Player Comments on Dead Man Walking (Zombie Survival)
Berka's Dead Man Walking is a love letter to what makes the zombie genre as endlessly addictive as it is.
<<<SPOILERS BELOW. YOU HAVE BEEN WARNED>>>
As a massive fan of that genre, DMW was extremely easy to get instantly hooked. Its a serious, mostly grounded take, but isn't afraid to include and put its own spin on the normal but enjoyable tropes such as different types of zombies to smash and playing as an Average Joe who must balance morality and ethics with survival and practicality.
In other words, the game knows exactly what it wants to be and wastes zero time in dropping you right in - almost as quick and brutal as a real outbreak would. You begin dazed and hurt in dark, cold, filled with dead and dread subway tunnel - the train you were a passenger on having wrecked for unknown reasons - and immediately you must use your wits and grit to escape. Death is nigh and very much possible from the start, and every counter needs to be thought out and the each result is as well-written as the last.
This, of course, leads into my next bit of praise - the pacing. The game is as quick as it is chaotic. There are brief moments of respite and exposition sprinkled throughout, it certainly isn't nonstop, but Berka nails the urgency and stakes of the story without pushing you or limiting the exploration. The game perhaps unironically feels like the Dead Rising games of old - where you have complete freedom to explore and scavenge - but an ultimate goal beckons you to never spend too much time in one place or on one thing. It will pay the ultimate price if you choose to do so.
The dialogue, encounters, and action are all executed very well here, and the game even has some very enjoyable Easter eggs for the enlightened reader to try and find. This piece is as gamey as it needs to be but also contains a story as alluring and expertly-crafted as the subject matter demands. From a section on the fictional contagion that caused the whole thing, to multiple weapons and ways to get around the city - Dead Man Walking is as good a zombie IF piece can get, I dare to say.
Now, onto the few criticisms I have.
The contagion and its origin were both fresh and well thought out, and I enjoyed having an outbreak that doesn't completely end the world for once, as that is both overdone and overdue, being as such a real zombie apocalypse most likely wouldn't result in a direct real life adaption the the hit AMC show The Walking Dead. However, given this, I do feel like the story would have benefitted from being just a tad longer, and maybe even a bit harder. What we have here is a small piece of the best well-done steak ever, but I'm having the natural curiosity one would in food this good, and I simply can't help but wonder how it would taste if it was both bigger and cooked more. This is being mentioned as a flaw because I personally feel it was set up for it, but ultimately feels average in length. But to say this, I must acknowledge the heavy replayability and impressive number of choices and characters - the steak certainly doesn't NEED what I mentioned earlier - but it could certainly benefit from it.
The end states, even the best ones, were fulfilling and overall satisfying enough, especially given the sorta rare conclusion of the world NOT ending this time. Unfortunately, and perhaps it is due to me wishing for more, they felt not rushed, but a little abrupt. If you make it to the wilderness, its enough to live untouched for months before the military rolls in and takes it from there - no final battle, no tension, mistrust, or issues whatsoever. Felt a little unrealistic, and some more fleshing out really would have driven it home perfectly for me. This is pretty much all I meant with saying it honestly could be a tiny bit longer.
In conclusion, DMW is definitely not BerkaZerka's magnum opus; but it is surely one of the most intelligently-written and downright enjoyable games on the site, as well as certainly being the best zombie one. If this game were to exist as a physical being and IF box Killa_Robot's own excellent zombie tale, it would beat it in the 3rd round out of 5 using superior prose, more meaningful choices, and sheer scope. In the end, both are great, but Berka is, for now, the undisputed CYS Champion of Zombie Games.
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Voldy
on 11/21/2021 5:47:06 AM with a score of 18165
This is an excellent storygame, and it is quite obvious to those with a functioning brain why this is one of the best storygames in the site, but I do not think that it is the very best. It had a hard battle with stories like Eternal, but with the way the author wrote this, it could very well win that battle.
The flow of the writing was set at a perfect pace. The writing was complex and didn't have that choppy feel that you get from some of the stories that can be found on this site, which greatly improved the flow and gave it a very smooth feel. Action scenes were smoothly developed and foreshadowed admiringly by the author, creating a good suspenseful feeling for me as a reader.
The way the plot was developed was simply masterful. This story had everything; exposition, raising action, numerous climactic scenes, even more action and suspense that couldn't be quite labeled as "falling action", and a variety of resolutions. Each scene kept me on the edge of my seat and I found myself clicking that link to the next page faster than Usain Bolt can run.
The writing was very descriptive and I could clearly picture each scene in my mind, and I felt as though I was actually a part of the story. Generic movie crap isn't included in this story, and it really comes down to you and your brain.
Each character in the story is introduced and developed in a way that makes me feel as if I've known them for a long time and I can understand everything about them. They become part of the virtual world created by the author's writing and play an important role in developing the story.
It is quite obvious that a great deal of time and effort was put into proofreading this because I didn't notice any mistakes in grammar or spelling, and even if I had, I doubt they would have taken anything from this storygame.
8/8
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Nyctophilia
on 2/22/2017 7:42:14 AM with a score of 2860
The story reminds me of the Energizer Bunny commercials: it keeps going, and going, and going. This is a good thing. I backed up and tried different paths a few times and was pleasantly surprised (and a bit awed) to find that the author has created quite a complex, sprawling spider-web of possible storylines, giving the story a lot of replayability.
I love the lack of an actual inventory and the way your choices affect later portions of the story. I believe whole portions of pages have script-driven text which "remember" the choices you made. Throughout, the author presents difficult scenarios for the main character to puzzle through, and the whole experience feels very open-ended, as many choices are shades of grey, rather than overtly evil/good, foolish/intelligent, pragmatic/emotional.
The story has minimal typos and I only found one "bug," demonstrating the author's commitment to proofreading and editing. At times, I would have liked a bit more action rather than explanation, particularly with the length of these portions, but overall the story had a nice pace and rarely felt dull. Also, some of the dialogue could be rewritten to feel more real and dynamic, but these are minor criticisms.
The depth of the story is obvious, as is the author's commitment to produce some solid work. I am definitely going to re-read this and try some completely different tactics. I got what I suspect is the second best ending.
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madglee
on 11/25/2012 1:45:19 PM with a score of 26415
Great story, I really enjoyed it from beginning to end. I would be interested in more stories with a very similar build in this very same world, just different characters.
Sometimes the descriptions were a little too much but overall the best zombie story I found on this site.
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AshPhoenix
on 11/4/2024 8:17:49 AM with a score of 34067
after 12 days of trial and error I saved my family... JESUS CHRIST this story is good... adding more curse words would make it more realistic!
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— Daniel on 10/30/2024 12:37:41 PM with a score of 18985
Great Job I really enjoyed it. Now going to restart and head towards the police station.
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smorl
on 10/22/2024 3:57:42 PM with a score of 4540
loved it
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RibbitTheGroggyFrog
on 10/21/2024 1:26:13 PM with a score of 22565
spoilerless tl;dr: very cool zombie game. it's engaging and fun, cheerful and/or gory in spots.
spoilerful non tl;dr: there are grammar and punctuation issues throughout, but not as many as i expect from this site and only distracting if you're in a bad mood. i've only played once so far, so i've missed most of this game, but, as far as i can tell, most side characters are lacking a bit in depth. wife as the primary example: less a vital, emotionally-significant-to-the-protagonist character and more a whiny, nameless blob. the daughters at least had names, but not much else going for them. personality traits seem to be rationed to one or sometimes less per person.
i liked the pacing and the variety of choices. i like how huge this game seems to be. i got bitten in the subway, reversed, and i think died or nearly died again very soon after- reversed again because i wanted to grab the best ending. it got easier as i went. the subway seemed to be the hardest section to survive by far. i liked the tone of the choices and a lot of the writing. the unsubtle foreshadowing going on. giggled at it few times. one description in particular of that cannibal mutant was awesome, but i can't quote it. lots of ammo-less guns to collect if you're in to that.
the ending felt a little unlikely and pretty sudden. i read halfway through my last page before realizing it'd happened. the last third of the game, going for the best ending, also seemed like it might have been a little too easy. maybe it's not meant to be difficult. i don't know. maybe i got lucky.
i spent a lot of time squinting at my other options, wondering what the hell they would have led to. the game seems to mostly only kill you if you deserve it, so most did lead to *something*. branch after branch after branch. i'm gonna go explore them now.
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akuagen
on 10/19/2024 11:44:54 PM with a score of 35107
Lots of story here. I'm gonna be honest, I skimmed through a bit and now I'm stuck trying to understand when and how I got bit. So, though it will be a great game either way, I recommend you actually take the time to read. It's genuinely one of the better zombie survival "stories" (in a sense) out there. Also, come on, you know its good if you've read the description.
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yamftodbwisiwitw
on 10/19/2024 8:23:47 PM with a score of 19615
I didn't make it far...
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— Brandon on 10/17/2024 5:40:01 PM with a score of 1410
Very good! My heart was pounding the whole way through.
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— Mysterious Man on 10/15/2024 11:47:04 PM with a score of 15975
I liekd the part where the zombies ate people and stuff
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— zombiemcfacehead on 10/7/2024 5:46:40 PM with a score of 1760
Better than the Walking Dead tv series.
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johnyfront
on 10/2/2024 9:27:38 AM with a score of 16625
Fantastic!
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DtheKing1247
on 10/1/2024 11:40:26 AM with a score of 16370
My only real complaint is that I received a score at the end, but it's largely meaningless without context. 8600 points out of.... 10,000? 100,000? It's hard to get a sense of how well or how badly I did.
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— Stephen on 9/30/2024 2:58:56 PM with a score of 8610
I loved it! The simple concept of having to go and save your family was motivating enough for me to try and get the perfect ending. I died many times of course, but none felt particularly unfair.
<<SPOILER BELOW>>
In the ending I got, we tell Jacob that his mother is dead, and we adopt him as our son. But I don't really remember making any inquiries about this. I know the military probably took her, but I have no idea what actually happened there.
Also, I think I spotted two typos. I remember there was a page with "Come one" instead of "Come on".
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Clayfinger
on 8/22/2024 3:29:45 AM with a score of 34717
I am obsessed, the writing and the storylien is just perfect!! :D
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— <3 on 8/21/2024 7:38:57 PM with a score of 11320
Really great game and ending.
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— reykao3142 on 8/20/2024 2:49:50 PM with a score of 33487
I like this even tho I am a happy meal for zombies
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— Izzy on 8/15/2024 10:03:56 PM with a score of 1760
I really enjoyed it, and though I didn't go beyond 10% of it, I will be playing it often soon.
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HRGEstrella
on 8/15/2024 8:15:51 PM with a score of 13670
I absolutely loved this storybook. I will continue to replay it and try to get all the endings as well as all the cameos. Love the twists but when you read it a few times figuring out the best choice to stay unharmed/minimize the risks becomes easy and gratifying! Loved it and recommend it to all young adults with a love for grisly awesome zombie horror and survival.
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— ArizonaFlounder on 8/15/2024 11:57:21 AM with a score of 35837
I really enjoyed this journey, managed to save my family and a lot of people, and remained completely unharmed(apart from the injuries you start with)
Got the best ending and strongly recommend this little adventure to everyone
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— Demon on 8/11/2024 6:15:38 PM with a score of 37147
Got a 15520 first try. Quite the adventure!Many a hard decision!Would play again.
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Davey_ROLE
on 7/30/2024 8:25:00 PM with a score of 15530
Ravenous:
Hungry
Starving
Voracious
Insatiable
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— estelle on 7/20/2024 10:50:40 PM with a score of 16915
kinda very open in it's subjects of story and it also is very good ended, by 'good-ended' I mean it was not as such games... which they just leave the ending open or make a crappy ending to sum up all s*it of their narration; but this one had a rational, sensible, relatable and kinda really "realistic" ending and going of it's story. a cool simple game.
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— ar on 7/19/2024 10:15:35 AM with a score of 29777
touch ass and grass baybeee
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— beef on 7/7/2024 6:04:07 AM with a score of 10070
Really good game. It felt a little linear but overall I enjoyed it a lot. Wish there was a map of the choices
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Ilovetoread
on 6/25/2024 5:21:48 PM with a score of 30747
Bussin CHOOSEYOUROWNSTORY at least by what i think. While reading it i feel like this should be a book, if you the author has read this please think about turning this into a physical book if you already have not. :)
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— Savya on 6/20/2024 6:23:51 AM with a score of 13970
Hard but fun
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— Treen Yulie on 6/14/2024 5:54:37 AM with a score of 31527
it was a awesome story
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— steel on 6/13/2024 4:43:40 AM with a score of 34297
This was amazing! It was very difficult, but in a good way. I must have tried (and died) nearly 6 times. This was also amazing because decisions super early on could mean life or death later in the game. I highly recommend this for someone looking for a more fun way of reading, because it's like a super fun video game in book form.
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— Celia on 6/12/2024 7:13:40 PM with a score of 18060
Better than the classic. We need a PS version of this.
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— JJ on 6/9/2024 1:12:30 AM with a score of 36607
Had a nice bit of fun, thank you!
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Whatnowtho
on 5/27/2024 6:45:30 AM with a score of 38267
Please Make more stories like this!
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— ABBY on 5/22/2024 4:06:13 PM with a score of 37637
This was an awesome story I enjoyed the various branches thank you!
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— Ali on 5/11/2024 5:04:03 PM with a score of 36377
Too good to resist, and love the replayability with situations
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Darealkyguy
on 5/7/2024 4:22:05 PM with a score of 19075
Really fun and engaging. Would recommend!
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Seraph287
on 5/3/2024 4:33:37 AM with a score of 22765
Amazing just amazing
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Darealkyguy
on 4/30/2024 7:00:08 PM with a score of 17725
Very good I love this genre please message me about new ideas or playtest
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— Ollie on 4/19/2024 1:28:29 AM with a score of 1460
thank you for the hours of enjoyment, that lingered for years
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lalika
on 4/17/2024 5:18:13 PM with a score of 20
Beautiful game, thanks for making it and provided me with hours of fun. Would recommend to anyone who wants to have a good zombie apocalypse scenario that doesn’t go to far over the top and seems extremely realistic. Thanks again
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daltonk
on 4/12/2024 3:42:55 AM with a score of 36307
Fun and in depth going to play it again
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— Dalton on 4/12/2024 1:34:32 AM with a score of 1560
The chapter sleepy and the original first page has a bug. His watch is broken. Unless it is explicit that he took the watch from the dead guy on the train his watch should not function in chapter sleepy. Specifically when the alarm wakes him up at 6:00 am
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— Justin on 4/7/2024 10:17:27 PM with a score of 430
Niceeeee. Probaly gonna buyed it if it release in the playstore
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— PENCIL on 4/3/2024 2:04:14 PM with a score of 7910
It was fun and I still have interest in replaying the game to find alternate or better endings. Thank you for your efforts in making this!
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— Christopher Fisher on 4/3/2024 12:37:15 PM with a score of 17365
This was really really fun. I could see it playing in my head as if watching a movie. Super engaging and written very well. Thanks!
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— EricG on 4/3/2024 12:18:49 PM with a score of 36027
I absolutely loved this and will replay it again!
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— Adam on 4/2/2024 8:21:01 PM with a score of 26325
Fun and engaging!
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aspenfyre
on 3/31/2024 9:30:44 AM with a score of 17535
-Slight Spoiler Warning-
Wow! Started this over four and a half hours ago and this is probably one of the most exciting tales I’ve gotten to participate in and was a great introduction to these interactive books. I enjoyed the beginning, as anyone would, I died a bit but went as normal before finding my wife and dying to infection in my wounds. It took me a while to figure out how to circumvent it, but eventually I did, redid it all and got to complete the map all the way through with only one mistake. This story was intriguing and kept me on my toes, a dark yet realistic interpretation of zombie apocalypse that, as they say near the beginning, actually lets you be smarter than the fools on TV. The countless pages, each hand-crafted let you go so many different ways, and while I wasn’t able to save my wife, I did save Jacob, my daughters and everyone at the school. I give this tale a 10/10, although admittedly not for everyone due to heavy gore. Honestly don’t have the willpower to do all that again anytime soon, but this is a story I will remember.
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— Some Guy on 3/29/2024 1:51:54 PM with a score of 21315
nice
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— tony on 3/21/2024 9:09:08 PM with a score of 22815
Amazing zombie choose your own adventure book.
I was looking for something like this in Barnes n Noble, and decided to look for a choose your own adventure site. Came up on this, and am amazingly impressed by the author of this one.
It will take you a few days to weeks to see this all I think.
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Shrewynd
on 2/29/2024 3:08:20 PM with a score of 8810
I loved this game but I really wanted to find the “black figure” is there anyone who has done that?
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— Lydia on 2/22/2024 10:40:31 PM with a score of 32147
Now ain't this a huge score?
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— John Doe on 2/20/2024 1:30:14 AM with a score of 31667
noice
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— nicloe on 2/13/2024 9:15:44 PM with a score of 3710
This was fun. I ended up finding my wife and dying in my own house with Jacob in a safe place (I never came across any antibiotics) and felt that was a good place to leave it. Hopefully my daughters are ok. Great story. Well done. Definitely worth the adventure.
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— Derek Stout on 2/9/2024 9:37:31 PM with a score of 18240
fun
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234532
on 2/7/2024 12:41:19 PM with a score of 11860
This was fun. I ended up finding my wife and dying in my own house with Jacob in a safe place (I never came across any antibiotics) and felt that was a good place to leave it. Hopefully my daughters are ok. Great story. Well done. Definitely worth the adventure.
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— Derek Stout on 2/6/2024 12:25:30 AM with a score of 18240
the very best
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AUAKSA
on 2/5/2024 3:24:31 AM with a score of 17620
Good ass game
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Nestlesuxs
on 2/1/2024 11:26:31 PM with a score of 39957
i proved to be zombie bait on my first run through lol this is enough to get me into the story however, im sold. I highly recommend this if you are a zombie fan!
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vicfx
on 1/21/2024 5:51:23 PM with a score of 4760
very fun
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Jimmy254
on 1/13/2024 12:40:19 AM with a score of 22825
Only played through one ending but it was really enjoyable and I never had a moment where I asked myself how the hell did that happen after making a choice consequences are fair and understandable
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TheT2
on 1/10/2024 2:25:28 PM with a score of 25045
Fire axe
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— Greg on 1/7/2024 11:14:52 PM with a score of 19565
Amazing book, that's all there is to say. I don't even normally like zombies much.
I made an account for this game so I could save my progress.
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Yonder
on 1/6/2024 2:00:39 PM with a score of 10
nice
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— g on 1/3/2024 4:27:51 PM with a score of 910
fun story!
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— michael m on 12/22/2023 4:47:07 PM with a score of 2360
fire
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Andyyy42069
on 12/20/2023 2:16:36 AM with a score of 18765
Truly an amazing and well crafted story. I played through it multiple times because I really enjoyed the wide range of encounters, events, and endings. I'd recommend this wholeheartedly!
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— Rei on 12/18/2023 9:02:15 PM with a score of 39387
I would have liked a few different options but overall a very well written story.
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DavidChapman
on 12/15/2023 5:32:36 AM with a score of 1630
Love the game throughly, I ended the game with a score of 34587, played through 110 of 2,131 Pages and have proven to be a Rebuilder.
I need to replay the game again and find out what happens when I try other things. I played this game imagining myself as the character, and tried to avaoid conflict of any kind.
I will try again, pretending to be some kind of Rambo..lol.. Will have fun checking out all the endings. Thanks for this amazing game.
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RJman
on 12/4/2023 12:46:59 PM with a score of 34607
this is the most AMAZING EPIC GODLIKE GAME EVER!!!! i love this game. i also got the best and worst ending i dont realy know if i got the worst ending. now i really hope more people play this game this is again the most AMAZING EPIC GODLIKE GAME EEEEEEEEEEEEVEEEEEEEEER!!!!!! play it now
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— ILOVEtHISGAME on 12/4/2023 3:52:05 AM with a score of 33277
I really like the buildup in this story, but I do wish this had some pictures, at least a few here and there. If I was a person that didn't read much and was more into picture-based reader, I wouldn't consider this interesting at all. Plus, if you did add in a few pictures to this CYOA, I'm sure more people would be interested in this. But other than that, this CYOA is great. Hope you make more in the future.
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— SansRainAsterisk on 12/2/2023 3:19:41 AM with a score of 42207
This is brilliant. The effort and attention to detail is genius. So much fun
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— Andy on 11/27/2023 12:01:13 AM with a score of 24765
idk how i lived but i lived!!!! WAHOOO
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bludpoolin
on 11/22/2023 1:06:56 AM with a score of 18885
i died, whoops
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— lynne on 11/20/2023 3:08:47 PM with a score of 12340
Pretty good, I enjoyed my first playthorugh of it. I will definitely be replaying this quite a bit to see the other endings .
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GamerTen
on 11/11/2023 4:13:07 PM with a score of 19925
Really Good. This is probably the best story game I've read so far.
I achieved the best ending, found Betaband, CovElite, simplesabley and ThisisBo. I also killed 7 zombies and 1 hellhound and I saved 60 people(including myself and I didn't get bitten), killed 0 people, and proved to be a rebuilder. My score was 38647.
The pacing is really good and there are SO MANY ENDINGS. Amazing story, well done.
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fergatamoo
on 10/28/2023 2:15:21 PM with a score of 38687
i loved this little inquiry of yours hunny bun! make sure to have everyone safe and i'd love for it to be a bit less violent, but you did awesome and were very creative. the guns and weapons werent maybe a good idea because youll shoot your eye out. excellent!
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— ur mom on 10/24/2023 4:18:44 PM with a score of 2760
good
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bobert1229586
on 10/16/2023 5:58:51 PM with a score of 2310
I killed 63 zombies 0 special zombies and 1 Human (He deserved it) and saved 5 people and myself.
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— GARY on 10/15/2023 5:00:04 PM with a score of 31527
why cant i shoot the children
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— Quandale dingle on 10/13/2023 6:43:34 PM with a score of 19065
Worried I might not like it. Very surprised it was a great read. Couldn’t put the book down. And I don’t read.
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Navyguy
on 10/13/2023 11:46:37 AM with a score of 10
This was amazing and I still have a lot to explore.
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— Paisley on 10/13/2023 11:26:00 AM with a score of 10
oh man, this is one of those games where it is not just a story or game, but a mix. This is one of those mixes where it balances perfectly, with a mix of nearly all genres.
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boniebonieboi
on 10/12/2023 11:35:17 PM with a score of 25575
It's soooo hard!
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— Evelyn on 10/11/2023 3:50:39 PM with a score of 1610
This was a really good story. It felt very realistic.
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— Joe on 10/6/2023 9:47:11 AM with a score of 12810
Zombies ate me but still a very good adventure. I'll try again to see if I can up my score, doesn't seem likely that survival is possible.
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— Lena on 10/1/2023 1:57:10 PM with a score of 9610
very good game a got the best ending but I would have really liked to know how to find the endmaster
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— Lydia on 9/26/2023 1:14:35 PM with a score of 28737
I love a good multi-end story.
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— nell on 9/6/2023 11:13:01 AM with a score of 13310
i think other people already said that this story is good and i guess i agree, but i dont like how each time you make a decision its only a different branch on how you will get to the same place and ending, only things added are minor plots along the way if you catch them
in my first playthrough i made it to the train and got contacted by the officer. i missed him but made it to my wife's house and exhausted all options so i got a good ending at least, so i tried to listen to his instructions and as i said it's only a minor plot about how you're in the prison but you're talked into escaping anyway for example
if there's something i missed that would lead to another major ending then i dont know, maybe my expectations are different but the 8/8 length had me thinking that way so who knows
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— Jack on 9/2/2023 10:16:02 AM with a score of 2910
So much fun I spent HOURS on this story. FIVE STARS.
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— Isaac on 8/30/2023 6:39:22 PM with a score of 15635
I got the best possible ending WOOO LETS GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
Ok in all seriousness it's one of the best storygames on the site. I like horror and especially well thought out zombie games and this is it
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— Greg bradley survived the outb on 8/27/2023 2:30:04 PM with a score of 32687
Pretty fun story
I clubbed a guy in the head, good times.
I am the ultimate survivor.
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maveric619
on 8/18/2023 1:02:07 AM with a score of 28167
This was a really fun experience
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mirado900
on 8/17/2023 1:25:55 AM with a score of 13920
Great game! I would love to see more of your work in the future or even work with you if you ever have a chance!
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— Camry on 8/12/2023 1:47:15 PM with a score of 34117
Super fun story! I went through this with my family and everyone had a blast debating which options to pick. The choices aren't just picking which option is more/less risky, but entirely different directions for the plot to go down. There's a plethora of interesting locations, enemy types, and plots that can be easily missed, so I'd strongly recommend doing this multiple times.
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— MonkeyB on 8/6/2023 2:49:57 AM with a score of 30197
I played this game a little bit back in middle school. I once again found this game after a memory of imagining the protagonist dead in the sewers, as well as a tumblr post asking if anyone could find it, followed by a quick lazy google search. it is only now that i complete this game, amazed at its quality. The only gripes i would have (grammar and spelling) are overshadowed by pure nostalgia and amazement at being able to find it. Play. This. Game. There is no reason not to (other than if your squeamish around written depictions of heavy gore, and a couple instances of animal death, or are in the same situation as greg right now).
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catinc
on 8/1/2023 3:16:53 AM with a score of 22445
Wow, this was fun but I had no idea how to get past being ambushed by the prisoner as I tried to free my wife
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— Edna on 7/15/2023 5:20:29 PM with a score of 8360
WHILE WORKING I FOUND THIS EASY TO READ WHILE WORKING AND GREAT ENTERTAINMENT TO HELP PAST. IT WAS A GREAT READ AND GAVE ME SOME IDEAS AND THOUGHTS OF HOW I WOULD TRY TO SURVIVE A ZOMBIE MOB. WILL HAVE TO READ THIS AGAIN
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— STEVEN on 7/1/2023 10:21:44 PM with a score of 11030
It's good😃
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— Someone on 6/19/2023 8:19:10 AM with a score of 1260
Everything besides some endings being clearly abruptly cut compared to the best one, is really good and by far the best story of zombies I have the pleasure to find here so far.
The only other complain would be the same as everyone else as trying to make the rest of the survivors besides the ones in the end more useful/ valuable to the story.
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JonaGDP
on 6/14/2023 9:44:00 PM with a score of 10
This was literally one of the best things we have ever done. We are a married couple and found this to occupy us while on holiday, expecting it to be a funny half an hour adventure. This turned into a two and a half day long intense story that we were invested in every step of the way. The realism, writing and logical pathways of this blew our minds. Working together, we managed to almost get the golden ending, the only downside being that we became a carrier and got bit. We saved 60 people and our whole family, plus Jacob. Thank you so much for this awesome experience. You should seriously look into getting involved in games like those made by Telltale as your choices and pathways are far better than what they offer. 10/10.
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— Amelia and Mike on 6/8/2023 5:11:29 AM with a score of 24595
~spoilers ahead~
awesome game!!
I had to figure out how to avoid the intruder death, i literally had to backpedal so much to get past it haha, but it worked out in the end with the best ending possible! : )
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— lisa on 5/19/2023 4:04:38 AM with a score of 31307
Such a great story. All the detail allows you to really immerse yourself and imagine the world created by the author. Well done and thank you for sharing with us.
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ninapeen
on 5/12/2023 4:52:24 PM with a score of 20465
I played this game way back in 2016 and absolutely LOVED it.I was so happy to find this game once more and realized that I had actually skipped a huge segment of the game (SPOILER: regarding the crazy scientist) so it was really fun. Has a 100% replayability value and is probably the best choose-your-adventure game I've ever played.
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chrysalis
on 5/10/2023 12:26:08 PM with a score of 24115
Good story. I like that you reward critical thinking instead of those who just blindly blaze through and try to kill everything. Thank you.
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— A Survivor on 4/30/2023 5:25:09 PM with a score of 32717
it is unfair
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qazwsxedc
on 4/29/2023 4:46:45 PM with a score of 4460
It was so fun and detailed.
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— boywithuke on 4/17/2023 2:14:38 PM with a score of 8010
This is actually pretty damn fun- i might get in trouble from my school cause its *bloody* but i dont think words are gonna hurt me that much, i somehow survived without getting infected and became stealthy with a SHOTGUN.
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— Creative Name on 4/17/2023 1:35:40 PM with a score of 19825
Really felt like I had to be cunning.
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SirMeatLoin
on 4/14/2023 3:36:38 AM with a score of 11910
I played this game years ago. I spent a few hours searching the interwebs (it long since rolled out of my search history). I eventually found it and it's a bit nostalgic for me. The game is also just as amazing as I remember. Definitely worth the difficult search!
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Lightning_11
on 4/6/2023 12:19:47 AM with a score of 17420
BRO MADE IT A HOLE MANSION OF STUFF TO READ MAKE IT SMALLER BRUH I DIDED BEACUSE ITS HARD TO DECIDE MAKE IT EASIER
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— ALex on 4/4/2023 4:35:12 PM with a score of 10
This was awesome, however pretty gruesome in some pages. (I mean obviously its gruesome it's a fucking zombie apocalypse) Other than that, I'd say this is better than Last of Us
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— Dylan on 4/3/2023 10:24:18 PM with a score of 7910
It's not GERMAN enough.
HIEL HITLER
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— Adolf Hitler on 3/30/2023 6:19:07 PM with a score of 2510
Really Great Work
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— Sam on 3/30/2023 7:15:54 AM with a score of 16335
Pretty fun to play
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— 1 on 3/24/2023 9:08:41 PM with a score of 38287
it was fun but i was kinda pissed that greg didn’t even stop to think abt the cat,,,
it was a fun thing though 10/10
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— kalisa on 3/24/2023 6:26:39 PM with a score of 12480
that.... was... good
an army of 14 people, full out camp, guns, a SUV, and a schoolbus
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boniebonieboi
on 3/20/2023 10:25:43 AM with a score of 31007
that was amazing
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boniebonieboi
on 3/20/2023 8:29:58 AM with a score of 19330
Really cool story! It is clearly very well thought out and had a lot of work put into it. Cool to see the character development of Greg throughout the story and see him (and yourself lol) get better at zombie survival tactics.
The world building for the zombies was quite interesting too! I don't want to say too much and spoil anything, but lots of interesting ideas and variety.
If you're like me and you're on a TLOU kick, definitely check this story out!
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— Arlo on 3/16/2023 7:55:43 AM with a score of 23215
28925
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Bryce_Gitch
on 3/2/2023 11:15:44 AM with a score of 28935
I was honestly sad I was able to get through it so quickly I'll probably do another run
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macewilldoul2
on 2/28/2023 5:49:54 AM with a score of 22935
Pretty good story! The () things are kind of misleading, I thought they were a guarantee than a "maybe", but tbf I totally deserved to get munched on that one time.
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— watchman420 on 2/26/2023 1:45:40 PM with a score of 7710
good game
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— Nolan on 2/16/2023 9:50:23 AM with a score of 2060
So fun!
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faith176
on 2/11/2023 3:22:26 AM with a score of 28965
Pretty Good :)
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— Inky on 2/4/2023 11:12:14 AM with a score of 1860
First “choose your story” I’ve read online and I was hooked! I will admit to backpaging a few times to carry on the story, but once I got to an ending I couldn’t really go back on (dying of an infection after finding and saving my wife) I decided to call it quits.
Bravo.
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— Heather on 2/1/2023 8:30:06 PM with a score of 17810
Nice
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jasperranz
on 1/31/2023 7:50:16 PM with a score of 36797
Good
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— Sneed on 1/31/2023 7:23:59 PM with a score of 21875
Great writing
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— Rafa on 1/31/2023 3:52:09 AM with a score of 34977
I absolutely love this! The only problem I had was that I would have to reload the page over and over to choose an option or it would say the page couldn’t load. Other than that, very few typos, very riveting!!!
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— Jlyle on 1/26/2023 9:04:56 AM with a score of 22665
37457
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boringtuna
on 1/18/2023 10:47:56 PM with a score of 37477
excellent - very entertaining
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daveork
on 1/5/2023 8:11:30 PM with a score of 36117
it was really good. i wish we were given the option to where to throw down the rope so we could avoid the bitten by leg death
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— blitz on 12/28/2022 7:46:30 AM with a score of 33107
is it possible
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— purpleissus8732 on 12/16/2022 12:04:03 PM with a score of 1010
Very nice. Still trying tp find paths other than rescuing the family.
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Sanea
on 12/3/2022 1:26:09 AM with a score of 19925
All in all a very good game, there are many paths to take and I plan on playing again until I have taken out at least one of every kind of horror in the game.
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YeaBread90
on 12/1/2022 4:43:39 PM with a score of 21165
I got the end
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— I won on 11/19/2022 9:09:18 PM with a score of 19785
eyup and welcome to callums corner
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CallumAdamsFanboy
on 11/11/2022 7:23:04 AM with a score of 28795
Well ... there are so much time for me to finish this game. It's almost 3 years now...
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— Thuan on 10/31/2022 1:35:55 AM with a score of 18365
Great story. 10/10 would recommend.
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Average_Cookierunfan
on 10/28/2022 7:09:02 PM with a score of 37567
Amazing
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FFCETT77
on 10/27/2022 8:48:10 PM with a score of 19085
Hey, I didn’t die and I saved 54 people, which I consider to be pretty good.
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fresh_out_the_oven
on 10/26/2022 11:56:39 AM with a score of 21715
great gme
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— reegan on 10/19/2022 5:16:58 AM with a score of 1210
awesome
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— Grumpygrumps on 10/12/2022 2:23:01 PM with a score of 21325
This pleases the old ones
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LordOtep
on 10/7/2022 12:12:24 AM with a score of 38037
So fun
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— None on 10/5/2022 1:51:34 AM with a score of 22225
I'm sure plenty will have something to say about the intricacies of how complex and long this "Choose Your Story" is. However, I was most impressed by how real it felt. It gave me similar feeling to how I felt playing Undertale the first time, which was very impressive. All the emotions, quick choices to make and dialogue worked very well with the concept. As expected, there are other paths I didn't take. But I feel that I accomplished something after this journey. That's good. Definitely top notch, if I say so myself.
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— Antonio Angelico on 10/3/2022 1:43:14 PM with a score of 32507
This game is really fun.
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— Emilee on 9/23/2022 1:44:58 PM with a score of 3260
Epic
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— JerryDaJerry on 9/22/2022 7:50:06 PM with a score of 37477
Really good, immersive writing
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— James on 9/19/2022 4:49:37 PM with a score of 1110
This one single story keeps me coming back to this site. I just can't get enough of this storygame, its writing and structure is varied and interesting, the plot lines are believable, it gives enough choice, but not too much, allowing for a certain level of control for the reader. 10/10 would recommend!
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— Grayrray224 on 9/15/2022 7:26:05 PM with a score of 36677
pog
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— Papertowel on 8/18/2022 7:53:42 PM with a score of 14370
It’s very good
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Whoisthisnoob
on 8/17/2022 10:47:02 AM with a score of 19335
Really in deph and not a waste of time.
Would reccomend.
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— Uhutoyou2 on 8/15/2022 8:06:43 PM with a score of 20435
the game itself was real cool, surtain parts wer somethings that I didn't wish to do, but I suppose that was the realism, also, I wonder how do I read the full story, it did say I only finished 107 out of 2021 or something pages, i really would like to finish them all
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filips
on 8/8/2022 12:56:33 PM with a score of 22635
My skull :(
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Filka_Runner
on 7/24/2022 4:58:43 PM with a score of 9010
Best story game on the site
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Joejoemamama
on 7/20/2022 10:54:26 AM with a score of 22275
Pretty cool. Shame I died when I did, but glad I managed to free my wife, save the kid and leave them some guns and supplies.
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— Bear on 7/16/2022 12:15:38 PM with a score of 3420
loved it I thought it was awesome
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— Grumpygrumps on 7/14/2022 1:14:33 PM with a score of 2410
I had so much fun reading this waiting for a flight.
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— Onur on 7/13/2022 8:53:37 PM with a score of 29467
I liked how the game really captured the zombie apocalypse survival feel really well, for example, how the grim reaper keeps showing up when you die.
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— Anon Y. Mous on 7/13/2022 2:17:35 AM with a score of 26285
Very fun and character build is extremely good!
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PhoenixDown1387
on 7/11/2022 4:55:54 PM with a score of 25647
nice
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— rat atat on 7/11/2022 10:26:42 AM with a score of 4010
Amazing detail with long length and a huge amount of possibilities
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dayshawn
on 7/8/2022 11:50:46 PM with a score of 39197
I lived
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— greg bradley on 7/1/2022 12:26:47 PM with a score of 29047
Amazing! Absolutely a masterpiece!
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— Kaiju on 6/29/2022 7:15:16 PM with a score of 32507
I played through just skipping most of the writing (writing is really good, it's just a lot) and picking options occasionally going back to see the situation better, and after 3 tries got "the best ending". It's really fun!
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ripsam
on 6/23/2022 1:18:29 AM with a score of 28227
This is a wonderful game and amazing story. I spent most of Sunday on two playthroughs. This is real edge of seat, must go on, story telling.
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— Jessica on 6/19/2022 7:19:15 PM with a score of 29427
Was fun. Only one playthrough but I feel like I got pretty far. Being squashed to death isn't a bad way to go.
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— Jojo on 6/19/2022 6:23:47 PM with a score of 15770
noice
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MaikolJaccsonHeeHee
on 6/15/2022 5:01:55 PM with a score of 16570
its great.
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coredvo
on 6/14/2022 4:27:21 PM with a score of 35557
This is possibly one of the best Zombie storys out there! I feel it would also make a great video game, book or even movie :)
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AustO
on 6/8/2022 1:11:40 PM with a score of 36097
real good, wish it wwas longer though! will replay different ways
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Diego_Ham
on 6/6/2022 12:40:17 PM with a score of 24735
Probably one of the best zombie survival games out there. 10/10
Now I'm usually not the person to look for in the comments section. Most of them are just a brief congrats or such. Some of them are even one or two sentences or a rating. That being said, This was absolutely amazing! I think it's even better than most of the movies out there.
The worldbuilding is so solid! I honestly did not think that a zombie survival game could go so deep! I was 100% expecting a game that went: Kill Zombie, Run, Shoot, Survive. This game is so much better than that. There is detail of the world around you, meaningful choices of where to go and what to do that can completely change the outcome of the story, and some actions even have consequences that aren't immediate! Now I can admit that my choice of games may have limited my experience, but it's been a log tie since I've played a game with actual prolonged consequences, And I've never seen it in a zombie game, but it's been done here brilliantly.
You even have the cause and the descriptions of the virus progression in-game! Sure, if you die you get an option to read that outside of the character's life, but your choices can lead you to figure it out on your own without having to die once.
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The variations are amazing too! Instead of going the easy route and just using your basic run of the mill zombie, you added some brilliant mutations with an actual "scientific" explanation for some of them! The hellhounds, the giants, the banshees, it's all so great!
Thank you for writing such an amazing story and sharing it with everyone on this site. I will definitely run through this again.
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Yummyfood
on 6/3/2022 9:30:16 AM with a score of 25775
this is a cool game keep up the good work
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— kayla on 5/28/2022 3:12:53 PM with a score of 13260
good story, lots of endings
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— Kevin on 5/27/2022 5:37:44 PM with a score of 7915
Wow, this was awesome! The detail that went into this was amazing! Somehow, I managed to escape the subways, recover at the police precinct, and save a school along with my family. Sadly, I did become a carrier to the virus, and ended up killing a little boy. My life would never be normal again, but I’m just thankful I survived. I can’t wait to find more stories like this one!
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— Owen McGlashan on 5/26/2022 2:34:55 PM with a score of 24135
nice job must have taken weeks!
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— sawyer on 5/25/2022 12:50:49 PM with a score of 7960
hey you should make a second one your in an abondoned rebel camp there are zombies everywhere you have a sharp bat a gun with three bullets and two zombie cures you make the rest of the story ok if you consider this also you can claim this as your idea if you want
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smoothtalker
on 5/9/2022 9:32:36 AM with a score of 1760
This was a super fun and engaging experience, I was entertained the entire time and captivated with how well it as written. The characters and world building were expertly detailed and had a lot of depth. Would HIGHLY recommend!
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— manbat116 on 5/2/2022 5:44:31 AM with a score of 38177
It was very interesting to read, and it is the best zombie story I have read to date. I will definitely play it again!
I`d rate it 10/10
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— Calderon on 4/25/2022 1:03:06 PM with a score of 2060
nice
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BroForReal
on 4/24/2022 11:45:48 AM with a score of 37777
very gud
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— eee on 4/20/2022 4:18:35 PM with a score of 6010
It was really fun to play through. Even though I died like a dumbass on page 56(?)
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— Whoisthisnoob on 4/13/2022 12:15:03 PM with a score of 9910
Good shiz
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— Belden on 4/9/2022 3:44:37 PM with a score of 35327
Wow that’s long I don’t think I could go that far and with how much you wrote what are the endings other than death
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— Wassupdayton3 on 4/6/2022 1:37:44 PM with a score of 1010
The only downside is the shakespearian weak female trope.
Aside from that it was well written; choices were fairly clear (though some could use more description to identify the sort of outcome your trying for [a problem with the bear grills netflix show where your choices are 'sane till they are taken out of the context you implied them']).
People aren't instantly all arsehats because dur apocolypse (such as with this war of mine the pc game).
Thoroughly enjoyable.
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— survivalist+ on 4/5/2022 4:36:48 AM with a score of 16865
Fun read, suprised i didn't get the best ending after saving my family + school
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— potatoe on 3/30/2022 9:17:16 PM with a score of 22495
I dont like dead walking people (cancel them)
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— isaiah on 3/29/2022 11:57:03 AM with a score of 2460
Very good and entertaining. It felt like every choice had a consequence.
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— Paul on 3/27/2022 6:14:55 AM with a score of 6315
Dang it I died!!! I want to do it again!!
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— Zachary Ellis on 3/26/2022 9:44:36 PM with a score of 7610
I found it really engaging and it was just a really fun read, although I would recommend if your on the younger side of people don’t read it cuz there’s some pretty gross and desterbing stuff but if you can get past that I would definitely recommend it.
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— Ethan on 3/20/2022 6:37:01 PM with a score of 33207
absolutely brilliant. although i did die a few times in the city and just returned page i managed to get the near very best ending (i had been bitten at the start)
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— ed on 3/20/2022 12:40:20 PM with a score of 23595
noice
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— grug moment on 3/16/2022 12:18:59 PM with a score of 37987
This game was fun! I enjoyed the writing and the details, and had fun trying to get to the same place by different methods. It was cool that in some cases missing the "best" choice was not a dealbreaker for getting to a good ending. Nice writing and detail, and the character seemed to be allowed choices that that made sense, while also allowing freedom to have some fun along the way.
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DBNB
on 3/15/2022 11:11:31 AM with a score of 10110
Did a quick playthrough so I could leave a comment. Tbh I really hate this game. Not because its bad, but because its just too damn good. Now my standards are at an all time high and no other story feels as immersive and immaculately crafted.
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crimefightingspider
on 3/12/2022 10:59:33 AM with a score of 710
Got the decent ending. Got bit, couldn’t save my wife and the kid we find at the boat house, but saved my girls and the survivors at school. Overall really satisfied
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— crimefightingspider on 3/12/2022 7:48:56 AM with a score of 22015
This is amazing had me hooked. I died so gonna try again tho
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— crimefightingspider on 3/12/2022 5:46:05 AM with a score of 9760
This was a great story, it really was.
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LunchMoneyThief707
on 3/10/2022 7:07:47 PM with a score of 35487
nice story, has a detailed plot but I don’t really like how some parts cannot be controlled.
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— user on 3/10/2022 3:22:29 PM with a score of 22975
it was very fun this is one of the many ending i got but this is the best one i got
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— Zeke on 3/8/2022 1:38:58 PM with a score of 30187
I saved my family and the kid (i forgot his name) but I am a survivalist
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— Alpha 2-4 on 3/1/2022 10:00:35 PM with a score of 22745
Gud Gem
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— Amougs on 2/26/2022 11:12:05 PM with a score of 2160
Dead Man Walking is what zombie survival media strives to be; truly an A tier experience.
This harsh world merely hours after the outbreak is a solid balance of unending undead, bleak outlook, and the horrors of an apocalypse beyond the zombies. That's not to say that the zombie encounters weren't nerve wracking in their own right!
Every encounter, from the shuffling hordes to the seemingly mundane instances, were well thought out scenario's where every choice you made meant life or death; As a zombie experience should be!
Our character got upset, he mourned, he screamed, this didn't feel like some meat puppet through which we enact our wildest zombie survival fantasies, but instead felt like a real person whose life depended on our insight, or lack there of. This really struck a good balance between the gameplay of choices, and a reason for which one could be immersed in the actual story.
The chances of a middle class office worker surviving an apocalypse, in the manner that our protagonist did, with everything stacked against him? Next to impossible. It would be uncritical of me to point this out, but I also recognize that, in most of these modern day hero stories, elements of a mundane protagonist have to be mixed in this "heroism", in such a way as to have a viable character to tell the story one wants to be told. Berka did well in this regard as well.
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let_it_reine
on 2/25/2022 10:32:26 AM with a score of 25075
This was incredibly fun and well written story. The emotional beats were perfectly timed with the intensity and made for a wonderfully enjoyable experience.
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— Isaiah Carter on 2/24/2022 4:05:28 PM with a score of 34837
Really intriguing. Tons of different paths to choose from. The zombie plot chosen was a bit generic, but I thought it worked.
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Gabinater
on 2/24/2022 2:30:23 PM with a score of 9465
This is my second time playing-through DMW. And I'm pleased to say it was just as enthralling an experience as when I had originally enjoyed it, nearly 5 years ago.
The writing is descriptive and evocative enough to paint a vivid (although usually grim) image of the post-apocalypse, while rarely ever waffling on for too long. Most if not all the information the text presents still feels succinct and pertinent to survival, which imbues the reading experience with a unique sense of tension, 'any missed detail could potentially be Greg's undoing!'
So all around, a fantastic interactive reading experience. I have no idea what the author is up to now, but I salute what must have been a monumental effort in creating this game, and wish them the very best in whatever creative endeavours they pursue in future.
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— Matthew on 2/10/2022 1:29:07 PM with a score of 35677
Really good
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— Me on 2/9/2022 2:03:30 PM with a score of 23775
I really liked this, the story telling was great and made me feel like I was actually there.
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Theron103
on 2/3/2022 12:12:15 PM with a score of 31917
Please do another one of these!
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— Gian on 2/1/2022 10:37:47 AM with a score of 21715
This was great! At first I kept dying when I tried to rescue my wife, but I figured it out. After a couple more tries I got the best possible ending, and let me tell you, that was satisfying!
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— Eelieen on 1/30/2022 1:16:01 PM with a score of 29217
It's really fun!
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Hazakime
on 1/28/2022 10:29:06 AM with a score of 15265
It’s been a great journey. Lots of options to take and different paths of adventures. My only regret so far is the lack of sufficient dialogue which caused a barrier to characters building. The reason why I saved Jacob a couple of times from getting killed or turned into zombie is mostly because if it weren’t for him, there wouldn’t be any enough dialogue in my path. So that’s one thing to improve.
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MegalosTheGreat
on 1/15/2022 1:25:01 PM with a score of 41487
i did not like it alot but i was decent
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— adam on 1/14/2022 8:05:12 PM with a score of 2110
really fun
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Superluigidummy
on 1/13/2022 7:23:28 PM with a score of 7765
Very well done and decently written, got the best ending I could, so in all honesty a job well done.
9/10
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drdlm123
on 12/30/2021 2:37:34 AM with a score of 36517
The story and how it’s told is great, no more than 3 typos in easily 10 pages worth of writing, only once was there a situation that had a missing option that would have been best out of all possible there, but that’s more of a personal preference than anything else. Thank you for putting what I expect to be a significant amount of time and effort into making this interactive story. I thoroughly enjoyed the challenge and believe I have improved my critical decision making some due to the unique situations that had to be dealt with in this. I hope you have a great day!
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— Human on 12/22/2021 4:19:37 PM with a score of 31587
Great story!!!!
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— Ben on 12/15/2021 7:06:37 AM with a score of 35517
For anyone who hasn't made it to the surface yet, I'll tell you it gets easier and more interesting from there.
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— Zachary on 12/11/2021 3:24:41 PM with a score of 10020
Here after replaying this again. Giving it an 8 this time.
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— Brick on 12/9/2021 1:44:16 AM with a score of 33907
It’s a good read, lots of options. Thank you very much for your dedication. I’ll take a while to try to explore more endings.
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— Stefan on 12/8/2021 11:54:31 AM with a score of 19760
I cannot wait to get the best possible ending
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— cousinpizza222 on 12/2/2021 12:06:29 AM with a score of 25365
Good job overall.
I must have had an incredibly boring first run as I did not run into anything other than typical zombies until I got into the suburbs. . . where I instantly died.
I absolutely love that I can play this one 100 times over and still get different results since my rather lengthy story only took up 140 pages or so.
However, some of the content is just gruelling to read. Details upon details of scenes and such when little actually happens. Tbh the detail overload at times really distracted from what was happening. And there were 3 or 4 sections where my only choice was "continue" and more scenery was explained instead of having actions.
However, I will definitely play this one over and over again to see where the hell hounds and demon zombies and ghouls are. This will be fun!
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Muser
on 12/1/2021 5:45:47 PM with a score of 13720
even though its one of my first cyoa's it was the best one i feel i will ever come across
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wahat
on 11/30/2021 3:16:42 AM with a score of 31727
Your Overall Score: 9300
Sudden and abrupt ending, but I survived XD
I like the story and the style a lot!
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Alundra2003
on 11/23/2021 5:07:43 PM with a score of 9310
vehicle-choked
gred bradley def uses reddit
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— ligma on 11/22/2021 8:44:38 PM with a score of 7260
Awesome game love it
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Darkradience
on 11/18/2021 6:36:08 PM with a score of 14180
This game was... graphic. The story was extremely well written and developed, but this led to horrific death scenes and battles, Overall, great game, but would not suggest for under 16.
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— Bob on 11/14/2021 2:58:58 PM with a score of 27467
The struggle between maneuvering through the plot in a tactical manner, and acting as you theoretically would in a zombie situation, is real. Clearly, my desire to help people is too strong (as is my tendency to sneak past things rather than outright attack them).
I will definitely be giving it another go.
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IChooseDammit
on 11/12/2021 1:35:33 AM with a score of 2560
Got the best ending
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Landonisanalien
on 11/9/2021 3:15:34 AM with a score of 26355
The amount of care and detail put into this will always amaze me.
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— Nathan Turner on 10/31/2021 1:19:57 AM with a score of 24905
Thanks! I did this with my online tutor, and we really had fun! Thanks for making this again.
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— Moses on 10/29/2021 8:31:40 AM with a score of 1360
a vary good game that makes you think of your action andwhat would happen
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fefqerbqgrbq
on 10/28/2021 4:25:29 PM with a score of 15325
Incredibly story. Goes very in-depth. Didn't give a perfect score because of a few instances of questionable dialoque. Otherwise excellent.
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Drakon
on 10/26/2021 10:37:58 PM with a score of 35437
Wow, this was amazing! I loved the story and will have to replay it for the multiple endings! I got the best ending except for getting bit by a zombie and being a carrier. Thanks for writting this story!
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— April on 10/10/2021 2:48:23 AM with a score of 24015
Incredibly well-written. Have already recommended it to a friend and will be playing again!
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arcaswrei
on 10/6/2021 2:20:52 AM with a score of 39857
I have played many of these games, one of the best so far...
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— Muhammad Dawood on 10/4/2021 9:26:00 AM with a score of 34417
I liked it a lot, just wasnt sure how to get to the pharmacy. Would help if there was a map available.
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KzillaLizard
on 10/3/2021 9:40:33 PM with a score of 15820
quite fun indeed
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— yeet on 10/3/2021 7:06:21 PM with a score of 30817
Really fun! I will be playing again to see what other winning outcome I can get
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CrebbMastaJ
on 9/30/2021 12:09:22 PM with a score of 37827
Incredibly detailed, can be made into a video game.
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— ViperSniper on 9/30/2021 8:11:28 AM with a score of 31667
This is a fun time, and I would recommend this to my friends. The attention to detail is immaculate.
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— Devin Luis Felix on 9/24/2021 1:31:07 PM with a score of 5210
great game, got the best ending
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— beandude on 9/23/2021 2:31:00 PM with a score of 29497
It is great, in the end I got shot by a guy with a shotgun, because I assumed people generally wouldn't shoot other people without a gun. I died. Apparently you cannot die for starvation
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Shadyslim
on 9/17/2021 5:19:24 PM with a score of 16860
its pretty good.
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AadiPattanaik
on 9/13/2021 10:22:21 AM with a score of 22185
A great replayable game, with many twists and roads to take. Now, I gotta do it over again!
