PM with a score of 26735
Good game and story hope more will come soon
-- jameson7856 on 11/17/2012 7:18:36 AM with a score of 30267
One the best and most logical zombie story games there is. Hope to see more games from you soon.
-- N on 11/17/2012 4:25:07 AM with a score of 24735
Nope, I was wrong... This Score blob found even before me ;)
-- BerkaZerka on 11/17/2012 2:01:47 AM with a score of 560
Update Complete =)

(I do believe this is the minimum possible Score BTW)
-- BerkaZerka on 11/17/2012 1:58:43 AM with a score of 710
I died (because of lack of medicine), but i found me and bo
-- betaband on 11/15/2012 11:40:48 PM with a score of 21010
Not sure I like that I didn't get the best ending because I "lost my humanity", considering that my later choices certainly showed that I was still human. Regardless, second playthrough was super, super awesome, just like the first one. Great fucking job, BZ. I think I might up this to an 8.
-- JJJ-thebanisher on 11/15/2012 3:37:42 PM with a score of 15715
That was fun and even when I got the best ending I kept tinkering around and still manage to save even more people, plus have the best ending. Fun stuff.
-- Knightblade88 on 11/15/2012 10:01:21 AM with a score of 31667
Finally got it! fantastic game! 10/10 (yes I know the scale only goes up to 8 but this game deserves a 10 ;) )
-- MagmaArmor0 on 11/14/2012 10:01:57 PM with a score of 28117
Well I usually don't leave very long comments, so I'll just say that was probably the best zombie game I've played.

You've definitely earned an 8.
-- EndMaster on 11/14/2012 6:25:13 PM with a score of 19725
Easily one of the most expansive stories on the site. The game offers an incredible sense of freedom. With on average over three links per page and over 2000 pages, it goes without saying that you have options. The writing is nothing to gawk at, but the blend of story and game is a real marvel. Loaded with logical options and realistic outcomes, Dead Man Walking offers hours upon hours of exploration. Exploration made more enjoyable by a clever protagonist. You never get the feeling that the author is just trying to lazily kill you off to keep his work load down. You in fact get the opposite feeling, that he wants to give you as many logical options as possible. Better still is that the game is plot driven; it sets real objectives, propelling you through the pages eageryly waiting for what happens next.
-- ugilick on 11/14/2012 6:14:23 PM with a score of 32497
Still haven't gotten the best ending...must keep playing.
On another note, this game has so much intricacy to it that I'm sure that, even when I finally get that best ending, I'm gonna play through a few more times. fantastic job on the game!
-- MagmaArmor0 on 11/14/2012 4:48:49 PM with a score of 20475
Wow...well done and well written! I will definitely be replaying this a few times. :)
-- MagmaArmor0 on 11/14/2012 3:33:22 PM with a score of 15685
Great storygame. I didn't get the best ending (wife died), but I did manage to save 60 people, including myself, daughters and the boy. I ended up only killing 5 zombies though lol.

No complaints. There's were times where continuity seemed a bit off, like it said I had a heavy fire extinguisher when I never took one, and how I told my daughters their mother was still alive (though admittedly that could have just been to calm them down), but overall it was great.

8/8, would read again (and plan to lol).
-- Killa_Robot on 11/14/2012 2:37:03 PM with a score of 19365
Great stuff, much better than most zombie novels I've read, commercial or self-published.
-- HoraceTorys on 11/14/2012 10:30:00 AM with a score of 31817
Forgot to say in my last comment that it was only for the first playthrough.
-- blob on 11/14/2012 7:41:05 AM with a score of 560
There's a pretty low chance of escaping the subway tunnels without being bitten.I'd say only 20 percent.
-- blob on 11/14/2012 7:39:28 AM with a score of 2060
This was amazing! I love the length, nice and long. I was shocked to see I have only completed around 200 or so pages, and am gladly going to play through the rest. It was very in depth and realistic for the most part which was fantastic. I also loved finding and killing the things that were not zombies and can't wait to find and kill the ones I missed. Anyway great job!
-- AtomicWaste on 11/13/2012 11:41:22 PM with a score of 26725
this game was wonderful. It was action packed, filled with all of the key parts a zombie game needs. Zombies, and the confrontation between man and himself. While there are some grammar mistakes, this is literally the largest game on the site currently.
This game takes all of the horror genre cliches and kicks them out. While playing, nothing was ever expected, and I hungrily clicked each link, looking forward to the next page of text. Truly an excellent game, one that could rival some of Endmaster's work. (in my own personal opinion) 8/8 for a masterful work, and a truly enjoyable game.
I got the best ending for anyone wondering. (which I would then add that anyone who didn't replay the game until getting the best ending is missing out.)
-- Aman on 11/13/2012 10:16:25 PM with a score of 33927
Great game, one of the best zombie survival games I've played, namely because the virus actually makes sense, and that there is an end to the entire thing.8/8
-- Xt1000305 on 11/13/2012 10:06:01 PM with a score of 26415
On the page highway there is a bug where there are two links that are having the same name but each goes to a different page.
-- blob on 11/13/2012 8:10:55 PM with a score of 710
This was extremely awesome and satisfying. The most mindblowing aspect was how technically amazing it was, this must have taken so much hard work and the choices and descriptions are exceptionally well thought out. Additionally, it features replayability through the roof and next to no errors/typos. Berkazerka, this is fantastic.
-- JJJ-thebanisher on 11/13/2012 7:56:12 PM with a score of 7715
Here's my Score for shortest path to Best Ending. It should be pretty easy to get a higher score, just by trying other things - Good Luck!
-- BerkaZerka on 11/13/2012 7:11:21 PM with a score of 28097
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