Player Comments on Farewell, My Childhood Self
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Hello, I have been looking for some good Love & Dating storygames on this website, and I found this. I looked through the description, and thought that it would be most related to me. This reason will be announced later. So, without further ado, here are my thoughts:
Plot: 4/8
The plot was coherent and represented many twists and turns along the way. I found some of the endings to be quite cliche, but I may be wrong because I've only played into two endings. Sophia in the story dies in a hospital at some point, but there was also one where they got married? There was no time gap between the hospital call and the marriage scene. The pacing makes me very confused; I can't tell which pages are real and which pages are dreams! Pacing was very slow and I got bored. Even though this is a featured storygame, there are still things to improve!
Characters: 7/8
Despite the slow pacing of the plot, the author really put in some character development into the story. The good writing really showed a real connection between the protagonist and Sophia. Even though they are the only characters to talk about, This section of the story is almost perfect. The protagonists' dreams and the dialogue really showed both parties' desire to be together forever. Great job on showing the connection between the characters!
Grammar: 6/8
The grammar is probably how the Characters section got such a high rating. The appeal of the reader to the senses of smell and touch really makes you imagine all the scenes in the storygame. However, the smell of 'mint cinnamon' is repetitive around the storygame. Would use different imagery for higher engagement. There are a few minor grammatical errors, but nothing too alarming about them.
Gameplay: 8/8
Again, I wonder how many endings this storygame can possibly have. There are so many options to choose from throughout the storygame, and i feel like I am heading towards a certain ending on every click. Even though I only experienced two endings, the possibilities are endless! Also, the art on each page makes you really imagine the scene. Really helps with the imagery used throughout the storygame. The art alone just shows how much effort the author put into this storygame.
Overall, I am relieved to finally leave a good comment. I've commented on a few bad storygames in the past, but this is my first good review. The connection between the Protagonist and Sophia is great, the imagery used is great, especially with the art, and the possibilities are endless! Would be better if the pacing of the plot wasn't so slow, but is overall good.
Final Rating: 5/8
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imadgalaxy
on 11/30/2022 9:16:04 PM with a score of 0
Oh man. This was so much nicer to read after that last storygame I just read. (Don't bother looking, it's trash) I really like the way the story was written in flashes of memory, and yet still incorporates everything a good and complete storygame requires.
The writing was very elegant and had a nice flow to it. It rose and fell, each time dragging me in even more until I had to play every path, click every link, and read every word until I had read it all. I did exactly that. It was so effortlessly sad, because it was written in such a way that no other story could meet this natural level of set mood.
It was the perfect length for the writing and the mood so that it lasted and only got stronger near the end. The characters were developed nicely, and were introduced quite impressively. There is an evident plot, even though it was written in such a broken way, and it still felt smooth and effortless. This is still one of my favorite storygames on the site and I hope you can return and create more works of art.
There was no obvious grammar and spelling mistakes, and this wouldn't have take away from the overall rating at all. It was a good use of pictures, but not everyone enjoys the animation style, but still, very good job. 8/8
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Nyctophilia
on 11/5/2017 4:29:57 PM with a score of 0
Many of these types of Choose Your Own Adventures are linear in the sense that the choices throughout the story create specific endings; however, this story is wonderfully different. The choices, to me, felt like the narrator was simply thinking of his many memories with Sophia (which is probably the intention). Each section's choices were not tied into the next section.
I loved the tone of this story as well. It seemed like the happy memories of something tainted by sorrow which is something everybody does. The narrator never became depressed, but I always could feel his melancholiness on the matter (due to the story's end). I also liked the way that you portrayed the two. Their relationship seemed to be simultaneously as friends, as brother/sister (not genetically), and romantic. It is much better than "he likes her 'cuase she's pretty".
The plot was wonderful. I was able to experience these two growing up together which made the endings (I am trying to stay spoiler free) all the more sad. I normally have an ending that I like the most, but this is the only story in which I am unable to do so. They were simply to great to choose from, and each had their own benefits and drawbacks.
Finally, I did notice that people say that the story is blatantly sad... I do not really see it that way. The endings are about to happen, and our narrator has to choose which one he wants. I feel that he was merely sad about his situation which bled into his narration of his and Sophie's past. Furthermore, I LOVED the pictures. I felt they added to the story and looked spectacular, though not everybody likes the style you selected...
This is definitely one of my favorite stories of this genre.
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WouldntItBeNice
on 1/24/2016 6:25:34 PM with a score of 0
so wholesome and heartbreaking 11/10
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— Shadow445 on 10/29/2024 11:16:10 AM with a score of 0
First dating story game I played. Very amazing.
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MushMan
on 10/17/2024 10:12:36 AM with a score of 0
6/8 - Wonderful! Better than I expected!!!
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Fire_Of_The_Universe
on 10/7/2024 4:44:40 PM with a score of 0
This is just sad
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— Mia on 9/28/2024 10:38:10 AM with a score of 0
Wow ive never been into dating shit but this shit is good shit
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Abgeofriends
on 9/13/2024 10:59:22 AM with a score of 0
why did she have to die
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Phoenixthe1st
on 7/31/2024 9:10:03 PM with a score of 0
This was really bittersweet, and I really loved it!
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ItzSugar
on 6/23/2024 11:24:09 AM with a score of 0
gives me chilllllls. trust me choose the tape isnt real do it and then save sophia
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— yoo on 6/18/2024 10:41:08 PM with a score of 0
This story made me cry i loved this story at the beggining, props to the author who made this. it left me in tears but
10/10.
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— Rach on 6/13/2024 8:33:24 PM with a score of 0
Beautiful
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— Later alligator on 6/12/2024 5:53:25 AM with a score of 0
Wow...just wow. This game leaves you really thinking about the meaning of death, how sudden, how final. It makes you cherish the love you have while you still have it. An amazing game.
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— Girl on 6/6/2024 2:54:12 PM with a score of 0
Too sad of an ending. I'm crying!!!!
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— lenore on 5/23/2024 5:10:59 AM with a score of 0
Kinda boring
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— Cristiano Ronaldo on 5/7/2024 9:13:09 AM with a score of 0
not really fun kinda of confusing but good job
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— nard on 5/1/2024 10:33:55 AM with a score of 0
It’s a good story, but hard to follow. Sometimes I don’t know if what is going on is a dream or real.
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— Kkkkk on 4/26/2024 10:35:35 PM with a score of 0
Pretty good
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— Ky on 4/15/2024 4:04:40 PM with a score of 0
Was not expecting it to be this sad. Great writing tho.
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— Zoom on 3/21/2024 6:42:25 PM with a score of 0
Short but surprisingly lovely and cute.
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Ravan1116
on 2/8/2024 5:41:23 PM with a score of 0
Amazing even though i cant understand the pacing
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— S on 1/26/2024 10:20:09 PM with a score of 0
I was a little confusing but was overall pretty good ig.
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Sagewhogrowsonrocks
on 1/20/2024 3:09:53 PM with a score of 0
I couldn't focus due to the abundant amount of anime pictures.
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Suranna
on 1/14/2024 1:26:35 AM with a score of 0
amazing! beautiful! heartbreaking
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— eliza on 12/26/2023 4:30:26 PM with a score of 0
beautiful
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michaelm
on 12/22/2023 6:27:05 PM with a score of 0
This punched me right in the heart. Thank you for creating this story. No. Thank you for creating this work of art.
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Janugubria
on 11/21/2023 1:48:19 PM with a score of 0
SOOOOO SAD! I love it.
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— Jillian on 10/2/2023 2:10:31 PM with a score of 0
I love this story, no matter what anybody says.
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— Nathan on 9/30/2023 7:59:50 AM with a score of 0
This was definitely the best story on here that I've read. It took me a second to actually realize what it was about, but there were so many times in this story when I felt like crying. This story really makes you think about cherishing the small moments with your loved ones and keeping them close to your heart always. Very highly recommend it!
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— Anonymous on 9/21/2023 7:53:04 PM with a score of 0
im crying my eyes out
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— Rosetta on 7/20/2023 3:55:17 PM with a score of 0
AAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHH! It made me cry a lot at the ending. 8/8 for the plot, romance, characters, everything!
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— SydJ on 7/13/2023 4:48:10 PM with a score of 0
So sad. But still ok
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— :( on 6/27/2023 7:51:04 PM with a score of 0
Sadly beautiful
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— leloupdemminuit on 5/3/2023 8:38:16 AM with a score of 0
How beautiful and sad
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— Angel on 4/15/2023 8:05:18 AM with a score of 0
Very sad, I liked it a bit. The sad sappy love stories will never to be for me.
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Bryce_Gitch
on 3/27/2023 9:56:16 AM with a score of 0
Your writing is lyrical while still sounding natural. Each sentence showed it was crafted with care.
I got misty eyed after the first reading. But the second and subsequent readings fascinated me with your technical skill in rearranging this as a mosaic to capture the subtle differences in how things might have unfolded- i was reminded of a Bach fugue where you enjoy the melody and couterpoint while smiling with approval at the composer's skill in surprising you with yet another variation.
I rather liked the use of "cinnamon and mint" reference to bring us back to the reality that, despite thd subtle differenes in outome, these are still the same people.
A very enjoyable read.
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MAGALw12
on 3/24/2023 4:47:23 PM with a score of 0
It was a tad confusing at the start, the story isn't chronological for what I could get, just tiny fragments of a life gathering into the present. It's sweet, it's sad... But in the end it is love, it's beautiful. For what it is, is a fountain of emotions.
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— Kiireyy on 2/20/2023 2:28:52 PM with a score of 0
its a pretty sad but amazing story :,) worth the read tho!! <3
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mekisqa
on 1/6/2023 1:17:49 AM with a score of 0
Wow! This story is… just perfection, though I did see a few grammar errors..
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— A Human Being on 12/21/2022 12:54:09 PM with a score of 0
Did i just sleep with a child?
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— Ed Higgins on 12/7/2022 9:15:26 AM with a score of 0
Made me cry like a scared boy afraid of losing his loved one. made me hug my gf. Thank you
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ForHer9
on 11/26/2022 5:05:39 AM with a score of 0
That was taking a trip back in time knowing then what you know now. Wry pleasant.
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— Jody Coln on 11/18/2022 4:25:48 AM with a score of 0
shit
that was good
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— ... on 11/15/2022 8:10:04 PM with a score of 0
i wish it had a happier ending and she did not die in the but
all over the romance was on point and everything was there
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— maddie on 8/1/2022 12:25:32 PM with a score of 0
Welp, I'm crying.
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MoonlightVixen
on 7/12/2022 3:32:19 PM with a score of 0
I remember going through this story years ago, and praying that I'd never have to go through that with someone I cared deeply for. Sadly, it did happen and this story serves as a great guide for me to go through and of the great memories we'd shared at least one more time. I still can't believe she's gone, my little Evergreen...
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Sierra117
on 6/22/2022 11:10:10 PM with a score of 0
Something is falling from my eyes.
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Icedemon
on 4/14/2022 6:46:42 PM with a score of 0
Wow!. I cried. I crying hard in my mind. I wish I could have a female, not so tragically obviously, but. (tears) WHY?
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— Matthew Henninger Vonada on 3/8/2022 12:59:21 PM with a score of 0
Beautiful story.
I’m not crying… your crying…
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— pokrmon2 on 2/22/2022 11:41:16 PM with a score of 0
Awesome...Definitely left me feeling emotional just as if I were in that situation...
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Lucinda
on 1/31/2022 8:53:45 PM with a score of 0
love it so mech thet it time for bed for the 8.
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gcat
on 1/27/2022 9:18:37 PM with a score of 0
It doesn't make any sense! What's supposed to be a dream and what's not and how do they just teleport from scene to scene? There is no order whatsoever!
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— A person on 1/23/2022 10:32:39 PM with a score of 0
It's something that you don't want to rush. It makes you really want to keep going and find things out and the draws are spectacular. 10 out of 10!
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— Zeno on 12/24/2021 5:46:36 AM with a score of 0
I love it
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— me on 12/16/2021 3:44:49 PM with a score of 0
Beautiful, sad, romantic.
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WizardOfInspiration
on 11/13/2021 4:54:02 AM with a score of 0
so sad but so pretty
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— not a name on 10/22/2021 8:56:07 PM with a score of 0
Bravo! This was a powerful, tear-jerking experience. This was a simply divine story! 10/10 would recommend!
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TheRedProctor
on 10/20/2021 5:06:50 PM with a score of 0
So moving and so sad..... Great story.
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— Kris on 10/2/2021 11:44:23 PM with a score of 0
I am still cring good jobe
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— panda lover on 10/1/2021 12:54:45 PM with a score of 0
It was so easy and fun
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— Liz on 9/25/2021 11:28:23 PM with a score of 0
You made my girlfriend cry but worth :) great story
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— Trevor Brotato on 7/16/2021 2:23:22 PM with a score of 0
Hits me right in the feels, it's bittersweet and it tells an intriguing story that all makes sense at the end.
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Dragonicstorm
on 6/8/2021 9:40:19 AM with a score of 0
This is a sad story.
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— Abigail on 5/20/2021 8:09:04 AM with a score of 0
Wow... ... I love the sappiness here. And also, the ending I had. This is easy, but not TOO easy to be obvious :) Overall VERY GOOD!
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UrOwnMind
on 5/18/2021 8:34:15 AM with a score of 0
8/8 almost enough sufferings.
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mmmP
on 4/28/2021 11:07:49 PM with a score of 0
This was an amazing story that kept me captivated until the end. You did an amazing job, and I love the artwork. Thank you for sharing this masterpiece.
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— theshadyguy on 2/25/2021 2:58:54 AM with a score of 0
My heart. Why.
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Chill
on 2/6/2021 9:03:21 PM with a score of 0
NO, IT CAN'T END LIKE THIS SOPHIA CANT LEAVE NOT NOW NOT WHEN IT WAS JUST GETTING GOOD
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— NO PLS on 1/29/2021 11:29:24 AM with a score of 0
A masterpiece
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P6tatas
on 12/25/2020 7:17:29 AM with a score of 0
This is amazing... I cried multiple times, laughed a few too and made a really hard descision...
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— Ryan on 11/17/2020 10:51:11 AM with a score of 0
Sad and depressing but really good.
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— Ryan on 11/17/2020 10:21:47 AM with a score of 0
Made me cry
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— Just some dude on 11/13/2020 3:26:51 AM with a score of 0
its okay
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— umm on 11/10/2020 3:38:07 PM with a score of 0
So sad, so happy, so.. real
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Codific
on 9/16/2020 4:23:11 PM with a score of 0
I loved this it was easy to follow the story and it was super gentle is the only way I can think of describe it
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— Xearianna Rice on 9/7/2020 7:35:22 PM with a score of 0
hi! it was so sad but i loved it so much, also what was she diagnosed with?
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— sophie on 8/19/2020 4:50:33 PM with a score of 0
Ok first of just WOW. The depth of the characters you got into such a short story is nothing but incredible. Second off I love the ending. Most authors always do happy endings but they just don't feel real. Thank you for righting this story. It's going to be one of the stories I'll remember till the day I die.
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— Kayla Tuttle on 8/9/2020 9:28:25 PM with a score of 0
i love it! hell Sophia's effin hot too man. i would fall in love to her
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— briantimothy on 7/27/2020 4:34:53 AM with a score of 0
Make me cry. Avoid if you don't want to cry like a little girl. 10/10 if possible.
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Premium
on 7/14/2020 6:40:00 PM with a score of 0
so amazing. made me cry. highly recommend!!
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— ? on 5/20/2020 12:50:01 PM with a score of 0
i was close to tears. Very well written, and has a decent amount of dialogue compared to the other choose your story's. Also it had details a lot of people would not think about. Well done!
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— Taryn on 5/14/2020 2:43:23 PM with a score of 0
You cannot believe how I feel right now my friend. I've always loved and cared my first love. But didn't bring myself to tell the truth. That she would never love me. And here I'm now mourning about it.
You beautiful one you've just hit my softside and brang a year that didn't come out of these eyes for years. ????
Sometimes a a dream in your own world is better than reality.????