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— Sam on 9/1/2021 10:22:34 AM with a score of 25525
I would like to say that this was an amazing read, i think you should add to this story and maybe make it so the main charcter loses someone and what happens is entirely out of player control, its something unavoidabls. Great job tho
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— Aa02 on 8/30/2021 10:00:04 PM with a score of 25075
Good not bad
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— Doug Brown on 8/28/2021 2:27:51 PM with a score of 1260
I thought I was doing well until I got to my house and was instantly killed by an intruder. The whole game seems to be leading you to your house to save your wife - when you do this you die. Seems a massive anti-climax.
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— Jazz Apple on 8/27/2021 11:30:24 AM with a score of 13960
was kinda fun i guess
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— sese on 8/6/2021 1:03:09 PM with a score of 20865
This was really cool! A throwback to my childhood. I've been wanting to make something similar to this, but to try and use Natural Language Processing software to generate new bits of story and choices. It's unknown if technology is to that point yet but a couple software packages are coming pretty close. We will see what happens when I'm done experimenting with the code. Anyway, thanks for your effort it was a lot of fun!
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— Robert B. Clements on 8/4/2021 7:58:31 PM with a score of 17165
A really fun experience, one of the best choose you adventure zombie stories, absolutely loved it
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Venom_1462
on 8/2/2021 11:23:21 AM with a score of 27725
Dis good, but I wasn't playing that much attention-
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— Austinneineuoptoplocototor on 7/14/2021 7:58:45 PM with a score of 1060
Awesome! Loved it, even though I died 75 pages in!
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— Sorceress on 6/15/2021 4:27:13 PM with a score of 14710
My friend and I just spent an hour doing this instead of working.. Thank you
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— bruh on 6/8/2021 12:11:45 PM with a score of 28367
Wow.. I just have to say Wow, that was Really good.
So this was my First run through this, I got the Best Ending.
This is my Score; 33367.
Guess I’m good at making the right choices in a zombie apocalypse, granted I only just clicked the choices, didn’t make them up..
Either way, Great Story, Please and thank you for making this!
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Sulfonicgolf6
on 5/30/2021 9:17:36 PM with a score of 33387
Was pretty good, is there a walkthrough to get all the endings? I was pretty frustrated at some points lol
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goroakechi
on 5/27/2021 1:24:49 PM with a score of 20935
Whoever wrote this deserves a award. I never thought that a chooseyouradventure story could ever be that good; i honestly just expected a short fun story; but instead got a full book. Excellent work
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MEISTERSCHWITZER
on 5/20/2021 2:32:14 AM with a score of 22685
Amazing story very realistic and appealing to all zombie lovers!
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— Alexander C Parks on 5/18/2021 10:09:37 AM with a score of 20765
This is by far the best zombie story i have read in a long time. Thanks to the author
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Mastro222
on 5/16/2021 5:05:36 AM with a score of 33157
i left a comment before, when i died, but now i finally beat the game with the best possible ending. loved it
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— candice on 5/14/2021 2:28:39 PM with a score of 35047
how many endings are there
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— ... on 5/14/2021 11:11:07 AM with a score of 6365
this was amazing, the story line had me hooked, and the intense plot twists. I had the truck ending where you drive through the horde at 25 miles per hour. I thought i would make it, but the child and i got attacked. i was disappointed, but only at the fact that i had died. The entire story is absolutely amazing. It is an amazing story that i get to write as i go on. I recommend it to everyone who doesnt mind reading a bit.
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— candice on 5/10/2021 4:16:06 PM with a score of 12010
Really good. Finished the whole thing in 1 sitting. I love all the description and I like how it is long. Its like being the main character in a long fun book.
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— NOPE on 5/7/2021 5:01:53 PM with a score of 34717
great
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Spicyboicairo
on 4/30/2021 2:44:06 AM with a score of 32197
Best game ever, so addictive and immersive
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Teamstriker131
on 4/19/2021 8:38:24 AM with a score of 38337
Co.e what may, may we be the survivors, and hold on to the hope of a better day in faith, and keep a positive outlook.
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— camp hope on 4/18/2021 4:27:20 PM with a score of 22045
Zombie apocalypse done right. The biggest issues in this genre, are the undead that can't die. Although this raises the stakes, it does nothing but prolong the story to a point where only a cure seems to be the solution. This makes the story restricted in the long run, as many authors run into the wall of "How will they survive now" further down the story. Here, the problem is solved by simply, making sense. A virus that zombifies a human and due to the lack of care to the host, it soon falls apart and dies. It's simple, and it works.
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— BigBrainTrain on 4/10/2021 8:36:48 AM with a score of 35467
THis is lit. I enjoyed it alot.
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Zombie_Surviver
on 4/4/2021 2:33:23 PM with a score of 3010
Super fun book, gets easier when you pass the first stage ig
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xelajo
on 3/29/2021 9:57:33 PM with a score of 24175
can you keep the wife from dying?
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Jumps50
on 3/29/2021 11:32:45 AM with a score of 12010
Fun game, good detailed descriptions, well-thought-out. Really sucked me into it!
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— Martin Shellabarger on 3/26/2021 5:09:01 PM with a score of 23835
Great story with lots of options and often terrifying descriptions! Got the best possible ending on my first playthrough, but will certainly come back to replay again in the future. :)
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Aurora89
on 3/26/2021 3:41:42 PM with a score of 39757
Very intriguing but if you plan to stay alive you may need 15+ minutes to complete!
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— Joanna on 3/25/2021 9:14:51 PM with a score of 16235
This story was really good and I think people should play this story.
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Story_On_90FPS
on 3/23/2021 12:20:32 PM with a score of 19285
This was one of the first games I'd played as a teenager and god I still love it to hell. I remember replaying this one constantly in my spare time.
I have to say that the reviewers above summarize most of my points brilliantly, such as the vivid scenes and descriptions. One thing that should be praised above all else and what I'm going to talk about is about the way small insignificant-looking choices affect the ending and how this adds to the whole horror aspect.
When I first played the game, I constantly got the bad ending where the man in your house kills you. Of course, I was shocked and unbelievably frustrated. My adoptive son has just died and now I will get slaughtered by a squatter? This is such a shitty ending, there has to be a better one. So I replayed, but I constantly reached a bottleneck.
No matter how much I tried to go back and reverse some of my choices, my boy still has to die and me too. For a few months I never even knew that there was a bigger portion of the story left undiscovered by me. That's what drove the horror to me. No matter how much I try, the game didn't want to give me a better ending. It was unforgiving in that part. I have to live with that, with the memory that I let my fictitious wife and son down.
That was until I discovered that my small choice of not picking up the phone in the very beginning led to my demise. The fact that such a small act could turn the whole narrative upside down and change the whole pathway was amazing yet horrifying to me. Thus, in my 10th playthrough, my wife was saved, but my adoptive son still had to die. Long time I thought that was the best ending I could get.
Now that I think about it, I let him die several times and even knowing that my company would be the death of him, I still wanted to bring him along with every playthrough. It broke my heart to constantly say goodbye to him. His death wasn't preventable, it was a cruel world after all.
Boy was I wrong, because I never traveled to the police station and tgus never heard about the way the zombie virus worked. Once I did, I could finally warn my son about the darn water bottle and save his life.
The fact that the game is so unforgiving and happy to make you suffer for the bad choices you make, makes it such an enjoyable experience. The fact that all deaths are preventable and the fact that your ignorant choices are the reason that everyone died makes this game have a visceral sense of dread linfering in your mind every time you replay it.
At last, the fact that the happy ending is littered with years of tragedy, makes this story close to my heart.
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Darius_Conwright
on 3/22/2021 10:51:10 PM with a score of 1110
I LOVE ME RECCES AND THIS IS BETTER (NO OFFENCE RECCES) *LICKS COMPUTER*
No seriously im a huge fan. Your work is amazing
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— Ricky Burwick on 3/16/2021 1:58:48 PM with a score of 2460
Such an amazing story, it captured my full attention as soon as I hopped in. I didn't get the best ending but I sure will come back and try again. I recommended this to all my friends that love stuff like this so I hope they also check this out. Definitely deserves an 8/8 in my opinion. *SPOILERS AHEAD*
I also loved the way you added captured strong emotions. For example, finding out your wife was forced as well would make me explode. Lucky enough the main character of this story, Greg/Us, was able to control his own emotions. Had it been me I'd be in a storm that would be impossible to escape. I would absolutely love a part two to this game if there can be. We could have a Point of view from someone else or even something more.
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— Zule on 3/14/2021 3:30:37 PM with a score of 19685
This was some of the most satisfying shit I have ever read. This is my second time reading on this site and i can firmly say it is a euphoric experience to beat these storygames. This story was beautiful and the way it unfolded and the options given were absolutely incredible. Winning with the "Best possible outcome" made me stand up and start yelling at 1 AM. The pleasure in surviving was unmatched from any other game. I give it full marks.
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Padradical
on 3/11/2021 11:32:44 PM with a score of 35047
What can I say that hasn't already been said? One of the best pieces of IF I've ever played. I love zombie fiction!
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EvilSpock
on 3/7/2021 4:52:10 AM with a score of 17335
Some of the choices can be quite amusing I enjoyed this very much and will probably play through again
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— Anon on 3/6/2021 7:59:20 PM with a score of 20035
Lots of fun!
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catownse
on 2/26/2021 12:09:32 PM with a score of 23870
Perfect, got the best ending, 61 lives saved :D
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— Survivor on 2/24/2021 12:00:43 PM with a score of 28487
Great way to kill time and a great, detailed story!!
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— Nathan on 2/23/2021 10:24:18 PM with a score of 18485
Very Fun, And My Parents Think Im Just reading A Passage ;-;
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— Michael Mitchell on 2/19/2021 2:55:42 PM with a score of 16265
Good game, although I didn't make it that far at all
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— joy on 2/17/2021 8:51:39 PM with a score of 1310
P.1 . Awake. Paragraph beginning with "It is very dark..." has a spelling error. At the end of the paragraph is "illumination form the emergency exits." The word "form" should be "from."
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— zombie bait on 2/17/2021 3:53:41 AM with a score of 2660
I'm impressed. Wrote some CYOA's of my own and the effort put into this is staggering. Fine work and solid writing as well - would highly recommend!
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— Waltus on 2/16/2021 12:26:25 PM with a score of 26165
Excellent. i will try and complete again. i know there is lots that i missed.
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— Scott on 2/12/2021 7:39:32 PM with a score of 7410
More than 1 thousand pages for you to choose from.
Good game, I'll replay it for sure.
Recommended!
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Monizious
on 2/12/2021 2:07:24 AM with a score of 34767
Good and Good. It can be also called fascinating.
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— Nanabe-kun on 2/7/2021 8:53:12 AM with a score of 30517
I gotta say, it was pretty good. I will definitely be paying again.
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— Gabby Ethridge on 2/5/2021 4:32:04 PM with a score of 21765
Very good story, am a little sad that the little boy (i think johnny or jim was his name?) died, but the story was realy good
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— Andy on 2/3/2021 11:16:52 PM with a score of 25115
This is such a great story! I love how many different endings there are and that there is an option to carry on playing even if bitten! Although there are a few very small spelling mistakes, the story is very well written!
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— Rachel on 2/3/2021 2:16:43 PM with a score of 26137
good
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— landon on 2/3/2021 1:54:46 PM with a score of 16485
I really enjoyed reading Dead Man Walking. I did not get as far as I hoped, but I will be returning to try my luck again.
The Story opens with in a tunnel after a subway wreck of which you were a passenger . You then must work your way out of the subway thru various obstacles.
I gave points for jumping into action almost immediately. I was literally sitting on the edge of my seat wondering if I was going to be attacked by a zombie around every corner.
I gave points for the details provided for each option. If you read carefully, and think your choices thru, you have been given all you need to know for the correct choice. In my case I got impatient as I was excited to see what was going to happen next.
The fact that I am going to try again and again just to see what happens is big points in my book. In the past my desire to return to try again has been to find out what the ending is at the end of the story itself. In this case, I wish to return to yes get that ending, but more importantly to enjoy reading and playing this game.
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oraclemache
on 2/3/2021 10:35:51 AM with a score of 7560
Great story I've played through twice now! At work we post the story and options, and everyone votes on what to do next, making it a team wide choose your story game. We have lively debates and tons of fun tracking who chose the most options that killed us. Well done, berkazerka.
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oranged
on 1/27/2021 5:48:29 PM with a score of 17535
Very much fun fun times here man!
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Zinthinial
on 1/18/2021 3:03:42 PM with a score of 17930
Awesome storyline, and a plot well developed. The world itself was well built, and consequences for your actions are thoroughly planned. In my eyes, it holds the best a CYOH can offer!
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— Black Lotus on 1/15/2021 6:01:45 AM with a score of 32317
Not bad man
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Isaac12708
on 1/13/2021 12:01:05 PM with a score of 16870
The BEST storygame in existence. You have GOT to play this.
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Anothree
on 1/9/2021 12:16:01 PM with a score of 32337
This game rewards logical and safe decisions, which is how I played. There are no frustrating things out of your control that negatively affect the story, or make your life more difficult just for the sake of it.
I saved my kids and lived in the woods! I am now going to stop being a little b*tch and explore the city.
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— chloe on 1/4/2021 8:16:43 PM with a score of 16375
Great story
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preeder
on 1/4/2021 5:11:43 PM with a score of 23315
So good... so, so good.
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— Licky on 12/28/2020 1:23:28 PM with a score of 10260
Excellent work! I was amazed that for such a long adventure I had only read a small part of the whole - wow ! Extremely good and lively descriptions.
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Lexstok
on 12/27/2020 11:55:41 AM with a score of 22125
I really enjoyed your game it took me many tries to get through to the end and I am enjoying finding new endings and finding all of the other versions of the mutated zombies so far I have only found the banshee, hell hound, and the drooler I commend your work and ask that you make more games like this one because this one is very delightful to play.
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— Riley Moore on 12/23/2020 10:17:40 AM with a score of 18465
Was my first time reading a choose your own adventure novel online, was a pretty good read, the only thing was that it felt it ended aburtly with you getting the sheriff and kids to all come with you into the wilderness and sorta felt like it ended all too soon, but other than that was a fun Read.
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— nomansland1 on 12/22/2020 12:25:29 PM with a score of 23625
Truly an awesome experience. For once I felt that you could take logical decisions, like trying to sneak through instead of rushing somewhere anime-style and expect things to work out on their own. There is one thing that has been bugging my mind though. At some point in the begining, when you choose the 'family route' (ignoring the refuge altogether) the writer suggests that Greg was bitten at some point, even if he didn't have to fight any zombie in particular.
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— TotmooZ on 12/21/2020 6:02:38 PM with a score of 36777
So good. I died a bazillion times and It was awesome this encouraged me to create a choose your own adventure too.
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JakobTriaSparkyJake
on 12/20/2020 10:58:34 PM with a score of 8510
I love Zombie Apocalypse stuff, and this was an AWESOME take on the genre! Loads of really good, thought-provoking choices to pick from. Some of them really deep/moral choices that will leave you haunted after in a few cases.
I HIGHLY recommend this story!
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Serendipity21
on 12/19/2020 1:37:54 PM with a score of 37077
Really fun. Ha dot make some tough decisions along the way.
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Killerbabyducks
on 12/16/2020 3:05:50 PM with a score of 19485
Incredible, I will be playing again in attempt to avoid contracting the virus.
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ryanwav
on 12/9/2020 5:51:27 PM with a score of 26435
Very fun and well written!
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nfsulli
on 12/7/2020 9:21:41 PM with a score of 7010
The story was great even though I died. Story writing is very good , and very describable
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— lex on 12/7/2020 1:43:39 PM with a score of 4710
This story is such an amazing accomplishment, time and time again I was lost in hours of reading and couldn't stop! I even broke my sleep schedule. Ironic that I chose the time of a pandemic to read this. Definitely will read again, and probably again! Thank you so much for making this! It's a dream!
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— Nicholas Belanger on 12/5/2020 2:37:10 AM with a score of 25675
very cool and enjoyable to read! Thank you!
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MrDleg
on 12/4/2020 3:22:54 PM with a score of 21685
I hate the part about having to read 100000 words just to make a action, overall story is good tho.
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— zombie bait on 11/24/2020 4:19:25 PM with a score of 2910
I cleared only 125 pages out of 2k pages dude got long way of replay
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Exsu
on 11/24/2020 9:51:29 AM with a score of 40017
I loved it!
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galleonsky12710
on 11/23/2020 4:13:53 AM with a score of 34857
wow it was amazing i don't recommend it if your not into tons of reading. The writing was so good it made my fear of zombies comes back for a few days.
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snoopog
on 11/22/2020 10:34:47 AM with a score of 35097
This was really fun to play enjoyed it would recommend to a friend
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— Zachary Calderon on 11/10/2020 1:48:23 PM with a score of 2760
Very well done.
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— Pete on 11/6/2020 10:12:08 AM with a score of 21025
This was a good read! I had a good time :)
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— Amari on 11/1/2020 12:34:47 AM with a score of 32617
it was amazing! the storyline isn't crazy at all like other zombie games and somewhat believable.i really enjoyed this and
would reccomend it to other choose your story fans
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— george ohalloran on 10/31/2020 11:02:07 AM with a score of 15675
Really nice story, got the best ending, saved 59 people and saved my family. Hope I will survive the Chinese invasision though
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— John on 10/22/2020 11:54:57 AM with a score of 18975
Amazing story and details! I can really think through logical outcomes and the story is immersive I can not stop
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Beginnerdraco
on 10/12/2020 5:31:53 AM with a score of 39127
pretty ok
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— Ella on 10/12/2020 1:16:29 AM with a score of 35527
As a fan of the walking dead this was very enjoyable
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— Kenny on 10/11/2020 2:10:09 PM with a score of 36847
One of the best story I ever read, but sadly we can't have a description of all the zombies, because it's strange but I love to read how are the enemies, so in this story the zombies
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— Ewan on 10/7/2020 4:22:29 AM with a score of 20625
This survival choose your own adventure game was one of the best I’ve played. I enjoyed it a lot. I am a survivalist myself so I had confidence going in that I would make the right choices but this game surprised me a bit and helped me see I still have a lot to do if I actually want to be prepared if something like this ever happens.
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— Justin Kurtz on 10/3/2020 2:59:20 PM with a score of 13525
A really fun ride. I'd love to play it again and experience different endings.
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— Lee Kilby on 9/20/2020 5:22:03 PM with a score of 5065
it was assigned as homework and was mildly ok
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— Izaak on 9/16/2020 12:26:02 PM with a score of 1110
It is a very great game and would make a pretty decent choice book, graphic novel or even a movie. All in all, this is 10/10 great job
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— James on 9/3/2020 7:13:21 AM with a score of 18175
Most engaging and detailed! Loved every page of it
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— Ari on 9/2/2020 8:07:24 PM with a score of 14475
There was a few writing things and plot holes that irked me, but overall an enjoyable exy
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— Jennifer Renee Gould on 8/29/2020 8:39:26 PM with a score of 2560
I really enjoyed this, it reminded me of the old Choose Your Own Adventure books from the 80's. Keep up the good work y'all!
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— Ali on 8/24/2020 12:33:10 AM with a score of 6265
I didn't pay money for this. I enjoyed it and it was fun man. Make more
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— Matt on 8/11/2020 10:42:05 PM with a score of 21775
My god it's so beautiful. I can't wait to play the other stories on this site, but as a zombie fan I had to try this first. Nothing less than a masterpiece, thank you so much for your work
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Rog_Zikan
on 8/10/2020 8:03:17 PM with a score of 21975
wow
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PepeTheSalmon
on 8/10/2020 7:38:49 PM with a score of 34927
Wooow
I love it
Saved Jacob, my Wohle family and the school..
Well i tried like 1000 Times
Worth it
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— Anna on 8/8/2020 9:22:17 AM with a score of 19815
It,s fun but not that fun
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— Rose on 7/24/2020 3:14:38 PM with a score of 17265
After reading all the (published) Storygames that this site has to offer, this was easily the one that I was most looking forward to rereading. Definitely my personal favorite, and I wouldn't be surprised if it were the favorite of plenty of other readers. Ever since I joined, I couldn't help but notice that this story has been in a constant battle for the number one spot on the Top Storygames list, and it's high ranking is well deserved. If it were up to me, Dead Man Walking would be locked in as #1, no contest.
I wouldn't expect a story with a million words to be nearly this polished, but I'm pleased to say that my expectations were beyond surpassed. Spelling and grammatical errors were minimal in spite of the story's length, which is both greatly appreciated and highly impressive. The abundance of choices was also lovely, although I did wind up dying from plenty of them- not that I'm complaining, it's a zombie apocalypse after all... (and I can just use the Go Back button).
I've noticed that nearly every single page has an obvious effort put in- there wasn't a dull moment while reading this. Even the death pages were packed full of detail, and I didn't mind them that much.
In terms of difficulty, Dead Man Walking is no cakewalk. Sure, it's hard. You're probably going to die the first time you play it, and probably several times after that. But dying always makes sense- the author never hurls anything unreasonable the reader's way. Dead Man Walking is difficult, but it's not unfair. Perhaps one of the biggest reasons I didn't mind dying was that it meant I had an opportunity to explore a different path that this incredible story has to offer.
This review wouldn't be worth much if I didn't offer any constructive criticism, but finding something wrong with this was a struggle and a half. If I did have to choose one thing that was less than perfect, it would be certain character interactions. The dialogue at times felt a bit awkward, and didn't flow quite as well as the rest of the story. Then again, finding a story or book that isn't guilty of the same issue would be a challenge, so I'm happy to overlook it.
Overall, this is a beautifully written piece of work, an easy 8/8, and a story I'd recommend to a friend in a heartbeat. I imagine this wasn't easy to write (and proofreading was probably even harder!) Thank you for your hard work, BerkaZerka. This story made my week a lot easier.
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Sherbet
on 7/22/2020 1:49:34 AM with a score of 14070
Absolutely amazing, had a great few nights in bed with this. Ended up saving my daughters and all of the school survivors
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— Jaylen on 7/19/2020 6:02:48 PM with a score of 19835
First time on the site, and this is definitely a great reason to stay.
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hatoftimelord
on 7/16/2020 10:59:07 PM with a score of 15860
the reference to rape on the first page wasnt the most pleasant read as i nearly had a related experience due to some bad choices
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— connor on 7/15/2020 9:43:14 AM with a score of 10560
The descriptions were extremely detailed, if a bit long.
Overall, amazing game. Thoroughly enjoyed it. :)
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MessyGoat
on 7/11/2020 3:30:06 AM with a score of 22635
That went better than I expected! Killed one person, the prison dude holding the wife captive, and saved 60 people. Killed 87 normal zombies, while completely avoiding mutated ones. Played through 96 pages out of 2,131, which I must say is an insane amount of pages. Definitely wanna comeback to see if I can get a higher score sometime. Oh, and my score was 21,105. Was proven to be a survivalist. The amount of effort put into this is astonishing, and I love it.
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— Peyton on 7/10/2020 2:53:57 AM with a score of 21115
I really liked it! You have done a lot of typing,details,and thinking for the story!
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— Ben on 7/6/2020 3:44:09 PM with a score of 8160
Wowie, this game is the best word game I had. It contains a lot of choices and paths for you tpo choose. And it is very realistic. Just some improvements, I only go through about 100+ pages and I win. I think pls change the neding a bit, thanks
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Rollypro
on 7/3/2020 10:27:52 PM with a score of 20675
good read and fun play through scored:23905
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yanmablade
on 6/27/2020 5:08:48 PM with a score of 23925
nice it was awesome
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— ??? on 6/25/2020 3:05:00 AM with a score of 1110
I needed this! It puts COVID into perspective.
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— Jenny on 6/20/2020 3:28:45 AM with a score of 25125
Brilliant story, read through one set of circumstances and loved it. Going back in for more!
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— David on 6/11/2020 2:54:15 PM with a score of 19565
Awesome game! Keep up the great work.
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asham
on 6/7/2020 8:53:26 PM with a score of 30065
I went through again to try out different paths for me to take, and I am very impressed with all the choices you could make. I managed to survive and save my wife, my kids, Jacob, and everyone in the school without getting bit. I even managed to kill the Banshee in the park. I highly recommend people play this if they get the chance.
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falconkgk
on 6/6/2020 8:43:59 PM with a score of 32717
This was one of the best if not the best choose your story I have ever seen. I highly enjoyed it and I hope others will too.
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falconkgk
on 6/6/2020 12:09:51 AM with a score of 24725
the Storylines were real lengthy but the choices in the options made me think.
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— Addy on 5/29/2020 1:50:14 PM with a score of 1810
Great read!
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— Ram on 5/24/2020 10:31:31 AM with a score of 17425
Oh man i llove this! Going for my second run now!
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— Migz on 5/19/2020 10:07:48 AM with a score of 9510
A very interesting adventure, god i finished one playthrough and i've only seen sixty pages or so replayability must be amazing, i can only suggest it to whoever wants to have hundreds of different paths(sorry for bad english)
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Incorporeal
on 5/19/2020 6:19:35 AM with a score of 8565
A beautiful, compelling, intense, and fairly realistic story. Choose wisely. Hihgly recommended! Nice job BerkaZerka!
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Infinity0
on 5/16/2020 3:09:17 PM with a score of 22985
This was awesome, such a well made story with so many intense moments.
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— Elliott on 5/15/2020 3:20:37 PM with a score of 42517
This was actually pretty good, but something I would probably do is make it so you could get a pet, or a (human) companion other than your wife
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— Aura Itano on 5/14/2020 6:58:12 PM with a score of 25437
It was cool, especially because apocalypses are very cool
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— AT on 5/14/2020 12:58:04 AM with a score of 31707
Made me super invested (also super guilty after leaving my family to die, but that had to happen to motivate me to play it again and do better), the plot and general atmosphere is exactly what I like in my zombie stories, appropriately gory and messed up but also has that lil tiny glimmer of hope that keeps you going, and, well, getting the Golden ending was awesome! 9291/10, loved every moment
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CobaltGoat
on 5/13/2020 9:46:42 AM with a score of 32687
this is an amazing game and spent hours playing and replaying to find out the different endings but i did get the best ending my first time playing and was extremely warmed. im curious though the game said it had over 2,000 and made me wonder what other endings there are and has anyone got to page 2000? whats it like?
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finnfarrell
on 5/12/2020 4:48:18 AM with a score of 37987
I love how realistic it is, especially the details, but I do wish that women would be given more powerful tasks, instead of just getting to look after the children.
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— Alexis Henderson on 5/9/2020 6:31:55 PM with a score of 17015
This is awesome, I've been loking for this kind of roleplaying things and finally found a good one here!!
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— Namsoo on 5/7/2020 5:05:13 AM with a score of 10220
It scared the poop out of me for sure, but it was fun to see how everything turned out!
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— DJ on 5/1/2020 5:33:50 PM with a score of 2110
Awesome story keep up the good work
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— Joshua john on 4/29/2020 1:19:43 PM with a score of 37777
Engaging and entertaining. Need to go through it multiple more times and explore alternate outcomes. Thank you!
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RoyalJ23
on 4/27/2020 4:42:09 PM with a score of 20535
I really love with how you done this game. Please keep making when you have the time.
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Shado8888
on 4/26/2020 10:56:47 PM with a score of 39007
Lots of detail, I like it. Good story, but maybe a bit too short?
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ZackCat
on 4/22/2020 3:23:03 AM with a score of 19475
I dont like how it was such a short story, I was bored.
But ive certainly seen worse. ??????
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— keanna on 4/21/2020 4:09:01 PM with a score of 2360
Honestly this is probably my favorite game on this website. I have replayed it over and over and I finally was able to get the best possible ending. Hats of to you BerkaZerka. Hats off indeed.
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— Rushil on 4/17/2020 1:09:19 AM with a score of 22795
the zombies wrecked me like a happy meal. this is halo. its time to get owned lol
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million
on 4/10/2020 4:17:44 PM with a score of 1710
It was a great story. I didn't want to kill my wife though so I went back.
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— Thomas Greene on 4/10/2020 10:25:02 AM with a score of 25565
Fun game for those who enjoy the Zombie genre
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Pleobius
on 4/7/2020 2:22:32 PM with a score of 21885
The game was good, i never liked reading but it really got me interested
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— bill on 4/6/2020 11:50:51 PM with a score of 12775
Noice
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23tovarm
on 4/4/2020 7:04:15 PM with a score of 25245
I forgot to mention in my last comment: I really appreciate the detail of everything. That way you can read it over, consider the options, and decide what the wisest choice is. It took me a couple of times, but I got to the best possible ending. Each time I played, I remembered things about the previous time I played, and what to avoid and what to do.
Honestly, everything had me on edge-of-seat suspense. The way a single mistake can get you killed, how you wonder whether the choice you made was wisest.
As I said in my previous comment, this is simply amazing.
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hellopeople
on 4/1/2020 11:06:44 PM with a score of 35797
I played this game several times, going to different routes to see what would happen. There are many, many ways that the story can go and many to how it can end. You can survive the apocalypse in different ways. What happens can also depend the people you save. What happens can also depend on previous choices.
The whole game is honestly amazing. The game can end with only 100 pages, or the full 2000. There is so many ways you can go, so many ways you can survive. You can play many times, taking different routes to see what will happen.
I can see why this is one of the best games. Great job!
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hellopeople
on 4/1/2020 5:40:49 PM with a score of 20785
Awesome game. Glad I found it.
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— Pedro G on 4/1/2020 3:20:52 PM with a score of 24745
I am pretty bad but it is fun
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22calebw
on 3/31/2020 11:14:17 AM with a score of 3610
It was cool
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— Ur mom on 3/31/2020 10:26:57 AM with a score of 19625
Fun! Our reading before bed, every night for a week. Can wait to read the alternatives ending
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Requin
on 3/26/2020 11:46:12 PM with a score of 24795
THAT WAS AN AWESOME BOOK
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— Devon Williams on 3/26/2020 1:12:39 PM with a score of 2310
Admittedly, I create an account here just to play this storygame which hook me up for several days. It has well thought out plot and engaging suspense, but my best possible ending is very disappointing. I honestly expect a cliffhanger with more "Resident Evil" flavour, not a Red Dawn direction. Why not work a conspiracy theory into your story? And perhaps allow the reader to choose among several pre-determined characters? That needs a lot of work, of course, but it will make one most addictive storygame.
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emil79
on 3/25/2020 10:06:25 AM with a score of 39577
I searched for these choose the ending stories after finding a old book from my childhood this was a fun and engaging story that took time to think through.GREAT WORK!
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— Tricia on 3/14/2020 11:37:36 AM with a score of 18825
My first ever choose your own adventure text-based game and it was a delight to play through!
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— Jordan Kirwan on 3/10/2020 6:56:04 AM with a score of 30867
Pretty good, made me use my head rather than my muscles or armament.
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— Knight Flame on 3/7/2020 3:16:23 PM with a score of 34297
Too long I came to play not read a paragraph and just overall terrible experience
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— Alyce on 2/28/2020 9:57:02 PM with a score of 2060
you killed me
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— boy Im dead on 2/26/2020 3:10:31 PM with a score of 3510
Well written story to play through and kept me entertained.
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FatCat
on 2/25/2020 8:53:18 AM with a score of 28237
I enjoyed the storyline and thought it was interesting and well thought out. It was quite a bit longer than I expected which I enjoyed. One part bugged me a little - when he uses a tire spyder as a grappling hook. we've all seen those things... it being used as a grappling hook seemed far fetched. I just can't imagine it being able to hold on to anything in any way (grappling hooks have hooks, aren't just a cross- the spyder would more likely just slide off). The rest of the story was captivating and felt realistic. Also, not sure if it matters (I realize it's quite long) but I came across quite a few typos (mostly things like 'out' instead of 'our'). All in all though, I enjoyed it. Thanks!
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— Meriena on 2/21/2020 11:23:55 PM with a score of 33697
Got the best ending and i loved it but is possible to save jacoob for the best enddiin
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— Regan on 2/21/2020 9:54:18 AM with a score of 25647
I can see why this game has such a high rating!!
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writeyourstory
on 2/19/2020 6:06:28 PM with a score of 25265
Very in depth. There were a lot of choices that apear to lead to an instant death, but I was repeatedly and pleasantly surprised with plenty more pages and choices. A++ definitely deserves its place as featured!
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— Pixel on 2/11/2020 5:13:01 PM with a score of 18115
Wow... just wow! This is the single most amazing game on here that I've played so far. :) With tons of choices, suspense, mystery, likeable characters, and fascinating backstory, this game is an 8/8! I definitely recommend taking some time to play this today. :)
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MagykalWagykal
on 2/4/2020 6:54:43 PM with a score of 37587
very fun, i just wish i could see more of it
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skinnnbagg
on 2/3/2020 10:46:12 AM with a score of 22325
lots of words, but good story
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— i tried i died on 2/1/2020 4:55:07 PM with a score of 2310
awsome
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— jorge gonzalez on 1/30/2020 2:48:19 PM with a score of 3960
It's Soo Good
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Gigi5334
on 1/28/2020 6:21:18 PM with a score of 27025
It was pretty fun and vivid experience
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— Justin Lee on 1/17/2020 5:05:12 PM with a score of 32667
GG
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marvis
on 1/13/2020 5:59:37 PM with a score of 2860
Very good zombie story.
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WizardOfInspiration
on 1/7/2020 3:19:38 PM with a score of 26765
well written with plenty of options and chances to rethink your choices, very enjoyable apocalyptic adventure
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— m00kster on 12/31/2019 6:57:25 AM with a score of 29637
The game was certainly entertaining, very walking dead thrilling. Only in a smaller scale.
They should make a video game about this.
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— Dominic M. on 12/30/2019 5:59:06 PM with a score of 25935
This was a great little CYOA book, it took about 121 pages to get the very best ending.
good little read, very descriptive.
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— James on 12/30/2019 4:27:11 PM with a score of 33267
Well you did it man you made a game that many people wish existed!
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— Abdullah on 12/20/2019 3:26:57 PM with a score of 17025
i died lol
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— bruh on 12/9/2019 2:47:52 PM with a score of 4060
I loved this! When I finished, it said I got the best possible ending. I'm going to go back through it a few times to find the other endings and mutant zombies.
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BryceTheJew
on 12/4/2019 10:52:49 AM with a score of 36447
Fun
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— F on 12/2/2019 7:27:28 PM with a score of 19175
Too short
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aogaerou
on 12/1/2019 12:41:27 AM with a score of 33297
Very good writing. Fun.
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SirBakaTheFifth
on 11/30/2019 12:30:52 PM with a score of 8915
god, it's so good.
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nagahiide
on 11/29/2019 1:08:02 AM with a score of 38247
Really great game, where risks are rewarded, but so too is playing it safe. Your character is capable without being OP, which is pretty good, and has enough skills that he can do a lot.
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— Mike on 11/27/2019 8:35:29 AM with a score of 36217
incredibly detailed and well thought out. Makes me want to play it all over again.
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— aaron on 11/26/2019 5:56:55 PM with a score of 21615
Was really good, got the best ending. It wasn’t to hard. Never got eaten. Sad that all the people died at the complex. Not much could be done.
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— Fate on 11/25/2019 12:11:53 PM with a score of 29957
It was incredible with the amount of of pages to the tiny details, and not only was the options actual logical the outside characters where reacting just as one would expect
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— Danilo on 11/23/2019 12:00:28 PM with a score of 3350
Intriging and kinda heartbreaking but all in all I loved it.
This is the type of writing I want to do when I grow up so thanks for inspiring me
Thank You
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— Mickey on 11/22/2019 12:08:57 AM with a score of 14125
it's good keep up the good work
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— cj on 11/21/2019 6:41:10 PM with a score of 1760
Brilliant. The way that the zombie virus is explained (how it works and spreads) was one of the best explanations for how the zombie virus works that I've ever read. The wording and amount of choices you were able to choose was also exceptional, as well as the dialogue and personalities of all the characters.
Definitely one of my favorites, I'm not surprised to see it's one of the most popular stories.
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paincakess
on 11/21/2019 2:38:04 PM with a score of 34717
I was confused throughout the story
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— Josh on 11/21/2019 12:36:06 PM with a score of 1110
It is really fun and theres so many options and Pages the creator put a lot of thought and time into this game and it has paid off I rate this game
11/10 It is just so good that it cant be a ten it has to be higher.
Thank you for making this game i am going to try and get the true ending.
Your game is amazing.
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Dragoon07
on 11/21/2019 6:51:33 AM with a score of 710
Very good game, keep it up
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— Aplha on 11/19/2019 10:11:05 AM with a score of 19525
Quite interesting story
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EnderKing67810
on 11/13/2019 1:09:53 PM with a score of 1410
good, although there are sometimes large chunks of text that I fell like skipping. Overall is very fun and quite challenging. I really like it! please keep making more like it!
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— Elijah Smith on 11/13/2019 6:38:21 AM with a score of 24747
Exciting and sets a great atmosphere!
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— Olivia on 11/11/2019 1:06:33 PM with a score of 23895
amayzing
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— Rowan on 11/11/2019 8:58:20 AM with a score of 23175
An absolutely incredible story with believable characters and reasonable options.
The borderline pathetic decline of the Zombies during the end of the story was a welcome addition too, along with the explanation as to how many could be infected to begin with.
If I had to point out a gripe, it's that I only came across one "special" zombie and didn't even interact with it, I felt a sense that I was missing out on a gigantic part of the story (which the page counter proved) that could've been removed and merged with the best ending to diversify the tense scenes.
Overall though, it was a highly enjoyable experience and I am excited to see what the author will create next.
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— Oliver on 11/11/2019 7:20:40 AM with a score of 34857
pretty good but should should have had other stages of cordyceps infection.
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— The grifter on 11/9/2019 7:36:34 PM with a score of 8060
Amazingly well wrriten work very imersive story.
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— nikos on 11/6/2019 6:13:48 AM with a score of 37687
I wish it never had to end. If you enjoy zombies and quality writing, then this is the place for you!
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— Carrier on 11/5/2019 1:52:14 PM with a score of 16070
Engaging, well written, very enjoyable
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— S on 11/5/2019 10:39:52 AM with a score of 23325
i like this alot
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— hahaha... on 11/2/2019 12:58:21 PM with a score of 1210
nice, the story was well put together, after I was finished(I died lol) its said hell hounds and cannibal grub zombies? and I was like Woah 2000 pages I missed a lot and played it 5 more times gotten a litter further each time. it was a really fun experience thank you for giving us this escape. I really enjoyed it.
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— Shane on 11/1/2019 6:09:13 PM with a score of 2110
good
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— BILLYBOB on 10/30/2019 8:42:00 AM with a score of 33297
awesome in every way
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colemanio
on 10/30/2019 6:26:21 AM with a score of 31975
This is the most fun storygame I have played! It's intense, suspenseful, and full of action!
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JayDerp247
on 10/29/2019 8:07:13 PM with a score of 35767
I loved it now I have to start over
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workreader
on 10/29/2019 7:25:19 PM with a score of 2260
Is a very good story
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seto16
on 10/25/2019 5:01:49 PM with a score of 1810
luv it bruh
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— Thom on 10/24/2019 9:42:48 AM with a score of 1110
Thanks from jenna talls
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— Jenna Talls on 10/24/2019 9:40:14 AM with a score of 1910
This is one of the best text games i played, it had a story that remind me of the walking dead. My only 2 complaints is one i don't know how to do the chapter thing and two, the little boy was gone when i saved the wife
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— mac on 10/23/2019 7:28:56 AM with a score of 20285
awesome. But I don't remember being bitten by a zombie... hmmmmm.....
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globby
on 10/22/2019 5:16:45 PM with a score of 7760
A few unexplainably-bad-outcomes-caused-by-rational-choices-SENANIGANS aside, it was amazing. Awesome writing, even though I skipped a line or two from time to time, really good grasp of the concept and great attention to detail as well. 8/8 that was truly gr8
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Lord_of_Shades
on 10/19/2019 3:53:29 PM with a score of 25795
This may be one of the most creative story games I have read.
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hellhound123
on 10/18/2019 10:49:08 AM with a score of 1610
I’m not going to lie, I got confused as it doesn’t really explain what goes where. But that is probably just me being an idiot.
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EchoTecho
on 10/13/2019 6:33:59 PM with a score of 2760
Very good storyline. The writing was ovation kinda bad but other than that very good
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jayne12
on 10/12/2019 5:10:37 PM with a score of 37777
It was fun enough for me to want to play again. Besides the few spelling errors I saw it was 10/10, better than a reccies
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— Writer on 10/12/2019 1:14:57 AM with a score of 9410
This was an absolute joy to play. Thank you for the experience.
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— Atsu on 10/11/2019 4:48:31 PM with a score of 18535
I can tell that a lot of work was put into making this. I played through and got the best ending (which I am very proud of, if I do say so myself) and was very intrigued throughout the entire story. Great job and I hope more like this continues to be made. ^-^
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WhataLegend16
on 10/8/2019 11:40:24 AM with a score of 42027
WOW THIS WAS GREAT
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TheSuitedFox
on 10/4/2019 2:10:41 PM with a score of 22535
epic zombie game
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— ty on 10/4/2019 1:55:25 PM with a score of 2660
This is a really good game. I even got the best ending! *cough cough* thank god for the 'Go Back' button *cough cough*
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— Nope. on 9/30/2019 3:00:52 PM with a score of 30137
Great I got the school ending
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Talentedhide
on 9/28/2019 1:59:47 PM with a score of 26135
bestest
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littlekidlover
on 9/25/2019 2:07:46 AM with a score of 21525
kinda too long to read
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sylvieallain19
on 9/24/2019 2:06:58 PM with a score of 1260
good
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— ., on 9/19/2019 11:33:38 AM with a score of 1360
good
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— waehfiul on 9/17/2019 9:29:53 PM with a score of 9860
this idea is really cool
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— tatum on 9/15/2019 6:47:26 PM with a score of 1810
I love this story and will always love it but it breaks my heart to see this story being burden by idiots and noobs giving it a 1 simply because its the best and their bad at writing please stop people
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Skeltro105
on 9/7/2019 5:53:59 PM with a score of 2460
I thoroughly enjoyed the experience! There was great detail put into the backstory and reasonings, and I loved how the pros and cons of each choice were explained- and how there were many choices to stew over. Maybe I'm biased because I got the best ending first, but the fact that the story relied on logical thinking and had the MC choose a "mindset" (to be a hero or to save yourself?) was very interesting and took quite a bit of thinking! I highly recommend this game, especially to those who don't mind a bit of reading. Will likely replay in the future :)
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iwantboba
on 9/7/2019 12:45:08 PM with a score of 35447
meh. stupid red door.
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psimon
on 9/5/2019 3:59:15 PM with a score of 710
Absolutely astonishing in how detailed and carefully crafted it is, extremely packed and complex, and super immersive. 10/10 for any zombie story lover
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WearyJackson957
on 8/28/2019 3:07:15 AM with a score of 23575
It had a lot of effort put into it clearly and that really made it a great game to spend my freetime reading through. It was filled with twists and turns and was just overall fun to play through.
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wackyxwarrior
on 8/17/2019 9:22:15 AM with a score of 22175
It’s has and will always be a awesome story I can’t wait to find as many endings as possible
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joe7584
on 8/4/2019 3:13:38 PM with a score of 34177
i got the best ending! Truly a great read
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zombie29
on 7/31/2019 9:57:52 PM with a score of 28367
awesome story i got the ending where i survived and my family did byt i am a carrier
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tacoking862
on 7/30/2019 10:05:20 PM with a score of 25035
Died at 57, got a score of 7,750. Played for a while and had some fun. Thumbs up from me.
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Jonas_Reads
on 7/30/2019 7:49:35 PM with a score of 7760
Dude, I loved this
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— Aberu on 7/28/2019 7:48:29 PM with a score of 31147
played better. nice details
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zombie29
on 7/24/2019 1:54:39 AM with a score of 17015
Although you could see the massive effort put into this story, the proofreading clearly dwindled the further on I read, given the typos on every other page and eventually every page. There was also some repetitive language sprinkled throughout and at times tedious narrative to slog through to get to the more interesting plot points. All of that being said, I was hooked for a good portion of the beginning and the end, which is really what's most important.
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JCjr
on 7/13/2019 12:45:27 PM with a score of 22735
Very complex, branching out story. I didn't get very far out my first time but really enjoyed it, gonna play again!
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WearyJackson957
on 7/12/2019 4:55:50 PM with a score of 1360
Great game bit hard tho.
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Bestbud
on 7/6/2019 12:04:12 AM with a score of 24185
I absolutely loved this
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StoryTime365
on 7/3/2019 7:57:00 AM with a score of 22135
That was interesting and hard enough for my taste.
Kudos to your work!
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Tuman_Sibiri
on 6/28/2019 6:44:57 AM with a score of 20515
i like
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— m on 6/28/2019 6:22:27 AM with a score of 20765
I loved it! I woulden't get up until I was done! Good job person who made this
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— Taylor on 6/11/2019 5:12:36 PM with a score of 3460
good well job good done
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Zargroth
on 6/8/2019 5:33:15 AM with a score of 15470
Was a 1st time Go at this station with the best possible ending and 31,719 points. Alot of fun!!
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Drydenhouse
on 5/30/2019 7:03:25 PM with a score of 31777
My experience through out this 'vast adventure' was absolutely amazing! I personally enjoyed this and hope you could do more like this.
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— airyll on 5/29/2019 6:38:03 PM with a score of 35607
got the best ending, very well-thought out and exciting read.
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dogbutt
on 5/29/2019 1:22:36 PM with a score of 27187
The story of dead man it's very fun and good to play.
Thanks for the wonderful story of Zombie.
can you write the next chapter of walking dead ;D.
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jackk
on 5/26/2019 6:36:04 PM with a score of 19175
rlly good but I found it easy to get the"best possible ending" after one failed attempt and just using logic.
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edcst
on 5/25/2019 7:21:50 PM with a score of 28667
This game had me break some rules just to finish it. Lets just say youll really wanna make sure you have the time to play it through, or youll be thinking about it all day
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— Dm on 5/25/2019 2:51:50 PM with a score of 36707
:D
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parking
on 5/25/2019 2:26:01 PM with a score of 28925
HOW THE FRICK do I save the wife and Jacob???? No matter what I do, I give the tainted bottle to Jacob and inmate kills me when I find my wife. Please, someone give me a clue to how I get through this! I still want to play more of this TT_TT
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parking
on 5/24/2019 10:26:41 PM with a score of 16920
its ok but i died already
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— bob on 5/20/2019 8:46:24 PM with a score of 1110
This game is very fun great job making the game
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— Nathan on 5/20/2019 5:17:07 PM with a score of 3510
This was by far the best game I played. Great use of detail and keeping people intrested. I got the best ending; surviving without being bitten, saving 60 people including myself, and killing 93 zombies. Thanks to the author for giving me such an adventure.
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— SonocChaos on 5/8/2019 6:11:56 PM with a score of 28517
Too Short
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strut
on 5/7/2019 6:37:35 AM with a score of 38637
It’s my fifth run through this game and in an actual account. I’ve certainly have gotten better endings in the past . But still,it’s the next best(Becky,I lost you).Seriously though,this game never fails to engross me every time I play it.One of the best games on this platform.
8/8.Good for a splendid pastime.
Stalke Welsh Strikes Again.
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Welsh
on 5/5/2019 5:45:46 PM with a score of 21125
I like to rate games on a scale of 4.
+1 for good game mechanics
+1 for art
+1 for good story line
+1 bonus
What this game lacked in art made up for with excellent and descriptive details which made the whole adventure seem real. +1.
I sincerely appreciated the diverse amount of possible choices I could make throughout the whole game which allowed me to choose had I been in that particular situation. +1 for game mechanics.
Story Line was excellent. Maye not unique but it was solid and executed very smoothly. +1.
And +1 bonus for being one of the greatest text adventures I have played.
Total score 4/4
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MeetaCheeta
on 5/5/2019 11:53:42 AM with a score of 17765
Pretty Good.
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Lysath
on 5/2/2019 10:01:22 PM with a score of 24925
fun as heck and really interesting
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asman
on 4/30/2019 12:25:05 PM with a score of 26475
Thanks for all the hard work. Really well thought out and fun.
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— Brian on 4/29/2019 9:07:13 PM with a score of 29677
Would be nice if the female characters were allowed to do more than get hysterical/be assaulted/look after the children but here we are in 1951 I guess
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— Camenite on 4/28/2019 2:10:35 PM with a score of 31877
Mostly doing this for posterity. Will now go back and run through. This is my score for the "best possible ending", wherein one survives unbitten, with the wife, the two daughters, Jacob, and the rest of the school.
Here’s a rundown of how you did –
You Killed 20 Zombies
You Killed 0 Drooler Zombies
You Killed 0 Bloater Zombies
You Killed 0 Ghouls
You Killed 0 Banshees
You Killed 1 Hell Hounds
You Killed 0 Cannibal Gaunt Zombies
You Killed 2 People
You Saved 60 People (including yourself, unless you died)
You were eaten by 0 Zombies
Your Overall Score: 43407
(You played through 151 of 2,131 Pages and have proven to be a Rebuilder)
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Peregrine
on 4/28/2019 6:46:50 AM with a score of 43447
this is good stuff and i cannot say how much i recomend it,
good job to the creator and good luck with surviving this.
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mickotron
on 4/26/2019 11:02:49 AM with a score of 16015
Absolutely original thought process
You must be a prepper? Would love
for us to be able to share ideas for choices that have been left out to add to the realism that you have created. Died 4 times...cheated and came back to life so I could see what your ending looked like.
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— Ferrari on 4/26/2019 4:38:16 AM with a score of 18165
I LOVED this
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— Liv on 4/19/2019 10:54:17 PM with a score of 3960
OH SHIT!
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— yourmom on 4/17/2019 1:25:09 PM with a score of 2910
Extremely strategic. It's a zombie game. I hate zombie games. But this one; hoo boy.. It's a memorable story, your deaths are well described, and the LOGIC is spot-flippin-on. I highly recommend this Story to Zombie-lovers. This is worth it, you can become immersed in this, read and be engaged for hours, I seriously congratulate all who contributed to this Story. AMAZING. 8/8.
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MrWoofers
on 4/15/2019 5:21:30 PM with a score of 3360
amazing
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— john on 4/11/2019 9:39:27 AM with a score of 35907
At least I have a wife and 3 kids in this game. LoL
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FiddzXIII
on 4/11/2019 5:42:11 AM with a score of 36397
Fairly good. Sad to die by being pushed off a roof, but hey, I tried to do something good, so there you go. The writing is fairly good and the story is interesting. It brings common, nostalgic zombie survival elements into it's own fairly original story. Well done, to the author.
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thereddragonborn
on 4/10/2019 9:09:03 PM with a score of 7760
Fun fun fun
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— Bobby on 4/4/2019 1:41:22 PM with a score of 1760
Great game, loved it!!
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goochm8te
on 3/28/2019 6:21:27 PM with a score of 34697
absolutely amazing
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— alex on 3/27/2019 12:44:41 PM with a score of 14815
Nice game, finally beat it after a few random deaths.
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InvictusXL
on 3/25/2019 11:01:16 PM with a score of 34017
Such a great time I had, and how engaged I felt! I found myself thinking about my choices and picking what I might actually do, because your story was so well written that I could feel like I was in it, rather than chasing a silly reward. I loved it and thank you for sharing with all us poor saps with a web browser! I never had choose your own growing up so it’s a new thing for me. Sort of like D&D, but you don’t have to know reliable people with similar interests, and I’m especially grateful as I don’t. :)
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— Siobhan Creagan on 3/21/2019 10:19:07 PM with a score of 17615
Loved it
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Hmlandry
on 3/20/2019 1:09:49 PM with a score of 27947
Surprisingly good. I could tell that a lot of thought and effort was put into this, and that made it very enjoyable to play
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9ace31
on 3/19/2019 11:33:57 PM with a score of 39017
thios was very very amusing
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— dominic on 3/14/2019 10:46:37 AM with a score of 6260
Nice
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The_L
on 3/14/2019 4:36:12 AM with a score of 38027
Amazing
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KevinBacon
on 3/11/2019 1:52:53 PM with a score of 23335
Great game! Got the best ending the first time but was bit. Got the best ending the 2nd run without being bitten.
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godiegoh
on 3/8/2019 5:31:25 PM with a score of 33767
ive played through this 20 times now trying to find new endings, very well written and enjoyable
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— jimplays on 3/5/2019 2:50:18 PM with a score of 19915
Lol
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Peanut
on 3/5/2019 12:27:12 PM with a score of 1910
gj
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jackargie
on 3/4/2019 4:24:56 PM with a score of 25675
funtimes, really neat
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— chrissy on 3/4/2019 12:40:44 AM with a score of 8860
This whole story has really been an ordeal. I was just bored and never realized how immersive this story could end up being. Retrying over and over for the best possible ending was almost frustratingly addicting and I would definitely recommend it to anyone. If you don't mind the swearing, violence, and gruesome scenes obviously!
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— Rushil Tanugula on 3/2/2019 9:51:16 PM with a score of 20175
I liked it even though I died in the end, To tell you the truth I like anything to do with zombies, werewolf, vampire, or anything instesting.