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— Shine hayag on 5/7/2020 10:27:15 PM with a score of 0
its a pretty cute story, brought me depression tho lol
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— leyla on 4/16/2020 12:53:26 PM with a score of 0
Great Job!
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JuniperWinds
on 4/9/2020 12:36:30 PM with a score of 0
wow that was very emotional. Play it!
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— Lewis on 2/22/2020 5:34:15 AM with a score of 0
Waaaaaaaaa!!!!! It’s really really sad.but I really liked it.
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— Poe Rachel on 2/5/2020 6:22:50 PM with a score of 0
Is there any way to avoid her dying?
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— Some0ne on 1/19/2020 8:51:35 AM with a score of 0
O. M. Goodness. I'm literally speechless. Not ONLY is it the best story I have ever read, but it almost freakin, made me cry, and that's VERY hard to do to me when it comes to books. Five stars, but if I could give more it would literally be infinity.
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nOoB_1123
on 12/5/2019 4:07:05 PM with a score of 0
I AM F#COKING CRYING, YOU BEAUTIFUL MOTHERF#CKER
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— Danilo on 11/23/2019 3:15:58 PM with a score of 0
(SLIGHT SPOILER ALERT)
Now I'm here trying to look for a happy ending. Is there even one?
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— Æliph on 11/11/2019 5:22:08 AM with a score of 0
OMG!!! That story is so touching and beautiful.I really enjoyed playing it.I just wanted to say that it was awesome and thx to the people who made this story possible.
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— Jakeria Mcghee on 11/8/2019 1:13:43 PM with a score of 0
Not gonna lie I cried :(
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magc9000
on 10/14/2019 5:20:37 PM with a score of 0
SHE IS A CHILD FUCK FUCK FUCK FUCK
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— Liz on 10/7/2019 9:00:42 PM with a score of 0
I thought your story was beautiful
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— Giancarlo on 9/30/2019 6:31:17 PM with a score of 0
OI AUTHOR-SAN HOW DARE YOU MAKE ME CRY SO MUCH. THERE ARE NO FLUIDS LEFT IN MY BODY I BLAME YOU. WHY DOES IT HURT SO GOOD?!?!?!?!?!!!?
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— Kilpean on 9/25/2019 2:16:16 PM with a score of 0
My last review was short and dumb so let me re-review.
The story was really touching and very very absorbing as I experienced both sad and happy emotions. I generally find "life story" parts of novels and games kind of boring, but this just sucked me in. I truly truly enjoyed reading this.
The artwork was amazing did a fantastic job of depicting the colorful scenes which, though short, were concise and descriptive by themselves. I understand that not all stories have happy endings, but even though this story had a rather sad, it made me smile through my tears, because it had a beautiful conclusion. The ending that touches your heart and ends a long ride with a bit of an abrupt, yet satisfactory stop.
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MeetaCheeta
on 9/20/2019 5:43:04 PM with a score of 0
So touching and so sad. :)
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MeetaCheeta
on 9/20/2019 5:35:51 PM with a score of 0
It was nice. Cute. Not as long as it was made out to be. Gotten a little teary.
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justheretoplayaround
on 9/11/2019 2:54:14 PM with a score of 0
This was such a wonderful and well put-together game. It's not a story I would have normally chosen to play but it had such a high rating, and I was intrigued by it. I think, first of all, when you start with a (mostly) linear game, you're sort of limiting yourself so you have to have to make up for it with really strong writing, charismatic characters, and have that special 'something' that draws your readers in. I think you managed this on all fronts. I think even the parts that could be considered as clichè aren't, really, because I think if clichès are re-told in a satisfactory manner, they aren't clichès. They're just an enjoyable way to read things you might have read in a similar fashion before.
I also think adding in pictures was really smart, from two aspects: (1) drawing is brought up often, so it's important for both the storyline and our main character, because we're seeing the world through his eyes, and (2) the pictures themselves are sort of very light and carefree and joyous, which helps really bring home the sad twist at the end. I also think the alternate ending we can choose at the end was a really, really interesting choice. In that we can suddenly find a way to step away from the story and go 'No thanks, this isn't the story I want to be told', and we're told that it's okay if we want to do that, and we can get something different...but at a price. It's a sweetly brutal way of getting what we want.
I can't actually think of something you could have done to this story to make it better. I'm not saying it's perfect, because nothing is, but it's perfect enough to not make me even notice its flaws, which I think makes it perfect enough!
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cel_larkspur
on 9/10/2019 9:43:03 AM with a score of 0
Absolutely amazing. Keep up the good work. Don't ever stop being yourself. I loved the art. And I finally found the ending where I got to have both Sophia and Sara.
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BrighamOlsen24
on 9/8/2019 1:18:25 PM with a score of 0
good stuff
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— Jacob on 9/6/2019 5:58:43 PM with a score of 0
A cool story
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— Horse r the best on 8/25/2019 12:58:52 AM with a score of 0
It was beautiful. And I liked the ending. You really can't have everything. But life will give you a 2nd chance. Funny how it works.
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PH4N70M
on 8/23/2019 7:38:08 AM with a score of 0
congratulations, you've officially made me despise you. I got every memory, I got every ending, and I got every tear wrung out of me. You punish me for loving her, you punish me for not, you make me wonder, you make me hope that somewhere, somehow in between the countless combinations of choices there is a way. A way to save her, a way to be happy, a way to let myself fall for her. Well there isn't, oh why cruel author, why do you do this to me. Why do you show me every single thing inside of Pandoras box, why do you make me overcome each and every single thing just to reach the bottom and find out that there is no hope?
PS- it's just a story, I know. Still... its like reading the wandering inn all over again
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White_Rose
on 8/12/2019 6:24:04 AM with a score of 0
It was sad and sweet, and just beautiful overall. The art was an amazing touch. An excellent story told in a very unique way.
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castorgreatpoetguy
on 8/8/2019 12:45:54 PM with a score of 0
I can't move. That ending made me feel depressed...
It's amazing. But her death...
It really got to me... I-I have nothing to
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— Pumpkin head on 7/31/2019 2:08:13 AM with a score of 0
Absolutely loved it. Really grasped my attention and curiosity.
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— Anna on 7/15/2019 10:43:48 AM with a score of 0
I just want to say this story was amazing beautiful and very lovely and very sad
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Darkness64
on 6/27/2019 9:37:34 PM with a score of 0
What did you just do to me? Jesus Christ that was a sledgehammer to the feels. Absolutely amazing
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etrow5
on 6/25/2019 11:27:14 PM with a score of 0
good!!!!!
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Paige1151
on 6/23/2019 4:37:09 PM with a score of 0
hmm
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— a dude on 6/20/2019 9:41:23 PM with a score of 0
This was beautiful! The writing flowed so well, and it felt like a John Green novel in terms of equal parts heartbreaking and heartmaking.
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Inkfeather
on 6/18/2019 10:59:08 PM with a score of 0
There should be more romance before she dies
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— Anonymous on 6/18/2019 8:06:06 PM with a score of 0
The story was beautiful, touching and well written. The play of words and especially the no coincidence ending made me cry.
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— Nitin on 6/8/2019 5:52:22 PM with a score of 0
It's so heartwarming! The art is beautiful too.
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Lunar
on 6/7/2019 12:54:06 AM with a score of 0
I love stories like this that have to do with love.
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BrandonMcPhillips
on 6/4/2019 7:26:22 PM with a score of 0
Very good story.
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— ip null on 6/2/2019 8:16:41 AM with a score of 0
Loved it
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EbeeGirlie3
on 5/31/2019 11:44:22 PM with a score of 0
Its sad
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— I on 5/30/2019 10:07:53 PM with a score of 0
Nice
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The_L
on 5/29/2019 2:25:40 AM with a score of 0
This is such a good story :] it was so sad yet so happy at the same time. Sophia...
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— Kit on 5/24/2019 2:20:44 PM with a score of 0
I really enjoyed this game.
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oraclemache
on 5/24/2019 9:15:27 AM with a score of 0
It was the romantic game I ever played?????
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— charlene on 4/30/2019 10:38:11 AM with a score of 0
Such a sad, but albeit that such a beautiful story. I feel as though I'm about to cry having just finished it for the first time. Honestly, at first I didn't think much, but that was before I started the story, due to the lack of a description.
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LelouchKuro
on 4/29/2019 4:56:16 PM with a score of 0
Oh my God I love this story so much I spent a lot of time doing the different choices and I get really sad at the ending every time it's so sad ??????
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— Meghan on 4/27/2019 12:13:44 PM with a score of 0
I feel like it was real...
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— Just Passing Through on 4/15/2019 7:13:37 AM with a score of 0
I really didn't understand their relationship and at times it hinted that she was a child and he was an adult. There wasn't much of a story.
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imbarbsg
on 4/13/2019 4:20:02 PM with a score of 0
WE just got confused alot. my friend thought they were in art class the entire time
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loveadam4evea
on 3/23/2019 10:03:50 PM with a score of 0
its short
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cfcfcfc
on 3/17/2019 11:35:35 PM with a score of 0
Oh crud, that ending took me by surprise. Now I just want to go into a corner and cry. Congrats author.
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InvictusXL
on 3/10/2019 8:17:30 AM with a score of 0
This just made me happy.
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FiaJo
on 3/6/2019 2:18:13 PM with a score of 0
I absolutely loved this story. The reading was great an I loved the ending, even though it was sad.
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Unkindcrab
on 3/1/2019 8:23:53 PM with a score of 0
I loved it, it was super out of this world!
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— nbhenry on 2/28/2019 7:56:51 PM with a score of 0
Followed a different path and it was a MUCH better story. Sorry for my previous dismissive comments!
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— Robert Harrison on 2/21/2019 1:26:10 PM with a score of 0
Sweet story, not much of a plot, no conflict, but sweet
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— Robert Harrison on 2/21/2019 1:12:49 PM with a score of 0
Almost cried almost
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Subtopewds
on 2/15/2019 10:56:55 AM with a score of 0
I'm not crying, YOU'RE CRYING!
Fine... Maybe I'm crying... BUT IT'S ONLY BECAUSE OF THE ONIONS! Well... one person's sad chooseyourownstory is another person's onions...
MY POINT IS THAT THIS IS SAD! Or at least the ending I got!
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— Red Winter on 2/10/2019 5:59:25 PM with a score of 0
boring...
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EmeraldSword
on 2/4/2019 8:41:18 PM with a score of 0
It was really great, a little dark, but kind of joyful
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— 708F on 1/20/2019 10:56:19 AM with a score of 0
It was so short and sad
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— Brooklynn on 1/10/2019 10:45:41 PM with a score of 0
im crying right now!!!!!!!!!!!!
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— betty on 12/19/2018 4:51:19 PM with a score of 0
Cute!
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M_D07
on 11/27/2018 7:25:12 PM with a score of 0
So good! It really gave me the feels. The elegant writing and graceful transitions really made this story pop! Well done!
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— Draco on 11/24/2018 10:41:49 AM with a score of 0
omg this is so sad but amazing at the same time ??????
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— Gavyn on 11/17/2018 5:18:34 PM with a score of 0
Good game. Please make longer with more options to change how storyline goes.
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— Tyler McFadden on 11/14/2018 2:00:54 PM with a score of 0
IM CRYIIIIING
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— David Metcalf on 11/8/2018 8:27:12 PM with a score of 0
3gooood amazing would make more books
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— myka on 11/2/2018 7:33:44 PM with a score of 0
boring NEVER PLAYING again
#shity
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— Emily on 11/2/2018 7:30:13 PM with a score of 0
DX I WANNA CRYYYYYY
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— Swanson on 10/31/2018 3:12:05 AM with a score of 0
OH MY LORD. THIS WAS SO SAD AAAA I LOOOOVE IT
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— PeanutPrincess on 10/25/2018 10:33:06 PM with a score of 0
So cute. Beautiful and really tugs at your heart.
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— Tani on 10/19/2018 7:34:29 PM with a score of 0
Sad. so so sad
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— Player 1 on 10/14/2018 11:23:04 PM with a score of 0
heart breaking
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DaLichKing
on 10/4/2018 10:03:43 AM with a score of 0
Why you make me cry? XD
Beautiful.
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— Tungild on 9/23/2018 1:25:46 PM with a score of 0
Oh my god. What a precious and emotive tale. In such a few short words, I've fallen in love with your characters and felt heart broken at the end. Wonderful story.
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jspringer55
on 8/19/2018 10:42:47 AM with a score of 0
loved it
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— john on 8/16/2018 5:16:42 AM with a score of 0
Did I get the sad ending? because I'm crying
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Anon123
on 8/8/2018 2:59:41 AM with a score of 0
I'm hurt. Emotionally.
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— Eric on 8/6/2018 10:19:30 PM with a score of 0
THAT WAS SO BEAUTIFUL WHAT THE- I loved it so much, wow.
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Seikryn
on 8/3/2018 3:26:44 PM with a score of 0
NOPE DEFINITELY NOT CRYING NOOOOPE.
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— Kitty on 7/23/2018 11:21:19 PM with a score of 0
I cried. This is too good! *Cries*
7/8 for missing some details, but that ending is just so abrupt. I like it.
Keep up the good work, man
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— Delta M. on 6/25/2018 11:05:05 PM with a score of 0
i liked the book a lot! very detailed and thoughtful.
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dreamypotato
on 6/18/2018 9:06:24 PM with a score of 0
story line was confusing but the bittersweet ending wasn't bad
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— kitty on 6/11/2018 11:18:23 PM with a score of 0
This love story was so sweet! The story is just completely heart-warming.
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beakedbird
on 5/28/2018 9:52:13 PM with a score of 0
Oh god I can't, I'm sorry
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Yuhboyanto
on 5/20/2018 6:49:24 PM with a score of 0
It was a bit sad and I really dont reccomend it unless you are looking to cry. Good, heart wrenching writing though. Props to the author. Just... yeh, kind annoyingly sad.
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— Cdawg on 5/14/2018 9:40:32 PM with a score of 0
AWESOME STORY WITH CUTE DRAWINGS I RECOMMEND IT
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— Ember on 4/30/2018 2:16:26 PM with a score of 0
i loved it.
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— Amanda Moore on 4/26/2018 12:35:34 PM with a score of 0
I was confused the whole way pretty much. I never what time I was in, or where I was
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CatholicNinja
on 4/18/2018 8:52:10 PM with a score of 0
really good. I like it.
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Eudster
on 4/17/2018 8:05:01 PM with a score of 0
I love it it was very nice I just loved it its so weird I cant even explain it
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babsher1934
on 4/13/2018 12:24:36 PM with a score of 0
It didn't seem very long. But what I did read was very touching. I could actually feel the love between those two. Wish it was longer tho
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nm13757
on 4/8/2018 10:24:53 PM with a score of 0
It is sad at the end other than that I love it
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pokemon
on 4/6/2018 3:57:40 PM with a score of 0
i loved it and when emily died i cried really long
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— foxy pink on 3/15/2018 8:18:28 PM with a score of 0
This story is actually so beautiful - the pictures only make it even better.
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— Gia on 3/11/2018 6:43:42 AM with a score of 0
best story to cry to
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TryMeHoe
on 3/10/2018 10:32:56 AM with a score of 0
thats simply the best
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— aban on 3/5/2018 2:57:45 AM with a score of 0
AMAZING, I actually teared up :(!!!!!!!! So beautiful too!
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— JohnnyAdams19 on 3/3/2018 7:19:21 AM with a score of 0
now ,i feel empty...
good story though
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— Mo on 3/1/2018 3:18:33 PM with a score of 0
This was a beautiful, touching story. I almost wish it wasn't a storygame so I could read every part of the story, every memory. The writing is so elegant and the story so pure, I already know I'll be reading this again.
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— Taylor on 2/25/2018 10:12:03 PM with a score of 0
I was a little bit confused as to what was going on.
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Aries
on 2/25/2018 12:09:20 AM with a score of 0
I have no response to this except for this. This is beautiful. I cried at the ending. 5 stars! 10 out of 10!