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Zombiepro17
on 3/2/2019 1:49:32 PM with a score of 8860
thrilling and fun,fun,fun
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— alex on 2/28/2019 3:37:20 PM with a score of 6810
you did da great job i got the kid at the boat dock and got the truck working and went on a 60mph rampage thru mabey 100 zombies it was great and you made it like i was actually there
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— will on 2/28/2019 10:47:36 AM with a score of 11810
I did not get away with it alive (the tattooed escapee caught me in my house, but hey, it's better than eaten alive;)). Great story. 10 out of 10 :)
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— Uwe on 2/26/2019 9:12:30 AM with a score of 14210
This game is amazing, and I have loved it every time I've played it. It was a nice, refreshing way to spend my afternoon, and as a budding writer myself, it gives me hope that other talented, detail-oriented writers do still exist. Keep up the good work and never stop creating!
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ThatHarryPotterGuy
on 2/24/2019 5:38:31 PM with a score of 33227
Quite alright
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Geordie
on 2/21/2019 9:03:15 AM with a score of 1460
BRILLIANT
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— ash on 2/20/2019 7:09:01 AM with a score of 19215
I really liked it! Spent 4 hours getting the best ending and enjoyed every minute of it!
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— SierraSeas on 2/20/2019 3:59:21 AM with a score of 33807
Oh man this is such a good read and I felt like I survived real shiz. I really love Jacob and I think it'll be fun to have more of this games with occasional illustrations or images of few characters. For the sake of imagination of course. Love the storyline !
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— Asha on 2/19/2019 11:20:29 PM with a score of 34207
This story is a masterful piece of work that I played through several times. I highly recommend it!
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FoxRiver
on 2/19/2019 10:52:54 AM with a score of 36957
Very nice. But question: if one is a carrier, does that mean that having unprotected sex would transfer the virus? If it does, than RIP ya boi Greg.
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Spleega
on 2/17/2019 8:30:45 PM with a score of 24235
I really enjoyed this story, I felt wrapped in by the way the story was told.
I became inmersed. Really, I could take my eyes off the screen, it was a believable story that wasn’t about going and killing everyone, you had to make hard decisions and think about them.
Hard.
(Good game btw)
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— Paula on 2/17/2019 7:15:17 PM with a score of 36077
the not so great: in some places the writing slips a bit (in terms of grammar and spelling). in other places it kind of gets a bit childishly sexist - i do not think on purpose, but maybe the writer is a bit young and therefore writes the characters as very 1 dimensional stereotypes.
the great: HOWEVER, for overall entertainment this hits the mark. i found myself getting sucked in to the overall story line and it really helped me pass the time. the pages of the story i encountered were pretty well thought out and there was enough suspense and twists and turns to keep me returning to finish the story.
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jms70
on 2/14/2019 6:34:26 PM with a score of 24125
Quite alrigth.
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— Geordie on 2/14/2019 4:37:15 AM with a score of 24635
Enjoyed it a lot but I want to get past this subway part! I'll definitely play again!
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BMOD
on 2/9/2019 4:37:13 AM with a score of 1410
I thought this was great! First time playing one of these on the site, I only got into 133 pages sadly but I defiantly had a lot of fun with this! Great job and will defiantly be playing more and telling friend's about the site! :)
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Kmoemoehoe
on 2/8/2019 6:07:56 PM with a score of 21575
I had so much fun playing this! Died pretty quickly tho, so I'm about to give it another go. Really fun!
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ToraKo9
on 2/8/2019 12:12:28 AM with a score of 16270
Amazing... My favorite CYOA story yet!
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— Justin Foy on 2/6/2019 1:34:20 PM with a score of 19975
Very detailed. Awesome survival story. My only suggestion would be to have a female version of the story.
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— Annie on 2/3/2019 12:09:41 PM with a score of 28937
Sweet. That was awesome.
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— . on 2/1/2019 5:08:13 PM with a score of 20625
Very satisfying
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Joshieyatsu
on 1/31/2019 7:49:57 AM with a score of 36437
This is a great story, and hard two. I had a great time playing it and would sure like another one by this author.
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— Tman8105 on 1/28/2019 4:55:17 PM with a score of 4910
Small choices create different paths and you can get back to the original storyline later on. So overall it's really good. A few grammatical errors do not take away from the storyline or even the page. I am curious on how to make gameplay longer since it hasn't taken very long to succeed and survive in certain scenarios.
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— Bri on 1/28/2019 11:30:49 AM with a score of 21975
Had me hooked the whole time! Great story and great fun!
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pbeam720
on 1/27/2019 5:36:00 PM with a score of 25987
Certainly one of the best choose your own experiences I've had... and I haven't even gotten to the more "supernatural" bits.
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ZaneJulien
on 1/27/2019 3:24:17 PM with a score of 8915
This story was all around fantastic.The premise of zombies decaying is very interesting.Although it had some grammar issues (can't think of one off the top of my head) there were very few.
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— Liam kelly on 1/26/2019 3:35:52 AM with a score of 21715
I can't wait to rub this in my wife's face! She thinks I wouldn't last 10 minutes in a zombie apocalypse.
I got the best possible result, saved 5 people, and killed no one (aside from 9 zombies). Had a blast doing it-- and am eager to replay to see what could've happened on different routes (and who else I could meet/save).
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Jenlar7983
on 1/22/2019 3:54:51 PM with a score of 34837
I thought that it was terrific.
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DrGreen
on 1/22/2019 6:30:07 AM with a score of 28657
It was a good game
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Kamilaroi
on 1/22/2019 2:02:45 AM with a score of 20425
Got the best possible ending on my 1st play through. Saved my whole family plus 60 others. Pretty cool story
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HypeHamilton
on 1/19/2019 7:19:53 PM with a score of 35397
*Spoilers* Ended tragically for me, succumbing to my wounds immediately after finding my wife.
Great story, lots of detailed descriptions and a lot of different options to explore.
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hazahaxa
on 1/18/2019 5:09:52 AM with a score of 16670
Great story I literally went back a couple of paged because I was worried the the little kid died!
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— Kingcreep4 on 1/17/2019 7:56:58 PM with a score of 33507
AHHHH! YYEEEEEESSSSS! 2nd try and I made it out alive.
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CrazyCraz3R
on 1/16/2019 3:08:04 PM with a score of 28647
I, admittedly, died only maybe sixty pages in, but found this to be so fun! I mean wow! This is so great! I was thinking of what to do in my free time and CYOA Zombie Survival popped into my head and here you were!
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— Tyler O on 1/15/2019 11:23:35 PM with a score of 7460
One of the best choose your own adventure books I've ever read! Highly recommend it. Amazing action and love how well it is written. Got the best ending my second try, and loved how it tells you about the virus when you are done. Twenty stars out of ten.
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— Asher on 1/14/2019 9:52:06 PM with a score of 26495
This is a very fun choose your own adventure story that is enough to last you for hours and hours. Personally, it took me 14 tries to win, but thankfully once you get past the shelter for the living, it is really eazy, but still can give at least 2 more hours of fun adventuring. I truely recommend this one for all people 16+ because there are a couple cases of curse words and the like. Overall, this game was a great experience and worth $20 even though it is free. My thanks go to the creator for an awesome choose your own adventure story.
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— John on 1/14/2019 7:26:21 PM with a score of 18825
neat
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quintobot
on 1/13/2019 11:25:57 PM with a score of 26445
Excellent story.
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— Sam on 1/13/2019 6:40:24 PM with a score of 24097
ok..........
This was beautiful. An amazingly well done interactive story with an amazing story line and characters you can really empathize with. It was simply incredibly well done in every respect. Even the gore seemed almost necessary to the true feeling of the story. Now, I got the 'Very Best Ending', along with escaping with Jacob, and an entire school, and I had a blast with it. Very fun, and I definitely will be replaying it for more endings.
11/10, would play again, would recommend, already have recommended.
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— Crazy InsaneGuy on 1/12/2019 9:46:11 PM with a score of 35557
This was really fun! The story was engaging and I didn't want to stop reading. Never got bored. The zombie apocalypse theme was perfect for a choose your own adventure style story. Very immersive and well-written.
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spicevoid
on 1/9/2019 3:37:49 PM with a score of 25035
way to hard to understand and way to many pages
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Hmarriott
on 1/9/2019 1:46:59 PM with a score of 1110
Game was fun felt a little hard and dramatic though. Good time waster but in a good way. ??
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— Fake on 1/7/2019 12:47:51 AM with a score of 6060
Amazing
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— Hbh on 1/6/2019 12:16:36 AM with a score of 26085
God this book is amazing!!! After 10 hours of game play I got the best possible ending (yeah that's right 10 hours of game play all in a FREE little shell of awesomeness! Though there are even more endings!) But seriously thank you developer/s for this amazing beautiful game! P.S. I, and many other people would LOVE to see a sequel (hopefully themed upon the "rumored" Chinese invasion)!
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— Maddox Laskowski on 1/5/2019 10:56:57 PM with a score of 36537
Very well written, kept me engaged throughout the story! Very nicely done.
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— Carolina on 1/2/2019 4:20:01 AM with a score of 7015
This was a great story, and the author is very skilled. He or she must definitely make a part ii.
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luwe781
on 12/29/2018 3:17:01 PM with a score of 6565
pretty good, cool realistic ideas. People act how they probably would for the most part.
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randommz
on 12/25/2018 4:06:36 PM with a score of 21195
Fantastic, as it was when I played it the first time. Sat down with a couple of cups of coffee and read my insomnia away on Christmas Day in the early hours. Thrilled to know that there is a better ending than I originally got. Great storytelling, character development, consequential sequencing, variety, vocabulary, and grammar. I highly recommend this story to anyone that has a even a passing interest in horror, storytelling, choose your own adventure type games, or literature. I look forward to finding the other endings in the future.
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— ResilientSorrow on 12/25/2018 5:35:35 AM with a score of 34577
Fascinating. I was immersed from beginning to end along with my husband and brother. Could barely put it down. You did fantastic!!
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— Jianna on 12/17/2018 12:20:11 AM with a score of 30185
great story, great adventures, and even greater deaths.
over all this is somthing i could see myself spending hours on!
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— mickey on 12/14/2018 11:13:23 AM with a score of 15760
I spent my entire day off work completely engulfed in this story! After achieving the best possible ending from hours and hours of story and tough decisions I am so glad I chose to spend my day on this, I loved every bit of the story and shared it all with my boyfriend as I progressed. The feeling at the end of this is that of closing a wonderful book after finishing the last line but this time knowing your choices are what led you there. A+
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Phofox
on 12/12/2018 10:29:19 PM with a score of 37217
well done.....I lost my soul playing this one.
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— Neal on 12/11/2018 10:10:36 PM with a score of 22065
yay
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— pepe on 12/11/2018 10:48:58 AM with a score of 1010
I loved it, but I couldn't even get to 200 pages, and I've only killed normal zombies, how to I find the other creatures?
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— Anonymous on 12/10/2018 9:40:53 PM with a score of 16290
Liked the story very much. I will have to try again and see if I can last longer!
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— Banturon on 12/10/2018 2:02:50 AM with a score of 8810
Got the best ending, going to replay and see others.
Overall 10/10
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Artyominos
on 12/8/2018 6:19:10 PM with a score of 37617
i had an out of body experience before playing this game
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— lolcat on 12/7/2018 1:49:34 PM with a score of 3310
Cool little game, really makes you think, just like the walking dead
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— Isaam on 11/30/2018 1:01:16 PM with a score of 4960
This was, without a doubt, one of the best stories (Choose your own OR regular) that I've read. I was taken on a Rollercoaster ride when I read this, the suspense you built was addicting and I had to replay the entire story more than once, I admit to going back to remake a few choices but it never took away from the whole of the story. This was wonderfully written and hopefully you'll continue to make more stories, and love them as much as I do.
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— Alexios on 11/27/2018 9:47:29 AM with a score of 33247
This is a well written engaging story. I only played a couple of story lines but all of them were fantastic. Worth a read, definitely
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— Cody Scheoeder on 11/26/2018 5:59:25 AM with a score of 32927
great stuff, lovn it lel.
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hoodedcamera
on 11/25/2018 10:36:53 PM with a score of 37567
Really good game dude! I'd rather play this than fortnite!!
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FaZe_Tfue
on 11/21/2018 2:23:12 PM with a score of 25525
This was amaze balls dude i could tell this took a lot of time a effort and it most differently paid off??
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— Damzel'N'Distress on 11/20/2018 2:12:03 PM with a score of 34037
good stuff my dude. i got the best ending and it was a fun ride.
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adude1234
on 11/9/2018 9:52:06 PM with a score of 34507
really fun one, fantastic world-building, story flow, and moral dilemmas
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— Superdude on 11/8/2018 7:13:36 PM with a score of 38617
dope
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— Kayla on 11/3/2018 11:39:23 PM with a score of 36357
Love the story and been through nearly 200 pages so far!
Spoilers!
I love how you end up being immune, but unbeknownst to you, carry the virus in your saliva! I teared up after the main character kisses his wife only for her to die and turn right in front of him. He was cursed with a kiss of death. Of course this is one of the many unexplored endings for me but this one is so far my favorite!
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zakco0123
on 11/3/2018 5:43:20 AM with a score of 21425
Cool story! I got a descent score this time and saved my family! Thanks for writing this story.
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PaulaAnneMason
on 11/2/2018 8:17:25 PM with a score of 30197
Cool story. I saved my family this time. Thanks for writing this story.
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PaulaAnneMason
on 11/2/2018 7:33:15 PM with a score of 18215
really cool! I will try to save my family next time. Way more fun than a real zombie apocalypse would be. Thanks for writing this story.
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PaulaAnneMason
on 11/2/2018 1:42:10 PM with a score of 6965
Awesome!
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— InsaneSickle on 10/31/2018 3:01:16 AM with a score of 29017
It was entertaining. I was so immersed in the story. I will play again to read the different endings
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Godyl
on 10/30/2018 6:27:29 AM with a score of 34957
How do I make it so I don't get killed by that prisoner
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— Guest on 10/29/2018 5:51:28 AM with a score of 12920
Wow, just wow. As with anything there are some issues that I have with this story but overall it was a fantastic experience and probably one of the best choose your own adventures ive had the privilege of playing.
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— That Guy on 10/28/2018 4:21:54 PM with a score of 34697
This is the most thrilling and coolest game I've ever play!
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khadijahzahra09
on 10/22/2018 4:30:58 AM with a score of 26947
This book is way too Long.I've covered just 121 ages out of te200 of them. Kudos dude.
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Muqtasid
on 10/17/2018 2:11:40 PM with a score of 27715
I genuinely enjoy the flow and pace of the combat an story telling, it's a very interesting look on the apocalypse.
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— Gavin on 10/17/2018 1:20:56 PM with a score of 13160
This rules
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— King bob on 10/17/2018 10:46:12 AM with a score of 7465
amazing game
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justincar15
on 10/15/2018 10:58:47 PM with a score of 30197
But where are the zombie turtles?
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Eternalis
on 10/14/2018 12:31:57 AM with a score of 27877
I played through this seven times in two days. Good job mate.
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— Michael King on 10/13/2018 2:47:19 AM with a score of 19025
This is an amazing story but the story is a little short.
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— Raistlin on 10/12/2018 11:23:25 PM with a score of 21725
Good with plenty of tension.
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Babui
on 10/10/2018 11:32:31 PM with a score of 5410
Very entertaining, up to the point where it pulled me in, and away from the friends in my Xbox party, due to it being so captivating and very well written. The amount of descriptive detail that was put into the story not only makes it a great story, but also really help with choosing which decision you like best. The details in knowing exactly everything you're getting into is just great, and I would recommend this to anyone who enjoys this type of literature and entertainment.
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— Christopher Lee on 9/28/2018 10:33:54 PM with a score of 13430
I was THIS close to get the best possible ending when I left the game for a short break only to come back here a week later thinking there'd be more to it. How unbelievably close I was to get that ending with the built up suspense I made up for myself. Anyways, that was one of the best story game I have ever played
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WritingStories
on 9/28/2018 8:57:40 AM with a score of 32667
Grammar/Spelling: 10/10
Extremely hard to find any errors despite the great length of the story.
Plot/Story Progression: 8/10
While there are numerous choices during the story, leading to a variety of endings, this story still seems somewhat linear in terms of the 'good endings'. I really enjoyed how previous choices had drastic effects on the game! This makes for entertaining and realistic material.
Character Development: 9/10
This game definitely tops most (especially in the horror genre) through its detailed character depth and personality.
TL;DR Amazing Game and funny as hell. Would recommend to anyone interested in good Zombie apocalypse fiction.
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karod1blockbreaker
on 9/28/2018 1:20:34 AM with a score of 1860
So much fun!
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— Audreyb on 9/27/2018 8:52:30 PM with a score of 20675
The story was very nice, but near the end I found myself not reading dialogue but just skimming through options to the ones where I would not die. Still, a very nice story that I recommend for sure. Try it out at the very least.
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Zubekanov
on 9/26/2018 8:57:20 PM with a score of 25235
well i died but i had fun playing it
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Ryderboi77
on 9/24/2018 11:47:28 PM with a score of 1210
8/8
Didnt get the best ending, but still. Got a good one.
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— Guy that has nothing to do wit on 9/24/2018 7:20:46 AM with a score of 24275
Very nice story and plot I got a score of 9000
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— MICHAEL on 9/21/2018 2:44:37 PM with a score of 1860
Well done
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gintamago
on 9/20/2018 6:24:34 PM with a score of 44167
its challenging
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zoemehdi27
on 9/20/2018 5:03:29 PM with a score of 3960
Great adventure! Really enjoyable!
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Novibruno
on 9/20/2018 5:18:25 AM with a score of 25795
Simply put amazing, made horrible decisions on purpose so I would read the descriptions, even though a few things don't make sense overall I loved the story.
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— bobo on 9/18/2018 5:51:42 PM with a score of 31307
This story includes swearing and there are children reading this. Other than this, this is a very good story
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— Anhduy on 9/17/2018 7:54:12 PM with a score of 1210
Ahh. Love this game. Played it years ago and just did another run. Got the best ending too. Over all, very satisfying. Although, I do wanna do a maximum kills run now.
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TinderFly
on 9/14/2018 6:16:43 PM with a score of 31527
6/8
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— Scooby Doo on 9/14/2018 9:30:48 AM with a score of 18425
i really enjoyed it
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StarKiller519
on 9/10/2018 9:18:40 PM with a score of 20215
If I didn't know any better I'd say I actually lived through that experience (except for the times I died). Well done, I want to thank everyone who made this wonderful piece.
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Yogotronik
on 9/10/2018 7:16:05 PM with a score of 35237
Great idea, but the protagonist is far to quick to realize that zombies are real. Fun jaunt, either way though!
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— Chris on 9/10/2018 12:58:48 AM with a score of 1110
Why damn i thought i was wasting my life on this and now im mad its over....
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annielinn10098
on 9/9/2018 6:52:44 AM with a score of 33767
My first "choices matter" game I've played on this site. Was NOT disappointed! It was awesome!
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Stolith
on 9/7/2018 1:25:22 AM with a score of 36537
I'm surprised I got so immersed in this "game"
My first run ended with me getting squashed by the fire escape and my second ended with me, the girls, and the 6 teens surviving at that campsite and it made me really happy to have saved these people. Props to the author,this was rad!
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— Max on 9/2/2018 12:02:17 PM with a score of 17925
pretty good.
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— bobprett on 8/25/2018 1:51:35 AM with a score of 2660
Neat
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Sardiane
on 8/23/2018 12:35:07 AM with a score of 1410
It was really interesting. I liked the way the choices panned out. I was able to save the kids in the school and get them to safety (60 people saved) without getting bit. I followed my first choices, but went back to look at some other ones. The only downside is that it was much longer than I anticipated
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— Mike on 8/21/2018 12:34:41 AM with a score of 37427
Amazing story.
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LiamS
on 8/20/2018 2:10:06 PM with a score of 19815
DEAR GOD THIS IS THE 10TH PLAYTHROUGH WHY CANT I FIND SOME ANTIBIOTICS
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— Sara on 8/12/2018 7:05:19 PM with a score of 18490
game was great. you should do a free choice version like zombie exodus safehaven
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— Shamus on 8/11/2018 3:34:46 PM with a score of 25925
I fell like each decision make would impact the later outcome. And always leaves me worrying if i did the right thing.
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denzp
on 8/10/2018 5:44:58 PM with a score of 26995
Great game, loved it.
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— David on 8/10/2018 1:55:08 AM with a score of 37097
Liked it a lot, but wish there was a mechanism for character growth.
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— AnnA Helms on 8/6/2018 9:19:53 PM with a score of 21365
This was awesome.
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— David on 8/5/2018 7:06:04 PM with a score of 21725
Nice work I will like to read more
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— Madhur on 8/5/2018 2:21:22 PM with a score of 30537
Absolutely incredible. Played through twice in two days.
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TheRedCloud
on 8/4/2018 5:50:54 AM with a score of 38337
An amazing experience!! The writing and story elements are profoundly awe inspiring. I found myself immersed in the story caring for the characters I've met, anxious about what's going to happen next, and a sense of pride when things go the right way. This is one hell of a game and I would recommend it to anyone!
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— Mohammed Robbie on 7/29/2018 4:06:21 PM with a score of 34297
Great CYS storygame!
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wjteoh2
on 7/29/2018 4:30:34 AM with a score of 36637
Amazing
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— Luxas on 7/26/2018 3:20:21 PM with a score of 20115
AWESOME!!!
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Quorrah
on 7/17/2018 7:42:14 PM with a score of 19635
A reasonable CYOA-based simulation what could happen if zombies really existed
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Inhabitantz
on 7/14/2018 6:46:26 PM with a score of 16320
just a lil bit sexist and dialogue was a lil cheesy but good plot/descriptions
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— derek on 7/12/2018 11:05:52 PM with a score of 32917
Awesome! The writing is great, the story goes into heavy detail about the current landscape and the characters. I manged to save 54 people, kill 198 zombies... But i only got through 109 pages... The
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Rattler
on 7/11/2018 8:08:29 PM with a score of 16015
This game really fires up the imagination! It puts you in the shoes of a survivor. But as the story goes on, the survivor becomes more and more like you. With the choices you make and things you say, the personality of THE survivor becomes you. Making it YOUR survivor. Of course, the "Go Back" button was useful a couple time. Good Job!
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— Jordan on 7/11/2018 7:05:19 PM with a score of 30027
very nice yes
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Sampel00
on 7/11/2018 2:32:39 PM with a score of 37077
Overall Score: 33467
This game is definitely worth your time, and as it is the most popular game around, it's obvious you should try it.The way you typed up the whole thing made me feel worried as to whether I made the wrong choice or not.
It took me so many tries just to get the best possible ending (score is above). In one try I died because I did not have the crowbar to open the red door.In another, I died because of the 100- foot propane tank with the Middle East Guy and the Spanish Conquistador.There are so many choices that affect the course of the story, and I love it! Keep up the good work man!
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— Some Guy on 7/10/2018 12:35:59 PM with a score of 33487
This storygame, in my opinion, is one of the best on the site.
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Jimbob1
on 7/6/2018 3:09:03 PM with a score of 18775
absolutely one of the best stories I have ever read. Good choice to start for newcomers
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— abc def on 7/3/2018 2:26:22 PM with a score of 20085
Holy moly! I am blown away! I found myself wondering "When will the movie come out?" while reading this! :P
I'm fairly new to this site and it always baffles me how complex these longer stories can be and it's abundantly clear that the author put countless hours of work (and quite frankly, passion) into the creation of this story.
There were very few typos and no big continuity issues that I came across which, again, was very impressive to me. I found the main character to be quite dynamic and thoughtful. I also really enjoyed hunting for the cameos listed by the author!
I'm really struggling to think of some sort of criticism to try and be a little constructive but I quite genuinely cannot think of anything.
I got to the best ending on my second-ish try and I quite literally jumped for joy! ;P
Thanks BerkaZerka for this excellent piece!
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kcding
on 7/3/2018 12:11:04 AM with a score of 35887
Died after the gas explossion, while protecting Jacob! Lol. At least we weren't eaten alive by nobody, ha ha.
Great game, the writting is impressive and I enjoyed every page of those 52 that I managed to play! :D
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— Jenni2991 on 6/29/2018 1:13:18 AM with a score of 9270
This is my first read/play of this website. I can see why it was number 1 ranked. I only made it through 137 of the 2000 something possible pages! Great story! It definitely kept me interested. I can't wait to continue to find more stories on here ??
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HonestPleasure
on 6/23/2018 6:01:56 AM with a score of 40787
Fun Story, managed to kill a lotta them zombs, and saved my entire family and school. Thanks for writing
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JamesFranco666
on 6/21/2018 7:04:45 PM with a score of 28867
Such a fun story, enjoyed it a lot. You probably can’t reply but I wanted to ask. Is there an ending where the family ends up together? I could only save my girls! Thank you!
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— Andres on 6/21/2018 2:02:59 AM with a score of 21425
This game was great. I got the best ending after a few trys and it was comlegley worth it. The characters make you really feel for them even if you couldn't help them. It's moderately had but also so rewarding if you get a good ending. :D
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— Seiji on 6/20/2018 11:36:22 PM with a score of 31497
This was such acaptivating and amazing literary art. It also really makes you question your morals and humanity which is just so cool. I love, love, LOVE this story. It is truly amazing.
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MalecShipper
on 6/20/2018 2:20:06 AM with a score of 23295
This was awesome. Can't wait to replay making different choices and see how I do.
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Megalodonqueen
on 6/19/2018 8:10:17 AM with a score of 35067
fun story
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AlexanderFalkor
on 6/18/2018 4:10:54 AM with a score of 31937
I made an account just to save my progress in game. It was epic.
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WolfCatHybrid
on 6/17/2018 11:43:52 AM with a score of 26195
Best zombie apoc-type CYOS! Great detail but some grammer errors. Definately kept me hooked!
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— Nick on 6/16/2018 9:12:34 PM with a score of 22865
better than most hell even all
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JustHEREbecuzBored
on 6/15/2018 5:11:12 PM with a score of 2270
This is epic
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— Killmebusy on 6/12/2018 8:49:21 AM with a score of 29665
30387, best ending. Very amusing to play, just one or two typos. I loved fighting the hellhound in the vet. Hope there are more stories like this one!
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— Affiiinity on 6/9/2018 7:23:45 PM with a score of 30407
Awsomest game on here ever!!!!!
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— Scott b on 6/7/2018 11:28:10 AM with a score of 30987
I loved every second of playing this and I wish I can find any more alternate ways to survive until the end
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— KMG on 6/5/2018 12:25:35 PM with a score of 19925
The story was really great, I felt really enthralled in the story and main character. You can tell so much work was put into this, I just wish a little more work went into editing. The play through I ended with had so many grammatical errors, run on sentences and sometimes the reading was just too much. Still a great time though, will be going through again to see what I can find out next time. {CiD}
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Apocalyptic_Asylum
on 6/3/2018 7:04:53 AM with a score of 34437
How the hell did I die from a bacterial infection?
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— Victor on 5/29/2018 6:12:04 AM with a score of 17620
Not going to lie, this game seriously f*ked with my anxiety, but it was incredible, regardless! Immersive, clever, and intense. I died of a bacterial infection, so I'm going to replay and try to get further (this time, during the day...).
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— AnxietyGirl on 5/25/2018 9:04:51 AM with a score of 2780
The best zombie chose your own adventure I have ever played. Amazingly done. I can’t imagine the time that went into this so thank you to whomever created this.
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— Mike on 5/22/2018 5:28:14 PM with a score of 19215
Really amazing story, beautifully written and deeply immersive.
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— Artineo on 5/22/2018 5:24:51 PM with a score of 38387
This was amazing. Very well done.
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wutadd
on 5/22/2018 3:07:18 PM with a score of 19415
Very good Zombie survival, please less cuss words next time.
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— Faclix on 5/18/2018 12:08:30 AM with a score of 26915
This is one of the best zombie survival stories I have ever played... What surprised me though was that, I chose what I would do and not what is right and got the best ending possible!
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AwesomeIsaac11
on 5/17/2018 9:15:16 PM with a score of 29987
While I noticed a few grammatical errors, it was largely fine, far better than a lot of other stories I've seen. On a similar note, however, I noticed inconsistencies with the timeline. The particular instance I'm speaking of is [SPOILER ALERT, SPOILER ALERT] whenever Main Character is at the school, he states that he's seen "much worse out there", "give me nightmares for years to come, if I live that long," or however the line goes. He says it once on one page, then repeats it word for word on the page afterwards whenever the teens get rowdy again if you decide to help gather supplies instead of heading out immediately.
All and all, it was entertaining my first run through (I went the suburbia/family route), and I'd like to replay and do the city/police station route.
6/8 relatively great, not bait
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— TheSnowyBanana on 5/16/2018 10:07:56 PM with a score of 26175
This was a very well written story and i enjoyed the details you put in it. The only critique i would give would be the dialogue, it could use a little more work, but other than that great job!
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Ashy_feathers01
on 5/5/2018 11:59:15 PM with a score of 35417
ThatOnePerson Approves of this Adventure and felt...
Emotion in parts of Emotion.
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ThatOnePerson
on 5/4/2018 11:06:18 PM with a score of 31957
Great way to spend time when you're bored in class.
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Dekuscrub1943
on 5/4/2018 2:04:15 PM with a score of 29997
This game is decent.
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— 8man27 on 5/3/2018 9:11:32 PM with a score of 2460
This was fun, I've always enjoyed these kinds of games. Adding zombies into the mix just made it even better. I got the best possible ending (after getting killed several times) and had a good time doing so. I'll probably go through thus a few more times.
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— Garrett Mills on 5/2/2018 9:15:26 PM with a score of 31887
Nice writing and everything. You should make a more complete version and put it on steam.
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— Don't Need to Know on 4/26/2018 5:28:22 AM with a score of 8615
The story is good
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— iqbal on 4/25/2018 10:25:24 AM with a score of 2860
Nice
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— Nick on 4/21/2018 8:28:17 PM with a score of 17585
Noice
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— Noice on 4/21/2018 3:11:17 PM with a score of 35457
I loved it. It started out slow but quickly picked up. You have (almost) complete control over what you do /what happens. I played this so many time and can never get bored. It has a lot of replay value and I really have to thank the maker. Thank you.
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— Efrain on 4/20/2018 6:22:39 PM with a score of 19635
I did shit, but the game is really good. whoever wrote this has a sick and twisted imagination lol
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— Gary McBain on 4/20/2018 2:18:03 PM with a score of 2110
Nice it had a lot of options and deaths but it was fun
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— Seb on 4/18/2018 11:31:13 AM with a score of 16475
I personally did awful in this on my first run, but I've never been happy to get absolutely demolished. The game was so amazing and all the story had awesome details. I didn't even realize how big this actually was until it told me I did 56 pages out of 2200! Also all the different things like a scoring system and multiple typ of zombies makes this the best thing I've ever read
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— I did aweful on 4/15/2018 10:18:58 PM with a score of 7560
This is the first story-game I've read and I really enjoyed it. I didn't come across any gaps in logic. Though some of it could have been written better and the daughters better delevoped, I thought it was wonderful and well worth the time. Without spoiling it, I spent a long time trying to do something only to realise I'd wasted my time in a twist! I did end up with the best ending though, so I've made my peace with that.
Would recommend.
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fee4444
on 4/14/2018 3:18:38 PM with a score of 35257
Smooth gameplay, creative situations and knowledgeable about survival techniques. Lots of Fun!
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LuvLee
on 4/12/2018 12:42:32 PM with a score of 27807
This story is very well done, I recommend it fully. It's length is perfect, and on my first time playing, I got a good ending, but not the best. Few days later, I resumed playing, so I restarted, and just got the best ending. It took hours trying to analyze what I did wrong sometimes, as I stumbled into many that led into more dead ends, which require me to go so far back to pick A rather than B (in terms of choices). The choices you make in this story are surprisingly precise to impacting your outcome, unlike some few other stories I have read on here. There were moments in the story where it did not seem to add up, such as when you have that head injury that you somehow survive when you don't go get medical attention, and other instances that I can't remember exactly. My other criticism is that the dialogue is sometimes awkward. I think the zombie virus was well thought out, and not just like an amateur wrote this story. I do, however, wish that there were more involvement with survivors, and while there was a lot, I think there should be more people running around, more people going crazy, and more encounters in general. I say this because sometimes it seems like as if the story is passing more time than it is. When I wake up in that tunnel several hours after the outbreak, I think there should be plenty more of survivors and encounters with them. Otherwise, I think everything else was greatly crafted in the storyline and this is my favorite story on this site right now. Great job.
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— ZilexRed on 4/12/2018 12:13:00 PM with a score of 38637
Great game! Wish it was longer
I got to the school saving ending
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JWHBOSS
on 4/11/2018 7:13:05 PM with a score of 42237
Good
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— Chess on 4/11/2018 11:50:44 AM with a score of 33457
This is my 2nd time playing this story and I have gotten the best ending! Thank you for this fun ride through the zombieland.
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surfiebabie
on 4/9/2018 10:16:01 PM with a score of 35867
The best is you have think about your choice
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Dubstepwolf
on 4/9/2018 3:27:18 PM with a score of 38987
Brilliant. My first read through, 100 pages, no deaths/bites and best possible ending. Logical options and fab story.
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Tazmin
on 4/8/2018 5:32:50 PM with a score of 37307
Got nothing to say, absolutely mind-blowing. After my first few attempts in which in sure I died a lot, I finally got the best ending possible without getting bit. Surprising thing is I hardly back later except during the first lock code. I must say I give it a solid 8/8 is great. Personally I didn't find any fatal errors except two three grammatical errors here and there but otherwise it was perfect. So yeah you try this to see for yourself and remember the first lock is 9212 ;)
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— energy on 4/8/2018 10:35:52 AM with a score of 31427
:) This game is so awesome I keep coming back thinking I might have missed survivors. It is so real you care about the character as he sets out to rescue his family and anyone else he finds along the way. There is more than one path to a good ending (or even the best possible ending). It is intelligently written, and you have to make good choices to survive. Of course, it’s still possible to get pretty far with a few insane choices... Even people who are not into zombie stuff can appreciate how well thought out this is.
Gripping, edge of your seat action [it needs to be made into a video game] it has everything... It is a masterpiece that runs seamlessly from beginning to end... impressive.
Rated R for violence/gore and some language
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HowdyHiHello
on 4/7/2018 7:32:02 PM with a score of 36657
What a journey! This was really well written, very smart and wow, I've been here for hours, that'll tell you something.
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blackswann__
on 4/6/2018 9:56:00 PM with a score of 38547
This quite an incredible story. Though I only played through it once and died a couple times, the writing has taken quite a bit of my time. I'm probably going to try and get the other endings but just playing it once is good enough for anyone who wants to try!
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— Blu-dud on 4/6/2018 4:14:05 AM with a score of 25075
You Killed 2 Zombies
You Killed 0 Drooler Zombies
You Killed 0 Bloater Zombies
You Killed 0 Ghouls
You Killed 0 Banshees
You Killed 0 Hell Hounds
You Killed 0 Cannibal Gaunt Zombies
You Killed 0 People
You Saved 0 People (including yourself, unless you died)
You were eaten by 0 Zombies
Your Overall Score: 1300
(You played through 13 of 2,131 Pages and have proven to be a Zombie Happy Meal)
ITHE LAST 1 IS BRUTEL me isn't a Zombie HAPPY MEAL (if I was, where is the toy 2 come with me?)
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— mad gamz on 4/5/2018 1:49:22 PM with a score of 1310
Fun, thank you for the adventure.
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— Nick on 4/4/2018 3:47:49 PM with a score of 1110
10/10!
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— Wesley on 4/4/2018 2:59:03 AM with a score of 33527
this is a game who 213 zombies eat me so i don`t know if i like but this game is interesting and very long :)
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— somebody on 4/3/2018 1:37:55 PM with a score of 1860
Having not read a ‘choose your own adventure’ type story in a while, I was very pleased with this work. The introduction with the temporary memory-loss was an interesting one, and I think that it allowed for me to slowly get to know the character. The writing was cohesive and it is definitely something I would recommend. My complements to the chef!
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— Victor on 4/3/2018 12:42:12 AM with a score of 22565
Absolutely awesome! This is my first story arter this website and it is wonderful. I especially like how there are many options even ones like killing people and the continuity is great.
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DeadWillow248
on 4/1/2018 5:25:04 AM with a score of 39687
Very hard... hard af
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— Hunter Helms on 3/29/2018 12:37:02 PM with a score of 3910
One of the best stories I've ever read.
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chloricocaen56
on 3/28/2018 10:40:38 PM with a score of 28797
This story-game is so awesome!!!
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— (: on 3/27/2018 11:47:28 AM with a score of 35067
Best storygame i've ever played
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KLeGrand141
on 3/23/2018 1:50:58 AM with a score of 21215
it's a pretty good game i'll have to say 8/10
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DarkGamer
on 3/21/2018 11:02:07 AM with a score of 23325
Loved this game, enjoyed myself
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simone921921
on 3/20/2018 12:18:27 PM with a score of 33157
Love it. Killed 89 zombies, saved 53 people, killed 2 drooler zombies, and one cannibal guant zombie. Was not bitten. Loved the cameos.
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Jreesebot
on 3/20/2018 9:08:01 AM with a score of 21885
I got the good ending where you still carry the virus.
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TheHumanCookie
on 3/19/2018 6:46:59 PM with a score of 21835
ok
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— kk on 3/19/2018 1:47:34 PM with a score of 1810
most in-depth choose your own adventure that I've seen online so far. I'll have to retry and go for the perfect ending, ended up killing my wife and saving our daughters in the wilderness. Excellent work. 10/10
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JaketheGreat
on 3/19/2018 2:56:43 AM with a score of 17025
Okay it was really interesting
Links:Hillarious
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— Anna_Maria on 3/16/2018 9:38:27 AM with a score of 10670
Fun
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cows
on 3/14/2018 11:40:28 AM with a score of 28465
Here’s a rundown of how you did –
You Killed 2 Zombies
You Killed 0 Drooler Zombies
You Killed 0 Bloater Zombies
You Killed 0 Ghouls
You Killed 0 Banshees
You Killed 0 Hell Hounds
You Killed 0 Cannibal Gaunt Zombies
You Killed 2 People
You Saved 1 People (including yourself, unless you died)
You were eaten by 0 Zombies
Your Overall Score: 7605
(You played through 65 of 2,131 Pages and have proven to be a Dead Man Walking)
I think I took the not dumb rout but my family died, so yeah...
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Wookis943
on 3/13/2018 6:33:48 PM with a score of 7615
Some parts were confusing, but the story made you imagine that you were actually in the zombie outbreak.
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jamirr58
on 3/13/2018 12:50:38 PM with a score of 25375
Awesome
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— Daphne on 3/11/2018 10:49:54 PM with a score of 24167
It was enthralling story and I loved it. (even though I died)
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— Gerald on 3/9/2018 8:48:04 AM with a score of 1460
Heyyyyyy that was pretty goooood
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CopiedEsque
on 3/7/2018 11:16:56 AM with a score of 30657
One of the best experiences I've had, awesome story
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— Jonathan on 3/6/2018 5:23:24 PM with a score of 32197
This is the MOST BEAUTIFUL Roleplay I have ever played, you put a ton of hard work into the science, story, and all around development, it actually reminds me of some of my projects, the difference between us, is you definitely have more time and patience. As I was walking through this, in the dark, at night, when everyone else was asleep, and playing it in one sitting as well, I experienced actual fear, and felt myself actually connecting with the character, I will definitely do this again sometime when I get more sleep :) one thing I might criticize is 1. The misspelling on some words and having to guess because you forgot a letter, but I completely understand that, it's a lot of typing after all, and 2. after Greg finds his wife, and the criminal, after shooting him with a shotgun (this is all based on my specific choices obviously), I'm just a little skeptical about that not attracting zombie attention from the loud noise, that's all. I definitely feel like you can contact and team up with companies like telltale and 2k and turning this into a video game, and I'm pretty sure it would be a best seller. You can even add more stuff! Also, I don't know if you already added this scenario, but maybe a cool option, is if you return with the army a little earlier than when the truck drives up to the camp, because they have seen how well you have done, they offer you a position in the army to semi-casually hunt down zombie survivors and kill them, and help establish the new order,which is definitely something all zombie movies lack, which is wrapping up and how life moves on from there. Maybe even (I think it's bethseda) the fallout creators can chip in their stellar graphics. Anyway, I'm rambling now. Keep up the amazing work!
-A Brand New Fan
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— John on 3/6/2018 9:24:35 AM with a score of 24175
really good and realistic i see you took time and dedication into making theist is really good
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— oofer on 3/1/2018 7:18:59 PM with a score of 7210
NICE MATE
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— ASH on 2/28/2018 4:47:37 AM with a score of 1810
watch out for the dead!
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— Zeref on 2/27/2018 3:26:42 AM with a score of 20775
Lot of stories!! I Died really fast! Very fun. Almost like a video game. : )
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— : ) ?! on 2/25/2018 11:22:07 PM with a score of 1310
I survived! :D
This was a very very very enjoyable story and was really realistic. The only downfall of course, is that if you were actually Greg, you wouldn't have a lot of time to make your decisions like you do here. But very well done, I rated 8/8. I highly recommend it. Keep up with the awesome work!
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SophiaShea
on 2/24/2018 9:39:07 PM with a score of 21375
I have beat this game multiple times and have gotten two different endings,
both considered best.This game is excellently well written,as a great amount of quality endings and it is a truly gritty zombie survival story.
8/8 Must Play
Suggested 13+ For Sexual Assault Reference And Violence
Good Job!
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— Gaming10ah on 2/24/2018 3:36:11 PM with a score of 23047
BerkaZerka is a master storyteller, I’ve never seen such smooth transitions in a book, let alone a choose your own path story, that had this much intelligence in it. But, I think what sets it apart from other zombie stories is its realistically good ending. Positive endings always triumph over negative endings, (would you rather read what to do to end up in a bad situation a million times, or would you rather read what to do to get out of a bad situation a million times?) I love that you can save people in the story, I saved my family & everyone at the school, then I found out you can also save a boy at the boat place. I’m still wondering if there is anyone else that can be saved. The story has such impressive detail, I can almost imagine that a map of the place exists somewhere. (:
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— (: on 2/23/2018 9:15:19 AM with a score of 36087
Loved it, it was challenging but greatly enjoyable with a great story,like you said not to hate but nowhere easy. Enjoyed eating and rank survivalist and zombie description which was all really good. God bless you and your writing talents. Oh and thank thank you very much baby
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— Random on 2/22/2018 7:15:06 PM with a score of 20365
Excellent writing and creativity! Amazingly awesome! (:
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— (: on 2/22/2018 9:58:03 AM with a score of 30347
It was a good mix of reading and fun, I got the best possible ending and saved the school by taking a camping trip, to make a long description that I could write short, I loved.
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— Kill3rSil3nt on 2/20/2018 9:05:09 PM with a score of 32707
It was really good love the details maybe one-day it can be a game
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Demonhunter222
on 2/20/2018 8:53:53 PM with a score of 17770
Great storytelling. Will definitely be playing again in order to check out alternate strategies I didn't go for this time.
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ResilientSorrow
on 2/16/2018 4:30:23 PM with a score of 30197
Great story. Somehow managed to get the BPE on my first playthrough, probably due to a combination of natural paranoia, playing it overly safe, and a long-standing love for zombie literature and film. Made it through in just under a hundred pages, but the story, and some of the alternate options I had to force myself not to take were so intriguing that I know for a fact I will be going back and replaying in different styles. Thanks again for the fantastic story.
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— John on 2/16/2018 4:43:28 AM with a score of 29707
I LIKE IT!!!!
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Jakethebro
on 2/15/2018 2:06:57 PM with a score of 24945
Loved it was honestly the best book i played on this site and i saved 9 people now i think if a apocalypse was to happen ill survive god forbid but hey just saying that all the gamers and mentally prepared would survive
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— Shadow-Rose on 2/14/2018 1:48:03 PM with a score of 16735
This is a great zombie survival game, it has choices that use logic, and is entertaining. This is a great game for those looking for entertainment, and I would recommend it to anyone interested in these topics.
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Thundergameplay
on 2/12/2018 4:53:46 PM with a score of 2310
Hello,thank you for this great book. I öove it. The only thing to make it even better, would bee to use numbers for the pages insted of some words like- you got bitten, because it is a spoiler of what happens. Thanx for the super book. Write more, you are good in it.
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— Pat on 2/6/2018 1:04:51 PM with a score of 33717
Hello,thank you for this great book. I öove it. The only thing to make it even better, would bee to use numbers for the pages insted of some words like- you got bitten
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— Pat on 2/6/2018 12:56:20 PM with a score of 33717
Nice yet a little to long to read sometimes
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SushiPuppy
on 2/4/2018 5:44:19 PM with a score of 2760
Second run... going for third
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FOUR_SILVER
on 2/4/2018 1:32:51 PM with a score of 35657
This was the first story I played on this site, and really enjoyed it. Pretty tense at times, and I must have died 5 times. Thank you so much for putting in the time and effort to create such a good read.
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Papa2Toes
on 2/3/2018 6:47:21 PM with a score of 20565
It distracts me from my work, but it is for the better. Hahaha. On to my second run.
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FOUR_SILVER
on 2/1/2018 12:23:03 PM with a score of 21685
I rarely, like, RARELY play AND finish any game but this game made me play 'til the end. I even got to finish two endings (one where I waited out what would happen to me after getting bitten lmao yet I saved Jacob and the girls in the end... unfortunately I didn't reach my wife quick enough coz I went to the precinct lol I knew it wasn't the best idea when I chose that option but I was so curious + the best ending)-- I played this at 10pm I think??? but finished at 8:30am lol
I really loved how I don't just suddenly die whenever I choose the "wrong" option. I mean, I decided to play it with a half-hearted intention of surviving but the story, options and the thrills that came with it really sparked my interest. The text was brilliant and humorous as well. I loved the detail put into the narrations. It was really well-thought. Also, there were so many branches/scenes/options in the game and it awes me to no end.
All in all, I liked it a lot.
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— Ken on 1/31/2018 7:48:11 PM with a score of 33627
thanks for the fun
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ShadowAndrew
on 1/31/2018 5:13:01 PM with a score of 21335
Here’s a rundown of how you did –
You Killed 46 Zombies
You Killed 1 Drooler Zombies
You Killed 0 Bloater Zombies
You Killed 0 Ghouls
You Killed 0 Banshees
You Killed 1 Hell Hounds
You Killed 1 Cannibal Gaunt Zombies
You Killed 3 People
You Saved 1 People (including yourself, unless you died)
You were eaten by 288 Zombies
Your Overall Score: 21000
(You played through 81 of 2,131 Pages and have proven to be a Scout)
Yeah, tell me how to reach a complete 2131 pages because I need a walk-through for that!
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TestingJest
on 1/31/2018 1:17:51 AM with a score of 21010
good
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— me on 1/30/2018 4:50:40 PM with a score of 1760
very good
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arima123
on 1/30/2018 10:38:16 AM with a score of 27615
Amazing.
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— Great on 1/28/2018 7:19:48 PM with a score of 1710
Best. Story. Ever.
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— Brooke on 1/28/2018 12:47:51 AM with a score of 37777
It's a really fun game/book, I got the score 24655.
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— Xaon on 1/27/2018 1:31:36 AM with a score of 24665
Okay so this is my first story that I read on here AND LET ME TELL YOU, if every story on here is like this? I'd never leave my screen!
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MackPack
on 1/27/2018 12:21:51 AM with a score of 25375
very good, very descrpitive!! :P
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Rapor
on 1/26/2018 2:37:03 PM with a score of 2260
Super in-depth! Great story, and so many routes as well. I'll definitely be playing this more to get different endings.
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Journey
on 1/24/2018 5:54:31 PM with a score of 34185
A decent and well written story in which I played through most of the endings and paths. Only a couple little gripes with the game really.
1. after leaving the Subway tunnel you can check out some parking lot offices and find rotten food in the fridge (it has only been been 12 hours since the outbreak and not long in the tunnels)
2. There are a few things that happen that really affect the story without ever being clear or you are given the option to avoid (hard to mention without spoilers) but the best way to exlain would be you select an option either 1. ignore or 2. be cautious or 3. charge and fight.....all of those otion work but 2 of those then go on to do something else that later kills a character indirectly and there is no option to avoid, you are just told in text after selecting them that your character has done this thing that results in this, with the only option being to avoid the whole scenario for this not to happen. (vague I know) but there are often times you are faced with a wall of text after selecting a fairly vague option then find out your character has done about 10 things related to that that are unavoidable.
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Vinnykin
on 1/23/2018 8:10:19 PM with a score of 26967
it was awesome
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— harley on 1/22/2018 3:06:08 PM with a score of 710
Well, after playing throught two considerably distinct routes and reciving the best possible ending with saving of 61 people and overall score of 50197, I must say that this is now my favorite story on that site. All decisions trully either logical or emotional but understandable, the story writing is extremely good and there is loads of content (for I only stumbled across about 10% of it, which showing how important decisions here actually is).
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Laxard
on 1/19/2018 11:04:27 AM with a score of 50217
Best game ever
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— Indigo Anderson on 1/18/2018 2:51:20 PM with a score of 20175
Very good story very compelling one of the best I've had the pleasure of playing
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— Jesse on 1/17/2018 12:46:26 PM with a score of 36377
multiple endings depending on your actions give more choices and make the story very interesting. Well Done!!
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jchun
on 1/16/2018 8:19:48 PM with a score of 22475
amazing
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— noob on 1/15/2018 6:21:15 AM with a score of 8060
Awesome game that is highly vivid and exciting I love the endings
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— Frank on 1/12/2018 4:29:34 PM with a score of 26777
i can show you de wey
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JamesOsborne
on 1/10/2018 11:42:28 PM with a score of 10385
Hi, So I Did Have Alot of Fun With This, At First I Tried to Beat it. died a few times and Then Just Started Trying to Kill My Character as Quick as Possible. So This is a Fun Game to Pick Up and Just Play as the Story Can Get Pretty Immersive and After You Beat it You Can Just Challenge Yourself to Lose as quick as Possible. You Can Even Get Friends to Pick Choices by Just Listening to Each Page Once, Lots of Ideas and Fun Creative Ways to Play. It Earns a nice 9 / 10 From Me.
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— Ashley on 1/10/2018 10:44:31 PM with a score of 1660
pretty good though needs more places to loot
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— Sporklife178 on 1/10/2018 8:50:51 PM with a score of 19225
while i'm not an avid reader, i enjoyed this.
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Crazy8
on 1/9/2018 9:13:18 PM with a score of 24495
All I can say is that throughout the story, I was more concerned about Jacob's survival than my family's wellbeing. ^_^
Love it, very engaging and I feel so involved with the choices. But there are some choices that does not really give the player much of a choice. Like everything you choose except this one will doom you. But it was worth it.
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Haine
on 1/7/2018 10:51:24 AM with a score of 40157
Great story!
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bonnjjj
on 1/6/2018 12:55:47 PM with a score of 35867
It gets better every playthrough!!
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Brandofergie
on 1/5/2018 7:13:16 PM with a score of 32157
Loved it!
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Brandofergie
on 1/5/2018 7:06:05 PM with a score of 31217
Omg I saw sindriV
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Chapter101
on 1/5/2018 7:05:33 PM with a score of 17835
damit@@@@@@ broke all my b0nes. still awsome
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josephwilson
on 1/3/2018 10:32:15 PM with a score of 4410
what the fu## i have died for the 19th time man tis is hardest story on here and one fourth of my deaths was in the subway@@@@@ arghhh but overall was a damn good one 100 stars for you budy doctor baloney man signing off
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josephwilson
on 1/3/2018 10:22:49 PM with a score of 560
Its really great and I love all zombie choose your own adventures but this one is the best one tho
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— Arman Kang on 1/2/2018 10:40:23 PM with a score of 20325
Great
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— HUD on 12/31/2017 3:05:29 PM with a score of 20665
Let me start off by saying that this was a great, well-written novel game. The reading in itselfwas very gripping and I read it like I would have read a book that I did not want to put down. The only bad things I can say;*SPOILER* I played 81 pages and got the best possible ending, I saw that there were well over 2000 pages.While I realize that tons of these pages were pages leading down other paths I didnt choose, it made me wonder if I had decided to go "further" in the game, how well I would've done, because I was dissapointed that it ended so early, even though, like I said, I made it through 81 pages. Also, I wouldve loved to know what this black shadowy thing was that "Greg" literally mentioned on the first page. Is it death following him? Perhaps I'll play again and go a different route, but I dont want any of my people to die =(!
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Jypsy
on 12/31/2017 9:18:20 AM with a score of 34087
aMAZING OMG REALLY ENJOYED 10/10 WOULD PLAY AGAIN. WELL DONE
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— Jamie on 12/29/2017 10:12:44 PM with a score of 23275
Amazing game, super fun. I would just like to know what the shadowy figure is?
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AutumnMajor
on 12/27/2017 6:58:19 PM with a score of 18185
amazing story
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— trinity on 12/26/2017 9:03:47 AM with a score of 22655
Oh god. My ending is unacceptable
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— Cornstarch on 12/26/2017 7:04:49 AM with a score of 13260
A must try story
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InsetUsernameHere
on 12/25/2017 12:42:40 AM with a score of 25815
I sucked at it! But it is well worth the time!