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CarKing19
on 2/20/2018 10:35:05 PM with a score of 0
I Cri
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— Me on 2/20/2018 5:42:19 PM with a score of 0
whyyyyyyyyy this hurts me so much... thank you making this wonderful game! It's so sad but I love it anyway <3
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— Evan on 2/19/2018 5:05:37 PM with a score of 0
SO Sad but so beautiful
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— Vinzenz on 2/19/2018 2:45:47 PM with a score of 0
THIS IS SO SAAAD!!!
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CarKing19
on 2/17/2018 12:59:29 PM with a score of 0
heart breaking
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— some random person on 2/10/2018 4:55:32 PM with a score of 0
It was sentimental but human
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— dante on 2/10/2018 4:50:46 PM with a score of 0
This was a true masterpiece, it's so unique and unbelievably beautiful.
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Rachael
on 2/10/2018 4:19:24 AM with a score of 0
Not expecting that! This is great!
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HexBolt0505
on 2/6/2018 1:14:23 PM with a score of 0
GOOD JOB. thing is, it was a bit short...... anyways i <3 it!
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— Pearl on 2/3/2018 9:51:29 AM with a score of 0
o u c h
that hurt but hey I'm used to pain
good story
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— anonymous on 1/31/2018 1:26:50 AM with a score of 0
Sad
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— Bob on 1/28/2018 6:08:56 PM with a score of 0
A very sweet story that is so sad at the end. I played through a few times, to see all the different memories the POV character has. The pictures are beautiful, with lots of detail. But like I said; very sad. Sophia is very sick, and you had to choose at the end who will stay. Pretty much choosing favorites.
In the end I chose to pay the price to save Sophia.
It is even more sad if you play it again, even if you choose different paths, because you know of the choice you have to make at the end.
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BunnyCatMouse99100
on 1/24/2018 7:17:36 PM with a score of 0
This made me cry, everytime I read it.
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Cooter_1a
on 1/22/2018 5:45:12 PM with a score of 0
This was such a touching story with such beautiful art. I could read it over and over. :) Good job.
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HourglassRose
on 1/18/2018 12:26:34 AM with a score of 0
It was very short, but almost made my cry. Almost.
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Haine
on 1/7/2018 11:08:54 AM with a score of 0
it's alright :/
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— BlameNight on 1/2/2018 3:39:07 PM with a score of 0
This story is one of the most thoughtful and heart-wrenching i've ever read!
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Creepyguy735
on 12/27/2017 9:45:39 PM with a score of 0
Sad emotional but nice I love it
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— Emma on 12/15/2017 3:24:01 AM with a score of 0
This is beautiful...
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3iguy
on 12/8/2017 8:43:39 PM with a score of 0
Our hearts are broken.
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— Anesu and hiba on 12/4/2017 11:01:28 AM with a score of 0
It was severely depressing based on how I comprehended it...
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— Leilani on 12/2/2017 8:13:05 PM with a score of 0
This was amazing. I have never seen such heartfelt writing. The way the two loved each other from the beginning was amazing. The ending is a bit chiche, but great nonetheless. Purely a great work of art.
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— Fimredylu on 12/1/2017 8:02:04 PM with a score of 0
very sad
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— Supertick on 11/29/2017 6:31:18 AM with a score of 0
Read this five years ago. Read it again today. Even more beautiful and heartfelt than I remembered. Perfect for getting intensely depressed over.
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Doodled
on 11/28/2017 7:32:43 PM with a score of 0
Kind of sad
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— Azuan on 11/25/2017 3:14:26 AM with a score of 0
I started tearing up in the end..
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— Jada on 11/16/2017 4:47:55 PM with a score of 0
Not bad...
Just weird really
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— Ali on 10/28/2017 7:21:13 AM with a score of 0
It was really sad. I couldn't help but feel the story, not read it. In a way I think this story can be relatable how in life, you mistreat this special thing and when it's gone, you die inside.
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CrystalSnow
on 9/30/2017 11:58:19 PM with a score of 0
I absolutely loved this story. It was very creative and I liked how each scene is different from the next. It was very sad though how she died in the end. But then it is normally sad when the love of someones life dies. Keep up the good work and I would love to check out any other stories you create.
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hblovecraft
on 9/21/2017 6:17:00 PM with a score of 0
Oh my god that was amazing
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mrawesomer4
on 9/21/2017 2:18:32 PM with a score of 0
TT~TT
No... Gosh damnit. NO. Ugh... Why...? Argh! No, damnit! No...
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Griseo
on 9/12/2017 7:48:24 PM with a score of 0
It was aright, nothing about the story seemed linear or connected. I get that its a chose your own whatever but it didn't really seem like all one story too me. It was cute, cliche, and felt a bit satisfactory. You know what you're going into and it delivers.
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DefsNotClare
on 9/9/2017 3:25:52 AM with a score of 0
so sad
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Raven123
on 9/6/2017 6:51:44 PM with a score of 0
I found it hard to follow, it almost seemed like the scenes were written to fit the illustrations and sort of stitched together to create a story... there was nothing that really captured my attention or made me feel anything.
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Lmpyspcprincess
on 8/21/2017 10:43:06 PM with a score of 0
This IS a really sad interactive story and the artwork IS nice and I DO recommend it. However, it felt like it was pushing the sadness in your face - it wasn't natural enough. And I felt it was so shallow, droning on about how beautiful Sophia was...
Despite these flaws, though, I found myself enjoying the story and actually feeling (for the first time in my life) a bit saddened.
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QueenOfSpades
on 8/16/2017 4:22:12 AM with a score of 0
This story would look better as a short story than an interactive novel.
Don't get me wrong. The writing is really good and so are the illustrations, it makes you want to check all the option to enjoy it thoroughly.
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— Af on 8/8/2017 7:54:57 AM with a score of 0
I did not get it at all.
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— Bethan on 8/5/2017 9:16:22 AM with a score of 0
That is sooooo SAD!!!! :`(
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Dark_Storm
on 8/1/2017 3:45:08 AM with a score of 0
Less of a story or game and more of a collection of barely-connected scenes. There are no real "choices," you're just selecting the which snippet to read next, most of the time with no context to clue you in to what you're deciding. The writing is also a bit weak, with several confusing changes of tense (often from one sentence to the next). That being said, the inclusion of art was a neat touch. Overall, I'd say skip this one.
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hexgurl
on 7/27/2017 9:23:25 PM with a score of 0
Feels
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— Meep on 7/18/2017 8:45:41 PM with a score of 0
Damn dude
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XerxesXD
on 7/14/2017 1:29:11 AM with a score of 0
This was soooo good! Good thing is there was two chances to choose a good and a bad.
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— Elisa Zhang on 7/10/2017 7:38:27 PM with a score of 0
I like their interaction with each other. I feel so happy reading this. Thanks stranger!
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— John on 7/1/2017 8:31:37 AM with a score of 0
why would you do this to :'(
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— Tsubaki on 6/26/2017 4:30:05 AM with a score of 0
Heartwarming
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— Tom on 6/19/2017 10:06:19 PM with a score of 0
;-; so BEUTIFUL
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Hoopy
on 6/15/2017 7:40:26 AM with a score of 0
Wow, that was so sad, how is this in the romance section? it should be in the "Make you Cry" section..anyway really great story, loved the pictures, it felt like I was watching a movie. Good Job!
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ImTooHot2Die
on 6/9/2017 7:21:18 PM with a score of 0
While very much a touching artful experience, the choices had much to be desired.
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Calicovall
on 6/8/2017 12:43:16 PM with a score of 0
It makes me cried.:,(
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— Azuan on 6/6/2017 12:57:12 AM with a score of 0
The illustration were amazing! They added so much depth to the story. The story was simple and sweet. I wish the decisions had a greater impact on the ending though.
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— Kirsten on 6/1/2017 7:00:43 PM with a score of 0
A great story, emotionally moving, I would rate 7/8 just because it was kind of hard to follow, one second I'm in my room holding a turtle, the next I am under water... Otherwise it was an amazing story :D
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GamertheNoobzYT
on 5/25/2017 9:39:22 AM with a score of 0
Wow, I absolutely loved this story! So sad yet do enjoyable, I could feel the love the two characters felt for each other. You couldn't have done a better job!
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— Anonymous on 5/8/2017 1:29:18 PM with a score of 0
this game made me cry. well done.
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— erii on 4/19/2017 12:59:23 PM with a score of 0
Great story
But still great story was beatiful
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— Lukas Larson on 4/12/2017 2:35:54 AM with a score of 0
It was a very beautiful story. The only criticism I would add is that it felt too short and there wasn't enough of an emotional investment into the character. It was easy to see from nearly the beginning of the story where the end would fall, so the constant foreshadowing made it hard to feel too upset by the end. The images were beautiful and added a lot to it, making it more enjoyable to go through. Another nice element is that the length of each page was good being pretty short and easy to digest. Though, I really do wish there was more length and emotional heaviness to the overall piece. It would take it from being a pretty good piece, to an amazing one.
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SweetSkeletons
on 4/10/2017 5:12:58 AM with a score of 0
Very good story
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— GMAN C on 4/6/2017 10:01:29 AM with a score of 0
omg that was AMAZING!!!
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— SophiaDaSavage on 3/28/2017 8:34:03 PM with a score of 0
Every time better than the last
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Burnty52
on 3/27/2017 11:39:46 PM with a score of 0
Absolutely lovely...
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Burnty52
on 3/27/2017 11:17:46 PM with a score of 0
good
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lyonadr
on 3/27/2017 11:09:01 AM with a score of 0
While I would have preferred to read this in the form a novel, great read neverthless
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Yashamaru
on 3/21/2017 11:21:15 PM with a score of 0
this story broke my heart over and over and over again. it was beautifully made and definitely the best story i have read.
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— Nick K. on 3/19/2017 1:21:36 AM with a score of 0
VERY EMOTIONAL STORY.
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— Screener on 3/17/2017 5:31:13 PM with a score of 0
Made me feel deeply. Great job!
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— New Text Document on 3/9/2017 1:56:34 AM with a score of 0
Even though it was a little typical, I still liked the ending I ended up with :)
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— Emilie on 3/8/2017 4:00:34 AM with a score of 0
Sad. Some grammar errors. Very sweet story. :'-(
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Quorrah
on 3/5/2017 1:31:11 PM with a score of 0
I remember playing this game when i was a kid. Back when my small brain couldn't comprehend things like this, beautiful stories of romance. Now i'm just a teenager but playing this again, I can appreciate and understand it a lot better. Each ending is touching in its own way. Thanks for making such a quality story
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issy18
on 3/3/2017 7:28:35 AM with a score of 0
It was a beautiful premise but I wish there was more of it. It's hard to immerse yourself in something so short. And it felt sort of incomplete and disconnected. And almost contrived.
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— themorelovingone on 2/24/2017 1:14:43 PM with a score of 0
so sad but so interesting, reality like
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ladyhawk
on 2/18/2017 2:41:25 PM with a score of 0
i swear, i am so sad that i am crying bu the touching ending....couldnt it be something like they get together forever....stiilllll that best
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— sabah faez on 2/14/2017 1:51:00 PM with a score of 0
It was always me indeed...
It's amazing to see the Sophia-type girl in many of the love and dating storygames around here. Playful, bit mischievous, with that angelic innocence. I don't know why it's that frequent. Maybe because that IS the girl of many boys' dreams?
Going back to the story, you produced some very great work here. There was this general feeling of well-concealed sadness, even in the happy parts. But just like Snow, it's not forced. You use happy dialogue in a way which makes the damn thing sad as Harambe's death.
Only thing which kept this from being my most favorite love storygame, though, are the pictures. I do agree they give the whole thing some ambience and enhance the experience, just like others who have commented, I did not like the pictures, mainly because they are not my type of picture usage. I prefer the naturalistic take of Snow.
But in the end, it's a good game, worth your time and worth your cents.
6/8.
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AgentX
on 2/4/2017 9:01:32 AM with a score of 0
When you make a grown man cry, You know how to write meaningful drama. I Just had teary eyes at work... So sad...
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lejama88
on 2/2/2017 2:40:12 AM with a score of 0
I cried so hard. "It was you. It was always you." NOOO!
WAH. Love ya Soph ;)
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— Julie on 1/31/2017 2:50:00 PM with a score of 0
All the endings are kinda sad
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The0menof2000
on 1/28/2017 1:30:47 PM with a score of 0
I think the story was great. It was beautiful, and the story had great writing. Great job and keep writing!
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— Minnie J. on 1/28/2017 11:11:09 AM with a score of 0
I loved loved the story
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— Christina on 1/16/2017 3:03:24 PM with a score of 0
omg i cried at the end
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koolkatkid
on 1/4/2017 1:05:01 AM with a score of 0
I had to wait to finish because I couldn't read through my tears. It was so beautiful and sad!
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Orange
on 1/1/2017 10:55:40 PM with a score of 0
Really sad. Wished for more and maybe moving on etc. Reallytearful. A bit cliche but yah..
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Melaniebl2000
on 1/1/2017 1:46:07 PM with a score of 0
Beautiful
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— Larry on 12/27/2016 3:02:11 AM with a score of 0
This is a very good story, every single ending was amassing.
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— Lily on 12/24/2016 9:13:05 PM with a score of 0
Its soooo sad
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GenerationAlezz
on 12/24/2016 7:49:48 AM with a score of 0
I was pleased but the ending was sad.
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— stella on 12/23/2016 2:28:05 PM with a score of 0
This made me cry! T-T Great job!
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— Nonna on 12/23/2016 1:49:04 AM with a score of 0
GREAT!
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— Rayne on 12/10/2016 9:38:59 PM with a score of 0
I was playing this in math class today and I started crying. It was so amazing!!!
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— Jena on 12/8/2016 5:40:04 PM with a score of 0
That was so amazing and was so terribly sad...
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RavenAsakura
on 12/6/2016 8:56:44 PM with a score of 0
First, amazing illustrations. I love the anime/manga artstyle and how your choices would change Sophia's hair.
It was such a breathtaking journey, going from page to page following the characters' life from their childhood moments to maturity. The bittersweet feeling you get after that foreseeable twist was pretty awful.
Yet I still liked it very much.
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PRONTO3000
on 12/3/2016 4:03:55 AM with a score of 0
Great story. I cried in the end.
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— MiN on 12/2/2016 6:11:31 AM with a score of 0
It almost brought me to tears. I guess sometimes we need something like this in our life
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— Admin~kun on 11/29/2016 10:14:35 PM with a score of 0
I think it'll get you to understand and fell love and also life and how we sometimes lose loved ones but we got to learn to let go. I thoroughly enjoined it!
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— Vic on 11/26/2016 2:20:08 AM with a score of 0
I'm not a regular to the site, and honestly only found my way to your story by a mixture of coincidence and boredom. I wanted you to know that this was beautiful. It left me touched and a little melancholic, thank you for writing it :)
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— Zane on 11/25/2016 6:01:58 PM with a score of 0
this was the dumbest thing ever
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— jkjjk on 11/23/2016 11:34:13 PM with a score of 0
Nice, I like the artwork (:
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— Ozzy on 11/19/2016 11:40:42 AM with a score of 0
amazing
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rusaku
on 11/15/2016 4:07:10 AM with a score of 0
not interactie enough, tets ae too long
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— Sara on 11/14/2016 5:52:09 PM with a score of 0
Amazing, but so sad i cried
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— Jenna on 11/13/2016 3:21:24 PM with a score of 0
It was kinda confusing at times, but really great overall
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— Fishy on 10/30/2016 3:04:07 AM with a score of 0
So heart wrenching.
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KyleOken
on 10/30/2016 1:06:26 AM with a score of 0
Beautiful game, I cried :(
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— Ryan on 10/29/2016 1:46:19 AM with a score of 0
The ending... it's so sad. I loved it! There were a few typos here and there, but overall a really beautiful story. Short and quick, but still really made me cry. Real masterpiece. I'd read it over and over, but I need to get to some other stories! Don't stop writing!
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Weeaboo
on 10/28/2016 6:21:38 PM with a score of 0
This is way too emotional for me. I can't deal with this sort of stuff, but it was so good it forced me to keep reading till the end.