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— Ella on 12/21/2017 1:36:20 PM with a score of 2310
I loved it, it was very suspenseful.
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— Rejenio on 12/19/2017 5:02:21 PM with a score of 1460
This is hands down the best choose your own choices zombie games. The plot was well written along with all the different outcomes .
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— Sean on 12/17/2017 1:59:55 AM with a score of 21925
Took me a good number of runs to find the ending I wanted. I never even saw any of the Omega-gen zombies, except for one Hell-Hound
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papershoggoth
on 12/15/2017 4:59:50 PM with a score of 25175
Awesome
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— SirQ XXVII on 12/14/2017 2:11:59 PM with a score of 38077
Such a great story, I saved my girls, a group of 59 people, and survived the outbreak
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Yomansam
on 12/14/2017 9:12:55 AM with a score of 24075
Very good. Highly detailed too. realistic as well but cant say for the ending where you survive through.
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— Stalker on 12/13/2017 9:42:51 PM with a score of 23375
Really enjoyable, and helped pass my night shift! :)
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Daemon_d6
on 12/13/2017 8:32:55 PM with a score of 35397
good game
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— Ralph on 12/8/2017 7:44:19 PM with a score of 7265
Goood
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roomankok
on 12/8/2017 6:15:10 PM with a score of 21425
Best Game ever!!!!!!!!!
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— Hunter T on 12/8/2017 9:49:40 AM with a score of 21685
Cool, I didn't die.
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freefrancisman
on 12/6/2017 11:56:33 PM with a score of 29997
Ooh my first interactive story. Pretty good for an intro to 'em I would think. Seems like I took the super easy route as I only killed 4 zombies and I could've even gone without killing those four. The tite "Dead Man Walking" really suied my chharacter XD rated it 6 'cause it was worth the 0 cents I put into it ;) Would buy again!
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— PBJ on 12/6/2017 2:24:54 AM with a score of 8665
yes
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— shooperwhooper on 12/4/2017 4:54:27 PM with a score of 7965
Best ever
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— Bob boberson on 12/1/2017 12:49:54 PM with a score of 7010
This was amazing and I can definitely see why this was highly rated, just great job all around.
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Kronos2000
on 12/1/2017 2:30:10 AM with a score of 34347
man this game is so detailed and with a sense of humor (a.k.a being eaten in a restroom stahl.
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— Dingus Dongus on 11/27/2017 2:46:37 PM with a score of 2010
I Loved it. good read. But there weren't enough tough choices. I feel as though if u had common sense you would survive the whole thing. But then again, maybe im just pro-zombie apocalypse and would never fall for such dumb things. So i guess the story was actually good, in all aspects
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— Zombie Ace 47 on 11/26/2017 1:34:49 AM with a score of 34767
Really intense is all I can say!
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Jacques
on 11/25/2017 5:09:50 PM with a score of 19290
Pretty good, immersive story. A few minor continuity flaws (most glaring: was told I'd lost my guns even though I'd never had any up to that point!). A handful of spelling/syntax errors, as if the story was dictated through some sort of voice recognition software, so there are a fair number of wrong words spelled correctly (example: 'tennis course' instead of the proper 'tennis courts'). A lot of pages with no options except to continue. Of course, lots of suspension of disbelief required, but all in all, a great zombie apocalypse story. It wasn't difficult to find the best ending from the context clues within the story. The characters do seem to actually want to survive! Also, the in story physics is pretty accurate as far as energetic events are concerned. A generally well thought out, highly satisfying & fun storygame, which I recommend, especially to anybody who enjoys the zombie apocalypse trope.
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— Spectacular void on 11/24/2017 6:15:18 PM with a score of 32857
wicked
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— badman on 11/21/2017 11:07:58 PM with a score of 36577
All encompassing zombie survival story, with a crapload of pages, choices, different paths, all very well written. Really no reason not to play it! =)
A big thank you to the writer.
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Alkador
on 11/21/2017 11:36:26 AM with a score of 27015
Very good adventure, I am going to try for a better score now.
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— Alex on 11/20/2017 10:42:51 PM with a score of 20085
Congratulations! You have not only survived the zombie apocalypse and saved your entire family, but made it through bite free! This is the best possible ending!
Here’s a rundown of how you did –
You Killed 11 Zombies
You Killed 0 Drooler Zombies
You Killed 0 Bloater Zombies
You Killed 1 Ghouls
You Killed 0 Banshees
You Killed 1 Hell Hounds
You Killed 0 Cannibal Gaunt Zombies
You Killed 1 People
You Saved 5 People (including yourself, unless you died)
You were eaten by 0 Zombies
Your Overall Score: 37807
(You played through 99 of 2,131 Pages and have proven to be a Rebuilder)
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TestingJest
on 11/20/2017 10:34:14 PM with a score of 37827
This is really well done. Graphic without getting to carried away with unnecessary details.
Great job!
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Esver
on 11/19/2017 12:49:03 PM with a score of 34327
That was great! I'm going back in...
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Tempus
on 11/18/2017 7:26:05 PM with a score of 17735
Loved it!
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— Alex on 11/18/2017 3:49:07 PM with a score of 19175
This was actually really fun and so much effort was put in to it. I wish there was an option to cut off my arm in the beginning when I was infected but I survived anyway. Thanks for the fun game!
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— K.W. on 11/18/2017 2:18:15 PM with a score of 23645
Fun game! Prob would've been better drunk ;^) We Did decide to kill Greg because of his blatant misogyny and idiocy... Also the rampant spelling errors were somewhat distracting.
Nonetheless, the amount of effort (and pages) were astounding! The writing was fun, despite the length, and we had a good time playing it (with Christmas carols in the background). Thanks for a fun night!!1!!!!!! :D
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amiiba
on 11/17/2017 9:00:33 PM with a score of 3960
great story just really sucks because I did not search the vet or pretty much anywhere and got wounds and fell in the sewer and died after saving laura
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— dragonnot on 11/16/2017 1:36:24 PM with a score of 3160
I slaughtered 4 zombies and that's all!
I didn't kill any other type of zombie.
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Battleclaz44
on 11/16/2017 9:45:20 AM with a score of 8265
Nice story
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pjotterke
on 11/16/2017 8:58:10 AM with a score of 36357
Worth every single second of reading, not only compelling but realistic. If you are a fan of choose your own adventure books, zombies, or anything involving survival period, this is something you’ll want to invest your time too. A hefty read, but very well done with many branching paths and options. Great work to the author, material like this deserves to be published.
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— James C. on 11/16/2017 12:14:32 AM with a score of 43217
fantastic!
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Foxiw
on 11/15/2017 8:23:58 PM with a score of 21035
Even though I only traversed through 191 pages (and attained the best possible ending, yipee), I feel like just have participated in an amazing experience. I haven't had this much pleasure in reading such a tale in quite a while. An amazing CYOA novel, by a well-versed author.
Better than a Reese's Cup®
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JonathantheEthereal
on 11/15/2017 2:43:49 PM with a score of 32247
I thought the game was great it was actually very fun. I enjoyed it quite a lot but I failed! ;-; other than that it was a good read and I’ll definitely try again! Keep up the goof work.
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— Eric on 11/14/2017 3:08:26 PM with a score of 1060
I loved this, I have played through it twice and it was incredible. I took note of all of my supplies and my current state. I love the hole thing if you have anymore creations of any type please email me!
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— Joshua A yerkes on 11/11/2017 7:29:33 PM with a score of 9710
pls man make a sequel
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jebin
on 11/11/2017 10:58:38 AM with a score of 28525
This is like the fifth time I play and the first time I got past the subway. I had to go back a couple of times to actually survive for good and I finally finished the game after a couple of hours.
This is by far the best story I've read (played?) and I would (will) totally do it again just to try a different ending.
I only encountered three types of zombies and I'm sure that I can do better!
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LeoCaesar
on 11/10/2017 10:05:23 PM with a score of 22135
Such a fun time, quality game. 10/10 IGN
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— hi on 11/9/2017 10:51:56 PM with a score of 29377
I thought it was good and everything, but I got bored half way reading through the pages. But besides that it was good, it really was.
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UndeadLover
on 11/9/2017 2:07:39 PM with a score of 1060
20125 points.... not gonna say how many times i died... (it was about 15 times) but considering I’m only 14 i must of made a lot of great decisions... definitely worth a try to play this story
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— Cam on 11/8/2017 2:41:10 PM with a score of 20135
Really enjoyable! Very well thought-out and full of suspense. I was anxious with every new page. Great job.
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— Mister Kent on 11/7/2017 2:23:53 PM with a score of 30187
I liked it a lot. It was very detailed and complex, I am working on a hunger games story, maybe you could give me some pointers?
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FryMan
on 11/7/2017 10:52:58 AM with a score of 560
I killed one person. An idiot woman who couldn't stop screaming. Saved everyone else I could though.
If I was the author, I'd make a spin-off about the Spaniard.
That being said, this is probably the most enjoyable text based adventure I've seen so far.
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— The Lord of Shadows on 11/7/2017 12:47:04 AM with a score of 22525
AMAZING, SIMPLY AMAZING!
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TheCorpor4tion
on 11/6/2017 7:42:44 PM with a score of 44077
Love it
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— Chris on 11/4/2017 4:23:54 PM with a score of 13810
awesome
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jebin
on 11/4/2017 10:03:30 AM with a score of 35397
THIS IS A AWESOME GAME DOOOOOOOOOODDDD.........IM A SUPER GAMER I LOVED IT BUT MORE GOREY THINGS
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— MADDY on 11/2/2017 12:47:44 PM with a score of 9910
Vary hard but super fun
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— Jase on 11/2/2017 11:35:39 AM with a score of 3610
I'm gonna play it again to see if I can survive the apocalypse by myself ;)
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ChristianHundley
on 11/2/2017 10:17:31 AM with a score of 25815
That was pretty cool,I uh died 40 times until I survived lmao,great time killer
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— Guy on 10/28/2017 1:39:43 AM with a score of 17175
Pure fun. I spent an entire day on one story and there are so many different tales and endings that could've happened. I'm definitely going come back and take different options next play through.
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kihdbravo
on 10/26/2017 7:51:33 PM with a score of 17025
This is amazing. i really want to play through EVERY SINGLE page, but i dont have time. I will definitly be playing this for a long time
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Zevrite
on 10/26/2017 5:26:59 PM with a score of 17925
Exciting and interesting but sooooooo long
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— John on 10/22/2017 4:56:55 AM with a score of 11310
On my second attempt (i got smushed after trying to escape an explosion) I managed to get the "best" ending. I will definitely be replaying this story to try and explore more of this world!!!!
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gam3s2freak
on 10/18/2017 6:54:34 PM with a score of 31357
It was a very engaging story and it kept me interested throughout the entire story. The only negative thing I would have to point out are the spelling errors, but there are so few that you don't notice.
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Yesdog
on 10/16/2017 11:00:44 PM with a score of 21615
Excellent story. It would fit right in almost any zombie apocalypse universe. The unique zombie types were great. I was too scared to try to challenge any, though. Maybe in another play through I will explore them further. The only thing I didn't really like was the two girls talking in one voice like a single entity, and the family in general didn't really seem like much other than basic "wife and kids" archetypes. But again, it's such a minor concern that I probably shouldn't even bother mentioning it.
Overall it was a fun read. I especially liked the way the story began, and the careful attention to detail in establishing the scenario.
This is definitely a story worth a second read through, and I suspect I will be doing another soon (hopefully to see what these other zombie types are all about, instead of running away from them every time like I did this play through).
Great work. I am glad I found a site with a story like this.
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— Kim on 10/15/2017 9:39:37 AM with a score of 36467
Loved it and wish i could have gotten farther. But still... SO LIT.
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— Caleb on 10/12/2017 8:00:54 PM with a score of 3610
It's really fun. I didn't think it would be so interesting. Now I just wish I could download it as a pdf or something. (There might already be a way and I'm just dumb)
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— SquirrelNut1 on 10/11/2017 9:00:27 AM with a score of 3310
Greatest story on this website.
I got the best ending!
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JTtheSlicer
on 10/8/2017 1:54:55 AM with a score of 19560
Anyone know where to find ghouls and cannibal gaunts?
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Apocalypsea
on 10/8/2017 1:06:21 AM with a score of 36467
The only real issue I had with this story is it's length. I can really appreciate the measures taken to add realism and inspire true logic; This throws me off a bit. Some CYOA stories really focus on throwing a curveball at you, causing you to consider things you yourself commonly wouldn't by way of logic, but this one actually punishes you for looking at it through that aspect.
For instance, Helping others is something we would feel instinctively, but the obvious risk to that makes it an inherently poor choice in most survival situations- especially those with an invariably fatal outcome.
For that reason, when I shed the idea of being a hero and instead focused on surviving, I was able to make it through.
Well done! Write more!
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— Tom on 10/7/2017 12:02:49 PM with a score of 19635
It was the best zombie game I played. I felt I had more Choice then in Tell Tale games. Thanks for making it
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— Ben on 10/6/2017 8:45:26 PM with a score of 20675
There are glitches and inconsistencies but it's a nice story.
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— V on 10/5/2017 8:21:31 PM with a score of 1860
Nicely made. This is the first story I actually completed and I think this whole thing turned out pretty good. The characters and their dialogue needs some adjustments like some of the other reviewers mentioned but other than that it was a very enjoyable experience.
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— A Guest on 10/5/2017 10:39:05 AM with a score of 23085
This was the best game of this type that I have ever played. The writing was perfect! The description was thorough and rich. I am going to play this game quite a few more times. Please make another!
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— Ryan on 10/4/2017 10:37:44 PM with a score of 19585
It was intense, with an awesome storyline. I feel bad about killing the kid on the boat though.
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Branmuffin13
on 10/3/2017 1:35:34 PM with a score of 19225
Best short story on this website
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colejarret
on 10/2/2017 11:39:29 PM with a score of 19915
Great game, nicely paced
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Igotforgot
on 9/29/2017 5:26:12 AM with a score of 29747
its good boi.
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loganmiller
on 9/28/2017 1:42:12 PM with a score of 21215
This is the best game I've ever played. You should make more zombie survival games
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— Xavier on 9/28/2017 11:51:34 AM with a score of 14715
It was nail-biting and fun.
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Karamix
on 9/26/2017 9:05:14 PM with a score of 32787
Cool. Very deep. But Hugh I just can't quite place it. Great work put into it though!
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adamstone333
on 9/23/2017 10:23:40 AM with a score of 3060
very good loved it
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ekkiller17
on 9/21/2017 11:32:35 AM with a score of 15045
it was so good plz in the name of god make more
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naan
on 9/21/2017 2:40:32 AM with a score of 19075
That was great
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mrawesomer4
on 9/19/2017 4:27:18 PM with a score of 31407
Wow. What a masterpiece BerkaZerka made. This is one of the best storygames that I have ever read in a very long time.
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samplam
on 9/17/2017 7:49:03 PM with a score of 3910
AWESOME STORY!
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— Sam on 9/13/2017 5:22:06 PM with a score of 3610
crazy
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— leonna on 9/12/2017 7:38:10 PM with a score of 1960
It's ok
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LeoCaesar
on 9/10/2017 9:01:53 PM with a score of 1860
Love the game, I found that the main character often thought exactly what I would in the same situation.
The absolute only problem I had, was that after getting to the school and deciding to help everyone live in the campsite, they totally forgot about the SUV full of supplies.
Great Game!
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— wetbug75 on 9/10/2017 12:48:05 AM with a score of 31397
I absolutely loved it! It was this story that convinced me to make an account. Truth be told, I was starting to think it wasn't possible to die, but the results proved me wrong. I really didn't know, and only found out when I reached the end. This story should be published, I'd tell everyone to buy it! I got survivalist, about 24455 points. Kept holding my breath all throughout the plot and didn't even realize each time. Simply great. I look forward to exploring the site, thank you creator!
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Griseo
on 9/9/2017 4:28:12 PM with a score of 24495
its addictive replaying trying to make the right combination of choices!
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defgoose2
on 9/8/2017 2:14:47 PM with a score of 19285
Great story! This is my first attempt at playing a choose your own adventure game and I thoroughly enjoyed it.
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Jordan_314
on 9/8/2017 12:54:33 AM with a score of 14120
This was an amazing story and the first ever Chose Your Own Path story i have ever done. It was amazing. Just everything was great about it.
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— Giordano Adrian on 9/7/2017 2:26:57 PM with a score of 22785
Very interesting. I found myself being drawn into the story surprisingly quickly and not being able to tear myself away. The author has done a terrific job.
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— Jeanette on 9/6/2017 11:42:35 PM with a score of 2560
this is such a great game, i got best ending with no bites, saving all of my family, saving 11 additional people and having only one encounter with a special zombie.(it was from a distance though), on my first try! i totally recommend this for anyone over the age of 12.
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— Savanna on 9/6/2017 10:52:43 PM with a score of 35187
cool
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denis17
on 9/3/2017 10:24:17 PM with a score of 20415
Its was much more fun then homework
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— Jay on 8/30/2017 1:54:08 PM with a score of 5660
Not gonna lie this was a pain in the ass lol, yet never the less a fun and entertaining experience this was better than most of 'choose your adventure books' that you can buy in stores, and to the person who made this thank you so much for the fun and amazing experience you have given to me. This was a blast!
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— Nicholas D'Arcangelo on 8/30/2017 4:05:33 AM with a score of 37517
I GOT five zombies kill XD I like Jacob and stuff
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Slug
on 8/29/2017 10:09:33 PM with a score of 30427
This was an amazing story; far better than any cyoa I've ever seen!
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Saint_999
on 8/29/2017 11:02:05 AM with a score of 5110
An extremely detailed, engaging story that kept me wanting to play more! Expect to see me playing this multiple times, just to check out other chapters. Amazing job!
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AbbyMcLaren
on 8/26/2017 12:23:52 AM with a score of 35507
Going to play through again. Thanks for your time creating this.
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— Kc on 8/25/2017 5:37:11 AM with a score of 22215
Awesome, I feel like the author of this should publish this and make it a book
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carpenter74
on 8/23/2017 11:33:21 AM with a score of 22815
awesome
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— jack on 8/19/2017 3:32:15 AM with a score of 7665
I have only one real criticism (beyond the odd typo which is totally forgivable), Greg's reaction to the doctor at the police precinct. While I was sat here happily collaborating with the man (Greg was bitten but not dead, something worth investigating) the text was *telling* me how much of an irredeemable monster the doctor was, in Greg's own thoughts no less. Not saying he was right or "good", but that there's an argument to be made for the potential necessity of that work and I felt very disconnected from Greg despite being right there with him for pretty much the whole rest of the ride.
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— Gavin Branson on 8/17/2017 2:24:40 AM with a score of 22975
Good game 31400, a little easy, and didnt last long enough i expected it too be much longer.
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— Strine on 8/15/2017 6:51:03 PM with a score of 32967
thouroughly enjoyed
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lungsofsteel
on 8/11/2017 5:55:48 AM with a score of 22065
English is not my mother tongue but I think I managed to understand every passage and I even learnt a lot of new words. I think the writer did a great job. I found the story very inspiring and compelling and I really appreciated the great effort he put in making everything coherent. I just wonder if he'll ever be able to publish it as a paper book, it would be totally worth. Sorry for my English. Congratulations and greetings from Italy.
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Rondell
on 8/11/2017 5:40:52 AM with a score of 25085
10,100 points :)
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— Person on 8/7/2017 6:20:33 AM with a score of 10120
GREAT story. I've played it 4 or 5 times just to get to different endings. The story is exciting, thrilling, and really keeps your attention. I feel like I really survived the zombie apocalypse.
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nm13757
on 8/7/2017 3:57:39 AM with a score of 31107
Fantastic, it looks like you've put a lot of work into it. Looking forward to replay it and get a different ending, i wonder how many branches this story can take... definitely earned it's #1 position.
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MrDuckFace
on 8/5/2017 1:09:05 PM with a score of 29875
I got rebuilder, and for all the zombie apocalypse stories I've heard, watched, played, and read, this has to be one of the best.
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— Andrew on 8/2/2017 2:34:30 AM with a score of 31877
Well written, good grammar, good story line, realistic items and scenarios with plausible choices to make. Well worth playing.
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— endofdays on 8/1/2017 12:45:47 PM with a score of 17615
A pinch story heavy rather than choice, but it was worth a play on a boring day.
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— Roan on 7/29/2017 12:55:13 PM with a score of 8715
Incredibly well-written, immersive, and expansive. It is evident that a substantial effort went in to putting this story together. Well done!
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hexgurl
on 7/28/2017 1:21:45 AM with a score of 19020
I loved it and thought it was lovely there were some errors but that's fine it was a lot of writing. ??
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— Nate on 7/27/2017 10:54:02 AM with a score of 23095
Absolutely incredible, 2,131 different pages and many different paths make for a series of "what ifs" in your mind. You always wonder whether the choice you're making is the right one
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— Dakota jackson on 7/26/2017 3:20:20 PM with a score of 14260
Great story. Had fun saving my family and making it through.
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ahill57
on 7/26/2017 2:12:18 PM with a score of 26675
Really loved it
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— Alex on 7/26/2017 10:21:48 AM with a score of 9310
Fun story kept me amused for hours!
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jjgg1232
on 7/25/2017 12:17:16 PM with a score of 29017
So much fun
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— shariq on 7/23/2017 8:43:42 AM with a score of 18085
Enjoyed trying to survive
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wolfeye
on 7/22/2017 12:21:07 PM with a score of 27195
This was incredible even if I died early, it was really really good!!
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— Ssighs on 7/20/2017 9:42:35 AM with a score of 8160
Very fun! There is certainly a trial-and-error aspect, as some choices lead to unexpected deaths, but the detail is good, the story is good, and the main character/his motivation is compelling. Lots of RPG elements, lots of choices.
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— Slayer on 7/19/2017 3:47:19 PM with a score of 25885
A little sexist but overall a nice story and great choices! My friend and I had a lot of fun playing it.
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malind
on 7/13/2017 11:19:53 PM with a score of 22725
My second favorite so far! Very good.
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— O.J. on 7/13/2017 2:26:15 AM with a score of 24845
Great Story and great game!
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— Ayeshka on 7/11/2017 2:09:03 AM with a score of 2060
It was really good but we never found out what city it was in.
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— William on 7/9/2017 11:01:25 PM with a score of 20875
Very descriptive and really damn good. An amazing adventure from start to finish.
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MrPikmin16
on 7/9/2017 4:00:42 PM with a score of 42347
I died rather quick taking the smartest routes.
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Robin8
on 7/9/2017 3:37:11 AM with a score of 1110
Great game but add a McDonalds then will be perfect key?
And can you make each scene a little more to the point it takes a long time to read and i don't really need to know what the zombies are dressed like kek?!?
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— Ronald McDonald on 7/6/2017 2:18:24 PM with a score of 9560
Pretty good
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— Matthew on 7/4/2017 1:17:04 PM with a score of 4460
This was, if not the best, one of the best experiences I've had with any story-based games whatsoever. I usually never really read often unless it's important to me, but this story, with its extraordinary details and almost lively characters, really drived me to go to the end.
It's a story you can't miss out on, and the details at the end just round it all together.
(Btw, I loved what the author did with the Protease Inhibitors, understandable how that one character survived long enough, very hilarious.)
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— Ryan on 7/1/2017 5:05:45 AM with a score of 26285
Way better than Walking Dead! It's my first time reading a story like this, and it went well. I want to go back and see how to encounter all the types of zombies.
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— Greg on 7/1/2017 2:09:45 AM with a score of 19925
great!
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Oakhawthorn663
on 6/30/2017 7:14:09 PM with a score of 1460
Amazing game! Hooked from the first page. If you like tailor made games or anything with zombie apocalypses then this is for you! 5/5! Fire!
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— JohnnyDidWhat on 6/30/2017 3:19:34 PM with a score of 25135
ha try to get a lower score then that
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— lowest score on 6/30/2017 3:02:12 AM with a score of 1910
you should create a necromancer type zombie that revives corpses
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— necromancer on 6/30/2017 2:53:37 AM with a score of 24710
Great game story
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— Fajar on 6/27/2017 4:55:23 AM with a score of 2760
if you save the kid in the boat house then when you go to your house but drive past your house then go behind the houses but you dont give the boy any water it will kill him but let your wife live when you kiss her
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— bug report on 6/26/2017 1:32:01 AM with a score of 21660
i loved your story game it was the best ever and long enough to acualy be worth wile to read
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— best story ever on 6/25/2017 8:07:48 PM with a score of 27365
it was good im definetly gonna play again, hopefully i dont die in the first 50 pages again...
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— zach on 6/25/2017 5:29:34 PM with a score of 2860
it was amasing i loved the many different branches to the story there was.
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— no on 6/24/2017 7:24:19 PM with a score of 20535
This is really good, thanks for making this!
Saving the school was fun!
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— Hakuryu on 6/24/2017 4:58:06 AM with a score of 37197
This story was very well written. It had me intrigued and wanting for more. I was playing from 7 pm and couldn't stop playing until i was done (2 : 25 am).
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un11vega
on 6/22/2017 2:25:45 AM with a score of 36027
way to long
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RonR
on 6/21/2017 12:37:17 PM with a score of 2510
This game is amazing, and is down right revaluationary in the sheer amount of branching paths it provides, however, if there is one thing that would have made this even better, it would be more determinent characters that could be part of a group you could create prior the end-game. Other than that though it's even better than telltales walking dead!
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— aspiringwriter20xx on 6/21/2017 11:01:08 AM with a score of 35887
it gives you the thought you were that person and you feel so scared
I RECOMMEND IT
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— Mary Anne on 6/20/2017 11:13:53 PM with a score of 1210
I loved this game and i felt like your choices definitely mattered. just play smart and you will do well!!!
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— Soulfuture on 6/20/2017 5:28:51 PM with a score of 23075
Hey,I just got the second best ending. I can't believe how much time was put into this. It is amazing, I'm glad I found this website because of this. Anyway, good job
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— Henry on 6/19/2017 2:23:41 PM with a score of 27285
Was pretty good died once lol i got crushed by railroad ties
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— Michael on 6/19/2017 2:28:58 AM with a score of 20815
At certain points i did have to go back and retrace my steps especially when you die from the brain infection when you see your wife. The plot was amazing when i did figure out how to do it. glad too see his whole family didn't die!
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— Andrew on 6/18/2017 5:54:23 PM with a score of 13785
Great story, glad it has so many endings and your choices matter.
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Lokster
on 6/16/2017 9:54:23 PM with a score of 40247
Awesome
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maxninepower
on 6/16/2017 2:28:38 PM with a score of 24825
Amazing how much effort, detail, and thinking was put into this game! Keep up the good work Berka.
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Troppy
on 6/16/2017 1:25:23 PM with a score of 38407
Action packed and filled with tough choices, my kind of adventure game.
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— Edward Benson on 6/15/2017 6:25:04 PM with a score of 18580
Lots of time invested into this story, very good.
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BOII
on 6/15/2017 5:15:16 PM with a score of 22425
It's nice I got the best ending I'm gonna go get all pages seen but good plot and story
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Gab122006
on 6/11/2017 1:14:37 AM with a score of 25195
Summer break just hit and I live in Florida. For the past few weeks I've dealt with boredom from all of the rain. Just happened to be watching youtube and found out that their are books like these you can make your own fate. Definitely a way to get around boredom I'm sure if I wasn't really bored I would have made a better rating than a 5. Great work and amazing writing.
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— zombigyrl on 6/7/2017 10:28:23 PM with a score of 20075
Awesome
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— Bob on 6/7/2017 4:08:53 PM with a score of 22715
I have just finished playing through one of many story lines and am completely blown away by the amount of detail and work was put into this story. I wont spoil anything for anyone who wishes to play through the story but I have been left completely speech less. I managed to get the second best ending of the game, making a simple mistake early on, and am now left feeling happy that I was able to apply my survivor knowledge to keep myself going yet am still left feeling down and upset due to the actions required to get to where I am. I'm not proud of all my actions but that is the thrill of the game. The test of your humanity the test of your knowledge and luck all wrapped up in a truly scary and realistic story. I personally am in love with this story and plan to return and play through some of the other story line in the future.
I did find however that many of the story point where very cliché and I was able to predict the main bulk of the story very early on which possible lead me to pick the better options. I was also very annoyed at certain points where an important event would happen and I had no power of the situation. This didn't happen often but when a bad event happens and you cant stop it, it almost takes away the element of choice which is vital to these stories. This didn't make to much of a negative impact on the story but I would consider this factor when going into the story. At times it could be considered realistic, to not have full control, but in the sense I'm talking about (SPOLIER) the boy, in feel like it should have been a choice to give him a drink rather than a forced action. Like I say, not much of a problem but its something worth noting.
All in all I am in love with this story and have already recommended it to all my friends who like these types of drama and action. I highly recommend this and hope that all new players are able to truly feel the emotion and power of this apocalypse like I have.
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— Jonathan Green on 6/6/2017 4:58:19 AM with a score of 21125
I think that this game is very interesting and I think that you should make a more better and fun version.
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— yah-yah on 6/5/2017 8:40:02 PM with a score of 4210
Well written and thought out. I like the fact all possibilities were covered. Enjoyed playing.
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— Gary on 6/5/2017 5:37:06 PM with a score of 22945
being a zombie fan I loved reading this. amazing story!
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— daniel on 6/5/2017 4:09:19 PM with a score of 17975
this is GREAT!!!!
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— margret on 6/3/2017 3:10:44 PM with a score of 1960
Everoyne who did not get over 20000 is so bad at this game my record is 34k
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— Jacob on 6/2/2017 2:39:24 PM with a score of 24615
The game was great only thing that I did not like was the You have to kill your wife, Abby ends up a Zombie, And billy Gets killed by that Zombie Dog.
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— Saito897 on 6/2/2017 11:35:23 AM with a score of 21285
easy peasy
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jhayz410
on 6/2/2017 3:43:48 AM with a score of 25085
awsome sauce
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— zeke on 6/1/2017 12:51:10 PM with a score of 5810
hi
this is a fun game
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— shavonn on 5/31/2017 5:56:52 PM with a score of 2910
My score was 22855!
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— Ella Tilman on 5/29/2017 12:24:12 PM with a score of 22875
amazing
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classychaos
on 5/27/2017 11:05:32 AM with a score of 37657
i would like to sat that your game is very amazing and fun and i really like it because you can choose your own adventure and be creative.
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— mad hatter on 5/26/2017 4:48:58 PM with a score of 10620
cool
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— riley on 5/26/2017 1:38:51 PM with a score of 1910
It took me 3 tries to get the best ending, had fun.
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BloodSand
on 5/25/2017 8:57:31 PM with a score of 32797
I think what would make it better is if it didn't have any profanity.
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— Adam on 5/25/2017 10:12:55 AM with a score of 560
Amazing, the details are a 10/10, even though I know it is fake I could still feel my character's anxiety and how terrified he was, amazing game over all!!!
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GamertheNoobzYT
on 5/24/2017 5:11:08 PM with a score of 7610
I sucked and I died because of physics, but imma try again cause its worth it totes
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LeinadWhy
on 5/24/2017 12:13:29 AM with a score of 12560
i got 19805 points!
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— LYLEO121 on 5/23/2017 9:47:43 PM with a score of 19835
this is the best i love it i would rate it 110%
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— bob on 5/22/2017 4:47:45 PM with a score of 2260
When you are in the little room between the two tunnels and you have the choice to choose between the axe and the crowbar.
The axe option makes it seem like you can go up the stairs with the axe and then come back down and swap with the crowbar for use later. That ended up with me taking a very different approach to the whole thing.
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— JJ on 5/20/2017 10:19:29 AM with a score of 6865
First story I read on this site. Soon to read many more I did not see any loopholes in the plot, no grammar mistakes, or logic breaks.
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Likebeingawesome
on 5/18/2017 8:23:15 AM with a score of 41347
This Choose Your Story is purely magic. I believe that with little editing and formatting, that this story could be published and become a bestseller. Thank you for creating such fantastic stories (there are multiple possibilities) with such realism and with the existing multitude of possibilities
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— Yohanes Goodell on 5/18/2017 8:10:47 AM with a score of 22565
Other than a few misspells here and there, it's a really good story.
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ThatBlondGuy
on 5/17/2017 1:17:31 PM with a score of 25735
yoo good game! Was a lot of fun! Can't believe I got the best ending on my first try though! Wow!
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— a on 5/17/2017 11:33:28 AM with a score of 33497
I really enjoyed this text adventure! I would recommend making another one, great work! :)
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KiNGRoOvY
on 5/17/2017 5:18:47 AM with a score of 25865
It was really amazing to read and play! The story itself was very smooth. The grammar was perfect, and the way you can really paint the scene is something not all writers can do, and for that I congratulate you.
The best thing I found about this is that there are a LOT of choices, each branching off into a different story. I can't seem to find any other path besides the subway > police > home path though, shame. (I did branch it off to police > hospital > church, but that hardly matters)
One advice I highly recommend is to avoid situations where you can get bitten. AVOID. Without a bite you'll have a much better time with everyone, possibly including the police section of the game.
Overall this is a great game. It can be replayed a whole lot of times. The story, though long, is easily remembered so you don't have to drag your eyes across the screen reading old details.
I can see why this has been so highly favored among all the storygames on this sire ^_^
Found Cameos:
> Betaband
> CovElite
> EndMaster
> simplesabley
> Solxd7
> ThisisBo
> uglilick
You Killed 29 Zombies
You Killed 1 Drooler Zombies
You Killed 1 Ghouls
You Killed 1 Hell Hounds
You Killed 1 Cannibal Gaunt Zombies
You Killed 5 People (no idea who except for the teen)
You Saved 60 People
Your Overall Score: 28905
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ShadowStriker113
on 5/14/2017 7:30:56 PM with a score of 28925
This story kept me guessing throughout the whole thing and I was genially hard pressed with everything I did. It gives you a lot of ways to deal with the problems that are thrown at you. It was hard to tell when the game was railroading me to a certain story arch which I loved and was only able to see it once I went through and tried different routes. My heart strings were pulled in this story as well and almost made me cry at some of the things I had to do. The realism in the story is unmatched in descriptions, actions, and scenarios. I love this work of art and I don't know if this site is still active to a lot of people or not, but it sadness me to see this awesome story wither. Or maybe the sites doing well and maybe I should do more reading, I don't know. What I do know is, every, single, page is worth the read and will without a doubt spark a love for these kinds of story's.
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thebreezename
on 5/13/2017 8:51:07 PM with a score of 20325
fuck yeah, best ending on first tryyyyy
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mattpahl
on 5/12/2017 10:10:46 PM with a score of 35117
I enjoyed this for sure. It was the first I tried on this site and it has made me wanting more. The story was well thought out, and there are so many alternatives that you could play this through many times. I also liked how logic was the survivalists friend, but that there were more daredevil like actions available.
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— Hendri on 5/12/2017 8:02:17 PM with a score of 33627
truly and holy entertaining
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DaNiMaLs
on 5/12/2017 2:34:10 PM with a score of 37907
This is and still will be an amazing game. It's well thought out but I wish that you had a way to save more people.
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21wpaskins8
on 5/12/2017 11:24:06 AM with a score of 20175
This was the best choose your own story I've played in a while. I always find myself coming back to it to try and get all possible endings.
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— Alheadburst on 5/12/2017 10:23:58 AM with a score of 19825
Was a very good story. felt like I was actually in the mode of surviving, But I know nothing apparently. LOL
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Aqclm
on 5/11/2017 3:29:09 PM with a score of 1960
the pages before each choice aren't too long and your choices realy matter.
best story i've read so far
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pooria
on 5/6/2017 8:29:42 PM with a score of 39017
This is my favorite game on here. I died several times, but it was worth it!
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— Nina K. on 5/6/2017 4:08:46 PM with a score of 24775
Very thought provoking and a thrill. Killed hours of time. Would highly recommend!
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l_crc
on 5/6/2017 2:32:59 PM with a score of 21595
Very fun and immersive! I love how many choices you can make and the great, detailed descriptions! Best I've ever played!
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gliwidilt
on 5/4/2017 6:23:08 AM with a score of 39477
AWESOME
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Marz14n
on 5/4/2017 6:17:35 AM with a score of 19130
wow. Just wow. This was awesome
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mnkjango
on 5/3/2017 2:48:23 PM with a score of 20265
I played through once and was always on the very edge of my seat! Can't wait for an another story (if there will be another)! I recommend a nuclear survival story for another story if you do another.
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— Tra on 5/3/2017 2:46:26 PM with a score of 23175
Wow I had not expected that eachchoice had so muchimpact I loved this story it's so thought through
10/10 ;>
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Volx
on 5/2/2017 6:04:29 PM with a score of 25015
Awesome Gsme.
Tips:
1) Be sure to load games at each page u feel is a checkpoint
2) Try out the safest and practical ways first,then go for some fun with other ways
3) BE SURE to have FUN!! :)
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LegendaryLeon
on 4/30/2017 1:01:37 PM with a score of 38127
This storygame was very well thought out, entertaining, without dead ends, and game real choices. Bravo!
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— Jimmy A on 4/28/2017 7:51:23 PM with a score of 21715
This was a well done and engaging story! Even failure was fun!
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— Daniel Carr on 4/28/2017 1:08:26 PM with a score of 31897
You shouldn't include bad words and make the story shorter.
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— JASON ZHOU on 4/27/2017 8:59:10 PM with a score of 4410
I thought that this story was really good and was very interesting.
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xUnknownx
on 4/26/2017 3:21:45 PM with a score of 20325
Congratulations! You have not only survived the zombie apocalypse and saved your entire family, but made it through bite free! If you hadn’t lost most of your own humanity just to survive, this would have been the best possible ending. Of course there must still be some shred of humanity left in you; given that you were instrumental in saving all those from the school complex. Perhaps in some Grand Balance, that will begin to tip the scales towards redemption…
Here’s a rundown of how you did –
You Killed 3 Zombies
You Killed 0 Drooler Zombies
You Killed 0 Bloater Zombies
You Killed 0 Ghouls
You Killed 0 Banshees
You Killed 0 Hell Hounds
You Killed 0 Cannibal Gaunt Zombies
You Killed 3 People
You Saved 60 People (including yourself, unless you died)
You were eaten by 0 Zombies
Your Overall Score: 26755
(You played through 115 of 2,131 Pages and have proven to be a Survivalist)
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gapaot
on 4/25/2017 5:53:13 PM with a score of 26795
it was a good game
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— george on 4/25/2017 8:36:09 AM with a score of 13580
I got the best ending this time! Great game, really enjoyed the experience. You really put a lot of time in this and that's what makes it great! Thanks for making this!
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GCMStory
on 4/22/2017 10:27:35 PM with a score of 30687
Awesome Game, Truly epic story. Nice Job!
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GCMStory
on 4/22/2017 7:40:01 PM with a score of 17510
Good ?? book like details in imaginary
Totally get this story whoever made this is a better writer than Harry Potter
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— Guiggvytg on 4/22/2017 10:27:48 AM with a score of 15630
This game was dope. I recommend smoking a fuckton of weed and playing this.
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— Cruz on 4/21/2017 10:03:06 AM with a score of 21695
Good game!
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TheKyliePerson
on 4/20/2017 4:45:35 PM with a score of 21135
brilliant, simply brilliant
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— noobslayer on 4/20/2017 12:24:27 PM with a score of 9560
Now that was cool... I did kill anyone that got in the way if m e saving my family, but I stayed away from zombies, trusted nothing, and thrived. The hardest part was the code to the door... hint... try the two codes right before the bottom one... and that is the hardest part of the game that I just gave you the pass to. Use the back arrow if you die! This game was awesome!
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GamerX
on 4/20/2017 9:15:11 AM with a score of 15325
I finished it all and lived. I am proud to say I saved 58 people. The first I'm I did it I was a zombi happy meal. XD
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— Not dead guy on 4/19/2017 7:44:57 PM with a score of 19315
Thrilling!
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— Andre on 4/19/2017 5:19:45 PM with a score of 20265
Long as hell nigga but dope as fuck nigger
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Nyctophilia
on 4/19/2017 12:16:22 PM with a score of 3810
This is really cool :) your a great writer and I really injoyed playing. Of course I died before I even got out of th station but anyway I m gonna try again :P you should b proud of this. It would of taken ages
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— Dead guy on 4/19/2017 1:05:07 AM with a score of 1310
I enjoyed it, though there are a few grammatical issues and odd word replacements most likely caused by spell checker swaps. I was rather impressed with the excellent choices that the story provided and found them to fit well into the realistic feel of the story.
I believe that with a fair bit of polish this story could really be an excellent publishable piece. I would love to offer my assistance as a published author to the creator of this story to provide free copy editing services.
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Balthizar
on 4/17/2017 10:59:33 PM with a score of 13460
10/10, would suffocate in a fire while being chased by zombies again.
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FroggerMeSilly
on 4/17/2017 11:27:26 AM with a score of 33577
This is such a well-written story where your decisions ACTUALLY make an impact on the narrative! I have yet to play all the way through (just died at page 97 of over 2100!) and am excited to see the rest!
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— Jon Lee on 4/14/2017 1:49:24 PM with a score of 13960
Very nice adventure! Killed monsters with my trusty crowbar/10, would get eaten again.
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Ersatz
on 4/12/2017 12:02:51 AM with a score of 34767
This the first story i read and even though i died pretty early i was really engrossed and i will definitely be trying it again
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heimerdinger
on 4/9/2017 6:10:15 PM with a score of 1610
Can anyone tell me the different ending please? I have played through a few times, and want to know how to kill more zombies and the hellhound.
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Bunnymuffin13
on 4/8/2017 6:46:19 PM with a score of 15865
Fantastic
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Artificer
on 4/6/2017 11:19:50 PM with a score of 33967
Just completed the game again. It's great!
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— ayyy on 4/6/2017 12:49:22 AM with a score of 33017
if you make any more awesome games tell me
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— carlos on 4/4/2017 12:50:04 PM with a score of 26385
first play, got 18005 point. not a best ending but at least it is better than most of it.
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rijalmuzikers
on 4/1/2017 7:42:11 PM with a score of 18015
I may have died in minutes, but I still think it was a pretty kickass performance for an accountant. From what little of the story, I survived through, the writing seemed crisp and unobtrusive, the setting descriptions were excellent, and you did a fantastic job of creating choices that a real person would make in a crisis, equally logical consequences, and a masterful tone of panic. Kudos!
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— Killed By 213 Zombies on 4/1/2017 3:43:18 PM with a score of 1910
Yeah, great
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— fadil on 4/1/2017 11:54:00 AM with a score of 4460
A great game about a zombie apocalypse if you don't want to buy Zombie Exodus.
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kazares2651
on 4/1/2017 8:58:36 AM with a score of 20985
the best zombie survival adventure I have experienced in a while. I recommend it 11/10 IGN™
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— CAAAAARL on 4/1/2017 1:49:24 AM with a score of 17125
Wow absolutely amazing, just in shock about how someone can come up with a story this well written and thought out. I can't imagine the time it took to make this, but it was definitely put to good use. Keep up the magnificent work and make plenty more breath taking stories!!
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Burnty52
on 3/30/2017 10:20:05 AM with a score of 23495
I'm scared shitless. Please help lol
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— Me on 3/29/2017 5:17:20 PM with a score of 10670
I finished with the 2nd best ending surviving with Laura, Jessica, Kate, and Jacob, surprising, seeing as I wasn't following any strict rules and was just going with what seemed to be the safest options while still progressing.
Generally, don't make much noise and think and check out the area before you choose what to do.
The descriptions are good enough to let you imagine your surroundings yet keep it simple enough that you don't get bored reading them. One of the best stories I have played in terms of variety, realism, and decisions!
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Koebowsie
on 3/28/2017 2:34:23 PM with a score of 21745
Wow- i played it before but it was boring and i got a terrible score (even though i survived)
but i tried again and it was 3-4 times as long and 5 times as enjoyable which is why i rated 8/8 my second time round. I did die with hundreds of zombies on the kill count but I had to backtrack that sadly :(.
I got lots of specials and this is my scorecardn for my second attempt:
Here’s a rundown of how you did –
You Killed 37 Zombies
You Killed 1 Drooler Zombies
You Killed 0 Bloater Zombies
You Killed 0 Ghouls
You Killed 0 Banshees
You Killed 1 Hell Hounds
You Killed 0 Cannibal Gaunt Zombies
You Killed 3 People
You Saved 9 People (including yourself, unless you died)
You were eaten by 0 Zombies
Your Overall Score: 21355
(You played through 125 of 2,131 Pages and have proven to be a Survivalist)
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EpicFirebird
on 3/27/2017 4:50:39 PM with a score of 21375
REALLY long but worth the time
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Aegle
on 3/27/2017 4:19:17 AM with a score of 35867
Really interesting story and I can see that a LOT of time and thought went into this. Very cool
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— MC on 3/26/2017 9:47:44 PM with a score of 20825
Here’s a rundown of how you did –
You Killed 4 Zombies
You Killed 0 Drooler Zombies
You Killed 0 Bloater Zombies
You Killed 0 Ghouls
You Killed 0 Banshees
You Killed 0 Hell Hounds
You Killed 0 Cannibal Gaunt Zombies
You Killed 2 People
You Saved 1 People (including yourself, unless you died)
You were eaten by 0 Zombies
Your Overall Score: 7605
(You played through 52 of 2,131 Pages and have proven to be a Dead Man Walking)
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EpicFirebird
on 3/26/2017 5:23:47 PM with a score of 7615
Great choices
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Harley10
on 3/25/2017 9:34:28 PM with a score of 29647
I quite enjoyed the abundance of decisions. It made me consider my options as if I were Greg. I also liked that it was challenging, but rational. You were only told so much and left to your own devices. In this way you had a direction to go, but no one to hold your hand.
You could likely improve upon Greg's reactions and personal thoughts. While they were generally clear and concise he came off as to quick to adapt. Within the first few pages I was already bashing someone's skull in with a cement block.
It managed to keep my attention for the whole day, even when fatigue and boredom set in. While I didn't get the best end I'll likely give it another play. For my first CYS it's was great.
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Astros
on 3/25/2017 7:48:33 PM with a score of 23795
i loved this adventure book and have done only 150 pages. it's so nerve racking and i love doing the combinations. but one part i didn't like is when i started shooting all the zombies and i ran out of ammo when i had traded for hundreds of rounds for each gun. lol. i will continue to finish the book.
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— luke mccoy on 3/24/2017 12:09:12 AM with a score of 36417
Very interested to go through the other story arcs after saving my family and a school full of kids. Still managed to moe down over 100 zed in the process though.
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— Jakob on 3/22/2017 1:51:15 AM with a score of 32087
Died so many times
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— George Smith on 3/21/2017 11:44:01 AM with a score of 22715
I got the very best possible ending which was a lot more satisfying then i expected
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— Seth Cormack on 3/20/2017 5:13:38 PM with a score of 32927
Very good story
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Marek
on 3/20/2017 5:39:48 AM with a score of 33647
I HATE THIS GAME
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— Rhianna Edney on 3/20/2017 12:04:27 AM with a score of 960
I really enjoyed the writing, and how many possible outcomes there where. Very well done!
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— Callie on 3/19/2017 11:18:29 PM with a score of 21385
Wow, this game is amazing. There's tons of options. I went back and decided to take some of the worse options, and I find it great how if you find Jacob in the elevator shaft, then you only meet a tomcat in the boat club. Though, I did find a bug. Shouldn't the sheriff shoot you if you have an obvious bite (like on your neck?).
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— Guesty on 3/19/2017 2:19:44 PM with a score of 21265
This is just a very good game. The length of the story as well as it's quality are HUGE. After 30+ trial-and-error, it's finally done.
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Billy_Glen
on 3/17/2017 5:57:25 AM with a score of 37847
Very good I killed the boy going against every moral in me because he could have gotten me killed. I stayed stealthy and didn't see anything other than zombies and the crazy lady. Amazing story simple clean ending nothing spectacular but a good way to show its over and you have won.
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— Lucas on 3/16/2017 11:05:17 PM with a score of 19165
I am in complete awe of this game.
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— Rami Levin on 3/16/2017 6:31:49 PM with a score of 8610
This was amazing. I read it over and over choosing different paths to see the results of everything. Very well written, enough to give you some real suspense. Amazing.
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Jtilija
on 3/16/2017 4:46:18 PM with a score of 19765
It's awesome , except I wish that you could get your hands on more weapons.
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— Lj on 3/16/2017 8:36:22 AM with a score of 1810
I found it very interesting, however, every time I did the pushpin lock thing from the bathroom it didn't work, I tried every single combination but nothing seemed to work, so I backtracked and got eaten by zombies. Otherwise I would say the story was well told, I replayed about 9 times, it was good.
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— Aj on 3/15/2017 10:56:49 PM with a score of 2810
Amazing
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— XDawg on 3/15/2017 1:13:35 PM with a score of 16265
I loved it I survived it and the Apocalypse is now over and I'm living with me wife and 2 daughters
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— Joshua on 3/14/2017 8:02:12 PM with a score of 30047
Best adventure book/story
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— Poop on 3/14/2017 6:32:48 PM with a score of 1510
Great story!
I don't know about the replay value (as I don't like thinking about parallel universes where some peeps would be alive and some others dead), and I got the "best oossible ending" so I guess I am fine with this :') Thank you for this read!
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— Nguyen Minh Duc on 3/14/2017 10:10:15 AM with a score of 32647
I was not expecting to be hooked so intensely from the start, but through the Authors highly descriptive and detailed writing, it's almost impossible to stop reading, simply after the first paragraph.
The amount of visual images you're able to create in your mind through the stories detailed writing, makes it seem as if you're watching a movie in your mind; However, the choices you make throughout the story determine where you go, where you end up, whether you live or die, reunite with your family or never know what truly happens to them.
I made it out of the subway unharmed, heading into the direction of my home. I made it to my house, reuniting with my wife and headed to the girls school. There I reunited my whole family and convinced 59 lives to join me in heading to the mountains to create a community, in which we thrived until the end of the apocolypse. I only had to kill 7 zombies and one human. Two humans, if you count the poor teenager I failed to protect and had to put out of his misery. Mind you, all of this within only 73 pages out of the possible 2100 plus pages.
Good story! Great job!
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JonathonRoyse
on 3/12/2017 5:35:50 PM with a score of 25017
I spent hours trying to get the best possible ending and I have to say that every second was worth it. So well written and interesting to play through again and again. 10/10.
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ljbeuk
on 3/12/2017 3:28:15 PM with a score of 34257
This zombie survival game made me learn alot! I would rate it 11 out of 10!
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LanzXMonzon
on 3/11/2017 2:28:09 AM with a score of 31477
An immersive experience. 3 hours of my life gone in an instant.
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KemCho
on 3/11/2017 12:32:34 AM with a score of 28237
Fun little CYOA. Only messed up a few times. Not really sure what the mysterious black creature in the dreams was though. Not sure it was it explained. I managed to get the best ending possible.
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— L on 3/10/2017 10:10:43 PM with a score of 38687
wow! so much work and detail! great... thing! i really dont know if i should call it a game a story or what but it was great. really liked it :)
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— james on 3/9/2017 8:31:06 PM with a score of 36007
Always my dream to become a zombie happy meal. Well done zombies
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— Yeeter on 3/6/2017 9:34:05 PM with a score of 1710
Really intriguing and enjoyed the run. Only had to back track twice in my run and got the best ending.
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— Joe on 3/6/2017 5:26:01 PM with a score of 35417
What a game. Didn't last long but still....
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Speedotank
on 3/6/2017 3:24:24 PM with a score of 6760
I got the rank of "Zombie Happy Meal"! YAY!
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— Yay on 3/6/2017 3:38:20 AM with a score of 810
Damn, I can't find Sindri or Endmaster...
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— Anonymous on 3/6/2017 2:43:40 AM with a score of 34417
it wuz real good. I know that I have very picky book habits, but this was one of the best books I ever read.
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— ananymous on 3/5/2017 3:31:11 PM with a score of 22015
A few hours pleasant distraction. Thanks!
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— Oliver on 3/5/2017 9:30:28 AM with a score of 19425
Just wanted to say that I really enjoyed your story. I haven't read a choose your own adventure since I was a kid.
Of course I don't remember them being so chilling. It will take some time to get over the fact that I got killed and left a young boy all alone in a zombie appocolypse lol.I had a really great time though. Can't wait to see what other stories you have, or will have.
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— mick on 3/5/2017 7:40:27 AM with a score of 10560
Cool but mabye try something diffrent
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Knownsaturn9660
on 3/3/2017 9:38:25 AM with a score of 2160
It cool
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— EmdMaster on 3/3/2017 9:21:36 AM with a score of 39667
This was the best game I ever played
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— Harassment on 3/2/2017 3:26:56 AM with a score of 810
Dead Man Walking (Zombie Survival) has a simple concept and a pretty straightforward story, but the amount of choice given and the thought put into each option makes this a very unique experience. As I played through I enjoyed the critical thinking that each situation required as well as gauging the risks versus the possible rewards of outcomes. While I have only played through once and achieved the best ending, there is definitely a lot of replayability and I'm looking forward to the many other adventures I can have with the story in the future.