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Watan
on 10/24/2016 1:56:01 PM with a score of 0
Why is it so FREAKING sad. :'(
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— Anonymous on 10/21/2016 5:44:09 AM with a score of 0
While I would have preferred to read this in the form a novel, the story was great. :)
But in all seriousness, this could be an awesome book, if only you'd write it.
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ClearlyUnfocused
on 10/20/2016 5:17:48 PM with a score of 0
i have read this story and it's so good, it makes me sad
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— baron on 10/19/2016 8:39:12 AM with a score of 0
Great story
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— Erik Marks on 10/14/2016 2:06:40 PM with a score of 0
Ahhh, this was so adorable! It was so open and well-written that it felt like It seemed like almost anything could've happened. If that made sense.
Anyways, I really loved it!
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hearmeowt
on 10/12/2016 6:56:18 PM with a score of 0
Beautiful story. Rating this 1 was really more apt -- stay far, far away from this story if you don't want the feels. I had to play this so many times just to read every single page.
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ndisisnd
on 10/11/2016 11:05:08 AM with a score of 0
it's So Sweet!
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OneOnlyWillow
on 10/10/2016 1:13:45 PM with a score of 0
ToT OMG, such a great story. Even if I could feel what was coming from the first page, the whole story was enlightening. The only reason I don't praise you more is because I'm afraid of spoiling!
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Izzysaurus
on 10/9/2016 4:48:05 PM with a score of 0
I hate the person who told me to read this, it made me cry in only .2 seconds. This story is beautiful and tugs on your heart strings at every single turn of the story. Well done!
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SkylarLayne
on 10/7/2016 11:10:07 PM with a score of 0
I'm too deep into depression to read this safely, but I don't even care anymore. This story is beautiful, and it had me right since the beginning. I hate that either Sophia or the the child must die, and I hate myself for what I chose. Well, either way I would hate myself, but you know how it is (or not, I don't know). It's very well written, and obviously a top storygame on the site, so I'm glad it my first one to read. Please write more stories!
Green eyed girl, why are you crying?
Did the world treat you badly enough to feel like dying?
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Naomi14
on 10/6/2016 11:36:47 PM with a score of 0
I cried like a baby... absolutely lovely.
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— Arthur on 10/4/2016 4:35:44 PM with a score of 0
</3 I should not be playing this in my depressed state but you're evil and made this magnificent story game and I just don't know how I'm going to live with myself. WHAT HAVE YOU DONE?
This story slays my life. :)
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Kingler1140
on 9/29/2016 8:36:49 PM with a score of 0
Feels are not aloud silly
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— JayXstick on 9/27/2016 9:46:32 PM with a score of 0
The pictures are great and add a lot of emotion but it's jarring how you constantly mix past and present tense, even sometimes in the same sentence. Also, I found the story hard to understand in parts since you go for that "is it a dream or isn't it?" approach at times. Overall, pretty good, and definitely one of the best CYAs on this site
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— lemnlime on 9/22/2016 8:52:24 PM with a score of 0
One of the most heartbreaking story that I have read. I love how there are Illustrations which makes the story more alive. The ending never fails to fill my heart with sorrow
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LSMorningstar
on 9/22/2016 5:22:11 AM with a score of 0
Oh my God I loved it so much, when she died, I was crying.m This is so beautiful.
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RSBubblegum
on 9/17/2016 7:44:47 AM with a score of 0
The first time I saved the daughter, the next time the mother... So hard to choose!
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0000562
on 9/16/2016 10:42:53 AM with a score of 0
so sad but good :)
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0000562
on 9/16/2016 10:34:57 AM with a score of 0
Really sad story, really makes me feel for these 2 characters. I can't actually see the pictures, but I bet they looked great, loved your style of writing, there were a few grammar mistakes when it came to actual spelling, but it did not take away from the story.
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Shinobi
on 9/14/2016 12:56:33 PM with a score of 0
I cried. That's all. Bye
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— Billy Mays on 9/6/2016 8:50:51 PM with a score of 0
Please give this story a try, Im telling you you won't regret it. This story is absolutely beautiful
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— Marvin on 8/18/2016 11:54:53 PM with a score of 0
So I found that one ending...that one ending where she stayed alive...I have been searching for this ending for years. I am satisfied.
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At_Your_Throat
on 8/13/2016 10:40:19 PM with a score of 0
It was a beautiful and emotional game. I loved it so much. The drawings were also nice.
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— Olivia on 8/7/2016 6:30:31 PM with a score of 0
I was finally able to save her..
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— Abbie on 7/25/2016 9:20:31 PM with a score of 0
A sad but sweet story. Well written with very few spelling or grammatical errors.
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BigRonn77
on 7/25/2016 10:11:07 AM with a score of 0
Best story I've read
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helennike3
on 7/15/2016 10:34:58 PM with a score of 0
MY FEELZ YOU TOOK THEM ALL!!!!!
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— H-manFTW on 7/12/2016 10:28:05 PM with a score of 0
really sad
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— khriss on 7/6/2016 2:43:20 AM with a score of 0
I saved both. Yay!
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— Girl America on 7/3/2016 11:00:53 PM with a score of 0
I absolutely loved this story. The illustrations were great and the story really sucked you in. 10/10.
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japaneseanimelover
on 7/2/2016 7:31:24 PM with a score of 0
Would like to have seen more passionate scenes.
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— Carlie on 6/26/2016 4:45:34 PM with a score of 0
I almost cried 10/10 game
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— gamer god on 6/24/2016 3:50:15 AM with a score of 0
I got the 'Her Last Memory' ending. Beautiful, clever writing and a simple, yet powerful, story. The foreshadowing was brilliantly executed; just enough to clue me in vaguely without really giving anything away, and plenty more to reflect on once the story concluded. 8/8
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sark
on 6/22/2016 1:08:12 AM with a score of 0
Just.... wow. I'm left speechless. This is beautiful, every word. And the art is gorgeous. Such a beautiful story.
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— Drakion on 6/21/2016 7:47:40 PM with a score of 0
Such a touching story. I enjoyed reading it and even shed a tear at the end. The anime pictures are also a great addition. I just wished there were epilogues but the story still worked great without it.
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— ekekekekekekek on 6/13/2016 12:13:40 PM with a score of 0
So sad??
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— Flamewebbing12345 on 6/9/2016 9:47:41 PM with a score of 0
AHH!!! So sad and good. Oh my gosh. I really like how it was long but each slide didn't take forever to read. So AMAZING!! ????????
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— Samantha on 6/4/2016 10:49:09 AM with a score of 0
It was quick
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— :( on 6/1/2016 5:51:39 PM with a score of 0
This was depressing as shit. Amazing stuff
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gamebruh
on 5/28/2016 3:57:07 PM with a score of 0
Incredibly deep yet light as a dream...
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MikeGordon1900
on 5/25/2016 5:04:31 PM with a score of 0
I cried. Three times. In a row. I think I read this too many times.
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CrazyCat
on 5/21/2016 1:21:50 AM with a score of 0
This story is truly amazing, never before in
my life did I think that a story could capture my heart. The plot is gorgeous relying heavily on self reflection and your inner self. It feels as though you and the protagonist are one in the same, truly tying this entire story together. You will smile, laugh, and cry, as this story's plot puts you on a roller coaster of emotion. After the ending I don't know whether to punch the author, hug them, or stand up and applaud. This story will truly make you a better person after reading, it makes you appreciate so much in life, that we take for granted.
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— Brody on 5/20/2016 8:24:47 AM with a score of 0
SUCH A SAD ENDING BUT SOOO CUTE!!! ;-;-;-;
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— ;-; on 5/17/2016 6:10:29 PM with a score of 0
A great story overall, but really sad at the end
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Sierra117
on 5/14/2016 11:13:11 PM with a score of 0
It's the best romantic story I've ever read.
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helia
on 5/13/2016 5:06:10 AM with a score of 0
A very sad and beautiful story.
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Read4Ever
on 5/7/2016 1:20:49 AM with a score of 0
It made me cry, but it was a very good story, *thumbs up*
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Zeraphina
on 5/4/2016 2:41:40 AM with a score of 0
tis story got me lost someone explain waste of time
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— olivia on 5/3/2016 5:42:39 PM with a score of 0
WHAT NO NO NO IT CANT END LIKE THAT
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— Emma Schuren on 4/26/2016 6:00:44 PM with a score of 0
Really good story.(I had to do it multiple times to understand the story.) I dealt liked all the endings.
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— Reader on 4/26/2016 5:59:42 PM with a score of 0
This was so beautiful, it made me cry. In a good way of course, this story doesn't disappoint with the feels.
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TharaApples
on 4/24/2016 12:02:00 PM with a score of 0
This story really had a giant effect on me. It made me sad, and I had to hold back my tears. Good job! I wish I could've made a story like that. Good job, really good job. It was definitely worth staying up so late to read
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DrkPhoenix
on 4/24/2016 3:11:31 AM with a score of 0
this was so sad, i cried, why did you have to make me so sad!
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Karateprincezzz
on 4/20/2016 4:36:49 AM with a score of 0
asome story loved it i got all the endings it was hard to decide you to save your daughter or sophia even though the daughter would die if you save sopiah. to bad you could only choose one i saved sophia what a sad sad story. loved the details everyone should read it
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— Samuel on 4/17/2016 1:21:58 PM with a score of 0
Damn,the feels really get to you, could use a bit more length tho IMHO
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— Rhys on 3/27/2016 8:30:36 AM with a score of 0
This is making me cry it is so god dam sad Why did that have to happen WHY (This reminds me of something real) A girl that I knew since childhood I married at the age of 20 and I divorced at the age of 21
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— James on 3/21/2016 11:33:01 PM with a score of 0
This is a beautiful story I loved it but I was quite sad when she had to die I like storys where they end up falling in love forever...but other than that this is a beautiful story
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— Lauren on 3/12/2016 11:06:27 AM with a score of 0
Oh my god, this was amazing. It hurt to read in the best way possible.
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— Jay on 3/11/2016 2:57:28 AM with a score of 0
;-; This was extremely depressing.
Take it as a compliment, it looks like your goal was to evoke feelings of sadness.
It did.
It truly did.
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NinaFrances
on 3/7/2016 10:52:21 PM with a score of 0
I quite like it, especially the art... It's really gorgeous ! It's emotional and simple... But that's it, it ain't deep or long enough. Although I'm sure that the story CAN be expanded, it doesn't mean that the author fails to give the readers... that soft, fuzzy, and warm sensation in their chest, in fact its impressive how this story can deliver such feelings with such a short story.
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— Feather Steel on 3/1/2016 4:53:11 AM with a score of 0
It's a bit sad but really nice. Played over and over. ^ ^,
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ems5a33
on 2/29/2016 6:26:51 AM with a score of 0
it is a good game orvallral
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Darkdavid1212
on 2/19/2016 5:06:19 PM with a score of 0
it was so heart taking towards the end when u choose the path without Sophia and it's so beautiful
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— john on 2/19/2016 1:02:04 AM with a score of 0
so said soooo said
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— sharon grinder on 2/18/2016 1:17:33 PM with a score of 0
That was so sweet. *sniffle sniffle* I'm so sad and happy now. You're a great writer.
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Papyrus_The_Grape
on 2/15/2016 1:06:19 PM with a score of 0
My wife and I went through this adventure together. We laughed at some parts cause the descriptions felt like our relationship in places. We both thought it was a well thought out story with an amazing progression. It would be nice if the typos could be fixed. We enjoyed reading this together very much. Thank you.
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— M&D on 2/6/2016 10:33:49 PM with a score of 0
The love of my life happens to be diagnosed with cancer and has been my best friend for years. I could feel so connected to this story and although it pained me and I cried profusely....I loved every minute of this. It was fitting too that she loved the water because well so does the one I love. 10/10 would cry manly tears again
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— CK on 2/5/2016 4:07:42 PM with a score of 0
In the beginning you could somehow explain that the MC is watching a movie this way its not confusing, but other than that its a touching story.
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Bull4
on 1/31/2016 8:47:08 AM with a score of 0
Few stories invoke as much emotion as this one. Beautiful.
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— A reader on 1/30/2016 3:52:56 AM with a score of 0
TEARS..
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— FN 2199 on 1/28/2016 11:51:39 AM with a score of 0
Simply a masterpiece, not that much into all this manga/anime stuff, but this time I was really drawn to it, beautifully put together, loved every word.
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kut52
on 1/26/2016 4:01:50 PM with a score of 0
IMMA GO CRY NOW
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— WAH on 1/21/2016 6:17:20 PM with a score of 0
Super sweet! And heartbreaking! Love the art - it definitely brought the story to life!
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— MAten on 1/15/2016 11:20:44 AM with a score of 0
;-; so sad :'(
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tgy453
on 1/13/2016 9:10:23 PM with a score of 0
Really awesome, but I got attached to Sophia and almost cried.
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— Catalina on 1/12/2016 7:02:33 PM with a score of 0
God, oh, god! Writing near perfect. Why'd you do this to me OP?!
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— Dylan on 1/9/2016 11:40:03 AM with a score of 0
This was a great dyd game i loved it so much do you have anymore rpg's
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— rayne on 12/29/2015 5:27:13 PM with a score of 0
Ahh! Bittersweet :(
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— Snowdust on 12/25/2015 1:53:56 AM with a score of 0
Sniff...so touching! Is there a way to save both Sophia and the child?
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— Miss Taylor swift #1fan on 12/24/2015 2:23:18 AM with a score of 0
honestly one of the best reads on this site!! 5 out of 5!! this story is truly one of a kind!! i could happily spend hours reading this.
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— rebecca on 12/21/2015 3:59:10 PM with a score of 0
A really hearwarming story <3
I'll admit, I actually felt tears prick my eyes at the end. It was a lovely and outstanding story.
8/8 :)
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Shadowulf
on 12/20/2015 6:54:19 PM with a score of 0
PLEASE, IF THERE IS A WAY TO SAVE BOTH THE CHILD AND SOPHIA, PLEASE TELL ME SO ;-;
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Andreas
on 12/18/2015 9:26:32 AM with a score of 0
I cried
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— byron on 12/16/2015 7:20:23 AM with a score of 0
good
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MrBooks
on 12/11/2015 3:01:39 PM with a score of 0
I played this with my girlfriend and the was so sad afterward. It made me tear up a bit.
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— Ethan on 11/13/2015 9:51:56 PM with a score of 0
COOOLEEEST STORY EVER! After 1 year of Going ALL through the choices SOPHIA and the main character lived!!!!!! My ending is that SOPHIA DID NOT DIE!!!!! Yahoooooo!
Arigatogozamsu!!!!! I can sleep without feeling a heartbreak now!!!! Whooo
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— Katie Shiyawasenya on 11/12/2015 8:18:28 AM with a score of 0
Wow, I love the story. It just makes me think of questions like: Are there any other stories that you have created? Does the protagonist{not Sophia} have a name? Or did I just miss something? Does this have a main story? or you create the story? Anyway, this story is a masterpiece. But still keeps me asking lots of questions. :D
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aspxander
on 11/9/2015 10:20:59 PM with a score of 0
Honestly, I really liked this story. There were some typos in it, but overall it was enjoyable.
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shadowstar
on 10/24/2015 10:35:12 AM with a score of 0
You're making me want to cry. I do not enjoy that feeling.
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BlackEpidemic
on 10/23/2015 5:03:45 PM with a score of 0
damn this is some SAAADDD
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— Alyssa on 10/19/2015 3:30:31 PM with a score of 0
That ending! It was so amazing and it gave so much feels!
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Shade
on 9/25/2015 1:19:55 PM with a score of 0
Awesome!!! <3
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— Anime_Lover on 9/11/2015 7:21:08 AM with a score of 0
Spoiler Warning. Quickly scroll or try to unsee it.
I really loved this and my ending is when the kid dies and Sophia lives on. I don't wanna have kids anyways xD
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— Davis2Nguyen on 9/8/2015 12:38:37 AM with a score of 0
The feels have struck again. Excuse me while I go bawl my eyes out.
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— Kiljaz on 9/7/2015 4:41:46 PM with a score of 0
Very sad at the end for me....
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— ***** on 9/6/2015 8:08:46 PM with a score of 0
Oh my god I'm crying.
I NEVER cry.
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— DeathWhisperer on 9/4/2015 5:30:36 PM with a score of 0
FUKEN AMAZING READ IT A BILLION TIMES AND IT STILL BRINGS ME TO tears
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— Mario Luu on 9/2/2015 9:36:47 PM with a score of 0
The story is deep with romance. Twisted ending that brings you to tears. One of the best romantic and dramatic story I've ever encountered. The art style is simply beautiful giving the reader a idea of how the characters may look like.
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— Mario Luu on 9/2/2015 12:08:26 PM with a score of 0
love it
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41610cutie
on 8/29/2015 6:17:40 PM with a score of 0
I really enjoyed the depth of this story and most of the endings nearly brought tears to my eyes. But... What exactly was wrong with Sophia? Did she have cancer or something? If that could've been explained better I'd give this story full stars.
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MidnightPhoenix
on 8/22/2015 11:51:55 PM with a score of 0
This is a truly beautiful game. It has the perfect mix of happy and sad moments to make it feel like life. If you haven't played this and want to truly experience this wonderful feeling that is love, then I highly recommend you play this.
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— Ethan on 8/1/2015 9:39:24 AM with a score of 0
That was sad in the end but it was good.
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— Billy on 7/26/2015 9:20:09 PM with a score of 0
Was good do storys like that again
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— Maya on 7/26/2015 8:14:03 PM with a score of 0
It was a good story. I only gave it this reating because after reading game of thrones it's hard for something like this to make you cry.
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— Rose on 7/25/2015 7:23:45 PM with a score of 0
Fantastic writing! But I wanted to cry.
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Warriorstar
on 7/24/2015 1:26:13 AM with a score of 0
My only complaint is that I can't read more of your stories.
I loved the art and the story managed to make me sad but in a good way.
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Drakoblare
on 7/23/2015 6:37:05 PM with a score of 0
THIS IS AMAZINGGG
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— Heather on 7/21/2015 6:19:55 AM with a score of 0
Beautiful game, almost in tears :')
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— xBunnyx on 7/19/2015 4:49:18 AM with a score of 0
great it was awesome
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freeloader
on 7/17/2015 7:46:23 AM with a score of 0
This story is amazing and sad and... oh, so many other things! This is great. Beautiful. Wonderful. Keep up the good work and keep breaking my heart... I'm getting sappy aren't I...
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GMB13carat
on 7/13/2015 11:24:10 AM with a score of 0
Crying the whole way. It's confusing with spunk.
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GiraffeDino
on 7/11/2015 6:51:15 PM with a score of 0
This was pretty good. I enjoyed it!
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Groomer593
on 7/7/2015 7:50:27 PM with a score of 0
I loved this. The art, the sad story, every single part of it. It's sad and happy at the same time.
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OceansAndSparks
on 6/22/2015 3:58:03 PM with a score of 0
Omg I absolutely adored this! Its amazing I actu cried! And tbh I replayed it over and over again hoping their was a way to save her:( overall the story was fantastic even though you played with my emotions XD
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— kianna on 6/19/2015 2:49:11 AM with a score of 0
That is so sad but the sweetest thing i have ever read.... Great Job!
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SeaFox_Blu
on 6/17/2015 9:10:43 PM with a score of 0
This story is really good, did you draw the pictures yourself? They are amazing... :) :) :)
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— :) on 6/6/2015 5:31:19 PM with a score of 0
I hope you like dying internally, and wanting to punch both yourself and the author in the gut. If so?? This story is for you!!
It's also probably the story for you if you like sweet little moments, little every day occurances that are still very well written and feel real.
The story itself is a little disorganized and hard to follow, and it ends up coming off more as little snapshot memories than a coherent storyline. This can be good or bad depending on your tastes. The story itself, however, is excellent when you've actually gotten a handle on what exactly it's about. I'd say it's definitely worth reading, and even re-reading to read each little tidbit.
It's well worth the time.
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— Raiyenn on 6/1/2015 9:00:33 PM with a score of 0
This was a wonderful story and made me cry at the end ive only played once so i hope i can get a happy ending
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— sad on 5/30/2015 10:18:04 PM with a score of 0
Kinda good confusing though
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goldenstar
on 5/25/2015 9:08:45 PM with a score of 0
Wow....beautiful
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OmegaKillerKris
on 5/25/2015 7:12:45 PM with a score of 0
It's such a happy but sad tale...I nearly cried at the end. It's great though!
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— John Smithy on 5/25/2015 4:22:02 AM with a score of 0
That was so beautiful and so sad, I swear I'm tearing up! It was a really amazing story, and the characters were pretty fantabulous. I loved it all the way!
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— Maraa_cruzi on 5/24/2015 2:18:31 PM with a score of 0
I thought this was a creative, and fun story. The ecstatic behavior of the characters was enjoying to see, though the story line was a little unclear. I wouldn't play this again based off the jumbled story line, but I do recommend this to people who haven't played it before.
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— someone on 5/23/2015 11:20:33 AM with a score of 0
Another beautifully sad story
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Mrmoglin
on 5/22/2015 10:50:03 AM with a score of 0
Noooooooooooo!! The Best..! My Heart hurt..A Lot!
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— Xender96 on 5/17/2015 3:27:33 AM with a score of 0
that was sad... why did she have to die... does it end like that in everyway possible....
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— lilian joan on 5/14/2015 5:39:57 PM with a score of 0
I do in fact hope that you might make sequel to this... I have read it many times over, and it has always seemed to make Me cry. It was obviously written by a wondrous author. i congratulate you for this beautiful story.
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— Xxantian Xanther on 5/11/2015 9:03:53 PM with a score of 0
I'm crying...I love it so much yet...I hate it...I feel hatred for it...I just want to...ugh!
It doesn't help that I'm bipolar and I'm going through a similar situation...for the second time in my life...
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AshtonDrake
on 5/11/2015 8:11:29 PM with a score of 0
It's so sad D;
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— B on 5/2/2015 10:14:51 AM with a score of 0
Wow. Very emotional. I love it.
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FireJay7
on 4/26/2015 9:10:49 PM with a score of 0
excellent game
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volped
on 4/20/2015 8:48:36 AM with a score of 0
The best story ever. So sweet. I almost cried.no joke
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Wolfina
on 4/19/2015 8:39:46 PM with a score of 0
This game was amazing, I love how many choices there were and how well written it was if you wrote a book from this story I would buy it. Seriously good work.
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— Jesse on 4/18/2015 3:41:45 PM with a score of 0
This has to be one of the best storygames I have ever played! So heartwarming, It reminds me of an old friend I had.
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— Zaguiza14 on 4/17/2015 8:59:46 PM with a score of 0
I honestly wanted to cry even though I'm a dude it made me feel unguarded.
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alies50
on 4/7/2015 12:11:41 AM with a score of 0
I've read this story twice. The first time was three years ago. Even as I played it now, It still affects me as strongly as it did all that time ago. Well done!
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— Prince on 3/29/2015 3:05:32 PM with a score of 0
I like the game it is so romantic.
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brittany2143
on 3/26/2015 3:01:50 PM with a score of 0
This story made me treasure every person in my life because you will never know when they will be gone forever and that no matter how hard you try you can't bring them back.
This is also my personal favorite on this site because its unique and amazing while also being sad and depressing at certain parts of the story.
My favorite part of the story is when she puts the stickers on your face.
And i give you a 8/8 because this story is amazing.
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TheFluentReader
on 3/24/2015 9:41:16 AM with a score of 0
CUTE
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— A on 3/22/2015 4:48:57 AM with a score of 0
was great, good job
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— 123 on 3/15/2015 11:32:57 AM with a score of 0
Wow it was incredible and so very sad.
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TurtleWarrior55
on 3/13/2015 2:43:44 PM with a score of 0
Soooo saaaad
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feathersoul
on 3/12/2015 5:36:22 AM with a score of 0
Great, changed my life forever
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— James on 3/7/2015 9:38:30 PM with a score of 0
It was so beautiful.
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— fay on 3/6/2015 11:11:46 PM with a score of 0
i like it when she survives and has another child
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wingpaw
on 3/5/2015 2:23:06 PM with a score of 0
WAHHHH cries. soo sad. brillaint story tho!
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— illy on 3/2/2015 1:57:19 AM with a score of 0
i can give you that awesome story 7\8
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nightslackerALT
on 2/25/2015 7:39:55 AM with a score of 0
woah
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nightslackerALT
on 2/24/2015 2:33:54 PM with a score of 0
awesome
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nightslackerALT
on 2/23/2015 12:20:03 AM with a score of 0
why does the girl have to die? :T
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nattybop
on 2/22/2015 9:17:05 PM with a score of 0
i changed my mind! i like it.
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nightslacker1
on 2/22/2015 5:22:41 AM with a score of 0
um good i guess
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nightslacker1
on 2/22/2015 5:18:54 AM with a score of 0
Great art, great story
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— Kiko on 2/21/2015 7:53:11 AM with a score of 0
NOOOOOOO NO NO NO NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO GIRL DONTT DIEEEEEE
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— The dramitic queen on 2/19/2015 12:49:43 PM with a score of 0
I... I adore it... It is hard for me to find a story like this. A story that is amazing, not too lemony, but has a bit of lemon, and is just the right amount of sad to make my heart shatter and turn to dust but not make me cry. Geez, this is the best story i've ever read!!
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— Lovedove on 2/17/2015 1:29:03 PM with a score of 0
So sad but a great piece of work
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— AN3MAL on 2/11/2015 6:53:11 PM with a score of 0
So good i Cried ;) ( I'm serious )
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TheFluentReader
on 2/9/2015 11:59:53 AM with a score of 0
Good
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gravy
on 2/7/2015 3:58:49 PM with a score of 0
It's pretty good
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— TheScarecrow on 2/4/2015 10:44:47 PM with a score of 0
Dang that is a GREAT story! You must
have put a lot of time into this!
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Linklink50
on 2/4/2015 2:23:24 PM with a score of 0
Wow.
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Will11
on 2/1/2015 4:22:45 PM with a score of 0
Sad
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Bjornkicker
on 1/28/2015 4:02:46 PM with a score of 0
Omg that was so awww and so sad
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Lilacfur
on 1/19/2015 4:10:34 PM with a score of 0
made me sad, good read though
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— AET on 1/18/2015 7:56:10 PM with a score of 0
its the first time ive cried in a year
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— faed on 1/18/2015 4:28:00 AM with a score of 0
sad
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— faet on 1/18/2015 4:20:44 AM with a score of 0
makes no sense at all. on part does not connect with the other
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crunchybuzzle
on 1/12/2015 10:02:18 PM with a score of 0
I can describe this in one word: Brilliant.
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MultipleMinds
on 1/9/2015 7:53:02 PM with a score of 0
I CRIED SO HARD I LOST MY WRESTLING MATCH CUZ THE MAT WAS COVERED IN TEARS >:[ #REALMENCRIEVERYTIEM
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— John Cena on 1/7/2015 4:41:19 PM with a score of 0
Awesome Story!!! NUF SAID.
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— Chris on 1/4/2015 9:31:29 AM with a score of 0
This made me cry so much
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— Odyssey on 1/4/2015 2:12:33 AM with a score of 0
It was absolutely heartbreaking. I loved it :)
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— Jordan on 12/27/2014 1:31:50 PM with a score of 0
This was really good! Super sad, but I liked it. Well written and the decisions were good. Loved it!
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— Abi on 12/24/2014 11:17:46 AM with a score of 0
Amazing
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NokadoThe
on 12/23/2014 8:56:19 AM with a score of 0
I don't know if it's because this is so similar to something that I can relate to personally, or if this is just beautiful writing, or a nice blend of each, but hands down, this was awesome. It was emotional, it was beautiful, and very sweet. I loved it.
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TheSilentCandle
on 12/23/2014 2:18:58 AM with a score of 0
This story is amazing, the way you make readers think so hard about what is goin on. The way it is woven together is so perfect. Beat story game I've ever read. Well done.
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— Guest on 12/17/2014 4:59:54 PM with a score of 0
OMG IM GONNA CRY
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WarriorCatsRPStories
on 12/14/2014 8:51:08 AM with a score of 0
This story brings me closer to tears then any other... Despite my love of criticizing and talking, it would take me eternity just to imagine how I should begin expressing how I feel toward such a story. Because of that, I have only this to say.
I love this story. So very very much. I don't know if the author actually had the love of their life taken by death.. But you sure as hell came close to describing the minds insanity after it. The flood of memories. Meeting her, growing up together, falling in love together, being together... The childish thoughts that it could last forever. Guess guys are just stupid, eh? She always knew it would end. How she left, but gave you one last chance to say goodbye. I don't know if it made it worse, or if it was what we needed. She wanted that to be our last memory together. One last laugh... I love you, my friend. Thank you for creating such a beautiful story. Forever remember her, the perfect little girl.
In memory of Amber Waterlow.
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— Orion on 12/14/2014 1:14:22 AM with a score of 0
Beautiful then tragic
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— S on 12/12/2014 9:18:07 PM with a score of 0
Ohhhh! I loved this story the minute I read the word Sophia. This definitely touched my heart.
I literally was going to cry when Sophia left me.
She was absolutely perfect to me.
I hope you make another one SOON
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WarriorCatsRPStories
on 12/8/2014 9:59:37 PM with a score of 0
Whoa... sad
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Captianobvious11
on 12/8/2014 9:56:55 PM with a score of 0
so sad
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thestorygamer
on 12/2/2014 9:43:27 PM with a score of 0
That was beautiful. Simply beautiful. All I can say.
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Spectrareader
on 11/28/2014 1:08:35 PM with a score of 0
This helped. Thank you.
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— ItanoCircus on 11/28/2014 9:16:10 AM with a score of 0
I have played through this ad nauseam. I can't seem to get enough.
You are a wonderful author, and you should be proud of this.
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— Haru on 11/25/2014 12:10:07 PM with a score of 0
Why would you do this to my heart? Such a beautiful story. So beautiful.
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— Haru on 11/24/2014 6:42:07 PM with a score of 0
Good, I guess? The plagiarized illustrations sore of brought it down. :P
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Malkalack
on 11/22/2014 8:43:32 PM with a score of 0
great story
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shadonai
on 11/20/2014 12:40:36 PM with a score of 0
It was really long and well written
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bruh
on 11/18/2014 12:30:46 PM with a score of 0
WHY? I LIKED IT AND BOOM SHE DIES.....
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InteractiveMaker
on 11/16/2014 8:34:54 PM with a score of 0
I nearly cried going through this. You have ruined romance for me because I'll never find one better than this again!
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MrHaziq
on 11/15/2014 2:30:56 PM with a score of 0
oh well gosh darnit. I really didn't see that coming. What an amazing, touching, and a true show of love. This short story/interactive game brings we to the verge of tears, and I just love this. Truely Captivating. Bravo. c:
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— Sage on 11/12/2014 2:28:39 AM with a score of 0
this is a great story but i cant help but feel so confused about it
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xXGrimAphelionXx
on 11/8/2014 3:09:56 PM with a score of 0
oww that ending hurt
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— jacob on 11/3/2014 2:35:37 PM with a score of 0
Absolutely mesmerising. :)
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Z3R0
on 10/25/2014 6:29:17 PM with a score of 0
...Whaaaaaaaaaaaa...
WHY
NO
DAMN IT
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— Melody Q. Hanbera on 10/20/2014 4:18:44 PM with a score of 0
Beautiful. Absolutely beautiful.
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— Taio on 10/19/2014 9:07:15 PM with a score of 0
This story is perfect :c
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— Shell on 10/18/2014 3:17:23 AM with a score of 0
Hot damn... I haven't felt this emotionally distressed since my first viewing of Clannad Afterstory. Very emotional piece, and beautifully written. I love the drawings, but I did notice they don't have a constant style to them. While I loved them all regardless, it did bug me a little. Solid piece, no matter what choices you pick.