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Rocky660
on 3/1/2017 8:45:46 PM with a score of 34577
Bosses confirmed.
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Bingbingkink
on 3/1/2017 5:46:46 PM with a score of 2060
Pretty good, but not a lot of variety in the different endings. Lots of cool deaths, but the only survival endings i found were in the campground and the precinct. Obviously one could save certain people, but this was trivial.
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— Tristan on 3/1/2017 1:38:32 PM with a score of 30057
fine
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— Alex Lopez on 3/1/2017 9:38:04 AM with a score of 2310
Holy shit, t'was very intense. Also well written
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— Leon on 2/28/2017 4:53:42 PM with a score of 23265
Gnarly
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— Evan on 2/27/2017 12:29:38 PM with a score of 34697
This is the first ever story I've read in this site and I'm not disappointed! This got me all tensed and thinking over decisions over and over. Even though I survived, I think I would immediately die in real life! Nice story and this made me stay in this wonderful site :D Thank you for sharing this beautiful masterpiece (which is better than most zombie apocalypse stories/movies that I read lol)
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Seulyoon
on 2/26/2017 10:57:15 PM with a score of 18945
Lotta fun! Kills a few hours when I'm at work. Lots of thought into the process, and, I mean, 21k pages deserves a high rating. Very nice job.
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N1ckD1pples
on 2/25/2017 7:42:38 PM with a score of 33387
I enjoyed the choices even as simple as weaponry. It took me a good 5 minutes debating on the first switch (fire ax or crowbar/ultimately going with the crowbar for utility). I survived by staying at the precinct and got a score of 7355. Nice job at making this amazing game! 8/8
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ChewyDog
on 2/20/2017 1:04:56 AM with a score of 7365
This was very well done, the decisions were hard to make because the options were reasonable and depended on preemptive thought. Liked how you weren't punished for being a risk taker with some more bad-ass options working out. Overall the whole story was well paced and would give anybody a couple hours of enjoyment, hopefully with a happy ending. I personally scored something abouts 20, 005 and I have two regrets the major one being I never did get to use that second Molotov cocktail ;D
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Girrawaa
on 2/19/2017 9:49:15 AM with a score of 20415
Can't save wife, but can save daughters...
You have created a masterpiece of zombie survival. Details are great, mix in long length, so many choices, and tiny to no grammatical errors.
Missed out Reeses Cups to read this. 7/8.
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AgentX
on 2/19/2017 6:57:34 AM with a score of 16925
EVERYTHING IS AWESOME
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ZombieGamer9188
on 2/16/2017 8:02:53 PM with a score of 30897
It was lit
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— The lit guy on 2/16/2017 11:06:04 AM with a score of 20025
Absolutely fantastic!!!
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— James on 2/15/2017 7:40:42 PM with a score of 22945
I was looking for options that I could use for zombie apocalypse and this website came up and it was everything I was looking for. The only thing I would change is to add in more key characters. All in all pretty great
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— Bigfoot on 2/15/2017 5:17:03 PM with a score of 17865
This is really awesome! Lots of different directions you could take on this so it is a lot of fun.
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crymar24
on 2/13/2017 10:18:39 AM with a score of 36607
Well thought out, consistent, and detailed.
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lostphenom
on 2/12/2017 7:28:52 PM with a score of 36657
i think it could use a sequal that adds more customisible options for your character for a more immersive effect other than that i think this was a good story and will play again.
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unequalboot
on 2/12/2017 4:33:23 PM with a score of 17680
So far this is the best Zombie survival story i have seen on here. It was full of amazing twists and turns and I liked that none of the options throughout the game had dead ends. I hope to see another one like this from you and can't wait to see what you come up with. The grammar was also good throughout the story and had tons of different options. I also liked that you had cameos from different people on this website and I thought that was pretty creative. I also like that you told the story behind the main character and included other characters such as Jacob and the tomboy survivor.
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hblovecraft
on 2/10/2017 4:04:00 PM with a score of 28015
Amazing!! I played twice and survived both times with really good endings ... **SPOILERS AHEAD** The first one I went to the police camp where I survived, but I didn't save my family. The second one was the best where I saved my family, the kid Jacob and the whole school people too. **SPOILERS OFF** As I said, amazing game and congratulations to the author because it was so well written, brilliant. I will miss this story and probably play this again sometime. You all can be sure it is worth playing and lots of fun!!:)
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1998
on 2/5/2017 4:36:41 AM with a score of 28675
I am so bad at this lol.
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— Zombie Bait on 2/4/2017 12:03:05 PM with a score of 4210
Extremely entertaining story but sadly got the best ending in only 79 pages I wish there was more lenght rather than options or branches but overall story was fantastic.
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GundamMeister
on 2/2/2017 6:46:11 AM with a score of 26757
Great read.
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Joeyjoejoe
on 2/1/2017 3:30:04 AM with a score of 19535
good game!
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thestoryman22
on 1/31/2017 8:11:24 AM with a score of 9920
that was really facinating kind of scary but really cool
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— brendon on 1/30/2017 1:32:04 PM with a score of 3960
A really well written and enjoyable story. Thanks for a great experience. I think I may have found a small continuity error at one point though. I can't exactly remember the details, so I will play through again and see if I can find the page I noticed it on.
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SiriusMorningStar
on 1/29/2017 8:59:47 PM with a score of 41397
Absolutely loved it! Got the best possible ending and saved 60 people. Gotta say it again, it's even better that Reese's Cups.
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Charles_Shirley
on 1/28/2017 1:13:39 PM with a score of 33387
perfect absolutely perfect
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Screener
on 1/26/2017 11:02:01 AM with a score of 16385
Noice!
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MattyRCD
on 1/25/2017 12:41:41 PM with a score of 35957
I am really good at this because I have played it several times but I always find a way to do things differently. THANK YOU FOR MAKING THIS!!!
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Bob_The_Destroyer
on 1/25/2017 9:54:14 AM with a score of 36447
It is amazing how much of a story you built up. And the background of the virus.
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— Calvin on 1/17/2017 12:39:49 PM with a score of 22835
i got the best possible ending! it's a must read story
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Mrea
on 1/15/2017 2:19:21 PM with a score of 35437
loved it !
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Jeuxaddict
on 1/13/2017 4:29:22 PM with a score of 17270
I got the best ending possible without being infected but of course knowing that I carry it and saved 56 people and killing a cannibal gaunt and drooler along the way. OH YEAH!!!!!
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— Zombie_Killer on 1/11/2017 6:00:11 PM with a score of 28285
Very fun and in-depth. :)
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Placebo
on 1/9/2017 7:29:11 PM with a score of 22775
survivalist... If only I had never gotten bit.
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zavcex
on 1/9/2017 6:36:59 AM with a score of 23775
It was really cool. It said I got the very best ending on the first try but it took me 6 and a half hours to do. I am definitely going to continue to play.
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— Gabe88 on 1/1/2017 8:01:01 AM with a score of 28977
This really was one of the best "Choose Your Story" games out there; it had a awesome plotline, and I even got the best ending possible! I'm amazed at the level of diction and complexity of this story; overall an amazing story. 10/10.
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— Xavier C. on 12/28/2016 1:11:05 AM with a score of 30207
The best zombie survival ingeraftive story I have seen in a long time! Th choices were logical, made sense, and had predictable outcomes most of the times. My only complaint, if any, is that the whole head wound that your character starts with is never really "treated" apart from been binded. One would think more serious consequences would result from it, but oh well.
Beautiful story, made with care. Bravo. You did an excellent job.
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— Felix on 12/26/2016 4:57:44 PM with a score of 30197
This game is really fun.... or maybe it's just me, liking all the zombie stuff all the time.... Either way I loved it!!!! defiantly my go to when I'm bored!
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— Lexi on 12/21/2016 7:57:45 PM with a score of 8660
I am a survivor of this pretty awesome experience that is quite a bit better than most CYOA zombie stories on the web! It was well written and actually made me a slight bit afraid to choose what I thought was right on account that I am certain I came close to death more than once in this story. Very well done.
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— Zack on 12/17/2016 2:56:09 AM with a score of 35867
Wow nice story I enjoyed it a lot and it went in depth about many things.
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CeruleanFlare
on 12/15/2016 5:51:29 PM with a score of 21685
Wow just wow
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TheDevil666666
on 12/14/2016 7:27:52 PM with a score of 24435
Brilliant game with lots of tough decisions to make. Highly enjoyable for most people so I would recommend it to anyone.
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— Fastest_jack on 12/10/2016 5:01:11 PM with a score of 8215
A truly enjoyable game. I was really sad though hen i ended killing my wife. But that sadness left when i went back in time and decided to use my companion as a test dummy. to think i've only read 10% of the whole possible story... really makes me not feel bothered to play it again. BUT THAT DOESNT MEAN THIS IS NOT AN AMAZING STORY! it truly did bring upon me enlightenment.
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— Cookie-Warlock on 12/5/2016 12:33:35 PM with a score of 25995
Excellent story telling. Great job!
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dizzyd93
on 11/28/2016 12:06:04 AM with a score of 25375
I found this game you made to both have a unique and incredible story, but also a choosing system that makes the players feel as if they really do have control over Greg's life. The story was pretty original, as far as the zombie apocalypse genre goes, and it was miraculously detailed. 5/5. I hope to see more from you!
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— Aidan on 11/27/2016 4:37:53 PM with a score of 33947
Really awesome stuff, thanks for making/sharing!
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— Tavo on 11/26/2016 1:26:27 PM with a score of 23935
Got the Rebuilder ending. Great story!
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Voltage
on 11/25/2016 7:12:18 PM with a score of 37267
7/8 Very impressive overall, but not written very well in some places. I recall there was a paragraph of completely irrelevant details about the hard hats of city worker zombies.
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resistor
on 11/23/2016 2:01:09 PM with a score of 23375
Amazing
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Skroxberry
on 11/11/2016 1:19:50 PM with a score of 34627
reaallllyyyy good... it tests your brains to the fullest
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shaurya1616
on 11/9/2016 6:29:43 AM with a score of 28775
35007 points, best ending. I had 3 hours of fun reading it, and I'm happy that you had prepared the 'best ending' for us.
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hepari00
on 11/8/2016 7:55:35 PM with a score of 35027
A beautifully scripted game that is perfect in every way. The immersion is mind boggling and makes you feel as if you are experiencing it for yourself. I hope the author makes more and I am 100% supporting!
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— Ezra on 11/8/2016 1:25:50 PM with a score of 20765
What can I say. I love zombies, and I love how instead of doubting everyone, this story lets you benefit from trusting and helping them.
The Best End was very satisfying, and every Dead End had good reason behind it, as opposed to "Oh shit, a zombie appeared out of nowhere and you died without having a choice to fight back!" in other storygames I've read in this category. This is the perfect storygame for me, and I definitely recommend it.
Now, time to attempt a Genocide route :)
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Karuma
on 11/8/2016 7:17:21 AM with a score of 38287
I am not a fan of the video game stile zombie mutants but I like the way they fit in this story grate work. I love it overall storyline and I'm definitely gonna go through it again. Thanks for the work you put into this I really enjoyed it.
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— James on 11/7/2016 11:39:56 PM with a score of 24575
Awesome game, I absolutely loved it. I am most definetly playing this a couple dozen more times.
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— Gizmzo on 11/4/2016 4:53:20 PM with a score of 27485
My first time playing and I have to admit that I did die multiple times. Most of the times it's because I wanted to see if there was a better option
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GigaKnight
on 11/3/2016 3:52:17 PM with a score of 26775
Amazing. I loved it right from the beginning, and I quite enjoyed the amount of detail put into it. Finding out that you're a carrier, should you get that far, was an amazing twist as well.
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— Jamie Castro on 11/3/2016 1:01:31 AM with a score of 19975
Hi , i really enjoyed playing this text-based game very well , Bytheway , My name is Simon and Here’s a rundown of how i did –
You Killed 18 Zombies
You Killed 1 Drooler Zombies
You Killed 0 Bloater Zombies
You Killed 1 Ghouls
You Killed 0 Banshees
You Killed 1 Hell Hounds
You Killed 1 Cannibal Gaunt Zombies
You Killed 0 People
You Saved 5 People (including yourself, unless you died)
You were eaten by 0 Zombies
Your Overall Score: 34867
(You played through 137 of 2,131 Pages and have proven to be a Rebuilder)
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Ljaypog135
on 11/2/2016 1:53:51 AM with a score of 34887
You Killed 59 Zombies
You Killed 0 Drooler Zombies
You Killed 0 Bloater Zombies
You Killed 0 Ghouls
You Killed 0 Banshees
You Killed 1 Hell Hounds
You Killed 0 Cannibal Gaunt Zombies
You Killed 1 People
You Saved 5 People (including yourself, unless you died)
You were eaten by 0 Zombies
Your Overall Score: 25075
(You played through 158 of 2,131 Pages and have proven to be a Survivalist)
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21wpaskins
on 10/28/2016 9:37:37 PM with a score of 25085
Keep up the good work!
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— John Anderson on 10/25/2016 5:04:06 AM with a score of 32457
This is one of, if not the best, text adventure/interactive story that I've ever played. Each gory detail painted into the background of so many choices all wonderfully described creates a masterpiece of an apocalypse scenario. The author is brilliant in his wording, and in all of his possible storylines. I would love to see more games like this!
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— Stephen on 10/21/2016 11:16:11 AM with a score of 1860
great game played it loads still haven't found all the different types of zombie may never do so.
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— dom on 10/17/2016 10:27:23 AM with a score of 26035
[SPOILERS] Wow... just, wow... An amazing story line mixed in with believable and down to earth answers to predicaments. It is sad to say that I died from a simple bacterial infection, and that Jacob died at my own hands (After he zombified in the garage ;-;). I had thought that I would be ok after Jacobs death, Seeing as though it lead to me finding my wife, but it was all taken away, at the hands of the simplest bacteria. I like to take solace in the fact that I did not find out what had happened to my daughters, which would most likely lead to more heartbreak. This story gets an 100/10 in my book!
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— Kevin Bagwell on 10/15/2016 5:19:07 AM with a score of 15720
I am literally speechless after that,the best emotional experience.
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— Mike on 10/14/2016 1:15:21 PM with a score of 22725
yea i redid it and got 31700+
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— Dcool990 on 10/13/2016 5:40:10 PM with a score of 31777
OMG 2,000 plus pages seriously,how long did this take. A little to many words so I mostly just skipped it all.Nice though
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— Dcool990 on 10/13/2016 4:45:30 PM with a score of 3760
Best on this website. Love the point system.
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Skittles22
on 10/11/2016 4:07:39 PM with a score of 21895
Excellent! Really well written and enjoyable. Im gonna go again!
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Beeon
on 10/10/2016 9:01:45 PM with a score of 17125
An amazing and not easy story line. I finished it quite quickly and enjoyed every minute
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— Kirill on 10/8/2016 4:09:54 AM with a score of 26375
Such a brilliant story! And here I am in 2016 coming back to this masterpiece. As an aspiring author, I would love to do a collaborative work with you, I've left my email of you ever read this!
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— Ravendaas on 10/2/2016 11:52:21 PM with a score of 19065
Twas good. Wanna know what happens if you pick up the girl with the hockey stick as I saved everyone but her.
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— Sarah on 9/26/2016 5:24:57 AM with a score of 29027
DUDE WHIRLWIND OF ACTION! AMAZING
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Schipkeb
on 9/24/2016 5:39:27 PM with a score of 21765
AWESOME
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— Zodiac Silvers on 9/19/2016 11:04:46 PM with a score of 22625
I swear to god you can crack a womans head open for no reason this game is brutal
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Heli0s
on 9/14/2016 8:28:45 AM with a score of 7560
I just clicked the top option over and over
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Heli0s
on 9/14/2016 8:15:08 AM with a score of 1110
Very nice gamebook. Loved it.
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Vittorio99
on 9/14/2016 2:07:27 AM with a score of 16320
Omg best game ever.. 24775 score.. only got bit by a zombie but saved my whole family!! And 60 other people..
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DetroitShani313
on 9/13/2016 11:35:46 PM with a score of 24785
I was really enthralled with this, I started reading roughly around 11pm and I'm writing this at 5am. From a narrative stand point the story is pretty straight forward and most if not all the characters and scenarios that happen are pretty damn realistic. It really does a good job if making you fear your actions, I found myself genuinely scared of certain sections (That Cannibal Gaunt generally made me shudder) and other sections had me cringey and wincing, fight that hell hound made me cringe and wince just at how insanely well written and detailed it was. Kudos to the author. My only qualm with it would be the lack of variety in the zombies, while i did read that it said that 1 in 1000 will mutate it still would have been nice to encounter some of these other zombies I never had a chance to meet, epically with that kill tally at the end of each read, it really makes you want to find and kill at least one of each to truly feel like a zombie killing bad ass, nonetheless I enjoyed this game, good read.
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Twistedark
on 9/8/2016 5:05:47 AM with a score of 31387
It was really interesting
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bignameissue
on 9/2/2016 2:09:47 PM with a score of 23375
Well i wouldn't say its good and nor bad, but you could put pictures for visual preferences. and also make an option of self reading story line where the computer reads it to you.
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— Chyna on 8/31/2016 3:07:27 PM with a score of 2060
Very well written and a lot of fun! Some minor spelling and grammatical errors but nothing that took me out of the story. Lots of choices at key moments makes for a great ride!
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BigRonn77
on 8/30/2016 8:31:51 AM with a score of 28775
This is the first story I've read on the site...and I'm just amazed. Knowing that it's 2000 pages, I've played one ending to find out there's still much much more!
Breaking it down: The Amazing, Good, Bad, Ugly
Ugly: Not much I can say here.
Bad: To me, the dialogue and the characters seem a bit weak. When you meet characters, (at least in my playthrough) I feel that they don't seem to matter as much since we don't know much of their story, or why they're motivated to survive. An example of this weak characterization is Tomboy Survivor Girl. (Don't want to spoil to much.) An example of better charactization (In my opinion) is from the Bus driver. For the dialogue, it's not that it's terrible it's just generic. Nothing really stands out to me in what the characters have said.
Good:
The story writing. Immediately you're plunged into a world where the author is able to give you - not only an image - but a smell, taste, sound, and taste of everything that's going on. This allows you to really grasp what the character is living out in this world. Being a Zombie Survival game, it is crucial that these elements are well written since you need to use these to
make your decisions.
However, regarding the "painting the picture", I feel at times that there are some details that don't need to included and it can be lengthy if you can already grasp what is going on. So while it's good to thoroughly describe your scenes, sometimes letting the reader fill in blanks with some breadcrumbs is just enough.
Amazing: Okay, content. It's 2000 pages. 2000! I haven't written anything in my lifetime that is that long. 2000 pages of content. The story that keeps on telling. It is like "travelling in a desert" because you can't seem to see the end.
The game itself. Wow. It's really everything I'd want out of a choose your own adventure game. Every item that you find is in preparation for what might come in the future. Every move you make can leave you in grave danger for another risky feat. You simply can't ignore any stray structures or people behind, you have to decide if you want to interact with things or if it's to risky. Exploring in this game is a thing. I can't believe that I'm EXPLORING a written text story because there are so many choices, many paths, etc.
I want to praise the author on giving some choices the weight they deserve. In this story, taking info of your inventory, your state of health, and the threat of what's around you makes every flip of the page a fun immersive game!
(Regarding what's above, I haven't read all 2000 pages so maybe my judgement may be off. Considering this is my first comment, I may also may be rating this to high or low, but this is overall what I felt!)
7/8
Thanks for making an epic story!
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RewriteN
on 8/26/2016 6:18:07 PM with a score of 25615
i loved this, please make more if you haven't you are amazing at it
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Firecream
on 8/23/2016 12:06:16 PM with a score of 33195
This is one hell of an adventure!
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BetaMuffin
on 8/20/2016 9:58:35 PM with a score of 37307
What a great game! I safely managed to make it to the best possible ending without being bit, and am about to go through it again to see how many zombies I can kill this time. Very fun and well written.
8/8
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Verethragna
on 8/17/2016 4:57:14 PM with a score of 33577
It was pretty good up until I took a risk and ended up dying.
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— ShatteredMind on 8/14/2016 10:21:50 PM with a score of 1260
it was so good it made me want to die
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skesag65399797hh
on 8/14/2016 9:11:19 PM with a score of 16185
Personally I love games such as this one, but it's much to easy to get hurt/bitten and you don't have a lot of chances to fix that problem in the very beginning with your head gash and all. One other things that your character is not coztomizeable in any way i mean skills and such which really postpones the experenice.
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— Romeo on 8/12/2016 11:56:32 PM with a score of 4560
Pick stealth .
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— FreedomTheOne on 8/12/2016 9:17:17 AM with a score of 17725
I was absolutely astonished on how many pages and selections there were, also the final point screen is truly amazing. I'm a writer myself and have never seen a better peice of work, not even from published New Your Times Bestsellers. 9.5/10
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ChubbyNinja456
on 8/3/2016 2:25:28 AM with a score of 35747
Great game, over 1 and a half hours of gameplay and an excellent story
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— Fevercrumb on 7/27/2016 10:50:22 AM with a score of 30917
What an amazing experience of story-telling survival. I love the attention to realism and detail, and most of all challenging sandbox of choices you get to make provided with consequences associated. There is a question, will this adventure story well be expanded? Are their plans that this could possibly developed into being an immersive graphical text-adventure game?
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click
on 7/26/2016 8:48:15 AM with a score of 13890
Has a few places where you'd expect other options but they aren't provided. Still, the writing's good.
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falco1029
on 7/21/2016 5:26:30 AM with a score of 15770
Get game
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— dsi on 7/19/2016 2:35:18 AM with a score of 21665
It was absolutely amazing. That is all i can say about it, it leaves me speechless
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— Matthew clarke on 7/17/2016 8:29:26 PM with a score of 34927
I finally made it through intact and sane. So I killed two people? Their deaths were accidental.... Good game, good story.
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crusader
on 7/8/2016 7:13:12 PM with a score of 31947
This story is really well written and it really makes me realize how dumb zombie movie survivors are.
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— Nelson on 7/6/2016 9:28:52 PM with a score of 36377
Good. Just Good.
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lejama88
on 7/5/2016 9:48:05 AM with a score of 34627
An amazing game better than nearly all other text based zombie games, as well as some FPS zombie games!
I highly recommend!
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Jazor34
on 7/4/2016 4:39:25 AM with a score of 8210
Had me glued to my phone for hours.
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— Trish on 7/1/2016 2:02:19 AM with a score of 21825
Quite simply my favorite storygame of all. Very well-written, suspenseful, with perfect pacing and believable, relatable characters. Bravo.
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— Gonzo Strangelove on 6/30/2016 6:04:32 AM with a score of 34677
I've consumed way too much zombie media in the last few years, but this was still awesome and fresh because the choices completely change the story you're going to get. Time for round 3!
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PastaLass
on 6/25/2016 9:12:44 PM with a score of 26585
8/8, score: 26505 saved my whole family and everyone at the school, 60 people including myself. Though I'll admit I backtracked from death a number of times before getting to the good ending.
Well-written story with ample choice and freedom throughout and a main character who is refreshingly pragmatic and logical. There were almost no dead-ends that felt cheap, and every choice I made felt important and had an effect on the story.
There were only some very minor inconsistencies, such as the exposition suggesting I flee from my home using the car in the garage, despite the fact I'd left it on the next street over. This was only very minor, however, since the story ultimately didn't let me perform that action anyway. The only other instance I recall is when it is described that I leave the fire-extinguisher behind as it's too heavy, despite never picking it up to begin with.
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sark
on 6/25/2016 3:21:12 PM with a score of 26525
A very good zombie survival game. 10/10
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— gamer god on 6/24/2016 2:51:46 AM with a score of 23965
Just....breathtaking....
8/8
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Battalion
on 6/15/2016 4:45:29 PM with a score of 24385
Yay! I saved him and 59 other people!!
I'm happy now :)
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Seto
on 6/15/2016 12:31:57 AM with a score of 33487
I wanted to save the boy :c
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Seto
on 6/15/2016 12:16:04 AM with a score of 24275
One word : amazing.
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mater227
on 6/13/2016 5:12:27 PM with a score of 33697
Pretty damned amazing.
The story was very long - I would estimate I've been playing for around three hours, and there's still replay potential - so you have a lot there to keep you going. You could also play over a few days. It was very well written (odd typos, but nothing major) . . . good grammar, spelling, punctuation . . . excellent.
My only complaint is the misogyny; female characters are reduced to screaming stereotypes, objects to be raped (as apparently sexual violence against women is the only way to express the horror of isolation as a woman), or people to be rescued. Only the immediate family live, in terms of women, and no other women live that have names (even the people at the end saved were all men). So . . . that let it down a lot, which is why I took a point off.
Still - great story, great writing. Just plain great :)
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RobinMask
on 6/9/2016 2:27:31 PM with a score of 25075
I beat it finally. I only saved nine people, and killed 2 but whatever. It's amazing, and you have to make choices to save or to kill. If you keep dying, just don't do the choices you did because they are obviously wrong.
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— FlowerfellFrisk on 6/7/2016 12:34:25 PM with a score of 16875
First comment on the site and I can tell I'm going to enjoy it here. Managed to get the best possible ending but I've got one issue. Very early on in the game you have of two choices. Axe or crowbar. The author makes sure to point out pros and cons of each weapon. But no matter what you do if you take the crowbar (Darth Sidius voice) "You will die" seriously I've noticed nobody comment on this. The crowbar has less reach and damage but is universally more useful than an axe. The axe is a badass weapon but it's an axe so not many uses. (Also can easily get stuck in someone's head but that never happens) But if you choose the axe you still get the same options for getting underground and into buildings. It's impossible to survive (outside of the obvious first ending) without the axe. Idk I probably sound foolish but my first few unsuccessful runs I chose the crowbar thinking I was popping locks and hopping through sewers like a badass because I had a tool designed to do that. Then on a whim I choose the axe and like an hour later I beat the game with best ending.
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Marshith
on 6/4/2016 7:52:28 PM with a score of 37197
Good story!
Well done mate!
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Daan1214
on 6/4/2016 7:09:07 AM with a score of 3560
I enjoyed the story.
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— Ray-man on 5/31/2016 3:50:26 PM with a score of 19415
I truly LOVE this adventure. I have gotten through it a number of times. I love figuring out new hidden gems (and challenges) within it. Great, great job!
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— AD on 5/31/2016 12:47:49 AM with a score of 32617
How can I get all two thousand pages done with the given choices I've only reached 120 all with the same end any advice?
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— Wyatt on 5/29/2016 7:01:49 AM with a score of 18465
Died six times after that I got three good endings all in all this is way more realistic than most zombie movies and books but feels similar to the first season of the walking dead
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— Wyatt guilliams on 5/27/2016 11:17:33 PM with a score of 32857
This was an interesting experience and i'll continue to play through for the rest of the game. Though being called a 'survivalist' at the end of it all felt like a trophy to be proud of.
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Daerelek
on 5/25/2016 1:27:17 PM with a score of 23525
This is the first comment I have ever left on this website, and there is no other game that I deserves an applause such as this one.
This game, this amazing work of creativity, not only calls for you to question your own morals and thoughts on the human condition, but places you in a very life-like scenario where you deal with very tangible consequences of your every action.
Dozens of characters to interact with, thousands of choices (literally, there are, like, 2k pages), and countless endings that are a result of your own hands... it is all such a very masterfully crafted piece of work.
I mean, gosh. It's almost like I'm right there, playing as the character! Best game on the site, guaranteed.
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— SJR2631 on 5/25/2016 3:12:34 AM with a score of 34887
I am a fan of most all interactive fiction stories, especially apocalyptic story lines, such as this. This is one of the best that I have found and greatly enjoyed playing and I intend to play again to try and find as many endings as possible. Thank you for taking the time and energy to make this game.
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— Kudan on 5/24/2016 1:26:14 PM with a score of 12070
Incredibly addictive! I spent over an hour playing and only ran through 65 pages before I succumbed to my wounds :(
I ran through the math, and I found that on a perfect game you could be playing for a month if you play 90 minutes or so a day! I rated it 8/8 mainly because of the almost infinite number of choices available.
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Battalion
on 5/18/2016 1:57:02 PM with a score of 15330
I got 37237 as a score, and I got the best ending! Great game, and very fun. 8/8
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Elt_1080
on 5/15/2016 4:23:55 PM with a score of 37257
Not bad. Not bad at all. The options given are more or less realistic and ones which would most likely occur to any person regarding the situations presented with throughout the game (at least in theory, anyways). It's good to be able to choose actual options one likes to think they'd take in real life, even if some decisions might be less-than-pleasant or (at the very least) questionable. Hey - in theory, I could survive the bloody zombie apocalypse! Hell yeah.
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— Vik on 5/8/2016 10:39:41 PM with a score of 20435
Got the second best ending. Definitely worth it, good job.
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Aerith
on 5/5/2016 8:34:41 PM with a score of 21495
That was perfect! I also got the best ending on my first try, and with more than 30k points, that was good!
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— matt112 on 5/4/2016 1:50:09 PM with a score of 34907
Absolutely amazing. The only thing I can say is at every end screen, maybe giving a small tree layout of possible paths and a possible count. Like, you killed 90 out of a possible 20000 zombies (The second number being ll possible zombies you can I'll, not just every zombie you can come across)
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Activerios
on 5/4/2016 9:20:53 AM with a score of 37607
Holy crap, this game is awesome. Other than the fact that I died from the damn head wound!!!! Saved my wife and the boy, made it all the way to the suburbs and died when I walked in the bathroom. Great.BE SURE TO FIND ANTIBOCOTICS!!!!!1
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— Gray16 on 4/27/2016 2:22:59 PM with a score of 3690
Truely awsome game!!!!
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— Danny on 4/27/2016 8:55:36 AM with a score of 13630
This was the first "choose your story" that I have read since childhood. It was pretty awesome, thank you for sharing it with us!
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— Nerros on 4/23/2016 11:57:30 AM with a score of 21725
Quite a good story and plot with a good sense of horror oftentimes uncommon in zombie themed stories or movies. Great attention to detail and description as well as realism. Looking forward to playing again and experiencing other alternate endings.
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DarkScorpion
on 4/19/2016 5:11:43 AM with a score of 19415
What an AMAZING story!, i loved every second of it, i will definitely play it many, many times.
My thanks to everyone who contributed to this wonderful story.
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Karateprincezzz
on 4/19/2016 4:13:29 AM with a score of 19535
oh my coconuts lololol but really loved it one try i was able to save 60 with me not dieing nor my family and saved jocob at first i was going to kill him out mercy but could not do it so i kept him along even though he could get me killed plus i want to know what happened to his mother and is it possible to save her. Next i only saw two types of zombies i saw a hell hound killed it and a giant did not try to fight him plus when i thought about him i saw a windigo SEARCH IT UP SCARY!!!!!!!!!! but finaly thing what is depper in the city?
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— Samuel on 4/18/2016 12:11:37 AM with a score of 35487
An incredible, fast-paced, action-packed, suspenseful zombie adventure with fantastic writing, choices, story paths, characters, zombies themselves, and background, with a surprisingly realistic virus, and reasons for its existence. Absolutely perfect, minor typos aside. Now in my bookmarks. Amazing.
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— Jerred on 4/17/2016 1:47:45 PM with a score of 16575
Omg this is a really awesome story game
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— ?? on 4/16/2016 10:49:51 AM with a score of 14890
It is the best game on CYS.
The only problem is you can't save the kid and your wife at the same time without dying. I liked the kid :(
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— iallen4 on 4/13/2016 12:44:59 PM with a score of 3160
WHY DO I KEEP DYING.
Hey, at least I know I won't survive in a zombie apocalypse...
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milkycat
on 4/12/2016 10:38:13 PM with a score of 1610
I really enjoyed playing. I liked how you offered different ways to accomplish each task ranging from completely stupid to logical. Also cudos to what I'm assuming is a caddy shack reference with the zombies chasing the ground hog around the golf course. I'm definitely going to attempt to play again but save the wife this time. I'd leave a better comment but its 4:30 in the morning and I'm too fricking tired for that shit man. Lol good story though.
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DaCaRi
on 4/8/2016 5:33:47 AM with a score of 21745
i played before this game and i didnt really remember how much of it went by other than i dont know if i had survived last time, but i managed with a lot of save checkpoints to go thru as a survivor and a carrier, tough break, i wish i could "love" my wife in a way other than non-platonic ;). anyways, will try again later, altough i dont know how this could have 2000 pages and i only read about 100 somethings and its over... well pretty good rpg neways.
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norton158
on 4/7/2016 9:53:18 PM with a score of 30025
this was a good story but there should be more endings
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flippy900
on 4/4/2016 12:45:08 PM with a score of 16185
Im A survivalist! Best Zombie story on the site.
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Jimmysutton
on 3/31/2016 3:56:24 PM with a score of 15525
I LOVE IT
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— Lewis on 3/23/2016 6:39:38 AM with a score of 1810
It was lit fam
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— Dankman on 3/21/2016 8:20:31 PM with a score of 8460
Great game! Took me about 9 tries to finally beat it, but it was such an amazing and well written story! Easily one of the most expansive and detailed stories on this website.
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— Pelvis Impress Me on 3/21/2016 2:24:08 PM with a score of 24675
I killed only 91 zombies.
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MasonJarGuzzi
on 3/19/2016 1:52:08 AM with a score of 9310
goog game aka gg
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— jack on 3/18/2016 8:37:29 AM with a score of 1810
This was a great CYOA story, having a very detailed storyline, with many descriptions about major things, and even the little things! This had a great ending and I was very pleased with how this turned out at the end! I haven't played a storygame this long, but it was well worth it! I had a final score of 27048, which I think is nice, and this definitely deserved the 8 that I gave! I will replay this and choose other choices, as I am very curious to find out what the black silhouette is that haunts Greg whenever he dies. (I died 3 times BTW). AMAZING!
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DaHatedHaterdatHates
on 3/16/2016 9:14:02 PM with a score of 27417
This was a great CYOA story, having a very detailed storyline, with many descriptions about major things, and even the little things! This had a great ending and I was very pleased with how this turned out at the end! I haven't played a storygame this long, but it was well worth it! I had a final score of 27048, which I think is nice, and this definitely deserved the 8 that I gave! I will replay this and choose other choices, as I am very curious to find out what the black silhouette is that haunts Greg whenever he dies. (I died 3 times BTW). AMAZING!
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DaHatedHaterdatHates
on 3/15/2016 11:45:58 PM with a score of 27417
IT WILL BRING YOU ENLIGHTENMENT
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Darkmark8910
on 3/15/2016 7:05:57 PM with a score of 32167
Extremely well written, and quite factual as well. Don't be greedy and you'll survive.
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— Korduk on 3/15/2016 2:40:26 AM with a score of 24015
Best. Story Game. Ever.
@BerkaZerka
Thanks Berka for this amazing story. You truly are a talented writer. And BTW that lock combination part was tricky and had no strategy. But then again, it's the zombie apocalypse. Strategy doesn't matter :)
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MasonJarGuzzi
on 3/8/2016 12:58:49 AM with a score of 3110
it was really good
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horonus
on 3/4/2016 6:34:17 AM with a score of 30757
Wow a lot lot of work has been put into this and you can see the amount of effort put in it is a great story. I will play this many times to see all the choices. 9/10
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— aaagaming on 3/3/2016 3:01:49 PM with a score of 10020
This was awesome I survived and played it so many times I know all the endings.
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— Zombie killer on 3/3/2016 1:24:39 PM with a score of 18315
I got the second best ending! Yaaaaaaay!
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CatLover366
on 2/17/2016 5:31:10 PM with a score of 18685
Really fun. cant wait to do another
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ZachZombieSlayer
on 2/17/2016 1:27:25 PM with a score of 15935
This was a well good descripted story you made. i got stuck on the pin lock
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— hello on 2/16/2016 7:25:38 PM with a score of 4460
Love all things zombies, and this well-thought story gives you the feel of being right there in the thick of things without the worry of being bitten!
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thebigweave
on 2/16/2016 2:05:26 PM with a score of 22895
Loved the story, Made it out with saving the teens and my whole family plus Jacob, But was bit in the process, Only a 7.85456/ 8 because of the occasional use of "though" instead of "thought". Extremely capturing story, though could use some action during the one month recovery time.
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DB77
on 2/13/2016 1:29:22 AM with a score of 22495
it rook me the better part of two months to finally finish this game. i love this game. plenty if heart break and lots of action keep the story going. i'm glad that i found it.
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Kyrithes
on 2/11/2016 8:31:42 PM with a score of 20815
I couldn't have done it without the "Go back" feature. Even with a few spelling, grammar and punctuation problems, the writing was excellent, with well-drawn characters and believable situations. Very engaging and absorbing, and even educational. Now to go back and see what would've happened if I'd made another choice...
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Fearchar
on 2/8/2016 12:53:32 AM with a score of 36607
so many possibilities. such a great storyline.
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1dlabbe1
on 2/5/2016 10:02:12 PM with a score of 27235
I had a really fun time with this Survival zombie game..
It Makes me think hard enough to the the choices.
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— Lanz Monzon on 2/5/2016 9:14:39 AM with a score of 32737
Ecxellent game that was really thought out well. A few spelling errors, but nothing serious. Play it. Do it.
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Arionis
on 2/5/2016 5:42:51 AM with a score of 37117
Nice
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Ander
on 2/4/2016 9:51:28 PM with a score of 16530
I got 23,645 as a score best possible ending 11 people including me only killed 1 person 52 zombies 1 droler and 2 hell hounds 1 cannibal gaunt zombie.... Skill
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Demonic
on 2/3/2016 7:27:45 PM with a score of 23665
This is one of the best things known to mankind, upthere with Steam, Minecraft, and Netflix.
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— TK0805 on 2/3/2016 1:21:39 PM with a score of 19125
This was an awesome game
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— Nathan miles on 2/3/2016 1:08:42 PM with a score of 22227
One word: awesome. It will bring you hours of fun, or if you wanna reply it, than days of fun :D
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Razorblayd
on 2/2/2016 6:06:17 AM with a score of 24475
:3 I think my AK47,9mm pistol,sawn-off shotgun,and all of my guns are useless. HOLY CROWBAR IT'S TAH BEST IN EVERY ZOMBIE APOCALYPSE,
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IndoProject
on 1/28/2016 8:56:28 AM with a score of 32437
This was freaking awesome! Never would I have thought that I could enjoy something like this as much as I did.
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— Jeremyah on 1/26/2016 3:15:03 AM with a score of 26525
This is so damn good!
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— Brenda on 1/26/2016 12:14:28 AM with a score of 40277
THis game was incredible warning the feels will come ;-; and is really good with people who love to read
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— Rile Ben on 1/24/2016 2:13:40 AM with a score of 31387
I loved the game though I was disappointed in the fact that I couldn't use the guns. I'm gonna replay to get different endings.
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Wolfbaneninja
on 1/22/2016 2:17:38 PM with a score of 35347
Now THIS is what I signed up for.
Best in show beyond a doubt. Thanks!
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Galootius
on 1/20/2016 2:40:31 PM with a score of 29585
That was incredible
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— Sean on 1/20/2016 1:45:46 PM with a score of 33597
Incredible! I really enjoyed the story and I plan on many more read throughs!
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— Sean on 1/20/2016 10:50:26 AM with a score of 23967
An excellent story, and great writing. Probably the best text adventure I've found on this site, if not the whole internet. Played through it four or five times and finally got the best ending. Totally worth the time. Great job!
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— bananarama on 1/19/2016 10:03:23 PM with a score of 35727
It was pretty fun
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leegood
on 1/19/2016 2:31:27 PM with a score of 21075
Great story
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— Adi on 1/19/2016 11:50:56 AM with a score of 31967
Mauled to death by a giant dog. 8/8 would get mauled to death by giant dog again.
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— Steph on 1/19/2016 4:58:40 AM with a score of 22125
I really enjoyed the twists and turns and my unfortunate demise was something I had not expected but the first thing I thought of after shuffle and growl was oh S!@# This is a awesome adventure book and I would recommend it to anyone who wonders what an outbreak would be like.
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— NKB on 1/18/2016 8:11:56 AM with a score of 10180
I had way too much fun playing through this.
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Jak2016
on 1/17/2016 12:04:58 PM with a score of 32897
A better virus lore than most zombie stories and punishing consequences for bad choices. nice.
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unampho
on 1/16/2016 11:24:49 PM with a score of 21765
Really like the story line. Very in depth. Gives you a feeling of being the character himself.
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BlindEagle
on 1/16/2016 6:04:02 AM with a score of 38287
I been looking for something like this for a LONG time and i like how there are different zombie types love it keep up the work :)
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AtheistCat
on 1/15/2016 6:04:20 PM with a score of 23015
very addicting...
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— KoroSensei on 1/15/2016 5:30:52 PM with a score of 25925
wow. amazing.
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— wow on 1/13/2016 6:30:27 PM with a score of 26147
I have never put so many hours into any choose your own story. When the real zombie apocalypse does come around, I know what to do. That's author :)
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— Matt on 1/12/2016 9:41:21 PM with a score of 35747
Zombie fans should definitely read this awesome zombie survival. Great story and was a privilege to read.
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mclick9
on 1/12/2016 12:35:10 AM with a score of 36587
This was an exciting and interesting story! I got the second best ending. Didn't encounter all the special zombies, but that's what a second playthrough is for.
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Paint3rly
on 1/11/2016 1:47:59 PM with a score of 21425
I loved this story! It's really great, and gives you realistic options on surviving and making good decisions, as well as the ability to change your mind in some instances. The survival methods are spot on.
My only critique is that it does pander a bit to the heterosexual white male, and does contain some annoying tropes. Non-white individuals are identified as such while white individuals are not, or "white by default," which does not add anything to the story. The wife and some of the female characters (lunch ladies, teacher, the girls) all fall into the 'Damsel in Distress' trope, and the men are more capable (for the most part) than the women (but not in all instances). Slapping the wife when she's hysterical left a poor taste in my mouth, and the way the women all look to the men to be leaders was a bit cringe-worthy. And despite my never properly getting medical attention for my injuries, (yikes, that head wound!) my character still seems more capable and fearless than the female characters.
Nevertheless, the story and adventure was still fun, and the options you could choose from were interesting. Seeing as how I made it out alive the first time around and saved my family, I'm almost compelled to go back and try it again, making purposefully different choices to see what other outcomes may contain. I never tried the first door, or went anywhere near the bridge. I didn't try to jump the military vehicles, and almost every time I was in a fight-or-flight situation, I chose flight. So I'm very interested to go back and try again. What was that awful human-ish scream I heard from the parking garage? Should I have run down that giant creature? What about braving the pack of dogs to get medicine from the clinic? Would I have made it through the turnstile if I bum rushed those zombies? HOLY SHIT I WISH I CHOSE TO RIDE THE LAWNMOWER!
Overall, I really liked this story adventure. Were I to go through one like it again, I could do without the race-labeling and gender norm stereotypes, but those are minor issues.
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cxtx3
on 1/11/2016 4:00:59 AM with a score of 33837
it's fucking awesome!!!
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lemy
on 1/10/2016 11:28:28 PM with a score of 20075
i had a lot of fun at work so thanks for that :) also, there is a small inconsistency at the beginning when you choose to take the fire extinguisher but somehow end up with a crowbar instead :D however, if i'd find myself in a zombie apocalypse i don't think id be questioning it any further but just go with it instead. Good work!!
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tomtomtomtom
on 1/10/2016 7:59:19 AM with a score of 28947
pretty lit
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josed
on 1/10/2016 7:27:23 AM with a score of 30067
I just couldn't put this damn thing to rest. It was engrossing from the beginning until my death. The worldbuilding is incredible in this work and so is the depth of all the choices. I'm pretty sure I backtracked once or twice because I wanted to see another result.
Took about an hour to think over all the decisions and make sure I did everything right. That being said, however, I was kind of upset to get the ending I got. Kind of felt all that work went for naught. Guess that's the nature of these types of games, though.
Overall, very well written, very well executed in atmosphere, and rather daunting in most decisions. Even a zombie veteran like myself had a bit of a rough time choosing my path here. I give this masterpiece a 10/10.
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DeltaNine
on 1/10/2016 2:46:01 AM with a score of 17440
I couldn't stop reading it! There are so many possibilities and even though I got the best possible ending my first time I can't wait to go back and try other ones!
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— Menelwen on 1/9/2016 10:44:39 PM with a score of 38337
I was on the way back from a 13 hour car ride with nothing to do. This kept me occupied for the majority of it. Thanks!
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— Maddie on 1/9/2016 7:46:03 PM with a score of 32177
Cool story
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auburnate
on 1/9/2016 2:03:17 PM with a score of 18925
What a blast! Brings me back to those old Goosebumps books as a child that had multiple endings, except this one is on a much larger and more mature scale. This story was well-written and a lot of fun. Well worth your time!
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— ZeeGee on 1/9/2016 1:28:07 PM with a score of 32107
Amazing, a lot of time went into this.
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— Jon on 1/9/2016 11:57:25 AM with a score of 33347
Really well written, the choices seemed really well fleshed out and leaves a lot of freedom.
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— Jon on 1/9/2016 11:00:09 AM with a score of 8910
I survive by being really selfish and rational I think
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— unkn0wn on 1/9/2016 8:39:36 AM with a score of 7865
Really cool and very well put together. There is meaning behind each and every choice, making the adventure quite the riveting experience.
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— Zach on 1/9/2016 5:56:10 AM with a score of 9160
Hello Mr. Author! your choice game (I don't know what its called) is amazing! Of all the stories I've read so far, this is clearly the best in my book. Plus it also helped me improve my vocabulary. Swears and Curses were not included though, hahaha. Well I wish you good luck on your story making, I wish to read more of your stories preferibly the "zombie survival" type. Ok, see ya!
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JamesFinn
on 1/6/2016 10:14:24 PM with a score of 34327
Wow. Uhh... Not sure what to say. I got the best ending and even though I didn't read everything I still felt like I was the main character. Well done creator. You have made a fine game.
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Awesomeking31
on 1/3/2016 9:02:30 AM with a score of 34137
This is just i just play it
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— that guy on 12/29/2015 3:41:34 AM with a score of 25025
This is amazing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I told myself to only do a few choices, but I want to do this again! This is plainly the best thing ever! Thank you for making this!
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— Not Given on 12/20/2015 1:42:43 AM with a score of 6110
I loved it it was so fun seeing all the different endings
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meatboi123
on 12/20/2015 12:01:21 AM with a score of 16315
Good Good ??
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— Bailey on 12/12/2015 3:50:37 PM with a score of 10720
I loved it. Its great. There's quite a bit of cursing but I guess that's to be expected in a situation like this.
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— Hiccup on 12/7/2015 10:53:09 AM with a score of 33667
This text game was really well written. I like how even though I had finished my own path, I know I could always go back to discover some other different or diverse ending. Very impressive!
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YuuTart
on 12/7/2015 8:29:08 AM with a score of 20435
Seriously... I hope the information at the end was just rumours.
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— A on 12/6/2015 3:41:19 AM with a score of 25795
10/10 IGN
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— bobby on 12/6/2015 2:14:55 AM with a score of 30847
I made it!
I really enjoyed it, I like the descriptions of the places. And I actually fert that I was in a zombie apocalypse rather than some half-assed attempt at interactivity! Well done, BerkaZerka! :)
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jibberish
on 12/4/2015 6:25:19 AM with a score of 32777
I enjoyed this! I really loved the story and was so glad that the little boy Jacob was not a hinderance through the whole experience which made me fond of the boy. So happy that he didn't die for me!
Bravo on this!
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BloodyRose
on 11/26/2015 11:47:13 PM with a score of 41187
This is one of the best storygames on the site IMO. If you tell me this is anything less than 500000 words in total I will not believe you.
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igulat
on 11/26/2015 8:58:20 PM with a score of 36387
Another great game!
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TNTitan
on 11/25/2015 8:04:53 AM with a score of 33697
It was awesome
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— Jacob on 11/21/2015 10:59:51 PM with a score of 17375
I loved this game
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— Oscar on 11/21/2015 7:35:06 PM with a score of 1110
I liked it.
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Tsun_Adivinox
on 11/21/2015 12:38:44 PM with a score of 27537
No idea how I was infected.. Rip Jacob, rip Abby, rip the world
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— Ghost on 11/20/2015 1:58:05 PM with a score of 27525
Absolutely Lovely Storyline.
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Narcisstic_Ion
on 11/16/2015 9:25:22 PM with a score of 23965
Extremely fun, I don't really read to much but interactive works like these are great entertainment!
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g4m35t3r
on 11/16/2015 9:27:01 AM with a score of 24185
holy sh*t this is worth the time and that its DAMN WELL MADE if i was the president or something thats is a higher ranking officer i would commend the life out of you 5/5 f*cking stars
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— NGPFTW on 11/16/2015 8:16:20 AM with a score of 22775
It was fun, but theres a LOT of reading
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— ben on 11/15/2015 4:06:07 PM with a score of 8160
You were eaten by 213 zombies. Seems legit.
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— Zombie Fodder on 11/12/2015 9:27:38 PM with a score of 2260
Originally thought it was kind of bland, but after lying in bed with a few snacks and playing it a bit more thoroughly, now realized that this game was really well-developed! Enjoyed greatly, will be using this to kill time for awhile.
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— Student on 11/12/2015 8:14:01 PM with a score of 17485
I accomplished absolutely nothing but the death of 184 zombies and 2 cars. Awesome. One of the funnest things I've ever done on the internet.
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— Jabba The Hutt on 11/12/2015 1:27:28 PM with a score of 6060
A truly amazing storygame
I managed to get the ending where your wife dies but your daughters survive and you go on to rebuild, if anyone knows how to get the best ending then I'm all ears
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— Alex Horner on 11/12/2015 8:06:13 AM with a score of 19435
Here’s a rundown of how you did –
You Killed 116 Zombies
You Killed 0 Drooler Zombies
You Killed 0 Bloater Zombies
You Killed 0 Ghouls
You Killed 0 Banshees
You Killed 0 Hell Hounds
You Killed 0 Cannibal Gaunt Zombies
You Killed 1 People
You Saved 55 People (including yourself, unless you died)
You were eaten by 0 Zombies
Your Overall Score: 27307
(You played through 93 of 2,131 Pages and have proven to be a Rebuilder)
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TheBossWriter
on 11/10/2015 4:13:20 PM with a score of 27327
Tied for favorite with Dungeon Stompage.
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TheBossWriter
on 11/10/2015 1:31:47 PM with a score of 9610
brilliantly thought out.
10/10
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onehandbandit
on 11/8/2015 3:28:56 PM with a score of 19735
It could have given a few more options as to what you could do or even an inventory option making it more role play style with skill trees as to better give reasons as to why you'd do certain things maybe even a morality meter to gauge your choices even a leader board list to check your play style against others
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— Michael on 11/8/2015 7:02:41 AM with a score of 9110
Just Do It, All Zombie Survival Game Lovers, Do This Shet, Took Me Almost 5 Hours, Killed 110+ zombies,saved 59 people, killed a saliva dude zombie and a cannibal gaunt zombie
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Andreas
on 11/7/2015 10:29:51 AM with a score of 25825
very fun. Infinite possibilities.
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— J on 11/1/2015 2:31:58 PM with a score of 30137
Good
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Cjko2
on 11/1/2015 10:18:42 AM with a score of 4610
played it again and again!
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CharlieBoy
on 10/31/2015 12:57:35 PM with a score of 21575
Awesome! Really enjoyed this story game. Every page had me tensed in excitement and slight terror at what was yet to come.
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— T-Dawg on 10/31/2015 3:34:12 AM with a score of 22695
It's certainly a fun game and the choices available are more or less logical, unlike in some other games.
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marklir6
on 10/27/2015 5:52:52 AM with a score of 41067
I think that this is an extraordinary storyline no matter which part of it you end on. It was very creative and interesting from the start, really a gorgeous creation in its own. One of the top Zombie Apocalypse interactive novels I have played through. The only criticism I have is the spelling because of countless errors found throughout the story. Overall, great job BerkaZerka.
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sparky12345121p
on 10/23/2015 7:25:24 PM with a score of 18485
Simply awesome
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— Pg33 on 10/20/2015 2:35:58 AM with a score of 31807
A very good story . Worth playing and reading
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Scaffold
on 10/14/2015 2:34:28 PM with a score of 22985
This was one great story!
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— Some random guy on 10/13/2015 11:32:59 AM with a score of 17535
Oh my god, i finally found an amazing story, i loved it, i could not stop reading, it's a good thing i didnt run into the more terrible zombies, i rate 10 out of 10 :)
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— Daniel on 10/11/2015 12:27:26 AM with a score of 33317
Great job. Exciting to read and still entirely plausible courses of action and reasonable decision options.
Enjoyed it very much. Please write more interactive novels like this one!
Found the idea of the super-abominations a little too phantastic though, except for the hellhounds.
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— Mats on 10/8/2015 1:56:46 PM with a score of 34047
Very engrossing and well written!
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— Aaron on 10/5/2015 11:12:55 PM with a score of 31107
I'm pretty sure thi is a really, really old game. So this is less to say it's very well written, and altogether awesome, and more just to point out people are still finding it, and playing it and having fun.
Cheers, mate.
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— topter on 10/4/2015 6:23:35 AM with a score of 38677
10/10
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— Leo on 10/3/2015 3:18:33 PM with a score of 33737
Fantastic game if you make the right choices.
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— A fan on 10/2/2015 11:31:32 PM with a score of 35957
This was, as far as zombie apocalypse games go, AMAZING! I love things like this! However, I do wish we could customize the main character, it was a little weird to be called Greg...
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— Muarza on 10/1/2015 9:25:25 PM with a score of 38147
"Congratulations! You have not only survived the zombie apocalypse, but saved your entire family! If you hadn’t contracted (and now carry) the world’s most deadly virus along the way, this would have been the best possible ending..."
DAMMIT!
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Plaacchei
on 9/28/2015 10:26:13 PM with a score of 22765
Great story! R8 8 out of 8 M8
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sx2sparkplug
on 9/25/2015 9:18:39 AM with a score of 27775
Really excellent creation. I hope to be inspired and make a quality choose story of my own.
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Techies
on 9/24/2015 3:22:51 PM with a score of 37447
Wow. Just....wow.
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— Kiljaz on 9/20/2015 10:22:47 PM with a score of 27135
BEST. EVER!
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— ArtIsSmart on 9/18/2015 6:38:58 PM with a score of 18135
it was good make another one
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— Dylan on 9/18/2015 12:09:41 PM with a score of 21765
Masterful. If only every story online could be written with such forethought and complexity. I also appreciated the nearly flawless spelling and punctuation. Very good.
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— HyrulianHero on 9/15/2015 1:26:38 PM with a score of 22065
you have a written gift use more of it totally drew me in
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— awaystow3 on 9/11/2015 5:41:56 AM with a score of 18675
I survived and saved my family bro
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— Bob Bobson on 9/10/2015 9:54:38 PM with a score of 17565
IT'S SOO GOOD i keep saveing every 10 pages cuz i just wanna keep playing
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CharlieBoy
on 9/3/2015 12:47:54 PM with a score of 11260
Fun
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cre44
on 9/2/2015 7:44:26 PM with a score of 26975
Better than others:)
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Vanessa
on 8/24/2015 10:49:19 AM with a score of 1510
10 ouda 10
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Camzore
on 8/21/2015 10:42:35 AM with a score of 19625
awesome! and i survived! :D
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dettosauvage
on 8/19/2015 12:55:22 PM with a score of 20545
Awesome details and loads of fun.
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— survivor! on 8/18/2015 11:35:38 PM with a score of 34257
This is one of the first interactive novels I have ever experienced, but I have to assume that part of the reason people post these stories is to improve their writing. I will tailor my comment accordingly.
Praise first: I could not stop reading it. The vivid and expansive world captivates the reader's attention and (not unlike a ravening zombie) refuses to let go. BerkaZerka's exceedingly detailed and practical voice lays the world of the story before the reader like a blueprint, yet amid the practical descriptions are horrifying, frightening, and even tender moments which evoke the reader's emotions as their hopes are realized and/or shattered. The realization that one false move (just like an actual survival situation) could spell catastrophe kept me perpetually on the edge of my seat. BerkaZerka was only sometimes cruel, normally dishing out death and horror only to the deserving. This story was entertaining, and suspenseful; it divided its time equally between granting gratification which built my confidence and absolutely devastating me.
Now the criticism. Keep the above praise in mind as you read these notes:
My biggest issue with the story was the dialogue. Weak dialogue has the effect of breeding the reader's indifference toward the characters. Indifference means that the reader won't have an emotional response when the characters interact, succeed, fail, die, escape death, etc. Though the descriptions were captivating, the dialogue laid flat on the page. Dialogue is, of course, one of the most staggeringly difficult parts writing fiction. I have been told before to "Never let your characters say exactly what they are thinking." and I am afraid that BerkaZerka is badly guilty of this in the story.
Avoid using "thing" or "things" in your writing. I appreciate that the author is working to make the narrator's voice sound casual and authentic (and it comes across nicely throughout the story,) but "things" is just lazy writing.
Throughout the story the pacing felt strange to me. Some scenes or details would receive detail bordering on excessive, whereas other times the reader feels as though the story has lurched erratically forward. I realize that achieving consistency throughout 2000+ pages of adventure can be a difficult task, but it is something to be mindful of. One scene in particular (With the Arab and the Spaniard) comes to mind. I understand that you were working to include a camio, but the whole scene felt exceedingly detailed to no end. When demanding the reader's attention for such detail, take the opportunity to have some kind of literary impact or statement. This scene in particular leaves the reader scratching their head, unsatisfied.
My last point is on the subject of foreshadowing (the following is not a spoiler because it starts off in literally the opening scene). Throughout the story the foreshadowing was skillfully wielded and left me wondering who the mysterious figure could be and what it could mean for my adventure. It does what good foreshadowing should and adds to the suspense. This effect lasted until one of the characters I encountered in the story inexplicably BLURTED out an observation about it. This effectively shattered the spell of the otherwise-powerful sense of foreboding. This critique goes hand-in-hand with my previous comment about characters saying exactly what they mean. This obviously-forced attempt at foreshadowing was lazy and disappointing. I do not mean to sound harsh, but it is a pity to see such a chilling, effective literary tool squandered on a weak, one-line reminder to "Hey, remember to be scared of the ominous badness!"
There, I'm finished. I hope it is apparent that I give this advice (and criticism) out of a genuine desire to see this excellent writing become even better.
I recommend Dead Man Walking very highly. Its weaknesses were few enough as to allow me to enjoy the experience thoroughly. Genuine satisfaction, frustration, regret, sadness, and joy are sure indicators of a thorough, well constructed, and gripping tale.
Cheers, BerkaZerka.
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dueconsideration
on 8/18/2015 6:29:27 PM with a score of 25065
I've played through this game quite some times now, and I just happened to finish it today. Wow what a thrill ride. It was awesome to play such a detailed and branching zombie survival story. I like how the characters came together, the wife and the kids gave me some kinda hope and sense of responsibilites. I felt bad for those I could't save though, but I immensely enjoyed this game. Good luck on your new project and keep up the great quality.
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— John Cena Fan on 8/18/2015 1:09:30 PM with a score of 28075
Replayed this just to see how high of a score I could get--I think I did pretty well...
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MagmaArmor0
on 8/18/2015 2:14:38 AM with a score of 37797
I really enjoyed it. Kept me on the edge of my seat, and good emotional investment and suspense.
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greysonwolf
on 8/14/2015 10:53:21 AM with a score of 18515
The first story that I have participated in on this website, and the reason I will be remaining, having joined. A well-thought out story and plot line, and a great read for apocalypse survival lovers. Or, anyone.
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LittleOddStar
on 8/12/2015 6:47:01 AM with a score of 3080
Thoroughly enjoyed this game, well done!
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— Erik on 8/11/2015 5:44:32 PM with a score of 17710
Great fun with lots of depth got a terrible ending first time round after repeated deaths got best ending trust no one
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— Dan on 8/9/2015 5:45:41 PM with a score of 33497
Wooooooo, I got the best ending.very good game
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— Makoto on 8/8/2015 6:02:27 PM with a score of 36237
Alrighty, I just spent a majority of my morning playing this game and it really is amazing. The writing moves fluidly along the game's 2000+ pages and I deeply enioyed it. I managed to get the best ending and it really was a heart touching one. All in all, really good, immersive game here.
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DashingDeer
on 8/5/2015 11:18:47 PM with a score of 37687
Great work I really enjoyed it
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Kwhite
on 8/2/2015 11:40:28 PM with a score of 37447
This was great and I killed hours at work lol
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Sarae5x5
on 7/29/2015 2:28:01 PM with a score of 29545
best ending possible and it was a amasing game best game ever
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— darkmatter on 7/28/2015 12:30:06 AM with a score of 29637
Well written, great plot.
Best of all, Zombies.
Lotsa pages too.
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— tsukato on 7/27/2015 11:28:50 PM with a score of 21075
very well done and i got the best possible ending too :)
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— Kenny on 7/21/2015 8:43:21 PM with a score of 36777
This was one of the best I have ever played. Ever.
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— Christian on 7/19/2015 11:02:15 PM with a score of 34487
I stayed up all night, and through part of the next day reading this. It's very well written and I thoroughly enjoyed it. I recommend this to any zombie film or book fan.
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— Mr. Jackhuahua on 7/19/2015 10:41:07 PM with a score of 29287
Excellent. Only gone through 78 of over 2,000 pages but it still took me 2 hours at least. Noticed some grammar mistakes, some punctuation but 99.9% good. Some of the conversations were a bit cheesy (is that a good or a bad thing, I'm not sure). Really excellent language and really excellent descriptions. Lots of tension. I felt like I was gonna die every second page! Very good. Very, very good.
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— Brian on 7/14/2015 8:14:41 PM with a score of 27507
I don't know when this 'game' was made nor who made created this... but this was by far the best that I've ever played... and it was too shabby, although it may have not been the most perfect ending, it wasn't actually bad. Having been rescued and rescuing a handful of survivor and making a decent living until things work out in the end.
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— trololololo on 7/2/2015 6:28:25 PM with a score of 22545
I usually like theys choose your own adventure but this one was pretty boring so I chose a thing that I thought would kill my character
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— jc penny on 7/1/2015 2:13:34 PM with a score of 1210
One of my new favourites.
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adesola
on 6/24/2015 7:46:23 PM with a score of 37287
Hands down a fantastic game! Took me a couple of quick-save type back presses, but I managed to get the best ending without just spamming reloads! This is an incredible piece of work. Branching paths, almost no IMMEDIATE death choices. That's a big favorite of mine. I always like being able to recover from an unknowingly bad decision, rather than just facing a game over because I didn't fully understand the option. Bravo, all around!
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— Daniel on 6/24/2015 6:01:54 PM with a score of 31847
Best Ending!!!
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— Leon on 6/23/2015 11:34:16 PM with a score of 31447
Awesome
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Javeon159
on 6/19/2015 5:06:04 PM with a score of 22665
Good story so far. I'm very impressed and I know there is a lot of work behind it. I just finished one storyline and comparing my explored 76 pages to over 2000 written pages this is quite unbelievable.. I'm sure I'll try another way soon. Anyway it was difficult to start, since some of those texts are a bit of a large text, which is not bad at all but sometimes you just feel like you want to progress and find out what is coming after or whatever. Another point might be that there is almost no personalized character, despite of the choices I make. So you are a character having a given name, a given background, etc. It's fine for me one the one hand since when you read a book you have it that way too, but that would make it more - let's call it "dramatically", if something happens to you or the guys you meet or know, because you have some closer relationship to them that way, which was difficult to establish during the story, especially it means: 'you ...'. But on the other hand I can't emphasize it enough it is a master piece you created here (so far -- as I mentioned I haven't seen everything yet) and I don't know if it will ever be possible to find out all the ways and parts given.
Go on with that fabulous and remarkable work.
Best regards :)
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— PFR on 6/16/2015 10:17:00 PM with a score of 14535
Very well written...great job!
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Neven
on 6/16/2015 6:31:24 AM with a score of 36077
This story was amazing! There are so many decisions you had to make I think I got the best ending when i saved my family and the school. How come every time you die you see the dark figure.
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— Michael on 6/15/2015 10:20:31 PM with a score of 20965
Mate, thank you for this. I noticed maybe 2 grammar errors in the 133 pages I played through. But with excellent narrative I managed to save myself and a whole school of people from death. And at 5 am that makes me feel pretty damn good. Keep up the writing man cuz you are good at it.
Also. Just as a personal zombie aficionado...please....make more XD
I am gonna play through again. There were a few places where I was like....hmmm....but I honestly think I only died once due to stupidity. The other few were honest curiosity of what would happen lol...since i kinda knew Id die. And if i didnt i reverted anyhoo.
Welp, thanks again.
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NerosShadow
on 6/15/2015 5:03:32 AM with a score of 23175
cool awesome book/story
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— nate on 6/14/2015 7:08:59 PM with a score of 16675
Very entertaining, had me hooked the whole way through. Admittedly, I did go back every time something remotely happened to me, I'm fairly satisfied with the way it turned out.
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— Lucas on 6/14/2015 7:06:03 AM with a score of 27025
Really Love the depth of this game. It clearly took time and effort to craft it. I look forward to replaying it soon.
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Maugrim912
on 6/10/2015 11:59:27 PM with a score of 38477
Cool Game.
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Diamond2479
on 6/10/2015 11:12:00 PM with a score of 36047
This zombie survival story game was really well made out. There are a lot of options that are available, and this was probably one of the best ones I've ever played! I really found the 'go back' button, just to see different outcomes of a certain option. I was sad when the main character's wife died; I tried to prevent it, but guess she was suppose to die :( I really liked this zombie survival story, and hope you do another one!
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— Joseph A. on 6/5/2015 6:36:12 PM with a score of 16665
This was great pls make more try somwere to get founds a game like this would be good. Like the walking Dead but more diferenc in you desicions. Difereent linesd different people make it...
Kickstarter!!!!
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— Mex on 6/4/2015 2:00:51 PM with a score of 7860
Didn't like "my" inner monologue. How "I" was so critical of the doctor's methods. If that was really me, I would have been all for what the doctor was doing. Whatever it takes to find a cure. The protagonist's fears were unfounded. If I'm humanity's only hope for a cure, I know they're not going to kill me, unless I turn, in which case, I would want them to!
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— Imrah on 6/3/2015 2:38:22 AM with a score of 7910
fun stuff made me go back redo the quests
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NoSoulNoRegrets
on 6/1/2015 2:12:49 AM with a score of 31107
awesome game had to redo some decisions preety good
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— dom on 5/31/2015 7:22:40 AM with a score of 35837
I really enjoyed this, it is really impressive and intriguing I couldn't stop reading
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— David on 5/29/2015 3:44:37 AM with a score of 30217
What a relief to have the best possible ending!
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Sducusin
on 5/26/2015 6:11:53 PM with a score of 29847
It makes you feel like you can control your character but you don't....
You need to think a lot more than that , maybe you spend a great deal of time to do this but doesn't feel like it.
how come when fighting 2 zombies when instakilling the first one , the one who was crawling is suddenly clutching to your arm and biting you ? Felt like my character was already a fucking retard coupled with a severe case of trisomy 21.
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— Random on 5/16/2015 11:20:19 PM with a score of 2160
good
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acedevon
on 5/12/2015 1:28:45 PM with a score of 7765
Awesome story, going to go back and spend my school day figuring out all the possible scenarios.
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— Austin "Halfsack" Calvera on 5/12/2015 8:55:55 AM with a score of 19185
Got the best ending on the first try!
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Likeabos
on 5/11/2015 1:51:35 PM with a score of 5710
Fun and cool, can't stop playing!
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— Justice on 5/7/2015 9:24:43 PM with a score of 4610
Thats just amazing, love it so much! Good job! Just wow, I bet it took so much time just writing such detailed descriptions. Fantastic.
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— MM on 5/5/2015 9:24:10 PM with a score of 7920
Great Story, Had fun
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Mardio
on 5/1/2015 10:03:07 PM with a score of 33597
Awsome
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Dwhit30
on 5/1/2015 1:51:50 PM with a score of 1260
An incredible story of survival, as far as the written zombie category goes; this story can only be rivaled by perhaps world war Z but it is still superior in many ways. Thank you for such a wonderfully written story. Please write more.
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wearhound
on 4/30/2015 1:17:48 AM with a score of 39127
OMG BEST GAME EVER
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catlover11
on 4/27/2015 2:18:48 PM with a score of 17675
I like this story. Already get 1 of the good endin and ready to playing again.
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mwahaha
on 4/27/2015 1:13:05 PM with a score of 27025
Very good, the grammar and spelling are good, and it's fun. I got the 'Dead Man Walking' ending! I never encountered any of the other zombies, other than regulars.
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WizzyCat
on 4/27/2015 7:42:25 AM with a score of 8565
Loved it :))
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annaheree
on 4/26/2015 7:31:12 PM with a score of 23935
One of the best stories I've played through on the site so far.
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FoxDye08
on 4/26/2015 6:36:55 PM with a score of 35627
Such a great story! I saved my family, but got bit. I loved playing through this and recommend it for anyone
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— Stella on 4/26/2015 4:38:50 PM with a score of 20685
So I really liked the game, it's by far the best written and most detailed and just overall best zombie game I've played through on this site so far, nice job. However, there is one thing I'm confused about. I didn't get bitten by a zombie. The worst thing that happened to me was getting clawed by a hellhound. However regardless, the game still acted as if I had been bitten, and later I'm a carrier. I'm obviously going to replay it now to see if the problem persists, because I could be an idiot who just missed something and is therefore complaining about it. Hopefully I get the best ending this time though. Generally though, this game is pretty awesome. It'd be cool to get companion stories set in the same disaster, but in different parts of the city/country. Your writing is good and the story is engaging so I'd definitely play any other games like this. Awesome work :)
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pudgymuffins
on 4/21/2015 11:38:09 PM with a score of 21775
Awesome game! I only played a little of what is apparently a lot! Thanks for this awesome game.
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kylebucnner
on 4/18/2015 12:12:23 PM with a score of 14830
Good, just wish the crazy Swedish guy could fight you
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— meh on 4/12/2015 9:21:10 PM with a score of 25215
this was an amazing story and im sure you have made more but i am hoping you can make many, many more. thank you for creating this. it has changed m outlook on a few things and also on what to do in a zombie apocalypse.
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— Andrew on 4/10/2015 4:17:02 PM with a score of 18875
30897 is my final score. I've played through twice now, once a the year before last and the second time just now. I'm very curious to find out what the mysterious figure in black is all about but I just can't leave the guys wife to be raped by the convict. I gues that's a good sign for the writer. I see her as real enough to care about her well being and not as a stat or story point. Well done. Keep up the good work. I'd like to see him write an end of the world scenario without zombies, monsters or anything else supernatural at some point. That or a sprawling sci fi story about a smuggler, pirate or salvager. Someone for whom it makes sense to be alone. Anyway, great job and thanks for the good game.
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eanna
on 4/9/2015 7:51:24 PM with a score of 30907
I guess I didn't do too badly....
I really enjoyed this story! It was absolutely incredible.
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Creature
on 4/9/2015 4:31:51 AM with a score of 16315
Woohoo!! My third play through and I got the best possible ending! :D
(Spoilers)
Granted I only killed 3 zombies and only came across a single Hell-Hound and ran away, and killed a single human and a single drooler, but playing it safe worked out. I rescued everyone (I think) and had an awesome time. Still the greatest storygame I've played here. A must for any zombie apocalypse fans.
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Starky
on 4/7/2015 3:49:42 AM with a score of 32167
Enlightenment awaits. Now I just have to get further than 9 pages in... So detailed and gruesome! Gory and intriguing... I'll be adding this to my nightmares.
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Starky
on 4/6/2015 7:05:01 AM with a score of 1410
after 6 or 7 play I finally got best possible ending. Yaay! I kinda feels sorry though for what happen with Jacob. Would be nice if in the end we now about how other people survive from this. So far, i only found 3 way to survive, which is stay in precinct, stay in school, and go to the wilds. I wonder if there is another survive ending. ^^ For the maker of this story, good job. ^^
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geareint
on 4/5/2015 1:50:44 AM with a score of 30267
quite the experience!
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lvl80retpaladin
on 4/4/2015 2:04:48 PM with a score of 36027
I managed to get the best ending where I saved my entire family + a boy. I have already left a comment before, but I am going to leave another just to say how thoroughly I enjoyed this game!
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— Ralph Chen on 4/3/2015 4:49:15 AM with a score of 33977
This was an amazing experience. I found some spelling mistake here and there but it was relatively error free. I managed to survive without dying even once, but was devastated when I realized that I could have saved both my daughters. My end score was 7055.
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— Ralph Chen on 4/3/2015 1:01:04 AM with a score of 7065
I love this story so much you did a good job does anyone know how to make a inventory in the story you write
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greedyassassin
on 4/2/2015 5:20:17 PM with a score of 3010
The longest, mot interesting story I have ever read. But sort of sickening in a way....
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CrystalOfBloodclan
on 4/2/2015 3:25:12 PM with a score of 10780
Hey, I've come to this website through the Choice Of Games forums.
I've searched for other 'Choose your destiny' type of games, and I've found this masterpiece.
I always go back to this game(even after months/years!) whenever I feel bored, because there are just so many possibilities in this game, it really makes you wonder about what you should pick, and how does that action affects you and others.
There are so many pages, and I always reach like 200-300 page. There's just so many potential in this game, and it's impossible to explore it 100%.
It's beautifully written, and makes you replay it for like 100x times.
So, I'm really glad there are games like this out there on the Internetz as well. Thank you for the amazing experience!
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— Fam on 4/2/2015 10:11:19 AM with a score of 37987
The BEST zombie storygame I have ever played on this site!
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— Thecenturyman on 3/29/2015 9:14:50 PM with a score of 33067
I don't get it how do you play.
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brittany2143
on 3/26/2015 3:03:17 PM with a score of 1060
i like it
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shypunk
on 3/24/2015 10:11:10 PM with a score of 28227
One of the best text-games i've ever played
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— Lawrence on 3/23/2015 3:49:25 PM with a score of 21775
Honestly my favorite zombie game/quiz ever. I always come back to play! Hella job!
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— olliver on 3/21/2015 3:18:12 AM with a score of 29767
So great! Saved 60, including the fam! I love this game and applaud you, author!
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— Brad on 3/20/2015 7:50:30 PM with a score of 32647
Just played again saved the entire school. woot woot
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Grata
on 3/20/2015 8:15:19 AM with a score of 32157
killed self and child by hiding behind rail road ties. gg no re
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— Daniel Zed on 3/20/2015 6:16:07 AM with a score of 12860
One of the best zombie choose your story's that I've ever played. Well down. Now I just need to survive...
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— Brad Gilbert on 3/19/2015 9:11:00 PM with a score of 18510
This was great. Loved the pace, the virus (slow, then fast z's, the mutations, the shelf life) I had a blast going through this. Thanks!
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— Pete Rock on 3/18/2015 8:39:43 PM with a score of 24685
Omg this thing is amazing. But I sucked. I at least survived, and saved myself and my family, but everyone else died and I was bitten.
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— Maggie on 3/10/2015 10:49:47 AM with a score of 19035
9/10
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— harun on 3/10/2015 5:50:48 AM with a score of 33437
Awesome!
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Steelhide
on 3/9/2015 4:32:56 PM with a score of 37617
Jacob died but i finished the game at 94 pages and maneged to save my entire family along with about 40 people.
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Sparten116
on 3/9/2015 7:26:15 AM with a score of 27425
Cool,great game.
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on 3/6/2015 5:16:59 PM with a score of 27685
great game.Please make many games like these...enjoyed every moment
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blisstar
on 3/6/2015 8:13:35 AM with a score of 20375
It was a little too detailed, but overall well written.
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divinasofia
on 3/2/2015 8:45:02 PM with a score of 8465
This is amazing !!!
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wukuatzin
on 3/2/2015 10:07:35 AM with a score of 21315
Its quite a story! I must say it is engaging, but the seen where he calls his wife i kinda hoped to get an option like from the movie taken! :)
Pls make more good stories like this! I love playing them :)
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— stazz on 3/1/2015 1:47:49 PM with a score of 35697
I killed 102 zombies 1 hell hound and saved 61 people and I'm bit free awesome game please make another one!!
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— Livinlikrspartyyyyy on 3/1/2015 7:23:26 AM with a score of 34607
Here’s a rundown of how you did –
You Killed 10 Zombies
You Killed 0 Drooler Zombies
You Killed 0 Bloater Zombies
You Killed 0 Ghouls
You Killed 1 Banshees
You Killed 0 Hell Hounds
You Killed 0 Cannibal Gaunt Zombies
You Killed 2 People
You Saved 60 People (including yourself, unless you died)
You were eaten by 0 Zombies
Your Overall Score: 34797
(You played through 111 of 2,131 Pages and have proven to be a Rebuilder)
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gapaot
on 2/28/2015 7:59:17 PM with a score of 34807
Cool game survived with the teens my wife my kids and he little boy I now call my son! Thanks for making this story about mehhhh!!!
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— Greg and family on 2/28/2015 3:58:56 PM with a score of 32807
Just finished, what a story incredibly thought provoking at times where you're caught between some hard moral decisions but all in all a great story.Thank you :)
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— Tayyab on 2/27/2015 7:50:33 PM with a score of 32967
Awesome game can't wait to replay
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— tayyab on 2/27/2015 5:37:05 PM with a score of 10780
Very good story! I saved 59 people! ?? including my wife, only thing thats making me more interested are the different types of zombies i didnt encounter.
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— DakotaLee on 2/27/2015 1:13:54 AM with a score of 25297
A great book but I have not managed to find any ghoul zombies of that type.
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Fableheath
on 2/26/2015 10:25:19 AM with a score of 25535
This game is amazing with its in depth struggle of the Protagonist. This was really enjoyable, and I hope to see more games like this in the near future
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OwnFall
on 2/20/2015 12:26:15 PM with a score of 18165
I got the best possible ending. Saved 60 people, including my entire family and Jacob. Was a great story, enjoyed it a lot :)
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Kittycat102
on 2/19/2015 7:56:23 PM with a score of 48467
Very good.
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— Fableheath on 2/19/2015 4:34:52 PM with a score of 24535
It was very fun. I got the best possiible ending. Very long nd worth the playthrough.. Make more like this please!
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WaRDude999
on 2/16/2015 4:52:18 PM with a score of 33527
i killed my wife D:
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— john smith on 2/12/2015 2:05:16 PM with a score of 15375
well done
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JohnSmith1219
on 2/10/2015 6:41:26 PM with a score of 20245
I think this game had many notable components:
A) It was very descriptive and paints a good picture in the readers' heads.
B) Many characters to choose to save or kill which definitely thickens the plot.
C) Plenty of choices and allows you to really make your own story.
D) The choices are logical and make sense with the plot of the story.
This game is definitely one of the better ones out there. There's more to be said but I'd suggest you play it yourself. I recommend while playing this game, don't be afraid to explore all your options. Try not to skip anything or you'll miss some really scary scenes. Best of luck!
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— Leatrice on 2/2/2015 11:19:31 PM with a score of 27185
loved the game, if you want to play a game where not all the choices are clear right or wrong choices, then this is the game for you.
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gerrrit
on 2/2/2015 3:01:05 PM with a score of 17795
This was very interesting and I was left at a cliff hanger when I saw the virus was caused by a terrorist cell. I would like to maybe see a sequel! (If not already one)
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zombies1238
on 1/30/2015 3:21:16 PM with a score of 23485
awesome game! had a blast!
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wristclerk
on 1/29/2015 8:46:32 PM with a score of 37407
Good thing to pass time on :)
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DarkForse
on 1/29/2015 6:05:33 PM with a score of 27185
lmao I tried to kill myself and it took longer than I thought it would
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— DAzz on 1/26/2015 10:48:54 AM with a score of 2210
was great had to go back sooo often I kept dying XD but finest zombie text game yet
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— Mr. 1000 Deaths on 1/26/2015 9:23:24 AM with a score of 19585
p chill man
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samo
on 1/22/2015 5:15:16 PM with a score of 7610
Dope Game, No Doubt
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— Papa on 1/21/2015 2:05:47 AM with a score of 19785
That was the best story I've ever read. I had to kill my wife, but I saved my daughters and the remaining survivors in the school and went to the campsite
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— Michael on 1/19/2015 10:49:04 PM with a score of 17335
Amazing zombie survival story,
[[Spoilers]] though I noticed a few subplots which were left unanswered by the end of my first play-through: First, the ghost showing up at the end of each death. In retrospect it seems like a general CYOA mechanic with no bearing on the plot, but it deserves a mention. Second, the old lady who railed on about Greg owing medicine to treat the passive zombie. That said - before the explanatory epilogue - I'd suspected Greg's involvement in the virus considering the convenient amnesia and immunity, but I might be Tinfoil-Hatting this too hard. [[Spoilers]]
Word brick aside, here's a confident recommendation! 8/8
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Devol
on 1/18/2015 3:11:19 AM with a score of 26615
It was an amazing story and i'm writing this after my first play through. It was very well written and i will go through it again.
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— Frank on 1/15/2015 1:32:13 PM with a score of 19835
it was great ,make a sequal someday!
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survivor132
on 1/11/2015 7:38:04 AM with a score of 21935
it is awesome
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survivor132
on 1/11/2015 7:07:49 AM with a score of 1810
Epic.
'Nuff said.
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— Master_Debater on 1/9/2015 3:02:49 PM with a score of 40777
Cool game. Good pace but lots of reading. You should make a game with individual choices and items. A basis for that is the iPod game survival look into it
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— patrick on 1/3/2015 5:07:54 PM with a score of 21115
I have been playing for a few days, this is the most fun i have ever had with a story.
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— Rick on 1/3/2015 6:32:10 AM with a score of 33297
i love this game
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spine
on 1/1/2015 11:43:43 PM with a score of 24025
too long to read
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pisces15
on 12/31/2014 1:51:02 PM with a score of 1310
Great story, extremely well thought out and the choices are logical and realistic.
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— benno on 12/29/2014 7:59:47 PM with a score of 26495
This is probably the best interactive zombie survival adventure I have played so far on this site! Keep up all the amazing work you have done!
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— Anonymous on 12/25/2014 5:08:30 PM with a score of 37587
Amazing!
I got the ending where I survived with my daughters, and didn't get bit!
I recommend this game for everyone...unless you don't like reading...
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GrottyStatute74
on 12/20/2014 3:37:01 PM with a score of 16375
Amazing game, must of taking ages, very impressive.
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— Hungrykid11 on 12/16/2014 2:45:47 PM with a score of 19935
Best possible Ending !!
Please be in awe :D
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choumasamori
on 12/12/2014 3:17:33 AM with a score of 35797
This got ke through finals , amd then some , took me three days to beat , it was amazing
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— jacob greene on 12/11/2014 1:53:34 AM with a score of 16875
B3st G@m3 EVAR!!!!!
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— You on 12/7/2014 5:12:09 PM with a score of 37377
Awesome game, well written, Better than 'Better than Reeses Cups'
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— Me on 12/7/2014 4:01:27 PM with a score of 23885
This was a lot of fun! I meant to only start the story but got caught up and had to finish! After a couple of wrong turns I got the best possible ending with a score of 32867, killing 6 zombies, 1 hell hound and saving 60 people. I'm going to have to play a lot more though because I've seen less than 10% of the pages! Lots of fun, thanks for the awesome story :)
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DarkWandering
on 12/7/2014 8:16:18 AM with a score of 34887
20805, killed 28 regular zombies, and four special zombies. 3 people saved (my kids and myself), 3 people killed (don't remember who, but probably Lieutenant Falco, the guy who hated the lieutenant, and either the bathroom woman or my infected wife. I'm a Survivalist, apparently.
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— Kim on 12/6/2014 2:26:40 AM with a score of 20835
This was pretty fun over all. I might come back and see what other kinds of endings I could get if I chose other major decisions.
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FireGolem
on 12/4/2014 10:36:16 PM with a score of 24317
I felt like I've been in a Walking Dead movie! This story is so good and lengthy!
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chenliyong
on 12/3/2014 11:07:15 PM with a score of 22065
YES! I am THE Zombie Happy Meal!
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JDeath7
on 12/2/2014 8:40:55 PM with a score of 860
Very good
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— sonny on 12/2/2014 2:27:28 PM with a score of 1760
The Game was Awesome !
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Sayedmad1
on 11/27/2014 9:39:18 AM with a score of 33927
1st try and 1st death...I guess I wouldn't last that long if this was real :(
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— Mar1217 on 11/26/2014 2:20:35 PM with a score of 3260
this was so good one of the best stories on the site
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— the house master on 11/25/2014 9:12:38 PM with a score of 23967
A really great story with a lot of different twist, turns and choices. Great job, keep up the good work.
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Stein
on 11/25/2014 10:05:47 AM with a score of 25865
This is... Unexplainable
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spine
on 11/25/2014 12:00:07 AM with a score of 23475
Here’s a rundown of how you did –
You Killed 55 Zombies
You Killed 1 Drooler Zombies
You Killed 0 Bloater Zombies
You Killed 0 Ghouls
You Killed 0 Banshees
You Killed 1 Hell Houndss
You Killed 1 Cannibal Gaunt Zombies
You Killed 0 People
You Saved 59 People (including yourself, unless you died)
You were eaten by 0 Zombies
Your Overall Score: 23405
(You played through 134 of 2,131 Pages and have proven to be a Survivalist)
Pretty sure it should have been more than 55, I was keeping a tough tally on my writing pad, and I had around 120 in total. I didn't go back through any pages (couldn't find the button) and I nearly killed my wife when she tried to kiss me.
The drooler in the gas station made me think I'd died, and when I got swept into the river I thought it was all over within a matter of pages. But as you can tell by the fact I killed the HellHound, I made it to the vets and self-medicated. I would love it if you had left an option at the end for you to go through long, vigorous trials with high levels of danger, disabling the go back button for those than can find it, in order for you to eventually get to someone who can cure the virus that your saliva carries. But that's just me. I got bitten in the ankle in the train station at the start hahaha
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— Blake on 11/23/2014 10:00:36 PM with a score of 23425
I'll be honest. at first i avoided reading this story despite it being featured. this is mainly because most zombie Apocalypse stories have very little plot line. that said i'm impressed by this story. it is very descriptive and your grammatical errors are few and far in between.
SPOILER ALERT!
at first i was slightly perturbed about playing an already existing character. most of the time i like to play myself but as i went on i got a distinct video game feel from it. once i began thinking of it as such i really started to enjoy it.
when i reached the police station i was morally offended by the treatment of the people. i'm unsure how martial law works so i don't know if the scenario portrayed is actually possible but it is believable. i very upset to find they had taken my stuff but figured i'd get it back.
Jacob is awesome and a very believable kid. he is brave and relentless. i was proud to be his father figure. my wife Laura is awesome. i was totally expecting to have to save her but i didn't. MY WIFE BEAT THE SOB!
i saved the kids at the school and survived the storm. i only died four times. and went back two or three other times when i wasn't satisfied with my choice. i was bitten so unfortunately Greg can never kiss his wife again.
i liked the cameos but i gave up looking after awhile.
interesting thing about the rigor mortis.
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mokaevans
on 11/23/2014 1:02:57 AM with a score of 30995
Very detailed and very fun to play. Played it 3 times already.
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xkiller99
on 11/22/2014 7:31:27 PM with a score of 31057
This game was great I highly recommend that you play it
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— Jesse on 11/22/2014 2:41:21 PM with a score of 25125
Wicked game! Wish there was a phone App so i can play on the go
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— ahmad sayed on 11/21/2014 7:16:55 AM with a score of 2610
Amazing game. Simply amazing.
I got all the way to the end.
Saved 59 people, killed 90 zombies, killed one acidic zombie, killed one hellhound, and killed five people.
(Sadly including 'my' wife, and the kid)
But still-
beat the zombie apocalypse-
not bad.
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— Chaotix on 11/20/2014 11:16:34 AM with a score of 21115
I thought making games is easy... but you tried hard and you got 85 thousand players in two years... and this is not enough !
if i'm gonna make something and work on it for 100 hrs it should at least make one hundred thousand players at least...
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loqman
on 11/19/2014 7:21:33 AM with a score of 31797
This was a grand adventure, I plan on revisiting this every once in a while to see how I could do things differently. Please, make more. Your work is a blessing to read. Though I think you should also do a female survival story, just to make things a little more diverse.
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— Jesse on 11/18/2014 8:00:22 AM with a score of 19925
Really great story ******SPOILER*******
I died on the vet part with the 'Hell Hound' lOl made me laugh so hard, this game will give you hours of fun and also
Just a tip- ALWAYS take the safe option eg: look through the windows first / check out the area / wait for day:) Hope you have great fun all and good luck-You will need it
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Bompey
on 11/14/2014 5:37:56 PM with a score of 21025
Im in love with this story with every decision I made. Ill even start a new game and see where itll lead me this time.
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— Cpt BlueMustard on 11/12/2014 8:53:06 PM with a score of 36487
Thanks for such a well thought out and challenging game, really enjoyed the content and fortunately got the best ending! Now off to try again and will definitely pass onto friends! Keep up the fun enjoyable series and I will definitely try any more you have!
All the best,
Daniel
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— Daniel on 11/11/2014 10:51:12 AM with a score of 32997
This was seriously amazing. I can't wait to play again and make different choice. Absolutely great work.
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— Alex on 11/11/2014 5:32:19 AM with a score of 23325
Fantastic had me hooked right the way through. It had me caring for characters and wanting to save as many people as I could as I felt an almost genuine connection to them.
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xMio
on 11/10/2014 2:23:10 PM with a score of 34347
This was a great story! I really enjoyed the how it played out and how much detail and time was put into it. I will be playing this again sometime!
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— Isaac on 11/8/2014 10:02:19 AM with a score of 22415
I've played lots of text games, and i have to say this one is amazing. Every bit of the story is intriguing. I haven't played all 2000 of those pages, but i was satisfied with the ending i worked my way to. If you haven't tried this yet, do it...you wont regret it!
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somecallmerory
on 11/7/2014 7:05:40 AM with a score of 34677
The story is quite well written, and most of the choices and their consequences make sense to me. One minor area which may be improved is the usage of items, especially the different uses of different guns. I understand that in realistic post-apocalyptic situations most intelligent decisions will minimize the chance for conflicts, and the timeframe of the story does not include the latter stages, when civilization is partly rebuilt and there might be intra-faction conflict and hence the need for self-defense. I gave a 8 for this not only for the story(which deserves a 8 on its own) but also for the effort. Please keep up the good work.
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cavalier
on 11/6/2014 3:38:17 AM with a score of 33647
I liked it
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— jacob on 11/3/2014 2:11:27 PM with a score of 8115
Thanks great game
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— Jason on 11/1/2014 5:27:10 PM with a score of 31427
awesome detail and plot.
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— Guest on 11/1/2014 4:33:22 AM with a score of 31727
seriously nice^^
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killertype10
on 10/27/2014 8:19:02 AM with a score of 38617
Great game!
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chowcrunch
on 10/26/2014 10:34:31 PM with a score of 39707
Good game, that I only have one complaint about; why wasn't it longer;)
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— rebuilder on 10/19/2014 10:26:37 AM with a score of 32477
Amazing story keep up the good work.
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— shothottie on 10/14/2014 10:44:33 PM with a score of 19475
Never normally read but couldn't stop reading this definitely be reading again with different choices
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joeweir187
on 10/14/2014 4:20:31 PM with a score of 21345
This game is pretty interesting, it has different types of mutations, even hell hounds! This game is quite different from others, you start in a subway while most stories may start in the characters' home or a hospital.
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— :P on 10/14/2014 11:10:03 AM with a score of 2210
Great read and fun the whole way through. Not too many typos. I felt Greg only broke character once abandoning his usual caution and receiving a bite. Well worth the time.
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Doddsje
on 10/12/2014 6:24:21 PM with a score of 32107
Brilliant! Even more fun than playing games like resident evil or the last of us. I would be delighted if you have any more to send me the links to play. My appetite has been wet like a zombies first taste of brains.
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— John on 10/12/2014 7:50:16 AM with a score of 24725
This was sooo much fun. Took me a few days. Turns out i a survivalist and my score was 19,155. Every page was worth it and so was each decision. some of these pages are truly dark and depressing butthats what adds so much to the greatness of the story. Great work 10/10 :)
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— Eric on 10/8/2014 10:43:17 AM with a score of 19175
I absolutely loved it, and I'm going to play again right now. It is very well thought out and detailed and the length is great. Most of the stories I have read here end just when they are starting to get good, while this one keeps rolling along with more action around every corner. Very entertaining!
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Sammy5mc
on 10/6/2014 8:29:13 PM with a score of 38967
Absolutely fantastic. I didn't get past the subway section of the interactive fiction, but damn did I enjoy it.
Time to replay and see the different outcomes!
It's beautifully written and wasn't boring, not by a long shot.
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y0ung3r
on 10/4/2014 6:49:38 PM with a score of 1910
This is so much fun i can't sleep so i stay up till three in the morning playing this and have gotten so many shocks from it. I love it and want to play until i get every ending. I was very surprised at the fact that i couldn't find a way to the police without dying until i got in and then got shot in the face.
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— logan bera on 10/3/2014 2:12:39 PM with a score of 23175
Well put together, and very much thought out. Lots of twists and turns, and quite a few unexpected traps. I even learned a few good things here--also, please remind me never to buy a barrel lock for my mountain bike.XD
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AJPisterzi
on 10/3/2014 11:48:02 AM with a score of 32857
Your game is seriously great!
Out of the entire game I only saw a couple spelling errors.
And the story telling and detail is breath taking!
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— jessie on 9/29/2014 6:59:47 PM with a score of 20275
this really was a great game i got the best possible ending (after a couple attempts) but i still only played through a fraction of the story. it really is worth playing.
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waldo
on 9/27/2014 12:56:21 AM with a score of 26427
Well written, best text-based adventure game I've played! could actually make a good bit of money off of it if you were able to get it sold in a game form, maybe some pictures to go with it.
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sordemarusai
on 9/23/2014 9:01:18 PM with a score of 33347
Decent :/
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deathkid8741
on 9/21/2014 5:36:12 PM with a score of 29895
Amazing. Absolutely amazing, start to finish.
I got the second-best ending, forgot my score, and killed 18 zombies and 1 monster dog thing. Saved Jacob, my wife, and the kids, and only Dave died in the school-bus deal.
Made camp, lasted to the end. Army saved us! Yay! Only downside: I'm still a carrier. Aww.
Good job, dude, you rock. 10/10.
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— TBForge on 9/20/2014 12:43:26 AM with a score of 25775
wow. awsome game
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bandit8768
on 9/19/2014 12:14:53 AM with a score of 17585
Best story ever has a lot of detail,and is really great. I just finished it and got 32,684 as my score. I also received the best ending, if you cared. Its simple enough just follow your heart and read the writing carefully. :D
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Kirby
on 9/18/2014 12:47:13 AM with a score of 32427
this thing awesome
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— chloe on 9/16/2014 8:09:29 PM with a score of 2260
I just wanna know, was there any way to save jacob? I loved that character :P
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RedHawk007
on 9/11/2014 10:59:33 AM with a score of 26435
Wow. I had thouroughly enjoyed every minute of this game. I am playing it again just to see different endings and try new things. Very well done, Sir!
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CobaltBlaze
on 9/9/2014 10:47:13 AM with a score of 33757
boring needs more options with shorter readings
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— derp on 9/7/2014 3:08:29 PM with a score of 1110
Amassing story. I love your take on infection, the whole part with him being a carrier and inadvertently killing the others almost brought me to tears.
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— Jacob s. Mills on 9/7/2014 2:54:19 AM with a score of 19635
i was surprised at the level of depth that this game has. plus i go the best ending!
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— jason x on 9/4/2014 3:36:58 PM with a score of 30777
The ending could use more work other than that it was great
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— j on 8/31/2014 9:44:17 PM with a score of 22475
I absolutely loved it, you actually choose sensible reasoning that anyone would do in case of an apocalypse. I'm sad I died, but I love the story of this adventure.
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— Zach on 8/29/2014 10:12:53 PM with a score of 19360
Great game! I cheated a lot by backing out of choices after I screwed up. There is definitely a lot of replay value in this game. There are literally large sections of the game I didn't even see on my two times through. First time through I got a good ending just by not being stupid, and the second time through I knew to watch out for certain things that saved me from poisoning my wife or the little boy with the contagion--managed to save my entire family, the boy, my two girls, and everyone at the school! Not sure about playing through again though because I know I got the best ending and I am sure the other endings would be rather depressing. Great game! Almost as good as Zombie Exodus!
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— Lawrence on 8/29/2014 3:03:06 PM with a score of 35517
I had a lot of fun playing this. At times had me choose knowing any decision could be the death of me or others around me. I do admit to going back and trying other options if I or others died several times but still few and far apart. In the end I managed to come out of it with the best possible ending (according to the game) and with a score of 37007, saving my hole family and 55 other people (60 including me), and only found 9 of the cameos. I'd say a good run ether way.
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— Zombielover247 on 8/24/2014 8:19:33 PM with a score of 36987
its pretty fun but you should have less reading because then i just get bored and pick randomly
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— zapper on 8/24/2014 8:30:57 AM with a score of 1710
well i diddent get vary far but from what i saw it was better than most. you have to resort to these ones without grafix because nobody puts the effort into anything story wise unless they soley devote to it. and these are easyer games to make so you can just put your ideas down. the one negitive thing i have to say is that you were a little too wordy for my taste
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— apsoy on 8/23/2014 11:30:29 PM with a score of 4410
Awesome game, a must play for any zombie fan
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subwooper
on 8/23/2014 2:02:26 PM with a score of 24985
amazeing i only git through 16 pages but i loved it you need to become an author right away i cant even explain it, it was phenomenal
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— mia on 8/23/2014 12:23:12 PM with a score of 1910
i really loved the game.. I ve never played anyother text based rpg games before this is my first.
Great work !!!
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— phoenix on 8/22/2014 9:20:04 AM with a score of 32807
this is the BEST text based zombie game i have ever played!!!!
not only was it fun it was realistic (given i only got through 43 pages). i would recommend this everybody on earth. I will keep playing this until i win. and then when i win i will watch my friends play this and laugh as they die time after time. THANKS FOR MAKING THIS GAME!!!!!!!!!!!!
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— isaac on 8/18/2014 9:33:02 PM with a score of 7310
Extremely well written & imersive with the detailed descriptions of the surroundings. I'd recommend anyone who likes zombie survival genre to play/read this.
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— jag on 8/16/2014 7:00:36 PM with a score of 25895
Absolutely love this story! It kept my attention the whole time and I replayed it many times to get different endings and try to save as many people as possible. This is my favorite zombie survival story because it includes children and the possibility to try and save them, which most stories/games don't incorporate.
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— Sean on 8/15/2014 1:09:00 AM with a score of 32687
The most amazing storygame ever !!!
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FistOfJustice
on 8/14/2014 6:58:50 AM with a score of 38707
Holy crap is this game good
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— Ruark on 8/12/2014 4:08:57 AM with a score of 36377
awesome! loved it. great story line and very good options throughout the story line!
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KarateTime
on 8/11/2014 4:35:39 PM with a score of 23725
Very good game to play through and so many options about a 2 hour story great over all
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— Billy on 8/10/2014 6:21:56 PM with a score of 27827
not my thing
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— kelsey on 8/10/2014 3:17:23 PM with a score of 2610
This is an absolutely amazing adventure from start to finish, completely enthralling me. Hell, I was sad when it ended (though I was happy for Greg and his family). My only complaint was that there was a spelling error here and there, but not so many that it effected the experience in any way. I can absolutely see this being turned into a Tell-Tale style video game (like The Walking Dead: The Game), or even an interactive YouTube series. Damn good work.
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KRD2
on 8/9/2014 12:18:17 AM with a score of 27835
Loved it. I couldn't put it down. Took me forever to get all the way through it. ( which I loved) plus I got the best ending I was so happy. Very good story. Now I have to get everyone I know to play it. To see how well they do.
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— Leslie on 8/7/2014 4:09:55 AM with a score of 38527
I was floored by the sheer amount of options this game presented me at every turn. I never got the feeling of being railroaded towards any specific outcome - almost everything I could think of doing in a given situation was open as an option, and even a few that I wouldn't have thought of were presented as well. The fact that the protagonist Greg is both intelligent and resourceful makes this game a joy to play through, with the added bonus of being able to avert the common zombie movie mistakes through caution and clever planning. If that wasn't enough to enjoy, the cameos were a load of fun to find and the subtle humor sprinkled throughout prevented the story from ever becoming too bleak. All in all, it had incredible atmosphere and cohesiveness. I don't think I found a single grammatical or spelling error throughout the entire game. Incredible, incredible work - most definitely one of the best games on this site.
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the_quiller
on 8/4/2014 5:10:33 PM with a score of 25377
Hella fun, got addicted immediately
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akraider47
on 8/4/2014 2:30:15 AM with a score of 40227
This game was good, but if you are looking for a game full of suspense, than this probably is not for you.
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— Gameguy on 8/1/2014 1:21:50 PM with a score of 21125
One of the best ones out there. Good on you
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Aptiva
on 7/30/2014 12:25:16 AM with a score of 22595
Even though I made horrible choices in the game I'll still try again, It's really fun.
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— Dyleano on 7/27/2014 8:44:33 PM with a score of 2860
Your Overall Score: 38507
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h0rg0ny
on 7/27/2014 2:28:37 PM with a score of 38567
Like it i play it every day
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Alex71
on 7/26/2014 10:21:33 PM with a score of 17575
I enjoyed this story all the way. Though there were moments in the story when I had trouble choosing what the right thing to do was. I liked the story all and all. But I did find myself correcting a few mistakes, other than that the story was AMAZING
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link8227
on 7/26/2014 1:46:39 PM with a score of 19345
Awesome! best story I've read thus far.
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— Paris on 7/25/2014 5:15:13 PM with a score of 29587
It is really awesome. One of the best text based story games out there, the emotional setting and combat not being a necessity makes it stand out from the many zombie apocalypse stories and games. Lots of intertwined storylines and a sheer scope of replayabilty is a great advantage. There are many choices in the game and it is worth multiple replays to get them all. Many thanks to the author for this amazing work!
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MartinCD
on 7/25/2014 4:48:59 PM with a score of 24875
Great game the best one on here without a doubt.
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— Shadowhawk on 7/22/2014 10:05:59 PM with a score of 1460
Excellent game, very extensive choices, and a truly awesome storyline :)
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crsc3110
on 7/21/2014 4:11:55 PM with a score of 25735
You got this feel that whoever plays this and actually survive a zombie outbreak will have a higher chance of retaining (or even gaining) his or her humanity. Good job!
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granzteel
on 7/21/2014 1:04:47 PM with a score of 38527
"Well, at least you found your wife" Me telling Griggs of his good work
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granzteel
on 7/21/2014 12:07:37 AM with a score of 3490
this game was very interesting and i loved it. one thing that was great about the game is that the choices were not far fetched and were perfect for describing the state of fear. I might even play again to find out the other endings.
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ty221997
on 7/20/2014 4:39:32 AM with a score of 32667
A brilliant story. Clearly the author put a lot of time and work into building it. I really enjoyed the adventure!
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— Jeremy on 7/18/2014 1:25:50 PM with a score of 36277
Really entertaining. Def worth the time to checkout/play. I applaud you on this on, Berka. Great job!
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— Fazz on 7/14/2014 12:40:46 AM with a score of 1760
Its a great story just great you should make a 2nd one.
sincerly, 24freddy
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24freddy
on 7/12/2014 10:19:44 PM with a score of 21785
I got 33227! It was an altogether great game that in my opinion is a mix of The Walking Dead and World War Z(the book, not the movie.) I give it an 8 out of 8 due to two things-my love of post-apocalyptic things and the great storywriting! I couldn't have asked for a better game.
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— Drew on 7/11/2014 3:34:52 PM with a score of 33267
Pretty good
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Fenner
on 7/11/2014 5:59:08 AM with a score of 37847
I had a lot of fun playing this. It certainly killed time in a good, entertaining way :)
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— Noah on 7/11/2014 12:14:25 AM with a score of 3760
Just amazing
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— Peter on 7/9/2014 4:40:24 PM with a score of 37587
I really enjoyed it!
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— Chelsea on 7/6/2014 5:17:17 PM with a score of 9360
Very nice progression and pacing. Thoroughly enjoyed every page!
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— Sverre Clarke on 7/6/2014 3:18:11 PM with a score of 36447
It was pretty good, i just died really early lol
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— Alex on 7/2/2014 10:46:19 PM with a score of 2610
Wow that was a relly good en relistic game i wish tho that i could survive longer tried playing 3 times and die around the 100 page but still great game
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— Jason on 7/2/2014 2:58:30 PM with a score of 19660
I win suck it! 8/8 I win I win!!!! woohoooooo it took me a whole freaking week wooooooooo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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hunterthemadman
on 7/1/2014 12:54:17 AM with a score of 18115
I survived but let my family die, I'd like to feel worse about it, but, it was the prudent thing to do.
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— Alashion on 6/30/2014 9:51:41 PM with a score of 8965
I would have liked to have been able to customize my character a little but besides that the game was great - it didn't feel rushed at all and the realism in certain parts was really immersive
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Atlas47
on 6/29/2014 6:45:43 AM with a score of 20965
That was a really cool game, though I only went through a small fraction of it(130 pgs out of, what was it, 2000+ pgs?). I noticed no spelling errors (witch is quite a feat with how many pages there are). It is definitely a 8/8, and I somehow managed to get the best ending. >.<
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TacocaT
on 6/25/2014 7:02:24 PM with a score of 38547
its great and worth atry.
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— austin on 6/24/2014 5:04:43 PM with a score of 9410
Freaked out every time I saw END in red words. Fun game.
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EvangelineV
on 6/23/2014 10:30:16 PM with a score of 34367
It was hard getting past the convict but i did it!