(Also, being the true romantic at heart that I am, I had decided to play this while listening to "romantic music" from youtube. Made the experience about 10x deeper.)
(http://youtu.be/6Lq_0P39iLg)
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gizmatic21
on 10/16/2014 11:41:16 PM with a score of 0
Great, made me cry almost every timr I read it!
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— Rolling thunder on 10/14/2014 2:48:45 AM with a score of 0
The feeling of cold winds blowing... /a beautifully heartbreaking story.
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— Sarah on 10/12/2014 12:01:52 PM with a score of 0
That was an amazing, heartfelt,loving story.I could not of asked for a better romance story and it brought me to tears.
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— Jill on 10/11/2014 3:45:35 PM with a score of 0
My god it was so amazing, i loved you pictures and the story was so....extravagant? Gah i loved it so much i can't even find the right words for it!
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Codemaster
on 10/11/2014 12:12:24 AM with a score of 0
This story was beautiful and well thought out. I give the author thanks for entertaining me with this story and I am hopeful for more like it.
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— Hsizz on 10/1/2014 10:42:10 PM with a score of 0
Beautiful story. I am a little depressed now though :/ btw I choosw the ending that finished at the graveyard. It was sad but at least they still had one another.
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— moni on 9/29/2014 7:46:03 PM with a score of 0
this was short and sweet...exactly what i was looking for
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— <3 on 9/28/2014 12:06:16 AM with a score of 0
It was short in terms of choices, how far it could have gone on a romantic situation, but the feels are very impacting with how it joins you together with Sophia and how it connects you with her and having all that connection completely severed in the end is a really big impact on emotionally invested readers.
Other than that a sad, but great story and the art is amazing, will look forward to more!
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Barbas
on 9/27/2014 3:49:04 PM with a score of 0
This story is just amazing.You have to play this.If you don't you will regret it.
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— Sonia on 9/27/2014 3:32:41 PM with a score of 0
I actually never read this before, despite all the popularity it's had on the forums. I guess I'm glad I finally read it, and I'm probably going to put here the longest comment I've ever written. A featured story deserves long comments, after all.
I don't exactly know who I'm addressing with the shitty critique I'm about to write, since I don't think Applegirl has ever been on in my time, and even a while before that. Everyone has already read this, and everyone has already said what they had to say, I guess, since the most recent comment I've seen is from 2013.
I'll begin Danaos-style, by stating that your grammar is spectacular. Since I'm not a big Danaos follower, however, I don't know what order he does things in after that.
The story began cryptically, and I could tell it was going to have a sour ending without paying attention to the title or any of the other comments. After that, besides the trippiness and unfamiliarity that came from obviously being in a dream, it felt entirely natural, like genuinely shared memories.
The story itself was spectacular, piecing together a long, beautiful history that you can never change, yet seem desperate to change, and suddenly discovering why your character was grieving. Now, you may have been able to get the protagonist in the game to realize that it's all okay, but you don't fully realize it all until the bittersweet ending.
I'm a largely horrible person, I'm a heartless person. I hardly ever cry watching any media, when I came close to shedding tears during the funeral scene in 12 Years a Slave, I can't help but feel that it was because I felt obligated, as a white person, to feel horrible. I've played 'empathy games' tackling heavy, painful issues, and even though I've found plenty of sympathy, even though I've found myself in some of the same situations, I'm still met with a nearly sociopathic lack of any empathy.
This story is one of the few games I've ever played, one of the few things I've ever seen period, that actually made me look down at my chest and say, "Oof... Did anyone else feel that?"
While I'm sure our poor protagonist can get over it soon, maybe after the end of this story, and maybe before, depending on what choices you make, my grieving process has just begun. Thank you, (And curse you!) applegirl, for writing this story.
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ISentinelPenguinI
on 9/25/2014 6:07:27 PM with a score of 0
Oh my god im crying.... that was amazing.
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Vierro
on 9/24/2014 2:23:47 AM with a score of 0
meh...
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deathkid8741
on 9/21/2014 6:12:29 PM with a score of 0
there's no brakes on the feel train
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chidoribet
on 9/21/2014 4:05:15 PM with a score of 0
It is a beautiful, confusing and emotional story.
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— Zcat on 9/18/2014 9:44:59 PM with a score of 0
OHMIGOD I WANNA CRY SOOOOO HARD!!! thats so freaking sad! AND IM TALKING ABOUT THE HAPPY ENDING!!
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— rpgstorylover on 9/17/2014 6:51:58 PM with a score of 0
Very sad ending :(
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supermouse
on 9/15/2014 2:54:02 PM with a score of 0
Almost all of the endings broke my heart, but in a good kind of way - like when you watch 'A Walk To Remember' and you're crying with a smile on your face that says "I just learned something about life" and makes your chest flutter.
I can go over this story again and again.
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stak9000
on 9/14/2014 9:31:13 PM with a score of 0
The route that I chose was so sad and beautiful... excellent work, applegirl
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— Mewr11 on 9/11/2014 7:14:34 PM with a score of 0
It made me cry. Well written and has such an amazing plot. The author really knows how to capture the reader's attention. 10/10. It's an amazing story.
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— Cat on 9/6/2014 4:18:49 PM with a score of 0
Fantastic story, amazing writing. I myself try to write books and I can never get it right. I need to take notes from you!
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— Adam on 8/25/2014 8:25:20 PM with a score of 0
I nearly cried
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— Lizzy on 8/24/2014 10:05:39 PM with a score of 0
This is one of the best romance stories on the site for me. It made me cry man and im a dude, dudes arent suppose to cry man. But anyway if you can make more like this man ill read it and give it a good review. Ob a scale of one to ten on this i give it a 14.
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ClintCook
on 8/24/2014 2:57:53 PM with a score of 0
Dude look I'm one of the strongest hearted guys in
my family and at my school. But this story, it made me
cry bro. This is one of the best stories on this site
If you could make more man I'll be very happy,
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— Clinton B. Cook on 8/23/2014 11:31:22 PM with a score of 0
Good sir, I have watched CLANNAD, and you have succeeded in making a story that I get into in a short time and become emotionally attached to the characters by the end. Like CLANNAD, I fell that you have also emotionally scared me for life, and I wish to congratulate you on such a well-made tale of loss and love. Bravo.
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— Annonnymus on 8/19/2014 7:40:06 PM with a score of 0
It was gosh darn beautiful, it brought a tear to my eye....okay not so much. The pictures were great and the writing, whilst not perfect, was certainly something to be praised. The multiple endings were both satisfying and well written as well.
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Madbrad200
on 8/14/2014 8:27:31 AM with a score of 0
Thank you the ending was beautiful
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Kylar14
on 8/10/2014 3:48:38 AM with a score of 0
Right in the feels
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— Jonathan on 8/10/2014 2:42:00 AM with a score of 0
I pride myself on being a manly man, i workout, i drink, i fight, and yet i cry over this sappy stuff,this is easily one of my favorite Adventures, im not gonna spoil anything suffice to say if you havent yet definetly play this, the author did a great job and the artwork is fantastic.
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— Gramson on 7/28/2014 10:42:29 PM with a score of 0
I dunno what it is about this story, it's kinda... bittersweet. I dunno if it made any difference that I was listening to 'Too much love will kill you' by Queen while reading this. The story was a tad bit cliche, but that's not always a bad thing. It still got ya in the feels, made you feel sad at the right moments, and happy in the others. Really cute!
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Effie
on 7/28/2014 5:24:20 AM with a score of 0
It almost made me cry truly beautiful.
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KillerQueen15
on 7/25/2014 8:09:42 PM with a score of 0
I loved the artwork you had on every page and the story was just enough, not too convoluted but also not too simple.
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bilbo
on 7/23/2014 9:56:47 PM with a score of 0
A very well written and unique read. The way the story flowed in a non-chronological way was very clever. There's also plenty of different pages and endings to give this game a lot of replay value.
When the protagonist didn't ask Sophia what she meant when she hinted at dying, it made for a great plot but a not believable character. I feel like any real person in his situation would have pestered Sophia about what she meant.
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31TeV
on 7/19/2014 4:04:32 AM with a score of 0
It was so beautiful. I love the game, the writing-style and the art.
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— Emily on 7/18/2014 9:09:54 AM with a score of 0
Wow this story was amazing; not just in the act that it is touching in plot, but because it uses so many unorthodox devices to deliver its impactful message. The subtle touches such as little things the reader may notice in other character keep them compelled. While the story has a huge end that shows what the work was about and, offers a chance to not only win/ lose; but do so on the players own terms. Although like its said, that comes with a price and that little bit of sadness no matter what you do makes the message linger. Truly this is a masterwork and Well deserving of the 8/8 rating I'm giving it.
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Noirbard
on 7/16/2014 3:51:39 AM with a score of 0
Oh. My. God. I'm actually trying to keep tears out of my eyes right now. This was amazing. Worth every single minute.
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MeggggE
on 7/11/2014 8:07:34 PM with a score of 0
The artwork was utterly breath-taking and the story nearly made me cry. I think I'm going to be playing this over and over again until I've seen every path and every ending. The characters are very easy to love and the choices have a lot of poignant subtlety to the mindset behind making them, all of which gradually reveal more about personality of the protagonist that you play as. Amazing game, one that was obviously crafted with a lot of love and care.
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the_quiller
on 7/11/2014 3:37:22 PM with a score of 0
This game was amazing, the story was fantastic and the artwork was beautiful.
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— Aika on 7/11/2014 12:44:47 PM with a score of 0
Wonderful xx
Sad though
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— Benz on 7/10/2014 7:14:26 AM with a score of 0
A great story that can in ways touch your heart! Good job!
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TheNightmare413
on 7/8/2014 5:54:49 PM with a score of 0
This was so beautiful...I replay it and replay it and every time it just gets more touching....
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Owlsweety
on 7/8/2014 10:27:04 AM with a score of 0
I really liked it! It was fun, even when my heart was breaking because of the sadness Sophia carries. Good job!
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— Julia on 7/5/2014 5:15:36 PM with a score of 0
I legit had to choke back some tears. That was such a sad ending... Very few stories ever hit me like this one. We'll done. This is beautiful and sad all at the same time.
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— Addison on 7/4/2014 8:11:49 PM with a score of 0
What was she diagnosed with?!
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— Kira on 7/1/2014 5:26:13 AM with a score of 0
GREAT STORY AWESOME PLOT!
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Melodie5678
on 6/29/2014 4:48:23 PM with a score of 0
It's a wonderful terrible tale, brought a tear to my eye.
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— Pqfire on 6/28/2014 6:14:16 PM with a score of 0
Oh my God, this brought tears to my eyes! This is such a great story! I was so pulled into the characters that I had no idea what was going on around me except the story! Such an excellent read! Thank you for making this.
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Sneeze_Meister
on 6/18/2014 6:10:59 PM with a score of 0
I love this game. I have tried to get as many endings as possible. I just want you to know that there is a way to save Sophia, but it means losing another precious thing. :)
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kaelisocool1
on 6/14/2014 8:41:09 AM with a score of 0
This simply made me feel with sadness and appreciation who those who I've lost and still have.
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— juan on 6/11/2014 10:50:53 PM with a score of 0
it good but why just why...
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— bob on 6/9/2014 8:08:01 PM with a score of 0
Very good.
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SakuraKiss
on 6/6/2014 12:50:51 PM with a score of 0
So sad....did I get the right ending? The sad one?
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— Reagan on 6/5/2014 3:03:57 PM with a score of 0
beautiful story
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— Taylah on 5/31/2014 8:03:38 PM with a score of 0
This touched my heart, really. but i have one question, did you make all the pictures or what?
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— Jacob on 5/27/2014 9:35:13 AM with a score of 0
This story was fantastic...one of the few stories on the site the sight that makes me depressed after finishing it (that's a good thing)!
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LeoScales7
on 5/22/2014 6:00:34 AM with a score of 0
Wahh. It's good, but the ending!
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MinerGamez
on 5/13/2014 11:13:51 PM with a score of 0
This story was friggin' great. It was so deep and meaningful in the beginning, and in the end, it was just so sad... I actually felt like a tiny part of me was the guy in the story. Felt like he was... Well... I don't mean to take away the sincerity from this... But, I felt like he was *Dishonored* by who-ever the hell made the two of them. So emotional.
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— Corvo Attano on 5/10/2014 12:35:49 PM with a score of 0
I liked the story, but I felt like many of the pictures were inappropriate.
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Meadow
on 5/6/2014 8:38:15 PM with a score of 0
I liked it I loved the way the words flowed and I adored the pictures I loved the whole thing!
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ILoveBeingABookworm
on 5/4/2014 1:37:22 AM with a score of 0
I love this story! There was just enough confusion and mystery to keep you reading and interested but not enough to frustrate you. The story was so sweet, and I loved their relationship. I also love that you illustrated every picture. Nicely done!
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EchoEchoEcho
on 5/1/2014 10:22:25 PM with a score of 0
Very well written. I went through every possible choice, and all the endings. All beautiful, sad and satisfying. Thumbs up
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— Shaina on 4/27/2014 12:18:47 PM with a score of 0
Oh my God I almost cried. That was amazing. MAKE ANOTHER ONE!
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Sunny
on 4/26/2014 3:34:24 PM with a score of 0
Goodness gracious, this was absolutely wonderful to read. Truly a work of precious art.
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Ford
on 4/24/2014 6:04:04 PM with a score of 0
Cruel and yet so very,very, beautiful. While i can understand that tragic romance is the best romance, this story will always make my heart-throbed. Not only because of the beautiful story, but also its bittersweetness.
Good Job, certainly one of the best story that i have ever read, and trust me, i have read alot.
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— ZxZ on 3/28/2014 1:39:37 PM with a score of 0
Read through multiple times. I think some of the other reviewers were too hard on you. This is an exceptionally planned and executed story, beautifully delivered, and full of heart. I enjoyed the pictures. I rated this a 7. Certainly in the top 5-10% on the site. We'll done, I just wish you had a second story.
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march5th00
on 3/22/2014 12:15:13 AM with a score of 0
Loved it.
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march5th00
on 3/21/2014 11:53:49 PM with a score of 0
That was one of the most beautiful stories I have ever read. You are a fantastic author.
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suicuneepic
on 3/10/2014 7:02:21 PM with a score of 0
Beautiful. Just Beautiful. I'm tearing up. ;(
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Nicolerhi
on 3/7/2014 7:25:05 PM with a score of 0
Quite literally, the most touching and heartfelt thing I've read in a while. Maybe I'm just a sucker for tragedy and romance, but I absolutely loved this.
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— Dudeaga on 3/5/2014 12:23:03 AM with a score of 0
Oh. My. God. I almost cried. This is so beautiful...I got so caught up in the story...Their love was so believable, so true. This is a masterpiece, something to be treasured forever. The plot, the pictures, the EVERYTHING, it was all perfect. So believable, it was tissue worthy. An entire box of tissues. This would make a great movie.
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sagebrush
on 2/28/2014 7:22:37 AM with a score of 0
IT made me want to cry in the end C;
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— Samantha on 2/22/2014 9:58:51 PM with a score of 0
Really sweet. I just wish there was more to it, more character development, maybe.
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kaleidokaty
on 2/13/2014 8:15:47 PM with a score of 0
I broke. I fucking broke.
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— Andy on 2/10/2014 2:56:12 PM with a score of 0
That was a touching story. I liked how you used the flashbacks and flash forwards to progress the story. I loved the artwork as well.
Heartbreaking storyline, but definitely worth a few re-reads.
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polariscopic
on 1/28/2014 7:04:08 PM with a score of 0
I can't say how much I liked this story.
It is so sad.
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— Saddened on 1/19/2014 6:36:29 PM with a score of 0
Wow! Pretty good! My ending was what I wanted. c: He saved his daughter, but Sophia was probably still watching them. :3
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— Mags on 1/10/2014 5:15:44 PM with a score of 0
This story really tugged on the heartstrings, the way the words flowed was great. All of the endings of the story were sad to some degree but they were all satisfying to the story.
HOWEVER, I noticed that the artwork for this game belongs to Meago at dA, you should really give give credit to her for the art.
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Allusional
on 1/4/2014 7:02:08 PM with a score of 0
This story brought me to tears and made me cry over and over again. I couldn't stop re-reading this story, no matter how many times it broke my heart. This story gave me enlightenment about what i should do in a really bad part of my life. I still cry and sob and be sad and hate and yet love whoever wrote this. I hate her for the sadness. But i lover her for her meaning and enlightenment. This story has changed my life. I think about this story every single day.
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— athenaforce on 12/30/2013 10:12:59 PM with a score of 0
This is a very melancholic Game, this game details it so real that you feel alive on it.Because it different as there's no truly happy ending in this game, It's also representing our life, where we met our BFF or our Love, it goes on and on, until you can't met them again. Its totally agame where you'll still crying after playing it 10 Times.
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RabbitSeason
on 12/25/2013 8:04:58 AM with a score of 0
This was nice the good ending was sweet
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— Sombody on 12/9/2013 8:45:48 PM with a score of 0
A work of Art, truly an emotional roller costar
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— Darkner on 12/8/2013 3:30:33 PM with a score of 0
Beautiful! ;')
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OldManWillakers
on 12/7/2013 5:33:43 PM with a score of 0
Wow!Just..wow!It was so beautiful and sad at the same time,I couldn't close it until i've seen every ending there was.To author:This is masterpiece,good work! :D
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Yelloka
on 12/2/2013 2:56:15 PM with a score of 0
It is a touching love story. However in a real life, I would be putting myself down instead of my girlfriend. I like that in the story, the girl still loves him when he is putting her down and she always supports him.
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— anyonymous on 11/17/2013 8:43:50 PM with a score of 0
Maybe because it's late and I'm emotionally vulnerable right now but this tugged at my heart strings. I was torn on what I wanted to sacrifice and even though I feel I made the right choice it still hurt.
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boss1138
on 10/26/2013 12:18:34 AM with a score of 0
This made me cry. Please write more. I wish I could find someone I loved.
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— William Harper on 10/22/2013 11:21:37 AM with a score of 0
Let me make something clear here. This is the best interactive story I have ever read. This doesn't simply entertain me, move me and make me cry. This story gives me faith that interactive stories can be every bit as brilliant, moving and deep as traditional fiction.
I'm not sure what happened to the author, or why she hasn't written anymore stories, but I sincerely hope she keeps writing, wherever she is. She is a master of story-telling, and she has given the literary world a beautiful and haunting gift.
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someguy1294
on 10/22/2013 12:22:11 AM with a score of 0
It was so sweet and so sad
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WeridoErin
on 10/15/2013 7:39:30 PM with a score of 0
I liked it. The pictures were nice, and it was written well. But as others noted, it tried a bit too hard to make you feel sentimental.
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Tanstaafl
on 10/6/2013 2:32:33 PM with a score of 0
this game almost had me in tears very few anything do this to me
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CLSGatorwrestler
on 9/26/2013 10:18:27 PM with a score of 0
great but sad
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— shadowolf on 9/25/2013 10:44:01 PM with a score of 0
It moved me deeply.
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MalcolmXavier
on 9/18/2013 12:16:58 AM with a score of 0
Beautiful... no other words are needed.... now excuse me while i call my girlfriend and tell her i love her while i still can.
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kokabiel
on 9/14/2013 6:19:54 AM with a score of 0
That was so touching, and so sad at the same time! The artwork was lovely as well!
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— Katie on 9/5/2013 11:18:44 PM with a score of 0
You my friend, are a true writer. I love this game! Absolutely touching! Very good! And I'm happy I got a good ending! Great job! :) 8/8!
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Il_Maestro
on 9/5/2013 12:10:03 PM with a score of 0
I cried. That was beautiful...thank you so much for making this.
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— Elle on 8/27/2013 5:12:33 AM with a score of 0
The only reason I couldn't give it an 8 is because sad endings are my one true weakness, they destroy me from the inside.
Asside from that, beautifully beautifully done.
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SteelMachete
on 8/16/2013 6:13:55 AM with a score of 0
darn it!!
you nearly made me cry! i hate crying! it's a weakness and for sookie babies and wusses and it makes my eyes go sore!
But other than you trying to break my armor this was an amazing story. everything about it was great as well as the great anime pics. (I LOVE ANIME!) I just wish it wasn't so sad but other than that a big thumbs up and a score of 10/10.
WOHHOOOOOOOOO!!!
BYE! ;) :) !) hehehehe
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— lindsey on 8/12/2013 3:38:55 AM with a score of 0
I have tears in my eyes. That was so sad and sweet. I love it.
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— Jade on 8/8/2013 11:33:23 PM with a score of 0
Absolutely loved it, the short pages were to the point and emotional, one of my favorite story's by far.super super good :')
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— Elph on 8/7/2013 12:30:44 PM with a score of 0
I'm going to spread the word. Here is the art for the game.
The second link provides more art than the first. Meago created the characters that served as the inspiration for this game. Enjoy away!
http://goku-no-baka.deviantart.com/art/Gift-Smile-as-you-mean-it-188023406
http://meago.deviantart.com/art/Mother-s-day-123323634
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Scion
on 8/6/2013 1:24:37 PM with a score of 0
Great story and no offence but how can you not make good ending for this. It is just cruel :(
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Rawen
on 7/30/2013 1:03:12 PM with a score of 0
I really enjoyed this lovely game. Never have I played a Choose Your Own Adventure game where I connected with the characters so much. No matter what ending you choose, it's always going to be a tragic one. But the amount of empathy I feel for these characters is truly...stunning. And the artwork helps a ton.
May I ask you where you found the anime-ish pictures? Please send me an email reply if you'd like. I'm dying to know where these pictures come from as they have touched the depths of my soul much as your Choose Your Own Adventure game has. Thank you.
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— Scion on 7/29/2013 9:02:16 PM with a score of 0
The movie that they watched together reminds me of myself, waltzing in despair and drowning in guilt whenever i think of 'her', who was never even alive...
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Thesinz
on 7/29/2013 11:46:08 AM with a score of 0
Man, that was one hell of a ride. I can only hope to create an emotional roller coaster like this. After a while i got quite a few different endings and i really love you and i hate you and a few things could be learned from you.
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Buthor
on 7/27/2013 5:55:33 PM with a score of 0
Im so horny i wanna suck some guys wemen from his Dick clark
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Wemen
on 7/27/2013 1:47:38 AM with a score of 0
This is great!!! I love it!!!
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coolchloe123
on 7/22/2013 8:22:56 AM with a score of 0
i had watery eyes while reading the end x-x
i like it
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— Yudith on 7/20/2013 7:06:38 PM with a score of 0
Not a day goes by that I dont desire to feel that feeling... Not a day goes by that I dont die inside for never having so much as felt the warmth of a companion... Deep down knowing I never will... Reading your story made me feel like I wasnt alone... Thank you Applegirl.
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— Mir on 7/20/2013 6:57:42 AM with a score of 0
;_; That's so sad. Why is it so sad?! :'(
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Tia_Jayne
on 7/16/2013 3:33:20 AM with a score of 0
Ok....the ending was TOO sad!!!!!
:(((((((((((((
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strawhat
on 7/14/2013 4:33:35 AM with a score of 0
OHMYGOD WHY WOULD YOU DO THAT I'M GOING TO CRY JUST NOOOO. TOO MUCH FEELS. I'M DYING
LIKE HER
AUHHHHHHHHHG
SCREW YOUANGST!
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— ConflictingApple on 7/1/2013 4:47:42 AM with a score of 0
honestly this may be one of the most beautiful things i have ever read
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— Rod on 6/30/2013 3:36:26 AM with a score of 0
Sooo... Sad.
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Abaddon_Wolf
on 6/25/2013 4:26:42 AM with a score of 0
I regret not reading the comments section.
I'm not fond of this kind of story but it's a nice one at least.
Nice pics by the way.
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grandslam
on 6/23/2013 8:21:53 AM with a score of 0
oh this story made me cry my eyes out a few times its a good but sad story. applegirl i hope you make another awesomely good story like this one was.
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Soviet
on 6/17/2013 2:01:43 AM with a score of 0
That was so beautiful. Loved it
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HaruhiSuzumiya
on 6/16/2013 8:02:32 AM with a score of 0
Its was so sad I think its the best love story yet!
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Mhand2003
on 6/13/2013 6:42:23 PM with a score of 0
Great game this game makes even though its so sad it makes me cry every time so many times I play it so many times and it still does. I love this game.
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hugo23
on 6/9/2013 8:51:52 PM with a score of 0
If you have the time to read this, why don't you pull yourself a seat and play this story? The entire relationship of the couple in the story is boiled down to a couple minutes, but these minutes last a lifetime. I highly recommend this to anyone, despite the fact you play from the male's perspective. Well written Author, you deserve much praise for this. Beautiful art as well.
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— Josh on 6/4/2013 1:37:02 AM with a score of 0
Pure Beauty,so sad
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— Da4r on 5/27/2013 3:18:49 PM with a score of 0
This story was so good but was also too sad.
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— Christy on 5/27/2013 10:35:43 AM with a score of 0
Beautiful. I hope to read your published works someday.
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dancingfaeries86
on 5/22/2013 10:24:02 PM with a score of 0
Wow this story was really great! The ending was sad too :( But I loved It and the complexety that you put into it! Did you draw the drawings cause they are really good and match the story well :)
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Kandachi500
on 5/20/2013 4:55:25 PM with a score of 0
Damn you... I cried. Beautiful. Just beautiful. So many memories. Thank you.
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A_Simple_Persona
on 5/10/2013 4:59:10 AM with a score of 0
At first I don't understand it but as I reach the end, I began turning sad... Nice Drawings!
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— IAmMystery on 5/4/2013 11:28:39 AM with a score of 0
i am crying but i know that their love will never die. :)
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— kristen on 5/3/2013 9:15:08 PM with a score of 0
This is the last comment I'll leave on this story. I had to give myself time to cool down, read other comments, and think a little more objectively, so that I could give an intelligent rebuttal.
As for the artwork... I honestly don't like anime/manga style, but I still recognize that talent and effort put into these illustrations. The art matches each scene well and makes the characters and story feel more real. I wish more interactives used illustrations like these.
While this story may have a few clichés, nothing about it feels forced, nothing manipulative. While many parts of the story are sad, many parts are happy. It's not a sob story, but a perfect blend of elements, moments happy and sad. Like life.
The sad ending doesn't come from some cheap plot twist or deus ex machina. It was set up, legitimate, and believable. Rather than sentimentally throwing cheap melodrama at the reader, the action and characters gradually draw the reader into the story, coax the reader into lowering their defenses and set them up for the endings flawlessly.
I also like that when it comes to sex, this story knows how much to show and how much to imply. To have an overt sex scene would have tarnished the story, made it feel like mere wanking material, not something beautiful. The little teases and steamy yet subtle illustrations give the story all the sexual tension a romance requires.
It is, in short a masterpiece. I have only two regrets. The first that the author does not seem to have produced any more of these gems. The second is that this story may have spoiled lesser interactive romances for me, forever. I have yet to find one that could come anywhere close to this.
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— Some Guy on 4/30/2013 1:04:30 AM with a score of 0
A different ending today. A happier one, I think...
To put it lightly, this story is everything a romantic interactive story could ever hope to be. The characters feel real, the choices are diverse, and the emotion is sincere and startling. To say it touched my heart would be cliché and clumsy, a compliment far unworthy of anything this beautiful.
But it did. It touched my heart. Bravo.
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— Some Guy on 4/27/2013 7:24:44 PM with a score of 0
This had me in absolute tears. The art-work is beautiful, and the story is gripping.
I wan to write more, but the tears have blurred my eyes...
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— Some Guy on 4/27/2013 6:12:23 AM with a score of 0
Oh my god. This story is beautiful. I'm crying after finishing this. You did an amazing job, keep writing.
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sidiorio
on 4/26/2013 10:26:47 PM with a score of 0
It was beautiful. It was wonderfully written and it made all of my feeling swirl around inside.
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bookmonkey
on 4/26/2013 4:28:34 PM with a score of 0
This story was amazing.I was cute and happy but had a sad touch to it.It was a wonderful and heartwarming story.I really loved it.The ending made me really sad but I enjoyed it quite a lot!
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— Christine on 4/25/2013 11:32:40 PM with a score of 0
Wow... D;
I am crying from the sheer beauty of my ending.
That was simply wonderful!
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— Grandg1221 on 4/20/2013 1:24:19 AM with a score of 0
This is the best story ever!!! It had me feeling like I was in the storie. I could make a connection too about my ex I had broken up with. She was my best girlfriend ever.
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— Cameron on 4/19/2013 2:15:08 PM with a score of 0
really touching
keep writing
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— howie on 4/19/2013 10:23:25 AM with a score of 0
somewhat incoherent, but touching story (cliche'd, but touching)
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Drakilian
on 4/13/2013 6:32:02 PM with a score of 0
Oh, I should have known better than to read something like this ;_;. But this was really good, really liked the art work!
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nitrogalaxy
on 4/10/2013 6:37:05 PM with a score of 0
This made me cry :'( So beautifull :(
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— Seth on 3/29/2013 9:51:59 PM with a score of 0
It was a beautiful story. I cried at the end! I loved every bit of it.
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— lda on 3/28/2013 11:36:39 AM with a score of 0
Bittersweet endings always make me cry T_T
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Lyra_Beatriz
on 3/26/2013 6:51:48 AM with a score of 0
I really enjoyed this. Great story. Pretty sad and all, but I guess that's what really brings this story to life. I can't really speak for others, but at least I know that I enjoyed it.
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Just_justThere
on 3/21/2013 12:51:14 AM with a score of 0
aww i cryed
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KittyKoko
on 3/20/2013 5:04:02 AM with a score of 0
Wow...that story is beautiful I was pretty much on the verge of crying my eyes out. Great work.
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— Antonio on 3/17/2013 4:37:11 PM with a score of 0
Wow...that story is beautiful I was pretty much on the verge of crying my eyes out. Great work.
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— Antonio on 3/17/2013 4:36:23 PM with a score of 0
SO SAD!!!
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Psychotikitty
on 3/14/2013 6:26:42 PM with a score of 0
i dislike all the other romances on this site except this one
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JamesValkyrie
on 3/9/2013 6:26:09 PM with a score of 0
It was a fantastic story and I look forward to more like it. You really capture the emotions of the lovers in this story.
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TheSonOfTheNight
on 3/4/2013 1:18:59 PM with a score of 0
Loved It! :)
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LarryPotter
on 3/2/2013 2:10:28 AM with a score of 0
I loved this.
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ellethefierce
on 2/24/2013 11:24:44 PM with a score of 0
Awww, it's so sweet. I found the scene changes to be too abrupt at times and that pulled me out of the story a bit but the ending captured me again.
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— Flowers from Nowhere on 2/21/2013 5:10:15 PM with a score of 0
Painful , Awesome , Love the images , Heartfelt and Heartbreaking , Good stuff indeed.
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— Arixson on 2/21/2013 1:01:48 AM with a score of 0
Crying, but it's bittersweet
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— Ro on 2/18/2013 6:59:51 PM with a score of 0
It is a great story. Maybe just too sad.
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CynthiaNieves
on 2/17/2013 1:23:12 AM with a score of 0
The most beautiful story I have ever read. Thank you.
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— JTTaylor on 2/4/2013 6:00:49 AM with a score of 0
amazing.
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— porcshe on 2/4/2013 3:22:34 AM with a score of 0
Awesome Is Speechless
Wow... Just.. Wow. Very sad. Well written, but sad. I liked the pictures a lot, and there weren't any problems I could pick out, so that's good. Wow...
8/8
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awesomeness1242
on 2/2/2013 9:44:56 PM with a score of 0
I think the story is so sad and beautiful, I'm not a big fan of anime but the pictures are a nice touch. There were some grammatical errors in the story, and I was a bit confused as to who Emily was, but other than that it was a beautifully written story and I hope there will be future works like this.