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Spottedfire48
on 6/23/2014 1:11:32 AM with a score of 19065
First story I've read on the website, and damn, it was a good one at that. If it were a real book, I would actually have payed for that!
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A_Time_Lord
on 6/22/2014 4:43:00 PM with a score of 19710
Best thing ever.
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— Jack Danish on 6/14/2014 8:01:50 AM with a score of 16165
the game was fun but unrealistic at some parts.
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— jynx on 6/13/2014 3:54:40 PM with a score of 9610
Darn hard! But enjoyable
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Apophis
on 6/12/2014 2:22:36 PM with a score of 15630
Very good story I see that you took your
time with this well its 2:05 am but I'm mor than happy to have spended it playing this awesome story I thank you for the good time goodbye and god bless
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— Some Dude on 6/11/2014 3:06:24 AM with a score of 34157
This interactive story is one of THE best i have ever played. To the author: I highly suggest you go on from this to either write normal books or even more like these, and definitely make it a paid version, i would pay dearly for something as good as this.
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— Benjamin Goodgame on 6/9/2014 2:44:49 PM with a score of 25935
Great Story!!!! Loved It!
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MythSkies
on 6/9/2014 9:46:34 AM with a score of 12080
I'm going to finish the rest of this later...this is really really really long. 2000 pages? Dam. You should make it so people know how many links they clicked at the end of the story.
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nmelssx
on 6/8/2014 11:40:41 AM with a score of 2660
ummm yeah.. two days of fun! I disliked my lack of options in some situations but one the best I've read!
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notsosoutherngirl
on 6/6/2014 8:46:19 PM with a score of 24925
fun times. Could use an inventory GUI to show you what exactly you have since it gets pretty confusing.
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atatatat4
on 6/4/2014 10:25:33 PM with a score of 23115
it is a very good interactive zombie game and a must lay game
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— liam towns on 6/4/2014 5:07:58 PM with a score of 7515
neat game
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Enigma
on 6/4/2014 7:27:44 AM with a score of 20535
One of the best zombiegames since long
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— Lawrence on 5/28/2014 1:37:20 AM with a score of 18075
Plenty of branching options. Nice story. Very interactive. 7/8.
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jamescoker1226
on 5/26/2014 9:53:05 AM with a score of 29077
Realist zombie scenario
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— H on 5/26/2014 1:44:53 AM with a score of 35537
This isnt a bad thing though but i just couldnt get myself to think that it's all over , maybe it was for the best and i did manage to kill two days of my time reading and surviving all in my mind .. I just wish i could have made more choices that would not make me dead .. And a zombie virus carrier .. It was good .. Make more good stuffs author , ill be following your works now ..
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jesseallankim
on 5/24/2014 1:51:48 PM with a score of 25395
I survived! Saved 61 people with my family surving too! Woo!
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— carl spiller on 5/20/2014 1:42:14 PM with a score of 29797
Awesome!
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Kaiju
on 5/19/2014 4:08:41 PM with a score of 23675
This was great! I cannot wait to play it again, and to explore the rest of the site.
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— Kathy on 5/16/2014 2:11:39 AM with a score of 20960
Man the choices are really set up to make you think and strategize your next move accordingly. Really fun game that takes at least a couple hours to see through to the end.
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N7Jennings
on 5/15/2014 2:22:05 AM with a score of 38567
You Killed 18 Zombies
You Killed 0 Drooler Zombies
You Killed 0 Bloater Zombies
You Killed 0 Ghouls
You Killed 0 Banshees
You Killed 0 Hell Hounds
You Killed 0 Cannibal Gaunt Zombies
You Killed 1 People
You Saved 5 People (including yourself, unless you died)
You were eaten by 0 Zombies
Your Overall Score: 35147
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Tsjilpiep
on 5/10/2014 1:39:14 PM with a score of 35187
You Killed 31 Zombies
You Killed 0 Drooler Zombies
You Killed 0 Bloater Zombies
You Killed 1 Ghouls
You Killed 0 Banshees
You Killed 1 Hell Hounds
You Killed 0 Cannibal Gaunt Zombies
You Killed 0 People
You Saved 60 People (including yourself, unless you died)
You were eaten by 0 Zombies
Your Overall Score: 38927
(You played through 127 of 2,131 Pages and have proven to be a Rebuilder)
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jack1989
on 5/7/2014 5:07:59 PM with a score of 38947
1>I have tried to get all the mutant zombies but can't get both the Drooler and Banshees if you get one you miss the other.
2>Is there a way to kill the bloater and drooler without getting infected.
Other than this enjoyed it and tried a few times to get all the mutant zombies
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jack1989
on 5/7/2014 4:22:06 PM with a score of 8710
just make story shorter
you wasted a lot of paper ! you could concentrate on a line of story that depends on choices and more fun though
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— dude on 5/6/2014 10:11:02 AM with a score of 30677
you did a lot of ditracting stuff on the story. but it was a good logical game though
you need to make a line of story and stick players on it somehow cleverly without loosing the reality of choices
you almost took your speed on writing and trying to have all consequences determined but you did the real enjoying part weakly. did you saw the zombie exodus.
that was a better game than it. and it tried to stick on somethin
but your game was cool though
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— greg on 5/6/2014 6:22:56 AM with a score of 33277
Very cool and cleverly written. Although I got the best possible ending, I'll go back and try other ways to succeed
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— LJ on 5/5/2014 11:26:03 AM with a score of 31197
I've played several times and I can't figure out how to find the shadow man conyrolling the zombies.
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Yellowfellow
on 5/5/2014 8:16:03 AM with a score of 26407
This is a really good story and took me a great many attempts to achieve an acceptable progression. If your a zombie fan this will test you under a very specific situation.
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— Rob Rebuilder on 5/4/2014 5:09:57 AM with a score of 38637
Very entertaining! Wish I could have played more.
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JayEz
on 4/24/2014 6:10:03 AM with a score of 32125
that was.....awesome!
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JonaLeth
on 4/22/2014 12:58:19 PM with a score of 26325
Arguably the best game on the site- multiple choices per page, each with real impact on the story. Actual branches, instead of simplistic "Choose A to die, B to live" structure. Relatable protagonist who as good motivations and morality that can be determined by the player. Overall, the best story I've read on this site and one of the best zombie survival stories I've seen period.
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— DC on 4/12/2014 11:31:46 PM with a score of 34907
Hey,
I just thought that this was a very well-written story. It had the right amount of details that I was able to really immerse myself in the text and connect to the characters (especially the guy you play as). That is usually and can be a very hard thing to come by. I was intrigued to play this after playing "The Last of Us" (a zombie-apocalypse game as well) where I was so deeply immersed in the game and attached to the characters. I also found myself anxious to find out what came next so often, I just wanted to skim through the text to find out what choices I had. However the author does a great job on not spoiling what happens exactly (but either way, the text was too interesting to skip). Koodos to this author on doing a great job with intense action, realistic and fun choices to make, detailed story-telling and overall a phenomenal experience. I personally never read books; I can't sit still long enough to read something. But this was good enough to really hold my attention and enjoy it. I encourage people to play it, but I also encourage the author to make more stories (especially zombie survivals). Even if it wasn't a zombie survival story, I'd still read it. Sorry for such a long comment, but man this was a great experience!
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ThePreacher
on 4/6/2014 2:20:36 AM with a score of 22715
Amazing! A very fun, extremely open-ended thriller! Kept me playing all-night long!
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Kaiju
on 4/3/2014 5:53:43 PM with a score of 21385
Good game. It was hard, but then so is the zombie apocalypse. I dunno if it was totally fair, but it was as fair as life.
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BurningPen
on 4/1/2014 3:12:19 PM with a score of 16380
Good game.
Although some moments disappoint (woman at first building, church, school complex, acid undead, demon dog to name a few).
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DanMasterson90
on 3/27/2014 12:15:43 PM with a score of 36787
awesome details great story
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demongod11
on 3/19/2014 9:29:58 AM with a score of 28115
Wonderful game. Played it on and off for 3 months
Now. Are u gunna make diffrent game styles?
Like vampire, or mayb a guy stranded on a desert
Island? :) would b fun.
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— keirebu on 3/15/2014 3:30:54 AM with a score of 34327
This is probably one of the best storrygames on the site. Impeccably done, this is a work of art. I got the best ending possible. Yay. I saved 60
people all up, killed 29 Zs, and I got through With no bites. 8/8.
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— Will Sim on 3/12/2014 8:33:20 PM with a score of 33557
I cannot see my score, but I think it's alright.
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EarthCollision
on 3/7/2014 1:50:35 PM with a score of 19775
Word of advice to anyone who plays this game, kill zombies as a last resort.
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S_Blur
on 3/5/2014 1:46:05 PM with a score of 22885
The story is superb and expansive. It is a joy to play. However, given that so many paths lead to death, I'm surprised that there is no way to start back from check points as opposed to playing all over again. While I understand the strive for realism, i find it extremely frustrating that I have to replay everything if I want to try a single path diversion and explore another part of the game, all the while unknowing whether that path would lead to instant death and send me all the way back. If you can't implement a checkpoint feature with this site, please consider alternative writing tools, or even contacting a company that specializes in this kind of game, such as "choiceofgames" . They make superb zombie games and I'm sure they would do you justice
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— Ethan u on 3/4/2014 10:57:50 AM with a score of 8860
I said Slightly better than homework because I REALLY like doing homework
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RabbitKit
on 3/3/2014 7:58:18 PM with a score of 1660
Great story, I guess I made all the right choices though, so I did find it to be shorter than I was hoping for. It's a really great story regardless. Give it a try.
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— Lucky on 3/3/2014 12:20:14 PM with a score of 36957
Excellent adventure and nice and long
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— Edward Cole on 2/25/2014 4:27:15 PM with a score of 20440
Very fun and different. I was able to think and make decisions based on logic that worked for me. Also the realities of man on man violence chilled me to the bone I hope I never have to see my society with out law and order.
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— Steven on 2/23/2014 8:28:28 PM with a score of 33807
Even though I died only on the 80th page apparently, I had fun reading this and making my own decisions. This is very very good and I recommend it to any zombie survivalist fanatic. Good job and keep writing. :)
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UncleBird51
on 2/22/2014 12:57:17 PM with a score of 9860
I extremely enjoyed your work Im still new to the whole text based concept but I will tell you this...FREAKIN AWESOME im a zombie freak and this had me sitting down and thinking that you actually covered this topic from a realistic standpoint. glad to see someone takes this VERY REAL DANGER seriously!
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thegunslingerRoland
on 2/22/2014 12:32:12 AM with a score of 25985
real fun... mind game
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azbugga
on 2/21/2014 10:43:12 PM with a score of 29987
This is probably one of the best story games on this site... It's extremely detailed and has dozens of endings with a whole lotta pages for each.
BUT I HAVE TO KNOW! Is it possible to save Jacob? I'm sick of accidentally killing children...
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JustSomeSurvivor
on 2/20/2014 1:46:53 PM with a score of 19015
very good reading! Hope to get another go from the author!
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dbruce
on 2/19/2014 9:57:30 PM with a score of 27597
The game was cool, bloody fustrating though. I couldn't leave it alone, i kept on dying but it was never from a bite, it was because i never called my wife! (stupid bitch). Finally got to the end with only killing the woman in the bathroom (whom bought me time to get out undetected), killed the convict and save 10 lives. In the end i got through it without a scratch on me... Well apart from the giant cut on the back of my head. Next time i am going to do it more like a mad man, kill everything i see fit (without dying of course).
Well done, and congrats on making this game, i enjoyed it completely and i am looking forward to seeing a part two if there ever will be one in the future ( doubt it) but still, keep up the hard work!
-RK
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— RK on 2/19/2014 9:49:09 AM with a score of 18335
awesome.the story really got me thinking.
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BlxckWidow
on 2/13/2014 9:12:01 PM with a score of 22825
This is. A great story I loved it alot!!!
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Zanderfaul
on 2/12/2014 12:46:53 PM with a score of 33977
Great story, very well written. Can't wait to start over and make some different choices. Hope the outcome is the same though, I wouldn't want to die in the Zombie Outbreak.
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Chapster89
on 2/11/2014 12:46:00 PM with a score of 21875
This is EASILY the best cys-game I have ever played - and I am completely addicted to visual and interactive novels. It's even better than Zombie Exodus and Choice of Zombies on choiceofgames.com and those are my all-time favorites, but Dead Man Walking easily topped my list. There are so many different endings, and I admit I died a few times and had to backtrack some pages every now and then because I'd gotten too far to start all over again - I'd also like to say how much I absolutely love having this option to go back and explore the other alternatives, instead of having to re-start everything when I die. Kudos! Will definitely play this again and again and again, I just finished it and got the very best ending which is BEYOND awesome! Keep up the amazing work, and thank you so much for creating the best interactive zombie survival story out there to date!
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Junesong
on 2/11/2014 2:43:31 AM with a score of 38917
It is one of the most creative zombie ideas, I think it was fun and really interesting
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Treetree95
on 2/6/2014 6:17:00 PM with a score of 29427
Second time- 30 zombies, and killed 2 people!
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ShriekingTiger44
on 2/3/2014 12:54:09 PM with a score of 10960
Amazing storygame, One of the best on the site!
This is my first go, I killed 4 zombies! And 0 of everything else, I'm going to try again!
Well done berka!
8/8
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ShriekingTiger44
on 2/3/2014 12:47:15 PM with a score of 1260
Brilliant game..10+/10
Thank you for writing this FOR FREE!
We should all thank you on our knees
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— Robin on 1/30/2014 2:04:36 AM with a score of 27597
That was amazing. Scary and exiting in all the right parts. Please keep writing stories, you have the abilities. Thank you.
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jaspersforever
on 1/28/2014 10:29:02 PM with a score of 17935
pretty damn good.thank you for the entertainment
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— mark on 1/27/2014 12:29:29 AM with a score of 31267
Yay, I just replayed this and got the Best Ending. So glad to actually get it.
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cyrodilicbrandy
on 1/26/2014 4:30:30 PM with a score of 27457
Amazing... Just incredible.
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— John on 1/25/2014 6:12:15 PM with a score of 26627
Absolutely brilliant.
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cyrodilicbrandy
on 1/25/2014 3:59:35 PM with a score of 20870
Best text based survival game I've seen so far. Hope this inspires everyone else as much as it inspires me.
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Gaheris
on 1/22/2014 6:42:52 PM with a score of 41297
great work on this one. it was fun and has many possible outcomes for every choice you make. thanks again :D
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— kostisloco on 1/22/2014 3:54:28 PM with a score of 35067
This is a great game! It's well written and exciting. I highly recomend it. Be sure and save, because with some choices there are game glitches.
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Margaretsk
on 1/22/2014 12:28:19 PM with a score of 34557
I really loved the game, I felt like I had a huge world to explore and I was so happy about that. By far the best interactive game that I've played. Just a question, is it possible to save the wife? Even if it isn't it still is pretty awesome.
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— lauren on 1/21/2014 6:16:12 PM with a score of 20625
I loved this story so much. You much have put in so much work, to make it so perfect. It was by far the best interactive game I ever played. I mean like really, it was amazing.
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— laur on 1/21/2014 10:13:36 AM with a score of 20265
I really enjoyed the story and look forward to playing through it again. This first time through I played the safest route. It was quite nice to see that you can play it cautiously and still be successful, but it was admittedly not terribly exciting. The storytelling is well done and I'm going back for more!
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— first_timer on 1/20/2014 8:46:46 PM with a score of 25087
Initially gripping and continually engaging! The descriptive details and numerous cast of characters kept it interesting. The only reason I gave it a "7" was due to a few grammatical and spelling errors here and there, but they weren't off-putting. I obviously thoroughly enjoyed the first play-through and and am ready to jump back in for more endings!
Here are my stats: You Killed 1 People; You Saved 5 People (including yourself, unless you died); You were eaten by 0 Zombies; Your Overall Score: 33837
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mek7
on 1/13/2014 1:25:37 PM with a score of 33857
Great game! Finally reached the best ending after retrying a couple times. I wish I had copied my end results to post, but basically I played a lot more passively than the others that have posted here; I only killed 8 zombies, only saved four (myself and my family), and only went through 94 pages. Never killed a special zombie either, too damn scary!
Anyway, thank you very much for writing this incredibly entertaining story! Hope to see more from you in the future!
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Spellslinger
on 1/12/2014 8:04:21 AM with a score of 29577
not bad their was a few mistakes in it but very good i apparently could have got a better ending (not sure how)but in the end good game
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dfyf
on 1/8/2014 7:50:29 AM with a score of 22585
not bad love these type of games going to keep playing it and get a better ending (have only played it once so far)
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— death slayer on 1/8/2014 4:01:58 AM with a score of 1210
awsome game survived!( total didnt cheat)
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— matt on 1/7/2014 11:51:47 PM with a score of 21165
Enjoyed every minute of it and loved the different endings. Actually wouldn't mind seeing this turned into a movie lol
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KingKronic
on 1/7/2014 11:04:30 PM with a score of 37287
How You Did
Here’s a rundown of how you did –
You Killed 155 Zombies
You Killed 0 Drooler Zombies
You Killed 0 Bloater Zombies
You Killed 0 Ghouls
You Killed 1 Banshees
You Killed 0 Hell Hounds
You Killed 0 Cannibal Gaunt Zombies
You Killed 1 People
You Saved 61 People (including yourself, unless you died)
You were eaten by 0 Zombies
Your Overall Score: 46137
(You played through 147 of 2,131 Pages and have proven to be a Rebuilder)
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— Alex.... on 1/7/2014 3:05:25 PM with a score of 46157
Here’s a rundown of how you did –
You Killed 67 Zombies
You Killed 0 Drooler Zombies
You Killed 0 Bloater Zombies
You Killed 1 Ghouls
You Killed 0 Banshees
You Killed 1 Hell Hounds
You Killed 0 Cannibal Gaunt Zombies
You Killed 1 People
You Saved 60 People (including yourself, unless you died)
You were eaten by 0 Zombies
Your Overall Score: 48837
(You played through 148 of 2,131 Pages and have proven to be a Rebuilder)
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— Alex C on 1/3/2014 5:19:34 PM with a score of 48857
This story was beyond amazing. I would look forward to future stories written by you.
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— Alex on 1/3/2014 11:04:39 AM with a score of 40857
Here’s a rundown of how you did –
You Killed 132 Zombies
You Killed 1 Drooler Zombies
You Killed 0 Bloater Zombies
You Killed 0 Ghouls
You Killed 0 Banshees
You Killed 1 Hell Hounds
You Killed 1 Cannibal Gaunt Zombies
You Killed 5 People
You Saved 59 People (including yourself, unless you died)
You were eaten by 0 Zombies
Your Overall Score: 19525
(You played through 151 of 2,131 Pages and have proven to be a Survivalist)
That story was so amazing, massive thanks to author for creating it :)
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will123will
on 1/3/2014 4:49:12 AM with a score of 19535
It has about 2,000 pages and the max I have gotten to is about 90-150 I wish it didn't end so soon *spoiler at end* but still its a really good game, I really like it, it gets complicated, but thanks to the trusty backspace it isn't impossible.
*damn military always seems to come as soon as it gets good, I mean who said i wanted to be rescued?!?*
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— DMDonahue on 12/30/2013 4:22:20 AM with a score of 20195
Here’s a rundown of how you did –
You Killed 3 Zombies
You Killed 0 Drooler Zombies
You Killed 0 Bloater Zombies
You Killed 0 Ghouls
You Killed 0 Banshees
You Killed 0 Hell Hounds
You Killed 0 Cannibal Gaunt Zombies
You Killed 1 People
You Saved 60 People (including yourself, unless you died)
You were eaten by 0 Zombies
Your Overall Score: 36477
(You played through 114 of 2,131 Pages and have proven to be a Rebuilder)
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DrBlackIrish777
on 12/29/2013 2:27:47 AM with a score of 36497
Very high rating. Well written and well though out. Nice to play a smart character. I will be replaying this!
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notled
on 12/26/2013 4:13:24 PM with a score of 38597
Must read for every zombie apocalypse lover out there,wish there were more!
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— Steve on 12/25/2013 6:39:32 PM with a score of 36957
The game was amazingly detailed. I liked how you incorporated different zombie mutations since it made the read refreshing from other zombie stories. Most of all it was quite realistic. I look forward to more of your. Please keep it up.
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— Tim on 12/23/2013 4:22:26 AM with a score of 41187
Amazing... All I can think of is the many other possibilities and alternate endings. Loved the detail, choices, and how long it lasts! There should be more like this in other genres in my opinion. Just wow....
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— Zain on 12/22/2013 1:20:46 AM with a score of 17525
great game man
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— Scott on 12/19/2013 9:08:08 AM with a score of 29637
very fun
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— dodo on 12/17/2013 12:31:41 PM with a score of 710
I love how you actually have to think your courses of action through. Surprisingly I managed to get a good ending on the first run-through; though I was bitten and thus could not achieve the best ending.
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GiaZera
on 12/16/2013 3:51:20 PM with a score of 25485
That's a quality game. Scored 35,007 (or there abouts) excellent storyline, so much work put into that game. Really, well done!
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— Yeager on 12/9/2013 12:26:45 AM with a score of 35627
Awesome play throughout. Plenty of options, and very well thought out.
Apparently, I got the best possible ending? Haha. Cool.
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— Meed on 12/7/2013 10:21:10 PM with a score of 30967
pretty good choose your own adventure. although pretty lengthy read. if you break each "chapter" even more like https://www.choiceofgames.com/zombies/ it would be more interesting as i did lose my attention every few chapters and i began to make choices based on last 3 paragraphs.
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— shadegray on 12/6/2013 2:47:10 AM with a score of 31387
Yay I have the Most scary Infection in the Universe as the Carriers!
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RabbitSeason
on 12/4/2013 2:08:20 AM with a score of 22815
I don't know how to say exactly how much I enjoyed this story, but when given the option to play my xbox, watch tv or movies, surf the web or play on facebook, I found myself glued to the edge of my seat for 3 hours straight, and would gladly do it again, please keep on writing!
Sincerely, Zombie Fan
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— Zombie Fan on 12/3/2013 9:47:07 PM with a score of 30677
very good history i love text games
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kinsmarts
on 12/2/2013 1:47:37 PM with a score of 23045
Tons of plotlines
Worth an adventurous read
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— John Coctosten on 12/1/2013 11:44:25 AM with a score of 32387
Reading through this story was a tremendously fun experience. The author deserves a lot of credit for creating something so engrossing and well written.
Thanks a lot for the good time, I look forward to your future works.
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— Adrien on 11/30/2013 10:38:33 AM with a score of 33277
Me and family survived! I got the best possible ending! yaaay
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jota
on 11/27/2013 11:55:36 AM with a score of 29487
I killed 100 zombies!, but had a double tragedy. After wife dead, greg also dead :(
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jota
on 11/27/2013 10:50:33 AM with a score of 14170
It was alright, the damn kiss killed my wife thou....that sucked
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— Kate on 11/22/2013 1:23:07 AM with a score of 19035
YAY, I GOT THE WORST POSSIBLE ENDING!!! WOOOOOHOOOOOOOO
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Mtactical
on 11/21/2013 11:55:57 AM with a score of 560
that was fun killed 7 zombies
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— killer on 11/21/2013 7:59:22 AM with a score of 11240
Very interesting and branching story.
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jigpig7
on 11/16/2013 2:04:55 PM with a score of 35587
besr game ever
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— pop on 11/16/2013 2:41:21 AM with a score of 30727
Was real good
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StonerBurger
on 11/15/2013 6:52:16 PM with a score of 21325
I really enjoyed the game, the only thing I disliked was the fact that the secretary who locked herself in the bathroom was unsaveable.
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— Tay on 11/11/2013 4:06:40 AM with a score of 32567
It isn't just better then reeses Cups, It's alot better then reeses cups =D
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dischead
on 11/9/2013 10:18:02 PM with a score of 1760
Absolutely amazing. It took me a couple tries, but the first time I actually completed the game I got the best ending. (I didn't realize there was a Back button until like the fourth playthrough. <<) But yeah. Amazing game. ^^ And there is a way to save the boy, as he survived on my playthrough and became like a son to me. :D
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spiritwolf99
on 11/7/2013 7:28:10 PM with a score of 38737
Yo, great story ya got! Finally get an ending that save the kid and wife :)
But there are 2100 pages but why i can only complete with 129 pages? Great work man.Add more story parts
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— «Dead Eye68» on 11/7/2013 5:21:21 AM with a score of 24315
Old news now, but this is an excellent story. Choices were logical, the writing was very good and error-free, and the atmosphere was perfect. The only part that seemed arbitrary was the attack on the Hellhound; none of the three options seemed to be good options. Still, I made it through to the best ending, which felt very rewarding.
The amount of work that must've gone into this is massive. I saw only 121 pages of it, and it took me over an hour to read through. Masterfully done.
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Sszinid
on 11/6/2013 4:00:16 PM with a score of 34067
Extremely in depth with humorous but gritty dialogue.. nearly got the best ending.. loved every minute 8*
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— Kyle on 11/6/2013 3:38:10 PM with a score of 27985
A map or sketchy drawings of the surroundings would be quite nice. Otherwise, I really liked this!
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— Dead on 11/4/2013 11:02:58 AM with a score of 17970
Here’s a rundown of how you did –
You Killed 120 Zombies
You Killed 1 Drooler Zombies
You Killed 0 Bloater Zombies
You Killed 0 Ghouls
You Killed 0 Banshees
You Killed 1 Hell Hounds
You Killed 1 Cannibal Gaunt Zombies
You Killed 2 People
You Saved 0 People (including yourself, unless you died)
You were eaten by 708 Zombies
Your Overall Score: 15300
(You played through 88 of 2,131 Pages and have proven to be Hard to Kill)
I frikin killed my wife with a kiss because of the drooler....
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MardavGaming
on 11/3/2013 1:26:36 PM with a score of 15310
Is there anyway to save the poor boy? :(
Besides that I loved it! Though the option of playing as my own gender would be great.
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Viol
on 11/1/2013 12:08:53 AM with a score of 23735
Very good effort - I will play through again and kudos to the amount of time you must have put into this. Maybe needs a little editing to make it a bit tighter and perhaps smaller pages of text to promote tension. Overall though very good and I would recommend to others.
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— Johnny Boy on 10/26/2013 6:59:04 PM with a score of 18625
Oh my god what a great story, I must have gone back and replayed it six times in one sitting alone. If this was a hardcover book I would not hesitate to drop 20 bucks on it.
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— Marshall on 10/24/2013 10:35:22 AM with a score of 35797
ur story is fucked up xD i loved it though great work man :)
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— Daniel on 10/22/2013 5:02:06 PM with a score of 1010
Very good story! It must have taken you months to come up with all the dialouge and text. This is one of the best CYS games out there!
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— Conrad on 10/21/2013 5:37:34 PM with a score of 27687
Awesome story
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1127brian
on 10/21/2013 11:24:29 AM with a score of 4010
Here’s a rundown of how you did –
You Killed 9 Zombies
You Killed 0 Drooler Zombies
You Killed 0 Bloater Zombies
You Killed 0 Ghouls
You Killed 0 Banshees
You Killed 1 Hell Hounds
You Killed 0 Cannibal Gaunt Zombies
You Killed 0 People
You Saved 60 People (including yourself, unless you died)
You were eaten by 0 Zombies
Your Overall Score: 37807
(You played through 113 of 2,131 Pages and have proven to be a Rebuilder)
I think I did pretty well I took the school children and we made a camp out in the wilderness :D
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stormjet64
on 10/18/2013 1:59:11 PM with a score of 2910
Great game, kind of wish I had a choice of who I am, like
1. Greg, religious, has 2 daughters etc...
2. Jason, atheist, lives with gf
3. etc...
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Harmphrey
on 10/15/2013 6:44:38 PM with a score of 20175
This is an amazing game which I finished and plan to play again!
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— Supernaturalist on 10/15/2013 6:38:53 PM with a score of 16685
This is the best game ever! :D
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ssj3gohan007
on 10/14/2013 11:14:10 AM with a score of 24587
You outdid yourself with this one! You really know what you're doing.
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dman2life
on 10/13/2013 9:20:11 AM with a score of 22975
You Killed 232 Zombies
You Killed 1 Drooler Zombies
You Killed 0 Bloater Zombies
You Killed 0 Ghouls
You Killed 0 Banshees
You Killed 1 Hell Hounds
You Killed 1 Cannibal Gaunt Zombies
You Killed 2 People
You Saved 60 People (including yourself, unless you died)
You were eaten by 0 Zombies
Your Overall Score: 31155
(You played through 227 of 2,131 Pages and have proven to be a Survivalist)
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ssj3gohan007
on 10/12/2013 11:47:46 PM with a score of 31165
Great piece of work. I'm going to replay this one allot.
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LoneWolf
on 10/12/2013 4:49:44 PM with a score of 6310
Great game! I love it! I recommend it to anyone!
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ssj3gohan007
on 10/12/2013 4:47:09 PM with a score of 30415
This is my second favorite game on the entire site. Great story with a great deal of logical choices to choose from. The only thing I can think of adding is perhaps an inventory that the player can see (there were a few instances in which I was unsure which malay weapon I had). Aside from that, you did an outstanding job.
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TheOpalFox
on 10/11/2013 11:38:51 AM with a score of 32087
Haven't explored the whole of it but what I've seen was fun. My main annoyance was the sad ending of getting your head beat in by a convict. But then humans are nastier then Zombies. Makes me want to see if there's away to get him and save the wife.
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— Phunbaba on 10/11/2013 2:18:21 AM with a score of 11570
Best zombie-themed game since Resident Evil lol
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— Trent on 10/10/2013 9:18:21 PM with a score of 24565
I loved playing and im a big zombie fan should make another
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— kyle hoose on 10/10/2013 5:47:46 AM with a score of 36117
Yay 95 pages 25455 score and survived with my whole family and the teens
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Tunk11
on 10/9/2013 2:47:37 PM with a score of 25465
Excellent game, good plot and storyline, great at depicting real life scenes and situations. Full of suspense and excitement.
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— Dsurvivor on 10/7/2013 5:07:01 AM with a score of 30167
I like it! Would be good to play through it again too since there are people with more points than me.
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Grev
on 10/6/2013 10:46:41 PM with a score of 28835
Very well written, enjoyable overall. I would love to contribute to this and any other future writings in any way possible. Please get back to me! I am also an aspiring writer, which is why I have offered my help.
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— Corey Greene on 10/6/2013 8:08:17 PM with a score of 27865
Great Story, monumental work!
You should offer it to a book company and print it.
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— Aminius on 10/4/2013 12:01:07 PM with a score of 24725
lots of choices, and very fun. Well written and not so difficult that it is necessary to restart over and over. I will be recommending this to a few of my zombie fan friends
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Amplified
on 10/1/2013 9:25:49 PM with a score of 22585
Hello!
It's a nice game you have here! It's my second playthrough, and I found them both very enjoyable. There are several things I like about your game, such as the interaction that there is between characters, and the way you show their feelings and pain.
I have a question for you, tough. I have noticed the main character carries several items, but I don't remember you ever mentioning a backpack or any other kind of bag, at least in the beginning of the game, when he finds things like the fire axe.
There's something else I want to mention:
You seem to have an habit of saying "your" instead of "you're", for example, among other mistakes. Although they didn't change how much I enjoyed the game, they seemed to pop up whenever I read them.
Thank you for providing us with this excellent game!
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— wkwkwkwk1 on 9/28/2013 10:45:17 AM with a score of 33707
what is the highest possible score?
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— fuzz on 9/23/2013 12:06:00 PM with a score of 42517
Very fun.
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reydeownage
on 9/20/2013 2:27:20 PM with a score of 33647
The one thing that could have made it better is images every now and then.
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— Jennifer on 9/16/2013 6:56:02 AM with a score of 31257
I'm just gonna go ahead and give this a thorough nitpicking.
SPOILERS SPOILERS SPOILERS! !SRELIOPS SRELIOPS SRELIOPS
SPOILERS SPOILERS SPOILERS! !SRELIOPS SRELIOPS SRELIOPS
Hell-dogs? Considering your virus' compatibility with rabies in any animal--can't be just dogs, think about that--I'd be hard pressed to find anything still alive in the wilderness or in the city within a few days, given the size, power and durable structure of these rabid zombie-animal variants.
I have to complain that the boy seems too reactive when we first see him. I would have expected him to continue cowering in silence, considering the fact that he didn't see the shooters, and would be understandably suspicious of you, not to mention the "don't talk to strangers" rule--that is of course, until you make it clear that you're here to help(I didn't kill him). Also... "Mr. Greg"? Can I just say "just call me Greg"?
How many times has Greg yelled at zombies by the time I've heard the stranger do the same? None.
This stranger was supposedly going to kill Greg's wife, but when he called her(I called her) days earlier, she was still alive. Why didn't he kill her after sexually assaulting her? What reason did he have to hold onto her? To get to Greg? I'm disappointed that there isn't even a shred of exposition for this.
...A kiss. Are you serious. Transmission through a bite, which means direct contact with the bloodstream, can take as long as 3 hours to turn the victim, but a kiss, via saliva which may not even have been swallowed yet--let alone spread the infection to the blood, where every transmission ultimately must go(and definitely would not have achieved in this case)--can turn a victim in seconds? We're talking about a brain-cooking mind controller, not a cold sore. Not to mention the saliva-burns I got from killing that bathroom-zombie by the bridge, wouldn't the fluid seared into living tissue, thus leaving behind traces of the infection that could enter the blood? Even if not, I still have to call BS on this one.
Black jeans. Leather jacket. steel-toed boots. Biker gloves. Wave-cap. This is what an accountant wears during off-hours? Aside from the wave-cap, you'd think he used to cosplay as the Road Warrior. All he needs now are shoulderpads.
Old badass black man. Accompanied by younger black man. Speculated to be more inside the looted and otherwise abandoned gun store. These are the only black men in the story that I've encountered. I think. Usually a different color/ethnicity is pointed out when visual presentation is lacking.
I found shotgun shells early on, then a shotgun, then a double-barrel, and made it as far as said gun store without being presented an opportunity to shoot it before stocking up with ALL the ammo I could possibly want in trade for vintage guns, whilst keeping two revolvers, a shotgun, and a rifle. Was there any point to me discovering that ammo at the first gun store?
"The zombies are chasing a groundhog--for some reason." Yeah, to EAT IT.
So we've got Fox Park, River Road...what's the name of the school?
A course mower. I was expecting the zombies to topple over on top of it(with or without mangled feet), crawl up to the seat and dig into Greg the Idiot. But no, he didn't die. Physics was such a blast, huh?
Why would a bus driver have access to a crowbar at work? And if the zombies were trying to get in, why would the windows be broken outward with glass on the outside instead of on the inside?
"God no! is it too late?" "Could it be? Did the kids on the bus manage to--" SHUT. UP! This in-my-brain-thinking-my-thoughts-for-me style of second person narration drives me up the wall. Personal gripe.
This school has athletic fields, a football field, a gymnasium, damned if it don't have EVERYTHING a high school ought to have, but the kids are 7 and 10 years old?? That's gotta be one expensive budget to spend on your run-of-the-mill elementary playground.
Scumbag survivor-dad: "Do what I say, or you're gonna die!"
Scumbag police officer: "Don't leave the school without your parents, or I'll kill you!"
Did the school survivors not just thank me three minutes ago for telling them about the food they could loot from the country club and a safe way to get there? And as I'm about to leave with my children, are they really gonna flipflop now and say they'll never be able to do it alone?
Greg doesn't wait for the girls to get in the car and close the door before firing off gunshots that would most likely pop their ears and his at the same time. I don't even know if he's fired a gun before.
Ending: Seriously? You're going to pin the deaths of Jacob and my wife on me? That's stupid. I didn't kill them.
Different ending
Death: Seriously? Did the sheriff just pop one off in my face without consideration for how I'd like to deal with my own imminent death? Worst case, I'd have expected him to leave me behind, but that's just completely cold, and downright questionable from a narrative standpoint.
Different ending
Is one of the options seriously to bring along some boys for food transfer when we've clearly established--by my daughter's ages and the boys' behavior--that they can't be older than 10?
Zombie virus details: What is this, Resident Evil?
Sentence: Umbrella Corp. (experimentation wing D: Rabies)
Erh, *cough* I mean, Rating: 4(slightly more fun than homework)
SPOILERS SPOILERS SPOILERS! !SRELIOPS SRELIOPS SRELIOPS
SPOILERS SPOILERS SPOILERS! !SRELIOPS SRELIOPS SRELIOPS
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Hbh128
on 9/14/2013 3:21:29 AM with a score of 20415
Normally, I don't play horror games. I didn't even THINK about playing any, but I played this by mistake. Evntually, I died near the start, due to not knowing how to procede correctly. I gave up, and continued my life. Moths pass, and I go loking for this game, and when I find It, I get sucked into hours of gameplay. Glad The game had no pictures, I played the whole thing, killing 97 Zombies, a Hell Hound, And saveing 59 people, Only killing 3. I must say, This is the best Game I have played in a long time, and to think I might never have played it seems painful. Here I am, Afraid Of What might happen in reality, all the while Loving this game. I approve deeply.
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YoshiTamer
on 9/14/2013 12:45:15 AM with a score of 16965
Very well written and immersive!
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carts19D
on 9/13/2013 11:33:04 PM with a score of 34407
Great, great interactive story. Detailed, and funny at some points, I played for a solid 4 hours (and eventually won). Very fun game.
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— Maxskill on 9/13/2013 7:12:09 AM with a score of 21445
Excellent and engrossing!
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Trotskisaurus
on 9/10/2013 4:51:35 PM with a score of 37587
Even though i finished it three times there are still things to find.
Well i need a guide to find the best answer.
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darrylmontales
on 9/7/2013 10:24:01 AM with a score of 19125
I always find this game to be incredibly detailed and entertaining every time I play. This time I actually managed to get the best ending!
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LeoScales7
on 9/6/2013 4:00:11 PM with a score of 38127
That was fuckin awesome
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— Tony on 9/6/2013 12:10:40 AM with a score of 35607
well that was too deep. It seems that you can be easily engulf by the decision.
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darrylmontales
on 9/5/2013 3:35:41 AM with a score of 8165
God dang that was the best game EVER. I fucking love survival adventure. There were so many options, and so many endings! You truly do get to experience ultimate zombie survival.
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NiggNigg
on 9/2/2013 3:27:38 PM with a score of 28495
Great storygame with a very interesting and intense story.
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Hamoflague
on 9/2/2013 5:16:53 AM with a score of 7660
Fantastic. I liked the realistic approach. Throughout the game, you constantly find yourself in situations with several convincing options to actually think through, as opposed to being given one obvious solution and one completely ridiculous one and wondering whether its a trick or not. I really appreciate the time that has been taken to write a good story. I am definitely going to come back for more.
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Jather
on 8/31/2013 10:08:10 AM with a score of 26375
I really liked this story.Reminds me of the Walking Dead from
the TellTale games.That's a good thing.
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Jackwolfskin12
on 8/30/2013 3:19:14 PM with a score of 10520
Dear Author,
Thank you, I very much enjoyed the story, the characters and the well developed, wide variety of options I was presented with. After participating in this I feel I have just read a novel, watched a movie, and played a game all at the same time. It focused on just the right amount of plot setting, character back story, and environmental detail. In my opinion, it was very well done and well worth the time. Thank you for making such an entertaining experience for a fellow zombie survivalist enthusiast. Keep up the good work!
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— Frank Castle on 8/27/2013 11:51:11 AM with a score of 39407
Quite a good tale. I have played a lot of zombie choice survivals and this has to be the best one I have played so far. Hope to see more.
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— D4saken1 on 8/20/2013 4:23:09 PM with a score of 32217
good
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kaykyril
on 8/19/2013 5:15:31 PM with a score of 37127
Despite the huge amount of text, this was one of the most entertaining choose-your-path zombie story I've played so far! The detail and descriptions of the situations set you up in the scene, and I've only noticed a few typos through the whole thing.
The problem is, if you want to get all the endings, you'll have to spend a while reading this!
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— Anon on 8/19/2013 10:29:07 AM with a score of 24265
Amazing story line I've played several times trying for different paths and endings I Had a blast each time I hope you make another about someone else and place
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— Dalton on 8/18/2013 7:11:54 PM with a score of 31757
I <3 the story it was a epic adventure! Also the boy, Jacob was a cool kid! xD
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— RedShadow956 on 8/15/2013 5:21:59 AM with a score of 24475
Ha, fun game, enjoyed it a lot. Got the best ending on the first run...
I like the extra little theory was that the invasion was caused by the Necromancer from Endmaster..... (could this be a Death Song of some sort?)
Good game, enjoyed it a lot.
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— Who really cares? on 8/12/2013 9:41:54 PM with a score of 34627
I died before saving the girls. :(
still, 7/8:D
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— sexysally on 8/9/2013 3:47:31 AM with a score of 3440
AMAZING!!!!!
i loved this every step of the way.
the multiple choices were great aswell as the story itself.
If you like zombies, survival, drama, being a badass and kicking ass and such, this is totally the book for you!
Bye!!
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— lindsey on 8/8/2013 7:18:56 AM with a score of 21515
IT was good but you should reduce the story line.
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— Haroon AHmed on 8/6/2013 6:17:01 AM with a score of 17295
This game has such a sprawling and amazing story line that I'm rather impressed not only by the dedication of the author but also of the few logical or grammatical errors. Very impressed.
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lancechip
on 8/3/2013 2:57:39 PM with a score of 18675
After dying quite a few times (because of the same thing) i finally made it through and survived. It really is a great story!
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philtrash
on 8/1/2013 11:00:12 AM with a score of 20825
Amazing survival I had a lot of fun and I now know I can survive in the zombie epidemic!
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— . on 7/29/2013 4:04:16 AM with a score of 20295
I got the best possible ending (Oh yeah) and i 3 cameos. Loved this hours of fun
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masteruknown
on 7/29/2013 12:20:56 AM with a score of 960
Great game, thanks.
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spawndex
on 7/27/2013 3:43:00 PM with a score of 37727
You Killed 91 Zombies
You Killed 0 Drooler Zombies
You Killed 0 Bloater Zombies
You Killed 0 Ghouls
You Killed 0 Banshees
You Killed 0 Hell Hounds
You Killed 0 Cannibal Gaunt Zombies
You Killed 1 People
You Saved 4 People (including yourself, unless you died)
You were eaten by 0 Zombies
Your Overall Score: 24157
(You played through 70 of 2,131 Pages and have proven to be a Rebuilder)
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GOT THE BEST ENDING IN MY FIRST TRY!
That is good to hear since there will be no 2nd one. I liked it but did not love it... not that it was bad, it really good. I am just not into these kind of "stories".
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Drakoblare
on 7/26/2013 8:26:42 AM with a score of 24167
You Killed 6 Zombies
You Killed 0 Drooler Zombies
You Killed 0 Bloater Zombies
You Killed 0 Ghouls
You Killed 0 Banshees
You Killed 1 Hell Hounds
You Killed 0 Cannibal Gaunt Zombies
You Killed 2 People
You Saved 60 People (including yourself, unless you died)
You were eaten by 0 Zombies
Your Overall Score: 28705
(You played through 142 of 2,131 Pages and have proven to be a Survivalist)
Really awesome game, I intend to play again to see if I can get the best ending. I am happy with my result this game though.
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Havoc
on 7/23/2013 8:27:34 AM with a score of 28765
Hope my 8 puts it back to immortality
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Negative
on 7/21/2013 2:28:43 AM with a score of 4760
Amazing game just what i was looking for i survived and cleared up the dead bodies around my street!
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— Alex Nye on 7/20/2013 11:59:33 AM with a score of 17065
Here’s a rundown of how you did –
You Killed 2 Zombies
You Killed 0 Drooler Zombies
You Killed 0 Bloater Zombies
You Killed 0 Ghouls
You Killed 0 Banshees
You Killed 0 Hell Hounds
You Killed 0 Cannibal Gaunt Zombies
You Killed 0 People
You Saved 0 People (including yourself, unless you died)
You were eaten by 213 Zombies
Your Overall Score: 2600
(You played through 24 of 2,131 Pages and have proven to be Zombie Bait)
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Steve_Greg
on 7/18/2013 3:04:13 PM with a score of 2610
Awesome game, I really enjoyed it and all the important choices you have to make! This is a fantastic CYOA game, and I'll DEFINITELY play it over again!
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— Andrew on 7/17/2013 4:42:29 PM with a score of 16175
I thought the whole thing was great, easily on my top five for text-based games.
The only problem was that It takes up a bit too much of my time, and it doesn't feel right to pick up where I had left off the previous day.
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— Jacob on 7/16/2013 1:41:59 PM with a score of 33387
Amazing
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— Joe on 7/15/2013 6:19:12 PM with a score of 33707
Very well written and a pleasure to play :)
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bootyshake
on 7/15/2013 4:38:21 AM with a score of 40767
I saved my family killed my wifes harasser and wasnt bit! I won. This is extremely long so don't play if u don't have hours of free time! Other than that this is the best chooseyourstory I have played!
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— Zayne on 7/15/2013 3:18:39 AM with a score of 20125
You die in a fire even though you have a large fire extinguisher in your hand? UGH!
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bootyshake
on 7/15/2013 2:34:13 AM with a score of 2710
Really great story. Rich detail, believable characters, and good common sense choices that any real person would make. It was very easy to get into the story and feel the suspense. Bravo! I'll likely try it again just for more great content. Thanks for working so hard on this story!
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— Chris on 7/15/2013 1:06:58 AM with a score of 34837
I couldn't stop reading all night finally went to bed at around 5 and got up and finished it. It was incredibly written and was awesomely long.
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— Ellen on 7/13/2013 2:40:03 PM with a score of 48717
This one was a complete page-turner, I had it finished in one sit and will surely re-read it again to explore the different endings.
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CYSRWolf
on 7/11/2013 9:33:43 PM with a score of 37827
Amazing, alot of detail and so long (in a good way)
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Rmpgry
on 7/8/2013 10:42:18 AM with a score of 35487
I really enjoyed the immersive story line. I was happy to have gotten the best ending on my first try!
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Nexusaur
on 7/8/2013 12:41:44 AM with a score of 31657
Pretty well written and really interesting. VERY nice story.
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jack10345
on 7/7/2013 9:17:15 PM with a score of 28025
That was great! Great plot and a lot of possible choices. Dialogues weren't really, uhm, realistic, but it was ok. The ending (best one possible, yay) left me a little "what?" in the army part, you know, expecting something TWD style, with the soilders murdering everyone. But, again, it was reaaly great, despite everithing.
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Amarve
on 7/5/2013 10:07:55 AM with a score of 43237
Excellent game, well worth a playthrough
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tannerspalding
on 7/4/2013 3:54:26 PM with a score of 21965
I can tell you put in a lot of work, good job.
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trager70
on 7/3/2013 7:41:56 PM with a score of 8915
i got the best possible ending
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supersyeed
on 7/3/2013 4:56:47 PM with a score of 25297
Amazing job o:
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MrVoid
on 7/3/2013 7:10:53 AM with a score of 39917
I got the best ending, and I have to say it feels great to do so.
Wierdly enough, I didn't make it to 90 pages, but I guess it takes other decissions to achieve that story lenght.
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FrikysKiller
on 6/30/2013 7:02:57 PM with a score of 36357
Great story. I personally don't like anything that has to do with zombies and such, but this is truly amazing.
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Businessman
on 6/30/2013 6:53:47 PM with a score of 14110
7 because of gramathical erors and a few spellig stuff, but a side from that, I'd have given it a clean 8. awesome game, cool consept and I even played it through in one seshion
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— connor142 on 6/30/2013 1:06:46 PM with a score of 15415
It was really good. Took a long time to read but was worth it. I would really recommend it. :)
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mischief111
on 6/30/2013 12:49:07 PM with a score of 24545
This has to be one of the deepest and well-crafted "choose your own stories" out there. I really felt like my morality was being challenged as I played through this. In the end, I was happy with what I accomplished, and happy that I played this amazing interactive story...
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AwesomeDude7
on 6/30/2013 12:16:57 PM with a score of 26497
A lot of fun!
I wish there was more control over the main character, but I understand why that wasn't the case, so it's not a huge deal. That being said, it was still fun to play through, and I look forward to going back and seeing what all the various options are.
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Scitenik
on 6/29/2013 1:40:09 AM with a score of 24975
First story I played. Awesome experience.
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kammahl
on 6/27/2013 4:26:19 AM with a score of 30207
Could just as easily be a "How To..." manual as a Storygame, the detail in decision making is remarkable. The entire narrative is littered with great dilemmas and gut punch results. Nothing comes easy. When the resolution finally comes you don't just feel satisfied, you're filled with a sense of accomplishment.
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nickcotton
on 6/26/2013 12:02:41 AM with a score of 17115
Love this game! Didn't make it outa the subway station this time but even losing I get joy out of this story lol
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sapper0
on 6/25/2013 5:00:50 PM with a score of 1910
Great action. Appears to have significant replay-ability.
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— md on 6/21/2013 2:31:14 PM with a score of 21635
Jollygood game it was, had a blast putting my axe in those zombie hordes. Killed one bloater and one hellhound, saved 8 chaps other then me, including my two girls. sadly I was not fast enough for my wife, but I was their with her in the end so there's that.
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neogreggory
on 6/19/2013 3:35:14 PM with a score of 21325
Nice story with creative contents. I got the best possible ensing but when i found out I only completed 123 pages, I decided to be a dick and re play the story.
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kamigreed
on 6/19/2013 9:09:58 AM with a score of 37237
certainly the most vivid,most descriptive and realistic choose your own adventure game that i've played.
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aleria105
on 6/19/2013 4:40:47 AM with a score of 9860
The best Choose your own story zombie survival i have seen ever :D
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Soviet
on 6/18/2013 1:21:30 AM with a score of 23385
somewhat longwinded and confusing. more background is needed on the virus and the effects. how did the city become overrun? answer questions that the viewer might have.
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— xxx on 6/13/2013 6:24:29 PM with a score of 22825
awsome man got best ending on first try whoot
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— Andrew on 6/12/2013 6:22:47 PM with a score of 33837
This was the first game I played on this site and it was the best. In future games, a little less detail would be better. It takes a long time but is still really good. Please make more zombie games! Thanks.
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ZombieEatsYou
on 6/11/2013 8:28:28 PM with a score of 4810
avoid confrontation with them. human amenities are the blackest super-fluid.
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— jiimmy on 6/11/2013 4:15:21 PM with a score of 1460
the best one ever
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Andrew1
on 6/9/2013 12:53:01 PM with a score of 32527
"you also smell the salty stink of slaughter and the sickening stench of decomposition"
Your alliteration makes that mental image 20x worse.
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— TinfoilTophat on 6/8/2013 10:37:46 PM with a score of 17825
I was expecting the adventure to continue and was surprised the best possible ending is just saving everyone. Overall, it had a good draw to it, though I wish there was a bit more to it
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KRLGIR
on 6/7/2013 5:09:59 AM with a score of 35397
Super fun! Died a few times of course... but nobody needs to know x)
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landoncole56999
on 6/6/2013 1:59:46 PM with a score of 19215
This experience has been enjoyable for me from beginning to end. From the first page to the end, all of the choices have been drawn from mostly proper logistics while being developed to have a great amount of suspense in the story. You really want your character to not only survive, but save yourself and others as much as possible throughout the story if you play this game. While some decisions were either not explained enough, or without much characterization (mainly description), the story was engaging, the characters felt proactive and reactive, the zombie threat felt both menacing and looming, and overall, I enjoyed the game very much. I highly recommend it if you want to see what a good advanced game is.
P.S. I got the second-best ending on my first play-through. The second play-through that I engaged in got myself the perfect ending. I applaud the game for taking away around or over five hours of my life. Great work! Keep making more, and don't let anyone stop your dreams! May you keep working hard, and may the odds be ever in your favour!
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Carter12
on 6/5/2013 10:04:04 PM with a score of 38567
Sweet, I still think I go the best ending.
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LordPhallic
on 6/5/2013 2:44:43 PM with a score of 19725
One of the best games on this site.
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SilverFlame1995
on 6/3/2013 2:28:25 PM with a score of 19165
I loved it, and I'm going to go read it again.
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— Mariella Bosquez on 6/3/2013 1:54:51 PM with a score of 2310
I found this story to be thoroughly entertaining and will definitely be playing through again to see some of the other outcomes. Absolutely fun and well done. Got the best possible outcome on my first play-through! Great job, author.
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Gravestone
on 6/2/2013 1:47:06 PM with a score of 41717
Omg finished first playthrough sweet game rated 8!
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Cozbyv3
on 5/31/2013 8:42:39 PM with a score of 18775
I think it was pretty good, but after seeing the number of possible pages I wanted to go back... I did the story 3 times, and on my last try got mostly what I wanted. I still am curious about the figure that appears when you die, but as it says, I guess it's for another story. Overall, it was fun to read! It does get old after a few runs though.
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— Robert on 5/31/2013 5:42:07 PM with a score of 27515
yayyy finally made it to the end and got the best ending ;D i played this a few times before but would die from infection or being eaten . anyways this was a good one
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cckreay
on 5/30/2013 8:40:51 AM with a score of 29707
I absolutely loved this; I really enjoyed the ride and the connection I made with my character. If you play smart, focus on our main objection you might survive...or not and die horribly. :) My score was 29427.
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JCool
on 5/28/2013 7:43:50 PM with a score of 29437
Freaking awesome, really enjoyed it, the author is a great writer!
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— Mike on 5/27/2013 4:23:43 PM with a score of 24625
I thoroughly enjoyed playing this story-based game myself, and found it a delight to have to search for supplies in the zombie infested world. I look forward to any further additions to this game, or to any new games you make. Thank you for hours of enjoyment.
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— Jack Wolfe on 5/21/2013 11:36:11 AM with a score of 16590
This game is absolutely incredible and complex. I love how logically it all works out. I also found almost all the cameos haha--a nice addition.
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KnightingaleSiren
on 5/19/2013 10:21:39 PM with a score of 18025
I got the good ending, i still want to know what the shadowy thing in the beginning was though.
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SmokinStones
on 5/19/2013 7:39:59 PM with a score of 35797
A spine-tingling choose your own adventure. If only I hadn't passed the infection to two and died from not having anti-biotics... Very worth the play!
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— Hannah B. on 5/19/2013 2:02:15 PM with a score of 19760
I enjoyed this story, it would be a good game actually, but it's a shame that it ends so quickly. Once they are in the survivalcamp, it's over. No more problems of food, water, zombies, other survivors and that's a bit of a shame, I believe. But it's a very good story and I liked to play it :-)
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vandenbowzz
on 5/19/2013 1:08:47 PM with a score of 21315
Amazing CYS, would recommend time and time again.
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RenegadeJesus
on 5/18/2013 9:06:38 PM with a score of 29987
it was a bit long, but that was deffently part of the appeal. if you can sit down and really explore the world of this story it is a great game worth replaying. thumbs up for excellent detail!
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blazecentral
on 5/18/2013 5:51:21 AM with a score of 33667
Real quick, I noticed that on the page titles "Am I Undead" that at the end you suddenly have a crowbar and later you don't have it anymore. I don't remember the exact path I took, but I died at the south subway station and I traveled to the rear of the train, killed the crawling zombie and the two zombies shortly after, continued traveling and laid down to rest. When I got up from resting I suddenly had a (magic!) crowbar. Considering the crowbar apparently disappears after that page it should be a simple procedure.
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— Jesse on 5/17/2013 11:55:56 PM with a score of 1860
Very well-thought out game! :) Almost got the best ending possible, if only I wasn't a Walking Dead. I love the scientific approach to the virus. I can always expect the best from this storygame author!
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Scribe
on 5/15/2013 12:03:36 PM with a score of 24115
really good. I am going to have another go!
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— Shaun on 5/15/2013 11:02:43 AM with a score of 8860
0ne 0f the best z0mbie games ever h0pe y0u make m0re 0f these.
(0-key 0bvi0usly n0t w0rking)
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— MawilliX on 5/15/2013 5:25:23 AM with a score of 28867
Awesome game! But I can never seem to get more into the story, I always finish it between 100 and 120 pages. I'd like to continue but never seem to be able too.
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PvtElkins
on 5/14/2013 1:04:25 AM with a score of 23165
One of the best story's ever
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CoolBeagle
on 5/13/2013 3:58:03 PM with a score of 24597
Yeah, after dying 10 times without even saving one person, I succeeded! Great game, I like the way how your decisions change the way you can play.
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— Player3Th0mas on 5/13/2013 4:08:33 AM with a score of 20675
Wow, this story is very well written and interesting! From the very beginning the description of locations, situations, and the different choices available to choose from made it very easy to get sucked in and feel like you are taking every step with the protagonist.
The diversity between the endings you can get must be incredibly large. After spending much of my evening surviving the zombie hordes to save my family, I finally came to a reasonably good outcome, and when I looked at my stats for the story I have only seen 106 pages out of more than 2000! (A plus in my book, I love a story that lasts a long time and keeps me interested the whole time).
So many different ways to end your story, ranging from becoming zombie chow to saving yourself and tons of other people. This game defiantly has loads of re-playability. I myself lost a few people along the way I really would have liked to save, but I think the possibility of losing people makes the story even more immersive and something to become invested in, and I will certainly be playing it more in the future to see how other choices effect Greg and his fight for survival.
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Vivalaraza
on 5/13/2013 4:02:28 AM with a score of 21715
Amazing time killer.
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Fender159
on 5/12/2013 8:10:46 PM with a score of 30127
IT wasn't too games or movies bad considering and lack of good zombie media has me sorta not caring for the flaws
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Wowthisawesome4
on 5/11/2013 10:36:02 PM with a score of 21025
Pretty fun experience. I'll definitely be giving it another go. My ending made me reflect on my decisions, and brought me to wonder if maybe I had played it too safe.
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— Edmi on 5/11/2013 8:05:26 PM with a score of 7815
Good Job!
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Wolfang100
on 5/10/2013 8:12:48 AM with a score of 31597
Splendid, I was positively enamored by the suspenseful plot of family-oriented survival. Not to mention the righteous amounts of violence and gore put together in this Individualized story of horrific bliss. I give my most sincere thanks to it's author; you've given me a most pleasant source of enjoyment for the past two hours. Great work.
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A_Simple_Persona
on 5/10/2013 3:49:23 AM with a score of 25065
Awesome and thrilling.
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Jack323
on 5/9/2013 7:45:01 PM with a score of 18785
This was an amazing adventure. I like to think that Hollywood will be knocking on his door one day asking this to become a movie. I'm not too sure though, whether my score is good or not. Also, I am curios as to what the best ending is.
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Rossatronix
on 5/9/2013 4:12:51 PM with a score of 21015
This was quite a fun and interesting story, especially since the protagonist is torn between making choices for his own survival and morality. I would highly recommend this story to anyone!
My score, by the way, was 25,205 - qualifying me for the title of survivalist.
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— Smaffa on 5/9/2013 3:20:10 AM with a score of 25265
loved it so so much, finally saved everyone on my third playthrough :D very well written and thought out.
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lunahaven
on 5/8/2013 11:48:32 AM with a score of 36397
Long and good, first time I played, I died fighting a hellhound, typical of my kind of choices.
I tried again, just completed with my whole family intact!
A couple of "experimental" tries, it seems there are a lot of options and it isn't too linear and fixed like a lot of other stories out there.
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PcGenie
on 5/7/2013 6:11:25 PM with a score of 26565
Wow, this is huge and great!
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TaraPhoenix
on 5/6/2013 3:46:17 PM with a score of 710
wow, that was incredibly amazing. Definitely the best zombie apocalypse I have read.
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Newt820
on 5/5/2013 9:16:10 PM with a score of 32527
dude, this is awesome. with a strong mix of logical zombie survival and epical story line, this is a must play. thanks for the game.
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zazyman32
on 5/5/2013 1:37:56 PM with a score of 20935
Another excellent adventure, the combinations of outcomes is truly astonishing it seems, there were so many choices. I'm definitely planning on replaying the game and seeing if I can improve my score at all by killing the drooler zombies and the like. Thank you for your hard work and dedication to making unforgettable adventures. A job well done!
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— Jordan on 5/3/2013 6:50:01 AM with a score of 35867
Amazing truly magnificent it is a amazing experience if one chooses to take the hours it would take to play still griping none the less
It's addictive
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— TACOSQUIRREL66 on 4/30/2013 3:31:09 AM with a score of 10730
I enjoyed this very much, thank you!
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casden
on 4/28/2013 10:10:34 PM with a score of 34507
Amazing, got a score of 1955 and saved 55 people with only killing 2!
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B4Summer
on 4/26/2013 10:16:50 PM with a score of 19565
GOOD!!!!
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— NADA on 4/21/2013 3:37:01 PM with a score of 2900
really really enjoyed this, got a little bit panicky in cornered situations, found myself worrying about the characters (especially jacob) and kept thinking "what would i really do?" when it sucks you in that well... you know it's good!!
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cybermum117
on 4/21/2013 2:58:47 PM with a score of 35327
Excellent story, well thought out and written! Lot's of (difficult) choises, resulting in loads of branches.
Going to do another playthrough.
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elloco999
on 4/21/2013 7:32:40 AM with a score of 36797
Zombies are my absolute fave, and the story is well written and super engaging, also liked that making ethical decisions can lead to a good ending. Loved it!
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— LB on 4/21/2013 1:48:02 AM with a score of 34047
it suked
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— boyboy on 4/19/2013 3:26:28 PM with a score of 860
awsome but put more combat with special zombies
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— asad on 4/17/2013 1:33:56 AM with a score of 20375
Great game. Definitely worth another playthrough.
I must say though, it takes some time to get used to, so try to get through the first 10-20 pages.
After that, you'll be hooked.
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MasterYster
on 4/17/2013 12:29:32 AM with a score of 25515
Absolutely amazing, the detail and the thought put into it... Being a fan of Zombie Exodus, this is really hitting the spot, about to go for a secnd run
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— JDudeson on 4/16/2013 7:55:40 PM with a score of 11190
this is the first choose your story i've played and it was captivating! It was really well written and it allowed me to fully become immerse with the narrative even if it wasn't myself. I would definitely recommend it to anybody who has spare time to take a chance on this
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— Ern on 4/16/2013 2:16:45 PM with a score of 28377
One of the most interesting and fun choose your own adventures ever!
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— Draou on 4/16/2013 10:20:30 AM with a score of 28587
this is....... amazing!!!
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ianrocks03
on 4/16/2013 7:08:08 AM with a score of 13210
Bloody Brilliant.
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Spartan
on 4/16/2013 4:05:59 AM with a score of 17525
Great game. I loved it, I just wished there was a way to save the tomboy, Abby was her name i think.
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Chaoticsquirrel
on 4/14/2013 4:53:34 PM with a score of 28145
Gripping. Even though I managed to survive the apocalypse and save my daughters and 57 other people, I feel as if I've only scratched the surface of the intricacies of alternative plot lines this story-game has to offer. I look forward to playing through it again.
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quinncorbin
on 4/14/2013 2:04:16 AM with a score of 24185
It was really facinating and very detailed))
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DvaLisa
on 4/12/2013 9:28:54 PM with a score of 25175
Really nice work!
I have never seen such a reasonable and complete plot for any cyoa.
Keep up the good work :D would like to take another dive if you have new one coming.
Some part of describing is a bit unimaginable though, like when facing situations at boat house or along the train track. But it is probably because my lack of expirence in these kinds of surroundings
???????????! ???~ ??:P
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— from Taiwan on 4/12/2013 9:19:54 AM with a score of 22195
Awesome, I like this, Its worth the read and has great replayability, Scored 34587 Points....Booya
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DarthNelly
on 4/11/2013 4:21:43 PM with a score of 34627
Got 8955 , will try again. good story I liked it
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DarthNelly
on 4/10/2013 1:37:06 PM with a score of 8965
Kick ass zombie game. Real zombie survival at its core.
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Kidshadow8468
on 4/8/2013 10:12:46 PM with a score of 10490
This game is very good, great you ould even say i knew that i wasn't going to do great and i didn't. This is what i call a legit zombie survival game, you have choices that you have to make in order to survive, you have a little bit of action in it (if you make it that far). In all this game is great.
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— Amos on 4/8/2013 5:07:38 PM with a score of 1360
briliant story!!! thank you !!!
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pankas76
on 4/8/2013 4:33:12 PM with a score of 22165
Fun game, somewhat morbid. Would have been nice if there was an ending where your wife wasn't raped.
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lolgay5
on 4/8/2013 4:18:45 PM with a score of 30207
Thank you so much for making this available to everybody. This is a very good story. It is pretty dense, as every choice has an impact on the storyline. This book gives an incredible sense of freedom. It is also very well written (though you should note English is not my mother tongue).
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Rahula59
on 4/6/2013 10:32:09 PM with a score of 40487
LOVED IT! It was extreamly well written and so dead on to what i would imagine a real zombie outbreak to be! I'm honestly thinking of doing it again to see the other endings.
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Dawn_Adkins
on 4/5/2013 3:27:55 PM with a score of 33147
very awesome! I did a lot better than I thought I would had this been a real zombie apocalypse! Kudos to the writer for a very entertaining story, and cool characters!
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mykel1985
on 4/4/2013 3:55:52 PM with a score of 11360
Great
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Aialynn
on 4/4/2013 10:28:00 AM with a score of 24215
My wife, Lori, and my son Carl loved it. Down in Atlanta, it's pretty bad in the jail we're refuged in ( like the police station ), and that crazy guy with the shotgun reminded me of this crazy guy I know, The Governor. You gave us a good time. The most laughs come from Daryl Dixon, he loved it. Thanks again and awesome story! - Rick Grimes, Atlanta Police Department
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— Rick Grimes on 4/2/2013 9:48:02 PM with a score of 32017
It's just too "consistent" to enjoy as there are no shocking reveals, and the "moral dilemma" part comes too quick.
5/10
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— OmegaGoldfish on 4/2/2013 1:09:59 PM with a score of 1810
Amazing story that got me hooked fro the beginning. Clearly a very advanced story with a lot of possible outcomes. Best story I have tried on this webside.
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— EmiljanQ3 on 3/31/2013 3:30:07 PM with a score of 20965
Before I saw Walking Dead, I probably would have tried to rescue more people.
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— steve on 3/30/2013 10:08:33 PM with a score of 9610
Awsome, best game i've played on this website
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— Bailey on 3/30/2013 8:08:34 PM with a score of 1660
Freakin awesome
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godzilla5939
on 3/30/2013 5:34:09 AM with a score of 40177
Absolutely loved it :D Good job (Y)
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— Kam on 3/30/2013 2:16:18 AM with a score of 31637
Sucked. It makes no seance that the zombies would be the same as the ones in the movies.
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— Jk on 3/29/2013 4:10:16 PM with a score of 2360
Very interesting story line and great moral choices. It was more than I expected.
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— Zoltan741 on 3/27/2013 9:56:11 PM with a score of 13920
phenominal. First time i've ever done something like this... I was watching the walking dead but i'm reluctant to continue with how much fun this was! Great job to the author I hope to pen something half as engaging one day. Thank you!
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— tdawg on 3/26/2013 5:23:46 PM with a score of 34327
Epic
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mig135
on 3/26/2013 4:16:39 PM with a score of 25945
Amazing story, great fun but not so much that it hinders the emotional side of the game. You really feel the weight of your decisions which is what these games are about.
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jimmy_lee92
on 3/25/2013 3:05:10 PM with a score of 18160
Incredible. I beat it with the best possible score. No bites or anything. I think I'm going to play it again to see where else it could go.
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Kritter999
on 3/25/2013 2:14:21 PM with a score of 33667
I really appreciated that you could go back and change your decisions without having to start completely over. It made the gameplay much more enjoyable and made it fun to explore the different possibilities and consequences.
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— Les on 3/23/2013 6:29:45 PM with a score of 38617
Awsome story though I didn't get to kill any hellhounds,banshees or bloaters.I could you explain what the above "species" of zombies do?
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jimis
on 3/22/2013 4:14:09 PM with a score of 18135
Simply amazing. I actually had to think about my decisions carefully. I would recommend not using the "Go Back" button as it retracts from the story experience and makes it feel as your life is really on the line. Kudos to the maker.
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13laorn1
on 3/22/2013 10:00:45 AM with a score of 41677
I loved this!!! I felt like I was actually in it. I love to try to get different endings!!! Nice job!! :)
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DragonGirl69
on 3/20/2013 2:01:35 AM with a score of 21725
i engoyed this immencly getting rebuilder on my first try yeah me. but that asside it was well written and i liked it keep up the good work.
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Daniul
on 3/18/2013 1:25:44 AM with a score of 38657
Major UPDATE - fixed the Bug List (Thanks to everyone who helped find them) ^-^
And apologies to the 394 Folks who had Saved Games deleted!
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BerkaZerka
on 3/16/2013 4:11:12 PM with a score of 560
amazing!
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hoowon95
on 3/15/2013 9:33:13 PM with a score of 24665
Great game I had a very fun time playing it.
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Abaddon_Wolf
on 3/13/2013 1:45:43 AM with a score of 35747
Man, this is epic, difficult, and thought provoking!
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— Andrew on 3/11/2013 1:08:36 AM with a score of 33227
I've played through this story 5+ times! I love it, especially the detail given in every scene, even the work put into the game over, you're dead scenarios. The only (minor) complaint I have is that I spend so much effort finding firearms but never end up using them.
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fg109
on 3/10/2013 9:21:04 PM with a score of 40387
Loved this cyoa!
Did a great job!
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— John on 3/10/2013 6:02:14 PM with a score of 27397
Very entertaining and addicting. Haven't stop playing since I started yesterday. Great job
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— Steve on 3/10/2013 9:02:21 AM with a score of 17660
AMAZING
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— This is Patrick on 3/9/2013 11:49:37 PM with a score of 33667
Cool, gonna spend some time on this.
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— Mikaru on 3/9/2013 8:31:41 PM with a score of 1410
Enthralling and well worth every minute I put into it. The detailed descriptions of scenarios and characters had me gripped. You've done a brilliant job.
Also, kudos to you for putting in such an immense effort to write such a gripping story.
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game_player20
on 3/9/2013 5:50:58 AM with a score of 34417
Though sometimes the reading gets tedious with descriptions of the layout, the emotional scenes and character interaction feel very realistic and get you hooked. I genuinely cared about them and about survival. I felt invested in the choices I made (which were intelligent and by no means easy!) I can't help but wonder if there were ways to save a few of the poor people along the way, but have an actual feeling of accomplishment in having saved 60 people which included my family and remained unbitten myself!
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RipElliott
on 3/7/2013 3:22:09 PM with a score of 39037
Great. I loved it. And this is just a pet peeve, but I rated in 7 because of the few grammatical errors I saw. Sorry, but other than that, it was amazing.
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Ajurr
on 3/6/2013 10:16:10 PM with a score of 23115
I was amazed by how good it was,I got the best ending the first time around and replayed it about 10 times after that
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— FeelingPro on 3/5/2013 10:14:30 PM with a score of 33177
Amazing work. Good length, and what every zombie game should play like. I thoroughly enjoyed it.
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Lovecraft_Lexicon
on 3/5/2013 10:08:53 AM with a score of 37447
Brilliantly done. The sheer amount of work involved to create this much material, not to mention laying out so many choices in a way that flows naturally.
Kudos my friend.
My results:
You Killed 88 Zombies
You Killed 1 Hell Hounds
You Killed 1 People
You Saved 61 People (including yourself, unless you died)
Your Overall Score: 36407
(You played through 133 of 2,131 Pages and have proven to be a Rebuilder)
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Ravanosh
on 3/5/2013 2:35:25 AM with a score of 36427
I'm a Survivalist!
Also i would of got the Best Ending if i didn't carry the zombie virus.
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Dreknauo
on 3/3/2013 12:33:29 PM with a score of 24465
Nice story
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Hermano
on 3/3/2013 6:04:32 AM with a score of 9910
one of the best zombie survival games iv played in a while
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czptainz
on 3/2/2013 8:25:48 PM with a score of 20475
Amazing story, congratulations to the author, it's certainly one of the better "choose-your-story" kind of books I've played, and also one of the best in the zombie genre. I've finished it (best finish, yay! \o/) and I'll go try other games,but someday I might come back to try again and see other sides of the story (there has been at least one major point that I would like to do things differently), after all, I still have more then 2000 pages to go :D
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Laforet
on 2/28/2013 6:58:33 PM with a score of 34327
"Congratulations! You have not only survived the zombie apocalypse and saved your entire family, but made it through bite free! This is the best possible ending!"
I cried when i read that.
:D
All in all, killed 7 z's, killed 1 person and rescued 11.
My morals are over 8000!
Sorta disappointing that i only played 106 pages outta 2100, but the ending was satisfying enough.
For some reason i replayed the game a bunch of times, but never got farther than 110 pages.
You sir, are a genius.
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Sparrow7
on 2/28/2013 4:08:51 PM with a score of 34577
Amazing! My Guy and I just found this site tonight. He's asleep but I couldn't resist this one. Four hours well spent. Great writing and creative options! Thanks again to the community and this author in particular!
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LoAP
on 2/27/2013 4:34:21 AM with a score of 22875
Simply amazing.
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— Terri Nils on 2/26/2013 12:24:31 AM with a score of 1810
Drop dead amazing!
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— jttaylor on 2/24/2013 4:48:39 AM with a score of 22265
Must play.
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galobtter
on 2/24/2013 2:29:06 AM with a score of 21275
Ive played this 3 times now and its gotten better each time!! this is what I do to pass the time at work haha! I love it!
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trevsjams
on 2/21/2013 8:32:30 PM with a score of 30365
this is really cool, and with all the options, one slip-up can mean certain death, which should happen more often in zombie games/stories. you have done this well, so its a high rating from me. i'll be sure to share it with my friends. thanks for spending the time and effort to create this story and not just make it a half-arsed (sorry for language there) game.
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— nath on 2/20/2013 3:59:23 AM with a score of 6360
Brilliant work, extensive and exhaustive options available, truly gives you a sense of accomplishment when you reach the end.
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uishax
on 2/18/2013 3:23:34 AM with a score of 32787
Fantastic storyline, gripping tale in general. If not for a couple of typos and perhaps more believable family characters, it would have been perfect. 7/8
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moomooplatter
on 2/18/2013 2:33:56 AM with a score of 25965
Yes! I finally survived and without getting bit hardest thing I ever had to do but now I no I can survive the zombie apocalypse. A sequel on another persons point of view.
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— alec on 2/17/2013 10:26:06 AM with a score of 32107
8/8
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TheMan12
on 2/16/2013 7:27:46 PM with a score of 19085
Very, very awesome :-D
I made it out alive as Survivalist though i became a Carrier.. took me about 6 hours to play it through.
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Chaka
on 2/16/2013 6:43:22 AM with a score of 22935
My god, I played as heroicly as possible and I killed 0 of most things and saved lives..but I only got through 100 something pages of a possible 2k. All I can say is..wow, a great story and so many possibilities. Great value to re read and experiment just to see the other options. Thank you for making this!
5/5
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— Calum on 2/14/2013 7:18:27 PM with a score of 22645
Liked it, although I'd probably have to wait a while to play through again, given the length.
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Rathnor
on 2/13/2013 8:30:36 PM with a score of 28185
Thanks for a great adventure :)
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Jannelle
on 2/11/2013 9:16:16 AM with a score of 40787
better than walking dead game ino
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Allen
on 2/9/2013 9:09:22 PM with a score of 23895
Hum, I've played this before. Now I went through more pages, saved more people, killed more zombies and still got a lower score. WTF? Although, I didn't get the best ending. I ended up with the virus, but managed to save the children. How I managed to kill five people is a mystery. Did I kill any at the police station?
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Tgetruegamer
on 2/9/2013 6:51:13 AM with a score of 25495
Thanks very much for writing this story. It must have taken you a great deal of time to complete. I hope you consider trying to publish someday as ,in my opinion, you have a great talent.
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— noah on 2/8/2013 6:03:32 PM with a score of 34297
This is amazing. I've no idea how you found the time to complete it, but you deserve to be commended, this is truly an amazing project worthy of the greatest appreciation.
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Kaven
on 2/8/2013 5:24:32 PM with a score of 24375
Fantastic writing, just an overall great game.
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AspiringAuthorCook
on 2/8/2013 12:40:49 PM with a score of 21165
Finally, I got the BEST ENDING [or something like that]. Once you're in the school and arguing/convincing the sheriff already, everything seems easy and smooth. I guess now I know what to do in a real apocalypse. just kidding.
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toni
on 2/8/2013 2:43:30 AM with a score of 32507
Fantastic story! Made a few bad choices but only a few of these actually ended the game, was fun messing things up then being allowed to continue (sorry, kid)
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HardByte
on 2/7/2013 5:57:05 AM with a score of 33487
Yay! "Best Possible Ending"! c': Took a lotta "Go Back's", though...>_<
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TheMythicalOne
on 2/6/2013 2:13:03 AM with a score of 35017
Excellent story, believable decisions and consequences, had a few moral dilemmas about whether or not to save other people or my own skin though my humanity usually won out. Overall, I very much recommend this.
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MythicBowman
on 2/5/2013 7:12:22 PM with a score of 25575
bets story game ever on my first try i survived saving 64 people killing 3 people killing 172 zombies and 3 hell hounds 2 banches 1 saliva zombie and 2 Cannibal Gaunt Zombies
this was a relay good game when mines done please check it out
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joe7584
on 2/4/2013 11:13:34 PM with a score of 18225
I died of bacterial infection after watching my wife die.
This is the first choose-your-story i did and found it amazing. Props to the author(s) for his work and imagination.
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brakman
on 2/4/2013 9:20:17 AM with a score of 19320
Did it all in one sitting, about four hours... definitely an excellent means of procrastination! :)
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— j.k. on 2/3/2013 9:14:51 PM with a score of 32597
Awesome
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— Jessica on 2/3/2013 9:10:17 PM with a score of 8110
Fuck
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— Berkazerka on 2/3/2013 11:51:57 AM with a score of 1260
Very fun and engaging.
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dreadtron
on 2/2/2013 12:12:37 PM with a score of 28367
Really good. You do allways wonder what would have happened if I did it THAT way.
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and_lag
on 2/2/2013 8:29:30 AM with a score of 11580
Wow, for the time and effort put into this i give it an A+. Just again wow it is very detailed and has a exceptional story.
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ringo98
on 2/1/2013 3:57:43 PM with a score of 21475
The story is consistantly REAL. Awesome read!
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ptravier
on 1/31/2013 6:23:50 PM with a score of 17365
Damn, that was epic! This is my first read at chooseyourstory.com, and I'm beyond glad it was! It's very well-written, engaging and detailed. The fact that it has over two thousand pages of content and possible story routes is simply astounding. The only bad thing I can even say about this is that there's no offline version, or it would have made for several hours of entertainment off the web. Nevertheless, it was entertaining to go through, and I'm now starting another story arc. Thanks for writing this!
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— icetrigger on 1/30/2013 9:04:25 AM with a score of 25985
I really enjoyed this game. I played for an hour or so after work every night for a week ti get as much out of it as I could. I have to say, there's a tonne of variety and some genuinely tense moments.
Out of all of the endings I've seen, though, none ofthem explain the hooded figure from the dream at the beginning or the out of body stuff in any of your death sequences. Anyone know anything about that?
Oh, watch out for those hell hounds. They do NOT mess around. All in all, though, I'm thoroughly impressed by this. Recommended.
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eanna
on 1/29/2013 8:37:34 PM with a score of 34877
Having finally found the patience to actually finish this game after exploring it off-and-on for a while, I can say that it is too short. So... that's an 8/8.
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Loon
on 1/29/2013 6:42:56 PM with a score of 26115
Absolutely amazing. Very realistic. I'm going to replay and see just how many zombies i can kill!
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Worgrim
on 1/29/2013 1:39:23 PM with a score of 33207
Love the game
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— KJ on 1/28/2013 2:14:28 PM with a score of 13470
Great
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— kelly on 1/28/2013 1:57:53 AM with a score of 20735
One of the best CYOA games. It offers lots of different choices, with no less than 3 choices in almost every page. Although stats showing after the game were not true, that doesn't change how amazing this game is.
my score: 29967
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aguen
on 1/27/2013 1:36:44 PM with a score of 29987
However long and sometimes linear this is, it is still an amazing read for those who have time. Speaking of time I got the best ending and escaping the city was well written but a little easy.
A 4.9/5 amazing but with 1 or 2 flaws.
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— OmegaGoldfish on 1/26/2013 7:42:29 PM with a score of 32547
This is bloody brilliant. I haven't played that many games in this genre, but really - this is a very good game. Like previous comments have stated it is very extensive with a great deal of different outcomes and story routes. I'm fairly sure I got the second best ending, and I will definitely play this again.
Down below follows my stats for the playthrough.
Here’s a rundown of how you did –
You Killed 8 Zombies
You Killed 0 Drooler Zombies
You Killed 0 Bloater Zombies
You Killed 0 Ghouls
You Killed 1 Banshees
You Killed 0 Hell Hounds
You Killed 0 Cannibal Gaunt Zombies
You Killed 2 People
You Saved 10 People (including yourself, unless you died)
You were eaten by 0 Zombies
Your Overall Score: 19305
(You played through 118 of 2,131 Pages and have proven to be a Survivalist)
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ciderfylla
on 1/25/2013 4:00:21 PM with a score of 19315
this was the first story on this site I have read and completed and it was great even if I died 3 times
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Derpeus
on 1/25/2013 12:25:28 PM with a score of 19635
Wow! Just wow! Excellently written!
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— Zack on 1/24/2013 5:56:04 PM with a score of 25625
This was amazingly thought out. It was a very good zombie game, and was very true to the genre.
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iNyxxus
on 1/23/2013 9:35:33 AM with a score of 36237
Here’s a rundown of how you did –
You Killed 39 Zombies
You Killed 0 Drooler Zombies
You Killed 0 Bloater Zombies
You Killed 0 Ghouls
You Killed 0 Banshees
You Killed 1 Hell Hounds
You Killed 0 Cannibal Gaunt Zombies
You Killed 3 People
You Saved 5 People (including yourself, unless you died)
You were eaten by 0 Zombies
Your Overall Score: 35677
(You played through 118 of 2,131 Pages and have proven to be a Rebuilder)
I enjoyed it a ton. I wanted to go find the unique zombies, but one fight with a drooler zombie kicked my ass, so I back paged. LoL
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Brewstone
on 1/23/2013 12:55:36 AM with a score of 35697
This is the first story I've read through at this site, and it's definitely an impressive undertaking. I can't pretend to know Dead Man Walking backwards and forwards, but having played through and achieved a score over 20,000, I can say a few things:
Firstly, it's very big, but not buggy. Some conversations made me tilt my head (for instance I had my head wound seen to, and was then told my head looked awful), but continuity must clearly be horrendously difficult to achieve in a project on this scope. Dead Man Walking is put together well.
Secondly, the text is often longer than it needs to be. At first, particularly when tension was high, I read it word for word, on the edge of my seat. Gradually I just started skimming.
On a related note, as with many zombie films, it loses something of its essence once the initial terror fades. You are encouraged to be meticulous, take a long time, always travel by daylight, and carry supplies for every eventuality. In this manner the sinister thrill of the early darkness fades into a series of logistical tasks.
But probably most jarring, the main character (that is, the "you" of the story) lacks consistency. You're an accountant with an obsession for numbers... who is also an outdoorsman? And a gun enthusiast? Even worse, some early experiences led my character to an apparent crisis of faith, which was totally forgotten in the end when I kept saying "thank God" and "God bless" and "X dead person you really miss has gone to heaven and is in a better place now."
For all that, though, the story is still engrossing. What I'd really love to see would be a few simple changes:
* Less opportunity to waste time. Searching everywhere should be punished.
* Less opportunity to sleep safely at night. Zombies should encroach on safe houses and chase the reader out before dawn. (Can you hold out until sunrise? Good luck!)
* An option to stop and pray at some point. It may or may not do anything helpful for the reader. But even if it does nothing else, a character who selects this option can then establish an unshaken faith and justify the dialogues at the end. On the other hand, refusing to take the time to pray could toggle a switch in the code and allow the reader to establish that the horror of the outbreak has made the main character into a more cynical person.
That's it. Nice job BerkaZerka! I'll probably play this again sometime. Thanks for taking the time to design it.
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— Mark Graybill on 1/21/2013 4:47:27 AM with a score of 22415
can someone help by co athoring my first story i don't know what i'm doing and would like the help
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priryan123
on 1/20/2013 6:02:08 AM with a score of 3460
I got the best possible ending in one run (because i've obtained some knowledge through random browsing and taking some quizzes)
I will definitely replay this since it has various approach to the story. really, really brings "enlightenment"
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fireworks04
on 1/15/2013 9:00:26 PM with a score of 29437
37834
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Akirameru
on 1/14/2013 11:28:38 PM with a score of 37867
This story... Is great. I FELT the fear, I cared for the characters... The only thing I did NOT like was the dialogue, which was a bit badly written; the part in which Laura freaks out doesn't seem very... Real, I suppose.
Anyway, time to replay and see if I can't find out who the grim reaper is.
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antonm1107
on 1/14/2013 4:22:20 AM with a score of 24015
EPIC.thats the word i will choose if i have to describe this game its very well placed the fighting mechanism is great describing each blow and kick how anyone could make something so unique like this story is beyond me but what i do know is that they have a great imagination and a large capacity in the subject of excitement.
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Cuban
on 1/13/2013 2:54:50 PM with a score of 26925
good story, though perhaps the description pages are at times a bit too long. I would prefer to have seen shorter swaths of text and faster decision making points to keep the pace up. The story was well written however and interesting. Will try a second playtrough in the near future as a died in a pharmacy store
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— Reinhart on 1/12/2013 8:13:14 AM with a score of 10680
Very cool :D
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— Natascha on 1/11/2013 5:34:59 PM with a score of 22925
I'm a little ticked I was one little problem away from the best ending and I have no idea how it could have been avoided, but all in all this was an amazing story and very well done. You really have a sense of choice here.
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— Sam Loser2 on 1/11/2013 2:41:42 AM with a score of 24475
Second play-through and i got the ending titled "best possible ending"
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toku
on 1/11/2013 12:54:27 AM with a score of 33207
Wow. Just wow. I died quite early, but hey; I must have some sort of record. I was eaten by 213 zombies, all at once! But still, brilliant game. I can see this as a real game; I think it would be quite popular, too.
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— strange man on 1/10/2013 6:01:05 PM with a score of 1960
Here’s a rundown of how you did –
You Killed 2 Zombies
You Killed 0 Drooler Zombies
You Killed 0 Bloater Zombies
You Killed 0 Ghouls
You Killed 0 Banshees
You Killed 0 Hell Hounds
You Killed 0 Cannibal Gaunt Zombies
You Killed 2 People
You Saved 1 People (including yourself, unless you died)
You were eaten by 0 Zombies
points: 7105
Pages: 60
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Using my zombie knowledge, I basically just avoided any possible encounter while always making sure i had some idea of my surroundings. I stayed at the police station letting my family die, because In all reality, I would have imagined the school to be one of the worst hit places
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toku
on 1/10/2013 2:41:53 AM with a score of 7115
Wtf. I died by a random prisoner... I even went back to get weapons from my neighbor and it changed nothing. Great story but wtf. Can I even get told where I went wrong?
It was so fun and interesting, until some random prisoner killed me. Out of all the people in the city. My horrible wife, attracts a prisoner. I shouldn't of even searched for her is she was like this.
Hours of great story and then baseball bat to the head...
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— Napoleon Tak on 1/9/2013 9:38:53 PM with a score of 15040
Iloved this game it has been the best game Ive ever played considering ive played 204 games and own at least 56 thank you for this awesome zombie experience.
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— warmonger55 on 1/9/2013 6:00:32 PM with a score of 19425
well.. how not to die? i got to the point where i found the wife but still died due to lack of antibiotics....
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toni
on 1/8/2013 11:10:44 PM with a score of 15760
This game was very entertaining and brought a somewhat realistic feeling to a seemingly unrealistic event. Who ever wrote this should be given an award. I made it with only killing 4 zombies, saving my kids, Jacob, and 6 of the high school students!!! GREAT GAME!
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— nark on 1/7/2013 9:39:14 PM with a score of 20115
Hands down, the most absorbing interactive novel I've ever gone through in this genre. I made an account here just so I could save my progress. I enjoyed it thoroughly and even managed the best possible ending on my first run. Can't wait to go through it again! Well done, well done indeed!
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Theraven
on 1/7/2013 6:13:16 AM with a score of 39717
Just 1 word...terrible, just kidding this game is awesome! I've never seen a game on Choose Your Own Adventure that gives you this much freedom and it has over 2000+ pages, if you're doubting playing this game your an idiot because this game gives you everything someone into Choice Adventure would ever like and is the best that is and ever will be...forever!
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Aeros
on 1/6/2013 9:51:14 PM with a score of 22815
Happy zombie meal!
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Endrew
on 1/6/2013 12:49:31 AM with a score of 1360
This story is epic and just outright amazing 10/10!!!
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— Dan on 1/5/2013 4:57:48 PM with a score of 36937
I wish there was a higher rating than 8, not only will it bring you enlightenment, it's an action-packed, fun-filled, amazing story, and I certainly will be going through it again. I would give the author a manly hug, bro fist and a high five, sir, if you read this, you are awesome. Keep up the good, nay, outstanding work.
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— Will on 1/3/2013 6:01:28 PM with a score of 17715
you are amazing at writing you should write a book if you ever do please inform me as you could make an astounding book if you really wanted,to such a detailed story really hope you consider becoming a writer and thank you for your time and effort that you put into writing this story
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— Alexander on 1/2/2013 11:26:53 AM with a score of 20675
One word: awesome.
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zigma9114
on 12/31/2012 9:46:13 AM with a score of 40717
Loved this story! got the best possible ending ( with only having to backtrack once );) . The writing is amazing and really puts you into the setting.
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— Emma on 12/30/2012 7:43:35 PM with a score of 32037
I love this game so much I got the best possible ending
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— Mezy5 on 12/29/2012 9:13:03 PM with a score of 36797
a great big rolocking zombi gore death fest with lots of excitement, combat and mega zombi doom!
Characterization was a little thin and based often on sterriotypes, but for a fun, none anxt wridden,s zombi head smashing fest it worked extremely well, especially the way the main character was for some reason just plane brick, ie, as hard as they come despite being an accountant.
While I would've liked a little more to his background than lovely but helpless wife type (who even had hysteria ), and two pretty and cute daughters, this didn't spoil the game too much once I stopped expecting something thought provoking and just went on with the slaughtering.
Writing was solid and business like, and the descriptions of zombies and other monsters were especially nice, however the allusions to your characters feelings could've done with smoothing into the initial plot a little in some places.
From a game perspective, the mechanics worked well, however it would've been nice to see a little more of combat, or indeed character stats in some situations, sinse often whether your character could say sneak up on an enemy just seemed to be determined by the fact that he was a a tough guy, where as a little bit of stat checking would've give some more tention to those scenes, particularly with the possibility that you could fail.
I also appreciated the way the game lived up to it's promise, and presented you with a hero with actual brains. So, this one gets a 7 from me (even though I don't know what rees's cups are).
Very nice game over all, distinctly does what it says on the tin and was a lot of fun doing it, I'll be interested to see what else the author has written.
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darkempathy
on 12/29/2012 5:26:12 PM with a score of 44287
that was awesome.
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divinekingsteve
on 12/28/2012 3:29:24 PM with a score of 18585
This game was pretty good. Played through once, and am interested to play again and find out a few more things. Achieved the best ending on the first playthrough.
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— zombie smash on 12/28/2012 3:24:18 AM with a score of 35487
This game was ABSOLUTELY fascinating, that I don't even know where to start commenting.
The primary thing that I that I believe to be most notable about this game is just how expansive the story is and how in-depth the author goes out of his way to make the reader so immersed in the universe the author has created.
This was my first playthrough, and I got through about... 115 pages, I think, if I remember correctly. Apparently the game length boasts over two thousand pages in length, so that really shows how little of the game I discovered, and just how my replay value the game offers. I will definitely replay the story a hell of a lot more to discover all the various sub-plot points and things.
Although, it was relatively easy. I'm not sure if I'm the only one to find the survival choices and the choices ending in death were semi-obvious. I did have to go back once or twice, however.
You have achieved such a story worthy of a vast amount of praise (and you probably have, though I can't be sure, haven't read the other comments yet).
Kudos to you, author.
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Cynical
on 12/23/2012 6:53:44 PM with a score of 20475
Amazing game, best story I've seen in a while. I can see myself playing through this game several times, because of how many options and different possibilities there are. I just finished my first play through, and i'm about to start my second.
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— mlmlkml on 12/23/2012 4:34:49 PM with a score of 17085
super
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— jayanth on 12/22/2012 8:04:14 AM with a score of 2960
It was a great story
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kalun
on 12/21/2012 8:26:15 PM with a score of 23025
I can honestly say I loved this, it was long enough to develop into a full story and the plot kept moving along at a good pace. I'm only sad that I decided to be recless and just go for somthing I knew was a bad idea at one point so was infected but apart from that I got a very good ending. I'll replay this a couple of times to see the different options
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FeanorOnForge
on 12/21/2012 12:42:14 PM with a score of 25325
A realistic zombie survival game,with complexity and many choices,what do you want any more?
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— detective1412 on 12/20/2012 11:42:15 PM with a score of 31777
best zombie game ever.just like the movies.but it is hard
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goodlarry12
on 12/18/2012 10:19:24 PM with a score of 3360
So. . .(Spoiler alert) The drooler spit counts as a bite?
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thundafive
on 12/17/2012 5:57:06 AM with a score of 34607
Damn I died of the bacteria infection! And just when I found my wife! Anyways that was the greatest Choose-your-destiny story I ever played. You deserve an Emmy for this story!
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Ristar101
on 12/16/2012 10:13:25 AM with a score of 15120
Awesome, very hard. Nice story, I hope you make another story. All due respect,
AvalancheMaker
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AvalancheMaker
on 12/14/2012 8:15:08 PM with a score of 3810
one of the best zombie games on choose your story maybe even the best but it still didnt seem long or hard enough
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— argetlam on 12/14/2012 5:48:53 PM with a score of 22415
This was an amazing story a definite favorite i enjoyed playing through and after a 1st run through i'm going for a 2nd more bloodthirsty one.Thanks for the story Berka :)
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XenonViEternal
on 12/14/2012 3:10:50 PM with a score of 24315
very good work. ill be rereading this story to see the differen storylines
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zeke86198
on 12/14/2012 12:12:11 AM with a score of 21015
Nice job on this, ma'am or sir. Hat's off, thumbs up, and a giant foam finger to you. Bonne chance and good luck in your story writing. Hope to see more like this.
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— Sabre on 12/13/2012 8:06:48 PM with a score of 39457
Truly amazing, I was mesmerized for hours. One of, if not the, best games on this website. 10/10
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kantuno
on 12/6/2012 9:13:48 PM with a score of 29517
awesome
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schizodolph
on 12/6/2012 12:28:38 AM with a score of 16720
It's amazing how much work has been put into this. I tip my imaginary hat to the author. A job well done and a breathtaking story!
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Jack_Stevenson
on 12/5/2012 3:28:01 PM with a score of 36567
I like this game, but it would be more fun if you there were some more interesting story lines. Like the secretary that locks herself in the bathroom. Maybe you should be able to save her some how, and take her with you. Then you gotta decide weather or not u cheat on your wife at some point later.
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Yihman1
on 12/2/2012 1:15:35 PM with a score of 28375
fun fun
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Yihman1
on 11/30/2012 11:38:30 AM with a score of 32375
This game is really setting the bar for other writers. I want to see more games like this one. And by "like this one" I don't mean just a zombie game, I mean a well written long game with replay value that has lots of options and variables. I was wondering if this is a finalized version or not? It would be awesome to see this game with illustrations added at some point. I played through the game twice not bored yet.
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Yihman1
on 11/29/2012 10:20:07 PM with a score of 20515
Wow, probably the best game on this site. Well done. I'm looking forward to reading other things the author writes.
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Yihman1
on 11/29/2012 7:35:39 PM with a score of 26835
very very good...and lots of possibilities...
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Sammael
on 11/29/2012 3:26:34 PM with a score of 42607
Best ending. Fantastical.
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written_agreement
on 11/27/2012 8:40:40 PM with a score of 36817
i did skim through a few pages but this was fracking awesome
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yogurturtle91
on 11/27/2012 5:54:23 PM with a score of 37077
I have no words for how epic and how enjoyable this is.
I especially liked that you included special zombies, it made the whole apocalypse thing feel a tad different, but still semi-loyal to the Zombie Lore.
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— Framer on 11/27/2012 11:53:28 AM with a score of 32757
Hey man this was an excellent story and very well written.
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Bigsmokeymcpot
on 11/27/2012 1:44:53 AM with a score of 40507
This story kept me on the edge and forced me to think every decision thoroughly throughout the entire story. Amazing work.
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x24sonic
on 11/26/2012 5:50:35 PM with a score of 30837
This game was awesome! The writing was incredible and there were just so many choices. I think what I liked most though was how you could have different goals while playing the game, like trying to get the highest score or trying to kill the most zombies, personally my goal was saving the most people, and I saved 60 in the end so I think i got them all. Also the game does a great job of getting across the emotions of the characters, which made me really care about the fate of the guy and his family. Am definitely going to come back and play this game again with a completely different approach, to try and get a different ending. ^_^
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Briar_Rose
on 11/26/2012 8:02:14 AM with a score of 51727
Phew. What an adventure. Do really want to explore around the places more. Will try again.
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Impere
on 11/25/2012 2:15:38 AM with a score of 25435
I got the best possible ending. Now let's get the MOST BADASS ENDING EVER.
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Swiftstryker
on 11/24/2012 8:30:13 PM with a score of 28377
Easily the greatest, most thrilling, most entertaining game on this entire website! Aside from "Eternal", of course...
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YorkshireLad
on 11/24/2012 3:02:54 PM with a score of 45197
that was pretty fun i was pretty close to death alot and i would play it again the story line was great also
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— britaney on 11/23/2012 8:22:12 PM with a score of 20285
WE NEED MOARRRR!!!1
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Swiftstryker
on 11/23/2012 1:33:32 AM with a score of 24425
Simply awesome. ;)
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mjdolorico
on 11/22/2012 10:55:28 PM with a score of 28857
Ok just got the best ending. Great job at making a great story Berkazerka
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solxd7
on 11/21/2012 11:24:00 AM with a score of 35027
great game took a while to get the best ending but worth it.
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Crimson_Tailor
on 11/21/2012 3:53:12 AM with a score of 40807
I have to say this is one of the best stories I have seen on this website 8/8.
The creator doesn't just forget what you did as you go though the story. Every decisions can change it hugely.
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solxd7
on 11/20/2012 11:36:57 AM with a score of 18340
got the best ending i think, saved the family and didn't get bit. i did have to smash in the skull of a seven year old, but other than that i think i did ok. one bit of advice, constantly search for supplies and keep the crowbar
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— Daniel on 11/20/2012 2:27:26 AM with a score of 22045
Definitely one of the better stories on here. I managed to encounter a great few of the "subtle" cameos and also managed to get the best possible ending, with the exception of hitting the backspace a time or two. The game pulls you in and allows you a fleshed out span of choices that the average person would be guilty of doings, bringing a sense of personalization that is needed in a CYOA game. Great work, and hopefully I'll see more amazing things to come.
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RemyLeBeau
on 11/20/2012 12:17:11 AM with a score of 34957
found a way to kill twelve people if you go to police and then
kill the cult members could have made it 13 if i would have killed thatgirl in the bathroom
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JamesValkyrie
on 11/19/2012 10:00:55 PM with a score of 12160
awesome had so much fun playing and reading this, the author is a genuis
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deamonlasher
on 11/19/2012 3:27:52 PM with a score of 35587
This was an awesome game. I wish i could have seen all of the mutations but still it as AWESOME i think i may have reached some level of enlightenment while playing..... or i wqs on a coca cola high but either way i have never played a game this good before.
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— Eclipse on 11/18/2012 1:50:38 PM with a score of 20385
Wow, just wow. 8/8
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judester30
on 11/18/2012 12:54:22 PM with a score of 19265
Very fun read. Glad to have spent the time to go through the whole story! I survived! Thanks for sharing!
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— Will on 11/18/2012 3:56:32 AM with a score of 18025
Woot! Killed 256 zombies!
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— AnyMouse on 11/17/2012 2:40:28 PM with a score of 26735
Good game and story hope more will come soon
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jameson7856
on 11/17/2012 7:18:36 AM with a score of 30267
One the best and most logical zombie story games there is. Hope to see more games from you soon.
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— N on 11/17/2012 4:25:07 AM with a score of 24735
Nope, I was wrong... This Score blob found even before me ;)
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BerkaZerka
on 11/17/2012 2:01:47 AM with a score of 560
Update Complete =)
(I do believe this is the minimum possible Score BTW)
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BerkaZerka
on 11/17/2012 1:58:43 AM with a score of 710
I died (because of lack of medicine), but i found me and bo
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betaband
on 11/15/2012 11:40:48 PM with a score of 21010
Not sure I like that I didn't get the best ending because I "lost my humanity", considering that my later choices certainly showed that I was still human. Regardless, second playthrough was super, super awesome, just like the first one. Great fucking job, BZ. I think I might up this to an 8.
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JJJ-thebanisher
on 11/15/2012 3:37:42 PM with a score of 15715
That was fun and even when I got the best ending I kept tinkering around and still manage to save even more people, plus have the best ending. Fun stuff.
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Knightblade88
on 11/15/2012 10:01:21 AM with a score of 31667
Finally got it! fantastic game! 10/10 (yes I know the scale only goes up to 8 but this game deserves a 10 ;) )
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MagmaArmor0
on 11/14/2012 10:01:57 PM with a score of 28117
Well I usually don't leave very long comments, so I'll just say that was probably the best zombie game I've played.
You've definitely earned an 8.
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EndMaster
on 11/14/2012 6:25:13 PM with a score of 19725
Easily one of the most expansive stories on the site. The game offers an incredible sense of freedom. With on average over three links per page and over 2000 pages, it goes without saying that you have options. The writing is nothing to gawk at, but the blend of story and game is a real marvel. Loaded with logical options and realistic outcomes, Dead Man Walking offers hours upon hours of exploration. Exploration made more enjoyable by a clever protagonist. You never get the feeling that the author is just trying to lazily kill you off to keep his work load down. You in fact get the opposite feeling, that he wants to give you as many logical options as possible. Better still is that the game is plot driven; it sets real objectives, propelling you through the pages eageryly waiting for what happens next.
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ugilick
on 11/14/2012 6:14:23 PM with a score of 32497
Still haven't gotten the best ending...must keep playing.
On another note, this game has so much intricacy to it that I'm sure that, even when I finally get that best ending, I'm gonna play through a few more times. fantastic job on the game!
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MagmaArmor0
on 11/14/2012 4:48:49 PM with a score of 20475
Wow...well done and well written! I will definitely be replaying this a few times. :)
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MagmaArmor0
on 11/14/2012 3:33:22 PM with a score of 15685
Great storygame. I didn't get the best ending (wife died), but I did manage to save 60 people, including myself, daughters and the boy. I ended up only killing 5 zombies though lol.
No complaints. There's were times where continuity seemed a bit off, like it said I had a heavy fire extinguisher when I never took one, and how I told my daughters their mother was still alive (though admittedly that could have just been to calm them down), but overall it was great.
8/8, would read again (and plan to lol).
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Killa_Robot
on 11/14/2012 2:37:03 PM with a score of 19365
Great stuff, much better than most zombie novels I've read, commercial or self-published.
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HoraceTorys
on 11/14/2012 10:30:00 AM with a score of 31817
Forgot to say in my last comment that it was only for the first playthrough.
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blob
on 11/14/2012 7:41:05 AM with a score of 560
There's a pretty low chance of escaping the subway tunnels without being bitten.I'd say only 20 percent.
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blob
on 11/14/2012 7:39:28 AM with a score of 2060
This was amazing! I love the length, nice and long. I was shocked to see I have only completed around 200 or so pages, and am gladly going to play through the rest. It was very in depth and realistic for the most part which was fantastic. I also loved finding and killing the things that were not zombies and can't wait to find and kill the ones I missed. Anyway great job!
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AtomicWaste
on 11/13/2012 11:41:22 PM with a score of 26725
this game was wonderful. It was action packed, filled with all of the key parts a zombie game needs. Zombies, and the confrontation between man and himself. While there are some grammar mistakes, this is literally the largest game on the site currently.
This game takes all of the horror genre cliches and kicks them out. While playing, nothing was ever expected, and I hungrily clicked each link, looking forward to the next page of text. Truly an excellent game, one that could rival some of Endmaster's work. (in my own personal opinion) 8/8 for a masterful work, and a truly enjoyable game.
I got the best ending for anyone wondering. (which I would then add that anyone who didn't replay the game until getting the best ending is missing out.)
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Aman
on 11/13/2012 10:16:25 PM with a score of 33927
Great game, one of the best zombie survival games I've played, namely because the virus actually makes sense, and that there is an end to the entire thing.8/8
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Xt1000305
on 11/13/2012 10:06:01 PM with a score of 26415
On the page highway there is a bug where there are two links that are having the same name but each goes to a different page.
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blob
on 11/13/2012 8:10:55 PM with a score of 710
This was extremely awesome and satisfying. The most mindblowing aspect was how technically amazing it was, this must have taken so much hard work and the choices and descriptions are exceptionally well thought out. Additionally, it features replayability through the roof and next to no errors/typos. Berkazerka, this is fantastic.
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JJJ-thebanisher
on 11/13/2012 7:56:12 PM with a score of 7715
Here's my Score for shortest path to Best Ending. It should be pretty easy to get a higher score, just by trying other things - Good Luck!
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BerkaZerka
on 11/13/2012 7:11:21 PM with a score of 28097
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