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— Anonymous on 1/21/2013 5:48:07 PM with a score of 0
This story was beautifully written and very touching. Thank you :)
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Conzexion
on 1/12/2013 7:45:00 PM with a score of 0
its so sad to sad
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— asa on 1/11/2013 8:40:25 PM with a score of 0
"It was you. It was always you." aww. sad story.
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toni
on 1/8/2013 9:45:07 PM with a score of 0
I almost cried......it really made me realize how important every second of life is with the someone you truly love and care about. There is really no need to argue ad fight with the one you love......sorry, that was my own thought. Great game though, excellent story and very eye opening.
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— zombiedan on 1/3/2013 9:52:22 AM with a score of 0
That was so amazing!!! really sad, but amazing. it didnt always make complete sense but i dont care ah
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scarletbird
on 12/28/2012 7:35:21 PM with a score of 0
Sooo sad but yet sweet
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— ash on 12/27/2012 2:36:55 AM with a score of 0
my most favourite story of all! this is truly excellent. I hope to see more from you.
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mistman96
on 12/10/2012 8:54:56 PM with a score of 0
This story was really beautifully written and really, really sad! :(
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Briar_Rose
on 11/29/2012 12:06:51 PM with a score of 0
My heart skipped a beat at the ending. It was a wonderful story and I couldn't see any flaws but if you would like me to point some out for you to make a new story better well you better wait until I get to play the story for a hundred times more so I could find mistakes (so I could cry it out actually)
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OrdinalKing
on 11/29/2012 8:44:18 AM with a score of 0
Great story/game. sad ending though.
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EragonMax490
on 11/26/2012 1:43:56 PM with a score of 0
amazing story
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— willie on 11/22/2012 12:55:34 AM with a score of 0
It wasn't too bad but the story line was really confusing
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— Karsten on 11/10/2012 6:57:17 PM with a score of 0
I actually choked up at the end of it. Beautifully written, well done:)
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— Shelby on 11/3/2012 12:15:21 PM with a score of 0
Wow What a Nice Game:P
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Justtoletyahknow1
on 10/29/2012 5:01:59 PM with a score of 0
My God,it made me cry.Soooo good.<3
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— Anonymous Girafffe on 10/11/2012 4:33:43 PM with a score of 0
This is beautiful but a little bit disjointed and hard to follow. Well worth the read though ^_^
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llamainlove
on 10/10/2012 5:37:16 PM with a score of 0
Sad....I swear it's like Mass Effect. You get screwed with either way. I love it though<3
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IrritatedBrother
on 10/6/2012 11:31:53 PM with a score of 0
That was the most depressing story ever.
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kantuno
on 9/30/2012 9:29:36 AM with a score of 0
it made me cry why did sophia dieeeeeeee i loved her beautiful emerald eyes !?!?!?!? im a girl and i fell in love with her :( so sad
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— nikki on 9/15/2012 3:59:26 PM with a score of 0
Oh my God! This made me cry! It was really, really good! Seriously man. 8/8!!
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justinepena
on 9/9/2012 3:52:52 AM with a score of 0
Dammit. Why did I read this when I'm already feeling lonely cuz my lover is over 1000 miles away? >_> I'm actually kinda misty-eyed now. How did you even do that? -.-' Great job getting an emotional response from the reader...jerk. Lol.
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Kiel_Farren
on 9/7/2012 10:24:30 AM with a score of 0
So beautiful. Brought tears to my eyes.
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— Well written on 9/4/2012 3:24:54 PM with a score of 0
Heart-captivating. Loved it. 7/8
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TheUnknown
on 9/4/2012 1:34:06 PM with a score of 0
So sad 0__0
But really, superbly enjoyable to play :)
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songs_without_words
on 9/3/2012 3:08:40 AM with a score of 0
ahmazingly good.
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— mn on 9/1/2012 7:26:10 AM with a score of 0
This was a very great read, I was quick to kill the baby though, no one takes away my Sophia. Especially if we can make more babies.
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— Mike on 8/30/2012 2:37:08 AM with a score of 0
Great Story! Please create a sequel :D
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Amethyst23
on 8/29/2012 1:43:59 AM with a score of 0
Very well wrighten, I couldn't put it down. I love every part of it, I just wish it was a little longer.
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nicnak250
on 8/22/2012 9:50:04 AM with a score of 0
I fucking cried at the end
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— Jesse Cook on 8/18/2012 11:23:19 AM with a score of 0
Awesomely written!
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RobustSporadic
on 8/18/2012 5:53:04 AM with a score of 0
This was beautiful! Well described, interesting, made me want to cry! Thank you so much for making this.
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ZombieAuthor
on 8/14/2012 8:34:40 PM with a score of 0
That was so cute! I finally got the best ending, lawl. very sweet though!^_^ The pictures were magnificent. So sad..you made a very touching story!
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ChaiHai
on 8/11/2012 6:16:37 AM with a score of 0
Very touching, bittersweet ending. Could have used a bit more connectvity between selections, and the grammer needed a bit of tweaking. Very good though ^^
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— jack on 8/3/2012 11:53:18 PM with a score of 0
So incredibly sweet, Im in love with this story. Teared up a bit at the emotional ending~
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— Corrupt Heaven on 7/30/2012 7:34:01 PM with a score of 0
I can't describe how amazing this storygame was. I would have liked if you explained the situation a bit more, because at first it was confusing but then I figured out they were just memories. Anyway, it was amazing and I hope that you made more.
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— Bubu on 7/27/2012 11:03:48 PM with a score of 0
I cannot even put this sweet, touching, sad-ending story into any words except these.
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HotCocoa4267
on 7/24/2012 11:47:39 PM with a score of 0
Beautiful, terrible, and completely wonderful don't even come close to describing this masterpiece. I look forward to future works like this. Thank you.
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NellucStoryGuy
on 7/24/2012 1:42:40 PM with a score of 0
This was beautiful! Bitter sweet, but perfect in that way. I love it!
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simplesabley
on 7/20/2012 4:23:33 PM with a score of 0
So sad.....*sniffle*
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HarderThanLife
on 7/18/2012 4:33:31 PM with a score of 0
Sweet and sad. <3
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Morgan_R
on 7/13/2012 4:25:10 PM with a score of 0
This was so great.. I found it so sweet, especially the ending ?
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— Kirako on 7/8/2012 11:06:23 PM with a score of 0
The story and artwork were simply stunning! I would love to see more of both
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— noah on 7/6/2012 11:56:28 PM with a score of 0
That was beautifully haunting. It was also really sad ;( ! The drawings were lovely though, did you draw them?
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VintageRose
on 6/26/2012 6:29:36 PM with a score of 0
Omg!!!! I love this story soo much it was sad but really good
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— kenzie on 6/22/2012 5:31:56 PM with a score of 0
AWH :(
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— Lynn on 6/9/2012 3:34:22 PM with a score of 0
A bit choppy but still a beautiful story.
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CovElite
on 6/8/2012 6:47:44 PM with a score of 0
This is beyond all words. Happy and sad, confusing and ever-changing.
Like love
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supersafe
on 6/3/2012 11:19:10 PM with a score of 0
this was amazing and very sad.I loved it
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balletgirl99
on 6/3/2012 2:06:45 AM with a score of 0
AAAWWWW, so sad. i loved it
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AzurinDawn
on 6/2/2012 7:29:22 PM with a score of 0
Great and beautiful story.
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Xt1000305
on 5/23/2012 4:12:07 AM with a score of 0
I cried manly tears.
And, that's amongst the highest forms of praise I could give.
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Fierach
on 5/14/2012 2:12:59 AM with a score of 0
good, great, excellent. No, not excellent but great.
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cysid2
on 5/11/2012 8:10:04 PM with a score of 0
This story was beautiful. I nearly cried because of it. It reminded me so much of Clannad and the song Terrible Things.
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Greencloud
on 5/4/2012 2:57:40 AM with a score of 0
Good game.
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Hunter122899
on 4/30/2012 8:23:12 PM with a score of 0
Very Engageing, but yet sad at the very end. A verry well done!
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Killabunehs
on 4/25/2012 5:03:04 AM with a score of 0
too short but great story, decent art, and damn, its a master piece. could be happier though , but i cant complain much since it touched my heart
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— mo on 4/20/2012 12:12:29 PM with a score of 0
Sophia...
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— izzy on 4/14/2012 5:04:32 AM with a score of 0
This story was so wonderful yet sad. I read it a couple of times so that I'd be able to see the different endings. I'm glad that I took the time to read this. This is my favorite story here!
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— Erica on 3/31/2012 4:10:30 PM with a score of 0
You know what I hate is the animes. Very bad.
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— Caity on 3/30/2012 11:16:59 PM with a score of 0
Nice cause I like brokens.Keep up the good work. Miss Philippines¡
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— Caity on 3/30/2012 11:15:07 PM with a score of 0
OMFG! That was the best saddest story I have ever done
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— sjdaf;kl on 3/23/2012 1:45:07 PM with a score of 0
I played this game 6 times to see different endings they were all so sad. I didn't start crying but damn my eyes are watery as hell and they might as well be. Very good 8/8 quite the tear jerker even for someone as stoic as me
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— steve on 3/15/2012 11:52:17 PM with a score of 0
This is such a beautiful story! Its still one of my favorites.
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fergie14233
on 3/10/2012 5:25:22 PM with a score of 0
I loved this
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— a t on 2/27/2012 11:12:30 PM with a score of 0
Nice storyline and very good ending
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ZenUndead
on 2/23/2012 1:37:14 PM with a score of 0
T.T The hospital scene is sad................. Why do i always manage to find the sad stories...
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DontBeAfraidToDream
on 2/22/2012 1:00:17 AM with a score of 0
I am a man in every sense of the word. That being said I cried buckets of manly man tears.
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Legion
on 2/21/2012 2:03:39 AM with a score of 0
noooooooopoooooooo sophia!!!!!!!! nothing was a coincedence
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— randombob on 2/18/2012 5:32:23 PM with a score of 0
Great. But I need a happy ending. No more sad stories for a week for me!
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Louis-NinjaCowboy
on 2/10/2012 1:37:11 AM with a score of 0
It made me cry. I loved it.
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jaidenbornt
on 2/8/2012 1:59:40 PM with a score of 0
WaaaaaahhhHH! That was so sad!!! But so sweet...
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— Liz on 2/6/2012 5:15:22 PM with a score of 0
amazing its like something out of studio ghibli 8/8
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solxd7
on 2/6/2012 7:18:33 AM with a score of 0
I love this story so much I going to write my own version of this beautiful story.
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— da on 1/28/2012 10:21:16 PM with a score of 0
Honestly I didn't get the ending.
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KiraGirl89
on 1/15/2012 6:07:53 PM with a score of 0
HERE. TAKE MY TEARS. TAKE THEM ALL.
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Doodled
on 1/15/2012 5:00:40 PM with a score of 0
Just to add on what a couple of people (JJJ and jkulibert from memory) said below, the story was noticeably written to make the reader sad (or at least it felt that way). The story had so many love story cliches - the difference between my experience of the story and theirs is that they worked on me.
With that said, I still think you did an amazing job of making those cliches work. I've tried it and it's not as easy as it looks. (I don't like looking at your story in this "it's just a pile of cliches" sort of way, because it genuinely made me feel, but it would be unfair to leave this side of the review out.)
Anyway, thanks for writing this :)
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October
on 1/14/2012 5:04:57 AM with a score of 0
This was really nice. I don't mean to offend (although this will probably offend you) but I didn't think you were capable of this. I sure as hell am not.
I've rated it an eight. It's really pretty. It's not real, something as fairytale-esque as this story never happens (could never happen) in real life, but, like always, I'm a fool when it comes to believing love stories and it got to me.
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October
on 1/14/2012 4:53:26 AM with a score of 0
It was ok
Though not much interaction
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Nyxora
on 1/10/2012 3:22:04 PM with a score of 0
I'm a guy. I like action and adventure. I'm as guy as there is. This story made me want to cry the first time i read it. You have got scary amounts of talent if you can do that. I applaud you.
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Jplague
on 1/2/2012 10:42:25 AM with a score of 0
Amazing story. The drawings are beautiful. There should be more stories like this.
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NinaB.R.
on 12/30/2011 4:12:37 AM with a score of 0
This was an amazing story! It was a great story that really made me feel like it was part of my life while I read it. Amazing, really. I can easily see why it was featured :D
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fergie14233
on 12/29/2011 8:41:22 PM with a score of 0
Who was the artist? I love the style that he/she draws!
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— Bob on 12/17/2011 12:39:55 AM with a score of 0
I loved it. I finally got the ending where she didn't die
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— Random Reader on 12/16/2011 1:09:35 PM with a score of 0
aww nooooo so sad!!! i was actually tearing up. it was so tragic!! I loved this one too.
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— Mia Cooper on 12/13/2011 12:27:01 PM with a score of 0
Wow. At first, I got the ending where she ends up with some other guy, and I was all 'I'll see if I can get a better ending..'
Amazing story, first interactive story I've read that made me cry since air pressure. 8/8
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standardtoaster
on 12/7/2011 10:15:23 PM with a score of 0
It's not the kind of story I usually read, I'll admit, but it did keep me reading which was all I wanted when I went looking for a storygame half an hour ago. The path I took wasn't completely sad. In fact, most of the pages were wistfully happy even if it did drip with the knowing of the end since the beginning. I usually don't like things written for the purpose of making someone sad, but I can't say that I didn't like this story either.
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jkulibert2
on 12/5/2011 9:55:40 PM with a score of 0
This story is a work of art, amazing job!
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FaceDown
on 12/3/2011 1:57:29 PM with a score of 0
As JJJ said, It felt like the story was trying to hard to be sad. I think it is good for your first story but there is room for improvement. Keep up the good work!
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cool74
on 12/3/2011 2:44:52 AM with a score of 0
wow, that was pretty poinient. Not many stories can crack this stone heart of mine. I hope to see more from you.
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— niall on 12/1/2011 12:01:21 PM with a score of 0
Really sad, almost mad me cry. 7/8
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Killer999
on 11/30/2011 1:06:14 PM with a score of 0
Very sad, but sweet.
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xwhittneyx
on 11/26/2011 10:50:24 PM with a score of 0
I really loved this game but it kind of confused me at parts but it was still a great game 7/8
You just played me
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playa988
on 11/26/2011 12:28:35 AM with a score of 0
You have revitalized the gebre of dreams and romance. I liked this story a lot :)
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alienalpha
on 11/18/2011 3:36:11 AM with a score of 0
It's not often that I like a story in the romance section, but I loved this story. Was anyone else reminded of Snow? 6/8
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ThisisBo
on 11/17/2011 10:40:51 PM with a score of 0
Did all possible playthroughs... if it is your first story simply amazing. If not, still very good. Once again, 6/8.
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written_agreement
on 11/17/2011 8:14:38 PM with a score of 0
Very good..sad, too. Reminded me of Snow, just a little less sad. Great.6/8
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written_agreement
on 11/17/2011 7:47:41 PM with a score of 0
It's well written, definitely. I didn't really love the pictures, I'm not really a fan of the style that they're in, but that's just my own griping, if I liked that style of picture, I think they would be perfect for the story. My major issue with this though is that it constantly feels like a pathetic appeal. That is to say, it feels as if you're consciously TRYING to "pluck my heart strings". The trick to writing a "sad" story is to make it sad, naturally. This felt sad predictably and sad for the sake of being sad. Since I felt that way, I didn't actually FEEL anything from your story. For an example of a similar story that's done more naturally, check out Snow by Sethaniel.
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JJJ-thebanisher
on 11/17/2011 1:01:08 PM with a score of 0
What the hell just happened?
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— Crilly on 11/17/2011 12:09:19 PM with a score of 0
Thats... quite a sad story we have here. It's a well written story and the picture's really worked for the page. (Is there anyway to save her?)
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Fireplay
on 11/17/2011 11:38:06 AM with a score of 0
Sad story, good, but very sad.
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Killer999
on 11/17/2011 11:22:57 AM with a score of 0
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